Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
Taking its Toll
sorenbarrett said:
Selfishness is an expensive past time or hobby. Short but pregnant with meaning.
October 16th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Selfishness is an expensive past time or hobby. Short but pregnant with meaning.
October 16th, 2025 04:11
me and the rain
RSM0812 said:
This envokes an unwelcome sadness like being caught in a storm and the rain are your tears. Seeiously, nicely done.
October 15th, 2025 08:00
RSM0812 said:
This envokes an unwelcome sadness like being caught in a storm and the rain are your tears. Seeiously, nicely done.
October 15th, 2025 08:00
me and the rain
sorenbarrett said:
Always easier to give up but not always better. A heartfelt poem of joining nature and leaving this shell behind. Sad and dark in a light way. Nicely done
October 14th, 2025 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
Always easier to give up but not always better. A heartfelt poem of joining nature and leaving this shell behind. Sad and dark in a light way. Nicely done
October 14th, 2025 09:33
Escape
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is quiet devastation…the kind that doesn’t shout, just lingers. Justice, guilt, escape—all folded into a single haunting reflection. Brilliant minimalism, my friend. You did what you had to do and such things are out of your control. Your cry for justice, no doubt (as evidenced by this introspective and empathetic poem), is for your little brother too. I pray for justice for you too, my friend. For both of you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 14th, 2025 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is quiet devastation…the kind that doesn’t shout, just lingers. Justice, guilt, escape—all folded into a single haunting reflection. Brilliant minimalism, my friend. You did what you had to do and such things are out of your control. Your cry for justice, no doubt (as evidenced by this introspective and empathetic poem), is for your little brother too. I pray for justice for you too, my friend. For both of you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 14th, 2025 08:04
Escape
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic question that asks one to step outside themselves and judge one\'s own behaviors on the same scale that one judges others. A most lovely write of introspection. Nicely done
October 14th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic question that asks one to step outside themselves and judge one\'s own behaviors on the same scale that one judges others. A most lovely write of introspection. Nicely done
October 14th, 2025 03:44
Escape
Keyara S Trotman said:
Wonderfully written here. This is definitely one that is worth the read. I like how you’ve ended it with such notice as with a question, which you stated “If I left a little one behind in the same unjust situation?” Great question dear, we may not know the answer, yet what would you say is justice to you, although mainly and deeply this is much so about justice entirely.
Overall nicely done here 🥂✨👏🏻
October 14th, 2025 00:51
Keyara S Trotman said:
Wonderfully written here. This is definitely one that is worth the read. I like how you’ve ended it with such notice as with a question, which you stated “If I left a little one behind in the same unjust situation?” Great question dear, we may not know the answer, yet what would you say is justice to you, although mainly and deeply this is much so about justice entirely.
Overall nicely done here 🥂✨👏🏻
October 14th, 2025 00:51
Clipping My Nails
arial said:
It\'s feels like I have to live but the resistance in my body humbles my breathe
Great write ..
October 12th, 2025 12:57
arial said:
It\'s feels like I have to live but the resistance in my body humbles my breathe
Great write ..
October 12th, 2025 12:57
Torture
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is haunting…so human in its breaking. And no...they just don\'t get it. At all. The soapy glass, the sleepless eyes, the rawness of “please stop”...it all bleeds truth. The restraint makes the pain echo longer. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
October 12th, 2025 07:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is haunting…so human in its breaking. And no...they just don\'t get it. At all. The soapy glass, the sleepless eyes, the rawness of “please stop”...it all bleeds truth. The restraint makes the pain echo longer. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
October 12th, 2025 07:33
Torture
Paul Bell said:
Remember, a child in need, is usually someone who does your head in.
You can choose your friends, unfortunately you\'re stuck with the other lot.
October 12th, 2025 05:58
Paul Bell said:
Remember, a child in need, is usually someone who does your head in.
You can choose your friends, unfortunately you\'re stuck with the other lot.
October 12th, 2025 05:58
Torture
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the irritation and aggravation in this poem. It calls out for relief. Nicely worded with a most interesting metaphor of a soapy glass in dishwater. Well done
October 12th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the irritation and aggravation in this poem. It calls out for relief. Nicely worded with a most interesting metaphor of a soapy glass in dishwater. Well done
October 12th, 2025 03:49
Clipping My Nails
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷 my friend, this is quietly profound—an everyday ritual turned confession. You captured fatigue, care, and the small triumph of doing something for yourself. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2025 08:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷 my friend, this is quietly profound—an everyday ritual turned confession. You captured fatigue, care, and the small triumph of doing something for yourself. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2025 08:18
Clipping My Nails
RSM0812 said:
Nails grow even in death. They are humanitys claws. Nice write.
October 11th, 2025 06:04
RSM0812 said:
Nails grow even in death. They are humanitys claws. Nice write.
October 11th, 2025 06:04
Clipping My Nails
Poetic Licence said:
I really like this very relatable write, the desire to look after oneself knowing we feel good when we have done, but feeling exhausted and worn by the struggles of life, we lack any energy to undertake the simplest of things, well written
October 10th, 2025 20:38
Poetic Licence said:
I really like this very relatable write, the desire to look after oneself knowing we feel good when we have done, but feeling exhausted and worn by the struggles of life, we lack any energy to undertake the simplest of things, well written
October 10th, 2025 20:38
Clipping My Nails
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting analogy that you make with days and hours growing as well as nails. Clipping nails shows that even the most mundane of tasks can be used to make a poem. Well done
October 10th, 2025 20:26
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting analogy that you make with days and hours growing as well as nails. Clipping nails shows that even the most mundane of tasks can be used to make a poem. Well done
October 10th, 2025 20:26
Clipping My Nails
Friendship said:
The poem \"Clipping My Nails\" explores the theme of self-care and the struggle with maintaining personal rituals amidst the pressures of daily life. It reflects the tension between the desire for perfection and the fatigue that often prevents us from accomplishing even simple tasks.
October 10th, 2025 19:59
Friendship said:
The poem \"Clipping My Nails\" explores the theme of self-care and the struggle with maintaining personal rituals amidst the pressures of daily life. It reflects the tension between the desire for perfection and the fatigue that often prevents us from accomplishing even simple tasks.
October 10th, 2025 19:59
Lighter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷 my friend, I’ve felt that kind of fight...where the smallest act takes all your strength. You made that moment of effort burn with meaning. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2025 19:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷 my friend, I’ve felt that kind of fight...where the smallest act takes all your strength. You made that moment of effort burn with meaning. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2025 19:56
Lighter
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Lighter\" explores the struggle to ignite a spark, both literally and metaphorically. It reflects on the effort required to produce light and warmth, suggesting deeper themes of struggle, frustration, and perhaps the yearning for illumination or clarity in life.
October 9th, 2025 07:59
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Lighter\" explores the struggle to ignite a spark, both literally and metaphorically. It reflects on the effort required to produce light and warmth, suggesting deeper themes of struggle, frustration, and perhaps the yearning for illumination or clarity in life.
October 9th, 2025 07:59
Lighter
sorenbarrett said:
Here there is a metaphor that shines through. Some people are just too much work to get to see the light. You get what you pay for. A good read
October 9th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Here there is a metaphor that shines through. Some people are just too much work to get to see the light. You get what you pay for. A good read
October 9th, 2025 03:55
Rejection Reflection
Doggerel Dave said:
Hard to compartmentalise when crap falls on you at different times.. Tend to see it as one continuous shitshower...
Short and descriptive, your pin.
October 8th, 2025 21:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Hard to compartmentalise when crap falls on you at different times.. Tend to see it as one continuous shitshower...
Short and descriptive, your pin.
October 8th, 2025 21:27
Rejection Reflection
sorenbarrett said:
There are a few lines that I hate to hear,(we regret to inform you, unfortunately, regrettably, I\'m sorry to tell you) are among several. Good write
October 8th, 2025 21:19
sorenbarrett said:
There are a few lines that I hate to hear,(we regret to inform you, unfortunately, regrettably, I\'m sorry to tell you) are among several. Good write
October 8th, 2025 21:19
When will I catch a win?
Doggerel Dave said:
Who???
Good to see you back, NG.😊👍
October 8th, 2025 00:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Who???
Good to see you back, NG.😊👍
October 8th, 2025 00:46
When will I catch a win?
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around the struggle to achieve success or \"catch a win.\" It emphasizes perseverance in the face of challenges and setbacks, highlighting the emotional toll that this pursuit can take on an individual.
October 7th, 2025 19:19
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around the struggle to achieve success or \"catch a win.\" It emphasizes perseverance in the face of challenges and setbacks, highlighting the emotional toll that this pursuit can take on an individual.
October 7th, 2025 19:19
When will I catch a win?
sorenbarrett said:
Never chase a man let him chase you. A fun but really good write. Very nicely done NinjaGirl
October 7th, 2025 13:35
sorenbarrett said:
Never chase a man let him chase you. A fun but really good write. Very nicely done NinjaGirl
October 7th, 2025 13:35
When will I catch a win?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lol! i totally relate my dear 🥷🪶 friend! Lately especially! That said I just did catch a win. I thought of you yesterday and here you are today!
Manifestation? 🤷♂️🤣 Great to read you! Hope all is well! Great job on this my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 7th, 2025 13:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lol! i totally relate my dear 🥷🪶 friend! Lately especially! That said I just did catch a win. I thought of you yesterday and here you are today!
Manifestation? 🤷♂️🤣 Great to read you! Hope all is well! Great job on this my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 7th, 2025 13:11
Fighting Myself
NafisaSB said:
life is what you allow it to be - so do not let the poison scar you
good verse - but looking for more positivity..
September 22nd, 2025 23:46
NafisaSB said:
life is what you allow it to be - so do not let the poison scar you
good verse - but looking for more positivity..
September 22nd, 2025 23:46
Illness Ill Advised.
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around the complex relationship between an individual and their inner struggles, possibly representing mental health issues such as depression or anxiety. The speaker personifies these struggles as a persistent companion that the individual cannot escape from, highlighting themes of dependency, self-loathing, and the duality of feeling both alone and accompanied by one\'s own darkness. The subject matter delves into the torment of living with these internal conflicts and the paradox of finding
September 17th, 2025 08:58
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around the complex relationship between an individual and their inner struggles, possibly representing mental health issues such as depression or anxiety. The speaker personifies these struggles as a persistent companion that the individual cannot escape from, highlighting themes of dependency, self-loathing, and the duality of feeling both alone and accompanied by one\'s own darkness. The subject matter delves into the torment of living with these internal conflicts and the paradox of finding
September 17th, 2025 08:58
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