Comments received on poems by Lorenz



Is she ?
Alan R said:

Very elegant

February 9th, 2024 13:03

Is she ?
Ellen Marsell said:

Impressive poem!

February 9th, 2024 11:58

Hours
Ellen Marsell said:

Un poème inspirant. Des images colorées qui personnifient le temps (les heures de la vie) comme une essence divine présente dans divers aspects de la vie humaine.
Comprenons-nous vraiment la signification du temps et les messages qu\'il véhicule?

February 8th, 2024 11:54

A ritual
Bella Shepard said:

There is the anticipation, the preparation, the waiting as it brews and fills the air with its tantalizing aroma, and finally the drinking which is pure heaven. It caresses the brain and induces euphoria. What\'s not to love? Incredible presentation of this beloved, seductive stimulant. Would love another cup!

February 6th, 2024 16:40

A ritual
Ellen Marsell said:

When the shadow of loneliness envelops, the aroma of coffee becomes closer than anyone else.

February 6th, 2024 11:51

Gospel of imposture
Bella Shepard said:

There is the subtle slyness in the smile, a hint of craftiness in the eyes. I think she dares, why not. Superb!

February 5th, 2024 15:02

Gospel of imposture
Ellen Marsell said:

Une image d\'une histoire de genèse séduisante. Comme d\'habitude, l\'écriture est exquise, avec des accents philosophiques. Je l\'aime beaucoup !

February 5th, 2024 11:50

Gospel of imposture
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

February 5th, 2024 10:25

I , the Angel
2781 said:

Will he make many supplications unto thee? will he speak soft words unto thee?

Will he make a covenant with thee? will thou take him for a servant forever?

February 4th, 2024 08:04

Awakening
Reynaldo Casison said:

cosmic and serene

February 4th, 2024 03:24

I am the wind
2781 said:

\"And after these things I saw four angels standing on the four corners of the earth, holding the four winds of the earth, that the wind should not blow on the earth, nor on the sea, nor on any tree.\"

February 3rd, 2024 22:48

Scorpio
2781 said:

Should I drink to that?

February 3rd, 2024 16:15

Scorpio
Ellen Marsell said:

Master of overcoming his own shadows.

February 3rd, 2024 11:43

I am the wind
Bella Shepard said:

This homage to the wind is priceless. It\'s power is exhilerating, its softness soothing. I have often stood in awe, on my deck, as a storm approaches, and the wind furiously whips the tree tops. It is
the most incredible feeling in the world. Thank you for this gem!

February 2nd, 2024 15:47

I am the wind
Introverted Sage said:

Strong write!

February 2nd, 2024 14:24

I am the wind
Ellen Marsell said:

The wind is an ancient messenger who reveals to us the wisdom of time and the many faces of the elements. It is an inspiring poetic symphony, my friend. Well done!

February 2nd, 2024 11:10

Rendez vous
Neville said:



this really is quite something .. a little bit special in my book ..


February 2nd, 2024 07:22

Rendez vous
Ellen Marsell said:

Poets are people who can\'t stop talking to the past. Wonderful writing!

February 2nd, 2024 02:48

Rendez vous
Bella Shepard said:

Bittersweet in sentiment, beautiful in verse, add to that the imagery of the picture, and you have a trifecta of the perfect poem. Kudos dear poet!

February 1st, 2024 15:58

The spirits of Trianon
Ellen Marsell said:

I would like to invite you for a walk into the depths of the immense park.

January 29th, 2024 04:33

The spirits of Trianon
Reynaldo Casison said:

cool cherry blossoms are sweet

January 29th, 2024 04:02

Leave Out Love
Bella Shepard said:

I think this poem speaks to some of our deepest fears. Painful, but so extraordinarily written. As Tina Turner sang \"What\'s Love
Got To Do With It?\" Perhaps it\'s for us to find out. Excellent!

January 28th, 2024 16:00

Leave Out Love
Alan R said:

I\'m just this different kind of fool....

January 28th, 2024 06:03

Leave Out Love
2781 said:

But love shall cover the multitude of sins...

January 28th, 2024 05:56

Lost inspiration street
Bella Shepard said:

The poet experiences life with more than just the physical senses, his mind, his consciousness searches for that \"beyond\" that explains everything, and keeps him always reaching for it. Beautifully penned!

January 26th, 2024 14:15

Lost inspiration street
Ellen Marsell said:

There is a melody of frustration in the poet\'s voice that merges with the music of his words...
Beautiful writing!

January 26th, 2024 11:40

Lost inspiration street
2781 said:

So shall the word be that goes out from My mouth; it shall not return to me void, But it shall accomplish what I please, And it shall prosper in the thing for which I sent it.

January 26th, 2024 10:02

Claire
Ellen Marsell said:

That\'s a very touching poem!

January 24th, 2024 14:15

Awakening
Bella Shepard said:

Mind awakened, consciousness perceived in the ultimate state of being. Wow!

January 23rd, 2024 15:40

The world before
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent

January 22nd, 2024 21:04

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