Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
time is silent
RSM0812 said:
It\'s an amazing poem. One of the short and sweet ones. One of my favorites. :)
November 17th, 2024 21:33
RSM0812 said:
It\'s an amazing poem. One of the short and sweet ones. One of my favorites. :)
November 17th, 2024 21:33
time is silent
sorenbarrett said:
“Ticking time thick as wine” A great line it not only has rhyme but convey an image. Brilliant!!
November 17th, 2024 19:31
sorenbarrett said:
“Ticking time thick as wine” A great line it not only has rhyme but convey an image. Brilliant!!
November 17th, 2024 19:31
time is silent
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Time is slient, indeed! “Thick as wine”…this is poetry! 🌹👏
November 17th, 2024 18:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Time is slient, indeed! “Thick as wine”…this is poetry! 🌹👏
November 17th, 2024 18:13
death
RSM0812 said:
Wow, your a really good writer. I enjoyed that though dreary until the end. It sounds like an outer body experience. Remarkable.
November 13th, 2024 00:31
RSM0812 said:
Wow, your a really good writer. I enjoyed that though dreary until the end. It sounds like an outer body experience. Remarkable.
November 13th, 2024 00:31
death
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the concept of forever falling into the body! Great imagery throughout. Wonderful narrative poem with an awesome ending. Loved it! 🌹👏
November 12th, 2024 22:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the concept of forever falling into the body! Great imagery throughout. Wonderful narrative poem with an awesome ending. Loved it! 🌹👏
November 12th, 2024 22:36
you and the cave
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know the fear and it is real. With that said, if your partner loves you for who you are, they will dive to the depths of hell for you...your \"cave\" won\'t scare them away. That\'s not to say it won\'t scare them, but true love does not flee when the going gets tough...rather, it grows stronger. Thank you so much for sharing this. True vulnerability at its best and that always makes for a beautiful poem Well done! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 12th, 2024 07:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know the fear and it is real. With that said, if your partner loves you for who you are, they will dive to the depths of hell for you...your \"cave\" won\'t scare them away. That\'s not to say it won\'t scare them, but true love does not flee when the going gets tough...rather, it grows stronger. Thank you so much for sharing this. True vulnerability at its best and that always makes for a beautiful poem Well done! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 12th, 2024 07:16
disadvantage
NafisaSB said:
don\'t be embarrassed - head high, chin up, march ahead - your time will come too
November 6th, 2024 00:05
NafisaSB said:
don\'t be embarrassed - head high, chin up, march ahead - your time will come too
November 6th, 2024 00:05
broken pieces
Mwalimu Wuod Mwalimu said:
I can feel it🥲
I like the metaphorical language used. It appeals to the senses.
Great 🙏
November 5th, 2024 00:02
Mwalimu Wuod Mwalimu said:
I can feel it🥲
I like the metaphorical language used. It appeals to the senses.
Great 🙏
November 5th, 2024 00:02
disadvantage
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent job with this one, my friend! While \"they\" who have not been traumatized maybe ahead in someways, conversely, \"they\" may also be behind in others This poem represents what true art is a reflection on self and the surrounding world. Again. Beautifully done! 👏🌹
November 4th, 2024 23:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent job with this one, my friend! While \"they\" who have not been traumatized maybe ahead in someways, conversely, \"they\" may also be behind in others This poem represents what true art is a reflection on self and the surrounding world. Again. Beautifully done! 👏🌹
November 4th, 2024 23:40
disadvantage
sorenbarrett said:
That is what poetry is all about revealing oneself in words unabashed. Lovely taking a chance is the onlly way we learn.
November 4th, 2024 17:05
sorenbarrett said:
That is what poetry is all about revealing oneself in words unabashed. Lovely taking a chance is the onlly way we learn.
November 4th, 2024 17:05
end
sorenbarrett said:
Twilight or night both are brothers. A most intriguing write
November 4th, 2024 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Twilight or night both are brothers. A most intriguing write
November 4th, 2024 04:26
ninjagirl
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Good use of “ninja” in this poem. For me, perhaps I am off, my interpretation is this…longing for innocence, for when days were simple, innocent, happy and fun, where one was not suppressed to living in the shadows (like a ninja) where one is not noticed…or in the case of a ninja…may seek to remain unnoticed, since ninjas, as assassins, were very secretive and unseen on purpose, due to shame, guilt, lack of self-esteem or any other host of reasons. Not sure if I am hitting the mark, but that is what I got out of it reading your wonderful poem! Regardless of my interpretation, great job!!! 🖤❤️🖤🙏
October 31st, 2024 07:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Good use of “ninja” in this poem. For me, perhaps I am off, my interpretation is this…longing for innocence, for when days were simple, innocent, happy and fun, where one was not suppressed to living in the shadows (like a ninja) where one is not noticed…or in the case of a ninja…may seek to remain unnoticed, since ninjas, as assassins, were very secretive and unseen on purpose, due to shame, guilt, lack of self-esteem or any other host of reasons. Not sure if I am hitting the mark, but that is what I got out of it reading your wonderful poem! Regardless of my interpretation, great job!!! 🖤❤️🖤🙏
October 31st, 2024 07:29
ninjagirl
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
A poem that is resonate with just anyone who wish to turn things back to how they were. Excellent write 👏
October 30th, 2024 18:42
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
A poem that is resonate with just anyone who wish to turn things back to how they were. Excellent write 👏
October 30th, 2024 18:42
kill me first
Young Fella said:
Great work. Really enjoyed reading your lines. Lovely.
October 27th, 2024 15:59
Young Fella said:
Great work. Really enjoyed reading your lines. Lovely.
October 27th, 2024 15:59
innocence
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Heavy write! If this happened to you, I am terribly sorry to hear that. The evil we suffer in this world really has life-long lasting effects. I want to say, first, it takes courage to write and share and put yourself out there that way. Second, brilliant poem that is both evocative and vulnerable. I have not doubt this poem will have a positive impact on anyone going through similar experiences and/or feeling this way. Excellent write, my friend!
October 24th, 2024 12:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Heavy write! If this happened to you, I am terribly sorry to hear that. The evil we suffer in this world really has life-long lasting effects. I want to say, first, it takes courage to write and share and put yourself out there that way. Second, brilliant poem that is both evocative and vulnerable. I have not doubt this poem will have a positive impact on anyone going through similar experiences and/or feeling this way. Excellent write, my friend!
October 24th, 2024 12:43
I CHOOSE ANGER
RSM0812 said:
Hi i think you ate very very talented. To be honest choosing violence is a slippery slope which is repeated in the song. I enjoyed it very much though, even the humor. Lol
October 24th, 2024 10:33
RSM0812 said:
Hi i think you ate very very talented. To be honest choosing violence is a slippery slope which is repeated in the song. I enjoyed it very much though, even the humor. Lol
October 24th, 2024 10:33
move on...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done! Your poem powerfully captures the raw emotions of trauma and healing. The vivid imagery of the trapped younger self resonates deeply for me, while your honest exploration of the struggle to move on is both brave and touching. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of poetry..
October 18th, 2024 22:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done! Your poem powerfully captures the raw emotions of trauma and healing. The vivid imagery of the trapped younger self resonates deeply for me, while your honest exploration of the struggle to move on is both brave and touching. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of poetry..
October 18th, 2024 22:56
Bloody Glass
LP2187 said:
healing does hurt
i used to harm myself until i realised it didn\'t help
i was a bit stupid back then
October 16th, 2024 12:55
LP2187 said:
healing does hurt
i used to harm myself until i realised it didn\'t help
i was a bit stupid back then
October 16th, 2024 12:55
broken pieces
Tristan Robert Lange said:
NinjaGirl, no joke, you never cease to impress and amaze me. Here you did it again and I am glad I caught this \"hot off the press\" tonight. I so connected with this short but masterful poem. Great use of the baseball/broken window metaphor. You say much in very little words and space. AMAZING! I am in awe! 🌹🖤👏
October 5th, 2024 21:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
NinjaGirl, no joke, you never cease to impress and amaze me. Here you did it again and I am glad I caught this \"hot off the press\" tonight. I so connected with this short but masterful poem. Great use of the baseball/broken window metaphor. You say much in very little words and space. AMAZING! I am in awe! 🌹🖤👏
October 5th, 2024 21:50
too much on my plate
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I\'ve been here...and felt it. Today, as a matter of fact. The good news is that we poets turn such situations into poetry.Wonderful write! :)
September 30th, 2024 22:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I\'ve been here...and felt it. Today, as a matter of fact. The good news is that we poets turn such situations into poetry.Wonderful write! :)
September 30th, 2024 22:42
Mannequin
Dan Williams said:
This relationship is in dire need of adjustment. Well said.
September 24th, 2024 00:07
Dan Williams said:
This relationship is in dire need of adjustment. Well said.
September 24th, 2024 00:07
tiptoe
Dan Williams said:
Love sure can make sleeping an ordeal, eh? Nice work.
September 24th, 2024 00:00
Dan Williams said:
Love sure can make sleeping an ordeal, eh? Nice work.
September 24th, 2024 00:00
Mannequin
Cheeky Missy said:
I don\'t think it\'s mannequin, but rather a far uglier term applied to nonliving items where it wouldn\'t be half as satisfactory if you weren\'t so very alive. I don\'t know how to comfort you.
Excellently rendered with a biting poignancy and superb details. Thank you for sharing.
September 23rd, 2024 17:26
Cheeky Missy said:
I don\'t think it\'s mannequin, but rather a far uglier term applied to nonliving items where it wouldn\'t be half as satisfactory if you weren\'t so very alive. I don\'t know how to comfort you.
Excellently rendered with a biting poignancy and superb details. Thank you for sharing.
September 23rd, 2024 17:26
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