Comments received on poems by arqios
memorial garden
Neville said:
white noise will send you round the bend if you aint careful .. but then again, so can manicured lawns ..
February 2nd, 2023 05:03
Neville said:
white noise will send you round the bend if you aint careful .. but then again, so can manicured lawns ..
February 2nd, 2023 05:03
flowershop blather
orchidee said:
Liking alliterations, etc.
No use me banging me head against a brick wall - out with it, says Fido, you\'ve hardly the foggiest what this is about!\' lol.
You lost me after \'emeralds\'. Doh!
February 1st, 2023 08:27
orchidee said:
Liking alliterations, etc.
No use me banging me head against a brick wall - out with it, says Fido, you\'ve hardly the foggiest what this is about!\' lol.
You lost me after \'emeralds\'. Doh!
February 1st, 2023 08:27
flowershop blather
sorenbarrett said:
Emeralds caught my eye in that it is my birthstone. The idea that it stands for wit, eloquence, and foresight was a nice way to begin this poem. It caught me off guard with September since it is usually May but then I thought wpring to fall there is green. I loved \"mists of myth bloom\" \"a citadel in recluse\" and I thought of Emerald City and the poppyfields bringing on dreams. The last two lines were genious \"wordless tail of heart dried before its start\" So many emotions that pass so quickly they dry before they start. Lovely
February 1st, 2023 07:37
sorenbarrett said:
Emeralds caught my eye in that it is my birthstone. The idea that it stands for wit, eloquence, and foresight was a nice way to begin this poem. It caught me off guard with September since it is usually May but then I thought wpring to fall there is green. I loved \"mists of myth bloom\" \"a citadel in recluse\" and I thought of Emerald City and the poppyfields bringing on dreams. The last two lines were genious \"wordless tail of heart dried before its start\" So many emotions that pass so quickly they dry before they start. Lovely
February 1st, 2023 07:37
trinketry
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem puts me in mind of a spell being cast, so enjoyed it. And the accompanying graphic is great, the music so cat-like, especially at the end.
January 31st, 2023 15:12
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem puts me in mind of a spell being cast, so enjoyed it. And the accompanying graphic is great, the music so cat-like, especially at the end.
January 31st, 2023 15:12
not to be messed with
sorenbarrett said:
This is thought provoking and maybe shouldn\'t be. The chesire cat and I think of Lewis Carrol, then the cat reminds me of Hemmingway and his six toed cats, the upside down smile and things are reversed. The lady from down under, Australia? Is it the rhyme? Freshly frayed? Usually frays take a long time. Browned Gown? How do you brown a gown? In the oven of course. See my poor mind has just gone down a rabbit hole.
January 30th, 2023 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
This is thought provoking and maybe shouldn\'t be. The chesire cat and I think of Lewis Carrol, then the cat reminds me of Hemmingway and his six toed cats, the upside down smile and things are reversed. The lady from down under, Australia? Is it the rhyme? Freshly frayed? Usually frays take a long time. Browned Gown? How do you brown a gown? In the oven of course. See my poor mind has just gone down a rabbit hole.
January 30th, 2023 05:28
not to be messed with
L. B. Mek said:
loved this, dear Poet
took me back to T.S. Eliot
in style
and especially a few lines
from his \'Rhapsody on a Windy Night\':
\'The street lamp said, \'Regard that woman
Who hesitates towards you in the light of the door
Which opens on her like a grin.
You see the border of her dress
Is torn and stained with sand,
And you see the corner of her eye
Twists like a crooked pin.\'
(and you know he liked his cats as well
lol)
January 30th, 2023 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
loved this, dear Poet
took me back to T.S. Eliot
in style
and especially a few lines
from his \'Rhapsody on a Windy Night\':
\'The street lamp said, \'Regard that woman
Who hesitates towards you in the light of the door
Which opens on her like a grin.
You see the border of her dress
Is torn and stained with sand,
And you see the corner of her eye
Twists like a crooked pin.\'
(and you know he liked his cats as well
lol)
January 30th, 2023 05:14
not to be messed with
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
One of our two cats rolls over on the ground! She is playing really, but we are careful not to get scratched.
Our other big Tom cat rolls over a bit too, but can\'t be bothered with our fussing sometimes. lol.
January 30th, 2023 04:04
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
One of our two cats rolls over on the ground! She is playing really, but we are careful not to get scratched.
Our other big Tom cat rolls over a bit too, but can\'t be bothered with our fussing sometimes. lol.
January 30th, 2023 04:04
ever closer
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet this is so incredibly creative. Is it indeed your voice that I hear reading this poem? If so, I love hearing these wonderful words spoken from the mouth of the creator. You have captured so well our subconscious surrender to the rumblings of the world, as they become the background noise of life. This truly is such a fav!
January 29th, 2023 16:20
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet this is so incredibly creative. Is it indeed your voice that I hear reading this poem? If so, I love hearing these wonderful words spoken from the mouth of the creator. You have captured so well our subconscious surrender to the rumblings of the world, as they become the background noise of life. This truly is such a fav!
January 29th, 2023 16:20
Why do we trust in you?
Neville said:
sadly, there are far too many sullied once pristine sheets .. well poemed sir ........................ Neville
January 28th, 2023 13:29
Neville said:
sadly, there are far too many sullied once pristine sheets .. well poemed sir ........................ Neville
January 28th, 2023 13:29
Why do we trust in you?
Bella Shepard said:
So relevant and succinctly versed dear poet. You\'ve hit the proverbial nail on the head. How long ago was it that we buried trust? I don\'t remember being invited to the funeral. A great write!
January 28th, 2023 11:48
Bella Shepard said:
So relevant and succinctly versed dear poet. You\'ve hit the proverbial nail on the head. How long ago was it that we buried trust? I don\'t remember being invited to the funeral. A great write!
January 28th, 2023 11:48
Why do we trust in you?
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Why do I trust in KP? I don\'t, not for one second! lol.
January 28th, 2023 11:34
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Why do I trust in KP? I don\'t, not for one second! lol.
January 28th, 2023 11:34
commit to pen
L. B. Mek said:
\'with you ever my stay
and all that you are
steady me along the way\'
nuanced wisdom, distilled
a great write, dear Poet
January 23rd, 2023 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
\'with you ever my stay
and all that you are
steady me along the way\'
nuanced wisdom, distilled
a great write, dear Poet
January 23rd, 2023 04:35
commit to pen
orchidee said:
OK I will stay! You won\'t like it though, as I\'m gonna sing! Penance indeed.
January 22nd, 2023 07:08
orchidee said:
OK I will stay! You won\'t like it though, as I\'m gonna sing! Penance indeed.
January 22nd, 2023 07:08
fee free
Bella Shepard said:
You capture the freedom to be in such beautiful metaphor in this poem. How often I have a watched birds flying and wished that I could do the same.
January 20th, 2023 14:11
Bella Shepard said:
You capture the freedom to be in such beautiful metaphor in this poem. How often I have a watched birds flying and wished that I could do the same.
January 20th, 2023 14:11
fee free
L. B. Mek said:
costless wisdom
with no signup premium, I wonder
how long
before our very own words
come at a price, to formulate
and ponder?
(really related to the tone of your poetic voice
thanks for sharing dear poet)
January 20th, 2023 06:59
L. B. Mek said:
costless wisdom
with no signup premium, I wonder
how long
before our very own words
come at a price, to formulate
and ponder?
(really related to the tone of your poetic voice
thanks for sharing dear poet)
January 20th, 2023 06:59
fee free
orchidee said:
A fine flowing poem about a feathered friend flying free with no fee.
That\'\'s not easy to say without me teef (remember teef = teeth?! lol).
January 20th, 2023 03:32
orchidee said:
A fine flowing poem about a feathered friend flying free with no fee.
That\'\'s not easy to say without me teef (remember teef = teeth?! lol).
January 20th, 2023 03:32
once
Bella Shepard said:
What those \"once\" moments lead to is often not within our power to see. But hindsight will bring them into focus and perhaps see clearly why we took that road. Such a great write dear friend, each stanza ,a work of precision and beauty.
January 18th, 2023 12:53
Bella Shepard said:
What those \"once\" moments lead to is often not within our power to see. But hindsight will bring them into focus and perhaps see clearly why we took that road. Such a great write dear friend, each stanza ,a work of precision and beauty.
January 18th, 2023 12:53
once
Rocky Lagou said:
This poem is powerfully deep. It feels like a journey of a love tale through all the phases. \"Curse or blessing\" truly encapsulates the fearful unpredictability of relationships. Thank you for this poem dear poet.
January 18th, 2023 09:02
Rocky Lagou said:
This poem is powerfully deep. It feels like a journey of a love tale through all the phases. \"Curse or blessing\" truly encapsulates the fearful unpredictability of relationships. Thank you for this poem dear poet.
January 18th, 2023 09:02
once
orchidee said:
Once I looked in here - or maybe twice - to read this fine poem!
January 18th, 2023 08:43
orchidee said:
Once I looked in here - or maybe twice - to read this fine poem!
January 18th, 2023 08:43
once
Mr. Not said:
Your sentences are always so beautifully put together. There is always that \"once\". No matter, there will aways be a \"once\" to tell about, some of them you hold closer than others, but they all make you you.
January 18th, 2023 08:14
Mr. Not said:
Your sentences are always so beautifully put together. There is always that \"once\". No matter, there will aways be a \"once\" to tell about, some of them you hold closer than others, but they all make you you.
January 18th, 2023 08:14
once
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh those once experienced moments we thought would last forever and so clearly spelt out here that it took my mind way back to exchanges bathed with anticipation - -- once - -- great read and very relatable
January 18th, 2023 06:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh those once experienced moments we thought would last forever and so clearly spelt out here that it took my mind way back to exchanges bathed with anticipation - -- once - -- great read and very relatable
January 18th, 2023 06:25
CBD
orchidee said:
A good write CB.
CBD - not CBT? Cognitive Behavioural Therapy, whatever that is when it\'s \'at home\'. lol.
January 14th, 2023 09:13
orchidee said:
A good write CB.
CBD - not CBT? Cognitive Behavioural Therapy, whatever that is when it\'s \'at home\'. lol.
January 14th, 2023 09:13
pygmalean ivory
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely would appear to be on it\'s way again, Rik..... Who thought civilization could only evolve, improve itself??
January 14th, 2023 00:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely would appear to be on it\'s way again, Rik..... Who thought civilization could only evolve, improve itself??
January 14th, 2023 00:45
pygmalean ivory
Bella Shepard said:
All too familiar these days. I think of survivors, who thought they would never see this again. What heartache that another generation should experience the unthinkable. Very well put my friend.
January 13th, 2023 09:39
Bella Shepard said:
All too familiar these days. I think of survivors, who thought they would never see this again. What heartache that another generation should experience the unthinkable. Very well put my friend.
January 13th, 2023 09:39
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