Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
lines
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Where society draws lines is usually over the throats of the marginalized, including, but not obviously limited to, those with mental illness. A very poginant question in your note…but wow does your poem hit home. Loved the strikethrough, btw, cery effective! 🙏❤️
December 2nd, 2024 22:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Where society draws lines is usually over the throats of the marginalized, including, but not obviously limited to, those with mental illness. A very poginant question in your note…but wow does your poem hit home. Loved the strikethrough, btw, cery effective! 🙏❤️
December 2nd, 2024 22:11
what do you want to hear?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Boy have I been there felt this. A succinct poem that says much in its brevity! Well done my friend! 🌹👏
December 2nd, 2024 09:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Boy have I been there felt this. A succinct poem that says much in its brevity! Well done my friend! 🌹👏
December 2nd, 2024 09:36
price tag
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read, love should never have to be bought, should freely be given
November 30th, 2024 21:46
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read, love should never have to be bought, should freely be given
November 30th, 2024 21:46
price tag
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fantastic! I felt every ounce of this! Wonderful job! 🌹👏
November 30th, 2024 21:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fantastic! I felt every ounce of this! Wonderful job! 🌹👏
November 30th, 2024 21:28
consuming
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A favorite poem, but not a favorite feeling! This, my friend, captures a very familiar feeling for me. Anxiety sucks. This poem does not. In fact, it masterfully conveys anxiety in so few words! Brava! 🌹👏
November 25th, 2024 22:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A favorite poem, but not a favorite feeling! This, my friend, captures a very familiar feeling for me. Anxiety sucks. This poem does not. In fact, it masterfully conveys anxiety in so few words! Brava! 🌹👏
November 25th, 2024 22:11
consuming
sorenbarrett said:
It is exactly as this that one drowns nicely written and good word choice. Short to the point and with good potential for metaphor.
November 25th, 2024 21:04
sorenbarrett said:
It is exactly as this that one drowns nicely written and good word choice. Short to the point and with good potential for metaphor.
November 25th, 2024 21:04
peace in pieces
The Struggler said:
“I feel a piece of peace then”
Perhaps peace is not a “whole” but rather given in pieces. Maybe the idea of “peace” as one giant feeling isn’t what it actually is.
November 23rd, 2024 07:05
The Struggler said:
“I feel a piece of peace then”
Perhaps peace is not a “whole” but rather given in pieces. Maybe the idea of “peace” as one giant feeling isn’t what it actually is.
November 23rd, 2024 07:05
peace in pieces
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is with life we learn in pieces we feel in pieces we grow in pieces. A philosophical poem.
November 21st, 2024 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is with life we learn in pieces we feel in pieces we grow in pieces. A philosophical poem.
November 21st, 2024 04:03
cement roots
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. To hell with other\'s expectations! What do they know anyway? Nature cannot be tamed nor can the free spirit. Absolutely love this poem and the extended use of the roots metaphor! Brilliant poem. Instant fave! 👏🌹
November 19th, 2024 23:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. To hell with other\'s expectations! What do they know anyway? Nature cannot be tamed nor can the free spirit. Absolutely love this poem and the extended use of the roots metaphor! Brilliant poem. Instant fave! 👏🌹
November 19th, 2024 23:46
cement roots
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor and good advice to anyone that reads it. Very nicely done.
November 19th, 2024 22:22
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor and good advice to anyone that reads it. Very nicely done.
November 19th, 2024 22:22
time is silent
Dan Williams said:
Indeed, understanding is impossible most of the time. Try for when it isn\'t.
November 19th, 2024 01:17
Dan Williams said:
Indeed, understanding is impossible most of the time. Try for when it isn\'t.
November 19th, 2024 01:17
time is silent
RSM0812 said:
It\'s an amazing poem. One of the short and sweet ones. One of my favorites. :)
November 17th, 2024 21:33
RSM0812 said:
It\'s an amazing poem. One of the short and sweet ones. One of my favorites. :)
November 17th, 2024 21:33
time is silent
sorenbarrett said:
“Ticking time thick as wine” A great line it not only has rhyme but convey an image. Brilliant!!
November 17th, 2024 19:31
sorenbarrett said:
“Ticking time thick as wine” A great line it not only has rhyme but convey an image. Brilliant!!
November 17th, 2024 19:31
time is silent
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Time is slient, indeed! “Thick as wine”…this is poetry! 🌹👏
November 17th, 2024 18:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Time is slient, indeed! “Thick as wine”…this is poetry! 🌹👏
November 17th, 2024 18:13
death
RSM0812 said:
Wow, your a really good writer. I enjoyed that though dreary until the end. It sounds like an outer body experience. Remarkable.
November 13th, 2024 00:31
RSM0812 said:
Wow, your a really good writer. I enjoyed that though dreary until the end. It sounds like an outer body experience. Remarkable.
November 13th, 2024 00:31
death
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the concept of forever falling into the body! Great imagery throughout. Wonderful narrative poem with an awesome ending. Loved it! 🌹👏
November 12th, 2024 22:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the concept of forever falling into the body! Great imagery throughout. Wonderful narrative poem with an awesome ending. Loved it! 🌹👏
November 12th, 2024 22:36
you and the cave
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know the fear and it is real. With that said, if your partner loves you for who you are, they will dive to the depths of hell for you...your \"cave\" won\'t scare them away. That\'s not to say it won\'t scare them, but true love does not flee when the going gets tough...rather, it grows stronger. Thank you so much for sharing this. True vulnerability at its best and that always makes for a beautiful poem Well done! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 12th, 2024 07:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know the fear and it is real. With that said, if your partner loves you for who you are, they will dive to the depths of hell for you...your \"cave\" won\'t scare them away. That\'s not to say it won\'t scare them, but true love does not flee when the going gets tough...rather, it grows stronger. Thank you so much for sharing this. True vulnerability at its best and that always makes for a beautiful poem Well done! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 12th, 2024 07:16
disadvantage
NafisaSB said:
don\'t be embarrassed - head high, chin up, march ahead - your time will come too
November 6th, 2024 00:05
NafisaSB said:
don\'t be embarrassed - head high, chin up, march ahead - your time will come too
November 6th, 2024 00:05
broken pieces
Mwalimu Wuod Mwalimu said:
I can feel it🥲
I like the metaphorical language used. It appeals to the senses.
Great 🙏
November 5th, 2024 00:02
Mwalimu Wuod Mwalimu said:
I can feel it🥲
I like the metaphorical language used. It appeals to the senses.
Great 🙏
November 5th, 2024 00:02
disadvantage
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent job with this one, my friend! While \"they\" who have not been traumatized maybe ahead in someways, conversely, \"they\" may also be behind in others This poem represents what true art is a reflection on self and the surrounding world. Again. Beautifully done! 👏🌹
November 4th, 2024 23:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent job with this one, my friend! While \"they\" who have not been traumatized maybe ahead in someways, conversely, \"they\" may also be behind in others This poem represents what true art is a reflection on self and the surrounding world. Again. Beautifully done! 👏🌹
November 4th, 2024 23:40
disadvantage
sorenbarrett said:
That is what poetry is all about revealing oneself in words unabashed. Lovely taking a chance is the onlly way we learn.
November 4th, 2024 17:05
sorenbarrett said:
That is what poetry is all about revealing oneself in words unabashed. Lovely taking a chance is the onlly way we learn.
November 4th, 2024 17:05
end
sorenbarrett said:
Twilight or night both are brothers. A most intriguing write
November 4th, 2024 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Twilight or night both are brothers. A most intriguing write
November 4th, 2024 04:26
ninjagirl
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Good use of “ninja” in this poem. For me, perhaps I am off, my interpretation is this…longing for innocence, for when days were simple, innocent, happy and fun, where one was not suppressed to living in the shadows (like a ninja) where one is not noticed…or in the case of a ninja…may seek to remain unnoticed, since ninjas, as assassins, were very secretive and unseen on purpose, due to shame, guilt, lack of self-esteem or any other host of reasons. Not sure if I am hitting the mark, but that is what I got out of it reading your wonderful poem! Regardless of my interpretation, great job!!! 🖤❤️🖤🙏
October 31st, 2024 07:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Good use of “ninja” in this poem. For me, perhaps I am off, my interpretation is this…longing for innocence, for when days were simple, innocent, happy and fun, where one was not suppressed to living in the shadows (like a ninja) where one is not noticed…or in the case of a ninja…may seek to remain unnoticed, since ninjas, as assassins, were very secretive and unseen on purpose, due to shame, guilt, lack of self-esteem or any other host of reasons. Not sure if I am hitting the mark, but that is what I got out of it reading your wonderful poem! Regardless of my interpretation, great job!!! 🖤❤️🖤🙏
October 31st, 2024 07:29
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