Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
A vision from a life lived earlier....
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you! It is supposed to be \'an\', It was a typing error. You have a keen sense of observation.
May 2nd, 2022 11:42
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you! It is supposed to be \'an\', It was a typing error. You have a keen sense of observation.
May 2nd, 2022 11:42
A vision from a life lived earlier....
Natalia B. Odair said:
I really like this poem!!! You write very well. Only one thing- in the first line, \"I must pen down en event,\" is it supposed to be \"en\" or \"an?\" Beautiful poem though!!!!!!!
May 2nd, 2022 10:56
Natalia B. Odair said:
I really like this poem!!! You write very well. Only one thing- in the first line, \"I must pen down en event,\" is it supposed to be \"en\" or \"an?\" Beautiful poem though!!!!!!!
May 2nd, 2022 10:56
Love is not an emotion...
Saxon Crow said:
Love is a canvas word, like perfection, judgement, forgiveness. It\'s used to create what you want it to mean. Great poem
May 1st, 2022 04:33
Saxon Crow said:
Love is a canvas word, like perfection, judgement, forgiveness. It\'s used to create what you want it to mean. Great poem
May 1st, 2022 04:33
Love is not an emotion...
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Malik, Nice lines..
touched me straight..
emotions last for a short time
love may transcend a lifetime.
Great one poet !!
May 1st, 2022 02:00
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Malik, Nice lines..
touched me straight..
emotions last for a short time
love may transcend a lifetime.
Great one poet !!
May 1st, 2022 02:00
Mirage
L. B. Mek said:
\'either be wise and accept the futility of the situation or ask your muse for help in your evolution\'..
so simplified, yet irrevocably true!
we complicate it all, in our minds
entwined, with our raw emotions
but in that coldness of reality
it\'s as simple
as accepting or seeking help
and this life Truth, applies
to everything, in our lives...
another wonderfully insightful write
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
April 29th, 2022 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
\'either be wise and accept the futility of the situation or ask your muse for help in your evolution\'..
so simplified, yet irrevocably true!
we complicate it all, in our minds
entwined, with our raw emotions
but in that coldness of reality
it\'s as simple
as accepting or seeking help
and this life Truth, applies
to everything, in our lives...
another wonderfully insightful write
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
April 29th, 2022 04:23
The Virus Blues
Bella Shepard said:
The life before pandemic sometimes seems hard to remember, but if we can hold onto something simple it is a plus. Sometimes the memory of something sweet, like a smile can warm our heart and help us remember those better times. We will survive. A lovely poem, expressed beautifully.
April 28th, 2022 15:37
Bella Shepard said:
The life before pandemic sometimes seems hard to remember, but if we can hold onto something simple it is a plus. Sometimes the memory of something sweet, like a smile can warm our heart and help us remember those better times. We will survive. A lovely poem, expressed beautifully.
April 28th, 2022 15:37
The Virus Blues
L. B. Mek said:
\'From one of the prettiest faces
the smiles that I had stolen just before
the dearest thing in my memory
kept them safe in my treasury.\'
forgive me, dear Poet
but try as I might
I really couldn\'t understand this stanza..
as always, thanks for sharing
an intriguing read
April 28th, 2022 03:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'From one of the prettiest faces
the smiles that I had stolen just before
the dearest thing in my memory
kept them safe in my treasury.\'
forgive me, dear Poet
but try as I might
I really couldn\'t understand this stanza..
as always, thanks for sharing
an intriguing read
April 28th, 2022 03:58
Solace in life
Rozina said:
Yes a very good message in your well crafted lines.
April 27th, 2022 18:24
Rozina said:
Yes a very good message in your well crafted lines.
April 27th, 2022 18:24
Solace in life
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully crafted, such a powerful message about what should make a life worth living: peace, love, truth. You soothe my soul with your words, thank you.
April 27th, 2022 12:31
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully crafted, such a powerful message about what should make a life worth living: peace, love, truth. You soothe my soul with your words, thank you.
April 27th, 2022 12:31
Love is a gift.... boundless and perpetual
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing, some of your wording
forces us to think
and thus, engage..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 26th, 2022 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing, some of your wording
forces us to think
and thus, engage..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 26th, 2022 05:15
In a Seashell lies a Pearl....
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you for equally awesome words !
April 25th, 2022 07:31
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you for equally awesome words !
April 25th, 2022 07:31
In a Seashell lies a Pearl....
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
from title, to last full stop
thank you! dear Poet
\'a portrait of vivacity
within
such, vivid artistry...!\'
April 25th, 2022 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
from title, to last full stop
thank you! dear Poet
\'a portrait of vivacity
within
such, vivid artistry...!\'
April 25th, 2022 05:45
We keep running without any reason.......
adventuressmalik said:
Ah! Thank you, means my experiment has worked !
April 22nd, 2022 05:25
adventuressmalik said:
Ah! Thank you, means my experiment has worked !
April 22nd, 2022 05:25
We keep running without any reason.......
L. B. Mek said:
simple truisms, worded accessible
and that use of repetition
to drum home your focal point..
wonderfully executed!
thank you, dear poet
April 22nd, 2022 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
simple truisms, worded accessible
and that use of repetition
to drum home your focal point..
wonderfully executed!
thank you, dear poet
April 22nd, 2022 04:40
Contemplate with insights deep..........
Bella Shepard said:
Love is so much more than the meeting of bodies, it\'s the meeting of minds, hearts, souls. Such a wonderful poem in its description of that union. Loved it!
April 21st, 2022 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
Love is so much more than the meeting of bodies, it\'s the meeting of minds, hearts, souls. Such a wonderful poem in its description of that union. Loved it!
April 21st, 2022 14:14
Contemplate with insights deep..........
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem about my favorite subject---love. I think your rhymes and content are beyond brilliant!!! Thanks for sharing!
April 21st, 2022 10:58
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem about my favorite subject---love. I think your rhymes and content are beyond brilliant!!! Thanks for sharing!
April 21st, 2022 10:58
Contemplate with insights deep..........
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you dear Poet.
April 21st, 2022 10:50
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you dear Poet.
April 21st, 2022 10:50
Contemplate with insights deep..........
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just appreciate the aesthetics
of our interactions that revel,
planetary emotional and intellectual
and beyond that at the spiritual level.\'
Brilliant!
April 21st, 2022 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just appreciate the aesthetics
of our interactions that revel,
planetary emotional and intellectual
and beyond that at the spiritual level.\'
Brilliant!
April 21st, 2022 04:58
Drops of dew.....
Bella Shepard said:
You capture so many thoughts and feelings I have had over time, and could never put into words as you have done. I love the collective consciousness that binds us all. You are a true artist dear friend and I linger on every word of your poem.
April 19th, 2022 10:25
Bella Shepard said:
You capture so many thoughts and feelings I have had over time, and could never put into words as you have done. I love the collective consciousness that binds us all. You are a true artist dear friend and I linger on every word of your poem.
April 19th, 2022 10:25
Drops of dew.....
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you dear Poet! Your words are my inspiration.
April 19th, 2022 06:47
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you dear Poet! Your words are my inspiration.
April 19th, 2022 06:47
Drops of dew.....
L. B. Mek said:
\'Our survival in this life is like
existence of the drops of dew,
fate reaps the fleeting presence
a few shine in rainbow\'s hue.\'
(I know these words, intimately...)
lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
love, all
that much needed
and timely, positivity
imbued into this write
April 19th, 2022 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'Our survival in this life is like
existence of the drops of dew,
fate reaps the fleeting presence
a few shine in rainbow\'s hue.\'
(I know these words, intimately...)
lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
love, all
that much needed
and timely, positivity
imbued into this write
April 19th, 2022 05:48
Hailing you from across
Rocky Lagou said:
A true and sincere expression. I adore your emotions you convey and it\'s all tied so wonderfully. Amazing.
April 18th, 2022 12:50
Rocky Lagou said:
A true and sincere expression. I adore your emotions you convey and it\'s all tied so wonderfully. Amazing.
April 18th, 2022 12:50
Hailing you from across
Dahlia said:
Beautiful invitation for fellowship 💯
great work poet 👌
April 18th, 2022 12:33
Dahlia said:
Beautiful invitation for fellowship 💯
great work poet 👌
April 18th, 2022 12:33
Hailing you from across
L. B. Mek said:
if I could banish
one word from modernity
it would be: \'cringe\'..
and its use, as some
expression of eeky-ness
in the very existence of emotionality
in humans..
where iciness, is that ideal of indifference
and futile terms, like
\'I don\'t do emotions or love\'
is viewed
as some kind of badge of honour
for the so-called illogically mechanical, progressive..
pffttttt
(I\'m with you, dear poet:
\'still, I share my heart with you
whom I consider as my friend.
I ponder over our resemblance
and the passions that we share,
we are travelers of the far lands
and follow pursuits of dare.
Not only my sweetest dreams
but also the goals that I seek,\')
a great write! thanks for sharing
April 18th, 2022 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
if I could banish
one word from modernity
it would be: \'cringe\'..
and its use, as some
expression of eeky-ness
in the very existence of emotionality
in humans..
where iciness, is that ideal of indifference
and futile terms, like
\'I don\'t do emotions or love\'
is viewed
as some kind of badge of honour
for the so-called illogically mechanical, progressive..
pffttttt
(I\'m with you, dear poet:
\'still, I share my heart with you
whom I consider as my friend.
I ponder over our resemblance
and the passions that we share,
we are travelers of the far lands
and follow pursuits of dare.
Not only my sweetest dreams
but also the goals that I seek,\')
a great write! thanks for sharing
April 18th, 2022 05:15
Hailing you from across
Sophenia said:
So lovely! Beautiful message, beautifully written!
April 18th, 2022 04:31
Sophenia said:
So lovely! Beautiful message, beautifully written!
April 18th, 2022 04:31
Whatever I do O Theos !
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello Max
This is very beautiful with a lovely closing stanza, great work!
tchau...Cassia DeSousa
April 17th, 2022 10:28
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello Max
This is very beautiful with a lovely closing stanza, great work!
tchau...Cassia DeSousa
April 17th, 2022 10:28
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