Comments received on poems by arqios



waterfront solitude
Bella Shepard said:

There is something special about water; flowing, falling, babbling, meandering, that does soothe the soul. Beautifully captured dear friend.

September 7th, 2022 14:33

waterfront solitude
orchidee said:

A fine write CB.

September 7th, 2022 10:52

the insolent bystander
Bella Shepard said:

Cryptic? You\'ve got me thinking real hard.

September 6th, 2022 12:53

thanks for the applause
Mr. Not said:

im not good with words, but i like this poem a lot.

September 6th, 2022 02:27

thanks for the applause
Bella Shepard said:

A fond adieu, may these sweet words find gentle rest in ethereal bliss. A well deserved standing O.

September 5th, 2022 13:04

thanks for the applause
orchidee said:

Yep, a standing ovation from me, for these fine words CB!

September 5th, 2022 12:00

that\'s a wrap
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

September 4th, 2022 13:47

tempest
orchidee said:

Good write CB.
If I had not got the message of this, I would say - oohh, you need a brolly there! lol.

September 3rd, 2022 11:31

dangling carrot
Doggerel Dave said:

I get that completely (now I\'ve found it!)
Let them go, I say - I cannot get my head around what \'success\' means anyway....

September 2nd, 2022 21:04

What is \'forever\' to a heart?
jk said:

wow! thank you for sharing.

September 2nd, 2022 18:10

and the moon whispered
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

September 2nd, 2022 14:20

the other side of the coin
orchidee said:

It\'s not too dark for my teef to read!
Whatever am I talking about?! lol.

September 2nd, 2022 02:01

forsaking all else
Bella Shepard said:

So profoundly stated my friend. In love and in life, acuity and mindfulness do go hand in hand.

August 31st, 2022 11:14

forsaking all else
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

August 31st, 2022 07:19

dangling carrot
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

August 30th, 2022 14:43

dangling carrot
Bella Shepard said:

I love this wonderful poem dear poet, free to be the person you can love and respect on your own terms. Superbly said!

August 30th, 2022 14:19

new moon
Osei Zion said:

Nice poem

August 26th, 2022 23:45

new moon
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

August 26th, 2022 05:50

Chatterton\'s redress
Neville said:



I could read this all day ..

near perfect in my humble opinion .. far more cerebral than might appear at first glance ..

I tried hitting the like button a dozen times or so but gave up when the blister burst...................Neville


August 26th, 2022 02:28

with you
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words CB, maybe one day the nearness will return.

Andy

August 26th, 2022 01:06

with you
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

August 25th, 2022 09:27

with you
Fay Slimm. said:

Applied with poetic imagery to sigh for is this description of how distant love can lengthen the feel of missing. One to remember as into my list of favourites it goes.

August 25th, 2022 04:21

Chatterton\'s redress
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

August 24th, 2022 02:02

read to your satisfaction
Bella Shepard said:

Love, love, love this! Being old school I need the feel of a book in my hands, turning pages, using my favorite bookmark, even the smell of older books. Reading has been a passion since childhood, and I thank you for this wonderful poem.

August 22nd, 2022 13:56

read to your satisfaction
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful metaphor Thoth inventor of the written word, who later in, Greek mythology, became Hermes the winged messenger enlightens this metaphor. Great wright

August 22nd, 2022 07:29

read to your satisfaction
Aradhya said:

\"Free your mind upon these winged lines\" such a true and beautiful phrase! Books indeed fly you to another world and free yourself from mind\'s worries. Great job!

August 22nd, 2022 06:49

What\'s a decade here and there?
L. B. Mek said:

(I love speaking to the real elderly
85 plus
and still seeing that twinkle of mischief
and fun in their eyes, it reassures me
there\'s more to life than
what our eyes can see and our senses, can feel..)
this is a wonderfully encouraging message
especially, since modernity
has embarrassingly
decided, to pretend that the elderly
are no longer a societal issue...
...
indeed, after a certain age
we\'re either side of a decade
nearer, to that wisdom we seek!
thank you! dear Poet

August 22nd, 2022 02:53

the budding senescent
sorenbarrett said:

They say you are only as young as you think you are. Although the body ages the mind still feels young. This poem is good advice for a person of any age. Although my son is 45 I take this as good advice for me as well as him

August 21st, 2022 21:50

What\'s a decade here and there?
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

August 21st, 2022 07:19

the budding senescent
orchidee said:

Doh! I saw a soap serial with mainly young people in it. One line was \'Ohhh, he (or she) is so OLD. He will be 30 soon!\'

August 20th, 2022 02:00



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