Comments received on poems by arqios
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arqios said:
Perhaps a week’s break is not enough for the masses…when is it ever?
May 11th, 2025 04:26
arqios said:
Perhaps a week’s break is not enough for the masses…when is it ever?
May 11th, 2025 04:26
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sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful view of life explodes with this poem where trails traveled and wounds received all blend into memories. Very nice
May 11th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful view of life explodes with this poem where trails traveled and wounds received all blend into memories. Very nice
May 11th, 2025 04:05
momEntary deEp
David Wakeling said:
wow so much to unpack here.I like the cadence.The poem is enjoyable to read.I love \"universe of dreams\".Some many powerful images here and it ends with wonderful positivity. Well done.
May 11th, 2025 03:52
David Wakeling said:
wow so much to unpack here.I like the cadence.The poem is enjoyable to read.I love \"universe of dreams\".Some many powerful images here and it ends with wonderful positivity. Well done.
May 11th, 2025 03:52
momEntary deEp
Poetic Licence said:
Very enjoyable read on a Sunday, with some lovely lines, nicely done
May 11th, 2025 03:47
Poetic Licence said:
Very enjoyable read on a Sunday, with some lovely lines, nicely done
May 11th, 2025 03:47
there is no lack in you
Poetic Licence said:
Loved this write so much truth in it, always write as yourself and as you feel, if you write to please, I feel it looses it\'s honesty and feeling and meaning, does not matter if it is liked or not if it came from within you, very nicely done, have a great weekend
May 9th, 2025 03:49
Poetic Licence said:
Loved this write so much truth in it, always write as yourself and as you feel, if you write to please, I feel it looses it\'s honesty and feeling and meaning, does not matter if it is liked or not if it came from within you, very nicely done, have a great weekend
May 9th, 2025 03:49
the thread between us
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and chockful of gorgeous imagery rendering a sense of now and of humanity so beautifully with a gripping, haunting poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
May 7th, 2025 13:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and chockful of gorgeous imagery rendering a sense of now and of humanity so beautifully with a gripping, haunting poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
May 7th, 2025 13:11
the thread between us
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of are we as free to do and say as we humans wish,or has it all been laid and planned before and we just follow the path, there are implications in the write but that was the main one for me, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 06:15
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of are we as free to do and say as we humans wish,or has it all been laid and planned before and we just follow the path, there are implications in the write but that was the main one for me, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 06:15
the thread between us
Goldfinch60 said:
The paths we walk in our lives can lead to both good and bad but eventually we come to the place we are meant to be arqios.
Andy
May 7th, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
The paths we walk in our lives can lead to both good and bad but eventually we come to the place we are meant to be arqios.
Andy
May 7th, 2025 01:26
the thread between us
arqios said:
Oh, now I remember… Diana’s song 🕯 haven’t heard that song in a long while 🕊🙏🏻
May 6th, 2025 20:40
arqios said:
Oh, now I remember… Diana’s song 🕯 haven’t heard that song in a long while 🕊🙏🏻
May 6th, 2025 20:40
the thread between us
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound. Philosophical. Important. These questions get to the heart of what it means to be human in a world where nothing is new and things have been laid out before us. It\'s hard to imagine a world otherwise. I love the interconnectivity built into this poem. Well done, my friend. The stuff a fave is made of! 🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 20:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound. Philosophical. Important. These questions get to the heart of what it means to be human in a world where nothing is new and things have been laid out before us. It\'s hard to imagine a world otherwise. I love the interconnectivity built into this poem. Well done, my friend. The stuff a fave is made of! 🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 20:30
the thread between us
David Wakeling said:
This raises a profound question about free will and wether it exists or not.Made me think.Excellent
May 6th, 2025 05:06
David Wakeling said:
This raises a profound question about free will and wether it exists or not.Made me think.Excellent
May 6th, 2025 05:06
the thread between us
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thought here Cryptic although many meanings are possible it seems to me to speak of humanity as a whole and the conflict amongst humans even though it is written more personally about what appears to be just two people. I particularly like the last stanza ( the balance flickers a candle resisting the wind) Such a vivid visual image that says so much. A fave
May 6th, 2025 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thought here Cryptic although many meanings are possible it seems to me to speak of humanity as a whole and the conflict amongst humans even though it is written more personally about what appears to be just two people. I particularly like the last stanza ( the balance flickers a candle resisting the wind) Such a vivid visual image that says so much. A fave
May 6th, 2025 04:53
there is no lack in you
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios and so true, we must all be ourselves.
Andy
May 6th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios and so true, we must all be ourselves.
Andy
May 6th, 2025 01:48
against the age
NafisaSB said:
truly inspirational message - especially like the last two lines
just beautiful
May 5th, 2025 23:13
NafisaSB said:
truly inspirational message - especially like the last two lines
just beautiful
May 5th, 2025 23:13
there is no lack in you
arqios said:
And on other occasions the towel hangs low🙏🏻🕊️
May 5th, 2025 19:43
arqios said:
And on other occasions the towel hangs low🙏🏻🕊️
May 5th, 2025 19:43
there is no lack in you
Tristan Robert Lange said:
💯 This is true. So well put, I will not spoil it with anymore words than: Bravo! 🌹👏
May 5th, 2025 11:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
💯 This is true. So well put, I will not spoil it with anymore words than: Bravo! 🌹👏
May 5th, 2025 11:21
there is no lack in you
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This is a heartfelt and inspiring reflection on creativity and staying true to one\'s unique voice—gentle, encouraging, and beautifully expressed.
May 5th, 2025 08:22
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This is a heartfelt and inspiring reflection on creativity and staying true to one\'s unique voice—gentle, encouraging, and beautifully expressed.
May 5th, 2025 08:22
there is no lack in you
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a tribute to the gentle art of poesy and the poets themselves. Wonderful. Enjoyed reading
May 5th, 2025 06:28
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a tribute to the gentle art of poesy and the poets themselves. Wonderful. Enjoyed reading
May 5th, 2025 06:28
there is no lack in you
sorenbarrett said:
Such good advice but like a novice guitar player listening to a Stevie Ray Vaughn or Jimi Hendrix one can not but help to dream. But I\'m with you for it is not to copy exactly but to put one\'s own flavor of life into it. Yes indeed make it your own. Lovely
May 5th, 2025 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
Such good advice but like a novice guitar player listening to a Stevie Ray Vaughn or Jimi Hendrix one can not but help to dream. But I\'m with you for it is not to copy exactly but to put one\'s own flavor of life into it. Yes indeed make it your own. Lovely
May 5th, 2025 05:31
revelatory
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow...you and I are vibing a VERY similar themes today! Love this, my friend. Love the Ecclesiastes reference, which my poem also hints at. I also love the play with opposites: Truth vs Lies...the positive progress of the one followed by the destructive regression of the other. Kind of like two steps forward, one (or many more steps) backward. This is a brilliant and very thought provoking poem, my friend. A must fave for me. 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 07:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow...you and I are vibing a VERY similar themes today! Love this, my friend. Love the Ecclesiastes reference, which my poem also hints at. I also love the play with opposites: Truth vs Lies...the positive progress of the one followed by the destructive regression of the other. Kind of like two steps forward, one (or many more steps) backward. This is a brilliant and very thought provoking poem, my friend. A must fave for me. 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 07:40
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