Comments received on poems by arqios
spaces we inhabit: with every breath
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is so you can still see the spirit of Pompeii in its frozen figures and of Hiroshima in the shadows burnt on sidewalks but that is not the spirit you speak of there is a sense of home to a house, a city, a country. There are bonds built into each structure and when these are torn down we feel a loss and the present is no longer the past. A most beautiful and positive write. Disregard my begining dysphoria and gloom
January 11th, 2025 07:48
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is so you can still see the spirit of Pompeii in its frozen figures and of Hiroshima in the shadows burnt on sidewalks but that is not the spirit you speak of there is a sense of home to a house, a city, a country. There are bonds built into each structure and when these are torn down we feel a loss and the present is no longer the past. A most beautiful and positive write. Disregard my begining dysphoria and gloom
January 11th, 2025 07:48
reflection by the sea
Dan Williams said:
Strikes me you are a very lucky person. Nicely done.
January 11th, 2025 01:28
Dan Williams said:
Strikes me you are a very lucky person. Nicely done.
January 11th, 2025 01:28
here and there
NafisaSB said:
i am over 70 now, and never felt the desire to put on the brakes and prolong my youth - enjoying life much more, and am glad of whatever life has given me
January 11th, 2025 01:13
NafisaSB said:
i am over 70 now, and never felt the desire to put on the brakes and prolong my youth - enjoying life much more, and am glad of whatever life has given me
January 11th, 2025 01:13
reflection by the sea
Reynaldo Casison said:
Calm and Soothing Nice Imagery arqios
January 10th, 2025 23:01
Reynaldo Casison said:
Calm and Soothing Nice Imagery arqios
January 10th, 2025 23:01
reflection by the sea
Teddy.15 said:
Ashes in the ocean, how truly beautiful, clearly someone special to you dear Arqios, a very peaceful serene feel. It\'s probably weird to say but they will always be there because the ocean is 🌹
January 10th, 2025 15:45
Teddy.15 said:
Ashes in the ocean, how truly beautiful, clearly someone special to you dear Arqios, a very peaceful serene feel. It\'s probably weird to say but they will always be there because the ocean is 🌹
January 10th, 2025 15:45
reflection by the sea
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful thoughtful poem. It really possesses the elements of poetry. Cadence, theme and metaphor. Well done
January 10th, 2025 15:22
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful thoughtful poem. It really possesses the elements of poetry. Cadence, theme and metaphor. Well done
January 10th, 2025 15:22
reflection by the sea
Cassie58 said:
I thought of my mother, her ashes scattered in the sea where she enjoyed many a beautiful sunrise and sunset with my father before he passed. A lovely poem arqios.
January 10th, 2025 13:52
Cassie58 said:
I thought of my mother, her ashes scattered in the sea where she enjoyed many a beautiful sunrise and sunset with my father before he passed. A lovely poem arqios.
January 10th, 2025 13:52
reflection by the sea
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The sea seems to truly invite reflection...and yes, for whatever reason, one seems to time travel when looking out into it. A very resonant piece, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 10th, 2025 10:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The sea seems to truly invite reflection...and yes, for whatever reason, one seems to time travel when looking out into it. A very resonant piece, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 10th, 2025 10:36
a grasp away
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. A fine write and love the sentiment.
January 10th, 2025 10:29
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. A fine write and love the sentiment.
January 10th, 2025 10:29
reflection by the sea
sorenbarrett said:
Although on the surface this appears and well could be a beautiful love poem but I feel greater depth in the nature references and how nature itself is the love. Just my take on this beautifully worded proclamation of love to whomever it is directed.
January 10th, 2025 08:56
sorenbarrett said:
Although on the surface this appears and well could be a beautiful love poem but I feel greater depth in the nature references and how nature itself is the love. Just my take on this beautifully worded proclamation of love to whomever it is directed.
January 10th, 2025 08:56
reflection by the sea
Poetic Licence said:
Looking out at natures beauty reflecting and remembering loved lost ones, there is something magical about the sea, i find, enjoyed me read, all the best
January 10th, 2025 08:01
Poetic Licence said:
Looking out at natures beauty reflecting and remembering loved lost ones, there is something magical about the sea, i find, enjoyed me read, all the best
January 10th, 2025 08:01
reflection by the sea
orchidee said:
I imagined I met you, and you said to me: \'No need to go mad and chop down the whole laurel tree\'. Doh! lol.
January 10th, 2025 07:00
orchidee said:
I imagined I met you, and you said to me: \'No need to go mad and chop down the whole laurel tree\'. Doh! lol.
January 10th, 2025 07:00
a grasp away
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
A most captivating
and insightful write!!💯👌
Strong feelings
and message and
to read a delight!!🤩
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 9th, 2025 23:16
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
A most captivating
and insightful write!!💯👌
Strong feelings
and message and
to read a delight!!🤩
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 9th, 2025 23:16
grappling with Today
Kevin Hulme said:
Very Philosophical. Something we must take on board
in our days.
Good one.
January 9th, 2025 20:16
Kevin Hulme said:
Very Philosophical. Something we must take on board
in our days.
Good one.
January 9th, 2025 20:16
tears you could have cried
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, and love the song choice. Excellently matched.
January 9th, 2025 10:34
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, and love the song choice. Excellently matched.
January 9th, 2025 10:34
a grasp away
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, we live in a world of extending swords instead of laurels. This is a great call to action, which is what this poem is about. The offering of peace and forgiveness...not just the mere wish of having it. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 9th, 2025 09:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, we live in a world of extending swords instead of laurels. This is a great call to action, which is what this poem is about. The offering of peace and forgiveness...not just the mere wish of having it. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 9th, 2025 09:45
a grasp away
Poetic Licence said:
The Hand of peace, lovely piece of writing highlighting that even a simple gesture can have some a dramatic effect, enjoyed the read.
January 9th, 2025 06:03
Poetic Licence said:
The Hand of peace, lovely piece of writing highlighting that even a simple gesture can have some a dramatic effect, enjoyed the read.
January 9th, 2025 06:03
a grasp away
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this cryptic poem in its depth speaks to me of the power of symbols and actions beyond words. Forgiveness is not a word but an action. Honor not a word but an action. So well set in this metaphoric piece is the notion that words are not needed there is a poetry in the doing, the act itself.
January 9th, 2025 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this cryptic poem in its depth speaks to me of the power of symbols and actions beyond words. Forgiveness is not a word but an action. Honor not a word but an action. So well set in this metaphoric piece is the notion that words are not needed there is a poetry in the doing, the act itself.
January 9th, 2025 05:58
a grasp away
orchidee said:
Here\'s \'hostile advice\', said by a clergyman, of all people - \'I\'m a man of peace, and if anyone doesn\'t agree with me, I\'ll punch them on the nose\'. Doh!
Or a fictitious scene, hopefully - A guy said \'hello\' to a nasty guy. He replied \'What do you mean hello? What do you want? I\'ll give you a good punch for speaking to me\'. A pleasant chap - not!
January 9th, 2025 03:41
orchidee said:
Here\'s \'hostile advice\', said by a clergyman, of all people - \'I\'m a man of peace, and if anyone doesn\'t agree with me, I\'ll punch them on the nose\'. Doh!
Or a fictitious scene, hopefully - A guy said \'hello\' to a nasty guy. He replied \'What do you mean hello? What do you want? I\'ll give you a good punch for speaking to me\'. A pleasant chap - not!
January 9th, 2025 03:41
tears you could have cried
David Wakeling said:
This is well written.I love poems that have adjectives in them.Well done
January 8th, 2025 19:48
David Wakeling said:
This is well written.I love poems that have adjectives in them.Well done
January 8th, 2025 19:48
tears you could have cried
Poetic Licence said:
The tears of Healing and was away the pain, a touching, emotionally and i feel personal piece of poetry, i enjoyed reading from the poetry aspect
January 8th, 2025 10:30
Poetic Licence said:
The tears of Healing and was away the pain, a touching, emotionally and i feel personal piece of poetry, i enjoyed reading from the poetry aspect
January 8th, 2025 10:30
tears you could have cried
orchidee said:
I cried tears over spilt milk - if that relates to this in any way? Probably not! lol.
I baulk at the convolutions in cryptic poems, and sometimes add some daft, inane comment instead!
January 8th, 2025 09:46
orchidee said:
I cried tears over spilt milk - if that relates to this in any way? Probably not! lol.
I baulk at the convolutions in cryptic poems, and sometimes add some daft, inane comment instead!
January 8th, 2025 09:46
tears you could have cried
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First. Love the Everly Brothers. Second, that picture is making me tear. 🤣 Finally, tears are indeed healing. I have not cried more than I have in the past year...guess I\'m finally catching up to where I should have been all along...but those tears have brought healing, for sure. Bravo, my friend, this poem hit home! 🌹👏
January 8th, 2025 08:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First. Love the Everly Brothers. Second, that picture is making me tear. 🤣 Finally, tears are indeed healing. I have not cried more than I have in the past year...guess I\'m finally catching up to where I should have been all along...but those tears have brought healing, for sure. Bravo, my friend, this poem hit home! 🌹👏
January 8th, 2025 08:17
tears you could have cried
2781 said:
\"He that goeth forth and weepeth, bearing precious seed, shall doubtless come again with rejoicing, bringing his sheaths with him.\"
January 8th, 2025 08:09
2781 said:
\"He that goeth forth and weepeth, bearing precious seed, shall doubtless come again with rejoicing, bringing his sheaths with him.\"
January 8th, 2025 08:09
tears you could have cried
sorenbarrett said:
Like most of your writing this poem requires thought and rereading to grasp its meaning. In its depth swirl emotions as well as thoughts and in those tears of rain the pain of cracked and broken past events are mended. Very nicely done my friend
January 8th, 2025 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
Like most of your writing this poem requires thought and rereading to grasp its meaning. In its depth swirl emotions as well as thoughts and in those tears of rain the pain of cracked and broken past events are mended. Very nicely done my friend
January 8th, 2025 07:24
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