Pinocchio, deep in thought
peto said:

Tell the right lie and something else would grow
Cheers for the laugh

July 29th, 2023 09:01

Pinocchio, deep in thought
Caring dove said:

Too much lying isn’t good lol it probably doesn’t help us either . Guess we use to question our own actions /behaviour ms sometimes

Happy Saturday to you too ))



July 29th, 2023 04:02

Winter’s Meadow
Bella Shepard said:

I love the picture you\'ve chosen for this poem dear Teddy, a very special place. Your verse and song, a beautiful remembrance.

July 28th, 2023 13:50

Winter’s Meadow
L. B. Mek said:

I\'m sorry your poignant words
were inspired
by such a tragic event my friend;
but in a way, I really relate to your theme/vision dear Poetess
and I agree, in a lot of ways
all Art, can be distilled
as artists curating
a meeting place, between that
which grants us our inspiration
and the us, that yearns to communicate
with that very source..
so those brushstrokes, do tend
to plead, a little
those rhymes do stress to please
and ask if that special someone
or whatever, may visit
this homage, to what the artist deemed
as an important part of who they are/were..
yeah, this is truly such a deep write..
thank you!

July 28th, 2023 03:03

Winter’s Meadow
LIZ said:

Oh so sad, but beautiful! A loss like this is never forgotten. Sending you a big hug!!!!

July 28th, 2023 02:53

Winter’s Meadow
Caring dove said:

A sad yet nicely expressed writing , teddy ))

Sorry to hear of that ..



July 28th, 2023 02:09

Just Vertigo
Goldfinch60 said:

Love\'s truth can also be there at the bottom of that mountain Teddy, just be careful climbing down and love will be there waiting for you.

Andy

July 28th, 2023 01:50

Just Vertigo
Neville said:


even when the going gets really tough, there are times when one just has to sit back, take a deep breath, close one\'s eyes gently and enjoy the view ..

and that\'s where you took me today my very dearest of Teddy\'s .. ❤️

July 27th, 2023 23:32

Just Vertigo
Bella Shepard said:

I love the way you\'ve framed this watershed moment in terms of blood and red ink. Loss of blood will cause severe vertigo as can the pain of love. Such artistry in these lines dear Teddy!

July 27th, 2023 11:50

Just Vertigo
sorenbarrett said:

Such expressive lines about the emotions inside that one feels when emptying the dam through a pin prick of a pen.

July 27th, 2023 06:45

Just Vertigo
LIZ said:

Oh I like this one. Real love will have us writing our truth in blood. It can feel crazy at times. But when that climax hits...it all comes together beautifully! ❤️

July 27th, 2023 03:39

Destination
sorenbarrett said:

An example of how a few words can say so much and so eloquently

July 25th, 2023 06:05

Destination
Neville said:



and I would sit beside thee as a passenger .. ❤️



July 18th, 2023 02:13

Destination
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words Teddy but I am sure that you have many dreams in your heart.

Andy

July 18th, 2023 00:25

The Last Goodbye
MendedFences27 said:

Funny how the historical \"Last Goodbye,\" has changed with the technology, first written and sent by courier, then written and sent by mail, then by phone, and today by text,
Your experience shows that males never learn how to handle relationships. We are much too macho to get hurt. Your poem is also a lesson on how to survive the breakup. \"Just get on with my life,\" a powerful statement. - Phil A.

July 17th, 2023 21:29