Comments received on poems by arqios
tango of us
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely piece of evocative writing, thank you Arqios
December 3rd, 2024 05:37
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely piece of evocative writing, thank you Arqios
December 3rd, 2024 05:37
Boy and Bonnet
NafisaSB said:
so beautiful, so touching, and so much love passing back and fro
fantastic
December 3rd, 2024 00:44
NafisaSB said:
so beautiful, so touching, and so much love passing back and fro
fantastic
December 3rd, 2024 00:44
where I could no longer go home
Thad Wilk said:
A very poignant 😢
and thought provoking write!
I took a plane to visit my
place where I was born, it
changed so much in only
ten years, clubs gone, movie
theaters abandoned, just
didn\'t seem like my old
home town any more..
Anywho, thanks for sharing
a great read indeed!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 2nd, 2024 23:41
Thad Wilk said:
A very poignant 😢
and thought provoking write!
I took a plane to visit my
place where I was born, it
changed so much in only
ten years, clubs gone, movie
theaters abandoned, just
didn\'t seem like my old
home town any more..
Anywho, thanks for sharing
a great read indeed!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 2nd, 2024 23:41
where I could no longer go home
Doggerel Dave said:
A polished write. ....I cannot relate that to myself but as a reminder of the transience of life and place, You\'ve cracked it.
December 2nd, 2024 16:23
Doggerel Dave said:
A polished write. ....I cannot relate that to myself but as a reminder of the transience of life and place, You\'ve cracked it.
December 2nd, 2024 16:23
where I could no longer go home
Neville said:
You took me back to Betsy Drury\'s old ramshackle cottage (they said she was a witch) not far from my mothers pre-marital home in the wilds of Devon .. I have written about it often .. a very special place for me & mine .. muchly enjoyed .. Neville
December 2nd, 2024 08:45
Neville said:
You took me back to Betsy Drury\'s old ramshackle cottage (they said she was a witch) not far from my mothers pre-marital home in the wilds of Devon .. I have written about it often .. a very special place for me & mine .. muchly enjoyed .. Neville
December 2nd, 2024 08:45
where I could no longer go home
rin said:
I\'m the one driving the bulldozer.Yeah!
December 2nd, 2024 08:04
rin said:
I\'m the one driving the bulldozer.Yeah!
December 2nd, 2024 08:04
where I could no longer go home
sorenbarrett said:
Marvelously worded this poem rolls like waves on the sea. The beauty of the scene is cast in splendid images and is good enough by itself but below lies a deeper metaphor where in this life none of us can ever go home again. Time does not flow upstream.
December 2nd, 2024 06:12
sorenbarrett said:
Marvelously worded this poem rolls like waves on the sea. The beauty of the scene is cast in splendid images and is good enough by itself but below lies a deeper metaphor where in this life none of us can ever go home again. Time does not flow upstream.
December 2nd, 2024 06:12
where I could no longer go home
David Wakeling said:
This is really well constructed. I like the rhyme.It is a strange feeling to explore where you came from.It reminded me of my ancestry.Most of them were horse thieves.Great poem
December 2nd, 2024 06:02
David Wakeling said:
This is really well constructed. I like the rhyme.It is a strange feeling to explore where you came from.It reminded me of my ancestry.Most of them were horse thieves.Great poem
December 2nd, 2024 06:02
where I could no longer go home
Goldfinch60 said:
So many places where we used to live have been torn down arqios and it is such a shame for us in many cases.
Andy
December 2nd, 2024 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
So many places where we used to live have been torn down arqios and it is such a shame for us in many cases.
Andy
December 2nd, 2024 02:28
where I could no longer go home
Poetic Licence said:
A really pleasant read and i love the picture, Thank you
December 2nd, 2024 02:21
Poetic Licence said:
A really pleasant read and i love the picture, Thank you
December 2nd, 2024 02:21
Boy and Bonnet
Dan Williams said:
So very sweet. Hits home, I lost my Mom at age of eight, some comfort here. Thanks.
December 2nd, 2024 00:30
Dan Williams said:
So very sweet. Hits home, I lost my Mom at age of eight, some comfort here. Thanks.
December 2nd, 2024 00:30
a.c.r.o.n.y.m.s.
Thad Wilk said:
\" Clapping \"
What a real yummy treat indeed!
Yes, secrets in their shorthand! OMG
Thanks for sharing enjoyed the read!!
Best regards peace Thad
December 1st, 2024 19:25
Thad Wilk said:
\" Clapping \"
What a real yummy treat indeed!
Yes, secrets in their shorthand! OMG
Thanks for sharing enjoyed the read!!
Best regards peace Thad
December 1st, 2024 19:25
a.c.r.o.n.y.m.s.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love me some good acronyms and acrostics! This is a wonderful write friend. 🌹👏
December 1st, 2024 13:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love me some good acronyms and acrostics! This is a wonderful write friend. 🌹👏
December 1st, 2024 13:41
a.c.r.o.n.y.m.s.
Neville said:
I\'m not very good at this game .. but I know a good un when it crosses my path whatever the time of week it might be .. 😎👍
December 1st, 2024 06:54
Neville said:
I\'m not very good at this game .. but I know a good un when it crosses my path whatever the time of week it might be .. 😎👍
December 1st, 2024 06:54
a.c.r.o.n.y.m.s.
Teddy.15 said:
lol oh yes a great acrostic. Just because there is cheer and all. 🌹
December 1st, 2024 06:18
Teddy.15 said:
lol oh yes a great acrostic. Just because there is cheer and all. 🌹
December 1st, 2024 06:18
a.c.r.o.n.y.m.s.
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic this poem sends a hidden message. So often in poetry messages are sent through metaphor, analogies, and in parable form. These hidden messages like alphabet soup spell out hidden meanings. I often feel like an occultist When writing using symbols to convey meaning. This was a fun read, but one with a message.
December 1st, 2024 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic this poem sends a hidden message. So often in poetry messages are sent through metaphor, analogies, and in parable form. These hidden messages like alphabet soup spell out hidden meanings. I often feel like an occultist When writing using symbols to convey meaning. This was a fun read, but one with a message.
December 1st, 2024 05:40
A place where you belong
Poetic Licence said:
Very enjoyable read, what we are looking for a sense of belonging to something
December 1st, 2024 05:39
Poetic Licence said:
Very enjoyable read, what we are looking for a sense of belonging to something
December 1st, 2024 05:39
Boy and Bonnet
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes Yes and Yes . Lovely Poem . Nice One. Must be Sunny Days there now.
Here in Pom-Land it’s 🥶.
November 30th, 2024 21:28
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes Yes and Yes . Lovely Poem . Nice One. Must be Sunny Days there now.
Here in Pom-Land it’s 🥶.
November 30th, 2024 21:28
Boy and Bonnet
David Wakeling said:
What a delightful poem. Love is a many splendered thing.Enjoyed
November 30th, 2024 17:53
David Wakeling said:
What a delightful poem. Love is a many splendered thing.Enjoyed
November 30th, 2024 17:53
Boy and Bonnet
FrasMac said:
full of sweetness, this travels well to my senses.
November 30th, 2024 15:59
FrasMac said:
full of sweetness, this travels well to my senses.
November 30th, 2024 15:59
Boy and Bonnet
sorenbarrett said:
That’s very heartwarming and I’m sure all mothers feel the same. A very tender poem and nicely done.
November 30th, 2024 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
That’s very heartwarming and I’m sure all mothers feel the same. A very tender poem and nicely done.
November 30th, 2024 10:12
Boy and Bonnet
Neville said:
this has a very dated feel to it .. for a moment I thought Robert Herrick who I have a soft spot for .. but then it took off and I still liked it muchly .. Neville
November 30th, 2024 08:31
Neville said:
this has a very dated feel to it .. for a moment I thought Robert Herrick who I have a soft spot for .. but then it took off and I still liked it muchly .. Neville
November 30th, 2024 08:31
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