Comments received on poems by arqios
flight ready
Poetic Licence said:
Freedom of expression springs to mind, do not let others impose upon you, enjoyed the read
May 29th, 2025 06:43
Poetic Licence said:
Freedom of expression springs to mind, do not let others impose upon you, enjoyed the read
May 29th, 2025 06:43
what we\'ll always be
Tom Dylan said:
Great words, arqios. Some wonderful imagery. Nicely done.
May 29th, 2025 06:43
Tom Dylan said:
Great words, arqios. Some wonderful imagery. Nicely done.
May 29th, 2025 06:43
flight ready
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this Cryptic I again started off on my own path. Old winds to me are the hot air of critics stuck in rigid views and this poem tells me to not heed them to not let them bend my wings or get me down. To soar not to escape relations with others but to be discovered. That a person has the right to be themselves and have their own opinion. A lovely write
May 29th, 2025 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this Cryptic I again started off on my own path. Old winds to me are the hot air of critics stuck in rigid views and this poem tells me to not heed them to not let them bend my wings or get me down. To soar not to escape relations with others but to be discovered. That a person has the right to be themselves and have their own opinion. A lovely write
May 29th, 2025 05:33
beautiful regret
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. Yet doesn\'t love begin the healing process? Love can never erase, but like you\'ve said so excellently, be there in the empty spaces like a balm, right? Beautifully written and most exquisite read aloud, deeply poignant with excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
May 28th, 2025 15:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. Yet doesn\'t love begin the healing process? Love can never erase, but like you\'ve said so excellently, be there in the empty spaces like a balm, right? Beautifully written and most exquisite read aloud, deeply poignant with excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
May 28th, 2025 15:43
what we\'ll always be
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh me! To read this delicacy aloud, as poetry is to be properly treated, is an experience which seems to cull swooning, until I nearly faint in concluding. Beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it.
May 28th, 2025 15:39
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh me! To read this delicacy aloud, as poetry is to be properly treated, is an experience which seems to cull swooning, until I nearly faint in concluding. Beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it.
May 28th, 2025 15:39
hair in the wind
NafisaSB said:
beautiful description and a different take on an old nursery rhyme. enjoyed the read
May 28th, 2025 01:41
NafisaSB said:
beautiful description and a different take on an old nursery rhyme. enjoyed the read
May 28th, 2025 01:41
beautiful regret
NafisaSB said:
such a tender and beautiful message - love does forgive and overlook a lot , especially in the first bloom of love - later it learns to forgive too..
May 28th, 2025 01:19
NafisaSB said:
such a tender and beautiful message - love does forgive and overlook a lot , especially in the first bloom of love - later it learns to forgive too..
May 28th, 2025 01:19
what we\'ll always be
MendedFences27 said:
In those unspoken moments, \"the language of skin,\" promises are made that must be kept. The wind does not forget. Your poem explicates the intimacy of lovers; the communication made without words. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 27th, 2025 14:01
MendedFences27 said:
In those unspoken moments, \"the language of skin,\" promises are made that must be kept. The wind does not forget. Your poem explicates the intimacy of lovers; the communication made without words. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 27th, 2025 14:01
beautiful regret
RSM0812 said:
I especially liked \"in the spaces where breath is safe\". Great write.
May 27th, 2025 08:46
RSM0812 said:
I especially liked \"in the spaces where breath is safe\". Great write.
May 27th, 2025 08:46
what we\'ll always be
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece my friend , i can absolutely relate to a time that once was and that will forever be etched in my heart mind and echo of a particular persons touch , love it
May 27th, 2025 08:30
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece my friend , i can absolutely relate to a time that once was and that will forever be etched in my heart mind and echo of a particular persons touch , love it
May 27th, 2025 08:30
what we\'ll always be
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic your poems are always filled with deeper meaning and this one required three readings to peel away layers. There is a haunting but ephemeral feel to this poem that reaches out from the shadows and takes the hand of the reader. It begs for another reading and further enlightenment. There are great lines here (The wind carries whispers too fragile to hold) and whole stanzas the like honey are viscous each word pulling one to the next. In each reading new meaning appears and that is the measure of a great work of art. Loved it a fave
May 27th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic your poems are always filled with deeper meaning and this one required three readings to peel away layers. There is a haunting but ephemeral feel to this poem that reaches out from the shadows and takes the hand of the reader. It begs for another reading and further enlightenment. There are great lines here (The wind carries whispers too fragile to hold) and whole stanzas the like honey are viscous each word pulling one to the next. In each reading new meaning appears and that is the measure of a great work of art. Loved it a fave
May 27th, 2025 04:39
what we\'ll always be
David Wakeling said:
This reads so elegantly. I see two people who love each other communicating with touch. An enjoyable read compadre
May 27th, 2025 04:15
David Wakeling said:
This reads so elegantly. I see two people who love each other communicating with touch. An enjoyable read compadre
May 27th, 2025 04:15
what we\'ll always be
Doggerel Dave said:
I can\'t grasp the \'always\', the moment felt sufficient for me.
May 27th, 2025 02:38
Doggerel Dave said:
I can\'t grasp the \'always\', the moment felt sufficient for me.
May 27th, 2025 02:38
what we\'ll always be
Poetic Licence said:
What we always be, that\'s a fighting thought, have a great week
May 27th, 2025 02:34
Poetic Licence said:
What we always be, that\'s a fighting thought, have a great week
May 27th, 2025 02:34
what we\'ll always be
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios showing us that the smallest things in our lives can bring such pleasure.
Andy
May 27th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios showing us that the smallest things in our lives can bring such pleasure.
Andy
May 27th, 2025 01:48
beautiful regret
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once came across the idea that the past can be changed. It\'s one of the most challenging ideas I\'ve ever heard.
May 26th, 2025 19:13
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once came across the idea that the past can be changed. It\'s one of the most challenging ideas I\'ve ever heard.
May 26th, 2025 19:13
beautiful regret
MendedFences27 said:
A wonderful description of one of the aspects of love. Your colorful phrasings, \" where breath is safe, time learns to forgive,\" are particularly poignant. Your poem is a gentle and soft way of expressing loves power. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 26th, 2025 13:53
MendedFences27 said:
A wonderful description of one of the aspects of love. Your colorful phrasings, \" where breath is safe, time learns to forgive,\" are particularly poignant. Your poem is a gentle and soft way of expressing loves power. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 26th, 2025 13:53
con un beso (with a kiss)
twistedlogicx said:
i love this poem, it is so sweet and intimate
May 26th, 2025 10:56
twistedlogicx said:
i love this poem, it is so sweet and intimate
May 26th, 2025 10:56
beautiful regret
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem hits me because I know it well. It is 💯 relatable and true on a profound level. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 10:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem hits me because I know it well. It is 💯 relatable and true on a profound level. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 10:52
con un beso (with a kiss)
RSM0812 said:
A lovely write. Great imagery here. \"To dry my tears with a kiss\". 😀
May 26th, 2025 09:01
RSM0812 said:
A lovely write. Great imagery here. \"To dry my tears with a kiss\". 😀
May 26th, 2025 09:01
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