Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
Solace in life
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully crafted, such a powerful message about what should make a life worth living: peace, love, truth. You soothe my soul with your words, thank you.
April 27th, 2022 12:31
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully crafted, such a powerful message about what should make a life worth living: peace, love, truth. You soothe my soul with your words, thank you.
April 27th, 2022 12:31
Love is a gift.... boundless and perpetual
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing, some of your wording
forces us to think
and thus, engage..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 26th, 2022 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing, some of your wording
forces us to think
and thus, engage..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 26th, 2022 05:15
In a Seashell lies a Pearl....
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you for equally awesome words !
April 25th, 2022 07:31
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you for equally awesome words !
April 25th, 2022 07:31
In a Seashell lies a Pearl....
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
from title, to last full stop
thank you! dear Poet
\'a portrait of vivacity
within
such, vivid artistry...!\'
April 25th, 2022 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
from title, to last full stop
thank you! dear Poet
\'a portrait of vivacity
within
such, vivid artistry...!\'
April 25th, 2022 05:45
We keep running without any reason.......
adventuressmalik said:
Ah! Thank you, means my experiment has worked !
April 22nd, 2022 05:25
adventuressmalik said:
Ah! Thank you, means my experiment has worked !
April 22nd, 2022 05:25
We keep running without any reason.......
L. B. Mek said:
simple truisms, worded accessible
and that use of repetition
to drum home your focal point..
wonderfully executed!
thank you, dear poet
April 22nd, 2022 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
simple truisms, worded accessible
and that use of repetition
to drum home your focal point..
wonderfully executed!
thank you, dear poet
April 22nd, 2022 04:40
Contemplate with insights deep..........
Bella Shepard said:
Love is so much more than the meeting of bodies, it\'s the meeting of minds, hearts, souls. Such a wonderful poem in its description of that union. Loved it!
April 21st, 2022 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
Love is so much more than the meeting of bodies, it\'s the meeting of minds, hearts, souls. Such a wonderful poem in its description of that union. Loved it!
April 21st, 2022 14:14
Contemplate with insights deep..........
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem about my favorite subject---love. I think your rhymes and content are beyond brilliant!!! Thanks for sharing!
April 21st, 2022 10:58
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem about my favorite subject---love. I think your rhymes and content are beyond brilliant!!! Thanks for sharing!
April 21st, 2022 10:58
Contemplate with insights deep..........
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you dear Poet.
April 21st, 2022 10:50
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you dear Poet.
April 21st, 2022 10:50
Contemplate with insights deep..........
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just appreciate the aesthetics
of our interactions that revel,
planetary emotional and intellectual
and beyond that at the spiritual level.\'
Brilliant!
April 21st, 2022 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just appreciate the aesthetics
of our interactions that revel,
planetary emotional and intellectual
and beyond that at the spiritual level.\'
Brilliant!
April 21st, 2022 04:58
Drops of dew.....
Bella Shepard said:
You capture so many thoughts and feelings I have had over time, and could never put into words as you have done. I love the collective consciousness that binds us all. You are a true artist dear friend and I linger on every word of your poem.
April 19th, 2022 10:25
Bella Shepard said:
You capture so many thoughts and feelings I have had over time, and could never put into words as you have done. I love the collective consciousness that binds us all. You are a true artist dear friend and I linger on every word of your poem.
April 19th, 2022 10:25
Drops of dew.....
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you dear Poet! Your words are my inspiration.
April 19th, 2022 06:47
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you dear Poet! Your words are my inspiration.
April 19th, 2022 06:47
Drops of dew.....
L. B. Mek said:
\'Our survival in this life is like
existence of the drops of dew,
fate reaps the fleeting presence
a few shine in rainbow\'s hue.\'
(I know these words, intimately...)
lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
love, all
that much needed
and timely, positivity
imbued into this write
April 19th, 2022 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'Our survival in this life is like
existence of the drops of dew,
fate reaps the fleeting presence
a few shine in rainbow\'s hue.\'
(I know these words, intimately...)
lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
love, all
that much needed
and timely, positivity
imbued into this write
April 19th, 2022 05:48
Hailing you from across
Rocky Lagou said:
A true and sincere expression. I adore your emotions you convey and it\'s all tied so wonderfully. Amazing.
April 18th, 2022 12:50
Rocky Lagou said:
A true and sincere expression. I adore your emotions you convey and it\'s all tied so wonderfully. Amazing.
April 18th, 2022 12:50
Hailing you from across
Dahlia said:
Beautiful invitation for fellowship 💯
great work poet 👌
April 18th, 2022 12:33
Dahlia said:
Beautiful invitation for fellowship 💯
great work poet 👌
April 18th, 2022 12:33
Hailing you from across
L. B. Mek said:
if I could banish
one word from modernity
it would be: \'cringe\'..
and its use, as some
expression of eeky-ness
in the very existence of emotionality
in humans..
where iciness, is that ideal of indifference
and futile terms, like
\'I don\'t do emotions or love\'
is viewed
as some kind of badge of honour
for the so-called illogically mechanical, progressive..
pffttttt
(I\'m with you, dear poet:
\'still, I share my heart with you
whom I consider as my friend.
I ponder over our resemblance
and the passions that we share,
we are travelers of the far lands
and follow pursuits of dare.
Not only my sweetest dreams
but also the goals that I seek,\')
a great write! thanks for sharing
April 18th, 2022 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
if I could banish
one word from modernity
it would be: \'cringe\'..
and its use, as some
expression of eeky-ness
in the very existence of emotionality
in humans..
where iciness, is that ideal of indifference
and futile terms, like
\'I don\'t do emotions or love\'
is viewed
as some kind of badge of honour
for the so-called illogically mechanical, progressive..
pffttttt
(I\'m with you, dear poet:
\'still, I share my heart with you
whom I consider as my friend.
I ponder over our resemblance
and the passions that we share,
we are travelers of the far lands
and follow pursuits of dare.
Not only my sweetest dreams
but also the goals that I seek,\')
a great write! thanks for sharing
April 18th, 2022 05:15
Hailing you from across
Sophenia said:
So lovely! Beautiful message, beautifully written!
April 18th, 2022 04:31
Sophenia said:
So lovely! Beautiful message, beautifully written!
April 18th, 2022 04:31
Whatever I do O Theos !
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello Max
This is very beautiful with a lovely closing stanza, great work!
tchau...Cassia DeSousa
April 17th, 2022 10:28
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello Max
This is very beautiful with a lovely closing stanza, great work!
tchau...Cassia DeSousa
April 17th, 2022 10:28
The beauty of Soul
Rozina said:
Yes so true, it is the beauty inside that matters. Lovely lines.
April 16th, 2022 22:49
Rozina said:
Yes so true, it is the beauty inside that matters. Lovely lines.
April 16th, 2022 22:49
The beauty of Soul
adventuressmalik said:
Your words mean a lot to me ma\'am. Thanks🌼
April 16th, 2022 18:58
adventuressmalik said:
Your words mean a lot to me ma\'am. Thanks🌼
April 16th, 2022 18:58
The beauty of Soul
Bella Shepard said:
The feeling grows and grows as I read, and at the end I can exhale a gentle sigh, for love is the beauty of the soul and you have penned it so beautifully.
April 16th, 2022 13:24
Bella Shepard said:
The feeling grows and grows as I read, and at the end I can exhale a gentle sigh, for love is the beauty of the soul and you have penned it so beautifully.
April 16th, 2022 13:24
The beauty of Soul
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello adventuressmalik
This is very lovely and yes our beauty is the soul, and yours shone through this well written lines...tchau...Cassia
April 16th, 2022 10:36
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello adventuressmalik
This is very lovely and yes our beauty is the soul, and yours shone through this well written lines...tchau...Cassia
April 16th, 2022 10:36
River of Emotions
Dahlia said:
beautiful & deep
great work poet
enjoyed
Dahlia
April 15th, 2022 18:18
Dahlia said:
beautiful & deep
great work poet
enjoyed
Dahlia
April 15th, 2022 18:18
River of Emotions
L. B. Mek said:
a searching write
touching on intriguing themes..
thanks for sharing
April 15th, 2022 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
a searching write
touching on intriguing themes..
thanks for sharing
April 15th, 2022 04:03
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