Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
Words that don\'t hang
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this carries that quiet, unsettled search…truth, art, and the fear of being dismissed all wrapped together. The way it moves through those questions feels honest and unforced, like you’re thinking it through in real time. Very effective, my friend. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
April 24th, 2026 12:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this carries that quiet, unsettled search…truth, art, and the fear of being dismissed all wrapped together. The way it moves through those questions feels honest and unforced, like you’re thinking it through in real time. Very effective, my friend. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
April 24th, 2026 12:18
Words that don\'t hang
sorenbarrett said:
People accept what they want to hear and neglect the rest. Well written
April 23rd, 2026 21:18
sorenbarrett said:
People accept what they want to hear and neglect the rest. Well written
April 23rd, 2026 21:18
Words that don\'t hang
Doggerel Dave said:
I like rhyme, but most of all there has to be content, an idea worth chewing over, otherwise the whole exercise is meaningless to me. I personally am more interested in ideas, but need to see initial commitment from the author rather than just putting it up there.
Interesting question.
April 23rd, 2026 19:55
Doggerel Dave said:
I like rhyme, but most of all there has to be content, an idea worth chewing over, otherwise the whole exercise is meaningless to me. I personally am more interested in ideas, but need to see initial commitment from the author rather than just putting it up there.
Interesting question.
April 23rd, 2026 19:55
It Collapses
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, I’ve been in that space…where everything stacks up until it’s too much and you just shut down. And then…one small thing gets done, and somehow that matters. This brought that feeling right back. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, I’ve been in that space…where everything stacks up until it’s too much and you just shut down. And then…one small thing gets done, and somehow that matters. This brought that feeling right back. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:39
It Collapses
Doggerel Dave said:
The first success is the start -\"I can, I know I can - I\'ve just done it!\"
The poem highlights the problem, but the evidence is there...
April 23rd, 2026 04:53
Doggerel Dave said:
The first success is the start -\"I can, I know I can - I\'ve just done it!\"
The poem highlights the problem, but the evidence is there...
April 23rd, 2026 04:53
It Collapses
sorenbarrett said:
All things must have a beginning and if you can count one that is a start. Well done
April 22nd, 2026 21:24
sorenbarrett said:
All things must have a beginning and if you can count one that is a start. Well done
April 22nd, 2026 21:24
mdleubj tresetl
RSM0812 said:
This is really nicely written. The battle of the poetic inspiration. Nicely done.
April 20th, 2026 04:43
RSM0812 said:
This is really nicely written. The battle of the poetic inspiration. Nicely done.
April 20th, 2026 04:43
mdleubj tresetl
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this takes me to those moments where the words just won’t come…where something that used to flow suddenly feels blocked or taken. That kind of silence can be loud in its own way, and you captured that. Really well done, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 08:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this takes me to those moments where the words just won’t come…where something that used to flow suddenly feels blocked or taken. That kind of silence can be loud in its own way, and you captured that. Really well done, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 08:46
mdleubj tresetl
sorenbarrett said:
Tangled letters so fitting a title. A metaphor well painted in words stolen by thieves insidious invasion. When the muse is taken and only remnants of letters are left. A fave
April 17th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
Tangled letters so fitting a title. A metaphor well painted in words stolen by thieves insidious invasion. When the muse is taken and only remnants of letters are left. A fave
April 17th, 2026 03:50
Origami dragon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh, neat. Any pictures? 🤣 I love dragons! Seriously, though, this poem is simple and direct and yet, there\'s metaphor to be found in here too. Powerful piece of restraint, my friend. And it has a dragon 🐉. What\'s not to fave? 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh, neat. Any pictures? 🤣 I love dragons! Seriously, though, this poem is simple and direct and yet, there\'s metaphor to be found in here too. Powerful piece of restraint, my friend. And it has a dragon 🐉. What\'s not to fave? 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:49
No External Damage
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷… this lands in that quiet space…everything looking untouched on the surface, but raising the question of what that really means. That turn into what hasn’t happened carries weight, and it stays with you. Powerful, thoughtful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 08:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷… this lands in that quiet space…everything looking untouched on the surface, but raising the question of what that really means. That turn into what hasn’t happened carries weight, and it stays with you. Powerful, thoughtful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 08:44
No External Damage
sorenbarrett said:
Live life to the fullest, chew the marrow from the bone and suck it dry. Live each day as if it were the last and leave nothing on the bucket list. Better a short life full of explosive joy than a long dreary one. A most mind provoking piece.
April 14th, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Live life to the fullest, chew the marrow from the bone and suck it dry. Live each day as if it were the last and leave nothing on the bucket list. Better a short life full of explosive joy than a long dreary one. A most mind provoking piece.
April 14th, 2026 04:12
No External Damage
Doggerel Dave said:
Some folks are never satisfied.... though I do find this a little hard to believe.... unless you are about 12....
April 14th, 2026 02:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Some folks are never satisfied.... though I do find this a little hard to believe.... unless you are about 12....
April 14th, 2026 02:30
Concerning the Epstein Files - We are not angry enough.
NafisaSB said:
yes, yes and yes- we read, ignore, and get on with our mundane life
February 17th, 2026 01:08
NafisaSB said:
yes, yes and yes- we read, ignore, and get on with our mundane life
February 17th, 2026 01:08
Concerning the Epstein Files - We are not angry enough.
sorenbarrett said:
I feel as you do NinjaGirl we are not angry enough because deluges of atrocities have made us complacent expecting the worst and getting it. Social distancing and technology in an overpopulated world has desensitized us and left us numb feeling powerless and as if we were watching a movie that is not real. Entertainment that is all it is entertainment, and we get the bill. Nice write NinjaGirl
February 12th, 2026 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
I feel as you do NinjaGirl we are not angry enough because deluges of atrocities have made us complacent expecting the worst and getting it. Social distancing and technology in an overpopulated world has desensitized us and left us numb feeling powerless and as if we were watching a movie that is not real. Entertainment that is all it is entertainment, and we get the bill. Nice write NinjaGirl
February 12th, 2026 03:36
Concerning the Epstein Files - We are not angry enough.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this reads like a moral pulse check. The repetition is relentless for a reason…we scroll, we shrug, we move on. Meanwhile people can rage for days about a halftime show in Spanish, but muster almost nothing when the powerful get away with trafficking and abuse. “We are not angry enough for change” is diagnosis and warning in one. Strong, pointed, and timely. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 12th, 2026 01:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this reads like a moral pulse check. The repetition is relentless for a reason…we scroll, we shrug, we move on. Meanwhile people can rage for days about a halftime show in Spanish, but muster almost nothing when the powerful get away with trafficking and abuse. “We are not angry enough for change” is diagnosis and warning in one. Strong, pointed, and timely. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 12th, 2026 01:35
Concerning the Epstein Files - We are not angry enough.
Vipassana said:
I agree with you completely, NinjaGirl. The folks that voted for Trump knew exactly what he was / is all about. We live in an era where morality simply doesn\'t apply any longer. And truth is anything you want it to be.
I published extensively on another poetry website and of late here, and it\'s sad how little poets are concerned with social or political issues. We are a nation of sleep walkers.
I wish you well.
February 12th, 2026 01:19
Vipassana said:
I agree with you completely, NinjaGirl. The folks that voted for Trump knew exactly what he was / is all about. We live in an era where morality simply doesn\'t apply any longer. And truth is anything you want it to be.
I published extensively on another poetry website and of late here, and it\'s sad how little poets are concerned with social or political issues. We are a nation of sleep walkers.
I wish you well.
February 12th, 2026 01:19
Concerning the Epstein Files - We are not angry enough.
Doggerel Dave said:
Shitshow all round... got to go (transport) back later.
February 11th, 2026 22:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Shitshow all round... got to go (transport) back later.
February 11th, 2026 22:46
Paying with my Time
RSM0812 said:
Lots of stuff goes down the drain. Its a good metaphore. This poem was really well written Ninjagirl. Keep up the good work.
January 17th, 2026 12:27
RSM0812 said:
Lots of stuff goes down the drain. Its a good metaphore. This poem was really well written Ninjagirl. Keep up the good work.
January 17th, 2026 12:27
Bad Person
Durdica Porobija said:
If people were more sensitive, anyone could conclude that he or she is a \'bad person.\' This is a problem of human nature and a very vulnerable topic. A rhetorical question is a figure of thought, so this poem full of rhetorical questions encourages reflection very effectively.
January 16th, 2026 10:27
Durdica Porobija said:
If people were more sensitive, anyone could conclude that he or she is a \'bad person.\' This is a problem of human nature and a very vulnerable topic. A rhetorical question is a figure of thought, so this poem full of rhetorical questions encourages reflection very effectively.
January 16th, 2026 10:27
Dissolve
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is subtle and heavy at the same time. Color fading, movement slowing, identity reshaping itself under pressure…it’s a small portrait that carries a lot of grief. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 13th, 2026 19:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is subtle and heavy at the same time. Color fading, movement slowing, identity reshaping itself under pressure…it’s a small portrait that carries a lot of grief. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 13th, 2026 19:22
The Confession
NafisaSB said:
when you have someone trusting in you - let go and accept - you are lucky to get it even while you were unsure about it...
January 13th, 2026 02:42
NafisaSB said:
when you have someone trusting in you - let go and accept - you are lucky to get it even while you were unsure about it...
January 13th, 2026 02:42
Dissolve
sorenbarrett said:
How time takes its toll and wears on us all. A nicely written poem
January 12th, 2026 17:19
sorenbarrett said:
How time takes its toll and wears on us all. A nicely written poem
January 12th, 2026 17:19
Cause
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
That is deeply felt. And a question that haunts the ages.....
January 12th, 2026 13:52
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
That is deeply felt. And a question that haunts the ages.....
January 12th, 2026 13:52
Realization
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is brave writing. The way you trace manipulation from confusion to recognition feels stark and real…especially that moment when the future comes back into your own hands. This isn’t just a poem, it’s a boundary being drawn. Thank you for sharing it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 12th, 2026 10:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is brave writing. The way you trace manipulation from confusion to recognition feels stark and real…especially that moment when the future comes back into your own hands. This isn’t just a poem, it’s a boundary being drawn. Thank you for sharing it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 12th, 2026 10:01
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