Comments received on poems by arqios
inimitable contrivances
Bella Shepard said:
This truly hits the painful spot of reality. War is the great destroyer, but also the great enhancer in the worst possible way. Very powerfully said dear friend!
November 30th, 2022 11:00
Bella Shepard said:
This truly hits the painful spot of reality. War is the great destroyer, but also the great enhancer in the worst possible way. Very powerfully said dear friend!
November 30th, 2022 11:00
inimitable contrivances
dusk arising said:
the gods of war would do battle with you for this. For doing battle is all they are good for... and hush, for they lurk in the dark curtains ever seeking new game.
November 30th, 2022 05:30
dusk arising said:
the gods of war would do battle with you for this. For doing battle is all they are good for... and hush, for they lurk in the dark curtains ever seeking new game.
November 30th, 2022 05:30
inimitable contrivances
Fay Slimm. said:
Too true Rik and so succinctly put. This addiction to war will inflict more and more weariness to all life on this beautiful planet.
November 30th, 2022 05:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Too true Rik and so succinctly put. This addiction to war will inflict more and more weariness to all life on this beautiful planet.
November 30th, 2022 05:28
antipolarity
orchidee said:
And - I\'ve got as far as trying to work out, if a famous hyphen is needed between anti and polarity or not.
It\'s sad, I know, what I belabour myself with sometimes. lol.
November 29th, 2022 05:58
orchidee said:
And - I\'ve got as far as trying to work out, if a famous hyphen is needed between anti and polarity or not.
It\'s sad, I know, what I belabour myself with sometimes. lol.
November 29th, 2022 05:58
antipolarity
orchidee said:
It\'s an unattainable height for me sometimes to understand some poetry. Don\'t they know I only got three brain cells?
They get tired of trying to understand, and then they go off on holiday. I dunno when they\'ll be back! lol.
November 29th, 2022 05:56
orchidee said:
It\'s an unattainable height for me sometimes to understand some poetry. Don\'t they know I only got three brain cells?
They get tired of trying to understand, and then they go off on holiday. I dunno when they\'ll be back! lol.
November 29th, 2022 05:56
baggage claim delay
Doggerel Dave said:
For me Ohio is not the main point of interest, here. The pajamas in the cold and the lost baggage claim...... or is it me who has lost something, Rik?
November 28th, 2022 19:27
Doggerel Dave said:
For me Ohio is not the main point of interest, here. The pajamas in the cold and the lost baggage claim...... or is it me who has lost something, Rik?
November 28th, 2022 19:27
baggage claim delay
Bella Shepard said:
I love the way music can help enhance the tone of a poem, and you sure picked a honey, the sweet strains of Chuck Mangione. I\'m swaying, toes tapping as I\'m reading, and loving every minute of this lovely memory shared. Thank you!
November 28th, 2022 12:48
Bella Shepard said:
I love the way music can help enhance the tone of a poem, and you sure picked a honey, the sweet strains of Chuck Mangione. I\'m swaying, toes tapping as I\'m reading, and loving every minute of this lovely memory shared. Thank you!
November 28th, 2022 12:48
baggage claim delay
L. B. Mek said:
I enjoyed the sheer poetry of this delightful read
works well even without context, thank you!
November 28th, 2022 06:29
L. B. Mek said:
I enjoyed the sheer poetry of this delightful read
works well even without context, thank you!
November 28th, 2022 06:29
baggage claim delay
sorenbarrett said:
Not ever having been to Ohio I have to let my mind carry me there, which is much safer since dressed in pajamas I don\'t feel dressed for the occasion. It does evoke a playful and wistful feeling as well as type of nostalgia for a time long gone. Loved it.
November 28th, 2022 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
Not ever having been to Ohio I have to let my mind carry me there, which is much safer since dressed in pajamas I don\'t feel dressed for the occasion. It does evoke a playful and wistful feeling as well as type of nostalgia for a time long gone. Loved it.
November 28th, 2022 05:43
baggage claim delay
orchidee said:
I don\'t quite remember that time in Ohio, being in the UK! lol.
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido!
November 28th, 2022 03:55
orchidee said:
I don\'t quite remember that time in Ohio, being in the UK! lol.
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido!
November 28th, 2022 03:55
never led astray
orchidee said:
A convivial good day to you Sir, and a spiffing good write! Notice the UK/English upper class there? lol.
November 27th, 2022 04:37
orchidee said:
A convivial good day to you Sir, and a spiffing good write! Notice the UK/English upper class there? lol.
November 27th, 2022 04:37
granny\'s steinway
Fay Slimm. said:
That special piano could if it talked tell some awful tales Rik - your Gran must have gone through some terrible times watching it and the manor so grossly abused - - - - this telling lament is now in my favourites.
November 27th, 2022 03:54
Fay Slimm. said:
That special piano could if it talked tell some awful tales Rik - your Gran must have gone through some terrible times watching it and the manor so grossly abused - - - - this telling lament is now in my favourites.
November 27th, 2022 03:54
granny\'s steinway
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s a history there and I wouldn\'t mind if more detail.....
November 26th, 2022 22:03
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s a history there and I wouldn\'t mind if more detail.....
November 26th, 2022 22:03
ice fishing anyone?
Mr. Not said:
people want what they dont have, id like going south to not have to feel the chilly morning air every day on my way to the bus, but at the same time when you\'re packed in warm blankets in front of the fireplace, i gotta admit its quite cozy
November 26th, 2022 17:02
Mr. Not said:
people want what they dont have, id like going south to not have to feel the chilly morning air every day on my way to the bus, but at the same time when you\'re packed in warm blankets in front of the fireplace, i gotta admit its quite cozy
November 26th, 2022 17:02
granny\'s steinway
Neville said:
You can beat an egg, a drum and a xylophone .. but you just can\'t beat a good old Steinway .. especially if it\'s grannies ................... Neville :)
November 26th, 2022 10:12
Neville said:
You can beat an egg, a drum and a xylophone .. but you just can\'t beat a good old Steinway .. especially if it\'s grannies ................... Neville :)
November 26th, 2022 10:12
ice fishing anyone?
sorenbarrett said:
Personally I prefer going south, whether to warmer weather or the other side of the equator. Fishing in the winter is not for me. I feel frozen in time and body. Great poem
November 25th, 2022 07:11
sorenbarrett said:
Personally I prefer going south, whether to warmer weather or the other side of the equator. Fishing in the winter is not for me. I feel frozen in time and body. Great poem
November 25th, 2022 07:11
ice fishing anyone?
L. B. Mek said:
(distinction, helps us prevail
when conviction, retreats
from Winter\'s, tall tales
soon, a Spring
we can hope to glimpse, and
maybe even a Summer, highlight
or two, to add to our memento
collection
before, our final Autumn beckons
us
to that unknown, ever-after
next)
enjoy the ride, as our months pass-by
far, far - too quick, dear Poet
(really enjoyed the instrumental
chill easy-going flow, anchored
upon a defiant beat of vitality)
November 25th, 2022 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
(distinction, helps us prevail
when conviction, retreats
from Winter\'s, tall tales
soon, a Spring
we can hope to glimpse, and
maybe even a Summer, highlight
or two, to add to our memento
collection
before, our final Autumn beckons
us
to that unknown, ever-after
next)
enjoy the ride, as our months pass-by
far, far - too quick, dear Poet
(really enjoyed the instrumental
chill easy-going flow, anchored
upon a defiant beat of vitality)
November 25th, 2022 04:50
ice fishing anyone?
orchidee said:
Good write CB. Where ya going in the South? lol.
November 25th, 2022 03:15
orchidee said:
Good write CB. Where ya going in the South? lol.
November 25th, 2022 03:15
benefit of drought
Neville said:
For the benefit of drought, I guess fewer folk drown in their own sorrows, or anywhere for that matter ..
Your words today sir had a distinctly nice feel n flow to em ..
Neville
November 24th, 2022 09:23
Neville said:
For the benefit of drought, I guess fewer folk drown in their own sorrows, or anywhere for that matter ..
Your words today sir had a distinctly nice feel n flow to em ..
Neville
November 24th, 2022 09:23
new car
Neville said:
I just got me a brand-new Mercedes Benz auto ..
What prompted me to do so, was the fact, since my cruciate ligament in my left knee went,
I couldn\'t use the clutch on my beloved Alfa Romeo .. not even in front of a bloomin tall mirror ...
Neville :)
November 24th, 2022 04:09
Neville said:
I just got me a brand-new Mercedes Benz auto ..
What prompted me to do so, was the fact, since my cruciate ligament in my left knee went,
I couldn\'t use the clutch on my beloved Alfa Romeo .. not even in front of a bloomin tall mirror ...
Neville :)
November 24th, 2022 04:09
new car
Bella Shepard said:
Need to set this one to music, would make a great song. Stuck at home, maybe an old flick? A little \"Jane Eyre\"? Love your choice of movie clip and music. Surely hope you get that new car! Stay dry my friend.
November 23rd, 2022 11:42
Bella Shepard said:
Need to set this one to music, would make a great song. Stuck at home, maybe an old flick? A little \"Jane Eyre\"? Love your choice of movie clip and music. Surely hope you get that new car! Stay dry my friend.
November 23rd, 2022 11:42
germinant style birthed
sorenbarrett said:
Crypticbard this one hit home. I have had several poems like that. A couple of times they have even been blocked from the cite and once I had an irate reader hound me for days with remarks that are unrepeatable.
November 23rd, 2022 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
Crypticbard this one hit home. I have had several poems like that. A couple of times they have even been blocked from the cite and once I had an irate reader hound me for days with remarks that are unrepeatable.
November 23rd, 2022 09:07
new car
Doggerel Dave said:
A plea from the heart and wet feet.
Can be a bit of a lottery when it comes to where you live and public transport...
Got home in the end, Rik?
November 23rd, 2022 03:30
Doggerel Dave said:
A plea from the heart and wet feet.
Can be a bit of a lottery when it comes to where you live and public transport...
Got home in the end, Rik?
November 23rd, 2022 03:30
new car
orchidee said:
Good write CB. You home now after this poem?!
I can\'t write too cryptically, though we each have our own style.
November 23rd, 2022 03:27
orchidee said:
Good write CB. You home now after this poem?!
I can\'t write too cryptically, though we each have our own style.
November 23rd, 2022 03:27
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