Comments received on poems by arqios
elemental forge
Dan Williams said:
What nice imagery. I can hear the wind. Nice work.
January 1st, 2025 01:46
Dan Williams said:
What nice imagery. I can hear the wind. Nice work.
January 1st, 2025 01:46
these are the days
Dan Williams said:
This just glides along. \"unappreciative lovers
roaming listlessly \" defines the tone. Well done.
January 1st, 2025 01:43
Dan Williams said:
This just glides along. \"unappreciative lovers
roaming listlessly \" defines the tone. Well done.
January 1st, 2025 01:43
these are the days
Thad Wilk said:
A great poem to end
2024!! 👍😁
May in 2025 you
penn many, many more!! 🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
PS: Happy New Year!! 🕛🥂🎉🥳
December 31st, 2024 23:07
Thad Wilk said:
A great poem to end
2024!! 👍😁
May in 2025 you
penn many, many more!! 🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
PS: Happy New Year!! 🕛🥂🎉🥳
December 31st, 2024 23:07
these are the days
David Wakeling said:
Days nights and mornings.Now that covers it all.I liked the cadence of this poem very musical.Well done
December 31st, 2024 07:26
David Wakeling said:
Days nights and mornings.Now that covers it all.I liked the cadence of this poem very musical.Well done
December 31st, 2024 07:26
these are the days
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful way to end out the year, my friend! Here’s to a brilliant New Year! 🥳
December 31st, 2024 06:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful way to end out the year, my friend! Here’s to a brilliant New Year! 🥳
December 31st, 2024 06:38
these are the days
Teddy.15 said:
Gorgeous, my favourite place is the kitchen I love to cook. 🌹 Happy New year 🌹
December 31st, 2024 05:42
Teddy.15 said:
Gorgeous, my favourite place is the kitchen I love to cook. 🌹 Happy New year 🌹
December 31st, 2024 05:42
these are the days
sorenbarrett said:
Open one\'s eyes to the glory around us and be grateful for that. Too often ignored or not enjoyed we let splendor pass us by. Carpe Diem Happy New Year
December 31st, 2024 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Open one\'s eyes to the glory around us and be grateful for that. Too often ignored or not enjoyed we let splendor pass us by. Carpe Diem Happy New Year
December 31st, 2024 04:09
these are the days
Poetic Licence said:
Whatever your doing have a great new year, enjoyed the read
December 31st, 2024 03:39
Poetic Licence said:
Whatever your doing have a great new year, enjoyed the read
December 31st, 2024 03:39
elemental forge
Goldfinch60 said:
New life will be there for us arqios.
Andy
December 31st, 2024 03:04
Goldfinch60 said:
New life will be there for us arqios.
Andy
December 31st, 2024 03:04
third wheel
NafisaSB said:
i agree that one\'s own company is the best there is, as long as it\'s positive
beautiful poem
December 31st, 2024 00:05
NafisaSB said:
i agree that one\'s own company is the best there is, as long as it\'s positive
beautiful poem
December 31st, 2024 00:05
elemental forge
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Terrific poem
awesome imagery!!
Great word choices,
penned superbly!! 🤩
Thanks for sharing my friend! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 30th, 2024 22:32
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Terrific poem
awesome imagery!!
Great word choices,
penned superbly!! 🤩
Thanks for sharing my friend! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 30th, 2024 22:32
elemental forge
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poetry and meaningful too. Rebirth and renewal, just lovely arqios. All good wishes for the new year.
December 30th, 2024 14:06
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poetry and meaningful too. Rebirth and renewal, just lovely arqios. All good wishes for the new year.
December 30th, 2024 14:06
elemental forge
Poetic Licence said:
Out with old and in with the new, enjoyed the read
December 30th, 2024 09:57
Poetic Licence said:
Out with old and in with the new, enjoyed the read
December 30th, 2024 09:57
elemental forge
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love the feel of renewal and rebirth throughout. Nothing stays the same through time, yet the change brings renewal and rebirth. Not sure if that was your intent, but that is how it is speaking to me this morning! Regardless, wonderful work my friend! 🌹👏 Faved!
December 30th, 2024 09:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love the feel of renewal and rebirth throughout. Nothing stays the same through time, yet the change brings renewal and rebirth. Not sure if that was your intent, but that is how it is speaking to me this morning! Regardless, wonderful work my friend! 🌹👏 Faved!
December 30th, 2024 09:18
third wheel
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes , I like that , and can understand all that you say.
I suppose ‘Poets’ are all Observers of life and Relationships. Good one.
December 30th, 2024 09:13
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes , I like that , and can understand all that you say.
I suppose ‘Poets’ are all Observers of life and Relationships. Good one.
December 30th, 2024 09:13
third wheel
Goldfinch60 said:
Those last lines are so very true arqios.
Andy
December 30th, 2024 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Those last lines are so very true arqios.
Andy
December 30th, 2024 02:50
third wheel
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This poem beautifully captures the evolution from loneliness to self-discovery! 🌙✨ Your vivid imagery of the “third wheel” transforming from a haunting shadow to a sanctuary is extremely powerful, my dear friend. I also really love how you portray the poet’s journey - from feeling alienated in crowded spaces to finding strength in solitude. The line “crafting lines that bind their solitude” is particularly striking, and it speaks to me of how art can be both an expression of isolation and a bridge to self-connection. That really resonates with me and, I would imagine, most poets/aritists. Anyway, I could go on...but needless to say this is an easy fave for me! 🌹👏 Well done!
December 29th, 2024 16:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This poem beautifully captures the evolution from loneliness to self-discovery! 🌙✨ Your vivid imagery of the “third wheel” transforming from a haunting shadow to a sanctuary is extremely powerful, my dear friend. I also really love how you portray the poet’s journey - from feeling alienated in crowded spaces to finding strength in solitude. The line “crafting lines that bind their solitude” is particularly striking, and it speaks to me of how art can be both an expression of isolation and a bridge to self-connection. That really resonates with me and, I would imagine, most poets/aritists. Anyway, I could go on...but needless to say this is an easy fave for me! 🌹👏 Well done!
December 29th, 2024 16:51
third wheel
Neville said:
Such exquisite ink so precisely and purposefully laid, now able to rest here framed for eternity .. excellent arqios, absolutely exquisite .. Neville
December 29th, 2024 13:09
Neville said:
Such exquisite ink so precisely and purposefully laid, now able to rest here framed for eternity .. excellent arqios, absolutely exquisite .. Neville
December 29th, 2024 13:09
third wheel
Michael Edwards said:
A great write - I\'m quite jealous lol 😂😂
December 29th, 2024 10:51
Michael Edwards said:
A great write - I\'m quite jealous lol 😂😂
December 29th, 2024 10:51
third wheel
aDarkerMind said:
a work of art indeed....
and one to favour.
enjoyed every line;
December 29th, 2024 09:28
aDarkerMind said:
a work of art indeed....
and one to favour.
enjoyed every line;
December 29th, 2024 09:28
third wheel
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about losing a wheel on a tricycle or summat, me being highly unimaginative at times! lol.
December 29th, 2024 09:15
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about losing a wheel on a tricycle or summat, me being highly unimaginative at times! lol.
December 29th, 2024 09:15
third wheel
Poetic Licence said:
Quite frighting how accurate this poem is, even though written in a beautiful form it makes a [powerful statement, really enjoyed.
December 29th, 2024 07:22
Poetic Licence said:
Quite frighting how accurate this poem is, even though written in a beautiful form it makes a [powerful statement, really enjoyed.
December 29th, 2024 07:22
third wheel
sorenbarrett said:
This is too true to be comfortable Cryptic and yet it sprouts from the pen like a new plant.
December 29th, 2024 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
This is too true to be comfortable Cryptic and yet it sprouts from the pen like a new plant.
December 29th, 2024 05:30
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