Comments received on poems by Lorenz
The eternal return
John Lee said:
Until they searched to parade the dead dog\'s body just to find it unfound. The lies begin to cover the truth in it\'s grave but it won\'t stay dead. Only after the world has it\'s run into a dead end, it looks up. The cloud descending without rain but with the one who reigns.
December 1st, 2023 22:28
John Lee said:
Until they searched to parade the dead dog\'s body just to find it unfound. The lies begin to cover the truth in it\'s grave but it won\'t stay dead. Only after the world has it\'s run into a dead end, it looks up. The cloud descending without rain but with the one who reigns.
December 1st, 2023 22:28
Something is missing
Ellen Marsell said:
This is impressive stuff... Well written.
November 28th, 2023 09:21
Ellen Marsell said:
This is impressive stuff... Well written.
November 28th, 2023 09:21
Turn off the lights !
Lil said:
This is so great I can\'t explain it. Just keep it up sir.
November 27th, 2023 17:01
Lil said:
This is so great I can\'t explain it. Just keep it up sir.
November 27th, 2023 17:01
Poetry
aDarkerMind said:
I didnt read this work of art...
I lived and breathed it!!
November 27th, 2023 11:24
aDarkerMind said:
I didnt read this work of art...
I lived and breathed it!!
November 27th, 2023 11:24
Turn off the lights !
Ellen Marsell said:
I think it\'s a pretty amazing piece of work.
November 26th, 2023 11:38
Ellen Marsell said:
I think it\'s a pretty amazing piece of work.
November 26th, 2023 11:38
Turn off the lights !
2781 said:
Interesting, we had opposing views but not necessarily opposing thoughts.
Provoking, cheers.
November 26th, 2023 09:36
2781 said:
Interesting, we had opposing views but not necessarily opposing thoughts.
Provoking, cheers.
November 26th, 2023 09:36
The eternal return
Ellen Marsell said:
Une plongée très divertissante dans le monde des associations philosophiques et culturelles. Un excellent travail !
November 25th, 2023 09:22
Ellen Marsell said:
Une plongée très divertissante dans le monde des associations philosophiques et culturelles. Un excellent travail !
November 25th, 2023 09:22
The impotus day
Ellen Marsell said:
I like your creativity with the use of satire and wordplay! Very nice work.
November 21st, 2023 09:02
Ellen Marsell said:
I like your creativity with the use of satire and wordplay! Very nice work.
November 21st, 2023 09:02
Golden calf
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Friend
Thank you for sharing your poem.
I can feel mythic, religious. Good job. Thanks a lot.
November 20th, 2023 17:38
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Friend
Thank you for sharing your poem.
I can feel mythic, religious. Good job. Thanks a lot.
November 20th, 2023 17:38
I am everywhere
Bella Shepard said:
Are there not shadows in all of us, to greater or lesser extents? How we handle our demons, if in fact we can, is the trick. Incredible pic, incredible write!
November 19th, 2023 13:13
Bella Shepard said:
Are there not shadows in all of us, to greater or lesser extents? How we handle our demons, if in fact we can, is the trick. Incredible pic, incredible write!
November 19th, 2023 13:13
I am everywhere
Ellen Marsell said:
Une excellente exploration du \"côté obscur\" .....
November 19th, 2023 10:22
Ellen Marsell said:
Une excellente exploration du \"côté obscur\" .....
November 19th, 2023 10:22
Mr. Secretary of state.
2781 said:
Refined dining.
I prefer to eat with my fingers.
November 16th, 2023 14:41
2781 said:
Refined dining.
I prefer to eat with my fingers.
November 16th, 2023 14:41
Mr. Secretary of state.
Ellen Marsell said:
That\'s a great write up, my friend. Thanks for sharing!
November 16th, 2023 11:38
Ellen Marsell said:
That\'s a great write up, my friend. Thanks for sharing!
November 16th, 2023 11:38
My home
Bella Shepard said:
\"My kingdom sleeps in one long season, far from the brutal world\'s reason ...\" gets to the very heart of this beautiful poem. To find peace of mind and heart such as this is a rare gift, worthy of your choice. Beautifully written my friend, with such a beautiful pic .
November 15th, 2023 14:51
Bella Shepard said:
\"My kingdom sleeps in one long season, far from the brutal world\'s reason ...\" gets to the very heart of this beautiful poem. To find peace of mind and heart such as this is a rare gift, worthy of your choice. Beautifully written my friend, with such a beautiful pic .
November 15th, 2023 14:51
The sepia photo
Ellen Marsell said:
And shadows of historical upheavals on the horizon.
November 13th, 2023 07:57
Ellen Marsell said:
And shadows of historical upheavals on the horizon.
November 13th, 2023 07:57
The sepia photo
Ellen Marsell said:
In delicate sepia tones, your touching story. Magnificent!
November 13th, 2023 07:15
Ellen Marsell said:
In delicate sepia tones, your touching story. Magnificent!
November 13th, 2023 07:15
The oracle of times
Thomas W Case said:
Vivid, graphic imagery. You paint a dark picture. Fantastic work.
November 12th, 2023 15:05
Thomas W Case said:
Vivid, graphic imagery. You paint a dark picture. Fantastic work.
November 12th, 2023 15:05
Requiem for a lift
Bella Shepard said:
I think I see Elisa battling mental illness. Her bag of exploded polarity, the mood swings in which she is held captive by the cabalistic shape that canabalizes her mind and from which she cannot escape. To her it is real. I may have it all wrong, but I love it. Powerful write dear poet.
November 11th, 2023 14:58
Bella Shepard said:
I think I see Elisa battling mental illness. Her bag of exploded polarity, the mood swings in which she is held captive by the cabalistic shape that canabalizes her mind and from which she cannot escape. To her it is real. I may have it all wrong, but I love it. Powerful write dear poet.
November 11th, 2023 14:58
Requiem for a lift
Ellen Marsell said:
\"the truth is out there\" ?
Your poem is impressive!
November 11th, 2023 12:02
Ellen Marsell said:
\"the truth is out there\" ?
Your poem is impressive!
November 11th, 2023 12:02
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