Comments received on poems by arqios
wash
JudyStella said:
How you use the function of the washing machine to create such a great piece of work. The last line shows the experiences of the speaker, am I close?
June 20th, 2022 03:23
JudyStella said:
How you use the function of the washing machine to create such a great piece of work. The last line shows the experiences of the speaker, am I close?
June 20th, 2022 03:23
wash
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Doh! From me tumble dryer emerged darkness - well, from me washing machine first. I mixed the whites with black garments!
June 20th, 2022 02:00
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Doh! From me tumble dryer emerged darkness - well, from me washing machine first. I mixed the whites with black garments!
June 20th, 2022 02:00
simply hope
Blueledge said:
Sounds good. Brings back memories of sunrises I Saw living high up on a Scottish Island.
June 19th, 2022 23:43
Blueledge said:
Sounds good. Brings back memories of sunrises I Saw living high up on a Scottish Island.
June 19th, 2022 23:43
simply hope
JudyStella said:
Love the line
off sun-kissed
horizon,
Well crafted!
June 19th, 2022 10:37
JudyStella said:
Love the line
off sun-kissed
horizon,
Well crafted!
June 19th, 2022 10:37
so, fill us with good things
L. B. Mek said:
that your cynicism, will fly
past, the thoughtlessness
of most
makes this, Brilliant!
\'in my humble opinion\'
(forgive me
if I\'ve interpreted your words wrongly)
June 17th, 2022 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
that your cynicism, will fly
past, the thoughtlessness
of most
makes this, Brilliant!
\'in my humble opinion\'
(forgive me
if I\'ve interpreted your words wrongly)
June 17th, 2022 04:27
Elyssa, fugitive princess
Bella Shepard said:
I enjoyed this dive into Greek history, and so, was inspired to google Elyssa. What a fascinating story. Thank you!
June 15th, 2022 11:32
Bella Shepard said:
I enjoyed this dive into Greek history, and so, was inspired to google Elyssa. What a fascinating story. Thank you!
June 15th, 2022 11:32
Elyssa, fugitive princess
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice review of a classic theme. Well written and enjoyable
June 15th, 2022 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice review of a classic theme. Well written and enjoyable
June 15th, 2022 08:40
What is \'forever\' to a heart?
dusk arising said:
Forever to my old battered heart was a path of learning. Coming to terms and leading on toward and through the countless villages of wisdom where a heart may find solace.
June 14th, 2022 13:38
dusk arising said:
Forever to my old battered heart was a path of learning. Coming to terms and leading on toward and through the countless villages of wisdom where a heart may find solace.
June 14th, 2022 13:38
What is \'forever\' to a heart?
orchidee said:
Ohhhh forever.... I am liking this!
No need to be melodramatic, and over-the-top, says Fido. lol.
June 14th, 2022 12:29
orchidee said:
Ohhhh forever.... I am liking this!
No need to be melodramatic, and over-the-top, says Fido. lol.
June 14th, 2022 12:29
What is \'forever\' to a heart?
L. B. Mek said:
let\'s hope so, dear poet
I admire the enduring hopeful tone
in your message
thanks for sharing!
\'the un-requitedness would be for sure.\'
an empowering concept/perspective
June 14th, 2022 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
let\'s hope so, dear poet
I admire the enduring hopeful tone
in your message
thanks for sharing!
\'the un-requitedness would be for sure.\'
an empowering concept/perspective
June 14th, 2022 05:39
a poet\'s tears
Bella Shepard said:
I think that the soul of the poet sees deeper, feels deeper, and can\'t help but express. That expression prods us to think deeper. Well done poet!
June 13th, 2022 08:50
Bella Shepard said:
I think that the soul of the poet sees deeper, feels deeper, and can\'t help but express. That expression prods us to think deeper. Well done poet!
June 13th, 2022 08:50
a poet\'s tears
L. B. Mek said:
lol
I don\'t know, I think most
poet\'s, worry more
about their spelling and grammatical, mistakes
than having some warped notion
of carrying the world
on their scrawny shoulders..
(but then I wouldn\'t know
I\'m a mere wannabe
maybe one day
for while I breathe, I can still dream)
lol
June 13th, 2022 07:06
L. B. Mek said:
lol
I don\'t know, I think most
poet\'s, worry more
about their spelling and grammatical, mistakes
than having some warped notion
of carrying the world
on their scrawny shoulders..
(but then I wouldn\'t know
I\'m a mere wannabe
maybe one day
for while I breathe, I can still dream)
lol
June 13th, 2022 07:06
spiral noose
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Can ya help? I went 24 hours without breathing one day. Why didn\'t I feel very well at the end of it?! lol. Well, I was trying to save the planet some air.
They\'ll take me away soon.... men in white coats!
June 10th, 2022 11:31
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Can ya help? I went 24 hours without breathing one day. Why didn\'t I feel very well at the end of it?! lol. Well, I was trying to save the planet some air.
They\'ll take me away soon.... men in white coats!
June 10th, 2022 11:31
gems inside
Morwenna said:
It\'s succinct and clear and yet needs re-reading. That is big plus. And I like the half rhymes which give it weight, somehow. A lovely image. Thanks
June 9th, 2022 12:25
Morwenna said:
It\'s succinct and clear and yet needs re-reading. That is big plus. And I like the half rhymes which give it weight, somehow. A lovely image. Thanks
June 9th, 2022 12:25
gems inside
Blueledge said:
Interesting you should say that.
It\'s true. Poems, thoughts. They evolve.
June 9th, 2022 01:30
Blueledge said:
Interesting you should say that.
It\'s true. Poems, thoughts. They evolve.
June 9th, 2022 01:30
gems inside
orchidee said:
My - and Goldfinch\'s - middle name is \'Fossil\'. We\'re very old, so we say. Millions of years old, in fact. We saw the dinosaurs in person.
You very old? Someone got called \'fossil\' because they would not use e-mail. lol.
June 9th, 2022 01:30
orchidee said:
My - and Goldfinch\'s - middle name is \'Fossil\'. We\'re very old, so we say. Millions of years old, in fact. We saw the dinosaurs in person.
You very old? Someone got called \'fossil\' because they would not use e-mail. lol.
June 9th, 2022 01:30
here
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
I\'m none the wiser that me singing lessons have not improved. I fool myself that they have! lol.
Teef OK? (not that nonsense again. lol).
June 7th, 2022 08:02
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
I\'m none the wiser that me singing lessons have not improved. I fool myself that they have! lol.
Teef OK? (not that nonsense again. lol).
June 7th, 2022 08:02
here
arqios said:
Thanks, L.B. This is a summing up of sorts in poetry or a life dedicated to the art.
June 7th, 2022 05:25
arqios said:
Thanks, L.B. This is a summing up of sorts in poetry or a life dedicated to the art.
June 7th, 2022 05:25
here
L. B. Mek said:
in drips, they filter
realisations of gleaned, awareness
to that accumulating wisdom
in our lives
awaiting, our readiness
to be utilised, in those choices
that carve out life\'s
most cherished mementos...
(simply beautiful, dear Poet
I so appreciate that gentleness
in your tonality)
June 7th, 2022 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
in drips, they filter
realisations of gleaned, awareness
to that accumulating wisdom
in our lives
awaiting, our readiness
to be utilised, in those choices
that carve out life\'s
most cherished mementos...
(simply beautiful, dear Poet
I so appreciate that gentleness
in your tonality)
June 7th, 2022 05:12
Midnight Rendezvous
L. B. Mek said:
\'classis imagery of antiquity
utilised
within modernity\'s concepts
empowered
to shed clarifying waters
on life\'s, stormy oceans..
this that profound, talent
of a Poet in love, with poesy\'s
cyclical capacity
to thread, that same fight
to awaken: Awareness
one Inked generation
after, another\'s inked
Volition...\'
(so well realised
and executed, with such practised
skill
I laud your poetic ambition)
I read and learn, dear Poet
June 6th, 2022 06:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'classis imagery of antiquity
utilised
within modernity\'s concepts
empowered
to shed clarifying waters
on life\'s, stormy oceans..
this that profound, talent
of a Poet in love, with poesy\'s
cyclical capacity
to thread, that same fight
to awaken: Awareness
one Inked generation
after, another\'s inked
Volition...\'
(so well realised
and executed, with such practised
skill
I laud your poetic ambition)
I read and learn, dear Poet
June 6th, 2022 06:36
Midnight Rendezvous
orchidee said:
Ooohh, I dunno! What\'s all these goings-on at midnight? I gotta get to bed by oh, 6.30pm, for me beauty sleep! They say I\'m ugly without it! heehee.
Or - Oh yes, I fancy a bit of that. Sounds good to me!
i can\'t decide. lol.
June 6th, 2022 03:48
orchidee said:
Ooohh, I dunno! What\'s all these goings-on at midnight? I gotta get to bed by oh, 6.30pm, for me beauty sleep! They say I\'m ugly without it! heehee.
Or - Oh yes, I fancy a bit of that. Sounds good to me!
i can\'t decide. lol.
June 6th, 2022 03:48
if we had wings to fly
Bella Shepard said:
Dreams and goals, no matter how large or small, what would we be without them? So well written!
June 5th, 2022 12:52
Bella Shepard said:
Dreams and goals, no matter how large or small, what would we be without them? So well written!
June 5th, 2022 12:52
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