Comments received on poems by arqios



‘bear pottery’
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

March 3rd, 2025 10:17

‘bear pottery’
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Yay! Springtime...this bear cannot wait! Much enjoyed my friend! 🌹👏

March 3rd, 2025 09:08

‘bear pottery’
arqios said:

Bad news bears like an elephant in a chinaware shoppe 🐘 🐻🫖🍽🫗

March 3rd, 2025 06:25

‘bear pottery’
Poetic Licence said:

I think there could be a market for that, enjoyed the read

March 3rd, 2025 05:55

‘bear pottery’
sorenbarrett said:

It does make one wonder. The picture fits the occasion and after all what else is a bear going to do while waiting for salmon?

March 3rd, 2025 04:46

‘bear pottery’
orchidee said:

Good write A.

March 3rd, 2025 03:26

‘bear pottery’
Salvia.S said:

The concept of bear pottery is incredibly unique. Enjoyed the read.

March 3rd, 2025 03:03

‘bear pottery’
Mutley Ravishes said:

Well, I guess it takes one\'s mind off of salmon?!

March 3rd, 2025 02:24

Eclipse
David Wakeling said:

Always a joy to read your poems and comments.

March 2nd, 2025 17:41

Eclipse
Cassie58 said:

That is a long time to stay away. I have had breaks of a few weeks, but I don’t think I could contemplate such a separation. I’m so pleased you are back to share your poetry and reviews with us arqios.

March 2nd, 2025 17:09

Castle Keep
Cassie58 said:

So much learned by those sandcastles when we were children. Life long lessons taught. Fabulous metaphor and great imagery here arqios. Lovely.

March 2nd, 2025 17:03

Eclipse
Thomas W Case said:

I\'m glad you are here.

March 2nd, 2025 15:31

Eclipse
Cheeky Missy said:

Hmm. I stayed too busy and seemingly aloof for dunno how many years, until my present reality and a chance comment here tempted me out of obscurity. Since then there\'s nothing like the tantalizing camaraderie of these forums, is there?! Beautifully rendered with superb intrigue, excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

March 2nd, 2025 12:19

Eclipse
Neville said:



Absence does indeed make the heart grow fonder doesn\'t it .. Neville

March 2nd, 2025 11:43

Eclipse
arqios said:

Your voices have been precious and continue to resound as this journey continues… thanks for the goodness you have shown 🙏🏻🕊

March 2nd, 2025 08:22

Eclipse
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Yes. I hear you hear. Not sure when your hiatus was. I started on DarkPoetry.com, which despite its name, was not that good of a fit for me. It wasn\'t until 2017 that I felt brave enough to give online poetry sharing another try. I shared a some between then and 2024...however, for a whole host of reasons, 2024 woke up the sleeping poet and he\'s back! But this is not about me, now is it? I am certainly glad that both of our hiatuses came to an end so we could meet the hell up here and get to know each other! As you can see, I relate to this poem. 🤣 It gets a fave. Well done, poet and friend! 🌹👏

March 2nd, 2025 07:09

Eclipse
Poetic Licence said:

I am a nubie and beginner on here so I cannot comment on before, but i have enjoyed reading your work, don\'t always understand straight away but that\'s what i like, sometimes to have too think, and I look forward to reading many more

March 2nd, 2025 05:35

Eclipse
sorenbarrett said:

Your voice is always welcome and your poetry enjoyed. Memories are never the same as the real thing.

March 2nd, 2025 04:25

Eclipse
cellinic said:

Rather serious and sad

March 2nd, 2025 04:03

Eclipse
Goldfinch60 said:

You must stay here arqios we all look forward to your words.

Andy

March 2nd, 2025 02:57

Castle Keep
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words arqios.

Andy

March 2nd, 2025 02:47

Castle Keep
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 1st, 2025 10:53

untitled 575 ( what lingers on )
whats write for me said:

This sounds like a Metallica song, I can actually hear the music. Bravo!

March 1st, 2025 08:35

Castle Keep
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Indeed. Sandcastles, and our lives, are temporal. The tide carries the sand in for the keep to be built...and, lo, before you know it, the tide carries it back out again. Wonderfully powerful metaphor, my friend. 🌹👏

March 1st, 2025 08:27

Castle Keep
Salvia.S said:

Breathtakingly beautiful poem! The imagery and metaphors are stunning.

March 1st, 2025 07:06

Castle Keep
Poetic Licence said:

That is a stunning sand castle but like life it will eventually disappear, enjoyed the read

March 1st, 2025 06:23

Castle Keep
David Wakeling said:

Thats the sad truth about sand castles they get re-possesed.Delightful poem

March 1st, 2025 06:18

Blossoming (2017)
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice One arqios
Nice Canopy of Blossoms

March 1st, 2025 05:42

Castle Keep
sorenbarrett said:

And such is childhood with its growing change simple, honest views of splendors beyond comprehension, and disillusionment with the erosion of time\'s tides. In older reflection one leaves footprints that one realizes will be swept away with each incoming wave. This poem carries feelings of youthful amazement, and ages resignation. Nicely done Cryptic

March 1st, 2025 05:00

Castle Keep
orchidee said:

That\'s a great sandcastle you\'ve built there. lol.

March 1st, 2025 03:27



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