Comments received on poems by arqios
a feather called MacAroni
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ve no Machumour to speak of; however my mind boggles at thoughts of how you accumulated such a wide ranging collection, Rik.
October 20th, 2022 00:59
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ve no Machumour to speak of; however my mind boggles at thoughts of how you accumulated such a wide ranging collection, Rik.
October 20th, 2022 00:59
rude regret
orchidee said:
You using your quill pen for this?! Good write CB.
I didn\'t mean a poem for 50 days really, but we can both try that if we wish.
I meant I may write 50 poems (random number) about KP, but they would be terrifying - all about my marriage to her! lol
October 19th, 2022 01:50
orchidee said:
You using your quill pen for this?! Good write CB.
I didn\'t mean a poem for 50 days really, but we can both try that if we wish.
I meant I may write 50 poems (random number) about KP, but they would be terrifying - all about my marriage to her! lol
October 19th, 2022 01:50
moloch\'s dagger
Neville said:
Mr. O\'s got an awful lot to answer for CB .. but I do kinda like this if I\'m reading it correctly .. you can beat an egg, but you can\'t beat a good sacrifice this time o year ... :)
October 18th, 2022 09:25
Neville said:
Mr. O\'s got an awful lot to answer for CB .. but I do kinda like this if I\'m reading it correctly .. you can beat an egg, but you can\'t beat a good sacrifice this time o year ... :)
October 18th, 2022 09:25
licence to keel
sorenbarrett said:
All kinds are needed, comedy and tragedy, but of Shakespeare\'s works, I thing the tragedies are his greatest. It appeals more to deep emotion.
October 17th, 2022 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
All kinds are needed, comedy and tragedy, but of Shakespeare\'s works, I thing the tragedies are his greatest. It appeals more to deep emotion.
October 17th, 2022 11:33
licence to keel
orchidee said:
Orchlenge? Oh, my poem a day thingy Orch-challenge.
The 50 is that I said I might write 50 poems about KP - but who could bear them?! lol.
Oh I dunno - if writers\' block, just churn out some old bilge for the day! heehee.
October 17th, 2022 10:30
orchidee said:
Orchlenge? Oh, my poem a day thingy Orch-challenge.
The 50 is that I said I might write 50 poems about KP - but who could bear them?! lol.
Oh I dunno - if writers\' block, just churn out some old bilge for the day! heehee.
October 17th, 2022 10:30
licence to keel
Neville said:
which begs the question, \'did he keel over or just swoon\' .. :)
October 17th, 2022 06:52
Neville said:
which begs the question, \'did he keel over or just swoon\' .. :)
October 17th, 2022 06:52
licence to keel
Paul Bell said:
Great title.
Poets need tragedy, and more tragedy.
October 17th, 2022 04:25
Paul Bell said:
Great title.
Poets need tragedy, and more tragedy.
October 17th, 2022 04:25
licence to keel
Doggerel Dave said:
Sometimes, for some, poetry is the last refuge - and I wouldn\'t knock that, Rik.
Not for me. however my kind of verse allows the expression of fun (not much of that recently) and the occasional idea in accessible form....
Each to their own...
PS: I don\'t even understand \"2/50 orchlenge\"
Sort me out!
October 17th, 2022 04:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Sometimes, for some, poetry is the last refuge - and I wouldn\'t knock that, Rik.
Not for me. however my kind of verse allows the expression of fun (not much of that recently) and the occasional idea in accessible form....
Each to their own...
PS: I don\'t even understand \"2/50 orchlenge\"
Sort me out!
October 17th, 2022 04:05
through the night
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Rik, I used to do calligraphy.
Andy
October 17th, 2022 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Rik, I used to do calligraphy.
Andy
October 17th, 2022 01:32
through the night
Neville said:
I have now read through this little gem more times than I can remember and as I leave the page, I am still wearing my original smile .. a real & rare treat sir ....... Neville
October 16th, 2022 08:39
Neville said:
I have now read through this little gem more times than I can remember and as I leave the page, I am still wearing my original smile .. a real & rare treat sir ....... Neville
October 16th, 2022 08:39
through the night
orchidee said:
Good write CB. You started me off with a song: \'All through the night\'. I forgot the first line of it. Doh!
October 16th, 2022 07:12
orchidee said:
Good write CB. You started me off with a song: \'All through the night\'. I forgot the first line of it. Doh!
October 16th, 2022 07:12
advance of the hermit of Chester (1066 A.D.)
orchidee said:
Good write Norman, erm, CB!
October 14th, 2022 12:08
orchidee said:
Good write Norman, erm, CB!
October 14th, 2022 12:08
advance of the hermit of Chester (1066 A.D.)
Neville said:
I like a decent bit o history & this is just that ..
I blame Ragnar as much as anyone
N :)
October 14th, 2022 04:15
Neville said:
I like a decent bit o history & this is just that ..
I blame Ragnar as much as anyone
N :)
October 14th, 2022 04:15
until the next post
Doggerel Dave said:
Waiting for a dud response or wondering what you should pin next, Rik?
October 13th, 2022 05:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Waiting for a dud response or wondering what you should pin next, Rik?
October 13th, 2022 05:39
until the next post
orchidee said:
I thought this was a yearning to see the next postman, with their strikes, etc. Like finding gold nuggets. Doh!
Not all are on strike though, it seems. I see them around often. Or post-persons!
October 13th, 2022 03:18
orchidee said:
I thought this was a yearning to see the next postman, with their strikes, etc. Like finding gold nuggets. Doh!
Not all are on strike though, it seems. I see them around often. Or post-persons!
October 13th, 2022 03:18
until the next post
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Bit of Scottish there - Ach?!
October 13th, 2022 01:55
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
Bit of Scottish there - Ach?!
October 13th, 2022 01:55
until the next post
Goldfinch60 said:
Each post brings a new process to our lives Rik.
\"Aah, Bach\"
Andy
October 13th, 2022 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Each post brings a new process to our lives Rik.
\"Aah, Bach\"
Andy
October 13th, 2022 00:38
singularity
Paul Bell said:
Poetry is the start of the road , and when it meets fellow poets it starts to have meaning.
October 12th, 2022 04:33
Paul Bell said:
Poetry is the start of the road , and when it meets fellow poets it starts to have meaning.
October 12th, 2022 04:33
singularity
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh I agree Rik - poetry means travel through word-mountains to pen each hard step taken by the bard\'s lust for expression. - -- a pressure release valve it certainly is.
October 12th, 2022 02:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh I agree Rik - poetry means travel through word-mountains to pen each hard step taken by the bard\'s lust for expression. - -- a pressure release valve it certainly is.
October 12th, 2022 02:58
singularity
orchidee said:
Good write CB. I never knew there was so much in poetry. Well, I know now! lol.
Note to self: you often say that Orchi - I never knew there was so much in............whatever.
October 12th, 2022 02:13
orchidee said:
Good write CB. I never knew there was so much in poetry. Well, I know now! lol.
Note to self: you often say that Orchi - I never knew there was so much in............whatever.
October 12th, 2022 02:13
to be agreed
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - -- good and wise thinking and aptly imaged here Rik - -- and I agree wholeheartedly.
October 11th, 2022 08:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - -- good and wise thinking and aptly imaged here Rik - -- and I agree wholeheartedly.
October 11th, 2022 08:39
to be agreed
Doggerel Dave said:
Well yes - I personally have managed to disagree agreeably on several occasions, even here...but sometimes this just aint possible.
Sorry to bring personal experience into the mix - Quite possibly not the right moment to achieve an apogee position....
October 11th, 2022 04:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Well yes - I personally have managed to disagree agreeably on several occasions, even here...but sometimes this just aint possible.
Sorry to bring personal experience into the mix - Quite possibly not the right moment to achieve an apogee position....
October 11th, 2022 04:42
Strindberg Principle
Doggerel Dave said:
Prior to here, he was a playwright, after, he is by all accounts a \"polymath\" - the \'accounts\' being a lengthy Wikipedia article.
I\'d vote for him - seems he lead a chequered life, and had no trouble being vocal about his society, all and anything he distrusted. A searcher for truth - whether he found it or not is in many ways irrelevant.
Your poem is reflective of that I feel.
Let me know if I\'ve misread.
October 10th, 2022 20:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Prior to here, he was a playwright, after, he is by all accounts a \"polymath\" - the \'accounts\' being a lengthy Wikipedia article.
I\'d vote for him - seems he lead a chequered life, and had no trouble being vocal about his society, all and anything he distrusted. A searcher for truth - whether he found it or not is in many ways irrelevant.
Your poem is reflective of that I feel.
Let me know if I\'ve misread.
October 10th, 2022 20:20
Strindberg Principle
Paul Bell said:
I wonder if Strindberg knew he was slightly different from the rest of us. In saying that, he probably thought us as a pretty dull lot.
October 10th, 2022 10:46
Paul Bell said:
I wonder if Strindberg knew he was slightly different from the rest of us. In saying that, he probably thought us as a pretty dull lot.
October 10th, 2022 10:46
Strindberg Principle
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write Strindberg would be proud. naturalism or mysticism, either way it fits. The old fight between free will and determinism. Such a ring of duality, almost Taoist.
October 10th, 2022 10:34
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write Strindberg would be proud. naturalism or mysticism, either way it fits. The old fight between free will and determinism. Such a ring of duality, almost Taoist.
October 10th, 2022 10:34
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