Comments received on poems by arqios
desire
orchidee said:
Teef OK? lol.
A completely random comment - it\'s \'sad\' I know. Ain\'t I got better things to do?! lol.
June 27th, 2022 14:00
orchidee said:
Teef OK? lol.
A completely random comment - it\'s \'sad\' I know. Ain\'t I got better things to do?! lol.
June 27th, 2022 14:00
twilight promise
Goldfinch60 said:
That thrill of a new day is there every time I get up in the morning.
Andy
June 27th, 2022 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
That thrill of a new day is there every time I get up in the morning.
Andy
June 27th, 2022 01:52
harvest
Goldfinch60 said:
May those blossoms shine forever in your words cb.
Andy
June 26th, 2022 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
May those blossoms shine forever in your words cb.
Andy
June 26th, 2022 00:53
harvest
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow fab muse expressed in awesome rhyme scheme . Love the word chice, all so poetic, Kudos!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
June 25th, 2022 05:50
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow fab muse expressed in awesome rhyme scheme . Love the word chice, all so poetic, Kudos!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
June 25th, 2022 05:50
windswept smiles
Goldfinch60 said:
So good to be within your words and remember those days cb.
Andy
June 25th, 2022 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
So good to be within your words and remember those days cb.
Andy
June 25th, 2022 00:27
windswept smiles
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve just read this several times and it\'s left me with touch of the feel goods - great stuff CB
June 24th, 2022 13:54
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve just read this several times and it\'s left me with touch of the feel goods - great stuff CB
June 24th, 2022 13:54
Are you my butterfly?
Goldfinch60 said:
Things do come and go but that love will be with you forever.
Andy
June 24th, 2022 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Things do come and go but that love will be with you forever.
Andy
June 24th, 2022 00:50
Are you my butterfly?
orchidee said:
I\'m still working out the first law of thermo-wotsits, but good write CB. lol.
June 23rd, 2022 07:09
orchidee said:
I\'m still working out the first law of thermo-wotsits, but good write CB. lol.
June 23rd, 2022 07:09
Are you my butterfly?
L. B. Mek said:
3 days is too short a window
that\'s more a fling;
I night fish
for longer lived, opportunities
erm
like, maybe - fireflies...?
lol
(forgive me, in a funny mood)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 23rd, 2022 06:23
L. B. Mek said:
3 days is too short a window
that\'s more a fling;
I night fish
for longer lived, opportunities
erm
like, maybe - fireflies...?
lol
(forgive me, in a funny mood)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 23rd, 2022 06:23
Are you my butterfly?
Blueledge said:
I\'m constantly reminded, nothing lasts forever. And that really means nothing at all.
Second law of thermodynamics.
June 23rd, 2022 03:52
Blueledge said:
I\'m constantly reminded, nothing lasts forever. And that really means nothing at all.
Second law of thermodynamics.
June 23rd, 2022 03:52
i lurv u
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words, it just shows how much drink can affect our lives.
Andy
June 22nd, 2022 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words, it just shows how much drink can affect our lives.
Andy
June 22nd, 2022 00:28
wash
L. B. Mek said:
no, we can\'t wash away
our past
but yes, if we face fate\'s
\'front loader, churning
machinations\'
we get to, rinse
our life\'s, free of regret\'s stains
and thus, allow ourselves
to look back and open
doors to our pasts, to see
red
for
red
and dress
for dress
instead
of metaphorical, symbolism\'s
crimson stained, synthetic hope...
(exemplary use of imagery, dear Poet
Ezra Pound, would be proud)
thank you!
June 20th, 2022 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
no, we can\'t wash away
our past
but yes, if we face fate\'s
\'front loader, churning
machinations\'
we get to, rinse
our life\'s, free of regret\'s stains
and thus, allow ourselves
to look back and open
doors to our pasts, to see
red
for
red
and dress
for dress
instead
of metaphorical, symbolism\'s
crimson stained, synthetic hope...
(exemplary use of imagery, dear Poet
Ezra Pound, would be proud)
thank you!
June 20th, 2022 05:14
wash
JudyStella said:
How you use the function of the washing machine to create such a great piece of work. The last line shows the experiences of the speaker, am I close?
June 20th, 2022 03:23
JudyStella said:
How you use the function of the washing machine to create such a great piece of work. The last line shows the experiences of the speaker, am I close?
June 20th, 2022 03:23
wash
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Doh! From me tumble dryer emerged darkness - well, from me washing machine first. I mixed the whites with black garments!
June 20th, 2022 02:00
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Doh! From me tumble dryer emerged darkness - well, from me washing machine first. I mixed the whites with black garments!
June 20th, 2022 02:00
simply hope
Blueledge said:
Sounds good. Brings back memories of sunrises I Saw living high up on a Scottish Island.
June 19th, 2022 23:43
Blueledge said:
Sounds good. Brings back memories of sunrises I Saw living high up on a Scottish Island.
June 19th, 2022 23:43
simply hope
JudyStella said:
Love the line
off sun-kissed
horizon,
Well crafted!
June 19th, 2022 10:37
JudyStella said:
Love the line
off sun-kissed
horizon,
Well crafted!
June 19th, 2022 10:37
so, fill us with good things
L. B. Mek said:
that your cynicism, will fly
past, the thoughtlessness
of most
makes this, Brilliant!
\'in my humble opinion\'
(forgive me
if I\'ve interpreted your words wrongly)
June 17th, 2022 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
that your cynicism, will fly
past, the thoughtlessness
of most
makes this, Brilliant!
\'in my humble opinion\'
(forgive me
if I\'ve interpreted your words wrongly)
June 17th, 2022 04:27
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