Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
well?
sorenbarrett said:
Anger pervades this poem and so it should with so many complaining of what they should be grateful for
August 27th, 2024 12:46
sorenbarrett said:
Anger pervades this poem and so it should with so many complaining of what they should be grateful for
August 27th, 2024 12:46
well?
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Indeed, mine as well just swallow it with razor blades. Or just razor blades without the pill, it\'d do the trick. Good write NinjaGirl.
August 27th, 2024 12:18
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Indeed, mine as well just swallow it with razor blades. Or just razor blades without the pill, it\'d do the trick. Good write NinjaGirl.
August 27th, 2024 12:18
quiet company
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes just company is enough and anything more is upsetting. Well stated
August 27th, 2024 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes just company is enough and anything more is upsetting. Well stated
August 27th, 2024 05:50
drips for the grip on reality
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Brilliant wordplay yet again! Wow.
August 25th, 2024 19:43
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Brilliant wordplay yet again! Wow.
August 25th, 2024 19:43
everyone wants to be loved
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Powerful yet true poem, NinjaGirl, Clever wordplay.
August 25th, 2024 19:40
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Powerful yet true poem, NinjaGirl, Clever wordplay.
August 25th, 2024 19:40
everyone wants to be loved
BlessedbyGod said:
No truer words my dear , but sometime there is deep meaning behind those words, just have to be careful who to trust
August 25th, 2024 19:24
BlessedbyGod said:
No truer words my dear , but sometime there is deep meaning behind those words, just have to be careful who to trust
August 25th, 2024 19:24
everyone wants to be loved
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes. We want to be appreciated for ourselves, not lost in the eyes and lusts of the beholder, buried beneath what veil(?), as all he sees is a body.
August 25th, 2024 19:21
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes. We want to be appreciated for ourselves, not lost in the eyes and lusts of the beholder, buried beneath what veil(?), as all he sees is a body.
August 25th, 2024 19:21
drips for the grip on reality
sorenbarrett said:
Mark it beautifully to remind yourself of the beauty inside. A most powerful write.
August 24th, 2024 18:31
sorenbarrett said:
Mark it beautifully to remind yourself of the beauty inside. A most powerful write.
August 24th, 2024 18:31
drips for the grip on reality
Thoughtless said:
Doing your thing as usual, girl.
Interesting.
August 24th, 2024 15:00
Thoughtless said:
Doing your thing as usual, girl.
Interesting.
August 24th, 2024 15:00
the light
Bella Shepard said:
The tear of regret, the sadness of never being able to go back. Beautifully crafted in this poem!
August 23rd, 2024 16:44
Bella Shepard said:
The tear of regret, the sadness of never being able to go back. Beautifully crafted in this poem!
August 23rd, 2024 16:44
the light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another excellent write NinjaGirl! I\'m a fan! You captured such raw emotions and guilt in such few words. A true gift!
August 23rd, 2024 11:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another excellent write NinjaGirl! I\'m a fan! You captured such raw emotions and guilt in such few words. A true gift!
August 23rd, 2024 11:23
Dear Death
Mutley Ravishes said:
It’s been said
That even more pain
Awaits a suicide
On the other side
Hang in there!
Let the seed express
It’s uniqueness
August 21st, 2024 21:09
Mutley Ravishes said:
It’s been said
That even more pain
Awaits a suicide
On the other side
Hang in there!
Let the seed express
It’s uniqueness
August 21st, 2024 21:09
Dear Death
sorenbarrett said:
Glad that the sad did not occur. Such a feeling of ambivalence expressed here.
August 21st, 2024 19:23
sorenbarrett said:
Glad that the sad did not occur. Such a feeling of ambivalence expressed here.
August 21st, 2024 19:23
*poof* HELLO MOTHERFVCKER!
Thoughtless said:
Nothing like toxic people to NOT make your day. Well written.
August 20th, 2024 12:19
Thoughtless said:
Nothing like toxic people to NOT make your day. Well written.
August 20th, 2024 12:19
Time
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is something to puzzle about and waste 10 minutes of the half of my life. Loved the puzzle brief but deep
August 19th, 2024 14:44
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is something to puzzle about and waste 10 minutes of the half of my life. Loved the puzzle brief but deep
August 19th, 2024 14:44
mis understood
Thoughtless said:
I get the hint of being bullied. Am I correct or not?
August 14th, 2024 21:49
Thoughtless said:
I get the hint of being bullied. Am I correct or not?
August 14th, 2024 21:49
mis understood
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Absolutely love the play on words here. When a poet does that, it\'s pure magic, and you pulled it off brilliantly! I also appreciate how the poem visually deconstructs as it progresses, mirroring the emotional unraveling you\'re expressing. Absolutely brilliant!
August 14th, 2024 18:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Absolutely love the play on words here. When a poet does that, it\'s pure magic, and you pulled it off brilliantly! I also appreciate how the poem visually deconstructs as it progresses, mirroring the emotional unraveling you\'re expressing. Absolutely brilliant!
August 14th, 2024 18:45
Observer
sorenbarrett said:
The dichotomy of who we are and how we see ourselves made clear in the split of even watching them from afar. Nice
August 4th, 2024 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
The dichotomy of who we are and how we see ourselves made clear in the split of even watching them from afar. Nice
August 4th, 2024 18:36
Sinning Shame
Tristan Robert Lange said:
NinjaGirl, your poem deeply moved me. The raw honesty and pain you convey are both heartbreaking and profoundly powerful. While I have faced my own struggles, I cannot fully understand the depths of what you have experienced. Your courage in sharing this piece is truly commendable, and your craft in expressing such a difficult experience is exceptional. Reading your words has helped me process my own pain in a new way. Thank you for giving voice to such an important issue. Keep writing and sharing your truth—your words have a powerful impact.
August 3rd, 2024 16:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
NinjaGirl, your poem deeply moved me. The raw honesty and pain you convey are both heartbreaking and profoundly powerful. While I have faced my own struggles, I cannot fully understand the depths of what you have experienced. Your courage in sharing this piece is truly commendable, and your craft in expressing such a difficult experience is exceptional. Reading your words has helped me process my own pain in a new way. Thank you for giving voice to such an important issue. Keep writing and sharing your truth—your words have a powerful impact.
August 3rd, 2024 16:21
no excuses
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
People are lost and dark. Maybe they do so because it\'s all they know? We\'ll never know.
August 2nd, 2024 16:51
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
People are lost and dark. Maybe they do so because it\'s all they know? We\'ll never know.
August 2nd, 2024 16:51
no excuses
sorenbarrett said:
A simple true statement that should be obvious. Nice to cut straight to the point. Well said
August 1st, 2024 19:21
sorenbarrett said:
A simple true statement that should be obvious. Nice to cut straight to the point. Well said
August 1st, 2024 19:21
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