Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Wise old man
Ellen Marsell said:
Such exquisite writing!
Wisdom is not just knowledge and years, but the ability to savor the moment, to observe and see the world with greater depth and simplicity. I think of it this way.
November 5th, 2024 12:38
Ellen Marsell said:
Such exquisite writing!
Wisdom is not just knowledge and years, but the ability to savor the moment, to observe and see the world with greater depth and simplicity. I think of it this way.
November 5th, 2024 12:38
Wise old man
sorenbarrett said:
Could be. Wisdom grows like the trunk of a tree discarding those branches not needed. After years only what is important remains. A lovely write so well worded and very reflective of those things that hold meaning.
November 5th, 2024 09:42
sorenbarrett said:
Could be. Wisdom grows like the trunk of a tree discarding those branches not needed. After years only what is important remains. A lovely write so well worded and very reflective of those things that hold meaning.
November 5th, 2024 09:42
Radio garden
NafisaSB said:
music has no boundaries- and can take you around the world - enjoyed the ride
November 5th, 2024 00:48
NafisaSB said:
music has no boundaries- and can take you around the world - enjoyed the ride
November 5th, 2024 00:48
I would return
Ellen Marsell said:
\"The beauty of Versailles lies in its mystery: it remains an eternal illusion where everyone sees only what they want to see.\"
A beautiful poem!
November 4th, 2024 12:06
Ellen Marsell said:
\"The beauty of Versailles lies in its mystery: it remains an eternal illusion where everyone sees only what they want to see.\"
A beautiful poem!
November 4th, 2024 12:06
I would return
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful a wonderful and fanciful poem of a dreamy type
November 4th, 2024 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful a wonderful and fanciful poem of a dreamy type
November 4th, 2024 11:46
Radio garden
Cheeky Missy said:
Very delightfully eloquent and excellently rendered with superb imagery and a subtly striking poignancy. Yes, isn\'t music so wonderful?! Thank you very much for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 18:21
Cheeky Missy said:
Very delightfully eloquent and excellently rendered with superb imagery and a subtly striking poignancy. Yes, isn\'t music so wonderful?! Thank you very much for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 18:21
Radio garden
Ellen Marsell said:
A journey through soundscapes, an exploration without boundaries... And each place offers its own unique musical flavor.
November 3rd, 2024 10:59
Ellen Marsell said:
A journey through soundscapes, an exploration without boundaries... And each place offers its own unique musical flavor.
November 3rd, 2024 10:59
Radio garden
sorenbarrett said:
Music can take you to places never seen or dreamed of. A most lovely mood enhancer and vacation in the mind. Wonderful write
November 3rd, 2024 09:29
sorenbarrett said:
Music can take you to places never seen or dreamed of. A most lovely mood enhancer and vacation in the mind. Wonderful write
November 3rd, 2024 09:29
Old world
Dan Williams said:
You had me with \"who leaves history, forgetting to flush \" and rounded off nicely with \"Your flamboyant eagles give birth to pigeons\". Good job here.
November 2nd, 2024 23:52
Dan Williams said:
You had me with \"who leaves history, forgetting to flush \" and rounded off nicely with \"Your flamboyant eagles give birth to pigeons\". Good job here.
November 2nd, 2024 23:52
Old world
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully worded this poem portrays for me a world rusting and aging with deterioration from previous splendor, then comes the final line and oh yes I remember Lee Van Cleef but then I too am old.
November 2nd, 2024 10:09
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully worded this poem portrays for me a world rusting and aging with deterioration from previous splendor, then comes the final line and oh yes I remember Lee Van Cleef but then I too am old.
November 2nd, 2024 10:09
Old world
Ellen Marsell said:
The oblivion of true values and the inevitability of the decline of former power. A bitterly ironic work with a powerful ending. Impressive!
November 2nd, 2024 10:04
Ellen Marsell said:
The oblivion of true values and the inevitability of the decline of former power. A bitterly ironic work with a powerful ending. Impressive!
November 2nd, 2024 10:04
Mourn city
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, but this is as ghastly and macabre as everyone was begging for last month, the cruel reality of these facts beautifully rendered poetically to enchant the facts which all ere wanting do not truly care to face. Thank you very much for sharing.
November 1st, 2024 13:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, but this is as ghastly and macabre as everyone was begging for last month, the cruel reality of these facts beautifully rendered poetically to enchant the facts which all ere wanting do not truly care to face. Thank you very much for sharing.
November 1st, 2024 13:38
Mourn city
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem in muted tones. An atmosphere of despair, but there\'s something mesmerizing about these bleak images.
I especially like this line: “strained wrecks as deranged clocks...”.
November 1st, 2024 10:36
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem in muted tones. An atmosphere of despair, but there\'s something mesmerizing about these bleak images.
I especially like this line: “strained wrecks as deranged clocks...”.
November 1st, 2024 10:36
Flight
Ellen Marsell said:
The theme of inevitability. A disturbing vision of an existential journey, an inexorable flight to a grim end.
October 31st, 2024 10:19
Ellen Marsell said:
The theme of inevitability. A disturbing vision of an existential journey, an inexorable flight to a grim end.
October 31st, 2024 10:19
Flight
sorenbarrett said:
(Death has this sticky sweetnes) a great line that conveys its meaning viscerally. A poem of doom indeed.
October 31st, 2024 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
(Death has this sticky sweetnes) a great line that conveys its meaning viscerally. A poem of doom indeed.
October 31st, 2024 06:10
The south
Ellen Marsell said:
A land of ancient secrets, sharp contrasts, vivid contradictions, greatness and decadence. The spiritual and the sensual, the eternal and the transient, images of sacred deserts and great empires intertwine here, each reflecting the rich history of a world slowly fading into history.
A beautiful poem!
October 30th, 2024 10:00
Ellen Marsell said:
A land of ancient secrets, sharp contrasts, vivid contradictions, greatness and decadence. The spiritual and the sensual, the eternal and the transient, images of sacred deserts and great empires intertwine here, each reflecting the rich history of a world slowly fading into history.
A beautiful poem!
October 30th, 2024 10:00
The south
sorenbarrett said:
An exotic setting with vivid images covers a metaphor that supports the structure. Choices that disolve.
October 30th, 2024 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
An exotic setting with vivid images covers a metaphor that supports the structure. Choices that disolve.
October 30th, 2024 07:53
Sounds the knell
Ellen Marsell said:
A sinister theme with dark humor and creepy visions. The appeal to Baal and the ominous “end of time” give your play a dramatic touch, creating a sense of theatrical descent into the underworld. I like it!
October 29th, 2024 10:55
Ellen Marsell said:
A sinister theme with dark humor and creepy visions. The appeal to Baal and the ominous “end of time” give your play a dramatic touch, creating a sense of theatrical descent into the underworld. I like it!
October 29th, 2024 10:55
Sounds the knell
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words in a powerful poem. Some great lines as well (killer widow washing away the infant) is my favorite. Brilliant!
October 29th, 2024 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words in a powerful poem. Some great lines as well (killer widow washing away the infant) is my favorite. Brilliant!
October 29th, 2024 09:03
Marienburg
sorenbarrett said:
Historical and metaphorical the end of the vanquished and in some ways the end of an era and that type of faith. Great images of a most graphic nature. Lovely
October 28th, 2024 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
Historical and metaphorical the end of the vanquished and in some ways the end of an era and that type of faith. Great images of a most graphic nature. Lovely
October 28th, 2024 13:39
Marienburg
Ellen Marsell said:
A captured historical moment. Through the images of rain, blood and gloom you convey not only the collapse of the chivalric spirit, but also the realization of the fragility of human glory in the face of time and fate.
Great writing!
October 28th, 2024 12:00
Ellen Marsell said:
A captured historical moment. Through the images of rain, blood and gloom you convey not only the collapse of the chivalric spirit, but also the realization of the fragility of human glory in the face of time and fate.
Great writing!
October 28th, 2024 12:00
Vincent
sorenbarrett said:
You know Vincent well he would have liked this poem. It\'s words in swirls and vivid colors paint the life of a man misunderstood and poorly recieved. A man that found it hard to give away his art. This poem in its passion reflects his. Very nicely written with recognizable symbols thrown in along the way. it paints a compassion for him as he did for the people he painted. Brilliant!
October 27th, 2024 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
You know Vincent well he would have liked this poem. It\'s words in swirls and vivid colors paint the life of a man misunderstood and poorly recieved. A man that found it hard to give away his art. This poem in its passion reflects his. Very nicely written with recognizable symbols thrown in along the way. it paints a compassion for him as he did for the people he painted. Brilliant!
October 27th, 2024 06:05
Vincent
Ellen Marsell said:
Love your poem!
A tribute to a great master. Despite his demons, he gained a certain immortality in art.
October 27th, 2024 05:44
Ellen Marsell said:
Love your poem!
A tribute to a great master. Despite his demons, he gained a certain immortality in art.
October 27th, 2024 05:44
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