Comments received on poems by arqios
4 Trofimov, The Eternal Student
arqios said:
Halfway through the suite, hope the momentum holds up.
July 21st, 2025 07:32
arqios said:
Halfway through the suite, hope the momentum holds up.
July 21st, 2025 07:32
4 Trofimov, The Eternal Student
Poetic Licence said:
A touch of Communism beliefs expressed, which didnt turn out to good, I thirst for a world unbound by debt, wouldn\'t that be amazing and I feel is achievable, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 06:27
Poetic Licence said:
A touch of Communism beliefs expressed, which didnt turn out to good, I thirst for a world unbound by debt, wouldn\'t that be amazing and I feel is achievable, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 06:27
4 Trofimov, The Eternal Student
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful so loaded and layered with social, political and economic implications. (I thirst for a world unbound by debt.) Total destruction of capitalism. The earlier lines speak of communist revolution and dream but as a dream it too did not work out in reality. A lovely write
July 21st, 2025 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful so loaded and layered with social, political and economic implications. (I thirst for a world unbound by debt.) Total destruction of capitalism. The earlier lines speak of communist revolution and dream but as a dream it too did not work out in reality. A lovely write
July 21st, 2025 06:21
weekend unleashed
Goldfinch60 said:
The weekends can be so wonderful arqios as shown in your words.
Andy
July 21st, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
The weekends can be so wonderful arqios as shown in your words.
Andy
July 21st, 2025 01:14
weekend unleashed
sorenbarrett said:
(Dusk spills its pink confetti across corrugated tin, ) a great line Cryptic. Indeed the day is just such and the poem fits like a rubber glove. Very nice and a fave
July 20th, 2025 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
(Dusk spills its pink confetti across corrugated tin, ) a great line Cryptic. Indeed the day is just such and the poem fits like a rubber glove. Very nice and a fave
July 20th, 2025 12:06
weekend unleashed
Bella Shepard said:
You spread joy like fairy dust here, light and airy and so much fun!
July 20th, 2025 08:11
Bella Shepard said:
You spread joy like fairy dust here, light and airy and so much fun!
July 20th, 2025 08:11
weekend unleashed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is great fun indeed…sun-splashed, cheeky, and low-key profound. That opening image… “rings your bell at sparrow-light”…absolutely nailed it for me. “Sparrow-light”. Seriously love that.. And the socks tangoing? Poetry in jocks and gumboots. Small rebellions indeed. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 20th, 2025 07:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is great fun indeed…sun-splashed, cheeky, and low-key profound. That opening image… “rings your bell at sparrow-light”…absolutely nailed it for me. “Sparrow-light”. Seriously love that.. And the socks tangoing? Poetry in jocks and gumboots. Small rebellions indeed. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 20th, 2025 07:35
weekend unleashed
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, just WOW. Chock-full of delicious, evocative imagery, rendered gorgeously in such disarming seeming simplicity, and haunted by a winsome, waltzing poignancy, this is too beautiful. I love, love, love it! Thank you so very much for sharing.
July 20th, 2025 06:31
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, just WOW. Chock-full of delicious, evocative imagery, rendered gorgeously in such disarming seeming simplicity, and haunted by a winsome, waltzing poignancy, this is too beautiful. I love, love, love it! Thank you so very much for sharing.
July 20th, 2025 06:31
3 Lopakhin\'s Reflection
orchidee said:
I probably got lost with any cryptic meanings at Part 1. Woof! Fido says to me - you never get many cryptic meanings anyway!
I will ask him to de-crypt them, as he of course knows 99% of everything. lol.
July 19th, 2025 09:52
orchidee said:
I probably got lost with any cryptic meanings at Part 1. Woof! Fido says to me - you never get many cryptic meanings anyway!
I will ask him to de-crypt them, as he of course knows 99% of everything. lol.
July 19th, 2025 09:52
3 Lopakhin\'s Reflection
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of nostalgia, a hint of sadness at what ones has gained by the loss of someone, nicely expressed and written
July 19th, 2025 07:53
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of nostalgia, a hint of sadness at what ones has gained by the loss of someone, nicely expressed and written
July 19th, 2025 07:53
3 Lopakhin\'s Reflection
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic and tender this poem speaks to the soul of the past and what it has left us. A fave
July 19th, 2025 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic and tender this poem speaks to the soul of the past and what it has left us. A fave
July 19th, 2025 06:45
where hermits go to shop
Goldfinch60 said:
Visions of food can come to us all arqios.
Andy
July 19th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Visions of food can come to us all arqios.
Andy
July 19th, 2025 01:48
where hermits go to shop
ElizabethMoroz said:
Beautiful dreamlike quality here, such lovely crafted lines. You have created an otherworldly atmosphere of poetic inclination here that drew me in. I would love to shop here! How seriously delightful this piece is . I genuinely LOVED it! Well done arqios. Really good write. Surreal and ethereal. Elizabeth
July 18th, 2025 20:52
ElizabethMoroz said:
Beautiful dreamlike quality here, such lovely crafted lines. You have created an otherworldly atmosphere of poetic inclination here that drew me in. I would love to shop here! How seriously delightful this piece is . I genuinely LOVED it! Well done arqios. Really good write. Surreal and ethereal. Elizabeth
July 18th, 2025 20:52
baker’s gift
Joan Reese said:
Beautiful! Kindness is needed more than ever these days. Well written!
July 18th, 2025 20:13
Joan Reese said:
Beautiful! Kindness is needed more than ever these days. Well written!
July 18th, 2025 20:13
where hermits go to shop
Keeter C said:
Should have seen this before grocery shopping today. I wonder what to do when the markets are gone.
July 18th, 2025 15:47
Keeter C said:
Should have seen this before grocery shopping today. I wonder what to do when the markets are gone.
July 18th, 2025 15:47
where hermits go to shop
Tony Grannell said:
A stroll down the aisles of the etherial supermarket, divinely swaying beneath a moonlit haze and he of meagre purse and not a care in the world. What a great read. How did this and the previous poem come to be, a most unusual subject, unique even, you should agree.
Wishing you all the best,
Tony
July 18th, 2025 13:52
Tony Grannell said:
A stroll down the aisles of the etherial supermarket, divinely swaying beneath a moonlit haze and he of meagre purse and not a care in the world. What a great read. How did this and the previous poem come to be, a most unusual subject, unique even, you should agree.
Wishing you all the best,
Tony
July 18th, 2025 13:52
2 Madame Ranevskaya\'s Reverie
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed. # Misty Coloured Memories, of the way we were# as the Song says.
July 18th, 2025 08:03
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed. # Misty Coloured Memories, of the way we were# as the Song says.
July 18th, 2025 08:03
where hermits go to shop
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is soft, surreal, and glows. The hush, the lyric stillness...a dream wandering into a grocery aisle and staying there. Absolutely love it. 🌹👏 A fave.
July 18th, 2025 06:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is soft, surreal, and glows. The hush, the lyric stillness...a dream wandering into a grocery aisle and staying there. Absolutely love it. 🌹👏 A fave.
July 18th, 2025 06:57
where hermits go to shop
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely read, he might be shopping in heaven, but it reminded me of me shopping at 3 in the morning, very enjoyable
July 18th, 2025 06:43
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely read, he might be shopping in heaven, but it reminded me of me shopping at 3 in the morning, very enjoyable
July 18th, 2025 06:43
where hermits go to shop
arqios said:
...not half as bad today... but the day is young, still.
July 18th, 2025 06:26
arqios said:
...not half as bad today... but the day is young, still.
July 18th, 2025 06:26
where hermits go to shop
Caring dove said:
I really like this .. the personification of the cans and jars .. and the mention of the divine .. a very nice and interesting read 🙂
July 18th, 2025 06:13
Caring dove said:
I really like this .. the personification of the cans and jars .. and the mention of the divine .. a very nice and interesting read 🙂
July 18th, 2025 06:13
where hermits go to shop
sorenbarrett said:
Enchanted shopping instead of elves I thought gremlins were adjusting the prices. At times demonic with shoppers possessed. A fun read Cryptic.
July 18th, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
Enchanted shopping instead of elves I thought gremlins were adjusting the prices. At times demonic with shoppers possessed. A fun read Cryptic.
July 18th, 2025 05:42
2 Madame Ranevskaya\'s Reverie
Tony Grannell said:
The sweet sorrow of a rare vintage effervescing to the last drop. An exquisite verse, arqios.
Wishing you all the best,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 14:47
Tony Grannell said:
The sweet sorrow of a rare vintage effervescing to the last drop. An exquisite verse, arqios.
Wishing you all the best,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 14:47
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