Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
Perfectionist
B.E.Poet said:
I partially get this. there are things in my life where i have to be perfect but when i\'m writing I tend to let my emotions flow and since im all over the place my writing is messy or weird. But I think this is a good poem i liked it.
May 15th, 2023 16:16
B.E.Poet said:
I partially get this. there are things in my life where i have to be perfect but when i\'m writing I tend to let my emotions flow and since im all over the place my writing is messy or weird. But I think this is a good poem i liked it.
May 15th, 2023 16:16
Bathroom Stall
Audrey A. said:
Whatever news you got, I hope it was on the better side of issues as issues go.
April 28th, 2023 17:40
Audrey A. said:
Whatever news you got, I hope it was on the better side of issues as issues go.
April 28th, 2023 17:40
Bathroom Stall
Bobby O said:
Honest and personal yet universal in message and offers shire that reminds and holds accountability in the chosen paths as a shared goal. I liked it. Nice.
April 28th, 2023 17:05
Bobby O said:
Honest and personal yet universal in message and offers shire that reminds and holds accountability in the chosen paths as a shared goal. I liked it. Nice.
April 28th, 2023 17:05
I\'m t i r e d
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.What would be helpful is to explain what you intend to do about it
April 25th, 2023 16:51
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.What would be helpful is to explain what you intend to do about it
April 25th, 2023 16:51
RAGE
Audrey A. said:
I take this wrath and channel it into a plate, one from the kitchen, and bring it somewhere where I can just smash it. Put all your strength and wrath into it. With one giant swing, smash it to the ground into a million pieces.
April 24th, 2023 20:18
Audrey A. said:
I take this wrath and channel it into a plate, one from the kitchen, and bring it somewhere where I can just smash it. Put all your strength and wrath into it. With one giant swing, smash it to the ground into a million pieces.
April 24th, 2023 20:18
My Conversation With Fear
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing
a really creative and relatable read
have you seen/heard the song,
\'hi Ren\'
very similar to your poem\'s theme
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s_nc1IVoMxc
)
April 24th, 2023 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing
a really creative and relatable read
have you seen/heard the song,
\'hi Ren\'
very similar to your poem\'s theme
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s_nc1IVoMxc
)
April 24th, 2023 05:29
Helpless.
jarcher54 said:
I hope the deep sadness you relate is largely in your imagination! But some intense and fine phrases, even if they are close to trite: Not cool to be standing on the roof! love it.
April 8th, 2023 12:33
jarcher54 said:
I hope the deep sadness you relate is largely in your imagination! But some intense and fine phrases, even if they are close to trite: Not cool to be standing on the roof! love it.
April 8th, 2023 12:33
\"Little slut\" \"Princess\" \"Baby girl\"
jarcher54 said:
Well this story is beautifully told and I for one hope to never forget it. It brought tears to my eyes.
April 7th, 2023 22:39
jarcher54 said:
Well this story is beautifully told and I for one hope to never forget it. It brought tears to my eyes.
April 7th, 2023 22:39
To All Those At My Funeral...
BlessedbyGod said:
Wow, I know how it feels to feel this way,
My entire life was like a game of charades, I have been fake for 40 years, but not anymore, I left the situation and found healing and love and acceptance for who I really am, just so you know, you are worth it, you are strong enough to overcome this and you don\'t have to be fake, there are people like me that will accept you for who and what you are, no questions asked just be you, and anybody that has a problem with the real you, should look in the mirror and see what is looking back at them.
Hang in there, you got this, I\'m here for you
March 28th, 2023 12:05
BlessedbyGod said:
Wow, I know how it feels to feel this way,
My entire life was like a game of charades, I have been fake for 40 years, but not anymore, I left the situation and found healing and love and acceptance for who I really am, just so you know, you are worth it, you are strong enough to overcome this and you don\'t have to be fake, there are people like me that will accept you for who and what you are, no questions asked just be you, and anybody that has a problem with the real you, should look in the mirror and see what is looking back at them.
Hang in there, you got this, I\'m here for you
March 28th, 2023 12:05
Attempter
Abby1234 said:
Very nice.
I tried to do it but then I became stressed when I thought of my family. Now I try it with cough drops. Doesn\'t work. So I stopped. This poem is so powerful. Amazing poem.
March 27th, 2023 13:01
Abby1234 said:
Very nice.
I tried to do it but then I became stressed when I thought of my family. Now I try it with cough drops. Doesn\'t work. So I stopped. This poem is so powerful. Amazing poem.
March 27th, 2023 13:01
Attempter
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
Good poem. Suppose some of the best poetry, really is about real events...
And of course life for some... can be very sad. Peace... can be difficult to find.
Time... there are somethings... that just... never heal.
Anyway... Hope you\'re alive.
If you are... please, try and keep it that way.
Yes... sometimes it can be our own choice.
Or it can something that is imposed.
Many things are so.
Best luck.
March 24th, 2023 15:38
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
Good poem. Suppose some of the best poetry, really is about real events...
And of course life for some... can be very sad. Peace... can be difficult to find.
Time... there are somethings... that just... never heal.
Anyway... Hope you\'re alive.
If you are... please, try and keep it that way.
Yes... sometimes it can be our own choice.
Or it can something that is imposed.
Many things are so.
Best luck.
March 24th, 2023 15:38
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