bridge is out
David Wakeling said:

Sadly I believe every relationship must fail.Its a law of physics called entropy.This a thoughtful poem linking many of the emotions involved in breaking up.Well done

January 30th, 2025 03:21

bridge is out
orchidee said:

Good write A.

January 30th, 2025 02:55

bridge is out
Cheeky Missy said:

ABBA!!!! Oh, I love them! Quintessentially perfect for this painfully eloquent number, where love is in the entire affair, I wonder since that\'s the only glue which holds. [Keeping it playing on repeat...] Exquisite and rendered superbly with perfect imagery and a bitter poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.

January 30th, 2025 02:46

into the arms of night
NafisaSB said:

such a tender and lyrical way of expressing how to end the day, and fall asleep peacefully. Bravo, well done

January 29th, 2025 23:25

bully-free
David Wakeling said:

I am old enough now that all my bullys are dead.That\'s the secret to life.Live longer than your bullys.Bullys are just impotent .Excellent poem enjoyed

January 29th, 2025 15:45

bully-free
Poetic Licence said:

I guess bullying comes in all shapes and sizes and as someone who suffered a lot this when young i can connect with this writing. It took a long time to find the strength to rise above it, but i eventually came to the conclusion that they had more insecurities and fear inside of them than i did and i learnt that they can control me physically, but they could never control what goes on in my head. Nice to see a piece like this as it still so relevant even today, Thank you

January 29th, 2025 10:31

into the arms of night
Kevin Hulme said:

I really like this . Fine Poem.

January 29th, 2025 10:08

bully-free
sorenbarrett said:

Have always believed that people do the best they can with what they have to work with at that moment and in so doing pity the bully rather than hate. Pity is a more powerful weapon than hate. A great poem with good advice to those that feel victimized

January 29th, 2025 06:41

into the arms of night
Cassie58 said:

A most calming poem, soft words of embrace into a restful night or maybe something even longer. Stillness, serenity, calm, gentle, kind vocabulary. A beautiful piece arqios.

January 29th, 2025 02:28

into the arms of night
Thad Wilk said:

Awesomazing poem,
wonderfully vivid imagery,!! 🤩
Flows like a gentle stream,
and really penned, superbly!! 🏆
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad

January 28th, 2025 11:21

into the arms of night
Neville said:



The perfect pre-retirement poem for folk of all ages & persuasions .. so very much enjoyed .. Neville

January 28th, 2025 09:29

into the arms of night
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This works beautifully, both literally and as a metaphor. A wonderfully beautiful poem, my friend! 🌹👏

January 28th, 2025 08:31

into the arms of night
sorenbarrett said:

Whether metaphor or not this poem holds its beauty and sings on to sleep. Should the metaphor be true so will death come too.

January 28th, 2025 06:38

into the arms of night
Poetic Licence said:

Beautifully written piece encapsulating all the things i wish i could do as the night approaches, reading this i can picture how it is meant to be, enjoyed the read

January 28th, 2025 05:30

fleet-footed good
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words arqios, we need to walk around to see life around us.

Andy

January 28th, 2025 02:09