Comments received on poems by arqios



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Goldfinch60 said:

Lets all dance at this time of year arquios.

Andy

December 25th, 2024 02:43

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Thad Wilk said:

Wow! 😳
Terrific poem
great brevity!! ⭐🌟⭐
Artfully expressed,
eye pleasing imagery!πŸ’«
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Merry Christmas!! β›„πŸŽ„ ,πŸ§‘β€πŸŽ„

December 24th, 2024 22:12

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

I absolutely felt like a child in a planetarium, or looking up at a starry sky with no lights to impede the view. What a wondeful poem that works both literally and metaphorically. Bravo! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 24th, 2024 10:49

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orchidee said:

Great title! lol. Maybe call it \'Space Dance\' as life is sometimes called a \'dance\' or rhythm, and I go on about life\'s \'pages of history\', for example?

December 24th, 2024 03:57

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sorenbarrett said:

Cryptic such a beautiful image but then natue is poetry it is up to the author to put it to words and you did well. Merry Christmas

December 24th, 2024 03:32

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Michael Edwards said:

And I remain here in my own little world content and happy - all the best .

December 24th, 2024 03:03

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Neville said:



......................................... sprinkles of stardust abound β­πŸŒŸβœ¨β­πŸŒŸβœ¨βœ¨β­πŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸ’«πŸ‘

December 24th, 2024 02:52

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Poetic Licence said:

Cosmic Ballet in Motion, lovely line, i wonder how they would describe us looking down, enjoyed the read.

December 24th, 2024 02:48

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Neville said:



Excellent .. but best not mention those that got away .. it\'s the way it has always been and should be .. I am totally against any form of fish farming & also against those huge vessels that just mop up everything in their path so indiscriminately ... Tight lines squire until next time .. Neville

December 23rd, 2024 13:25

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Tony36 said:

Great write

December 23rd, 2024 13:20

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Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant.

December 23rd, 2024 12:27

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Beautifully rendered and profoundly true! I hope it’s not the last, but I am selfish in that as I enjoy reading you! LOL! If it is, read you next year my friend. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you and yours! πŸŒΉπŸ‘πŸŽ„

December 23rd, 2024 10:05

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sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful poem of images that goes deeper in meaning and metaphor. I love this net you have cast and feel caught in it. Beautiful and happy holidays to you and yours

December 23rd, 2024 04:15

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Poetic Licence said:

I feel a glowing homage to one of the hardest professions in the world, a very enjoyable read.

December 23rd, 2024 03:14

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Goldfinch60 said:

Love can be so binding at times arqios if the person in your life does not care but I am so fortunate with the loves in my life that have always been true.

Love Astrid Gilberto.

Andy

December 23rd, 2024 03:07

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Teddy.15 said:

A resurrection indeed, very very similar to my own life, many wasted years. 🌹

December 22nd, 2024 22:52

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Thad Wilk said:

Awesome poem
really hits home.
I was in a relationship
like that and finally
Left it. Alcohol is a bad
disease, has ruined
many a couple. 😒
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad

December 22nd, 2024 19:14

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Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

December 22nd, 2024 15:28

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Cassie58 said:

Your lines resonated with me and not in a metaphorical way, but from experience of earlier years. Alcoholism is an illness and I experienced that with a partner. Sober, he was a completely different person. He certainly loved his drink though. Much to think about here and reflect on. Up to your usual high standard arqios.

December 22nd, 2024 14:21

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

I can certainly relate to this, my friend, both in how I have seen substances destroy the lives of those I love...and the way it started to destroy my own. Thankfully...I am a semicolon in this way and in others. A brilliant poem that sees the humanity in someone struggling as opposed to merely the problem. Well done, my friend, well done! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 22nd, 2024 07:28

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2781 said:

Have you met my mate?

December 22nd, 2024 05:57

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Poetic Licence said:

A powerful piece layered with anger and pain, they can see without the alcohol there is love to be had. A worthwhile read.

December 22nd, 2024 04:05

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sorenbarrett said:

If taken literal it is so difficult to deal with substances in a relationship on the metaphoric side drunken on fantasies one can not create a deep and meaningful relationship. In its simplicity it says so much.

December 22nd, 2024 03:50

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Goldfinch60 said:

Those memories of our youth are still there arqios.

Andy

December 22nd, 2024 02:15

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Kevin Hulme said:

I know what you mean. Somethings just stay with you.
My Mother loved the Frank Sinatra Christmas Album. So that’s special for me .
Have a good one.

December 21st, 2024 20:04

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Kevin Hulme said:

Once again, Strange. I just Published β€˜I hate to see you Cry’ and your Poem is of similar theme.
Yes to stand back and see someone you Love suffer is unbearable. Good Poem.

December 21st, 2024 19:47

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David Wakeling said:

The truth about growing up.It can be a lot different.Thoughtful poem

December 21st, 2024 14:49

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Yes, despite my poetry’s focus as of late, I too, do have that inner child within me, longing for Christmas Eve/Day. Thank you for bringing that less cynical kiddo out with this wonderful gem, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 21st, 2024 13:45

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Cassie58 said:

Lovely and upbeat and brings out my inner child. Great imagery. I still get excited about Christmas with family. Enjoyed my visit and your posted music arqios.

December 21st, 2024 13:25

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Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

December 21st, 2024 13:22



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