Comments received on poems by arqios
grappling with Today
Melancholic~Onion said:
Who wouldn\'t relate to this? We\'re all wary of tomorrow
December 29th, 2024 02:03
Melancholic~Onion said:
Who wouldn\'t relate to this? We\'re all wary of tomorrow
December 29th, 2024 02:03
grappling with Today
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem,
thoughts and
emotions penned!! 👍
I totally agree with
you, we are the architects
of our fate my friend!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 28th, 2024 20:51
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem,
thoughts and
emotions penned!! 👍
I totally agree with
you, we are the architects
of our fate my friend!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 28th, 2024 20:51
under pressure
Dan Williams said:
And the ending nicely reveals your message. Nicely done.
December 28th, 2024 20:02
Dan Williams said:
And the ending nicely reveals your message. Nicely done.
December 28th, 2024 20:02
Christmas Glow
Kevin Hulme said:
Nice One. I’d like to spend a Christmas in a Christmas Advert, a table straining under all that food and plenty of everything. But it’s not all like that isn’t it. I had a quiet one with family, in the real world.
Hope yours was good.
December 28th, 2024 20:01
Kevin Hulme said:
Nice One. I’d like to spend a Christmas in a Christmas Advert, a table straining under all that food and plenty of everything. But it’s not all like that isn’t it. I had a quiet one with family, in the real world.
Hope yours was good.
December 28th, 2024 20:01
grappling with Today
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is special. So many good lines here. I particularly like \"Dance of days\" and \"Profound truth of being\". Excellent
December 28th, 2024 15:26
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is special. So many good lines here. I particularly like \"Dance of days\" and \"Profound truth of being\". Excellent
December 28th, 2024 15:26
grappling with Today
sorenbarrett said:
Such a positive and true message. We live in the moment the only thing we have control over. Lovely
December 28th, 2024 12:28
sorenbarrett said:
Such a positive and true message. We live in the moment the only thing we have control over. Lovely
December 28th, 2024 12:28
grappling with Today
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic way of dealing with time in a positive way, enjoyed the read
December 28th, 2024 12:25
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic way of dealing with time in a positive way, enjoyed the read
December 28th, 2024 12:25
grappling with Today
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reminds of an old lesson that someone pretty significant in world history and religion may have said once, “So do not worry about tomorrow, for tomorrow will bring worries of its own. Today’s trouble is enough for today\" (Matthew 6:34 NRSV). Pretty wise words, if you ask me...and your poem exudes such wisdom. Well done, arqios! 🙏❤️
December 28th, 2024 09:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reminds of an old lesson that someone pretty significant in world history and religion may have said once, “So do not worry about tomorrow, for tomorrow will bring worries of its own. Today’s trouble is enough for today\" (Matthew 6:34 NRSV). Pretty wise words, if you ask me...and your poem exudes such wisdom. Well done, arqios! 🙏❤️
December 28th, 2024 09:27
under pressure
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is always there for us arqios.
Andy
December 28th, 2024 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is always there for us arqios.
Andy
December 28th, 2024 02:51
under pressure
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Two thumbs up!
Awesomazing poem,
I can feel the tension ,
the life\'s pressures
throughout each line and
in the end, the resilience
shining through! 🌟🌟🌟
Thanks for sharing 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 27th, 2024 20:41
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Two thumbs up!
Awesomazing poem,
I can feel the tension ,
the life\'s pressures
throughout each line and
in the end, the resilience
shining through! 🌟🌟🌟
Thanks for sharing 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 27th, 2024 20:41
under pressure
Tristan Robert Lange said:
OMG. For real. 🤯 This, my friend, is transcendent! 💯 the stuff wisdom is made of. This 5-word montage is just wow. Honestly I came in thinking...\"QUEEEEEEEEN!!!!!\" and smiled when I saw the video. And yes, of course, I watched and rocked to that brilliant song. But friend, what you delivered here is beyond just brilliant...it is transcendent. (Not knocking Queen...they\'re transcendent too...as is Under Pressure)...but wow! Just wow! 🌹🌹🌹🌹👏👏👏 Well done! ❤️
December 27th, 2024 17:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
OMG. For real. 🤯 This, my friend, is transcendent! 💯 the stuff wisdom is made of. This 5-word montage is just wow. Honestly I came in thinking...\"QUEEEEEEEEN!!!!!\" and smiled when I saw the video. And yes, of course, I watched and rocked to that brilliant song. But friend, what you delivered here is beyond just brilliant...it is transcendent. (Not knocking Queen...they\'re transcendent too...as is Under Pressure)...but wow! Just wow! 🌹🌹🌹🌹👏👏👏 Well done! ❤️
December 27th, 2024 17:37
under pressure
Neville said:
Guilt is surely the most painful of human emotions .. for those of course appropriately wired to experience it .. there are undoubtedly those who are immune ..
December 27th, 2024 11:59
Neville said:
Guilt is surely the most painful of human emotions .. for those of course appropriately wired to experience it .. there are undoubtedly those who are immune ..
December 27th, 2024 11:59
under pressure
Poetic Licence said:
The pressures and guilts of life we carry, how i wish we could unshakle completely. Enjoyed the read
December 27th, 2024 10:28
Poetic Licence said:
The pressures and guilts of life we carry, how i wish we could unshakle completely. Enjoyed the read
December 27th, 2024 10:28
under pressure
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s title reminded me of Queen\'s song Under Pressure. Pressure treated lumber lasts longer. The forces around us temper us and give us strength. A lovely write my friend
December 27th, 2024 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s title reminded me of Queen\'s song Under Pressure. Pressure treated lumber lasts longer. The forces around us temper us and give us strength. A lovely write my friend
December 27th, 2024 08:37
through the eyes of a stranger
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words arqios and so true, many of my poems are born through people watching.
Andy
December 27th, 2024 02:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words arqios and so true, many of my poems are born through people watching.
Andy
December 27th, 2024 02:03
through the eyes of a stranger
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 clapping!
A stunning poem!! 🤩
The observation of
an unseen poet,
capturing the essence
Of humanity! 👍 👍
Great lines , great read,
articulately penned!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 26th, 2024 22:13
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 clapping!
A stunning poem!! 🤩
The observation of
an unseen poet,
capturing the essence
Of humanity! 👍 👍
Great lines , great read,
articulately penned!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 26th, 2024 22:13
through the eyes of a stranger
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is amazing.The humble reader is taken on a journey of life that few can appreciate. Reminds me of the great T.S.Eliot. It is packed full of memorable lines.Sorry I had to read it twice to appreciate it.
December 26th, 2024 15:13
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is amazing.The humble reader is taken on a journey of life that few can appreciate. Reminds me of the great T.S.Eliot. It is packed full of memorable lines.Sorry I had to read it twice to appreciate it.
December 26th, 2024 15:13
Christmas Glow
Cassie58 said:
We had a beautiful day, continuing with the traditions I learned from my parents and grandparents. Our home was central to the gathering of family. Nice to get the different generations together. Well aware this isn’t the case for everyone. Hope your day was super arqios. We had Christmas glow. Hope you did too. Lovely poem. Thanks.
December 26th, 2024 13:55
Cassie58 said:
We had a beautiful day, continuing with the traditions I learned from my parents and grandparents. Our home was central to the gathering of family. Nice to get the different generations together. Well aware this isn’t the case for everyone. Hope your day was super arqios. We had Christmas glow. Hope you did too. Lovely poem. Thanks.
December 26th, 2024 13:55
through the eyes of a stranger
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...the unnoticed poet...an observer...the world (in all its beauty and ugliness) the muse. Well done, my friend! I can absolutely relate to this! 🌹👏
December 26th, 2024 13:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...the unnoticed poet...an observer...the world (in all its beauty and ugliness) the muse. Well done, my friend! I can absolutely relate to this! 🌹👏
December 26th, 2024 13:30
through the eyes of a stranger
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely way off describing people observation, which can apply to many more than just poets, the artistic spectrum. Really enjoyed the read
December 26th, 2024 05:45
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely way off describing people observation, which can apply to many more than just poets, the artistic spectrum. Really enjoyed the read
December 26th, 2024 05:45
through the eyes of a stranger
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful vision of a poet looking upon a world that is unaware of his presence. Very nicely written. Cryptic
December 26th, 2024 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful vision of a poet looking upon a world that is unaware of his presence. Very nicely written. Cryptic
December 26th, 2024 04:07
Christmas Glow
Goldfinch60 said:
This is how it used to be but unfortunately those who brought the families together at Christmas are no longer with us.
Andy
December 26th, 2024 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
This is how it used to be but unfortunately those who brought the families together at Christmas are no longer with us.
Andy
December 26th, 2024 02:44
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