Comments received on poems by arqios
report card demolition
JudyStella said:
The imagery🤩is brilliant! brought back memories when I hid a term paper under the bed and found it months after 😂 A well written poem💖
May 29th, 2022 12:45
JudyStella said:
The imagery🤩is brilliant! brought back memories when I hid a term paper under the bed and found it months after 😂 A well written poem💖
May 29th, 2022 12:45
when roses bloomed
Jonas Robinson said:
This has great word play and advanced imagery. Thank you for sharing. :)
May 28th, 2022 14:49
Jonas Robinson said:
This has great word play and advanced imagery. Thank you for sharing. :)
May 28th, 2022 14:49
when roses bloomed
JudyStella said:
Beautiful poem! As I understand it’s about romance in a cafe. The use of symbols are awesome
May 28th, 2022 09:05
JudyStella said:
Beautiful poem! As I understand it’s about romance in a cafe. The use of symbols are awesome
May 28th, 2022 09:05
when roses bloomed
Aradhya said:
\'When Roses bloomed in the garden \' this line seems very simple but has a very deep meaning. Absolutely beautiful dear poet great lines!❤
May 28th, 2022 06:31
Aradhya said:
\'When Roses bloomed in the garden \' this line seems very simple but has a very deep meaning. Absolutely beautiful dear poet great lines!❤
May 28th, 2022 06:31
reed music
Neville said:
pretty darn near perfectly poemed .. I am glad I meandered back in time and fell upon these words .. and coincidentally, I had been thinking about posting a little scribble of my own dedicated to your main character here ... Neville
May 27th, 2022 09:45
Neville said:
pretty darn near perfectly poemed .. I am glad I meandered back in time and fell upon these words .. and coincidentally, I had been thinking about posting a little scribble of my own dedicated to your main character here ... Neville
May 27th, 2022 09:45
thread diving
L. B. Mek said:
and we thought drowning in all those books was bad...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 27th, 2022 06:26
L. B. Mek said:
and we thought drowning in all those books was bad...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 27th, 2022 06:26
thread diving
orchidee said:
I shan\'t forget this entire fine poem. I shall memorise it! heehee.
May 27th, 2022 04:46
orchidee said:
I shan\'t forget this entire fine poem. I shall memorise it! heehee.
May 27th, 2022 04:46
no promise of regret
L. B. Mek said:
(\'filial\'
what an archaic word
in modernity\'s, me and I: reality!
just watch the film, Tokyo Story 1953
then realise how many decades
its been, since
its depicted filial disintegration
and that things have only
been exponentially degrading...)
sorry about my tangent, really
a good read you shared, dear poet
especially
like the wording of your title
May 26th, 2022 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
(\'filial\'
what an archaic word
in modernity\'s, me and I: reality!
just watch the film, Tokyo Story 1953
then realise how many decades
its been, since
its depicted filial disintegration
and that things have only
been exponentially degrading...)
sorry about my tangent, really
a good read you shared, dear poet
especially
like the wording of your title
May 26th, 2022 04:55
how I came to be
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Ahh, I remember seeing ya.... lol.
May 25th, 2022 02:25
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Ahh, I remember seeing ya.... lol.
May 25th, 2022 02:25
a nag called Time
sonnie said:
I love this personification of time and the metaphors here. I love how you perfectly described that the battle with (her) is senseless. beautiful poem i truly enjoyed it.
May 23rd, 2022 21:30
sonnie said:
I love this personification of time and the metaphors here. I love how you perfectly described that the battle with (her) is senseless. beautiful poem i truly enjoyed it.
May 23rd, 2022 21:30
a nag called Time
L. B. Mek said:
You\'ve done it again
inspired me to reply
with my little scribbled effort..
what a wonderful example
of abstract poetry, purposed
to fuel
other peoples, creativity..
really, really clever
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
a great read!
(greet, bold
as every new-born\'s lament
since before we awoke
un-to sunlight
to moonlight, reality
there was no tic
in our heartbeat\'s, toc
and Time
had no power, in our oven
of existence
like, when we awake from sleep
and alarmingly, scrabble
to check
what time it is
so as to see, how long
we slept for..
but once awake, that alarm
nags at us
screeching its fury, at those
Juda\'s, seconds
in our ephemeral, runaway lives...)
May 23rd, 2022 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
You\'ve done it again
inspired me to reply
with my little scribbled effort..
what a wonderful example
of abstract poetry, purposed
to fuel
other peoples, creativity..
really, really clever
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
a great read!
(greet, bold
as every new-born\'s lament
since before we awoke
un-to sunlight
to moonlight, reality
there was no tic
in our heartbeat\'s, toc
and Time
had no power, in our oven
of existence
like, when we awake from sleep
and alarmingly, scrabble
to check
what time it is
so as to see, how long
we slept for..
but once awake, that alarm
nags at us
screeching its fury, at those
Juda\'s, seconds
in our ephemeral, runaway lives...)
May 23rd, 2022 05:52
fly south
Rocky Lagou said:
A wonderful haiku indeed! I imagined each word as I read it, and I was transported into your poetic world. Thanks!
May 20th, 2022 08:13
Rocky Lagou said:
A wonderful haiku indeed! I imagined each word as I read it, and I was transported into your poetic world. Thanks!
May 20th, 2022 08:13
Poet, Speak! or forever be silent
L. B. Mek said:
(then dear insightful Poet
whisper, to thy self:
\'Poesy, empower me
to light, paths
consumed by strife
and brighten, smiles, encased
within immeasurable, self-doubt
beginning, with my own
path and smile, of a life
Posey, befreind me
for eternity...\')
thanks for sharing, another great read!
\'and poetry is a dream
garbed in bilious words
whose raiment is laced
by meandering verse\'..
Amen!
May 19th, 2022 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
(then dear insightful Poet
whisper, to thy self:
\'Poesy, empower me
to light, paths
consumed by strife
and brighten, smiles, encased
within immeasurable, self-doubt
beginning, with my own
path and smile, of a life
Posey, befreind me
for eternity...\')
thanks for sharing, another great read!
\'and poetry is a dream
garbed in bilious words
whose raiment is laced
by meandering verse\'..
Amen!
May 19th, 2022 04:41
waterfront recital
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking sand castles were far from your mind on this little journey of pleasure.
May 16th, 2022 11:46
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking sand castles were far from your mind on this little journey of pleasure.
May 16th, 2022 11:46
waterfront recital
L. B. Mek said:
an impactful shorty, dear Poet
thanks for inspiring me to scribble
these feeble words
as a little, poetic reply:
(upon self excavated
lonesome islands
individual\'s, gather with their shadows
to ponder
that distance between ideal sensuality
and those brief minutes, conceived
as sexual proficiency milestones
and the churning sea, all around
reflects
that distorted disquiet
in our projected, mirage of solemnity..)
lets begin
\'with sex, is not a sin\'
and hope future
generations, will evolve
to a realisation
of physical connections
as their intimacy\'s, sincerity..
May 16th, 2022 06:46
L. B. Mek said:
an impactful shorty, dear Poet
thanks for inspiring me to scribble
these feeble words
as a little, poetic reply:
(upon self excavated
lonesome islands
individual\'s, gather with their shadows
to ponder
that distance between ideal sensuality
and those brief minutes, conceived
as sexual proficiency milestones
and the churning sea, all around
reflects
that distorted disquiet
in our projected, mirage of solemnity..)
lets begin
\'with sex, is not a sin\'
and hope future
generations, will evolve
to a realisation
of physical connections
as their intimacy\'s, sincerity..
May 16th, 2022 06:46
Goodbye, Dad
Rocky Lagou said:
My sincere condolences. I lost my mother at 13, and I know the heartache that is caused from a parent\'s loss. It\'s something unbearable, I hope you\'ll see better days, there\'s always hope.
May 13th, 2022 08:24
Rocky Lagou said:
My sincere condolences. I lost my mother at 13, and I know the heartache that is caused from a parent\'s loss. It\'s something unbearable, I hope you\'ll see better days, there\'s always hope.
May 13th, 2022 08:24
Goodbye, Dad
L. B. Mek said:
\'my eyelids scroll to see
and feel you waiting, free
through this jungle and
its concrete mountains
no longer away from thee\'..
may he rest in peace
4 makes it, a season of years
lets makes this, winter\'s season
for your loss
awaiting are the Spring and Summer
of acceptance and growth..
stay strong, dear Poet..
I hope
these words, would make him proud..
thanks for sharing
May 13th, 2022 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'my eyelids scroll to see
and feel you waiting, free
through this jungle and
its concrete mountains
no longer away from thee\'..
may he rest in peace
4 makes it, a season of years
lets makes this, winter\'s season
for your loss
awaiting are the Spring and Summer
of acceptance and growth..
stay strong, dear Poet..
I hope
these words, would make him proud..
thanks for sharing
May 13th, 2022 04:28
is it not your day?
Rocky Lagou said:
Yikes. Sounds quite somber, the \"real life\" is a bummer though; bills, responsibilities, you name it. Just hope you can make it out alive and thrive! Your poems are amazing!
May 10th, 2022 08:42
Rocky Lagou said:
Yikes. Sounds quite somber, the \"real life\" is a bummer though; bills, responsibilities, you name it. Just hope you can make it out alive and thrive! Your poems are amazing!
May 10th, 2022 08:42
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