Comments received on poems by arqios
whale-watching season
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted write, few words but makes many points, mainly how we the wonderful human!!!, exploit and eventually destroy everything around us, enjoyed the read
March 18th, 2025 05:27
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted write, few words but makes many points, mainly how we the wonderful human!!!, exploit and eventually destroy everything around us, enjoyed the read
March 18th, 2025 05:27
whale-watching season
sorenbarrett said:
This one for me was ingenious. My mind reaching out for connections sees each line connected to protection and man\'s exploitation. Whether whale, oil, meat, wood, pollution, fish and the land itself. You have managed to take one concept and string all the otherwise unrelated lines together. Very well done or I\'m just off after a ghost.
March 18th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
This one for me was ingenious. My mind reaching out for connections sees each line connected to protection and man\'s exploitation. Whether whale, oil, meat, wood, pollution, fish and the land itself. You have managed to take one concept and string all the otherwise unrelated lines together. Very well done or I\'m just off after a ghost.
March 18th, 2025 04:02
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whats write for me said:
Your love of nature shines through. Passionate poetry and true.
March 17th, 2025 17:13
whats write for me said:
Your love of nature shines through. Passionate poetry and true.
March 17th, 2025 17:13
just my ☘️ luck
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re way, way too fun with this!!! Oh, but who can\'t but love you?! Lovely and teasing with excellent good humor and a touch of feigned trickery. Delightfully rendered with gorgeous imagery and a waltzing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 17th, 2025 16:14
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re way, way too fun with this!!! Oh, but who can\'t but love you?! Lovely and teasing with excellent good humor and a touch of feigned trickery. Delightfully rendered with gorgeous imagery and a waltzing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 17th, 2025 16:14
just my ☘️ luck
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Happy Saint Patrick\'s day, my dear friend! Loved this and what a homage on top of it. Reading this made me feel like it might be my lucky day! ☘️🎩☘️🌹👏
March 17th, 2025 13:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Happy Saint Patrick\'s day, my dear friend! Loved this and what a homage on top of it. Reading this made me feel like it might be my lucky day! ☘️🎩☘️🌹👏
March 17th, 2025 13:25
just my ☘️ luck
arqios said:
For all who observe or choose not to celebrate, just a timely topic of note: St Patrick’s Day 2025 ☘️☘️
March 17th, 2025 07:13
arqios said:
For all who observe or choose not to celebrate, just a timely topic of note: St Patrick’s Day 2025 ☘️☘️
March 17th, 2025 07:13
just my ☘️ luck
Poetic Licence said:
Brings a smile on a Monday morning, enjoyed the read
March 17th, 2025 06:07
Poetic Licence said:
Brings a smile on a Monday morning, enjoyed the read
March 17th, 2025 06:07
just my ☘️ luck
sorenbarrett said:
Well timed this one does, now that you mention it, remind me of that song. A fun read.
March 17th, 2025 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
Well timed this one does, now that you mention it, remind me of that song. A fun read.
March 17th, 2025 06:05
just my ☘️ luck
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done! This made me smile. Happy St Patrick\'s Day, mate!
March 17th, 2025 03:33
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done! This made me smile. Happy St Patrick\'s Day, mate!
March 17th, 2025 03:33
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Goldfinch60 said:
Walking in Natures realm is so enlightening arqios.
Andy
March 17th, 2025 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking in Natures realm is so enlightening arqios.
Andy
March 17th, 2025 02:12
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David Wakeling said:
Wow amazing poetry. Nature at her best and we get to witness it.Good to be alive.
March 16th, 2025 18:24
David Wakeling said:
Wow amazing poetry. Nature at her best and we get to witness it.Good to be alive.
March 16th, 2025 18:24
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Cheeky Missy said:
Oh! How deliciously gorgeous tis, laden with nigh exquisite imagery and, if read aloud as poetry is to properly be indulged, the soul is nearly absorbed into the vision, swallowed by the same whose poignancy hauntingly echoes. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it!
March 16th, 2025 12:12
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh! How deliciously gorgeous tis, laden with nigh exquisite imagery and, if read aloud as poetry is to properly be indulged, the soul is nearly absorbed into the vision, swallowed by the same whose poignancy hauntingly echoes. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it!
March 16th, 2025 12:12
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Serene Sunday morning poetry to blow the mind with profound truth. Well done, my friend! Your use of the forest and nature here is masterful. 🌲🌴🌳🌿🌿🌼🍄🌵
March 16th, 2025 07:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Serene Sunday morning poetry to blow the mind with profound truth. Well done, my friend! Your use of the forest and nature here is masterful. 🌲🌴🌳🌿🌿🌼🍄🌵
March 16th, 2025 07:47
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sorenbarrett said:
This poem made me feel right at home. I live with all this a hundred and fifty feet from my door. A lovely write that encapsulates the experience of taking a walk through the forest, woods, mato, jungle whatever you want to call it. Loved it
March 16th, 2025 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem made me feel right at home. I live with all this a hundred and fifty feet from my door. A lovely write that encapsulates the experience of taking a walk through the forest, woods, mato, jungle whatever you want to call it. Loved it
March 16th, 2025 06:14
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Poetic Licence said:
People forget how magical a forest or woods can be, nature thriving in it\'s natural habitat, the sounds, smells and the noise just brings a sense of connecting with nature, lovely write
March 16th, 2025 05:35
Poetic Licence said:
People forget how magical a forest or woods can be, nature thriving in it\'s natural habitat, the sounds, smells and the noise just brings a sense of connecting with nature, lovely write
March 16th, 2025 05:35
echoes of Babel
Cheeky Missy said:
I have read, and reread this eloquent cry of the poet\'s soul, that whisper in the gloaming where few hear, and methinks I know, or rather, understand better what I never realized before. It\'s not the disunity. No. It\'s our head. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a gripping, haunting poignancy whose voice lingers. Thank you for sharing.
March 15th, 2025 19:16
Cheeky Missy said:
I have read, and reread this eloquent cry of the poet\'s soul, that whisper in the gloaming where few hear, and methinks I know, or rather, understand better what I never realized before. It\'s not the disunity. No. It\'s our head. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a gripping, haunting poignancy whose voice lingers. Thank you for sharing.
March 15th, 2025 19:16
echoes of Babel
David Wakeling said:
This is brilliant. So well written and poetic. I felt like taking a journey finally searching for meaning.Excellent mi amigo
March 15th, 2025 15:30
David Wakeling said:
This is brilliant. So well written and poetic. I felt like taking a journey finally searching for meaning.Excellent mi amigo
March 15th, 2025 15:30
echoes of Babel
Poetic Licence said:
I don\'t know who babel is,my sense from this write is remembering days past and how things might have been and searching for a way to get back to them, for people to be heard and listened to again, apologies if wrong, enjoyed the read
March 15th, 2025 05:31
Poetic Licence said:
I don\'t know who babel is,my sense from this write is remembering days past and how things might have been and searching for a way to get back to them, for people to be heard and listened to again, apologies if wrong, enjoyed the read
March 15th, 2025 05:31
echoes of Babel
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! I have heard this Bible (fable) used to explain many things even as an analogy of the development of language from its original roots through proto European and on to us, but never as a metaphor for individual relationships and their breakdown in communication. I works so well in the initial unity of a relationship where all is shared and time is spent in communication and its erosion and demise through lack of communication net even understanding each other any more. There are other metaphors that can be take from this but this one struck me. Very well done Cryptic
March 15th, 2025 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! I have heard this Bible (fable) used to explain many things even as an analogy of the development of language from its original roots through proto European and on to us, but never as a metaphor for individual relationships and their breakdown in communication. I works so well in the initial unity of a relationship where all is shared and time is spent in communication and its erosion and demise through lack of communication net even understanding each other any more. There are other metaphors that can be take from this but this one struck me. Very well done Cryptic
March 15th, 2025 05:27
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