Comments received on poems by arqios
a nag called Time
sonnie said:
I love this personification of time and the metaphors here. I love how you perfectly described that the battle with (her) is senseless. beautiful poem i truly enjoyed it.
May 23rd, 2022 21:30
sonnie said:
I love this personification of time and the metaphors here. I love how you perfectly described that the battle with (her) is senseless. beautiful poem i truly enjoyed it.
May 23rd, 2022 21:30
a nag called Time
L. B. Mek said:
You\'ve done it again
inspired me to reply
with my little scribbled effort..
what a wonderful example
of abstract poetry, purposed
to fuel
other peoples, creativity..
really, really clever
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
a great read!
(greet, bold
as every new-born\'s lament
since before we awoke
un-to sunlight
to moonlight, reality
there was no tic
in our heartbeat\'s, toc
and Time
had no power, in our oven
of existence
like, when we awake from sleep
and alarmingly, scrabble
to check
what time it is
so as to see, how long
we slept for..
but once awake, that alarm
nags at us
screeching its fury, at those
Juda\'s, seconds
in our ephemeral, runaway lives...)
May 23rd, 2022 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
You\'ve done it again
inspired me to reply
with my little scribbled effort..
what a wonderful example
of abstract poetry, purposed
to fuel
other peoples, creativity..
really, really clever
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
a great read!
(greet, bold
as every new-born\'s lament
since before we awoke
un-to sunlight
to moonlight, reality
there was no tic
in our heartbeat\'s, toc
and Time
had no power, in our oven
of existence
like, when we awake from sleep
and alarmingly, scrabble
to check
what time it is
so as to see, how long
we slept for..
but once awake, that alarm
nags at us
screeching its fury, at those
Juda\'s, seconds
in our ephemeral, runaway lives...)
May 23rd, 2022 05:52
fly south
Rocky Lagou said:
A wonderful haiku indeed! I imagined each word as I read it, and I was transported into your poetic world. Thanks!
May 20th, 2022 08:13
Rocky Lagou said:
A wonderful haiku indeed! I imagined each word as I read it, and I was transported into your poetic world. Thanks!
May 20th, 2022 08:13
Poet, Speak! or forever be silent
L. B. Mek said:
(then dear insightful Poet
whisper, to thy self:
\'Poesy, empower me
to light, paths
consumed by strife
and brighten, smiles, encased
within immeasurable, self-doubt
beginning, with my own
path and smile, of a life
Posey, befreind me
for eternity...\')
thanks for sharing, another great read!
\'and poetry is a dream
garbed in bilious words
whose raiment is laced
by meandering verse\'..
Amen!
May 19th, 2022 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
(then dear insightful Poet
whisper, to thy self:
\'Poesy, empower me
to light, paths
consumed by strife
and brighten, smiles, encased
within immeasurable, self-doubt
beginning, with my own
path and smile, of a life
Posey, befreind me
for eternity...\')
thanks for sharing, another great read!
\'and poetry is a dream
garbed in bilious words
whose raiment is laced
by meandering verse\'..
Amen!
May 19th, 2022 04:41
waterfront recital
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking sand castles were far from your mind on this little journey of pleasure.
May 16th, 2022 11:46
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking sand castles were far from your mind on this little journey of pleasure.
May 16th, 2022 11:46
waterfront recital
L. B. Mek said:
an impactful shorty, dear Poet
thanks for inspiring me to scribble
these feeble words
as a little, poetic reply:
(upon self excavated
lonesome islands
individual\'s, gather with their shadows
to ponder
that distance between ideal sensuality
and those brief minutes, conceived
as sexual proficiency milestones
and the churning sea, all around
reflects
that distorted disquiet
in our projected, mirage of solemnity..)
lets begin
\'with sex, is not a sin\'
and hope future
generations, will evolve
to a realisation
of physical connections
as their intimacy\'s, sincerity..
May 16th, 2022 06:46
L. B. Mek said:
an impactful shorty, dear Poet
thanks for inspiring me to scribble
these feeble words
as a little, poetic reply:
(upon self excavated
lonesome islands
individual\'s, gather with their shadows
to ponder
that distance between ideal sensuality
and those brief minutes, conceived
as sexual proficiency milestones
and the churning sea, all around
reflects
that distorted disquiet
in our projected, mirage of solemnity..)
lets begin
\'with sex, is not a sin\'
and hope future
generations, will evolve
to a realisation
of physical connections
as their intimacy\'s, sincerity..
May 16th, 2022 06:46
Goodbye, Dad
Rocky Lagou said:
My sincere condolences. I lost my mother at 13, and I know the heartache that is caused from a parent\'s loss. It\'s something unbearable, I hope you\'ll see better days, there\'s always hope.
May 13th, 2022 08:24
Rocky Lagou said:
My sincere condolences. I lost my mother at 13, and I know the heartache that is caused from a parent\'s loss. It\'s something unbearable, I hope you\'ll see better days, there\'s always hope.
May 13th, 2022 08:24
Goodbye, Dad
L. B. Mek said:
\'my eyelids scroll to see
and feel you waiting, free
through this jungle and
its concrete mountains
no longer away from thee\'..
may he rest in peace
4 makes it, a season of years
lets makes this, winter\'s season
for your loss
awaiting are the Spring and Summer
of acceptance and growth..
stay strong, dear Poet..
I hope
these words, would make him proud..
thanks for sharing
May 13th, 2022 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'my eyelids scroll to see
and feel you waiting, free
through this jungle and
its concrete mountains
no longer away from thee\'..
may he rest in peace
4 makes it, a season of years
lets makes this, winter\'s season
for your loss
awaiting are the Spring and Summer
of acceptance and growth..
stay strong, dear Poet..
I hope
these words, would make him proud..
thanks for sharing
May 13th, 2022 04:28
is it not your day?
Rocky Lagou said:
Yikes. Sounds quite somber, the \"real life\" is a bummer though; bills, responsibilities, you name it. Just hope you can make it out alive and thrive! Your poems are amazing!
May 10th, 2022 08:42
Rocky Lagou said:
Yikes. Sounds quite somber, the \"real life\" is a bummer though; bills, responsibilities, you name it. Just hope you can make it out alive and thrive! Your poems are amazing!
May 10th, 2022 08:42
is it not your day?
L. B. Mek said:
\'guttural screaming to a downbeat of debt
spewing silently from a tattered billfold.
What a present: timely to an empty fridge,
in the hallway, a growing pile of washing\'..
crisp clear imagery
a downbeat theme, but still
an intriguing read..
thanks for sharing
May 10th, 2022 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'guttural screaming to a downbeat of debt
spewing silently from a tattered billfold.
What a present: timely to an empty fridge,
in the hallway, a growing pile of washing\'..
crisp clear imagery
a downbeat theme, but still
an intriguing read..
thanks for sharing
May 10th, 2022 06:16
5-7-5 a.1
Paul Bell said:
That\'s quite strange. I remember, as a child, hundreds of sparrows on the wires. I don\'t see that now. Have they done something to the wires to prevent it, I wonder.
May 10th, 2022 04:47
Paul Bell said:
That\'s quite strange. I remember, as a child, hundreds of sparrows on the wires. I don\'t see that now. Have they done something to the wires to prevent it, I wonder.
May 10th, 2022 04:47
5-7-5 a.1
orchidee said:
Good write C.
Great title! Bit difficult to click on it, to select it. How about \"..........\" next time\"?!
May 7th, 2022 02:19
orchidee said:
Good write C.
Great title! Bit difficult to click on it, to select it. How about \"..........\" next time\"?!
May 7th, 2022 02:19
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