Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Cosmic trick
sorenbarrett said:
We are all aliens on a planet that does not deserve us. Not that we are good quite the contrary. I feel the alien nature in this poem. Yet here we are and sometimes it is very good. Lovely
March 25th, 2025 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
We are all aliens on a planet that does not deserve us. Not that we are good quite the contrary. I feel the alien nature in this poem. Yet here we are and sometimes it is very good. Lovely
March 25th, 2025 08:19
The home of lost souls
sorenbarrett said:
Ah such a parody of mankind. A lovely write of how people are all fools and in their wisdom laugh at others and nature itself. A wonderful write of the foibles of man.
March 24th, 2025 15:22
sorenbarrett said:
Ah such a parody of mankind. A lovely write of how people are all fools and in their wisdom laugh at others and nature itself. A wonderful write of the foibles of man.
March 24th, 2025 15:22
Inspired rebel
Sealgair said:
This eternal game, this cycle of ascent and fall - such is the price of true creativity.
Great writing!
March 24th, 2025 11:25
Sealgair said:
This eternal game, this cycle of ascent and fall - such is the price of true creativity.
Great writing!
March 24th, 2025 11:25
The home of lost souls
Sealgair said:
Those who danced were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music.
March 24th, 2025 11:20
Sealgair said:
Those who danced were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music.
March 24th, 2025 11:20
The home of lost souls
Ellen Marsell said:
Strong images. There is tragedy, irony, and the hidden truth about a world where madness is closer to the truth than so-called normality.
March 24th, 2025 10:58
Ellen Marsell said:
Strong images. There is tragedy, irony, and the hidden truth about a world where madness is closer to the truth than so-called normality.
March 24th, 2025 10:58
Inspired rebel
Ellen Marsell said:
The image of inspiration - as a capricious goddess and a relentless storm - conveys the duality of creativity: its tormenting necessity and intoxicating obsession. It arrives and takes control, demands sacrifices, sweeps one into madness, or abandons them in the doldrums of creative despair.
Emotional, powerful, and mesmerizing.
March 23rd, 2025 11:35
Ellen Marsell said:
The image of inspiration - as a capricious goddess and a relentless storm - conveys the duality of creativity: its tormenting necessity and intoxicating obsession. It arrives and takes control, demands sacrifices, sweeps one into madness, or abandons them in the doldrums of creative despair.
Emotional, powerful, and mesmerizing.
March 23rd, 2025 11:35
Inspired rebel
sorenbarrett said:
A siren muse I can imagine So many metaphors in this piece that takes me through so many poems. A lovely write.
March 23rd, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
A siren muse I can imagine So many metaphors in this piece that takes me through so many poems. A lovely write.
March 23rd, 2025 04:15
Revival
Ellen Marsell said:
This dreamy poem is imbued with deep symbolism and resembles a spiritual journey in search of a lost paradise. It leaves a sense of luminous longing and aspiration for freedom somewhere beyond the material world. Beautifully done.
March 22nd, 2025 10:29
Ellen Marsell said:
This dreamy poem is imbued with deep symbolism and resembles a spiritual journey in search of a lost paradise. It leaves a sense of luminous longing and aspiration for freedom somewhere beyond the material world. Beautifully done.
March 22nd, 2025 10:29
Revival
sorenbarrett said:
Many great metaphors, the garden of Eden tree of life and knowledge on and on. An invitation to join together in the journey. Very nice
March 22nd, 2025 09:50
sorenbarrett said:
Many great metaphors, the garden of Eden tree of life and knowledge on and on. An invitation to join together in the journey. Very nice
March 22nd, 2025 09:50
Fanny
Neville said:
Exquisite ink spilled throughout .. & very much enjoyed .. Neville
March 22nd, 2025 04:50
Neville said:
Exquisite ink spilled throughout .. & very much enjoyed .. Neville
March 22nd, 2025 04:50
Fanny
Ellen Marsell said:
A touching piece that combines sensuality, music, and the history of Berlin after the Wall. Fanny\'s image is incredibly vivid and seems inseparable from the city and its history. Memories tinged with melancholy. I like this poem.
March 20th, 2025 10:49
Ellen Marsell said:
A touching piece that combines sensuality, music, and the history of Berlin after the Wall. Fanny\'s image is incredibly vivid and seems inseparable from the city and its history. Memories tinged with melancholy. I like this poem.
March 20th, 2025 10:49
Fanny
sorenbarrett said:
Subliminal references to many classic\'s books and music. Nice work.
March 20th, 2025 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
Subliminal references to many classic\'s books and music. Nice work.
March 20th, 2025 09:39
The corridor
Sealgair said:
The imagery in your poem gives birth to a powerful visual, like footage from a philosophical sci-fi movie. I\'m impressed.
March 20th, 2025 05:24
Sealgair said:
The imagery in your poem gives birth to a powerful visual, like footage from a philosophical sci-fi movie. I\'m impressed.
March 20th, 2025 05:24
The corridor
Ellen Marsell said:
I like this combination of cyberpunk and philosophy.
March 19th, 2025 15:10
Ellen Marsell said:
I like this combination of cyberpunk and philosophy.
March 19th, 2025 15:10
The corridor
sorenbarrett said:
The treat of future and the hope to lye in green meadows. Here is the clash of present day and its stress and the past which at least in the mind is a peaceful place. A thought provoking write Lorez
March 19th, 2025 10:58
sorenbarrett said:
The treat of future and the hope to lye in green meadows. Here is the clash of present day and its stress and the past which at least in the mind is a peaceful place. A thought provoking write Lorez
March 19th, 2025 10:58
Souls
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem moves to the rhythm of a wandering soul, gathering echoes of past lives, lost melodies, fleeting emotions. There is a deep understanding here of how souls carry history. A beautiful piece!
March 18th, 2025 11:49
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem moves to the rhythm of a wandering soul, gathering echoes of past lives, lost melodies, fleeting emotions. There is a deep understanding here of how souls carry history. A beautiful piece!
March 18th, 2025 11:49
Souls
sorenbarrett said:
Such juxtapositions of old and new and black snow is the example of purity of air to today. Most interesting Lorenz.
March 18th, 2025 10:50
sorenbarrett said:
Such juxtapositions of old and new and black snow is the example of purity of air to today. Most interesting Lorenz.
March 18th, 2025 10:50
black desire
Sealgair said:
She was a fire, and I wanted to be burned.
A powerful piece.
March 18th, 2025 06:03
Sealgair said:
She was a fire, and I wanted to be burned.
A powerful piece.
March 18th, 2025 06:03
black desire
Ellen Marsell said:
Feverish confession of desire and torment, where love is both worship and war. The poem pulses with untamed emotion, its imagery oscillating between tenderness and brutality. Dark, mesmerizing...
March 17th, 2025 11:03
Ellen Marsell said:
Feverish confession of desire and torment, where love is both worship and war. The poem pulses with untamed emotion, its imagery oscillating between tenderness and brutality. Dark, mesmerizing...
March 17th, 2025 11:03
black desire
sorenbarrett said:
Darkly erotic and sensuous in nightly tones this poem holds black magic at its core yet casts its spell over images of seduction and lust. Well worded it seems to come from a shadowy realm. Haunting
March 17th, 2025 08:56
sorenbarrett said:
Darkly erotic and sensuous in nightly tones this poem holds black magic at its core yet casts its spell over images of seduction and lust. Well worded it seems to come from a shadowy realm. Haunting
March 17th, 2025 08:56
The time
Ellen Marsell said:
If time is an illusion, then it depends only on us whether we can make something beautiful out of it.
March 16th, 2025 13:08
Ellen Marsell said:
If time is an illusion, then it depends only on us whether we can make something beautiful out of it.
March 16th, 2025 13:08
The time
sorenbarrett said:
Here are thoughts of a beyond and paradox that makes life. Very nicely stated
March 16th, 2025 12:38
sorenbarrett said:
Here are thoughts of a beyond and paradox that makes life. Very nicely stated
March 16th, 2025 12:38
The other
Sealgair said:
The poem moves like a hall of mirrors, reflecting doubt, creation and confinement.
March 15th, 2025 17:00
Sealgair said:
The poem moves like a hall of mirrors, reflecting doubt, creation and confinement.
March 15th, 2025 17:00
The other
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is a metaphysical wandering through the prism of the Other, that enigmatic double. It questions the fragile boundary between the \"self\" and its reflection. Philosophical and deeply mysterious.
March 15th, 2025 11:25
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is a metaphysical wandering through the prism of the Other, that enigmatic double. It questions the fragile boundary between the \"self\" and its reflection. Philosophical and deeply mysterious.
March 15th, 2025 11:25
The other
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophical and existential this poem is filled with metaphor and vivid imagery that is somewhat dark but promises enlightenment. Lovely
March 15th, 2025 07:46
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophical and existential this poem is filled with metaphor and vivid imagery that is somewhat dark but promises enlightenment. Lovely
March 15th, 2025 07:46
What would I be without you ?
Ellen Marsell said:
The light you seek is always within you.
An exquisite poem filled with strong poetic imagery, rich language and lyricism.... A favorite.
March 14th, 2025 11:17
Ellen Marsell said:
The light you seek is always within you.
An exquisite poem filled with strong poetic imagery, rich language and lyricism.... A favorite.
March 14th, 2025 11:17
What would I be without you ?
sorenbarrett said:
Angel or demon we need both sides. A most interesting write of the duality of a woman
March 14th, 2025 10:57
sorenbarrett said:
Angel or demon we need both sides. A most interesting write of the duality of a woman
March 14th, 2025 10:57
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