Comments received on poems by arqios
sunrising sunset
sorenbarrett said:
This poem hit me in different ways. The sunrise portrayed so well the dawn of life with its promise of the future yet to come, while mid-day is the work and labor, the suffering of mid life, then comes the memories present in the evening of life. Then again the literal day is just fine too.
October 6th, 2022 20:58
sorenbarrett said:
This poem hit me in different ways. The sunrise portrayed so well the dawn of life with its promise of the future yet to come, while mid-day is the work and labor, the suffering of mid life, then comes the memories present in the evening of life. Then again the literal day is just fine too.
October 6th, 2022 20:58
not to be messed with
Neville said:
how very novel say\'s neville, sounds good to me :)
October 6th, 2022 05:37
Neville said:
how very novel say\'s neville, sounds good to me :)
October 6th, 2022 05:37
not to be messed with
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Rik - just let\'s hope Cheshire cat hasn\'t gone feral. Lady in gown a victim of the fires?
October 6th, 2022 05:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Rik - just let\'s hope Cheshire cat hasn\'t gone feral. Lady in gown a victim of the fires?
October 6th, 2022 05:00
looking for a real bargain
Bella Shepard said:
Hindsight is 20/20, but foresight may require a good pair of binoculars. Intriguing write my friend.
October 5th, 2022 12:59
Bella Shepard said:
Hindsight is 20/20, but foresight may require a good pair of binoculars. Intriguing write my friend.
October 5th, 2022 12:59
looking for a real bargain
sorenbarrett said:
I love these bits and pieces. Too little too late.
October 5th, 2022 07:23
sorenbarrett said:
I love these bits and pieces. Too little too late.
October 5th, 2022 07:23
looking for a real bargain
Doggerel Dave said:
Rik: The trouble with \'screenshot and then posted as an image\' is that it doesn\'t give me access to the link at the bottom of your piece - obviously an integral part of the post.
October 5th, 2022 04:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Rik: The trouble with \'screenshot and then posted as an image\' is that it doesn\'t give me access to the link at the bottom of your piece - obviously an integral part of the post.
October 5th, 2022 04:00
take two
Goldfinch60 said:
Hopefully one day we will all be together in complete unity Rik. Maybe?
Andy
October 5th, 2022 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Hopefully one day we will all be together in complete unity Rik. Maybe?
Andy
October 5th, 2022 01:42
looking for a real bargain
orchidee said:
Godo write CB.
And yes - no use flogging a dead horse either!
October 5th, 2022 01:42
orchidee said:
Godo write CB.
And yes - no use flogging a dead horse either!
October 5th, 2022 01:42
take two
Fay Slimm. said:
Whose \"hope\" would not be uplifted again to look forward to new tomorrows after reading this masterful collection of metaphor - - Such a good read Rik.
October 5th, 2022 01:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Whose \"hope\" would not be uplifted again to look forward to new tomorrows after reading this masterful collection of metaphor - - Such a good read Rik.
October 5th, 2022 01:40
take two
Doggerel Dave said:
\'If only\' - but it ain\'t, Rik, is it?
Fires floods and military spending...
\"Consumed in the fervent disappointment and disgust\" is me!
Well shouted.
PS: \'cryptic\' is right, mate - your piece is embedded here in such a way which makes a quick copy and paste impossible - how so? Commercial secret?
October 4th, 2022 17:35
Doggerel Dave said:
\'If only\' - but it ain\'t, Rik, is it?
Fires floods and military spending...
\"Consumed in the fervent disappointment and disgust\" is me!
Well shouted.
PS: \'cryptic\' is right, mate - your piece is embedded here in such a way which makes a quick copy and paste impossible - how so? Commercial secret?
October 4th, 2022 17:35
take two
Bella Shepard said:
We can only hope that the tomorrow which is there now, will have learned from the past which we are today. For every moment of every day we make the future. An enigmatic and thought provoking read my good poet. Definitely a fav!
October 4th, 2022 13:33
Bella Shepard said:
We can only hope that the tomorrow which is there now, will have learned from the past which we are today. For every moment of every day we make the future. An enigmatic and thought provoking read my good poet. Definitely a fav!
October 4th, 2022 13:33
take two
sorenbarrett said:
\"Personification of hope\" well stated. Hope the last to die. I loved your second stanza. It held so many great images and metaphors.
October 4th, 2022 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
\"Personification of hope\" well stated. Hope the last to die. I loved your second stanza. It held so many great images and metaphors.
October 4th, 2022 06:49
star gazing
Goldfinch60 said:
Inspite of what Dave has said Rik we do see stars and they bring such thoughts to me.
Andy
October 4th, 2022 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Inspite of what Dave has said Rik we do see stars and they bring such thoughts to me.
Andy
October 4th, 2022 01:11
star gazing
Bella Shepard said:
Lovely words dear friend. I am enjoying the autumnal stellar show each night and early morning.
October 3rd, 2022 13:17
Bella Shepard said:
Lovely words dear friend. I am enjoying the autumnal stellar show each night and early morning.
October 3rd, 2022 13:17
star gazing
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t mention star gazing to this lot Rik - most live in the Northern Hemisphere and have no idea.....
October 3rd, 2022 07:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t mention star gazing to this lot Rik - most live in the Northern Hemisphere and have no idea.....
October 3rd, 2022 07:30
sunrising sunset
Doggerel Dave said:
Understood completely, Rik - imagery rich; the difference between temperatures night to day can be extreme.
Sunset the gateway to relief - hopefully....
October 2nd, 2022 23:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Understood completely, Rik - imagery rich; the difference between temperatures night to day can be extreme.
Sunset the gateway to relief - hopefully....
October 2nd, 2022 23:34
and I try to be brave
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Rik about passed friendship.
Andy
October 2nd, 2022 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Rik about passed friendship.
Andy
October 2nd, 2022 01:32
and I try to be brave
Doggerel Dave said:
Captured the essence of parting when no residual contact remains, Rik. I did manage to regain contact after 35 years once, email correspondence only, but at least the questions you pose were answered.
Deeply felt write I related to completely.
October 1st, 2022 07:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Captured the essence of parting when no residual contact remains, Rik. I did manage to regain contact after 35 years once, email correspondence only, but at least the questions you pose were answered.
Deeply felt write I related to completely.
October 1st, 2022 07:53
as the smoke clears
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read, Rik.
Spring will come, it always does.
September 30th, 2022 09:32
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read, Rik.
Spring will come, it always does.
September 30th, 2022 09:32
as the smoke clears
Goldfinch60 said:
That kindness will be there for all each day as each day is so special cb.
Andy
September 30th, 2022 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
That kindness will be there for all each day as each day is so special cb.
Andy
September 30th, 2022 01:55
behind each poem
Bella Shepard said:
The beauty of poetry is that it does come from the heart, the mind, the soul and you have expressed this so beautifully. No fear in poetry; no inhibition, free flowing, often intimate , truthful, angry, loving, kind, understanding, every emotion you can think of. And the greatest part is that no matter what the subject, someone had a thought and had the courage to share it. A great write my friend, and a fave.
September 29th, 2022 09:48
Bella Shepard said:
The beauty of poetry is that it does come from the heart, the mind, the soul and you have expressed this so beautifully. No fear in poetry; no inhibition, free flowing, often intimate , truthful, angry, loving, kind, understanding, every emotion you can think of. And the greatest part is that no matter what the subject, someone had a thought and had the courage to share it. A great write my friend, and a fave.
September 29th, 2022 09:48
behind each poem
Doggerel Dave said:
Well writ always worth bearing in mind, Rik. I should do it more often...at times I get incensed by the ideas produced under the guise of poetry.
September 29th, 2022 05:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Well writ always worth bearing in mind, Rik. I should do it more often...at times I get incensed by the ideas produced under the guise of poetry.
September 29th, 2022 05:27
behind each poem
Mr. Not said:
a very meaningful poem cb. the stories behind poems are deep and people who\'ve been through different things might even understand the poems in their own way.
September 29th, 2022 04:23
Mr. Not said:
a very meaningful poem cb. the stories behind poems are deep and people who\'ve been through different things might even understand the poems in their own way.
September 29th, 2022 04:23
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