Comments received on poems by NinjaGirl
death
Brian Otucho said:
This is a relatable poem. Nice
I tried to commit suicide last year when I was very desperate, but death refused to kill me. I had to bite the bullet and now life goes on.
December 17th, 2024 00:34
Brian Otucho said:
This is a relatable poem. Nice
I tried to commit suicide last year when I was very desperate, but death refused to kill me. I had to bite the bullet and now life goes on.
December 17th, 2024 00:34
slipping slowly
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh...\"losing myself to remember who I am\". 🤯 There you go with your master Ninja skills, stealthily sneaking that last line in at the end and taking the meaning of the poem to whole new levels. TOTAL NINJA MOVE...just saying, 🤣 This, my friend, is a hauntingly brilliant and profound write that deals with love, loss, and rediscovering who one is apart from another person. Moving from co-dependence to independence, perhaps?. Seriously. It is a wonderful example of how so much can be said in so few words. Brava! 🌹👏
December 16th, 2024 23:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh...\"losing myself to remember who I am\". 🤯 There you go with your master Ninja skills, stealthily sneaking that last line in at the end and taking the meaning of the poem to whole new levels. TOTAL NINJA MOVE...just saying, 🤣 This, my friend, is a hauntingly brilliant and profound write that deals with love, loss, and rediscovering who one is apart from another person. Moving from co-dependence to independence, perhaps?. Seriously. It is a wonderful example of how so much can be said in so few words. Brava! 🌹👏
December 16th, 2024 23:35
slipping slowly
Poetic Licence said:
Sad words about trying to find a purpose, few words but powerful
December 16th, 2024 17:59
Poetic Licence said:
Sad words about trying to find a purpose, few words but powerful
December 16th, 2024 17:59
slipping slowly
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad it speaks of uncertainty and a need to be oneself. To find oneself one must loose oneself. A deep poem with a haunting quality.
December 16th, 2024 15:21
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad it speaks of uncertainty and a need to be oneself. To find oneself one must loose oneself. A deep poem with a haunting quality.
December 16th, 2024 15:21
holiday time
Poetic Licence said:
A subject many will worry about this time of year and shouldn`t, enjoyable read.
December 16th, 2024 01:38
Poetic Licence said:
A subject many will worry about this time of year and shouldn`t, enjoyable read.
December 16th, 2024 01:38
holiday time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Right there with you, and I agree with Soren...love the Christmas Tree-esque shape of this poem. Great job, my friend! You are expressing something a lot of people feel during this time! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 23:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Right there with you, and I agree with Soren...love the Christmas Tree-esque shape of this poem. Great job, my friend! You are expressing something a lot of people feel during this time! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 23:48
holiday time
sorenbarrett said:
Love the shape of the poem that looks like a Christmas tree and the mention of the holidays so seasonal. With the holidays comes the temptation of foods but we all are in control of our choices and what ever they are know that it was your choice so own it and be happy with it. Nicely done
December 15th, 2024 21:29
sorenbarrett said:
Love the shape of the poem that looks like a Christmas tree and the mention of the holidays so seasonal. With the holidays comes the temptation of foods but we all are in control of our choices and what ever they are know that it was your choice so own it and be happy with it. Nicely done
December 15th, 2024 21:29
it\'s all in my head
sorenbarrett said:
Doubts powerful and common to us all. Nicely expressed
December 12th, 2024 20:31
sorenbarrett said:
Doubts powerful and common to us all. Nicely expressed
December 12th, 2024 20:31
it\'s all in my head
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write and I think it pairs well with the song! Nicely done, NInjaGirl! You rock! 🌹👏🤘😎
December 12th, 2024 19:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write and I think it pairs well with the song! Nicely done, NInjaGirl! You rock! 🌹👏🤘😎
December 12th, 2024 19:39
swimming through sand
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully done, friend! I can relate to this…deeply! 🌹👏
December 11th, 2024 05:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully done, friend! I can relate to this…deeply! 🌹👏
December 11th, 2024 05:26
swimming through sand
sorenbarrett said:
They say that if one finds oneself in quicksand one should swim. Very nicely written this poem of frustration and pain. I can feel it in the words and the effort as if walking into the face of a hurricane. It is this feeling that I get from it that makes it a work of art
December 11th, 2024 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
They say that if one finds oneself in quicksand one should swim. Very nicely written this poem of frustration and pain. I can feel it in the words and the effort as if walking into the face of a hurricane. It is this feeling that I get from it that makes it a work of art
December 11th, 2024 04:31
swimming through sand
Poetic Licence said:
this resonates with me, wellwritten
December 11th, 2024 03:17
Poetic Licence said:
this resonates with me, wellwritten
December 11th, 2024 03:17
revenge
Poetic Licence said:
Revenge is a very short lived high, then normally a life time of regret. I like the 2 sides of your poem it is well written, take care
December 8th, 2024 20:42
Poetic Licence said:
Revenge is a very short lived high, then normally a life time of regret. I like the 2 sides of your poem it is well written, take care
December 8th, 2024 20:42
revenge
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I understand this. My trauma is for sure different than yours...but I GET THIS. In fact, I wrote a poem at least 16 years ago about someone...toward someone...I was abused by. Not physical abuse...but verbal, emotional and psychological. The poem\'s title is Nothing to Me. I have contemplated publishing it, but have hesitated it because it is really raw and I flirt with the idea of revenge in it...but come to the same conclusion you do in this poem. Anyway. Thank you for your vulnerability, your raw emotions and for being a voice for the voiceless. ❤️🩹
December 8th, 2024 19:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I understand this. My trauma is for sure different than yours...but I GET THIS. In fact, I wrote a poem at least 16 years ago about someone...toward someone...I was abused by. Not physical abuse...but verbal, emotional and psychological. The poem\'s title is Nothing to Me. I have contemplated publishing it, but have hesitated it because it is really raw and I flirt with the idea of revenge in it...but come to the same conclusion you do in this poem. Anyway. Thank you for your vulnerability, your raw emotions and for being a voice for the voiceless. ❤️🩹
December 8th, 2024 19:49
revenge
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of self redemption and grace through letting go. Lovely and well expressed.
December 8th, 2024 19:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of self redemption and grace through letting go. Lovely and well expressed.
December 8th, 2024 19:08
villain
Tony36 said:
Freedom of speech is a beautiful thing
It should not be held in chains
Speak from your heart and soul
Speak what\'s on your mind
December 8th, 2024 08:44
Tony36 said:
Freedom of speech is a beautiful thing
It should not be held in chains
Speak from your heart and soul
Speak what\'s on your mind
December 8th, 2024 08:44
villain
sorenbarrett said:
It is the message in this poem that stands out. Yet for it to stand out it must have been said in such a way as to gain attention, hold it and make sense and this did. Early in life one has the choice to stand up for what one believes or go with the flow, most choose the flow. Those that stand up are subjected to ridicule, osterized, and at time punished. Yet in the long run they are the ones that make a difference and are respected. The coice is not easy. A very important write and well expressed.
December 8th, 2024 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
It is the message in this poem that stands out. Yet for it to stand out it must have been said in such a way as to gain attention, hold it and make sense and this did. Early in life one has the choice to stand up for what one believes or go with the flow, most choose the flow. Those that stand up are subjected to ridicule, osterized, and at time punished. Yet in the long run they are the ones that make a difference and are respected. The coice is not easy. A very important write and well expressed.
December 8th, 2024 05:03
villain
Poetic Licence said:
A poem highlighting a serious issue, that probably there is never such a thing as freedom of speech, because someone will always slap you down. My view is everyone should be and be allowed to be true to themselves. I echo Tristan thoughts about liking the poem, not because of your frustration, but i like the issues it raises, Thank you
December 8th, 2024 03:44
Poetic Licence said:
A poem highlighting a serious issue, that probably there is never such a thing as freedom of speech, because someone will always slap you down. My view is everyone should be and be allowed to be true to themselves. I echo Tristan thoughts about liking the poem, not because of your frustration, but i like the issues it raises, Thank you
December 8th, 2024 03:44
villain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Exactly! What can you do? Man, dearest NinjaGirl, your observations here are exactly what my acrostic CHILDREN was all about. The very people who taught us to shoot for the stars, be honest, be \"all that we can be\", speak truth, etc...are hating us for doing just that. So. what can we do? Say 🖕 and keep on doing what we do! This poem, my friend, is an instant fave, not because I enjoy your frustration...but I share it in the most profound ways...and because of that I dearly enjoyed and am thankful for this poem my friend. In awe! 🌹👏
December 7th, 2024 23:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Exactly! What can you do? Man, dearest NinjaGirl, your observations here are exactly what my acrostic CHILDREN was all about. The very people who taught us to shoot for the stars, be honest, be \"all that we can be\", speak truth, etc...are hating us for doing just that. So. what can we do? Say 🖕 and keep on doing what we do! This poem, my friend, is an instant fave, not because I enjoy your frustration...but I share it in the most profound ways...and because of that I dearly enjoyed and am thankful for this poem my friend. In awe! 🌹👏
December 7th, 2024 23:34
villain
teardrop said:
It seems aa a lot of people no matter their political beliefs have a problem with freedom of speech. I have no problem with what ANYONE believes as long as it don\'t hurt me or mine and respects my beliefs as well even if different from theirs. . Nice thought provoking write. Thanks for sharing.
December 7th, 2024 23:11
teardrop said:
It seems aa a lot of people no matter their political beliefs have a problem with freedom of speech. I have no problem with what ANYONE believes as long as it don\'t hurt me or mine and respects my beliefs as well even if different from theirs. . Nice thought provoking write. Thanks for sharing.
December 7th, 2024 23:11
change
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed it is a choice, and it is a hard one! Great write my friend! 🌹👏
December 4th, 2024 20:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed it is a choice, and it is a hard one! Great write my friend! 🌹👏
December 4th, 2024 20:52
change
Demar Desu said:
change… I myself struggle with this… I get to a point where I like who I am, I like what I’m feeling then I think no this possibly can’t be right I just still get better.. sigh am I always broken so I must fix myself? Ninja girl hit me with a shuriken
December 4th, 2024 19:07
Demar Desu said:
change… I myself struggle with this… I get to a point where I like who I am, I like what I’m feeling then I think no this possibly can’t be right I just still get better.. sigh am I always broken so I must fix myself? Ninja girl hit me with a shuriken
December 4th, 2024 19:07
Rage
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very powerful in very few words, my friend. This was highly evocative! Well done! 🌹👏
December 3rd, 2024 22:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very powerful in very few words, my friend. This was highly evocative! Well done! 🌹👏
December 3rd, 2024 22:51
Rage
Poetic Licence said:
I feel the emotion, but revenge solved anything, just a few words written but powerful
December 3rd, 2024 21:32
Poetic Licence said:
I feel the emotion, but revenge solved anything, just a few words written but powerful
December 3rd, 2024 21:32
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