Comments received on poems by arqios



tidy groomy trim
orchidee said:

I\'m glad someone\'s integuments are trim. It\'s all right for some, having trim integuments! I might faint if I didn\'t know what they were. lol.

August 4th, 2022 01:55

pact
tallisman said:

Lovely words…

August 2nd, 2022 12:55

pact
orchidee said:

Good write CB.
Hope me teef don\'t flow away anywhere. I talk some rubbish. lol.

August 2nd, 2022 11:28

pact
L. B. Mek said:

if you, but
thread
a reminiscing
nod
my way, once
in a while
oh, poetic kin
of mine...

August 2nd, 2022 05:16

restless
Bella Shepard said:

A wonderful, thought provoking poem dear poet.

August 1st, 2022 16:14

restless
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

August 1st, 2022 14:04

promise
Bella Shepard said:

I\'m lost in \"dusky swirls of distant pealing thunder\", beautiful imagery, beautiful words!

July 31st, 2022 10:42

promise
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

July 31st, 2022 10:10

branches of a tree
Bella Shepard said:

I love your shape poem! I see that beautiful tree summer green, with the nest that was home to hatchlings who now come to my feeder. What would we do without their beauty?

July 30th, 2022 13:57

silent glow
thinkerbell said:

Beautifully written piece of poetry 😍

July 30th, 2022 11:28

branches of a tree
orchidee said:

Good write CB. I saw some pines. No branches on most of them for about 30 feet - maybe more.

July 30th, 2022 01:32

summer streets
orchidee said:

A fine haiku CB.

July 29th, 2022 13:29

some things we overlook
orchidee said:

I\'m not overlooking this fine write CB.

July 28th, 2022 08:35

home
Neville said:



yet sadly, home is all too often where the hurt is ........................... Neville

July 28th, 2022 03:19

silent glow
tallisman said:

Superb and clever!

July 27th, 2022 14:30

silent glow
Bella Shepard said:

Such beautiful emotion, expressed so beautifully. Simple, true, fav!

July 27th, 2022 09:40

silent glow
Neville said:


I seriously hope that this little work of poetic art gets all the attention and recognition that it so writefully deserves ............... Neville


July 27th, 2022 09:36

silent glow
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

July 27th, 2022 09:18

home
L. B. Mek said:

bricks, curated
into a custom fit, home
with tears of laughter and fear
as cement, a mix bag
of our experiences of life..
wonderful metaphor
thanks for sharing, dear Poet

July 26th, 2022 01:57

home
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

July 26th, 2022 01:32

Summer Moon
Neville said:



this is so cool crypticbard it would be sheer lunacy to suggest otherwise ..

July 25th, 2022 02:57

Summer Moon
Bella Shepard said:

So beautifully written, such a personality you\'ve given this glorious moon. It is my routine to bid her goodnight before I go to bed, and good morning when I step out for my walk. Love the moon, absolutely love this poem, such a fav.

July 20th, 2022 14:59

Summer Moon
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

July 20th, 2022 03:00

The Rhymester
Neville said:



awesome on it\'s own would be both an injustice and an understatement, so I shall say bloody awesome and just leave it at that ............. Neville



July 18th, 2022 03:18

The Rhymester
Bella Shepard said:

I had to read this aloud to do it justice; adding the inflections, pauses, timbre. Powerful and thought provoking. nothing trivial about this piece my friend, as the title might suggest.

July 10th, 2022 13:36

The Rhymester
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

July 10th, 2022 09:43

after war, peace
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

July 9th, 2022 01:44

what writing can be
orchidee said:

Good write CB.

July 7th, 2022 11:34

that focal moment
Neville said:


this is so good my poor old eyes can see for yards ..

all joking aside though, I think this is a little blinder .. and has clarified and confirmed my love of poetry ...


July 7th, 2022 02:00

at the table, with you
JudyStella said:

Very well written!!

July 5th, 2022 10:52



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