Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
Up in Flames
NafisaSB said:
it\'s not always one sided - easy to shoulder all the blame; but maybe it was not meant to be, and you have learnt a good lesson for the next time...all the best
December 25th, 2025 02:03
NafisaSB said:
it\'s not always one sided - easy to shoulder all the blame; but maybe it was not meant to be, and you have learnt a good lesson for the next time...all the best
December 25th, 2025 02:03
Up in Flames
RSM0812 said:
A remarkable write about being alone in a world that feels too big sometimes. Love is a complicated thing to find sometimes. Even if you have a lot of it to offer.
December 20th, 2025 21:44
RSM0812 said:
A remarkable write about being alone in a world that feels too big sometimes. Love is a complicated thing to find sometimes. Even if you have a lot of it to offer.
December 20th, 2025 21:44
Up in Flames
Katie B. said:
Heavy, deep and poignant. Hope you are well. Merry Christmas to you and yours!
December 18th, 2025 07:17
Katie B. said:
Heavy, deep and poignant. Hope you are well. Merry Christmas to you and yours!
December 18th, 2025 07:17
Up in Flames
Friendship said:
Your poem “Up in Flames” explores the struggles of vulnerability and self-acceptance in the context of love. It reflects on the emotional scars that hinder the poet\'s ability to connect with another person, highlighting the internal conflict between the desire for intimacy and the fear of exposing one’s pain.
December 18th, 2025 06:48
Friendship said:
Your poem “Up in Flames” explores the struggles of vulnerability and self-acceptance in the context of love. It reflects on the emotional scars that hinder the poet\'s ability to connect with another person, highlighting the internal conflict between the desire for intimacy and the fear of exposing one’s pain.
December 18th, 2025 06:48
Up in Flames
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the theme of damaged goods in this poem. Even if sold at a discounted price someone wants them or they could not be sold. A good write some people buy them to repair and sell for a profit.
December 18th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the theme of damaged goods in this poem. Even if sold at a discounted price someone wants them or they could not be sold. A good write some people buy them to repair and sell for a profit.
December 18th, 2025 03:58
Cause
sorenbarrett said:
There is a thin line between self punishment and perseverance in learning by hard knocks. The dividing line is self harm as opposed to self improvement. Well done
December 18th, 2025 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
There is a thin line between self punishment and perseverance in learning by hard knocks. The dividing line is self harm as opposed to self improvement. Well done
December 18th, 2025 03:47
Trying for Trust
RSM0812 said:
Great imagery here ni jagirl. Gives the reader.a deeper moment. Great ✍️ for sure.
December 17th, 2025 09:13
RSM0812 said:
Great imagery here ni jagirl. Gives the reader.a deeper moment. Great ✍️ for sure.
December 17th, 2025 09:13
Trying for Trust
Friendship said:
Wow, NinjaGirl, a powerful poem, well said. The poem \"Trying for Trust\" explores themes of betrayal, vulnerability, and the complexities of trust in relationships. The poet reflects on their own role in fostering an environment where betrayal could occur, revealing the paradox of being shocked by someone\'s disloyalty despite having offered them opportunities to cause harm.
December 16th, 2025 19:31
Friendship said:
Wow, NinjaGirl, a powerful poem, well said. The poem \"Trying for Trust\" explores themes of betrayal, vulnerability, and the complexities of trust in relationships. The poet reflects on their own role in fostering an environment where betrayal could occur, revealing the paradox of being shocked by someone\'s disloyalty despite having offered them opportunities to cause harm.
December 16th, 2025 19:31
Trying for Trust
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor in this poem and it has a double meaning as well. Loved it a fave
December 16th, 2025 19:21
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor in this poem and it has a double meaning as well. Loved it a fave
December 16th, 2025 19:21
Leading Hand
sorenbarrett said:
Although I take this to be spiritual maybe religious it is also literal and good advice. Nicely done NinjaGirl
December 16th, 2025 03:27
sorenbarrett said:
Although I take this to be spiritual maybe religious it is also literal and good advice. Nicely done NinjaGirl
December 16th, 2025 03:27
My body and You
Friendship said:
This poem seems to revolve around a complex relationship characterized by unreciprocated feelings, loss of agency, and the haunting nature of desire. The poet grapples with the idea of being overtaken by another\'s desires, leading to a loss of self.
December 12th, 2025 18:29
Friendship said:
This poem seems to revolve around a complex relationship characterized by unreciprocated feelings, loss of agency, and the haunting nature of desire. The poet grapples with the idea of being overtaken by another\'s desires, leading to a loss of self.
December 12th, 2025 18:29
My body and You
Doggerel Dave said:
Your trauma remains and causes much pain.
(Beyond acknowledgement there can be little else from here - none closer to home?)
December 12th, 2025 17:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Your trauma remains and causes much pain.
(Beyond acknowledgement there can be little else from here - none closer to home?)
December 12th, 2025 17:16
My body and You
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is stark and unsettling in the right way. Each section tightens the grip, and that final plea lands hard. Thank you for having the courage to write and share this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 12th, 2025 15:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is stark and unsettling in the right way. Each section tightens the grip, and that final plea lands hard. Thank you for having the courage to write and share this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 12th, 2025 15:00
My body and You
sorenbarrett said:
This poem NinjaGirl speaks of yours and mine and the space between. Is our mind really ours?
December 12th, 2025 14:13
sorenbarrett said:
This poem NinjaGirl speaks of yours and mine and the space between. Is our mind really ours?
December 12th, 2025 14:13
My body and You
Syd said:
Cool write. Reminds me of The Pixies somehow. Where is my mind?
Enjoyed - Syd
December 12th, 2025 14:13
Syd said:
Cool write. Reminds me of The Pixies somehow. Where is my mind?
Enjoyed - Syd
December 12th, 2025 14:13
Benighted
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’ve known that moment…the wanting to clear what’s settled, but not having the heart or strength to begin. You wrote it with such real, human clarity. That image of the resident holding the duster but unable to move…that says everything. You captured inertia with such tender honesty. Beautiful job, dearest 🥷 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 11th, 2025 10:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’ve known that moment…the wanting to clear what’s settled, but not having the heart or strength to begin. You wrote it with such real, human clarity. That image of the resident holding the duster but unable to move…that says everything. You captured inertia with such tender honesty. Beautiful job, dearest 🥷 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 11th, 2025 10:07
a story from my life or my life\'s story?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is powerful…raw and brave in every line. The way you move through the echoes of each word hits hard. Thank you for trusting the page with this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 11th, 2025 10:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this is powerful…raw and brave in every line. The way you move through the echoes of each word hits hard. Thank you for trusting the page with this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 11th, 2025 10:05
Benighted
sorenbarrett said:
Ah NinjaGirl you have become enigmatic of late. This poem speaks of time and age as well as friends. The dust that clouds one\'s memory one is reluctant to cleanse in that the sharpness of reality is less pleasant than the softness that the dust of time has given it. That is my interpretation although it might not be the original intent or the only interpretation.
December 11th, 2025 03:35
sorenbarrett said:
Ah NinjaGirl you have become enigmatic of late. This poem speaks of time and age as well as friends. The dust that clouds one\'s memory one is reluctant to cleanse in that the sharpness of reality is less pleasant than the softness that the dust of time has given it. That is my interpretation although it might not be the original intent or the only interpretation.
December 11th, 2025 03:35
a story from my life or my life\'s story?
sorenbarrett said:
One is handed a hand full of clay some a little, some a lot, what they do with it is up to them. Your story, your choice. Well done NinjaGirl. Don\'t let anyone steal your clay.
December 11th, 2025 03:25
sorenbarrett said:
One is handed a hand full of clay some a little, some a lot, what they do with it is up to them. Your story, your choice. Well done NinjaGirl. Don\'t let anyone steal your clay.
December 11th, 2025 03:25
a story from my life or my life\'s story?
Doggerel Dave said:
Riddle? Obviously a traumatic event you have yet to recover from .
December 11th, 2025 00:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Riddle? Obviously a traumatic event you have yet to recover from .
December 11th, 2025 00:12
Bad Person
Doggerel Dave said:
Too keen to adjust, to fit in. Be you and let them come to...... you!
December 9th, 2025 01:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Too keen to adjust, to fit in. Be you and let them come to...... you!
December 9th, 2025 01:19
Copper Taste
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this hits like a pulse in the dark…quiet but relentless. The weight you’re carrying here comes through so clearly, especially in those lines about paying for what isn’t yours. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 21:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🥷, this hits like a pulse in the dark…quiet but relentless. The weight you’re carrying here comes through so clearly, especially in those lines about paying for what isn’t yours. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 21:12
Copper Taste
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Copper Taste\" revolves around the burden of guilt and the consequences of sin. It explores themes of suffering, sacrifice, and the emotional weight carried by individuals who feel responsible for the pain inflicted upon others. The poet grapples with feelings of inadequacy and the sense of being trapped in a cycle of paying for sins that are not their own.
December 8th, 2025 15:24
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Copper Taste\" revolves around the burden of guilt and the consequences of sin. It explores themes of suffering, sacrifice, and the emotional weight carried by individuals who feel responsible for the pain inflicted upon others. The poet grapples with feelings of inadequacy and the sense of being trapped in a cycle of paying for sins that are not their own.
December 8th, 2025 15:24
Copper Taste
sorenbarrett said:
Heart felt this poem bleeds with emotion so well worded and so poetic. A fave
December 8th, 2025 15:17
sorenbarrett said:
Heart felt this poem bleeds with emotion so well worded and so poetic. A fave
December 8th, 2025 15:17
Bad Person
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You are a beautiful soul, my friend! This poem? Beautiful expression of never feeling enough! But: YOU ARE ENOUGH! ❤️🩹❤️🩹❤️🩹❤️🩹❤️🩹
December 8th, 2025 13:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You are a beautiful soul, my friend! This poem? Beautiful expression of never feeling enough! But: YOU ARE ENOUGH! ❤️🩹❤️🩹❤️🩹❤️🩹❤️🩹
December 8th, 2025 13:06
Bad Person
sorenbarrett said:
Three damaging questions with one answer. Because you think so. A powerful poem with a most sad implication. Self questioning leads others to question as well. Nicely written
December 8th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
Three damaging questions with one answer. Because you think so. A powerful poem with a most sad implication. Self questioning leads others to question as well. Nicely written
December 8th, 2025 03:56
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