Comments received on poems by arqios
tarkovsky-esque
Goldfinch60 said:
May your home be full of wonder, joy and love arqios.
Andy
January 8th, 2025 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
May your home be full of wonder, joy and love arqios.
Andy
January 8th, 2025 02:59
tarkovsky-esque
Michael Edwards said:
Really flows thanks to the 575 format - not easy to write but an easy read.
January 8th, 2025 01:56
Michael Edwards said:
Really flows thanks to the 575 format - not easy to write but an easy read.
January 8th, 2025 01:56
tarkovsky-esque
Thad Wilk said:
A thought provoking
and evocative write!!
Feeling alone in a crowd
not a pretty sight! 😞
Thank you for sharing
a pleasure to recite!👏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 7th, 2025 21:18
Thad Wilk said:
A thought provoking
and evocative write!!
Feeling alone in a crowd
not a pretty sight! 😞
Thank you for sharing
a pleasure to recite!👏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 7th, 2025 21:18
A Seamstress\'s Courage
Dan Williams said:
Oh, there is always room for tragic, heroism maybe not so much. \"The scaffold, a dark spectre, looms ever closer\" covers a lot of ground. Nice.
January 7th, 2025 20:35
Dan Williams said:
Oh, there is always room for tragic, heroism maybe not so much. \"The scaffold, a dark spectre, looms ever closer\" covers a lot of ground. Nice.
January 7th, 2025 20:35
tarkovsky-esque
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds like something is missing. Beautifully done. 🌹
January 7th, 2025 16:46
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds like something is missing. Beautifully done. 🌹
January 7th, 2025 16:46
tarkovsky-esque
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"People together, alone.\" Reminds me of the Bon Jovi song, \"Living in Sin\", \"You can talk but still say nothing / You stay together but alone.\" Indeed. So very true. A powerful write my friend. 🙏❤️
January 7th, 2025 15:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"People together, alone.\" Reminds me of the Bon Jovi song, \"Living in Sin\", \"You can talk but still say nothing / You stay together but alone.\" Indeed. So very true. A powerful write my friend. 🙏❤️
January 7th, 2025 15:25
A Seamstress\'s Courage
Tom Dylan said:
You really capture the feel of Dickens. A fine write.
January 7th, 2025 08:49
Tom Dylan said:
You really capture the feel of Dickens. A fine write.
January 7th, 2025 08:49
tarkovsky-esque
Poetic Licence said:
It comes in many forms feeling on your own, individual isolation, an individual in a crowd, or even a group of people battling on their own, feeling the world has ignored them. Mor about todays mindset, only worry what`s on our doorstep and don`t look down the street enough. Enjoyed the thought provoking read
January 7th, 2025 08:24
Poetic Licence said:
It comes in many forms feeling on your own, individual isolation, an individual in a crowd, or even a group of people battling on their own, feeling the world has ignored them. Mor about todays mindset, only worry what`s on our doorstep and don`t look down the street enough. Enjoyed the thought provoking read
January 7th, 2025 08:24
tarkovsky-esque
sorenbarrett said:
Words to give thought.I particularly loved \"people together, alone\" so often true and in the deepest sense always true. A poem of increasing depth the more it is read
January 7th, 2025 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Words to give thought.I particularly loved \"people together, alone\" so often true and in the deepest sense always true. A poem of increasing depth the more it is read
January 7th, 2025 06:03
A Seamstress\'s Courage
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words argios and that passage:
\"Remember, our lives are more than this moment,
we endure in the hearts of those we leave behind.\"
is so meaningful.
Andy
January 7th, 2025 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words argios and that passage:
\"Remember, our lives are more than this moment,
we endure in the hearts of those we leave behind.\"
is so meaningful.
Andy
January 7th, 2025 02:10
A Seamstress\'s Courage
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Sharp and vivid imagery.
January 6th, 2025 19:51
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Sharp and vivid imagery.
January 6th, 2025 19:51
A Seamstress\'s Courage
Teddy.15 said:
Such wonderful imagery if not a bit gory 🤣, usually I dislike reading epics but this had me on the edge of my seat, yes a wonderful tale of courage and a shout out to Dickens no less, kudos. Brilliantly written. 🌹
January 6th, 2025 14:27
Teddy.15 said:
Such wonderful imagery if not a bit gory 🤣, usually I dislike reading epics but this had me on the edge of my seat, yes a wonderful tale of courage and a shout out to Dickens no less, kudos. Brilliantly written. 🌹
January 6th, 2025 14:27
A Seamstress\'s Courage
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching and
poignant poem
and story on the book
A Tale of Two Cities! 📖
Poetic perfection flows
throughout each
wonderfully woven
poetic line!! 🏆
Thanks for sharing!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 6th, 2025 10:55
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching and
poignant poem
and story on the book
A Tale of Two Cities! 📖
Poetic perfection flows
throughout each
wonderfully woven
poetic line!! 🏆
Thanks for sharing!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 6th, 2025 10:55
A Seamstress\'s Courage
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful rendering of Charles\' Dickens\'s \"A Tale of Two Cities\" and the haunting picture of the Reign of Terror it presents. Not too heavy for my tastes friend. Well done on this...for real! 🌹👏
January 6th, 2025 10:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful rendering of Charles\' Dickens\'s \"A Tale of Two Cities\" and the haunting picture of the Reign of Terror it presents. Not too heavy for my tastes friend. Well done on this...for real! 🌹👏
January 6th, 2025 10:32
A Seamstress\'s Courage
Poetic Licence said:
An Ode to a classic giant and one of their books, i had to read in English Lit at school, and it is a lovely classic piece of poetry you have written, Great read
January 6th, 2025 09:38
Poetic Licence said:
An Ode to a classic giant and one of their books, i had to read in English Lit at school, and it is a lovely classic piece of poetry you have written, Great read
January 6th, 2025 09:38
A Seamstress\'s Courage
Cassie58 said:
A Tale of Two Cities, Charles Dickens. Sydney Carton being the hero. Taking the place of his beloved’s husband. He also offered comfort to the seamstress before they both met their fate. What a book, what a celebration of English Literature and you have composed a very fine poem here, inspired by that classic. Well done arqios.
January 6th, 2025 08:32
Cassie58 said:
A Tale of Two Cities, Charles Dickens. Sydney Carton being the hero. Taking the place of his beloved’s husband. He also offered comfort to the seamstress before they both met their fate. What a book, what a celebration of English Literature and you have composed a very fine poem here, inspired by that classic. Well done arqios.
January 6th, 2025 08:32
A Seamstress\'s Courage
sorenbarrett said:
In this a hint of Dickens and a tale of two cities. Heroism is always inspirational and at the heart of many a poem. Well told and in poetic story form. Nicely done my friend
January 6th, 2025 08:03
sorenbarrett said:
In this a hint of Dickens and a tale of two cities. Heroism is always inspirational and at the heart of many a poem. Well told and in poetic story form. Nicely done my friend
January 6th, 2025 08:03
here and there
Goldfinch60 said:
I am now passed halfway through my seventh decade arqios and am still here living a wonderful life.
Andy
January 6th, 2025 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
I am now passed halfway through my seventh decade arqios and am still here living a wonderful life.
Andy
January 6th, 2025 02:25
here and there
Kevin Hulme said:
Einstein said ‘ I don’t think of the future, I’ll happen soon enough’.
I’m more or less the same , Without the Mad Hair.
As always your Poems are very
‘Deep’ and full of Meaning.
January 5th, 2025 20:52
Kevin Hulme said:
Einstein said ‘ I don’t think of the future, I’ll happen soon enough’.
I’m more or less the same , Without the Mad Hair.
As always your Poems are very
‘Deep’ and full of Meaning.
January 5th, 2025 20:52
read to your satisfaction
Kevin Hulme said:
As Emily Dickinson said, ‘There is no frigate like a book to take us lands away’.
Your words became a bit ‘Hypnotic’ as I went along, telling me ‘Read a Book’.
Which is one of my Loves.
Just finished ‘A Christmas Carol’, I like to read it every December .
A unique way to express Reading in a Poem. Nice One.
January 5th, 2025 10:58
Kevin Hulme said:
As Emily Dickinson said, ‘There is no frigate like a book to take us lands away’.
Your words became a bit ‘Hypnotic’ as I went along, telling me ‘Read a Book’.
Which is one of my Loves.
Just finished ‘A Christmas Carol’, I like to read it every December .
A unique way to express Reading in a Poem. Nice One.
January 5th, 2025 10:58
here and there
rebellion_in_sanity said:
With age comes wisdom. Perhaps one of the wisdoms is to live in the present. The numbers do not matter. The poem gave me a feeling of being carefree but with grace. Really enjoyed it
January 5th, 2025 09:26
rebellion_in_sanity said:
With age comes wisdom. Perhaps one of the wisdoms is to live in the present. The numbers do not matter. The poem gave me a feeling of being carefree but with grace. Really enjoyed it
January 5th, 2025 09:26
here and there
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m so very deeply sorry for your loss my mother was 64 my own brother was just 25 sometimes I write about it, you do well in your wisdom and advice in my case I didn\'t get to say goodbye to either of my special people, I guess we can call it living without the very thought that it would be the last time, it happens every time anyone says goodbye, and we should all be grateful that we have this life in the first place. sending love and hugs 🌹
January 5th, 2025 09:01
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m so very deeply sorry for your loss my mother was 64 my own brother was just 25 sometimes I write about it, you do well in your wisdom and advice in my case I didn\'t get to say goodbye to either of my special people, I guess we can call it living without the very thought that it would be the last time, it happens every time anyone says goodbye, and we should all be grateful that we have this life in the first place. sending love and hugs 🌹
January 5th, 2025 09:01
here and there
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...I remember when youth drug...now time seems non-existent! LOL! Either way, it is the journey we are on and I find myself embracing it, removing my foot off of the gas or breaks and coasting! LOL! Of course, there are those extreme grade uphills and downhills! But hey, that\'s life! Wonderful write, my dear friend! Lots to think about. 🌹👏
January 5th, 2025 08:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...I remember when youth drug...now time seems non-existent! LOL! Either way, it is the journey we are on and I find myself embracing it, removing my foot off of the gas or breaks and coasting! LOL! Of course, there are those extreme grade uphills and downhills! But hey, that\'s life! Wonderful write, my dear friend! Lots to think about. 🌹👏
January 5th, 2025 08:05
here and there
Cassie58 said:
I am surrounded by young people. I wouldn’t want to go back, but neither do I want to fast forward. I no longer celebrate birthdays. Age is irrelevant. My inner child is still very much present. I have lost so many loved ones before their time, that I consider myself fortunate. The wrinkles, don’t bother me much, they tell me I have lived, my granddaughter helps choose my clothes, I try very much to live in the moment but need to work on it more. I don’t feel any different than I did decades ago. I am content with what I have got. Your poem arqios, made me take stock. We all need to do that from time to time to truly appreciate our blessings.
January 5th, 2025 06:38
Cassie58 said:
I am surrounded by young people. I wouldn’t want to go back, but neither do I want to fast forward. I no longer celebrate birthdays. Age is irrelevant. My inner child is still very much present. I have lost so many loved ones before their time, that I consider myself fortunate. The wrinkles, don’t bother me much, they tell me I have lived, my granddaughter helps choose my clothes, I try very much to live in the moment but need to work on it more. I don’t feel any different than I did decades ago. I am content with what I have got. Your poem arqios, made me take stock. We all need to do that from time to time to truly appreciate our blessings.
January 5th, 2025 06:38
here and there
Poetic Licence said:
Gives me a sense of some one roaming free and not being restricted by the confines of time, another enjoyable read.
January 5th, 2025 05:08
Poetic Licence said:
Gives me a sense of some one roaming free and not being restricted by the confines of time, another enjoyable read.
January 5th, 2025 05:08
here and there
sorenbarrett said:
This poem and principally its title left a feeling of care free. I live in the moment and so to me a decade is only seen retrospectively and it seems that it was only yesterday. A intriguing poem Cryptic
January 5th, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
This poem and principally its title left a feeling of care free. I live in the moment and so to me a decade is only seen retrospectively and it seems that it was only yesterday. A intriguing poem Cryptic
January 5th, 2025 05:03
here and there
rin said:
For example, I can see a future in which everyone realizes that nuclear waste is inappropriate for final disposal sites and dumps it in the ocean, but will I find like-minded people?
January 5th, 2025 04:57
rin said:
For example, I can see a future in which everyone realizes that nuclear waste is inappropriate for final disposal sites and dumps it in the ocean, but will I find like-minded people?
January 5th, 2025 04:57
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