Comments received on poems by arqios
i lurv u
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words, it just shows how much drink can affect our lives.
Andy
June 22nd, 2022 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words, it just shows how much drink can affect our lives.
Andy
June 22nd, 2022 00:28
wash
L. B. Mek said:
no, we can\'t wash away
our past
but yes, if we face fate\'s
\'front loader, churning
machinations\'
we get to, rinse
our life\'s, free of regret\'s stains
and thus, allow ourselves
to look back and open
doors to our pasts, to see
red
for
red
and dress
for dress
instead
of metaphorical, symbolism\'s
crimson stained, synthetic hope...
(exemplary use of imagery, dear Poet
Ezra Pound, would be proud)
thank you!
June 20th, 2022 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
no, we can\'t wash away
our past
but yes, if we face fate\'s
\'front loader, churning
machinations\'
we get to, rinse
our life\'s, free of regret\'s stains
and thus, allow ourselves
to look back and open
doors to our pasts, to see
red
for
red
and dress
for dress
instead
of metaphorical, symbolism\'s
crimson stained, synthetic hope...
(exemplary use of imagery, dear Poet
Ezra Pound, would be proud)
thank you!
June 20th, 2022 05:14
wash
JudyStella said:
How you use the function of the washing machine to create such a great piece of work. The last line shows the experiences of the speaker, am I close?
June 20th, 2022 03:23
JudyStella said:
How you use the function of the washing machine to create such a great piece of work. The last line shows the experiences of the speaker, am I close?
June 20th, 2022 03:23
wash
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Doh! From me tumble dryer emerged darkness - well, from me washing machine first. I mixed the whites with black garments!
June 20th, 2022 02:00
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Doh! From me tumble dryer emerged darkness - well, from me washing machine first. I mixed the whites with black garments!
June 20th, 2022 02:00
simply hope
Blueledge said:
Sounds good. Brings back memories of sunrises I Saw living high up on a Scottish Island.
June 19th, 2022 23:43
Blueledge said:
Sounds good. Brings back memories of sunrises I Saw living high up on a Scottish Island.
June 19th, 2022 23:43
simply hope
JudyStella said:
Love the line
off sun-kissed
horizon,
Well crafted!
June 19th, 2022 10:37
JudyStella said:
Love the line
off sun-kissed
horizon,
Well crafted!
June 19th, 2022 10:37
so, fill us with good things
L. B. Mek said:
that your cynicism, will fly
past, the thoughtlessness
of most
makes this, Brilliant!
\'in my humble opinion\'
(forgive me
if I\'ve interpreted your words wrongly)
June 17th, 2022 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
that your cynicism, will fly
past, the thoughtlessness
of most
makes this, Brilliant!
\'in my humble opinion\'
(forgive me
if I\'ve interpreted your words wrongly)
June 17th, 2022 04:27
Elyssa, fugitive princess
Bella Shepard said:
I enjoyed this dive into Greek history, and so, was inspired to google Elyssa. What a fascinating story. Thank you!
June 15th, 2022 11:32
Bella Shepard said:
I enjoyed this dive into Greek history, and so, was inspired to google Elyssa. What a fascinating story. Thank you!
June 15th, 2022 11:32
Elyssa, fugitive princess
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice review of a classic theme. Well written and enjoyable
June 15th, 2022 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice review of a classic theme. Well written and enjoyable
June 15th, 2022 08:40
What is \'forever\' to a heart?
dusk arising said:
Forever to my old battered heart was a path of learning. Coming to terms and leading on toward and through the countless villages of wisdom where a heart may find solace.
June 14th, 2022 13:38
dusk arising said:
Forever to my old battered heart was a path of learning. Coming to terms and leading on toward and through the countless villages of wisdom where a heart may find solace.
June 14th, 2022 13:38
What is \'forever\' to a heart?
orchidee said:
Ohhhh forever.... I am liking this!
No need to be melodramatic, and over-the-top, says Fido. lol.
June 14th, 2022 12:29
orchidee said:
Ohhhh forever.... I am liking this!
No need to be melodramatic, and over-the-top, says Fido. lol.
June 14th, 2022 12:29
What is \'forever\' to a heart?
L. B. Mek said:
let\'s hope so, dear poet
I admire the enduring hopeful tone
in your message
thanks for sharing!
\'the un-requitedness would be for sure.\'
an empowering concept/perspective
June 14th, 2022 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
let\'s hope so, dear poet
I admire the enduring hopeful tone
in your message
thanks for sharing!
\'the un-requitedness would be for sure.\'
an empowering concept/perspective
June 14th, 2022 05:39
a poet\'s tears
Bella Shepard said:
I think that the soul of the poet sees deeper, feels deeper, and can\'t help but express. That expression prods us to think deeper. Well done poet!
June 13th, 2022 08:50
Bella Shepard said:
I think that the soul of the poet sees deeper, feels deeper, and can\'t help but express. That expression prods us to think deeper. Well done poet!
June 13th, 2022 08:50
a poet\'s tears
L. B. Mek said:
lol
I don\'t know, I think most
poet\'s, worry more
about their spelling and grammatical, mistakes
than having some warped notion
of carrying the world
on their scrawny shoulders..
(but then I wouldn\'t know
I\'m a mere wannabe
maybe one day
for while I breathe, I can still dream)
lol
June 13th, 2022 07:06
L. B. Mek said:
lol
I don\'t know, I think most
poet\'s, worry more
about their spelling and grammatical, mistakes
than having some warped notion
of carrying the world
on their scrawny shoulders..
(but then I wouldn\'t know
I\'m a mere wannabe
maybe one day
for while I breathe, I can still dream)
lol
June 13th, 2022 07:06
spiral noose
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Can ya help? I went 24 hours without breathing one day. Why didn\'t I feel very well at the end of it?! lol. Well, I was trying to save the planet some air.
They\'ll take me away soon.... men in white coats!
June 10th, 2022 11:31
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Can ya help? I went 24 hours without breathing one day. Why didn\'t I feel very well at the end of it?! lol. Well, I was trying to save the planet some air.
They\'ll take me away soon.... men in white coats!
June 10th, 2022 11:31
gems inside
Morwenna said:
It\'s succinct and clear and yet needs re-reading. That is big plus. And I like the half rhymes which give it weight, somehow. A lovely image. Thanks
June 9th, 2022 12:25
Morwenna said:
It\'s succinct and clear and yet needs re-reading. That is big plus. And I like the half rhymes which give it weight, somehow. A lovely image. Thanks
June 9th, 2022 12:25
gems inside
Blueledge said:
Interesting you should say that.
It\'s true. Poems, thoughts. They evolve.
June 9th, 2022 01:30
Blueledge said:
Interesting you should say that.
It\'s true. Poems, thoughts. They evolve.
June 9th, 2022 01:30
gems inside
orchidee said:
My - and Goldfinch\'s - middle name is \'Fossil\'. We\'re very old, so we say. Millions of years old, in fact. We saw the dinosaurs in person.
You very old? Someone got called \'fossil\' because they would not use e-mail. lol.
June 9th, 2022 01:30
orchidee said:
My - and Goldfinch\'s - middle name is \'Fossil\'. We\'re very old, so we say. Millions of years old, in fact. We saw the dinosaurs in person.
You very old? Someone got called \'fossil\' because they would not use e-mail. lol.
June 9th, 2022 01:30
here
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
I\'m none the wiser that me singing lessons have not improved. I fool myself that they have! lol.
Teef OK? (not that nonsense again. lol).
June 7th, 2022 08:02
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
I\'m none the wiser that me singing lessons have not improved. I fool myself that they have! lol.
Teef OK? (not that nonsense again. lol).
June 7th, 2022 08:02
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