Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
thick thoughts
AmIAPoet-QuestionMark said:
Poetry is an amazing outlet, isn\'t it?? I\'ve found in my life and with what I write, if you \'feed the right wolf\' - that being the positive wolf that talks good to you, that leaves you with a smile, that gives you butterflies, that tastes like a powdered donut, then your life will get better and the past, though never forgotten, becomes the past, and you can focus on the present and the future.
I hope these words help you. I\'ve read some of your work and it\'s amazing! Dark, and amazing. Never stop! Get those words out. But also, look for the light and you\'ll find it. Look for the dark, and you\'ll find it too. Feed the dark wolf, and it may eventually eat you.
September 12th, 2024 18:09
AmIAPoet-QuestionMark said:
Poetry is an amazing outlet, isn\'t it?? I\'ve found in my life and with what I write, if you \'feed the right wolf\' - that being the positive wolf that talks good to you, that leaves you with a smile, that gives you butterflies, that tastes like a powdered donut, then your life will get better and the past, though never forgotten, becomes the past, and you can focus on the present and the future.
I hope these words help you. I\'ve read some of your work and it\'s amazing! Dark, and amazing. Never stop! Get those words out. But also, look for the light and you\'ll find it. Look for the dark, and you\'ll find it too. Feed the dark wolf, and it may eventually eat you.
September 12th, 2024 18:09
I CHOOSE ANGER
Cheeky Missy said:
My niece was less than 5 years old and he ruined her. Her uncles are furious and so am I. I know that will not help you, but, you\'re sadly far from alone in this unspeakable horror.
September 12th, 2024 16:35
Cheeky Missy said:
My niece was less than 5 years old and he ruined her. Her uncles are furious and so am I. I know that will not help you, but, you\'re sadly far from alone in this unspeakable horror.
September 12th, 2024 16:35
thick thoughts
Cheeky Missy said:
Aha. Ya. Marvelously rendered with a gripping poignancy and excellent details, this is one dangerous game. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 19:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Aha. Ya. Marvelously rendered with a gripping poignancy and excellent details, this is one dangerous game. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 19:32
TRUST NO ONE
unknownfemalepoet said:
Be strong and don\'t prove yourself to anyone
September 11th, 2024 17:41
unknownfemalepoet said:
Be strong and don\'t prove yourself to anyone
September 11th, 2024 17:41
anger is better than peace
unknownfemalepoet said:
I see my reflection in this but you also gotta be careful with anger
September 11th, 2024 17:39
unknownfemalepoet said:
I see my reflection in this but you also gotta be careful with anger
September 11th, 2024 17:39
anger is better than peace
Dan Williams said:
Anger can be the answer but it needs to be channeled and directed, not hot headedly dispensed. Step back, take a better look.
September 11th, 2024 00:38
Dan Williams said:
Anger can be the answer but it needs to be channeled and directed, not hot headedly dispensed. Step back, take a better look.
September 11th, 2024 00:38
anger is better than peace
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once got so angry
That someone started
Laughing at me!
September 9th, 2024 19:27
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once got so angry
That someone started
Laughing at me!
September 9th, 2024 19:27
anger is better than peace
Tony36 said:
Peace is always better and healthier. Great write though
September 9th, 2024 13:48
Tony36 said:
Peace is always better and healthier. Great write though
September 9th, 2024 13:48
anger is better than peace
orchidee said:
I can\'t see it is myself.
I would probably change round the size of the anger\'s and the peace\'s here.
September 9th, 2024 12:54
orchidee said:
I can\'t see it is myself.
I would probably change round the size of the anger\'s and the peace\'s here.
September 9th, 2024 12:54
TRUST NO ONE
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Good write Ninja Girl.
I heard this thing from a artist I admire DMX,
It goes like, I don\'t like the term, Trust No One. I think you should trust everyone to be themselves, trust a liar to lie, trust a theif to steal, trust a snake to bite, trust them to be them. Trust there true nature. It takes to much energy to not trust them. Just trust everyone to be themselves. Yet again, good write. 👍
September 7th, 2024 21:10
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Good write Ninja Girl.
I heard this thing from a artist I admire DMX,
It goes like, I don\'t like the term, Trust No One. I think you should trust everyone to be themselves, trust a liar to lie, trust a theif to steal, trust a snake to bite, trust them to be them. Trust there true nature. It takes to much energy to not trust them. Just trust everyone to be themselves. Yet again, good write. 👍
September 7th, 2024 21:10
\"no\"
Cheeky Missy said:
You poor girl! I\'m so very, very sorry if this is not mere fiction but rather an expose. Excellently rendered with a subtly haunting poignancy. Tastefully detailed to purpose.
September 6th, 2024 15:09
Cheeky Missy said:
You poor girl! I\'m so very, very sorry if this is not mere fiction but rather an expose. Excellently rendered with a subtly haunting poignancy. Tastefully detailed to purpose.
September 6th, 2024 15:09
\"no\"
orchidee said:
Not intended in any way to be on the same theme, but me being humorous - and now for my next poem entitled: \'Yes!\' (heehee).
September 6th, 2024 14:21
orchidee said:
Not intended in any way to be on the same theme, but me being humorous - and now for my next poem entitled: \'Yes!\' (heehee).
September 6th, 2024 14:21
dont
Cheeky Missy said:
Since I am not superwoman, then lately I end up shutting up. They are forever generally shocked when I do actually do what I warned them I\'d do.
Beautifully poignant and amply expressive, delightfully rhymed.
September 3rd, 2024 19:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Since I am not superwoman, then lately I end up shutting up. They are forever generally shocked when I do actually do what I warned them I\'d do.
Beautifully poignant and amply expressive, delightfully rhymed.
September 3rd, 2024 19:38
anxious
Dan Williams said:
This is as good a definition of stress as I have seen. Fight it girl.
September 3rd, 2024 00:10
Dan Williams said:
This is as good a definition of stress as I have seen. Fight it girl.
September 3rd, 2024 00:10
anxious
Mutley Ravishes said:
Breathe like Wim Hof
It`ll help stop
The anxiety
September 2nd, 2024 01:56
Mutley Ravishes said:
Breathe like Wim Hof
It`ll help stop
The anxiety
September 2nd, 2024 01:56
anxious
Cheeky Missy said:
Hang in there. Take a deep breath and let it out very slowly. Relax. Here...https://youtu.be/BubaEmJg4so?si=TSdk2TTwEVyhyHwl
Try that.
September 1st, 2024 21:37
Cheeky Missy said:
Hang in there. Take a deep breath and let it out very slowly. Relax. Here...https://youtu.be/BubaEmJg4so?si=TSdk2TTwEVyhyHwl
Try that.
September 1st, 2024 21:37
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