Comments received on poems by arqios



anthologizing
orchidee said:

God write CB.

February 20th, 2023 11:30

anthologizing
Addy said:

Wow!

February 20th, 2023 08:47

cursors and curses
Bella Shepard said:

That keyboard dance does get away from us at times. I find my fingers flying, striking keys I don\'t want to strike and inadvertently hitting a button from which there is no recovery. If this is the dilema, you\'ve it the nail on the head. This one\'s fun!

February 19th, 2023 14:14

cursors and curses
Fay Slimm. said:

I truly admire the use of word=play in this telling write Rik. Cursed indeed are the hours I spend trying to find the right keyboard dance .

February 19th, 2023 12:18

cursors and curses
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

February 19th, 2023 10:44

cure alls
orchidee said:

A fine write CB.

February 17th, 2023 10:08

star signed
Bella Shepard said:

Your poem and music bring such delight. At this time of year I can step out on my deck each night and see Orion and the The Big Dipper, and bid them goodnight before I go to bed. Thank you dear poet, for this love of constellations!

February 16th, 2023 13:38

star signed
Neville said:



.......... Cosmic + x5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

February 16th, 2023 10:59

star signed
orchidee said:

A fine write CB.

February 16th, 2023 09:26

more than counting sheep
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one CB.

At my age every time I get a new memory and old one falls off the other end. LOL

Andy

February 14th, 2023 02:22

more than counting sheep
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

February 13th, 2023 10:45

hidden valentine
Bella Shepard said:

Thank you dear poet for this look into a hidden history. Some good decisions by Valens, and some not so good, it all depends on the writing of history, or rewriting in many instances. I know more than I did before and I will remember this come Valentine\'s Day. Thank you for this very thoughtful piece.

February 10th, 2023 15:58

hidden valentine
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

February 10th, 2023 08:26

hidden valentine
L. B. Mek said:

this is strangely, feels like
both a championing, of
and a commentary, of
valentine\'s cultural traditions
a great read, dear Poet


February 10th, 2023 06:46

inside out
orchidee said:

Two left feet? or two right feet?!

February 8th, 2023 07:36

inside out
Neville said:



you speak on behalf of many here CB .. speaking as a child of the .... \'s that is :)

February 8th, 2023 06:06

peering and squinting
Goldfinch60 said:

We must always keep our eyes open cb as there is much that we may miss in our lives.

Andy

February 8th, 2023 02:45

peering and squinting
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

February 7th, 2023 11:54

tongue in cheek
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes - any communication is not worth a candle until it is received and acknowledged.

February 6th, 2023 21:42

tongue in cheek
Bella Shepard said:

Oh, the anticipation of acceptance the validation, don\'t we all seek it? The rush when you get the notification someone has commented on your poem. You hold your breath, click and sign in. They liked it! You bring it all to fruition in this delightful poem dear friend. What a wonderful feeling of community when we all support each other.

February 6th, 2023 16:17

tongue in cheek
Fay Slimm. said:

An intriguing question hidden in these phrases that refer yet do not disclose names or faces - hoping your piece will be read and without tongue in cheek then digested by whomsoever with pleasing results An engaging read.

February 6th, 2023 10:08

tongue in cheek
Neville said:



you just made me wonder a little bit

February 6th, 2023 08:06

tongue in cheek
orchidee said:

What thought process did I ever have, with me 3 brain cells? They often go on holiday, so I don\'t even have 3 sometimes! lol.

February 6th, 2023 07:57

pinch and a punch
orchidee said:

A poignant write CB.
Yes KP horrible to me. At the start of each new month I get a pinch and a punch from her! lol.
And - reading other comments here - you seen Yul Brynner\'s wig? lol.

February 3rd, 2023 09:53

pinch and a punch
Neville said:


sadly I like this and know that feeling only too well

February 3rd, 2023 08:33

pinch and a punch
Doggerel Dave said:

An appropriate in memoriam, Rik.
I felt that having experienced not dissimilar circumstances. Thanks.

February 3rd, 2023 06:35

pinch and a punch
L. B. Mek said:

\'a moment\'s flicker\'
arrowed brevity
thanks for sharing, dear Poet

February 3rd, 2023 06:19

memorial garden
L. B. Mek said:

\'Quietude\'s: Tranquillity\'
Brilliant!
such a smooth flow, a soothing read
thank you

February 3rd, 2023 03:35

memorial garden
Bella Shepard said:

My father was a veteran of WWII, and both he and my mother are buried in our National Cemetery. Your words so aptly describe the feeling I get when I visit. Standing by their gravesite, looking out over thousands of gravestones, all identical, there is a peace and symmetry like no where else, your \"white noise\" where memories flutter about like moths. Beautiful dear poet!

February 2nd, 2023 13:50

memorial garden
orchidee said:

Good write CB.
Ohh, I love the white noise - when KP\'s gone. Can\'t stand her nagging! lol.

February 2nd, 2023 09:42



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