Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
Drops of dew.....
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you dear Poet! Your words are my inspiration.
April 19th, 2022 06:47
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you dear Poet! Your words are my inspiration.
April 19th, 2022 06:47
Drops of dew.....
L. B. Mek said:
\'Our survival in this life is like
existence of the drops of dew,
fate reaps the fleeting presence
a few shine in rainbow\'s hue.\'
(I know these words, intimately...)
lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
love, all
that much needed
and timely, positivity
imbued into this write
April 19th, 2022 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'Our survival in this life is like
existence of the drops of dew,
fate reaps the fleeting presence
a few shine in rainbow\'s hue.\'
(I know these words, intimately...)
lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
love, all
that much needed
and timely, positivity
imbued into this write
April 19th, 2022 05:48
Hailing you from across
Rocky Lagou said:
A true and sincere expression. I adore your emotions you convey and it\'s all tied so wonderfully. Amazing.
April 18th, 2022 12:50
Rocky Lagou said:
A true and sincere expression. I adore your emotions you convey and it\'s all tied so wonderfully. Amazing.
April 18th, 2022 12:50
Hailing you from across
Dahlia said:
Beautiful invitation for fellowship 💯
great work poet 👌
April 18th, 2022 12:33
Dahlia said:
Beautiful invitation for fellowship 💯
great work poet 👌
April 18th, 2022 12:33
Hailing you from across
L. B. Mek said:
if I could banish
one word from modernity
it would be: \'cringe\'..
and its use, as some
expression of eeky-ness
in the very existence of emotionality
in humans..
where iciness, is that ideal of indifference
and futile terms, like
\'I don\'t do emotions or love\'
is viewed
as some kind of badge of honour
for the so-called illogically mechanical, progressive..
pffttttt
(I\'m with you, dear poet:
\'still, I share my heart with you
whom I consider as my friend.
I ponder over our resemblance
and the passions that we share,
we are travelers of the far lands
and follow pursuits of dare.
Not only my sweetest dreams
but also the goals that I seek,\')
a great write! thanks for sharing
April 18th, 2022 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
if I could banish
one word from modernity
it would be: \'cringe\'..
and its use, as some
expression of eeky-ness
in the very existence of emotionality
in humans..
where iciness, is that ideal of indifference
and futile terms, like
\'I don\'t do emotions or love\'
is viewed
as some kind of badge of honour
for the so-called illogically mechanical, progressive..
pffttttt
(I\'m with you, dear poet:
\'still, I share my heart with you
whom I consider as my friend.
I ponder over our resemblance
and the passions that we share,
we are travelers of the far lands
and follow pursuits of dare.
Not only my sweetest dreams
but also the goals that I seek,\')
a great write! thanks for sharing
April 18th, 2022 05:15
Hailing you from across
Sophenia said:
So lovely! Beautiful message, beautifully written!
April 18th, 2022 04:31
Sophenia said:
So lovely! Beautiful message, beautifully written!
April 18th, 2022 04:31
Whatever I do O Theos !
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello Max
This is very beautiful with a lovely closing stanza, great work!
tchau...Cassia DeSousa
April 17th, 2022 10:28
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello Max
This is very beautiful with a lovely closing stanza, great work!
tchau...Cassia DeSousa
April 17th, 2022 10:28
The beauty of Soul
Rozina said:
Yes so true, it is the beauty inside that matters. Lovely lines.
April 16th, 2022 22:49
Rozina said:
Yes so true, it is the beauty inside that matters. Lovely lines.
April 16th, 2022 22:49
The beauty of Soul
adventuressmalik said:
Your words mean a lot to me ma\'am. Thanks🌼
April 16th, 2022 18:58
adventuressmalik said:
Your words mean a lot to me ma\'am. Thanks🌼
April 16th, 2022 18:58
The beauty of Soul
Bella Shepard said:
The feeling grows and grows as I read, and at the end I can exhale a gentle sigh, for love is the beauty of the soul and you have penned it so beautifully.
April 16th, 2022 13:24
Bella Shepard said:
The feeling grows and grows as I read, and at the end I can exhale a gentle sigh, for love is the beauty of the soul and you have penned it so beautifully.
April 16th, 2022 13:24
The beauty of Soul
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello adventuressmalik
This is very lovely and yes our beauty is the soul, and yours shone through this well written lines...tchau...Cassia
April 16th, 2022 10:36
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello adventuressmalik
This is very lovely and yes our beauty is the soul, and yours shone through this well written lines...tchau...Cassia
April 16th, 2022 10:36
River of Emotions
Dahlia said:
beautiful & deep
great work poet
enjoyed
Dahlia
April 15th, 2022 18:18
Dahlia said:
beautiful & deep
great work poet
enjoyed
Dahlia
April 15th, 2022 18:18
River of Emotions
L. B. Mek said:
a searching write
touching on intriguing themes..
thanks for sharing
April 15th, 2022 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
a searching write
touching on intriguing themes..
thanks for sharing
April 15th, 2022 04:03
A song in Silence
Bella Shepard said:
In this age of noise pollution, we seem to seldom have time for the sound of silence. It is golden, mind clearing, soul healing, body cleansing. Love in silence is beautiful, and I love this poem in the silence of my mind. Thank You.
April 14th, 2022 14:23
Bella Shepard said:
In this age of noise pollution, we seem to seldom have time for the sound of silence. It is golden, mind clearing, soul healing, body cleansing. Love in silence is beautiful, and I love this poem in the silence of my mind. Thank You.
April 14th, 2022 14:23
A song in Silence
adventuressmalik said:
I am extremely grateful as a menhir would be when you etch the sacred glyphs of such esoteric praise. But I will fail if I do not direct the showers of such blessings to my muse..... because when most people see that wind that passes through the flute produces the sound.... to me it\'s mind and that mind is muse... indeed. Thank you.
April 14th, 2022 04:33
adventuressmalik said:
I am extremely grateful as a menhir would be when you etch the sacred glyphs of such esoteric praise. But I will fail if I do not direct the showers of such blessings to my muse..... because when most people see that wind that passes through the flute produces the sound.... to me it\'s mind and that mind is muse... indeed. Thank you.
April 14th, 2022 04:33
A song in Silence
L. B. Mek said:
if Shakespeare, could
his comment would
probably, or at least should
go something like:
\' Nor shall Death brag thou wander\'st in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou grow\'st:
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.\'..
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-26931 )
for in these words
you have immortalised your muse
in ink, dear poet
and gifted us, such a memorable read
thank you!
April 14th, 2022 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
if Shakespeare, could
his comment would
probably, or at least should
go something like:
\' Nor shall Death brag thou wander\'st in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou grow\'st:
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.\'..
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-26931 )
for in these words
you have immortalised your muse
in ink, dear poet
and gifted us, such a memorable read
thank you!
April 14th, 2022 03:54
The Rhythm Divine
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you for the one of the best complements. I am indeed grateful. 🌼
April 13th, 2022 23:10
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you for the one of the best complements. I am indeed grateful. 🌼
April 13th, 2022 23:10
The Rhythm Divine
Bella Shepard said:
You have put into words so many thoughts that go through my head each day as I take a morning walk, or stand on my deck at night looking at the moon and stars. So many questions, up to us to search for answers. Love this poem!
April 13th, 2022 12:19
Bella Shepard said:
You have put into words so many thoughts that go through my head each day as I take a morning walk, or stand on my deck at night looking at the moon and stars. So many questions, up to us to search for answers. Love this poem!
April 13th, 2022 12:19
The Rhythm Divine
Rocky Lagou said:
A really nice observation. All the world is continuously seeking meaning and a reason to why, where, what, and how? But it\'s nice to coexist in this madness, as I feel the true religion is the one you set for yourself.
April 13th, 2022 08:34
Rocky Lagou said:
A really nice observation. All the world is continuously seeking meaning and a reason to why, where, what, and how? But it\'s nice to coexist in this madness, as I feel the true religion is the one you set for yourself.
April 13th, 2022 08:34
Thank you for your Existence
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem, love the last stanza the most! Great job!!
April 12th, 2022 08:40
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem, love the last stanza the most! Great job!!
April 12th, 2022 08:40
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