Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
Benighted
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’ve known that moment…the wanting to clear what’s settled, but not having the heart or strength to begin. You wrote it with such real, human clarity. That image of the resident holding the duster but unable to move…that says everything. You captured inertia with such tender honesty. Beautiful job, dearest 🥷 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 11th, 2025 10:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’ve known that moment…the wanting to clear what’s settled, but not having the heart or strength to begin. You wrote it with such real, human clarity. That image of the resident holding the duster but unable to move…that says everything. You captured inertia with such tender honesty. Beautiful job, dearest 🥷 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 11th, 2025 10:07
a story from my life or my life\'s story?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is powerful…raw and brave in every line. The way you move through the echoes of each word hits hard. Thank you for trusting the page with this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 11th, 2025 10:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is powerful…raw and brave in every line. The way you move through the echoes of each word hits hard. Thank you for trusting the page with this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 11th, 2025 10:05
Benighted
sorenbarrett said:
Ah NinjaGirl you have become enigmatic of late. This poem speaks of time and age as well as friends. The dust that clouds one\'s memory one is reluctant to cleanse in that the sharpness of reality is less pleasant than the softness that the dust of time has given it. That is my interpretation although it might not be the original intent or the only interpretation.
December 11th, 2025 03:35
sorenbarrett said:
Ah NinjaGirl you have become enigmatic of late. This poem speaks of time and age as well as friends. The dust that clouds one\'s memory one is reluctant to cleanse in that the sharpness of reality is less pleasant than the softness that the dust of time has given it. That is my interpretation although it might not be the original intent or the only interpretation.
December 11th, 2025 03:35
a story from my life or my life\'s story?
sorenbarrett said:
One is handed a hand full of clay some a little, some a lot, what they do with it is up to them. Your story, your choice. Well done NinjaGirl. Don\'t let anyone steal your clay.
December 11th, 2025 03:25
sorenbarrett said:
One is handed a hand full of clay some a little, some a lot, what they do with it is up to them. Your story, your choice. Well done NinjaGirl. Don\'t let anyone steal your clay.
December 11th, 2025 03:25
a story from my life or my life\'s story?
Doggerel Dave said:
Riddle? Obviously a traumatic event you have yet to recover from .
December 11th, 2025 00:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Riddle? Obviously a traumatic event you have yet to recover from .
December 11th, 2025 00:12
Bad Person
Doggerel Dave said:
Too keen to adjust, to fit in. Be you and let them come to...... you!
December 9th, 2025 01:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Too keen to adjust, to fit in. Be you and let them come to...... you!
December 9th, 2025 01:19
Copper Taste
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this hits like a pulse in the dark…quiet but relentless. The weight you’re carrying here comes through so clearly, especially in those lines about paying for what isn’t yours. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 21:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this hits like a pulse in the dark…quiet but relentless. The weight you’re carrying here comes through so clearly, especially in those lines about paying for what isn’t yours. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 21:12
Copper Taste
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Copper Taste\" revolves around the burden of guilt and the consequences of sin. It explores themes of suffering, sacrifice, and the emotional weight carried by individuals who feel responsible for the pain inflicted upon others. The poet grapples with feelings of inadequacy and the sense of being trapped in a cycle of paying for sins that are not their own.
December 8th, 2025 15:24
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Copper Taste\" revolves around the burden of guilt and the consequences of sin. It explores themes of suffering, sacrifice, and the emotional weight carried by individuals who feel responsible for the pain inflicted upon others. The poet grapples with feelings of inadequacy and the sense of being trapped in a cycle of paying for sins that are not their own.
December 8th, 2025 15:24
Copper Taste
sorenbarrett said:
Heart felt this poem bleeds with emotion so well worded and so poetic. A fave
December 8th, 2025 15:17
sorenbarrett said:
Heart felt this poem bleeds with emotion so well worded and so poetic. A fave
December 8th, 2025 15:17
Bad Person
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You are a beautiful soul, my friend! This poem? Beautiful expression of never feeling enough! But: YOU ARE ENOUGH! ❤️🩹❤️🩹❤️🩹❤️🩹❤️🩹
December 8th, 2025 13:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You are a beautiful soul, my friend! This poem? Beautiful expression of never feeling enough! But: YOU ARE ENOUGH! ❤️🩹❤️🩹❤️🩹❤️🩹❤️🩹
December 8th, 2025 13:06
Bad Person
sorenbarrett said:
Three damaging questions with one answer. Because you think so. A powerful poem with a most sad implication. Self questioning leads others to question as well. Nicely written
December 8th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
Three damaging questions with one answer. Because you think so. A powerful poem with a most sad implication. Self questioning leads others to question as well. Nicely written
December 8th, 2025 03:56
My Actions
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around the consequences of thoughtless actions and the heavy burden of guilt that follows. The poet explores themes of innocence, betrayal, and the unintended harm that can arise from actions taken without consideration of their potential impact.
November 27th, 2025 14:51
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around the consequences of thoughtless actions and the heavy burden of guilt that follows. The poet explores themes of innocence, betrayal, and the unintended harm that can arise from actions taken without consideration of their potential impact.
November 27th, 2025 14:51
funny little thing
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This one is definitely a beauty (I meant the poem 😁). Enjoyed the reas.
November 27th, 2025 08:11
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This one is definitely a beauty (I meant the poem 😁). Enjoyed the reas.
November 27th, 2025 08:11
My Actions
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, my friend… the innocence, the accident, the sudden grief… you wove all of it into this clean, devastating arc. It lands exactly the way it should. Very well done, as always, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 27th, 2025 07:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, my friend… the innocence, the accident, the sudden grief… you wove all of it into this clean, devastating arc. It lands exactly the way it should. Very well done, as always, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 27th, 2025 07:07
My Actions
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor of great power, guilt and unintended consequences. Lovely
November 26th, 2025 19:29
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor of great power, guilt and unintended consequences. Lovely
November 26th, 2025 19:29
funny little thing
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Appealing sweet poem of teasing love, its quite unwise to believe in their professions of luv until they actually marry you. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
November 25th, 2025 13:18
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Appealing sweet poem of teasing love, its quite unwise to believe in their professions of luv until they actually marry you. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
November 25th, 2025 13:18
funny little thing
arqios said:
Loved to distraction. That is fascinating! 🙏🕊️
November 24th, 2025 23:21
arqios said:
Loved to distraction. That is fascinating! 🙏🕊️
November 24th, 2025 23:21
funny little thing
Paul Bell said:
Flirters hate other flirters so what\'s good for the goose is good for the gander, get flirting.
November 24th, 2025 14:34
Paul Bell said:
Flirters hate other flirters so what\'s good for the goose is good for the gander, get flirting.
November 24th, 2025 14:34
funny little thing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this one hits with a soft ache…the tug-of-war between affection and uncertainty is so real here. You let the vulnerability sit right on the surface. Beautifully felt, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 24th, 2025 08:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this one hits with a soft ache…the tug-of-war between affection and uncertainty is so real here. You let the vulnerability sit right on the surface. Beautifully felt, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 24th, 2025 08:45
funny little thing
Doggerel Dave said:
As usual (I bore myself with repetition) can you find another word other than \'love\'? Because that isn\'t.
November 23rd, 2025 19:08
Doggerel Dave said:
As usual (I bore myself with repetition) can you find another word other than \'love\'? Because that isn\'t.
November 23rd, 2025 19:08
funny little thing
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desires unmet and love not felt. Questions that go unanswered but truth known and not wanting to be accepted. It is hard to be a play thing when one wants to be much more. Well written
November 23rd, 2025 19:01
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desires unmet and love not felt. Questions that go unanswered but truth known and not wanting to be accepted. It is hard to be a play thing when one wants to be much more. Well written
November 23rd, 2025 19:01
The Invader of my Cave
Megan Blaney said:
Cancer or mental illness perhaps? I love this poem
November 20th, 2025 14:18
Megan Blaney said:
Cancer or mental illness perhaps? I love this poem
November 20th, 2025 14:18
Siren caught the Sailor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Every damn time, too! Don\'t they learn...they being men in general! LOL! Well done on this one, my friend! Love it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 20th, 2025 12:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Every damn time, too! Don\'t they learn...they being men in general! LOL! Well done on this one, my friend! Love it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 20th, 2025 12:05
A thought on love
John Lee said:
It\'s hard to know if someone loves us.. when love always feels like pain.
November 20th, 2025 03:29
John Lee said:
It\'s hard to know if someone loves us.. when love always feels like pain.
November 20th, 2025 03:29
Siren caught the Sailor
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing wrong falling for a siren when destruction runs in the blood. A wonderful poem with which many a man can equate.
November 20th, 2025 03:16
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing wrong falling for a siren when destruction runs in the blood. A wonderful poem with which many a man can equate.
November 20th, 2025 03:16
Contradicting Thoughts
NafisaSB said:
indeed it will sort itself out, the way Nature wants it to - so best not to mope - but keep up your hope
November 19th, 2025 08:28
NafisaSB said:
indeed it will sort itself out, the way Nature wants it to - so best not to mope - but keep up your hope
November 19th, 2025 08:28
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