Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Poet and backpacker
L. B. Mek said:
(beautifully realised
your artistry is so ambitiously elevated, wise Poet)
\'child of June in autumn sonata
pouring a romantic cup of you ,
tender whispering on the everland thrill ,
to be your complement the accomplice ...
I would be explorer in long savoured galaxies
from your goblet of sensual euphoria ...\'
October 16th, 2023 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
(beautifully realised
your artistry is so ambitiously elevated, wise Poet)
\'child of June in autumn sonata
pouring a romantic cup of you ,
tender whispering on the everland thrill ,
to be your complement the accomplice ...
I would be explorer in long savoured galaxies
from your goblet of sensual euphoria ...\'
October 16th, 2023 05:34
Poet and backpacker
Ellen Marsell said:
Douceur du temps dans votre poème captivant et tendre. Merci !
October 14th, 2023 05:47
Ellen Marsell said:
Douceur du temps dans votre poème captivant et tendre. Merci !
October 14th, 2023 05:47
Legacy a cursed poet
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of language to paint your scene. It\'s sublime.
October 14th, 2023 01:17
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of language to paint your scene. It\'s sublime.
October 14th, 2023 01:17
Poet and backpacker
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of language and space to create your scene. Fantastic.
October 14th, 2023 01:00
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of language and space to create your scene. Fantastic.
October 14th, 2023 01:00
Dead-end diagonal
L. B. Mek said:
don\'t really like all that hell n heaven mysticism
but still, I doubt there\'s a lot of honor in an eternity of fire
just burnt bits
a lot of burnt bits..
lol
your creativity let loose on this one
a wild ride
thank you! dear poet
October 13th, 2023 07:40
L. B. Mek said:
don\'t really like all that hell n heaven mysticism
but still, I doubt there\'s a lot of honor in an eternity of fire
just burnt bits
a lot of burnt bits..
lol
your creativity let loose on this one
a wild ride
thank you! dear poet
October 13th, 2023 07:40
Sharing with you
Bella Shepard said:
This poem was a delight to read, and your choice of picture really accentuated the peaceful feeling of contentment that sharing evokes.
Loved it!
October 10th, 2023 15:29
Bella Shepard said:
This poem was a delight to read, and your choice of picture really accentuated the peaceful feeling of contentment that sharing evokes.
Loved it!
October 10th, 2023 15:29
Frozen life
Neville said:
Q - how much was this enjoyed
A - Very much indeed
NB - the tipsy cadaver tipped the balance .. Neville
October 9th, 2023 07:56
Neville said:
Q - how much was this enjoyed
A - Very much indeed
NB - the tipsy cadaver tipped the balance .. Neville
October 9th, 2023 07:56
Sun light dance
L. B. Mek said:
\'I love you silt spirit,
mangrove and rain forest ..\'
such a beautiful and musical
poetic treat
this kinda of poetry births fairies into our world
Brilliant!
October 9th, 2023 02:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'I love you silt spirit,
mangrove and rain forest ..\'
such a beautiful and musical
poetic treat
this kinda of poetry births fairies into our world
Brilliant!
October 9th, 2023 02:46
Frozen life
L. B. Mek said:
rage as ink
well, that\'s one way to defeat insomnia
lol
expressive to say the least, thanks for sharing dear Poet
October 9th, 2023 02:42
L. B. Mek said:
rage as ink
well, that\'s one way to defeat insomnia
lol
expressive to say the least, thanks for sharing dear Poet
October 9th, 2023 02:42
Sun light dance
Parisab said:
This poem took care and effort- It left a great impression of dances of all sorts-thanks for the write Darkfragrance…
October 8th, 2023 11:43
Parisab said:
This poem took care and effort- It left a great impression of dances of all sorts-thanks for the write Darkfragrance…
October 8th, 2023 11:43
Sun light dance
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poetic expression is vivid and full of imagery, capturing the essence of passion and love in a dance of words. Well done, my friend!
October 8th, 2023 08:07
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poetic expression is vivid and full of imagery, capturing the essence of passion and love in a dance of words. Well done, my friend!
October 8th, 2023 08:07
Charm
L. B. Mek said:
who needs colour or paint
when poetic art
can imbue hues of immersive
wonder
in but a line or two, of choice
wording..
Thank you! for colouring my day
bright, dear Poet
October 6th, 2023 08:14
L. B. Mek said:
who needs colour or paint
when poetic art
can imbue hues of immersive
wonder
in but a line or two, of choice
wording..
Thank you! for colouring my day
bright, dear Poet
October 6th, 2023 08:14
Charm
2781 said:
Well, that may be well?
If your on the right side.
Time will tell.
October 6th, 2023 02:11
2781 said:
Well, that may be well?
If your on the right side.
Time will tell.
October 6th, 2023 02:11
Existential boots
Neville said:
I think this is Brill and I aint talkin fish neither and guess wot .. I am INFJ too .. not sure I ever met one before ..
October 3rd, 2023 04:31
Neville said:
I think this is Brill and I aint talkin fish neither and guess wot .. I am INFJ too .. not sure I ever met one before ..
October 3rd, 2023 04:31
Anti social
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'Rage against the Machine!\'
\'Brainwatched our chimera,
glamorous matrone hours,
captain scam preserve my life,
soldier hacker keep me safe ,
madam webscam sink me out,
brother concrete kill me loud...\'
October 2nd, 2023 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'Rage against the Machine!\'
\'Brainwatched our chimera,
glamorous matrone hours,
captain scam preserve my life,
soldier hacker keep me safe ,
madam webscam sink me out,
brother concrete kill me loud...\'
October 2nd, 2023 04:28
Legacy a cursed poet
L. B. Mek said:
\'Liturgy for a couple of flies\'
(oh to be awarded that \'Gadfly\' fate..)
so much energy imbued in this one
a great read, dear Poet
September 29th, 2023 06:40
L. B. Mek said:
\'Liturgy for a couple of flies\'
(oh to be awarded that \'Gadfly\' fate..)
so much energy imbued in this one
a great read, dear Poet
September 29th, 2023 06:40
Orchard of delights
Pop64 said:
You use such marvelous imagery to convey the intent of the write. Truly a lovely read!
September 28th, 2023 06:15
Pop64 said:
You use such marvelous imagery to convey the intent of the write. Truly a lovely read!
September 28th, 2023 06:15
Riviera hotel
Ellen Marsell said:
\"your journey is my day ...\"
Beautiful !
September 27th, 2023 08:07
Ellen Marsell said:
\"your journey is my day ...\"
Beautiful !
September 27th, 2023 08:07
Fugue in runaway
Bobby O said:
I’m very much in achord with bright poetic real-time origin verse as it no doubt dances with counterpart Belgium chocolate dark escorted fragrance of same shade
September 25th, 2023 03:51
Bobby O said:
I’m very much in achord with bright poetic real-time origin verse as it no doubt dances with counterpart Belgium chocolate dark escorted fragrance of same shade
September 25th, 2023 03:51
Fugue in runaway
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(state of unaware, just knowing
escape
is all the answer we have
for now...
till we stop long enough
to excavate that repressed, voice
beyond perfection\'s, panic..
now the clouds gather, adding
unsurmountable distance
so returning, becomes obsolete..
onwards we crawl, dragging
all that we could have been..
once
when Sun was in-sync
with our heartbeat\'s
accords, of you and me
entwined
in an eternal picket fence, ever-after
synchronicity
..once
before life\'s scars, made poetry
flow easily, in the barren of night
inking that hollow of heart, readily
oh cruelty
I name thee, visionary art
steeped
in life\'s
un-relinquished heartbreaks..)
September 25th, 2023 03:36
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(state of unaware, just knowing
escape
is all the answer we have
for now...
till we stop long enough
to excavate that repressed, voice
beyond perfection\'s, panic..
now the clouds gather, adding
unsurmountable distance
so returning, becomes obsolete..
onwards we crawl, dragging
all that we could have been..
once
when Sun was in-sync
with our heartbeat\'s
accords, of you and me
entwined
in an eternal picket fence, ever-after
synchronicity
..once
before life\'s scars, made poetry
flow easily, in the barren of night
inking that hollow of heart, readily
oh cruelty
I name thee, visionary art
steeped
in life\'s
un-relinquished heartbreaks..)
September 25th, 2023 03:36
Dark sabbath
L. B. Mek said:
Caravaggio would approve this page
as do I, dear Poet
a little noir release never hurt, those
true to themselves
September 25th, 2023 03:23
L. B. Mek said:
Caravaggio would approve this page
as do I, dear Poet
a little noir release never hurt, those
true to themselves
September 25th, 2023 03:23
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