Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
desperation
Mutley Ravishes said:
At one time I became so desperate to \"win,\" \"be great,\" or whatever that it almost cost me my life (twice). The effortless way is the best!
Great write, by the way.
February 21st, 2025 19:58
Mutley Ravishes said:
At one time I became so desperate to \"win,\" \"be great,\" or whatever that it almost cost me my life (twice). The effortless way is the best!
Great write, by the way.
February 21st, 2025 19:58
desperation
sorenbarrett said:
In this there are two forms of desperate the good and the bad. Nicely done in using this wordplay.
February 21st, 2025 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
In this there are two forms of desperate the good and the bad. Nicely done in using this wordplay.
February 21st, 2025 13:24
desperation
Poetic Licence said:
The desperation within the desperation, well expressed write.
February 21st, 2025 12:57
Poetic Licence said:
The desperation within the desperation, well expressed write.
February 21st, 2025 12:57
I\'m tired
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yeah. I\'ve always said I\'ll put it on my \"75 list\". Meaning, I\'ll be able to do it when I\'m retired and 75. Not sure, why that age, but it stuck. So, your poem rings SO VERY TRUE TO ME. Well done, my friend. Forgive my absence the past few days; I just got over some ungodly non-COVID but virulent plague 💀
February 20th, 2025 21:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yeah. I\'ve always said I\'ll put it on my \"75 list\". Meaning, I\'ll be able to do it when I\'m retired and 75. Not sure, why that age, but it stuck. So, your poem rings SO VERY TRUE TO ME. Well done, my friend. Forgive my absence the past few days; I just got over some ungodly non-COVID but virulent plague 💀
February 20th, 2025 21:19
I\'m tired
sorenbarrett said:
The future always looks better. The only problem is the future never comes. Oh yes retirement will but it will no longer be the future and you will still do as you do today. A great poem of looking to another day.
February 20th, 2025 14:02
sorenbarrett said:
The future always looks better. The only problem is the future never comes. Oh yes retirement will but it will no longer be the future and you will still do as you do today. A great poem of looking to another day.
February 20th, 2025 14:02
Un Jour
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been said
The sexual energy
Has the power to enslave
And the power to free
Great write, Ninja Girl!
February 19th, 2025 00:30
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been said
The sexual energy
Has the power to enslave
And the power to free
Great write, Ninja Girl!
February 19th, 2025 00:30
Un Jour
Your Girlfriend said:
Moi connaissant le français... Quand j\'ai vu le mot porno, j\'étais comme oups. J\'espère que personne ne traduit cela. Fille, bien écrire, j\'espère que tu es la seule à lire mon commentaire. Mais oui, bien écrire !
February 18th, 2025 16:11
Your Girlfriend said:
Moi connaissant le français... Quand j\'ai vu le mot porno, j\'étais comme oups. J\'espère que personne ne traduit cela. Fille, bien écrire, j\'espère que tu es la seule à lire mon commentaire. Mais oui, bien écrire !
February 18th, 2025 16:11
Un Jour
sorenbarrett said:
Not for like of desire but for lack of French I can only make out bits and pieces but I applaud the ability and courage to write in other languages I have written only one poem in Portuguese so good for you.
February 18th, 2025 14:16
sorenbarrett said:
Not for like of desire but for lack of French I can only make out bits and pieces but I applaud the ability and courage to write in other languages I have written only one poem in Portuguese so good for you.
February 18th, 2025 14:16
Feminism, but can I keep my bra?
whats write for me said:
Well written, marvelous insight. Worthy of being read. Thank you for sharing.
February 18th, 2025 11:32
whats write for me said:
Well written, marvelous insight. Worthy of being read. Thank you for sharing.
February 18th, 2025 11:32
Feminism, but can I keep my bra?
Poetic Licence said:
Equal means equal for all, great write
February 18th, 2025 01:56
Poetic Licence said:
Equal means equal for all, great write
February 18th, 2025 01:56
Feminism, but can I keep my bra?
Doggerel Dave said:
Your title provoked an abiding interest......😋
February 17th, 2025 23:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Your title provoked an abiding interest......😋
February 17th, 2025 23:11
Feminism, but can I keep my bra?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
[Checks for wire support]🤣 All jokes aside, amen to this. Powerful write! 🌹👏
February 17th, 2025 19:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
[Checks for wire support]🤣 All jokes aside, amen to this. Powerful write! 🌹👏
February 17th, 2025 19:54
Feminism, but can I keep my bra?
sorenbarrett said:
Love the metaphor here that there are differences and that they are to be respected. Equal mean just that whether man or woman and recognizing that we are all equal in rights we are not equal in talents, physic, or mind. All to be respected.
February 17th, 2025 19:44
sorenbarrett said:
Love the metaphor here that there are differences and that they are to be respected. Equal mean just that whether man or woman and recognizing that we are all equal in rights we are not equal in talents, physic, or mind. All to be respected.
February 17th, 2025 19:44
Feminism, but can I keep my bra?
Your Girlfriend said:
Girl I freaking love it! Good write!
February 17th, 2025 19:39
Your Girlfriend said:
Girl I freaking love it! Good write!
February 17th, 2025 19:39
pain
RSM0812 said:
Well written. Though depressing it may be. One thing I\'ve learned is that at least pain let\'s you know your alive. Which is probably better then being dead. I\'m not saying embrace pain but take it for what it is. A knock on your consciencness saying \"hello, your still alive\".
February 15th, 2025 10:39
RSM0812 said:
Well written. Though depressing it may be. One thing I\'ve learned is that at least pain let\'s you know your alive. Which is probably better then being dead. I\'m not saying embrace pain but take it for what it is. A knock on your consciencness saying \"hello, your still alive\".
February 15th, 2025 10:39
Embers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
An absolute fave and a great use of metaphor. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
February 13th, 2025 15:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
An absolute fave and a great use of metaphor. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
February 13th, 2025 15:04
Embers
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very clever way of expressing surviving pain from a long lost love, great write
February 13th, 2025 12:27
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very clever way of expressing surviving pain from a long lost love, great write
February 13th, 2025 12:27
Embers
teardrop said:
Wow! I enjoyed this read. I read it twice. Thank you
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February 13th, 2025 10:56
teardrop said:
Wow! I enjoyed this read. I read it twice. Thank you
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February 13th, 2025 10:56
Embers
sorenbarrett said:
A very clever use of a powerful metaphor to achieve a feeling of past passion that has fallen to ash but still evokes burning pains. Brilliant one of your best a definate fave
February 13th, 2025 10:51
sorenbarrett said:
A very clever use of a powerful metaphor to achieve a feeling of past passion that has fallen to ash but still evokes burning pains. Brilliant one of your best a definate fave
February 13th, 2025 10:51
surrender
RSM0812 said:
Never tried Cocain. Lol. Might be a lie. Can\'t exactly remember. Just kidding. This is my favorite read for quite some time. Not to offer my opinion bc this is a great write but after \"over the addict?\" I would have written \"at what cost\". Mesmerizing. You have a beautiful talent.
February 13th, 2025 09:35
RSM0812 said:
Never tried Cocain. Lol. Might be a lie. Can\'t exactly remember. Just kidding. This is my favorite read for quite some time. Not to offer my opinion bc this is a great write but after \"over the addict?\" I would have written \"at what cost\". Mesmerizing. You have a beautiful talent.
February 13th, 2025 09:35
surrender
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This is profoundly true and very relatable. My drug was not cocaine...different substance, same principle! Wonderful write, dear friend and poet! 🌹👏
February 12th, 2025 21:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This is profoundly true and very relatable. My drug was not cocaine...different substance, same principle! Wonderful write, dear friend and poet! 🌹👏
February 12th, 2025 21:52
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