Comments received on poems by arqios
echoes of Babel
orchidee said:
Good write A. Wasn\'t the confusion of languages at Babel (Babble) so that mankind would not do even more evil than they were capable of? Of course, we can learn other languages now, and put them to good purposes - trade, commerce, treaties between nations, etc.
I dunno how those people would know when their tower had reached Heaven. When they saw the Pearly Gates, if they exist?!
March 15th, 2025 03:44
orchidee said:
Good write A. Wasn\'t the confusion of languages at Babel (Babble) so that mankind would not do even more evil than they were capable of? Of course, we can learn other languages now, and put them to good purposes - trade, commerce, treaties between nations, etc.
I dunno how those people would know when their tower had reached Heaven. When they saw the Pearly Gates, if they exist?!
March 15th, 2025 03:44
wide road of the exterior
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful tribute to a man who had such an impact on a country i have never had the privilege to visit, enjoyed the cascade
March 14th, 2025 09:11
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful tribute to a man who had such an impact on a country i have never had the privilege to visit, enjoyed the cascade
March 14th, 2025 09:11
wide road of the exterior
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! A tribute in a haiku sequence! Brilliant! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏 A fave for sure!!!
March 14th, 2025 09:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! A tribute in a haiku sequence! Brilliant! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏 A fave for sure!!!
March 14th, 2025 09:10
wide road of the exterior
arqios said:
This has not appeared to have fared well. Oh well.
March 14th, 2025 07:56
arqios said:
This has not appeared to have fared well. Oh well.
March 14th, 2025 07:56
wide road of the exterior
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing tribute to Basho.I sadly have not heard of him until now.Thank you for enlightening me.Wonderful poem
March 14th, 2025 05:03
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing tribute to Basho.I sadly have not heard of him until now.Thank you for enlightening me.Wonderful poem
March 14th, 2025 05:03
wide road of the exterior
sorenbarrett said:
This cascade of Haikus a most unique tribute to a man and his journey. Beautiful
March 14th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
This cascade of Haikus a most unique tribute to a man and his journey. Beautiful
March 14th, 2025 03:50
boarding pass
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"I am\" is indeed the key, as I\'m sure you already know. Turning that key and stepping into living realities takes a whole lot of patience, gratitude, persistence, faith and love, doesn\'t it?!
Great write.
March 13th, 2025 18:34
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"I am\" is indeed the key, as I\'m sure you already know. Turning that key and stepping into living realities takes a whole lot of patience, gratitude, persistence, faith and love, doesn\'t it?!
Great write.
March 13th, 2025 18:34
boarding pass
David Wakeling said:
Wonderful personificaition. Enjoyed reading. We are all universes that people can discover
March 13th, 2025 15:18
David Wakeling said:
Wonderful personificaition. Enjoyed reading. We are all universes that people can discover
March 13th, 2025 15:18
boarding pass
Neville said:
We shall have to wait and see, but until then, I shall hang on to the thought tight .. Neville
March 13th, 2025 08:25
Neville said:
We shall have to wait and see, but until then, I shall hang on to the thought tight .. Neville
March 13th, 2025 08:25
boarding pass
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In this I read one\'s imagination. Where it takes one is limitless. But the beauty of this poem is its openness to interpretation. This could be anything. If we think in terms of spirituality and religion, the boarding pass could be faith. In other situations...the possibilities are limitless. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 07:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In this I read one\'s imagination. Where it takes one is limitless. But the beauty of this poem is its openness to interpretation. This could be anything. If we think in terms of spirituality and religion, the boarding pass could be faith. In other situations...the possibilities are limitless. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 07:36
boarding pass
Poetic Licence said:
My imagination does a lot of flying and I don\'t always like the destinations, a lovely write
March 13th, 2025 06:56
Poetic Licence said:
My imagination does a lot of flying and I don\'t always like the destinations, a lovely write
March 13th, 2025 06:56
boarding pass
sorenbarrett said:
Believe me Cryptic I have flown to endless horizons and when I got there they looked the same as the ones I left. I do like the idea of metaphor in this poem of endless internal horizons where imagination does the flying. I fly that airline frequently and have lots of frequent flyer miles accrued. A fun read my friend.
March 13th, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
Believe me Cryptic I have flown to endless horizons and when I got there they looked the same as the ones I left. I do like the idea of metaphor in this poem of endless internal horizons where imagination does the flying. I fly that airline frequently and have lots of frequent flyer miles accrued. A fun read my friend.
March 13th, 2025 03:53
panhandler’s timepiece
Tom Dylan said:
Really enjoyed this. Some cracking lines. A fine write.
March 13th, 2025 03:27
Tom Dylan said:
Really enjoyed this. Some cracking lines. A fine write.
March 13th, 2025 03:27
panhandler’s timepiece
Goldfinch60 said:
Time changes its time in so many ways arqios.
Andy
March 13th, 2025 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Time changes its time in so many ways arqios.
Andy
March 13th, 2025 01:42
panhandler’s timepiece
David Wakeling said:
This is an insightful view of Old Father Time. Enjoyable.
March 12th, 2025 16:56
David Wakeling said:
This is an insightful view of Old Father Time. Enjoyable.
March 12th, 2025 16:56
panhandler’s timepiece
Poetic Licence said:
Time for me is ticking on this one as I ponder, an enjoyable and entertaining read
March 12th, 2025 08:00
Poetic Licence said:
Time for me is ticking on this one as I ponder, an enjoyable and entertaining read
March 12th, 2025 08:00
panhandler’s timepiece
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Time is ultimately a human construct. The earth turns without any recognition of it. The stars we see today could have imploded 500 light years ago. Even as I write this I cannot write \"outside of time\" because it is so embedded in language; yet, what is it really? Is this moment disconnected from every previous moment and from every moment to come? Or do we make a measurement of time to keep ourselves from coming completely unraveled in uncertainty? I believe the latter. We invent time to keep an order of things...because we need that order to survive. Or, it is possible that time is truly real in this plane of existence and if that is the case, the question becomes, what lies beyond time? Either way, the stuff that will keep one up pondering at night. And for that, this gets a fave. Well done, my friend. ⏱️🖤🐦⬛
March 12th, 2025 07:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Time is ultimately a human construct. The earth turns without any recognition of it. The stars we see today could have imploded 500 light years ago. Even as I write this I cannot write \"outside of time\" because it is so embedded in language; yet, what is it really? Is this moment disconnected from every previous moment and from every moment to come? Or do we make a measurement of time to keep ourselves from coming completely unraveled in uncertainty? I believe the latter. We invent time to keep an order of things...because we need that order to survive. Or, it is possible that time is truly real in this plane of existence and if that is the case, the question becomes, what lies beyond time? Either way, the stuff that will keep one up pondering at night. And for that, this gets a fave. Well done, my friend. ⏱️🖤🐦⬛
March 12th, 2025 07:47
panhandler’s timepiece
Mutley Ravishes said:
Armless pirates! How are they going to dig for treasure for crying out loud?!
March 12th, 2025 06:43
Mutley Ravishes said:
Armless pirates! How are they going to dig for treasure for crying out loud?!
March 12th, 2025 06:43
panhandler’s timepiece
orchidee said:
Do you prefer the ticking or the tocking of a clock?! lol.
March 12th, 2025 04:11
orchidee said:
Do you prefer the ticking or the tocking of a clock?! lol.
March 12th, 2025 04:11
panhandler’s timepiece
sorenbarrett said:
This one gives the mind space to wander. Like time itself it is in no hurry yet will not delay. A fun and most puzzling read.
March 12th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
This one gives the mind space to wander. Like time itself it is in no hurry yet will not delay. A fun and most puzzling read.
March 12th, 2025 03:56
a royal pain
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Esoteric, eh? A riddle for our indulgence. I could swear that\'s virtually an image of \"the British Josiah,\" but since I can\'t prove it...? Fascinating and excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and a tantalizing, damning poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
March 11th, 2025 23:30
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Esoteric, eh? A riddle for our indulgence. I could swear that\'s virtually an image of \"the British Josiah,\" but since I can\'t prove it...? Fascinating and excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and a tantalizing, damning poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
March 11th, 2025 23:30
a royal pain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...the game of kings and queens...where anyone could find out they\'re pawn. Well done on this my friend. It had a real classic ring to it, too. Loved it. 🌹👏
March 11th, 2025 13:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...the game of kings and queens...where anyone could find out they\'re pawn. Well done on this my friend. It had a real classic ring to it, too. Loved it. 🌹👏
March 11th, 2025 13:44
see you there
Neville said:
I\'m hooked on deep space too ...................... 🚀🌕🐄
March 11th, 2025 07:59
Neville said:
I\'m hooked on deep space too ...................... 🚀🌕🐄
March 11th, 2025 07:59
a royal pain
Poetic Licence said:
A reminder of our murderous past, how we have changed over time!!!, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 05:33
Poetic Licence said:
A reminder of our murderous past, how we have changed over time!!!, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 05:33
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