Comments received on poems by arqios
ginkgo
sorenbarrett said:
Used to decrease aspects of dimentia seems a clue to the title\'s tie to the poem. The poem itself is masterful in its wording feeling wistful and the last line is genius in its tying of hope, regret and forgetfulness into their relationship. Lovelu
October 15th, 2024 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
Used to decrease aspects of dimentia seems a clue to the title\'s tie to the poem. The poem itself is masterful in its wording feeling wistful and the last line is genius in its tying of hope, regret and forgetfulness into their relationship. Lovelu
October 15th, 2024 05:12
a rude remorse
Goldfinch60 said:
We should never put down our pen arqois.
Andy
October 15th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
We should never put down our pen arqois.
Andy
October 15th, 2024 01:24
a rude remorse
sorenbarrett said:
Now Cryptic this one requires thought. I like to think of my ink well as a wishing well but sometimes it goes dry. Now people have said that what I write is sometimes rude but putting down the pen being rude that I\'ve never been accused. I guess you are right it would be the most rude to myself.
October 14th, 2024 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
Now Cryptic this one requires thought. I like to think of my ink well as a wishing well but sometimes it goes dry. Now people have said that what I write is sometimes rude but putting down the pen being rude that I\'ve never been accused. I guess you are right it would be the most rude to myself.
October 14th, 2024 05:07
The Burden of Upgrades
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic each stanza has its own depth and deep it goes. I initially was taken by the first stanza in its tightness of thought and expression so nicely worded. Upon second reading it was the second stanza that stood out and upon the third reading it was the third. Then the last two lines. Masterfully worded this sonnet might we say is a work of art.
October 13th, 2024 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic each stanza has its own depth and deep it goes. I initially was taken by the first stanza in its tightness of thought and expression so nicely worded. Upon second reading it was the second stanza that stood out and upon the third reading it was the third. Then the last two lines. Masterfully worded this sonnet might we say is a work of art.
October 13th, 2024 04:50
A Familiar Stranger
Doggerel Dave said:
Works for me as son - father relationship over time, and as such has a tone of veracity about it.
October 12th, 2024 13:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Works for me as son - father relationship over time, and as such has a tone of veracity about it.
October 12th, 2024 13:49
be-lightedly
sorenbarrett said:
Criptic this is a metaphor so applicable to many things from romance to work not done, ideas never implimented, intentions left undone, words not spoken and life not lived. A masterpiece lit
October 11th, 2024 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
Criptic this is a metaphor so applicable to many things from romance to work not done, ideas never implimented, intentions left undone, words not spoken and life not lived. A masterpiece lit
October 11th, 2024 07:29
no longer spectral, Brontës shall remain
sorenbarrett said:
Etched in stone can still be altered by someone else and memories can be changed with which history past and the present becomes something else. Reunification becomes possible
October 10th, 2024 19:52
sorenbarrett said:
Etched in stone can still be altered by someone else and memories can be changed with which history past and the present becomes something else. Reunification becomes possible
October 10th, 2024 19:52
no longer spectral, Brontës shall remain
MaxSmith said:
A lovely read, nicely penned,
October 10th, 2024 11:29
MaxSmith said:
A lovely read, nicely penned,
October 10th, 2024 11:29
dream slices
Neville said:
exquisite images dance before my eyes .. indeed stunning
October 10th, 2024 05:52
Neville said:
exquisite images dance before my eyes .. indeed stunning
October 10th, 2024 05:52
no longer spectral, Brontës shall remain
Neville said:
How time flies .. it never gets old tho does it .. poetry that is .. Neville
October 10th, 2024 05:08
Neville said:
How time flies .. it never gets old tho does it .. poetry that is .. Neville
October 10th, 2024 05:08
A Rare Edition
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work. I did that acestery dna thing...turns out, I\'m 25% Scottish.
October 9th, 2024 11:47
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work. I did that acestery dna thing...turns out, I\'m 25% Scottish.
October 9th, 2024 11:47
A Rare Edition
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Couldna profit Robbie Burns frae bonny Sco\'land...nay, the profit\'s all the sellers and marketers. Readers may find their ain way in\'t and leave the enjoyment at that, wherever they find it. But la, in lieu of the luxury of a copy, how exquisitely you\'ve capably rendered this, complete with a display to evocatively convey the delicious indulgence of an authentic copy. I wore me ain original 1881 printing of David M. Main\'s Treasury of English Sonnets to bits, having gratefully collected it from an old \"hole in the wall\" bookshop in MI 30 years ago March. Can\'t say I was a collector, but I certainly was thankful for obtaining it in mint condition, despite reading and rereading it to literal bits. Lovely and very beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 9th, 2024 07:36
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Couldna profit Robbie Burns frae bonny Sco\'land...nay, the profit\'s all the sellers and marketers. Readers may find their ain way in\'t and leave the enjoyment at that, wherever they find it. But la, in lieu of the luxury of a copy, how exquisitely you\'ve capably rendered this, complete with a display to evocatively convey the delicious indulgence of an authentic copy. I wore me ain original 1881 printing of David M. Main\'s Treasury of English Sonnets to bits, having gratefully collected it from an old \"hole in the wall\" bookshop in MI 30 years ago March. Can\'t say I was a collector, but I certainly was thankful for obtaining it in mint condition, despite reading and rereading it to literal bits. Lovely and very beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 9th, 2024 07:36
A Rare Edition
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel the history or virtually anything - how was it designed, how manufactured or made who (if not new) owned it previously… these feelings are intensified when dealing with antiques and old books -You have defined those feelings well here.
October 9th, 2024 07:13
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel the history or virtually anything - how was it designed, how manufactured or made who (if not new) owned it previously… these feelings are intensified when dealing with antiques and old books -You have defined those feelings well here.
October 9th, 2024 07:13
A Rare Edition
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and a great tribute to a great poet. Funny how as time passes some things are valued more while others are thrown out as valueless. If lucky enough to be petrified or fossilized then more value still what was once trash. Nicely written my friend
October 9th, 2024 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and a great tribute to a great poet. Funny how as time passes some things are valued more while others are thrown out as valueless. If lucky enough to be petrified or fossilized then more value still what was once trash. Nicely written my friend
October 9th, 2024 05:05
A Rare Edition
Neville said:
Hoots mon the noooo .. Tis verily good & a wee dram moooore .. a dubble 👍👍s up from me for sure .. But pray tell, is it true there be only eighty eight copies remaining?
October 9th, 2024 04:10
Neville said:
Hoots mon the noooo .. Tis verily good & a wee dram moooore .. a dubble 👍👍s up from me for sure .. But pray tell, is it true there be only eighty eight copies remaining?
October 9th, 2024 04:10
being an npc in their story
sorenbarrett said:
Now here my friend you have tapped into multiple meanings from not standing up for values and liberties threatened to AI and many more in between. In your cryptic style you have left the door open for interpretation and so nicely in style and form. Definately a favorite
October 7th, 2024 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Now here my friend you have tapped into multiple meanings from not standing up for values and liberties threatened to AI and many more in between. In your cryptic style you have left the door open for interpretation and so nicely in style and form. Definately a favorite
October 7th, 2024 04:40
by fiction of pen
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words my friend so poetic in form and word.
October 6th, 2024 18:40
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words my friend so poetic in form and word.
October 6th, 2024 18:40
look out tomorrow
sorenbarrett said:
A serious situation that I certainly hope works out well. My best wishes friend.
October 6th, 2024 18:30
sorenbarrett said:
A serious situation that I certainly hope works out well. My best wishes friend.
October 6th, 2024 18:30
verse on a hill
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully done Cryptic. Line after line building toward a meaningful end. The use of cliches to make something original. Brilliant
October 6th, 2024 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully done Cryptic. Line after line building toward a meaningful end. The use of cliches to make something original. Brilliant
October 6th, 2024 05:41
dream slices
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words to accompany stunning images my friend
October 3rd, 2024 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words to accompany stunning images my friend
October 3rd, 2024 04:33
rue the hay
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that goes far deeper than plants. A great metaphor for many things. Very nicely written
September 29th, 2024 19:32
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that goes far deeper than plants. A great metaphor for many things. Very nicely written
September 29th, 2024 19:32
mail carrier’s bill
Cheeky Missy said:
What the [*@#$%] is this?! Cryptic signifies nonsensical???? Nothing like interesting details in every little line where neither rhyme nor reason can see eye to eye. Lovely...
September 29th, 2024 19:27
Cheeky Missy said:
What the [*@#$%] is this?! Cryptic signifies nonsensical???? Nothing like interesting details in every little line where neither rhyme nor reason can see eye to eye. Lovely...
September 29th, 2024 19:27
mail carrier’s bill
sorenbarrett said:
I think I have seen this. A great image painted here. Good to read your poems again.
September 29th, 2024 19:26
sorenbarrett said:
I think I have seen this. A great image painted here. Good to read your poems again.
September 29th, 2024 19:26
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