Comments received on poems by arqios
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sorenbarrett said:
The mind can make time stand still for good or bad. Beautifully written and with many thoughts to be processed.
September 27th, 2022 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
The mind can make time stand still for good or bad. Beautifully written and with many thoughts to be processed.
September 27th, 2022 13:23
darkside bright
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is always there for us all cb.
Andy
September 27th, 2022 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is always there for us all cb.
Andy
September 27th, 2022 01:48
darkside bright
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem captures so exquisitely the rush of life that seems so pervasive in our world today. I think it\'s so nice just to linger in those cooling embers and savor. Such a lovely write my friend.
September 26th, 2022 13:35
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem captures so exquisitely the rush of life that seems so pervasive in our world today. I think it\'s so nice just to linger in those cooling embers and savor. Such a lovely write my friend.
September 26th, 2022 13:35
deep water treading
Goldfinch60 said:
If I was in the water I would drown cb.
Andy
September 26th, 2022 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
If I was in the water I would drown cb.
Andy
September 26th, 2022 00:51
deep water treading
orchidee said:
Cooee! Is it painful being \'cut orf\' for nearly 2 weeks? Depends what\'s cut orf I suppose. swoon! lol.
September 25th, 2022 13:00
orchidee said:
Cooee! Is it painful being \'cut orf\' for nearly 2 weeks? Depends what\'s cut orf I suppose. swoon! lol.
September 25th, 2022 13:00
come together a-poeting
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure we will all come together a-poeting one day.
Andy
September 25th, 2022 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure we will all come together a-poeting one day.
Andy
September 25th, 2022 01:23
come together a-poeting
Neville said:
What a perfectly delightful sentiment poemed .. and subsequently enjoyed in its entirety ................. Neville
September 24th, 2022 04:48
Neville said:
What a perfectly delightful sentiment poemed .. and subsequently enjoyed in its entirety ................. Neville
September 24th, 2022 04:48
days of the living dead
Fay Slimm. said:
Heaviness has to be worded at some time my friend and your poetic honesty is not lost to the journeying mind of serious scribes as the process of any continued ascent is often most gruelling.
September 23rd, 2022 15:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Heaviness has to be worded at some time my friend and your poetic honesty is not lost to the journeying mind of serious scribes as the process of any continued ascent is often most gruelling.
September 23rd, 2022 15:42
hands off that snooze button!
sorenbarrett said:
This conjured up feelings long buried. I particularly liked \"release the soul\'s query how can one forgive what is forgotten\" A great line that gives pause.
September 23rd, 2022 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
This conjured up feelings long buried. I particularly liked \"release the soul\'s query how can one forgive what is forgotten\" A great line that gives pause.
September 23rd, 2022 07:08
Hey! You bit my sandwich!
Neville said:
liked by me despite the cryptic indentations contained therein :)
September 23rd, 2022 04:30
Neville said:
liked by me despite the cryptic indentations contained therein :)
September 23rd, 2022 04:30
Ballad of Billy McGee
Doggerel Dave said:
Not such an older time, I would think; not enjoyable other than as a vivid portrait of of a shit situation, Rik
September 22nd, 2022 18:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Not such an older time, I would think; not enjoyable other than as a vivid portrait of of a shit situation, Rik
September 22nd, 2022 18:32
hands off that snooze button!
Doggerel Dave said:
Never thought I\'d do this - just faved it without commentary....
September 22nd, 2022 18:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Never thought I\'d do this - just faved it without commentary....
September 22nd, 2022 18:14
hands off that snooze button!
Tony Grannell said:
A profound wakeup call in the true art of poetry and a wonderful command of the English language. The couplets bring it all together to form an unremitting verse into the final awakning and thus - the light. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
September 22nd, 2022 12:21
Tony Grannell said:
A profound wakeup call in the true art of poetry and a wonderful command of the English language. The couplets bring it all together to form an unremitting verse into the final awakning and thus - the light. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
September 22nd, 2022 12:21
hands off that snooze button!
Fay Slimm. said:
Inspiringly good and alive with empowerment these fine linguistic invites. This goes into my faves.
September 22nd, 2022 07:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Inspiringly good and alive with empowerment these fine linguistic invites. This goes into my faves.
September 22nd, 2022 07:45
live fed matins
Bella Shepard said:
I would say dear friend, take it where you can get, even if it\'s on a live feed. It\'s real, it\'s there, and you can almost reach out and touch it in your thoughts. Thank you for sharing all of it.
September 20th, 2022 10:18
Bella Shepard said:
I would say dear friend, take it where you can get, even if it\'s on a live feed. It\'s real, it\'s there, and you can almost reach out and touch it in your thoughts. Thank you for sharing all of it.
September 20th, 2022 10:18
live fed matins
Doggerel Dave said:
Irony - via live screen.
Got it - Not the real thing?
Dunno where you live, but there has to be some not far away....
September 20th, 2022 07:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Irony - via live screen.
Got it - Not the real thing?
Dunno where you live, but there has to be some not far away....
September 20th, 2022 07:35
Hey! You bit my sandwich!
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - Having taken all factors into consideration, I think you might just conceivably be right......................
September 18th, 2022 19:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - Having taken all factors into consideration, I think you might just conceivably be right......................
September 18th, 2022 19:02
is it not your day?
Doggerel Dave said:
I think I\'d file that under \'grunge\' - and non the worse for that . Definitely has echoes of my past....
September 17th, 2022 07:06
Doggerel Dave said:
I think I\'d file that under \'grunge\' - and non the worse for that . Definitely has echoes of my past....
September 17th, 2022 07:06
the insolent bystander
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll vote for the grey areas anytime - thanks.
September 17th, 2022 07:00
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll vote for the grey areas anytime - thanks.
September 17th, 2022 07:00
thanks for the applause
Doggerel Dave said:
At last! one I can halfway comprehend! Permission to amend to some of my crap as a token of gratitude?
September 17th, 2022 06:54
Doggerel Dave said:
At last! one I can halfway comprehend! Permission to amend to some of my crap as a token of gratitude?
September 17th, 2022 06:54
re(ad)writing poetry
sorenbarrett said:
This struck me in a long-buried place. Long before I started writing poetry, I had a muse for reading. I particularly liked the imagery of the first stanza.
September 17th, 2022 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
This struck me in a long-buried place. Long before I started writing poetry, I had a muse for reading. I particularly liked the imagery of the first stanza.
September 17th, 2022 06:49
impervious impermeability
Bella Shepard said:
To see, yet not to attend and comprehend, the ultimate blind spot. Open the mind and you open endless possibilities. This is what I take away from this well penned verse. Thank you my friend!
September 15th, 2022 10:52
Bella Shepard said:
To see, yet not to attend and comprehend, the ultimate blind spot. Open the mind and you open endless possibilities. This is what I take away from this well penned verse. Thank you my friend!
September 15th, 2022 10:52
impervious impermeability
sorenbarrett said:
Perceptive from eyes that do not see. I liked this poem very much, it strikes home.
September 15th, 2022 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
Perceptive from eyes that do not see. I liked this poem very much, it strikes home.
September 15th, 2022 09:02
would-be people\'s queen
orchidee said:
A fine write and tribute CB. Those gone, those left behind........
September 12th, 2022 02:07
orchidee said:
A fine write and tribute CB. Those gone, those left behind........
September 12th, 2022 02:07
non-elegy
Bella Shepard said:
A wonderfully fitting write my dear poet, a legacy that will continue to unfold for years to come.
September 9th, 2022 14:21
Bella Shepard said:
A wonderfully fitting write my dear poet, a legacy that will continue to unfold for years to come.
September 9th, 2022 14:21
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