Comments received on poems by arqios
see you there
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent poem. Internal, cerebral cosmic beauty meets poetic eloquence. A fave from me, my friend. 🌹👏
April 20th, 2025 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent poem. Internal, cerebral cosmic beauty meets poetic eloquence. A fave from me, my friend. 🌹👏
April 20th, 2025 07:49
twilight trek
NafisaSB said:
like the mellow tone of the poem, and the spirit of hope - good read
April 20th, 2025 06:10
NafisaSB said:
like the mellow tone of the poem, and the spirit of hope - good read
April 20th, 2025 06:10
see you there
David Wakeling said:
I like the imagery this piece evokes.The night sky and the passage of time.Wonderful
April 20th, 2025 05:18
David Wakeling said:
I like the imagery this piece evokes.The night sky and the passage of time.Wonderful
April 20th, 2025 05:18
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sorenbarrett said:
have you ever read a poem that pieces of it seem like bits or fragments of past memories but now it starts to fit together like a jig-saw puzzle? This poem is just that. Always thought of how miraculously ingenious writing is and how the mind can so quickly interpret bits of broken twisted lines to form not just a word but a meaning and join such so quickly into an entire picture and thought. The Kabbalists believe that meaning is written in the stars and to one who understand this that they call the (angels alphabet) can read the past present and future. Ah but my thoughts wander. A fave
April 20th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
have you ever read a poem that pieces of it seem like bits or fragments of past memories but now it starts to fit together like a jig-saw puzzle? This poem is just that. Always thought of how miraculously ingenious writing is and how the mind can so quickly interpret bits of broken twisted lines to form not just a word but a meaning and join such so quickly into an entire picture and thought. The Kabbalists believe that meaning is written in the stars and to one who understand this that they call the (angels alphabet) can read the past present and future. Ah but my thoughts wander. A fave
April 20th, 2025 04:05
w o r d s
Goldfinch60 said:
Tey certainly do arqios, each word has meaning.
Andy
April 20th, 2025 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Tey certainly do arqios, each word has meaning.
Andy
April 20th, 2025 01:45
w o r d s
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah. Your title and your note speak of the a power words brought together, not just power, but sacred power. That said, they can carry deadly power. This is such a powerful metaphor my friend. The Word (logos) that existed in the beginning, that was the creative force behind everything, that embodied itself in a human being, taught, instructed, was bound, banned, destroyed...but not really...rather resurrected, living in the hearts and minds of countless. This, of course, could be seen through a religious lens, but it need not be either. It is a profound and timely reflection given. 🌹👏
April 19th, 2025 08:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah. Your title and your note speak of the a power words brought together, not just power, but sacred power. That said, they can carry deadly power. This is such a powerful metaphor my friend. The Word (logos) that existed in the beginning, that was the creative force behind everything, that embodied itself in a human being, taught, instructed, was bound, banned, destroyed...but not really...rather resurrected, living in the hearts and minds of countless. This, of course, could be seen through a religious lens, but it need not be either. It is a profound and timely reflection given. 🌹👏
April 19th, 2025 08:45
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David Wakeling said:
Yes words are powerful things.They can hurt or heal.Wonderful tribute poem.Enjoyable
April 19th, 2025 05:05
David Wakeling said:
Yes words are powerful things.They can hurt or heal.Wonderful tribute poem.Enjoyable
April 19th, 2025 05:05
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arqios said:
Hope the video attached brings a ray of light to your day and your body as well. 💧 + words = being
April 19th, 2025 04:08
arqios said:
Hope the video attached brings a ray of light to your day and your body as well. 💧 + words = being
April 19th, 2025 04:08
w o r d s
sorenbarrett said:
Words, dialogue at times are projectiles and at others calming forces. Understanding, which most all long for, only comes from such. A most lovely write my friend.
April 19th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
Words, dialogue at times are projectiles and at others calming forces. Understanding, which most all long for, only comes from such. A most lovely write my friend.
April 19th, 2025 03:44
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hope endures. Amen! Excellent my friend! 🌹👏
April 18th, 2025 21:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hope endures. Amen! Excellent my friend! 🌹👏
April 18th, 2025 21:35
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Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s a subtly disarming winsomeness to the seemingly simple stanzas trickling down the blank page like a delicate stream of pure water. Beautiful and charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a warming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 18th, 2025 10:47
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s a subtly disarming winsomeness to the seemingly simple stanzas trickling down the blank page like a delicate stream of pure water. Beautiful and charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a warming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 18th, 2025 10:47
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Mutley Ravishes said:
Those first two lines especially, Arqios. Then, Middle Earth teleportation!
April 18th, 2025 05:24
Mutley Ravishes said:
Those first two lines especially, Arqios. Then, Middle Earth teleportation!
April 18th, 2025 05:24
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Poetic Licence said:
The tender footsteps of our journey in life, reminding us there is, hope, softly written with nice imagery, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 04:44
Poetic Licence said:
The tender footsteps of our journey in life, reminding us there is, hope, softly written with nice imagery, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 04:44
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sorenbarrett said:
To me this poem represents life\'s journey where the final word is hope. A lovely structure with short two or three word lines like footsteps taking each line onward. The imagery gives texture to the poem enhancing its meaning. The rhyme is an echo of each foot step and is so natural it is hardly noticed. Most lovely.
April 18th, 2025 03:28
sorenbarrett said:
To me this poem represents life\'s journey where the final word is hope. A lovely structure with short two or three word lines like footsteps taking each line onward. The imagery gives texture to the poem enhancing its meaning. The rhyme is an echo of each foot step and is so natural it is hardly noticed. Most lovely.
April 18th, 2025 03:28
twilight trek
David Wakeling said:
I enjoyed this.Hope keeps as going.Excellent
April 18th, 2025 03:04
David Wakeling said:
I enjoyed this.Hope keeps as going.Excellent
April 18th, 2025 03:04
but a flesh wound
orchidee said:
Good write A, but as (normally) as usual, I\'ve not the foggiest of the cryptic meanings. lol.
April 17th, 2025 09:37
orchidee said:
Good write A, but as (normally) as usual, I\'ve not the foggiest of the cryptic meanings. lol.
April 17th, 2025 09:37
but a flesh wound
Kevin Hulme said:
I was at the next Table enjoying my Spam , when suddenly...
Nice one.
April 17th, 2025 09:21
Kevin Hulme said:
I was at the next Table enjoying my Spam , when suddenly...
Nice one.
April 17th, 2025 09:21
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