Comments received on poems by arqios
ode to Goldfinch
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely tribute and poem of praise it sings its message loud and clear. Nicely done Cryptic
July 22nd, 2025 06:36
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely tribute and poem of praise it sings its message loud and clear. Nicely done Cryptic
July 22nd, 2025 06:36
an orchard’s lament
NafisaSB said:
a touching and beautiful poem..lovely imagery
July 22nd, 2025 00:43
NafisaSB said:
a touching and beautiful poem..lovely imagery
July 22nd, 2025 00:43
4 Trofimov, The Eternal Student
Damaso said:
I have to confess that this is a text that suddenly filled my heart with hope and breathed fresh air into my lungs. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing it. Best regards.
July 21st, 2025 15:45
Damaso said:
I have to confess that this is a text that suddenly filled my heart with hope and breathed fresh air into my lungs. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing it. Best regards.
July 21st, 2025 15:45
4 Trofimov, The Eternal Student
Bella Shepard said:
Two beautiful stanzas that capture the very heart of the revolution of the mind. Exquisite!!
July 21st, 2025 15:11
Bella Shepard said:
Two beautiful stanzas that capture the very heart of the revolution of the mind. Exquisite!!
July 21st, 2025 15:11
4 Trofimov, The Eternal Student
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is so finely written. “Each word a spark against dusk”…is a line that really held me. The poem feels like Trofimov himself… earnest, restless, standing just outside of where he belongs. Quietly raging, but never shouting. Beautifully done, my friend. You are a master poet, imho. 🌹👏
July 21st, 2025 08:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is so finely written. “Each word a spark against dusk”…is a line that really held me. The poem feels like Trofimov himself… earnest, restless, standing just outside of where he belongs. Quietly raging, but never shouting. Beautifully done, my friend. You are a master poet, imho. 🌹👏
July 21st, 2025 08:36
4 Trofimov, The Eternal Student
arqios said:
not too bad, considering the current state
July 21st, 2025 08:31
arqios said:
not too bad, considering the current state
July 21st, 2025 08:31
4 Trofimov, The Eternal Student
arqios said:
Halfway through the suite, hope the momentum holds up.
July 21st, 2025 07:32
arqios said:
Halfway through the suite, hope the momentum holds up.
July 21st, 2025 07:32
4 Trofimov, The Eternal Student
Poetic Licence said:
A touch of Communism beliefs expressed, which didnt turn out to good, I thirst for a world unbound by debt, wouldn\'t that be amazing and I feel is achievable, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 06:27
Poetic Licence said:
A touch of Communism beliefs expressed, which didnt turn out to good, I thirst for a world unbound by debt, wouldn\'t that be amazing and I feel is achievable, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 06:27
4 Trofimov, The Eternal Student
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful so loaded and layered with social, political and economic implications. (I thirst for a world unbound by debt.) Total destruction of capitalism. The earlier lines speak of communist revolution and dream but as a dream it too did not work out in reality. A lovely write
July 21st, 2025 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful so loaded and layered with social, political and economic implications. (I thirst for a world unbound by debt.) Total destruction of capitalism. The earlier lines speak of communist revolution and dream but as a dream it too did not work out in reality. A lovely write
July 21st, 2025 06:21
weekend unleashed
Goldfinch60 said:
The weekends can be so wonderful arqios as shown in your words.
Andy
July 21st, 2025 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
The weekends can be so wonderful arqios as shown in your words.
Andy
July 21st, 2025 01:14
weekend unleashed
sorenbarrett said:
(Dusk spills its pink confetti across corrugated tin, ) a great line Cryptic. Indeed the day is just such and the poem fits like a rubber glove. Very nice and a fave
July 20th, 2025 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
(Dusk spills its pink confetti across corrugated tin, ) a great line Cryptic. Indeed the day is just such and the poem fits like a rubber glove. Very nice and a fave
July 20th, 2025 12:06
weekend unleashed
Bella Shepard said:
You spread joy like fairy dust here, light and airy and so much fun!
July 20th, 2025 08:11
Bella Shepard said:
You spread joy like fairy dust here, light and airy and so much fun!
July 20th, 2025 08:11
weekend unleashed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is great fun indeed…sun-splashed, cheeky, and low-key profound. That opening image… “rings your bell at sparrow-light”…absolutely nailed it for me. “Sparrow-light”. Seriously love that.. And the socks tangoing? Poetry in jocks and gumboots. Small rebellions indeed. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 20th, 2025 07:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is great fun indeed…sun-splashed, cheeky, and low-key profound. That opening image… “rings your bell at sparrow-light”…absolutely nailed it for me. “Sparrow-light”. Seriously love that.. And the socks tangoing? Poetry in jocks and gumboots. Small rebellions indeed. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 20th, 2025 07:35
weekend unleashed
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, just WOW. Chock-full of delicious, evocative imagery, rendered gorgeously in such disarming seeming simplicity, and haunted by a winsome, waltzing poignancy, this is too beautiful. I love, love, love it! Thank you so very much for sharing.
July 20th, 2025 06:31
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, just WOW. Chock-full of delicious, evocative imagery, rendered gorgeously in such disarming seeming simplicity, and haunted by a winsome, waltzing poignancy, this is too beautiful. I love, love, love it! Thank you so very much for sharing.
July 20th, 2025 06:31
3 Lopakhin\'s Reflection
orchidee said:
I probably got lost with any cryptic meanings at Part 1. Woof! Fido says to me - you never get many cryptic meanings anyway!
I will ask him to de-crypt them, as he of course knows 99% of everything. lol.
July 19th, 2025 09:52
orchidee said:
I probably got lost with any cryptic meanings at Part 1. Woof! Fido says to me - you never get many cryptic meanings anyway!
I will ask him to de-crypt them, as he of course knows 99% of everything. lol.
July 19th, 2025 09:52
3 Lopakhin\'s Reflection
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of nostalgia, a hint of sadness at what ones has gained by the loss of someone, nicely expressed and written
July 19th, 2025 07:53
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of nostalgia, a hint of sadness at what ones has gained by the loss of someone, nicely expressed and written
July 19th, 2025 07:53
3 Lopakhin\'s Reflection
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic and tender this poem speaks to the soul of the past and what it has left us. A fave
July 19th, 2025 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic and tender this poem speaks to the soul of the past and what it has left us. A fave
July 19th, 2025 06:45
where hermits go to shop
Goldfinch60 said:
Visions of food can come to us all arqios.
Andy
July 19th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Visions of food can come to us all arqios.
Andy
July 19th, 2025 01:48
where hermits go to shop
ElizabethMoroz said:
Beautiful dreamlike quality here, such lovely crafted lines. You have created an otherworldly atmosphere of poetic inclination here that drew me in. I would love to shop here! How seriously delightful this piece is . I genuinely LOVED it! Well done arqios. Really good write. Surreal and ethereal. Elizabeth
July 18th, 2025 20:52
ElizabethMoroz said:
Beautiful dreamlike quality here, such lovely crafted lines. You have created an otherworldly atmosphere of poetic inclination here that drew me in. I would love to shop here! How seriously delightful this piece is . I genuinely LOVED it! Well done arqios. Really good write. Surreal and ethereal. Elizabeth
July 18th, 2025 20:52
baker’s gift
Joan Reese said:
Beautiful! Kindness is needed more than ever these days. Well written!
July 18th, 2025 20:13
Joan Reese said:
Beautiful! Kindness is needed more than ever these days. Well written!
July 18th, 2025 20:13
where hermits go to shop
Keeter C said:
Should have seen this before grocery shopping today. I wonder what to do when the markets are gone.
July 18th, 2025 15:47
Keeter C said:
Should have seen this before grocery shopping today. I wonder what to do when the markets are gone.
July 18th, 2025 15:47
where hermits go to shop
Tony Grannell said:
A stroll down the aisles of the etherial supermarket, divinely swaying beneath a moonlit haze and he of meagre purse and not a care in the world. What a great read. How did this and the previous poem come to be, a most unusual subject, unique even, you should agree.
Wishing you all the best,
Tony
July 18th, 2025 13:52
Tony Grannell said:
A stroll down the aisles of the etherial supermarket, divinely swaying beneath a moonlit haze and he of meagre purse and not a care in the world. What a great read. How did this and the previous poem come to be, a most unusual subject, unique even, you should agree.
Wishing you all the best,
Tony
July 18th, 2025 13:52
2 Madame Ranevskaya\'s Reverie
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed. # Misty Coloured Memories, of the way we were# as the Song says.
July 18th, 2025 08:03
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed. # Misty Coloured Memories, of the way we were# as the Song says.
July 18th, 2025 08:03
where hermits go to shop
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is soft, surreal, and glows. The hush, the lyric stillness...a dream wandering into a grocery aisle and staying there. Absolutely love it. 🌹👏 A fave.
July 18th, 2025 06:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is soft, surreal, and glows. The hush, the lyric stillness...a dream wandering into a grocery aisle and staying there. Absolutely love it. 🌹👏 A fave.
July 18th, 2025 06:57
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