Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
Dissolve
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is subtle and heavy at the same time. Color fading, movement slowing, identity reshaping itself under pressure…it’s a small portrait that carries a lot of grief. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 13th, 2026 19:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is subtle and heavy at the same time. Color fading, movement slowing, identity reshaping itself under pressure…it’s a small portrait that carries a lot of grief. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 13th, 2026 19:22
The Confession
NafisaSB said:
when you have someone trusting in you - let go and accept - you are lucky to get it even while you were unsure about it...
January 13th, 2026 02:42
NafisaSB said:
when you have someone trusting in you - let go and accept - you are lucky to get it even while you were unsure about it...
January 13th, 2026 02:42
Dissolve
sorenbarrett said:
How time takes its toll and wears on us all. A nicely written poem
January 12th, 2026 17:19
sorenbarrett said:
How time takes its toll and wears on us all. A nicely written poem
January 12th, 2026 17:19
Cause
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
That is deeply felt. And a question that haunts the ages.....
January 12th, 2026 13:52
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
That is deeply felt. And a question that haunts the ages.....
January 12th, 2026 13:52
Realization
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is brave writing. The way you trace manipulation from confusion to recognition feels stark and real…especially that moment when the future comes back into your own hands. This isn’t just a poem, it’s a boundary being drawn. Thank you for sharing it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 12th, 2026 10:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is brave writing. The way you trace manipulation from confusion to recognition feels stark and real…especially that moment when the future comes back into your own hands. This isn’t just a poem, it’s a boundary being drawn. Thank you for sharing it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 12th, 2026 10:01
Realization
sorenbarrett said:
A good write where the struggle for control in a relationship is a good indicator of what it is capable of. One that can not accept you for who you are does not love you. Encouraging change for your betterment by one that loves you is far different than demanding change to meet their desires.
January 12th, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
A good write where the struggle for control in a relationship is a good indicator of what it is capable of. One that can not accept you for who you are does not love you. Encouraging change for your betterment by one that loves you is far different than demanding change to meet their desires.
January 12th, 2026 03:48
Paying with my Time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is raw and unflinching. It doesn’t moralize from a distance, it speaks from inside the struggle. That honesty gives it weight. Powerful write, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 10th, 2026 10:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is raw and unflinching. It doesn’t moralize from a distance, it speaks from inside the struggle. That honesty gives it weight. Powerful write, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 10th, 2026 10:41
Paying with my Time
Doggerel Dave said:
Am I to decide precisely what you gave your time to? Or is that the point?
January 9th, 2026 18:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Am I to decide precisely what you gave your time to? Or is that the point?
January 9th, 2026 18:27
Paying with my Time
sorenbarrett said:
Addiction to drugs as well as other things is a temporary gratification for a payment in life and all future. Nicely written
January 9th, 2026 16:49
sorenbarrett said:
Addiction to drugs as well as other things is a temporary gratification for a payment in life and all future. Nicely written
January 9th, 2026 16:49
Trying for Trust
William Hromada said:
Where would we be if we didn’t? I feel that pain though!
January 8th, 2026 15:56
William Hromada said:
Where would we be if we didn’t? I feel that pain though!
January 8th, 2026 15:56
The Confession
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know that fear of being less loved once the truth is spoken. The hope you hold here feels earned, not naïve. This understands the risk it takes just to trust. Very well done, dear friend. Welcome back...you\'ve been missed! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 7th, 2026 09:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know that fear of being less loved once the truth is spoken. The hope you hold here feels earned, not naïve. This understands the risk it takes just to trust. Very well done, dear friend. Welcome back...you\'ve been missed! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 7th, 2026 09:16
The Confession
sorenbarrett said:
We all want to be loved for who we are but are often too afraid of rejection to tell anyone who we are. The secret is that in truth we find out who really loves us and not the facade that we put on. A wonderful write the cuts to the heart of social fake pretense. Well done
January 6th, 2026 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
We all want to be loved for who we are but are often too afraid of rejection to tell anyone who we are. The secret is that in truth we find out who really loves us and not the facade that we put on. A wonderful write the cuts to the heart of social fake pretense. Well done
January 6th, 2026 13:13
Up in Flames
NafisaSB said:
it\'s not always one sided - easy to shoulder all the blame; but maybe it was not meant to be, and you have learnt a good lesson for the next time...all the best
December 25th, 2025 02:03
NafisaSB said:
it\'s not always one sided - easy to shoulder all the blame; but maybe it was not meant to be, and you have learnt a good lesson for the next time...all the best
December 25th, 2025 02:03
Up in Flames
RSM0812 said:
A remarkable write about being alone in a world that feels too big sometimes. Love is a complicated thing to find sometimes. Even if you have a lot of it to offer.
December 20th, 2025 21:44
RSM0812 said:
A remarkable write about being alone in a world that feels too big sometimes. Love is a complicated thing to find sometimes. Even if you have a lot of it to offer.
December 20th, 2025 21:44
Up in Flames
Katie B. said:
Heavy, deep and poignant. Hope you are well. Merry Christmas to you and yours!
December 18th, 2025 07:17
Katie B. said:
Heavy, deep and poignant. Hope you are well. Merry Christmas to you and yours!
December 18th, 2025 07:17
Up in Flames
Friendship said:
Your poem “Up in Flames” explores the struggles of vulnerability and self-acceptance in the context of love. It reflects on the emotional scars that hinder the poet\'s ability to connect with another person, highlighting the internal conflict between the desire for intimacy and the fear of exposing one’s pain.
December 18th, 2025 06:48
Friendship said:
Your poem “Up in Flames” explores the struggles of vulnerability and self-acceptance in the context of love. It reflects on the emotional scars that hinder the poet\'s ability to connect with another person, highlighting the internal conflict between the desire for intimacy and the fear of exposing one’s pain.
December 18th, 2025 06:48
Up in Flames
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the theme of damaged goods in this poem. Even if sold at a discounted price someone wants them or they could not be sold. A good write some people buy them to repair and sell for a profit.
December 18th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the theme of damaged goods in this poem. Even if sold at a discounted price someone wants them or they could not be sold. A good write some people buy them to repair and sell for a profit.
December 18th, 2025 03:58
Cause
sorenbarrett said:
There is a thin line between self punishment and perseverance in learning by hard knocks. The dividing line is self harm as opposed to self improvement. Well done
December 18th, 2025 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
There is a thin line between self punishment and perseverance in learning by hard knocks. The dividing line is self harm as opposed to self improvement. Well done
December 18th, 2025 03:47
Trying for Trust
RSM0812 said:
Great imagery here ni jagirl. Gives the reader.a deeper moment. Great ✍️ for sure.
December 17th, 2025 09:13
RSM0812 said:
Great imagery here ni jagirl. Gives the reader.a deeper moment. Great ✍️ for sure.
December 17th, 2025 09:13
Trying for Trust
Friendship said:
Wow, NinjaGirl, a powerful poem, well said. The poem \"Trying for Trust\" explores themes of betrayal, vulnerability, and the complexities of trust in relationships. The poet reflects on their own role in fostering an environment where betrayal could occur, revealing the paradox of being shocked by someone\'s disloyalty despite having offered them opportunities to cause harm.
December 16th, 2025 19:31
Friendship said:
Wow, NinjaGirl, a powerful poem, well said. The poem \"Trying for Trust\" explores themes of betrayal, vulnerability, and the complexities of trust in relationships. The poet reflects on their own role in fostering an environment where betrayal could occur, revealing the paradox of being shocked by someone\'s disloyalty despite having offered them opportunities to cause harm.
December 16th, 2025 19:31
Trying for Trust
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor in this poem and it has a double meaning as well. Loved it a fave
December 16th, 2025 19:21
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor in this poem and it has a double meaning as well. Loved it a fave
December 16th, 2025 19:21
Leading Hand
sorenbarrett said:
Although I take this to be spiritual maybe religious it is also literal and good advice. Nicely done NinjaGirl
December 16th, 2025 03:27
sorenbarrett said:
Although I take this to be spiritual maybe religious it is also literal and good advice. Nicely done NinjaGirl
December 16th, 2025 03:27
My body and You
Friendship said:
This poem seems to revolve around a complex relationship characterized by unreciprocated feelings, loss of agency, and the haunting nature of desire. The poet grapples with the idea of being overtaken by another\'s desires, leading to a loss of self.
December 12th, 2025 18:29
Friendship said:
This poem seems to revolve around a complex relationship characterized by unreciprocated feelings, loss of agency, and the haunting nature of desire. The poet grapples with the idea of being overtaken by another\'s desires, leading to a loss of self.
December 12th, 2025 18:29
My body and You
Doggerel Dave said:
Your trauma remains and causes much pain.
(Beyond acknowledgement there can be little else from here - none closer to home?)
December 12th, 2025 17:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Your trauma remains and causes much pain.
(Beyond acknowledgement there can be little else from here - none closer to home?)
December 12th, 2025 17:16
My body and You
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is stark and unsettling in the right way. Each section tightens the grip, and that final plea lands hard. Thank you for having the courage to write and share this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 12th, 2025 15:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is stark and unsettling in the right way. Each section tightens the grip, and that final plea lands hard. Thank you for having the courage to write and share this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 12th, 2025 15:00
My body and You
sorenbarrett said:
This poem NinjaGirl speaks of yours and mine and the space between. Is our mind really ours?
December 12th, 2025 14:13
sorenbarrett said:
This poem NinjaGirl speaks of yours and mine and the space between. Is our mind really ours?
December 12th, 2025 14:13
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