Comments received on poems by arqios
bicnic py the sea
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I don\'t have dyslexia, but I know those who do. Terribly tough to deal with and, in this poem, you gave us a glimpse of what that is like. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏 And, this was really a fun read too! Easily faved!
January 18th, 2025 11:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I don\'t have dyslexia, but I know those who do. Terribly tough to deal with and, in this poem, you gave us a glimpse of what that is like. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏 And, this was really a fun read too! Easily faved!
January 18th, 2025 11:28
bicnic py the sea
sorenbarrett said:
Crypticly clever. A run fead. Thanks for sharing
January 18th, 2025 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
Crypticly clever. A run fead. Thanks for sharing
January 18th, 2025 07:53
bicnic py the sea
arqios said:
Thanks cheeky missy, for some reason I have no access to your comment inbox; would you mind checking if I’m somehow blocked from access? Cheers 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊️
January 18th, 2025 07:28
arqios said:
Thanks cheeky missy, for some reason I have no access to your comment inbox; would you mind checking if I’m somehow blocked from access? Cheers 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊️
January 18th, 2025 07:28
bicnic py the sea
Cheeky Missy said:
I likewise have dyslexia. Looks like a fun piece in pig Latin, or igpay atinlay, or similar. Humorously rendered with excellent imagery, thank you for sharing.
January 18th, 2025 07:19
Cheeky Missy said:
I likewise have dyslexia. Looks like a fun piece in pig Latin, or igpay atinlay, or similar. Humorously rendered with excellent imagery, thank you for sharing.
January 18th, 2025 07:19
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cellinic said:
A very deep and sincere statement, dear arqios. Best wishes,
January 18th, 2025 02:48
cellinic said:
A very deep and sincere statement, dear arqios. Best wishes,
January 18th, 2025 02:48
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Goldfinch60 said:
We can always restart our lives on each new day arqios.
Andy
January 18th, 2025 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
We can always restart our lives on each new day arqios.
Andy
January 18th, 2025 02:24
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David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem. I see a dance with Pain that we want to come to an end but sadly it never does. Made me think
January 17th, 2025 16:18
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem. I see a dance with Pain that we want to come to an end but sadly it never does. Made me think
January 17th, 2025 16:18
time’s no friend
Cassie58 said:
A clever write arqios and so true. Time is no friend. We have absolutely no control over it. A profound piece of poetry. Wouldn’t it be wonderful if we could stop it at certain points in our lives.
January 17th, 2025 13:26
Cassie58 said:
A clever write arqios and so true. Time is no friend. We have absolutely no control over it. A profound piece of poetry. Wouldn’t it be wonderful if we could stop it at certain points in our lives.
January 17th, 2025 13:26
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sorenbarrett said:
So many directions. My first take was anesthesia after an operation that wears off, then emotional pain and our use of distractions that wear off. Other relationships that can never substitute the original and as the pain returns the relationship burns. With the physical the addiction to pain killers and their build up of tolerance and how they don\'t last. This one is just mysterious enough to bring thoughts of one\'s own past experience.
January 17th, 2025 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
So many directions. My first take was anesthesia after an operation that wears off, then emotional pain and our use of distractions that wear off. Other relationships that can never substitute the original and as the pain returns the relationship burns. With the physical the addiction to pain killers and their build up of tolerance and how they don\'t last. This one is just mysterious enough to bring thoughts of one\'s own past experience.
January 17th, 2025 12:26
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this brief, but multilayered poem you wrote here, my friend. For me, it speaks of the reality of pain and suffering\'s omnipresence in human existence. One cannot escape pain in life. It is a part of the whole package, unfortunately. Or is it unfortunate? A philosophical question, for sure. But when one is experiencing it, it feels most unfortunate. Some might say shitty, even. And the title! Ah, isn\'t this what we desire to do? Reboot and start all over. Indeed, sometimes that very act is the only way to move forward and function.Anyway, well done, my friend. 🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this brief, but multilayered poem you wrote here, my friend. For me, it speaks of the reality of pain and suffering\'s omnipresence in human existence. One cannot escape pain in life. It is a part of the whole package, unfortunately. Or is it unfortunate? A philosophical question, for sure. But when one is experiencing it, it feels most unfortunate. Some might say shitty, even. And the title! Ah, isn\'t this what we desire to do? Reboot and start all over. Indeed, sometimes that very act is the only way to move forward and function.Anyway, well done, my friend. 🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 09:11
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Neville said:
there are times when those three little keys can make all the difference to the outcome .. at the end of a long day .. or indeed at any time .. make me stop n ponder why don\'tcha until I am content with my own solution .. Nice one my friend .. Neville
January 17th, 2025 07:03
Neville said:
there are times when those three little keys can make all the difference to the outcome .. at the end of a long day .. or indeed at any time .. make me stop n ponder why don\'tcha until I am content with my own solution .. Nice one my friend .. Neville
January 17th, 2025 07:03
time’s no friend
Neville said:
No aint that the absolute truth in a nutshell .. Neville
January 17th, 2025 04:15
Neville said:
No aint that the absolute truth in a nutshell .. Neville
January 17th, 2025 04:15
time’s no friend
Goldfinch60 said:
Time goes at ever changing speeds in life arqios.
Andy
January 17th, 2025 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Time goes at ever changing speeds in life arqios.
Andy
January 17th, 2025 02:09
spaces we inhabit: pre-dystopian reverie
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m just going to say that the mobile phone has really taken away the need to have physical interaction with humans, I see it here on a daily basis although in the small towns people still have so great traditions like the Saturday market but I agree it\'s a sad way and I hope humanity will soon come back out of their shells, or should I say
I- Phones 🌹
January 16th, 2025 15:20
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m just going to say that the mobile phone has really taken away the need to have physical interaction with humans, I see it here on a daily basis although in the small towns people still have so great traditions like the Saturday market but I agree it\'s a sad way and I hope humanity will soon come back out of their shells, or should I say
I- Phones 🌹
January 16th, 2025 15:20
time’s no friend
Kevin Hulme said:
Times like Oxygen: it’s all around us, but we can’t see it.
You described it so well in the Poem. Well said.
January 16th, 2025 09:49
Kevin Hulme said:
Times like Oxygen: it’s all around us, but we can’t see it.
You described it so well in the Poem. Well said.
January 16th, 2025 09:49
time’s no friend
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Good morning! I\'d like a decaf coffee, a side of home fries, a large OJ, and, heck, toss in a cup of oatmeal with brown sugar and raisins along with my TRUTH omelet! 🤣 Wonderful job, my friend. What can I say other than TRUTH! 🌹🌹 Ah...yes...I can also say FAVED.
January 16th, 2025 08:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Good morning! I\'d like a decaf coffee, a side of home fries, a large OJ, and, heck, toss in a cup of oatmeal with brown sugar and raisins along with my TRUTH omelet! 🤣 Wonderful job, my friend. What can I say other than TRUTH! 🌹🌹 Ah...yes...I can also say FAVED.
January 16th, 2025 08:47
time’s no friend
David Wakeling said:
Time and tide wait for no man.Certainly no friend.An interesting poem exploring a great mystery.
January 16th, 2025 05:48
David Wakeling said:
Time and tide wait for no man.Certainly no friend.An interesting poem exploring a great mystery.
January 16th, 2025 05:48
time’s no friend
Mutley Ravishes said:
Mechanical time
Grinds
Us down
Effortlessly!
\"An unhurried force.\" Great line, Arquios!
January 16th, 2025 05:35
Mutley Ravishes said:
Mechanical time
Grinds
Us down
Effortlessly!
\"An unhurried force.\" Great line, Arquios!
January 16th, 2025 05:35
time’s no friend
sorenbarrett said:
You have accomplished the near impossible describing the intangible in most poetic terms. The words though few are deeply profound in this poem. This one deserves a Fave
January 16th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
You have accomplished the near impossible describing the intangible in most poetic terms. The words though few are deeply profound in this poem. This one deserves a Fave
January 16th, 2025 04:27
time’s no friend
orchidee said:
It\'s \'time\' for my quip: \'I never knew there was some much about* time, but I know now! lol. [*insert subject here, in this case - time].
January 16th, 2025 03:34
orchidee said:
It\'s \'time\' for my quip: \'I never knew there was some much about* time, but I know now! lol. [*insert subject here, in this case - time].
January 16th, 2025 03:34
spaces we inhabit: pre-dystopian reverie
Kevin Hulme said:
I think ‘Covid’ has changed a lot of our way of life.
Good one.
January 16th, 2025 03:13
Kevin Hulme said:
I think ‘Covid’ has changed a lot of our way of life.
Good one.
January 16th, 2025 03:13
spaces we inhabit: pre-dystopian reverie
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and so true, I have seen them all and still do on occasion arqios.
Andy
January 16th, 2025 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and so true, I have seen them all and still do on occasion arqios.
Andy
January 16th, 2025 02:16
spaces we inhabit: pre-dystopian reverie
A.H. Browning said:
Very nice writing.
January 15th, 2025 20:49
A.H. Browning said:
Very nice writing.
January 15th, 2025 20:49
spaces we inhabit: pre-dystopian reverie
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Are we meant to catch up with the times when it comes to the increasing isolation and hyper-individualism we see pervasively spreading throughout Western Civilization? That, for me, is the question. I will say this, my friend, you do paint a pre-dystopian world...one that is foreign to the dystopic state of things we\'re in now. When reading this poem, it becomes clear (if it weren\'t already clear to the reader) that we are in a dystopia. Well done on this very thought-provoking poem that is as much a reflection on our current times as it is a nostalgic look back. 🌹👏
January 15th, 2025 16:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Are we meant to catch up with the times when it comes to the increasing isolation and hyper-individualism we see pervasively spreading throughout Western Civilization? That, for me, is the question. I will say this, my friend, you do paint a pre-dystopian world...one that is foreign to the dystopic state of things we\'re in now. When reading this poem, it becomes clear (if it weren\'t already clear to the reader) that we are in a dystopia. Well done on this very thought-provoking poem that is as much a reflection on our current times as it is a nostalgic look back. 🌹👏
January 15th, 2025 16:41
spaces we inhabit: pre-dystopian reverie
Doggerel Dave said:
Dystopia - the here and now. Arrived. Oh yes!
January 15th, 2025 16:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Dystopia - the here and now. Arrived. Oh yes!
January 15th, 2025 16:32
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