Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl



\"no\"
orchidee said:

Not intended in any way to be on the same theme, but me being humorous - and now for my next poem entitled: \'Yes!\' (heehee).

September 6th, 2024 14:21

\"no\"
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 6th, 2024 12:15

dont
Dan Williams said:

OK, no back talk from me.

September 4th, 2024 00:41

dont
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful.

September 3rd, 2024 20:27

dont
MR.apocalypse said:

i think we should work together on a poem


September 3rd, 2024 20:23

dont
Cheeky Missy said:

Since I am not superwoman, then lately I end up shutting up. They are forever generally shocked when I do actually do what I warned them I\'d do.
Beautifully poignant and amply expressive, delightfully rhymed.

September 3rd, 2024 19:38

anxious
Dan Williams said:

This is as good a definition of stress as I have seen. Fight it girl.

September 3rd, 2024 00:10

anxious
Mutley Ravishes said:

Breathe like Wim Hof
It`ll help stop
The anxiety

September 2nd, 2024 01:56

anxious
Cheeky Missy said:

Hang in there. Take a deep breath and let it out very slowly. Relax. Here...https://youtu.be/BubaEmJg4so?si=TSdk2TTwEVyhyHwl
Try that.

September 1st, 2024 21:37

upset
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 29th, 2024 18:44

upset
Thoughtless said:

So, there. Nice one.

August 29th, 2024 14:24

well?
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 27th, 2024 15:17

well?
sorenbarrett said:

Anger pervades this poem and so it should with so many complaining of what they should be grateful for

August 27th, 2024 12:46

well?
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

Indeed, mine as well just swallow it with razor blades. Or just razor blades without the pill, it\'d do the trick. Good write NinjaGirl.

August 27th, 2024 12:18

quiet company
sorenbarrett said:

Sometimes just company is enough and anything more is upsetting. Well stated

August 27th, 2024 05:50

drips for the grip on reality
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

Brilliant wordplay yet again! Wow.

August 25th, 2024 19:43

everyone wants to be loved
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

Powerful yet true poem, NinjaGirl, Clever wordplay.

August 25th, 2024 19:40

everyone wants to be loved
Tony36 said:

Agree 100%

August 25th, 2024 19:34

everyone wants to be loved
BlessedbyGod said:

No truer words my dear , but sometime there is deep meaning behind those words, just have to be careful who to trust

August 25th, 2024 19:24

everyone wants to be loved
Cheeky Missy said:

Yes. We want to be appreciated for ourselves, not lost in the eyes and lusts of the beholder, buried beneath what veil(?), as all he sees is a body.

August 25th, 2024 19:21

drips for the grip on reality
sorenbarrett said:

Mark it beautifully to remind yourself of the beauty inside. A most powerful write.

August 24th, 2024 18:31

drips for the grip on reality
Thoughtless said:

Doing your thing as usual, girl.
Interesting.

August 24th, 2024 15:00

the light
Bella Shepard said:

The tear of regret, the sadness of never being able to go back. Beautifully crafted in this poem!

August 23rd, 2024 16:44

the light
sorenbarrett said:

A very nice write with good depth

August 23rd, 2024 12:07

the light
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Another excellent write NinjaGirl! I\'m a fan! You captured such raw emotions and guilt in such few words. A true gift!

August 23rd, 2024 11:23

s o u n d s
ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ said:

Nicely writen

August 22nd, 2024 19:56

s o u n d s
sorenbarrett said:

Sad and powerful well penned

August 22nd, 2024 18:29

Dear Death
Mutley Ravishes said:

It’s been said
That even more pain
Awaits a suicide
On the other side
Hang in there!
Let the seed express
It’s uniqueness

August 21st, 2024 21:09

Dear Death
sorenbarrett said:

Glad that the sad did not occur. Such a feeling of ambivalence expressed here.

August 21st, 2024 19:23

*poof* HELLO MOTHERFVCKER!
Thoughtless said:

Nothing like toxic people to NOT make your day. Well written.

August 20th, 2024 12:19



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