Comments received on poems by arqios
a future\'s horizon
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! This is a form I was not familiar with and that works so well for this piece. It fits the theme where as the rhyme diminishes so does the hope. Ingenious a fave for that creative ploy
April 2nd, 2025 02:53
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! This is a form I was not familiar with and that works so well for this piece. It fits the theme where as the rhyme diminishes so does the hope. Ingenious a fave for that creative ploy
April 2nd, 2025 02:53
is it all over for city cat?
Kevin Hulme said:
Nice one, though I preferred the 4th one : Tom Baker, or am I thinking of something else .
Well written.
April 1st, 2025 18:45
Kevin Hulme said:
Nice one, though I preferred the 4th one : Tom Baker, or am I thinking of something else .
Well written.
April 1st, 2025 18:45
waxing witless
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The state of humanity should bring humility. Ah, but we are speaking wisdom here and you know the old proverb, \"A fool returns to their folly like a dog returns to its vomit.\" This poem has a humble, real, fresh look at human beings. May those who have eyes and/or ears see and hear the truth presented here. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 1st, 2025 11:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The state of humanity should bring humility. Ah, but we are speaking wisdom here and you know the old proverb, \"A fool returns to their folly like a dog returns to its vomit.\" This poem has a humble, real, fresh look at human beings. May those who have eyes and/or ears see and hear the truth presented here. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 1st, 2025 11:04
waxing witless
sorenbarrett said:
Myth tells us that the gods were not happy with their first try in creating humans and decided to start over. So it was with biblical Noah. Maybe they were not too far off. It seems that man\'s DNA is not programed for humanity and needs a new start. A very deep and philosophical write
April 1st, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Myth tells us that the gods were not happy with their first try in creating humans and decided to start over. So it was with biblical Noah. Maybe they were not too far off. It seems that man\'s DNA is not programed for humanity and needs a new start. A very deep and philosophical write
April 1st, 2025 04:18
waxing witless
arqios said:
Slow start, habits are changing with the change of the season; or perhaps it’s something else in the air
April 1st, 2025 03:57
arqios said:
Slow start, habits are changing with the change of the season; or perhaps it’s something else in the air
April 1st, 2025 03:57
waxing witless
Poetic Licence said:
They things go in cycles, there was a time in days gone by you could say humanity had improved for the better, sadly thats not the case at the moment, maybe the cycle will return, an interesting and enjoyable read
April 1st, 2025 03:22
Poetic Licence said:
They things go in cycles, there was a time in days gone by you could say humanity had improved for the better, sadly thats not the case at the moment, maybe the cycle will return, an interesting and enjoyable read
April 1st, 2025 03:22
waxing witless
orchidee said:
Good write A. Strange place for a train - in a shopping centre. lol.
I fear - and yet I don\'t fear really, as it\'s no surprise, that I don\'t believe humanity will improve of their own doing. I bring in religion, or rather Christianity here, believing all mankind needs that help for salvation. Otherwise Christianity could be just a hobby of little old ladies going to church as a club, or some eccentric interest that some people may have.
April 1st, 2025 02:11
orchidee said:
Good write A. Strange place for a train - in a shopping centre. lol.
I fear - and yet I don\'t fear really, as it\'s no surprise, that I don\'t believe humanity will improve of their own doing. I bring in religion, or rather Christianity here, believing all mankind needs that help for salvation. Otherwise Christianity could be just a hobby of little old ladies going to church as a club, or some eccentric interest that some people may have.
April 1st, 2025 02:11
waxing witless
Goldfinch60 said:
Each generation changes arqios maybe one day it will be for the better.
Andy
April 1st, 2025 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Each generation changes arqios maybe one day it will be for the better.
Andy
April 1st, 2025 01:55
is it all over for city cat?
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios, we all learn in our lives.
Andy
April 1st, 2025 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words arqios, we all learn in our lives.
Andy
April 1st, 2025 01:46
is it all over for city cat?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That was purrrrfect, my friend! Enjoyed this, and I am pretty sure my daughters two feline rascals did too. 🤣 The one cat is so large/long, he might be a distant cousin to a panther if not a lion! Well done on this poem! 🌹👏
March 31st, 2025 12:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That was purrrrfect, my friend! Enjoyed this, and I am pretty sure my daughters two feline rascals did too. 🤣 The one cat is so large/long, he might be a distant cousin to a panther if not a lion! Well done on this poem! 🌹👏
March 31st, 2025 12:27
Antwerpen, 1995
Cheeky Missy said:
This is so very deliciously laden with more than initially meets the eye, until like many poems I used to try to collect, I want it. \'95 was not particularly memorable for me but how eloquently you\'ve rendered it herein. Delightfully full of exquisite imagery with a sweetly haunting poignancy oh! I love it. Thank you very much for sharing.
March 31st, 2025 11:48
Cheeky Missy said:
This is so very deliciously laden with more than initially meets the eye, until like many poems I used to try to collect, I want it. \'95 was not particularly memorable for me but how eloquently you\'ve rendered it herein. Delightfully full of exquisite imagery with a sweetly haunting poignancy oh! I love it. Thank you very much for sharing.
March 31st, 2025 11:48
is it all over for city cat?
Cheeky Missy said:
Meow? I guess when twas a fall guy the jellied toast was strapped to its back securely, keeping it forever turning in air, with Schrodinger surmising on eternity, was that? Math stumped me when geometry leered and I spent that life on futility, I guess. Being the language of science, I\'ll balance equations, yet go no further. Why your conclusion brought to mind, \"...the lion of the tribe of Judah hath prevailed--\" I can\'t guess, but there you go. Fascinating and beautifully rendered with gorgeous imagery and an exquisite, haunting poignancy.
March 31st, 2025 08:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Meow? I guess when twas a fall guy the jellied toast was strapped to its back securely, keeping it forever turning in air, with Schrodinger surmising on eternity, was that? Math stumped me when geometry leered and I spent that life on futility, I guess. Being the language of science, I\'ll balance equations, yet go no further. Why your conclusion brought to mind, \"...the lion of the tribe of Judah hath prevailed--\" I can\'t guess, but there you go. Fascinating and beautifully rendered with gorgeous imagery and an exquisite, haunting poignancy.
March 31st, 2025 08:27
is it all over for city cat?
Salvia.S said:
Powerful story of transformation and self-empowerment.
March 31st, 2025 07:36
Salvia.S said:
Powerful story of transformation and self-empowerment.
March 31st, 2025 07:36
Antwerpen, 1995
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. You really paint the picture. Nicely done.
March 31st, 2025 06:53
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. You really paint the picture. Nicely done.
March 31st, 2025 06:53
is it all over for city cat?
sorenbarrett said:
It is here that the poet comes out. Relationship of words and the subtle differences that make up each with a life of its own. Nicely crafted were any or these Schrodinger\'s cat? If so was it alive or dead?
March 31st, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
It is here that the poet comes out. Relationship of words and the subtle differences that make up each with a life of its own. Nicely crafted were any or these Schrodinger\'s cat? If so was it alive or dead?
March 31st, 2025 04:21
is it all over for city cat?
Poetic Licence said:
A positive message in that we all have a lion somewhere inside us, and we can break free from our perceived life and chains, nicely written
March 31st, 2025 03:46
Poetic Licence said:
A positive message in that we all have a lion somewhere inside us, and we can break free from our perceived life and chains, nicely written
March 31st, 2025 03:46
is it all over for city cat?
orchidee said:
A fine catty write A. Fido of course has 9 lives too. lol.
March 31st, 2025 02:37
orchidee said:
A fine catty write A. Fido of course has 9 lives too. lol.
March 31st, 2025 02:37
Antwerpen, 1995
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Have no experience in Antwerp, but 1995 was a consequential year for me. I was a new and aspiring poet for one...still aspiring, not new anymore! 🤣 Had maybe picked up the craft about 3 years earlier. That year I had my first \"published\" poem in my high school literary magazine. It was also the year my depression, anxiety, and the effects of a TBI really kicked into full swing. This poem brought all of that and more back. It is amazing how the times change, but individual years can feel so locked in a specific place. I survived 1995 and did so defiantly! Not a single regret...though somethings I would (perhaps) do differently. Thank you for this poem, my friend. Always look forward to your offerings. 👏🌹
March 30th, 2025 07:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Have no experience in Antwerp, but 1995 was a consequential year for me. I was a new and aspiring poet for one...still aspiring, not new anymore! 🤣 Had maybe picked up the craft about 3 years earlier. That year I had my first \"published\" poem in my high school literary magazine. It was also the year my depression, anxiety, and the effects of a TBI really kicked into full swing. This poem brought all of that and more back. It is amazing how the times change, but individual years can feel so locked in a specific place. I survived 1995 and did so defiantly! Not a single regret...though somethings I would (perhaps) do differently. Thank you for this poem, my friend. Always look forward to your offerings. 👏🌹
March 30th, 2025 07:22
Antwerpen, 1995
sorenbarrett said:
A picture painted well that might be a metaphor for oneself as well. How well do we know ourselves and may we misconstrue parts of ourselves seldom seen or that of others for ourself? A very nicely crafted poem Cryptic
March 30th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
A picture painted well that might be a metaphor for oneself as well. How well do we know ourselves and may we misconstrue parts of ourselves seldom seen or that of others for ourself? A very nicely crafted poem Cryptic
March 30th, 2025 04:06
Antwerpen, 1995
Poetic Licence said:
The happy, sad and inquisitive travels down memory lane, haven\'t been to Belgium for years, I would it\'s a different animal now, this reminded me of my days of being a travelling football fan, those to had sad and happy memories , enjoyed the read
March 30th, 2025 04:00
Poetic Licence said:
The happy, sad and inquisitive travels down memory lane, haven\'t been to Belgium for years, I would it\'s a different animal now, this reminded me of my days of being a travelling football fan, those to had sad and happy memories , enjoyed the read
March 30th, 2025 04:00
Antwerpen, 1995
arqios said:
And so the uphill ascent continues for the battling….
March 30th, 2025 02:46
arqios said:
And so the uphill ascent continues for the battling….
March 30th, 2025 02:46
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