Comments received on poems by arqios



Glimmer of Frost
David Wakeling said:

Half the world, half the time is Frozen. This certainly paints a vivid image of the cold.Excellent

December 12th, 2024 03:54

Glimmer of Frost
Neville said:



Absolutely splendiferous ❄️☃️⛄🐧👍

December 12th, 2024 03:26

Glimmer of Frost
Goldfinch60 said:

The thoughts of finding treasure are soon dispelled arqios.

Andy

December 12th, 2024 02:51

Glimmer of Frost
Caring dove said:

Beautiful and interesting writing .. yet seems sad

December 12th, 2024 02:47

unlikely treasures
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

December 11th, 2024 22:09

Admonitions for a young or emerging poet
Poetic Licence said:

A must have for amateurs like me, a fantastic piece of poetry, wish i had found it before

December 11th, 2024 17:35

life\'s no faerie tale
NafisaSB said:

nice and positive message - beautiful

December 11th, 2024 06:53

unlikely treasures
Teddy.15 said:

Such wonderful metaphor and imagery, a wonderful piece of poetry, I was once told by a very wise poet that in fact it is the poet who should enjoy his poem, if others do then it\'s a bonus. Gorgeous dear arqios 🌹

December 11th, 2024 03:05

unlikely treasures
Goldfinch60 said:

Those words of the past often come back to be written down arqios.

Andy

December 11th, 2024 02:16

unlikely treasures
David Wakeling said:

Pickaxes unearthing jewels, Great work. It captures the creative mind

December 10th, 2024 15:24

unlikely treasures
Cassie58 said:

You have summed up a poet’s lot here. All those discarded thoughts and graveyard poems. Very relatable arqios. Nicely composed.

December 10th, 2024 12:47

unlikely treasures
Neville said:



its what we do and how we go about achieving it .. each individual word a potential gem or invaluable nugget .. building blocks .. a part of a whole .. a process of construction .. or something very much like that .. maybe .. Neville

December 10th, 2024 11:19

unlikely treasures
Tristan Robert Lange said:

A wonderful, bejeweled write, my friend! I always enjoy stopping by and reading your words! 🌹👏 Faved.

December 10th, 2024 10:16

Hidden Garden (reverse nonet)
Caring dove said:

Nice soft words .. I like your writing

December 10th, 2024 09:20

unlikely treasures
Poetic Licence said:

I have learnt a lot reading your poetry, i enjoy reading it and it always raises questions for me, this one makes me think of me. Thank you

December 10th, 2024 08:44

where is home?
Tom Dylan said:

A fine write. I found this rather thought-provoking, about the idea of what is home, and where is it. Nicely done.

December 10th, 2024 08:28

unlikely treasures
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 10th, 2024 08:18

unlikely treasures
sorenbarrett said:

A poet\'s work here. Miners of jems that come rough and uncut from the ground, They require polishing and cutting. Very nicely mined and cut in this poem

December 10th, 2024 06:14

where is home?
Goldfinch60 said:

Home is where the heart is arqios.

Andy

December 10th, 2024 02:10

where is home?
Thad Wilk said:

👏👏 Clapping!
Short and succinct
awesomazing brevity!
Great use of metaphor,
yup kindness is the key! 🗝️
Best regards ✌️ Thad

December 10th, 2024 00:07

life\'s no faerie tale
Kevin Hulme said:

Like It .

December 9th, 2024 18:41

where is home?
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is another example of great word economy! A lot said in such few words! Well done, friend! 🌹👏

December 9th, 2024 16:19

where is home?
orchidee said:

Good write A.

December 9th, 2024 10:09

life\'s no faerie tale
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done. A fine write.

December 9th, 2024 09:33

where is home?
Teddy.15 said:

Could be stuck in the middle of nowhere, beautiful dear arqios, much to reflect on in so little words elegant and I couldn\'t agree more about words. I believe Kindness is underrated my friend it really can go a long way. 🌹

December 9th, 2024 06:15

where is home?
sorenbarrett said:

Been there my friend and it is not where one wants to be. So nicely put in so few words

December 9th, 2024 06:14

where is home?
David Wakeling said:

This is intriguing.powerful metaphors here.

December 9th, 2024 05:54

where is home?
Caring dove said:

Interesting well written poem

Makes me think of those things that are missing .. then it doesn’t always feel like ‘ home ‘ does it

I get that feeling sometimes here , where I live doesn’t always feel like ‘ home

But I guess ‘ home ‘ can be when around certain people aswell

December 9th, 2024 05:36

life\'s no faerie tale
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful positive words arqios.

Andy

December 9th, 2024 03:12

life\'s no faerie tale
Neville said:



this is simply magical ..

December 9th, 2024 00:35



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