Comments received on poems by arqios
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orchidee said:
Good write CB.
The only empty book anyone needs is \'How to sing like Orchi - in 7,483 lessons\' or summat like that number! lol.
November 6th, 2022 09:23
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
The only empty book anyone needs is \'How to sing like Orchi - in 7,483 lessons\' or summat like that number! lol.
November 6th, 2022 09:23
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sorenbarrett said:
Judging a book by its cover when there is no book seems to be the norm now days. Glitz and gloss, are marketing tools to sell more books, films, news and even people who as slaves to what they value sell themselves through lies and false presentations to impress others. People are hollow with only a cover. This is full of deep meaning which I may have missed principle parts. To me it all falls back on a lack of integrity. Well expressed
November 6th, 2022 09:12
sorenbarrett said:
Judging a book by its cover when there is no book seems to be the norm now days. Glitz and gloss, are marketing tools to sell more books, films, news and even people who as slaves to what they value sell themselves through lies and false presentations to impress others. People are hollow with only a cover. This is full of deep meaning which I may have missed principle parts. To me it all falls back on a lack of integrity. Well expressed
November 6th, 2022 09:12
minding your portals
sorenbarrett said:
This piece has a hypnotic beat that like its message takes charge of the mind and without thought leads it onward to the desired end. A more than human need to impress. Very nice
November 5th, 2022 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
This piece has a hypnotic beat that like its message takes charge of the mind and without thought leads it onward to the desired end. A more than human need to impress. Very nice
November 5th, 2022 06:58
seasonalities
sorenbarrett said:
Many think of Christmas when talking of seasons, I no. I hear these words applying to all the seasons of life itself. Where do the winds of fate take us through these seasons? They have not left me with much hair to flow. Great poem.
November 4th, 2022 21:32
sorenbarrett said:
Many think of Christmas when talking of seasons, I no. I hear these words applying to all the seasons of life itself. Where do the winds of fate take us through these seasons? They have not left me with much hair to flow. Great poem.
November 4th, 2022 21:32
minding your portals
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful flow, a beguiling read
if you will
lol
thank you, kind poet
November 4th, 2022 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful flow, a beguiling read
if you will
lol
thank you, kind poet
November 4th, 2022 04:00
seasonalities
orchidee said:
A Ch..... Carol. Oh, let\'s mention the word now - Christmas!
November 4th, 2022 03:31
orchidee said:
A Ch..... Carol. Oh, let\'s mention the word now - Christmas!
November 4th, 2022 03:31
minding your portals
Doggerel Dave said:
I need an elevation from the mundane occasionally. Thanks for that - neatly put, Rik.
November 3rd, 2022 17:44
Doggerel Dave said:
I need an elevation from the mundane occasionally. Thanks for that - neatly put, Rik.
November 3rd, 2022 17:44
minding your portals
Bella Shepard said:
I love the version of \"Count Your Blessings\" you chose, it compliments this very poem well. We are more fortunate than we realize, each day, in every way. And sometimes we just need to feel that we deserve it. Sweet and to the point, good write my friend!
November 3rd, 2022 14:40
Bella Shepard said:
I love the version of \"Count Your Blessings\" you chose, it compliments this very poem well. We are more fortunate than we realize, each day, in every way. And sometimes we just need to feel that we deserve it. Sweet and to the point, good write my friend!
November 3rd, 2022 14:40
with you
Doggerel Dave said:
\"not\"? Otherwise, I do empathise and accept your reasoning up to a point....
November 2nd, 2022 18:17
Doggerel Dave said:
\"not\"? Otherwise, I do empathise and accept your reasoning up to a point....
November 2nd, 2022 18:17
with you
Doggerel Dave said:
This is not the first time you have spruiked autumn recently, Rik..... a little disoriented in time and space?
As someone who, after all this time, still attempts to come to terms with a reversal of the seasons, I find that you don\'t help.
However, as a tribute to those who are in the midst of autumn, it\'s rich nostalgia should engage.
November 2nd, 2022 18:02
Doggerel Dave said:
This is not the first time you have spruiked autumn recently, Rik..... a little disoriented in time and space?
As someone who, after all this time, still attempts to come to terms with a reversal of the seasons, I find that you don\'t help.
However, as a tribute to those who are in the midst of autumn, it\'s rich nostalgia should engage.
November 2nd, 2022 18:02
with you
Bella Shepard said:
As soon as I started the music I knew that this one would sweep me away. A favorite musical piece accompanies this gorgeous poem. How thoughts, over time grow fainter, and yet sweetly linger. This is such a fav dear poet!
November 2nd, 2022 13:20
Bella Shepard said:
As soon as I started the music I knew that this one would sweep me away. A favorite musical piece accompanies this gorgeous poem. How thoughts, over time grow fainter, and yet sweetly linger. This is such a fav dear poet!
November 2nd, 2022 13:20
with you
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful longing feeling accompanies this poem. It seems somehow wistful and I can feel the distancing as the poem reaches its end. I loved the first two lines \"My thoughts are with you in the scattering of the leaves\"
November 2nd, 2022 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful longing feeling accompanies this poem. It seems somehow wistful and I can feel the distancing as the poem reaches its end. I loved the first two lines \"My thoughts are with you in the scattering of the leaves\"
November 2nd, 2022 09:41
with you
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
I\'m with ya, sort of, in the orchilenge. Not that I always write one poem per day, even if I post one per day.
November 2nd, 2022 03:08
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
I\'m with ya, sort of, in the orchilenge. Not that I always write one poem per day, even if I post one per day.
November 2nd, 2022 03:08
falling leaves
Bella Shepard said:
You touch on a season dear to my heart, along with one of my favorite singers. Thank you dear friend, I just love this!
November 1st, 2022 16:41
Bella Shepard said:
You touch on a season dear to my heart, along with one of my favorite singers. Thank you dear friend, I just love this!
November 1st, 2022 16:41
falling leaves
Doggerel Dave said:
I like this, Rik. Very easy to evoke parallels with where I am in my jolly old life cycle....
And thanks for silky voiced Nat King Cole (plus a slightly over rich video)
November 1st, 2022 06:04
Doggerel Dave said:
I like this, Rik. Very easy to evoke parallels with where I am in my jolly old life cycle....
And thanks for silky voiced Nat King Cole (plus a slightly over rich video)
November 1st, 2022 06:04
falling leaves
orchidee said:
I\'m not keeping to plan - 1, 2, or 3 poems some days, and none on some other days. Doh!
November 1st, 2022 03:02
orchidee said:
I\'m not keeping to plan - 1, 2, or 3 poems some days, and none on some other days. Doh!
November 1st, 2022 03:02
main architect
sorenbarrett said:
This is what I once believed and still hold some tendency toward. I would still argue that beauty is in the eye of the beholder although not technically poetry emotion is a key element for me.
October 31st, 2022 13:50
sorenbarrett said:
This is what I once believed and still hold some tendency toward. I would still argue that beauty is in the eye of the beholder although not technically poetry emotion is a key element for me.
October 31st, 2022 13:50
end of the month
L. B. Mek said:
Congratulations dear Poet
Awesome news!
I\'ll be sure to get it, this has made my morning.
October 31st, 2022 07:24
L. B. Mek said:
Congratulations dear Poet
Awesome news!
I\'ll be sure to get it, this has made my morning.
October 31st, 2022 07:24
main architect
Goldfinch60 said:
It all depends on what you want to say and how you want to get your thoughts and feelings onto the paper Rik.
Andy
October 31st, 2022 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
It all depends on what you want to say and how you want to get your thoughts and feelings onto the paper Rik.
Andy
October 31st, 2022 02:51
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Doggerel Dave said:
Perhaps a direct link might help, Rik - at amazon I\'m not sure I\'m looking at the same product...
October 31st, 2022 01:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Perhaps a direct link might help, Rik - at amazon I\'m not sure I\'m looking at the same product...
October 31st, 2022 01:07
main architect
Bella Shepard said:
To rhyme or not to rhyme, that is the question? I say rhyme away my friend, I\'m loving it!
October 30th, 2022 14:08
Bella Shepard said:
To rhyme or not to rhyme, that is the question? I say rhyme away my friend, I\'m loving it!
October 30th, 2022 14:08
main architect
Neville said:
although tis all a matter of taste, it catches up on us all swooner or later :)
October 30th, 2022 11:04
Neville said:
although tis all a matter of taste, it catches up on us all swooner or later :)
October 30th, 2022 11:04
forgive me, pater
Fay Slimm. said:
I admire your metaphors on where truth hides to expose itself.
October 29th, 2022 05:58
Fay Slimm. said:
I admire your metaphors on where truth hides to expose itself.
October 29th, 2022 05:58
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