Comments received on poems by arqios
ever closer
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet this is so incredibly creative. Is it indeed your voice that I hear reading this poem? If so, I love hearing these wonderful words spoken from the mouth of the creator. You have captured so well our subconscious surrender to the rumblings of the world, as they become the background noise of life. This truly is such a fav!
January 29th, 2023 16:20
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet this is so incredibly creative. Is it indeed your voice that I hear reading this poem? If so, I love hearing these wonderful words spoken from the mouth of the creator. You have captured so well our subconscious surrender to the rumblings of the world, as they become the background noise of life. This truly is such a fav!
January 29th, 2023 16:20
Why do we trust in you?
Neville said:
sadly, there are far too many sullied once pristine sheets .. well poemed sir ........................ Neville
January 28th, 2023 13:29
Neville said:
sadly, there are far too many sullied once pristine sheets .. well poemed sir ........................ Neville
January 28th, 2023 13:29
Why do we trust in you?
Bella Shepard said:
So relevant and succinctly versed dear poet. You\'ve hit the proverbial nail on the head. How long ago was it that we buried trust? I don\'t remember being invited to the funeral. A great write!
January 28th, 2023 11:48
Bella Shepard said:
So relevant and succinctly versed dear poet. You\'ve hit the proverbial nail on the head. How long ago was it that we buried trust? I don\'t remember being invited to the funeral. A great write!
January 28th, 2023 11:48
Why do we trust in you?
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Why do I trust in KP? I don\'t, not for one second! lol.
January 28th, 2023 11:34
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Why do I trust in KP? I don\'t, not for one second! lol.
January 28th, 2023 11:34
commit to pen
L. B. Mek said:
\'with you ever my stay
and all that you are
steady me along the way\'
nuanced wisdom, distilled
a great write, dear Poet
January 23rd, 2023 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
\'with you ever my stay
and all that you are
steady me along the way\'
nuanced wisdom, distilled
a great write, dear Poet
January 23rd, 2023 04:35
commit to pen
orchidee said:
OK I will stay! You won\'t like it though, as I\'m gonna sing! Penance indeed.
January 22nd, 2023 07:08
orchidee said:
OK I will stay! You won\'t like it though, as I\'m gonna sing! Penance indeed.
January 22nd, 2023 07:08
fee free
Bella Shepard said:
You capture the freedom to be in such beautiful metaphor in this poem. How often I have a watched birds flying and wished that I could do the same.
January 20th, 2023 14:11
Bella Shepard said:
You capture the freedom to be in such beautiful metaphor in this poem. How often I have a watched birds flying and wished that I could do the same.
January 20th, 2023 14:11
fee free
L. B. Mek said:
costless wisdom
with no signup premium, I wonder
how long
before our very own words
come at a price, to formulate
and ponder?
(really related to the tone of your poetic voice
thanks for sharing dear poet)
January 20th, 2023 06:59
L. B. Mek said:
costless wisdom
with no signup premium, I wonder
how long
before our very own words
come at a price, to formulate
and ponder?
(really related to the tone of your poetic voice
thanks for sharing dear poet)
January 20th, 2023 06:59
fee free
orchidee said:
A fine flowing poem about a feathered friend flying free with no fee.
That\'\'s not easy to say without me teef (remember teef = teeth?! lol).
January 20th, 2023 03:32
orchidee said:
A fine flowing poem about a feathered friend flying free with no fee.
That\'\'s not easy to say without me teef (remember teef = teeth?! lol).
January 20th, 2023 03:32
once
Bella Shepard said:
What those \"once\" moments lead to is often not within our power to see. But hindsight will bring them into focus and perhaps see clearly why we took that road. Such a great write dear friend, each stanza ,a work of precision and beauty.
January 18th, 2023 12:53
Bella Shepard said:
What those \"once\" moments lead to is often not within our power to see. But hindsight will bring them into focus and perhaps see clearly why we took that road. Such a great write dear friend, each stanza ,a work of precision and beauty.
January 18th, 2023 12:53
once
Rocky Lagou said:
This poem is powerfully deep. It feels like a journey of a love tale through all the phases. \"Curse or blessing\" truly encapsulates the fearful unpredictability of relationships. Thank you for this poem dear poet.
January 18th, 2023 09:02
Rocky Lagou said:
This poem is powerfully deep. It feels like a journey of a love tale through all the phases. \"Curse or blessing\" truly encapsulates the fearful unpredictability of relationships. Thank you for this poem dear poet.
January 18th, 2023 09:02
once
orchidee said:
Once I looked in here - or maybe twice - to read this fine poem!
January 18th, 2023 08:43
orchidee said:
Once I looked in here - or maybe twice - to read this fine poem!
January 18th, 2023 08:43
once
Mr. Not said:
Your sentences are always so beautifully put together. There is always that \"once\". No matter, there will aways be a \"once\" to tell about, some of them you hold closer than others, but they all make you you.
January 18th, 2023 08:14
Mr. Not said:
Your sentences are always so beautifully put together. There is always that \"once\". No matter, there will aways be a \"once\" to tell about, some of them you hold closer than others, but they all make you you.
January 18th, 2023 08:14
once
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh those once experienced moments we thought would last forever and so clearly spelt out here that it took my mind way back to exchanges bathed with anticipation - -- once - -- great read and very relatable
January 18th, 2023 06:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh those once experienced moments we thought would last forever and so clearly spelt out here that it took my mind way back to exchanges bathed with anticipation - -- once - -- great read and very relatable
January 18th, 2023 06:25
CBD
orchidee said:
A good write CB.
CBD - not CBT? Cognitive Behavioural Therapy, whatever that is when it\'s \'at home\'. lol.
January 14th, 2023 09:13
orchidee said:
A good write CB.
CBD - not CBT? Cognitive Behavioural Therapy, whatever that is when it\'s \'at home\'. lol.
January 14th, 2023 09:13
pygmalean ivory
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely would appear to be on it\'s way again, Rik..... Who thought civilization could only evolve, improve itself??
January 14th, 2023 00:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely would appear to be on it\'s way again, Rik..... Who thought civilization could only evolve, improve itself??
January 14th, 2023 00:45
pygmalean ivory
Bella Shepard said:
All too familiar these days. I think of survivors, who thought they would never see this again. What heartache that another generation should experience the unthinkable. Very well put my friend.
January 13th, 2023 09:39
Bella Shepard said:
All too familiar these days. I think of survivors, who thought they would never see this again. What heartache that another generation should experience the unthinkable. Very well put my friend.
January 13th, 2023 09:39
I am not your cup of tea!
BoxMyHeart said:
Excellent! We cannot be everyone\'s cup of tea just our own WHISKEY.or Rum :) dark rum preferably
January 7th, 2023 08:09
BoxMyHeart said:
Excellent! We cannot be everyone\'s cup of tea just our own WHISKEY.or Rum :) dark rum preferably
January 7th, 2023 08:09
the silent quill
BoxMyHeart said:
This poem is magic.adding to my favourites, loved your wordsmanship.
I hope you may enjoy some of mine if you have the time. I have many please pick a few topics you might fancy and leave a comment for my growth as a poet.
January 7th, 2023 08:07
BoxMyHeart said:
This poem is magic.adding to my favourites, loved your wordsmanship.
I hope you may enjoy some of mine if you have the time. I have many please pick a few topics you might fancy and leave a comment for my growth as a poet.
January 7th, 2023 08:07
on the banks of the Oise
Bella Shepard said:
Such beautiful lines in honor of a beautiful and tortured soul. I love the last stanza which seems to epitomize what van Gogh loved to paint most. So lovingly written dear friend.
January 6th, 2023 14:28
Bella Shepard said:
Such beautiful lines in honor of a beautiful and tortured soul. I love the last stanza which seems to epitomize what van Gogh loved to paint most. So lovingly written dear friend.
January 6th, 2023 14:28
on the banks of the Oise
L. B. Mek said:
\'be tender, be kind while you may\'
a timeless, nugget
of humane wisdom!
brilliant! dear cherished Poet
Happy New Year
January 6th, 2023 07:26
L. B. Mek said:
\'be tender, be kind while you may\'
a timeless, nugget
of humane wisdom!
brilliant! dear cherished Poet
Happy New Year
January 6th, 2023 07:26
on the banks of the Oise
orchidee said:
Van Gogh? A troubled soul.
Fido says to me: \'No \'ear ear\' - \'hear, hear\' - jokes, please!\'
January 6th, 2023 07:04
orchidee said:
Van Gogh? A troubled soul.
Fido says to me: \'No \'ear ear\' - \'hear, hear\' - jokes, please!\'
January 6th, 2023 07:04
on the banks of the Oise
sorenbarrett said:
This write holds a feel of mystery and a sense of foreboding. The ending lines give me the feel that beauty gilds with gold a darker underlying issue. Very nicely done it reads smooth and is haunting
January 6th, 2023 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
This write holds a feel of mystery and a sense of foreboding. The ending lines give me the feel that beauty gilds with gold a darker underlying issue. Very nicely done it reads smooth and is haunting
January 6th, 2023 06:50
put a ring on it
Bella Shepard said:
Makes perfect sense my friend, and love the way you have presented the mystery of time that we grapple with.
January 5th, 2023 13:48
Bella Shepard said:
Makes perfect sense my friend, and love the way you have presented the mystery of time that we grapple with.
January 5th, 2023 13:48
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