Comments received on poems by arqios
on the banks of the Oise
Bella Shepard said:
Such beautiful lines in honor of a beautiful and tortured soul. I love the last stanza which seems to epitomize what van Gogh loved to paint most. So lovingly written dear friend.
January 6th, 2023 14:28
Bella Shepard said:
Such beautiful lines in honor of a beautiful and tortured soul. I love the last stanza which seems to epitomize what van Gogh loved to paint most. So lovingly written dear friend.
January 6th, 2023 14:28
on the banks of the Oise
L. B. Mek said:
\'be tender, be kind while you may\'
a timeless, nugget
of humane wisdom!
brilliant! dear cherished Poet
Happy New Year
January 6th, 2023 07:26
L. B. Mek said:
\'be tender, be kind while you may\'
a timeless, nugget
of humane wisdom!
brilliant! dear cherished Poet
Happy New Year
January 6th, 2023 07:26
on the banks of the Oise
orchidee said:
Van Gogh? A troubled soul.
Fido says to me: \'No \'ear ear\' - \'hear, hear\' - jokes, please!\'
January 6th, 2023 07:04
orchidee said:
Van Gogh? A troubled soul.
Fido says to me: \'No \'ear ear\' - \'hear, hear\' - jokes, please!\'
January 6th, 2023 07:04
on the banks of the Oise
sorenbarrett said:
This write holds a feel of mystery and a sense of foreboding. The ending lines give me the feel that beauty gilds with gold a darker underlying issue. Very nicely done it reads smooth and is haunting
January 6th, 2023 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
This write holds a feel of mystery and a sense of foreboding. The ending lines give me the feel that beauty gilds with gold a darker underlying issue. Very nicely done it reads smooth and is haunting
January 6th, 2023 06:50
put a ring on it
Bella Shepard said:
Makes perfect sense my friend, and love the way you have presented the mystery of time that we grapple with.
January 5th, 2023 13:48
Bella Shepard said:
Makes perfect sense my friend, and love the way you have presented the mystery of time that we grapple with.
January 5th, 2023 13:48
basted glow
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about cooking ya turkey! lol.
January 5th, 2023 02:34
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about cooking ya turkey! lol.
January 5th, 2023 02:34
a vantaged perch
Bella Shepard said:
The act of simply sitting and observing our surroundings can bring such contentment, we should do it more. Thank you for reminding us of how sweet it can be, just to be.
January 2nd, 2023 15:31
Bella Shepard said:
The act of simply sitting and observing our surroundings can bring such contentment, we should do it more. Thank you for reminding us of how sweet it can be, just to be.
January 2nd, 2023 15:31
a vantaged perch
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful vision. I am sitting in a country house far from people or noise. I only hear the the songs of birds with granite rocks all around and it doesn\'t take much to picture your scene. Very peaceful is the mood it left me with.
January 2nd, 2023 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful vision. I am sitting in a country house far from people or noise. I only hear the the songs of birds with granite rocks all around and it doesn\'t take much to picture your scene. Very peaceful is the mood it left me with.
January 2nd, 2023 10:15
a vantaged perch
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
I was on a panoramic height, then I fell down a hill! lol.
January 2nd, 2023 06:16
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
I was on a panoramic height, then I fell down a hill! lol.
January 2nd, 2023 06:16
aubade 2023
thinkerbell said:
A wonderful way to greet the new year...Happy new year to you dear poet🥰
January 1st, 2023 12:27
thinkerbell said:
A wonderful way to greet the new year...Happy new year to you dear poet🥰
January 1st, 2023 12:27
aubade 2023
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you dear bard for sharing these words of infinite wisdom, and hope as we enter the new year. May 2023 be a new beginning.
January 1st, 2023 12:22
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you dear bard for sharing these words of infinite wisdom, and hope as we enter the new year. May 2023 be a new beginning.
January 1st, 2023 12:22
silver threaded web
thinkerbell said:
Beautifully written dear poet..the imagery is so crystal clear to me🥰
January 1st, 2023 11:39
thinkerbell said:
Beautifully written dear poet..the imagery is so crystal clear to me🥰
January 1st, 2023 11:39
aubade 2023
orchidee said:
A fine aubade (poem) that is, CB, I says, after getting out dictionary!
That\'s a good enough word to be starting a new year, or new day with!
January 1st, 2023 03:24
orchidee said:
A fine aubade (poem) that is, CB, I says, after getting out dictionary!
That\'s a good enough word to be starting a new year, or new day with!
January 1st, 2023 03:24
silver threaded web
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully worded my friend. The passage of time seems so much more tangible as we wade through the winter months. Thank you for this delightful end of the year verse.
December 31st, 2022 14:48
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully worded my friend. The passage of time seems so much more tangible as we wade through the winter months. Thank you for this delightful end of the year verse.
December 31st, 2022 14:48
silver threaded web
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
You spent that extra second we had one year, or you saving it up for later?! lol.
December 31st, 2022 03:20
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
You spent that extra second we had one year, or you saving it up for later?! lol.
December 31st, 2022 03:20
I am not your cup of tea!
orchidee said:
Yuk, tastes like drinking perfume, I imagine. Not that I ever have drank perfume. Well, smells like it anyway!
December 31st, 2022 03:11
orchidee said:
Yuk, tastes like drinking perfume, I imagine. Not that I ever have drank perfume. Well, smells like it anyway!
December 31st, 2022 03:11
grand coterie
Bella Shepard said:
Time to come together as one, for the good of all? Time for truth to prevail?
December 30th, 2022 17:31
Bella Shepard said:
Time to come together as one, for the good of all? Time for truth to prevail?
December 30th, 2022 17:31
I am not your cup of tea!
orchidee said:
I was about to have a pot of tea! lol.
December 30th, 2022 13:02
orchidee said:
I was about to have a pot of tea! lol.
December 30th, 2022 13:02
grand coterie
sorenbarrett said:
This one leads me down different paths simultaneously. I read the seriousness implied by the first line. Then I read the ending two lines and it takes me to another place.
December 29th, 2022 20:51
sorenbarrett said:
This one leads me down different paths simultaneously. I read the seriousness implied by the first line. Then I read the ending two lines and it takes me to another place.
December 29th, 2022 20:51
not all that glisters is gold
Bella Shepard said:
Enticing, the image of that beautiful, juicy orange. Perhaps taunting, as it may roll away to entice another day. Good one dear friend, always fun.
December 23rd, 2022 14:19
Bella Shepard said:
Enticing, the image of that beautiful, juicy orange. Perhaps taunting, as it may roll away to entice another day. Good one dear friend, always fun.
December 23rd, 2022 14:19
not all that glisters is gold
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully crisp imagery
so open to personalisation, a wonderful read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
hope you have a great festive season
stay safe!
December 23rd, 2022 08:07
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully crisp imagery
so open to personalisation, a wonderful read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
hope you have a great festive season
stay safe!
December 23rd, 2022 08:07
Mr Right
Bella Shepard said:
Years of writing has given me arth-writis in my writing hand, but I do prefer the written word. This is a wonderful tongue, and brain twister dear bard, such fun.
December 22nd, 2022 15:36
Bella Shepard said:
Years of writing has given me arth-writis in my writing hand, but I do prefer the written word. This is a wonderful tongue, and brain twister dear bard, such fun.
December 22nd, 2022 15:36
Mr Right
sorenbarrett said:
Right. To write is to not be left behind my teacher used to say. Now I\'ll shut right up. Love plays on words. Right well done.
December 15th, 2022 21:49
sorenbarrett said:
Right. To write is to not be left behind my teacher used to say. Now I\'ll shut right up. Love plays on words. Right well done.
December 15th, 2022 21:49
Mr Right
orchidee said:
I writed (is that a word?!) that this rightly is a good write to read CB.
You got me at it now. lol.
December 15th, 2022 03:09
orchidee said:
I writed (is that a word?!) that this rightly is a good write to read CB.
You got me at it now. lol.
December 15th, 2022 03:09
shapeshifting
orchidee said:
You turned over a leaf of your notebook and wrote this fine poem?!
Please excuse me - I can\'t shay that middlesh line as I\'ve had a gin or threesh!
December 11th, 2022 03:12
orchidee said:
You turned over a leaf of your notebook and wrote this fine poem?!
Please excuse me - I can\'t shay that middlesh line as I\'ve had a gin or threesh!
December 11th, 2022 03:12
there
sorenbarrett said:
It came to me that all art is a bit nostalgic needing past experience to evoke feelings at times unidentifiable but locked in some form they do linger as you say and this is what makes a poem, or any work of art, art to me. Nicely done.
December 10th, 2022 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
It came to me that all art is a bit nostalgic needing past experience to evoke feelings at times unidentifiable but locked in some form they do linger as you say and this is what makes a poem, or any work of art, art to me. Nicely done.
December 10th, 2022 07:33
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