Comments received on poems by arqios
in whispers hush
Goldfinch60 said:
That last line is so very true arqios.
Andy
October 22nd, 2024 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
That last line is so very true arqios.
Andy
October 22nd, 2024 01:30
jester’s truth
Neville said:
Blindingly brilliant and may such truth never to fall upon deaf ears .. Note to self, always check out the answers given before ticking the box in which you thought you found em .. neville
October 21st, 2024 06:34
Neville said:
Blindingly brilliant and may such truth never to fall upon deaf ears .. Note to self, always check out the answers given before ticking the box in which you thought you found em .. neville
October 21st, 2024 06:34
jester’s truth
sorenbarrett said:
As poetic as nature itself with hidden meaning as cryptic as the universe and as ephemoral as the sands
October 21st, 2024 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
As poetic as nature itself with hidden meaning as cryptic as the universe and as ephemoral as the sands
October 21st, 2024 06:21
Lmrk2410aa
sorenbarrett said:
This takes my mind to many areas first numerology and the meaning of numbers, cryptography and the securing of information, the very creation of symbols to represent meaning (as far as we know Sumerians being responsible for it in cuneriform writing) The further lines make it clear in great poetic style (Like scars that tell a tale,) a perfect line that I wish I had written. Letters and words as well as numbers are those scars. The last line sums it up so well and is a perfect finish
October 20th, 2024 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
This takes my mind to many areas first numerology and the meaning of numbers, cryptography and the securing of information, the very creation of symbols to represent meaning (as far as we know Sumerians being responsible for it in cuneriform writing) The further lines make it clear in great poetic style (Like scars that tell a tale,) a perfect line that I wish I had written. Letters and words as well as numbers are those scars. The last line sums it up so well and is a perfect finish
October 20th, 2024 06:02
Lmrk2410aa
Neville said:
This is so cool, .. I believe there are those who have lives ruled by them .. whereas I do so much, prefer letters ..
October 20th, 2024 04:24
Neville said:
This is so cool, .. I believe there are those who have lives ruled by them .. whereas I do so much, prefer letters ..
October 20th, 2024 04:24
Lmrk2410aa
Bobby O said:
I get that and it more than commentary , it’s Advice!
October 20th, 2024 02:30
Bobby O said:
I get that and it more than commentary , it’s Advice!
October 20th, 2024 02:30
in whispers hush
Doggerel Dave said:
Dedicated to all (everyone) who find their own pathways to deep meaning?
Talking love here, not infatuation, right?
Worthwhile contribution to the topic, Rik.
October 19th, 2024 19:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Dedicated to all (everyone) who find their own pathways to deep meaning?
Talking love here, not infatuation, right?
Worthwhile contribution to the topic, Rik.
October 19th, 2024 19:31
in whispers hush
Neville said:
that\'s the thing about love isn\'t it .. so very many facets .. writ about and pondered more than any other topic .. a proper poem sir and not a red rose or luv heart in sight .. 🍓👍
October 19th, 2024 13:39
Neville said:
that\'s the thing about love isn\'t it .. so very many facets .. writ about and pondered more than any other topic .. a proper poem sir and not a red rose or luv heart in sight .. 🍓👍
October 19th, 2024 13:39
in whispers hush
sorenbarrett said:
A sonnet of love indeed that spells the intricate web of love and how once spun it catches us victim. Like a cut diamond it has many facets that each have their own story and view and like that diamond held too tight it cuts. Very nice my friend
October 19th, 2024 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
A sonnet of love indeed that spells the intricate web of love and how once spun it catches us victim. Like a cut diamond it has many facets that each have their own story and view and like that diamond held too tight it cuts. Very nice my friend
October 19th, 2024 07:04
in the shadows
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure how political you wanted to make this Rik, but to me it is the call accompanying labor\'s struggle with capital everywhere. Great stuff.
October 18th, 2024 21:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure how political you wanted to make this Rik, but to me it is the call accompanying labor\'s struggle with capital everywhere. Great stuff.
October 18th, 2024 21:36
in the shadows
orchidee said:
I wondered if I could set a tune to this. The verses are almost in 8.8.8.8. (often used in some hymn tunes), plus the chorus in 8.7.8.6. Can\'t think of a tune just now though.
October 18th, 2024 11:06
orchidee said:
I wondered if I could set a tune to this. The verses are almost in 8.8.8.8. (often used in some hymn tunes), plus the chorus in 8.7.8.6. Can\'t think of a tune just now though.
October 18th, 2024 11:06
in the shadows
Neville said:
This brings to mind a kind of rallying call I imagine being sung in the dark and grim streets of early post war Britain .. It also reminds me of the troubled times of my own youth during the recession .. and so very many other things besides .. a great post arqios .. neville with a small N
October 18th, 2024 08:27
Neville said:
This brings to mind a kind of rallying call I imagine being sung in the dark and grim streets of early post war Britain .. It also reminds me of the troubled times of my own youth during the recession .. and so very many other things besides .. a great post arqios .. neville with a small N
October 18th, 2024 08:27
in the shadows
sorenbarrett said:
Not only a song, poem but a hymn. A battle cry if you would. I hear it raise as a gathering army comming to battle with life.
October 18th, 2024 07:01
sorenbarrett said:
Not only a song, poem but a hymn. A battle cry if you would. I hear it raise as a gathering army comming to battle with life.
October 18th, 2024 07:01
in memory’s wake
Goldfinch60 said:
That path has been found arqios and will always be there.
Andy
October 18th, 2024 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
That path has been found arqios and will always be there.
Andy
October 18th, 2024 01:13
ginkgo
Neville said:
excellent ink if you don\'t mind me saying .. wistfully yours a real fan .. Me
October 17th, 2024 07:11
Neville said:
excellent ink if you don\'t mind me saying .. wistfully yours a real fan .. Me
October 17th, 2024 07:11
in memory’s wake
sorenbarrett said:
Melancholic and haunting a reflection that glimers in the bottom of a dark well the font of inspiration. Lovely and haunting.
October 17th, 2024 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
Melancholic and haunting a reflection that glimers in the bottom of a dark well the font of inspiration. Lovely and haunting.
October 17th, 2024 05:59
in memory’s wake
Neville said:
No matter when it began exactly .. or how long I can make it last for .. that precise moment, despite so often trying to recollect it has always so far eluded me .. and I imagine might always do so .. a fine reflection my friend .. Neville
October 17th, 2024 04:49
Neville said:
No matter when it began exactly .. or how long I can make it last for .. that precise moment, despite so often trying to recollect it has always so far eluded me .. and I imagine might always do so .. a fine reflection my friend .. Neville
October 17th, 2024 04:49
in public view
sorenbarrett said:
A lesson too often learned by too many people. Pain is a negative reinforcement and is best used to prevent further dangerous behavior in such cases is seems the best solution. Nicely written with such a good flow
October 16th, 2024 08:02
sorenbarrett said:
A lesson too often learned by too many people. Pain is a negative reinforcement and is best used to prevent further dangerous behavior in such cases is seems the best solution. Nicely written with such a good flow
October 16th, 2024 08:02
ginkgo
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, well, a tidy little bit of exposure and neatly tied up lesson. While I\'m still disinclined to try it, this is very sweetly rendered with excellent imagery and none too subtle poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 15th, 2024 15:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, well, a tidy little bit of exposure and neatly tied up lesson. While I\'m still disinclined to try it, this is very sweetly rendered with excellent imagery and none too subtle poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 15th, 2024 15:35
ginkgo
Doggerel Dave said:
All of the above in a celebration of Ginkgo biloba. Been around for a very long time.... worked? I don\'t remember... Last line summary great, Rik.
October 15th, 2024 05:23
Doggerel Dave said:
All of the above in a celebration of Ginkgo biloba. Been around for a very long time.... worked? I don\'t remember... Last line summary great, Rik.
October 15th, 2024 05:23
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