Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Fortitude
Ellen Marsell said:
Enjoyable flow of your writing, smooth and contemplative, reflecting a meditative experience.
The nature of existence is dual...
Thanks for sharing.
December 22nd, 2023 10:53
Ellen Marsell said:
Enjoyable flow of your writing, smooth and contemplative, reflecting a meditative experience.
The nature of existence is dual...
Thanks for sharing.
December 22nd, 2023 10:53
Window on the void
Cassie58 said:
Fire and fall sounds like hell. Freedom is so liberating. Imagine having wings to fly. I felt the imprisonment of the spirit here. Beautifully penned and rich with metaphor. Thank you.
December 16th, 2023 02:07
Cassie58 said:
Fire and fall sounds like hell. Freedom is so liberating. Imagine having wings to fly. I felt the imprisonment of the spirit here. Beautifully penned and rich with metaphor. Thank you.
December 16th, 2023 02:07
Window on the void
Ellen Marsell said:
Ce n\'est pas un destin qu\'elle a choisi, mais dans ses derniers instants, elle semble avoir réussi à l\'accepter.
December 15th, 2023 13:39
Ellen Marsell said:
Ce n\'est pas un destin qu\'elle a choisi, mais dans ses derniers instants, elle semble avoir réussi à l\'accepter.
December 15th, 2023 13:39
santa mafia
AuburnScribbler said:
I read this out loud like a disstrack rap, and wow do your words deliver some punch Darkfragrance.
I wholeheartedly agree about you calling the upcoming festival a red and green monster, as the chosen stresses that come with it, are to a massively damaging scale.
I also very much like the accompanying picture, very apt indeed.
Thanks for sharing this, bravo, and I hope that all is well.
December 6th, 2023 10:01
AuburnScribbler said:
I read this out loud like a disstrack rap, and wow do your words deliver some punch Darkfragrance.
I wholeheartedly agree about you calling the upcoming festival a red and green monster, as the chosen stresses that come with it, are to a massively damaging scale.
I also very much like the accompanying picture, very apt indeed.
Thanks for sharing this, bravo, and I hope that all is well.
December 6th, 2023 10:01
The eternal return
John Lee said:
Also.. very well written and awesome write!
December 1st, 2023 22:29
John Lee said:
Also.. very well written and awesome write!
December 1st, 2023 22:29
The eternal return
John Lee said:
Until they searched to parade the dead dog\'s body just to find it unfound. The lies begin to cover the truth in it\'s grave but it won\'t stay dead. Only after the world has it\'s run into a dead end, it looks up. The cloud descending without rain but with the one who reigns.
December 1st, 2023 22:28
John Lee said:
Until they searched to parade the dead dog\'s body just to find it unfound. The lies begin to cover the truth in it\'s grave but it won\'t stay dead. Only after the world has it\'s run into a dead end, it looks up. The cloud descending without rain but with the one who reigns.
December 1st, 2023 22:28
Something is missing
Ellen Marsell said:
This is impressive stuff... Well written.
November 28th, 2023 09:21
Ellen Marsell said:
This is impressive stuff... Well written.
November 28th, 2023 09:21
Turn off the lights !
Lil said:
This is so great I can\'t explain it. Just keep it up sir.
November 27th, 2023 17:01
Lil said:
This is so great I can\'t explain it. Just keep it up sir.
November 27th, 2023 17:01
Poetry
aDarkerMind said:
I didnt read this work of art...
I lived and breathed it!!
November 27th, 2023 11:24
aDarkerMind said:
I didnt read this work of art...
I lived and breathed it!!
November 27th, 2023 11:24
Turn off the lights !
Ellen Marsell said:
I think it\'s a pretty amazing piece of work.
November 26th, 2023 11:38
Ellen Marsell said:
I think it\'s a pretty amazing piece of work.
November 26th, 2023 11:38
Turn off the lights !
2781 said:
Interesting, we had opposing views but not necessarily opposing thoughts.
Provoking, cheers.
November 26th, 2023 09:36
2781 said:
Interesting, we had opposing views but not necessarily opposing thoughts.
Provoking, cheers.
November 26th, 2023 09:36
The eternal return
Ellen Marsell said:
Une plongée très divertissante dans le monde des associations philosophiques et culturelles. Un excellent travail !
November 25th, 2023 09:22
Ellen Marsell said:
Une plongée très divertissante dans le monde des associations philosophiques et culturelles. Un excellent travail !
November 25th, 2023 09:22
The impotus day
Ellen Marsell said:
I like your creativity with the use of satire and wordplay! Very nice work.
November 21st, 2023 09:02
Ellen Marsell said:
I like your creativity with the use of satire and wordplay! Very nice work.
November 21st, 2023 09:02
Golden calf
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Friend
Thank you for sharing your poem.
I can feel mythic, religious. Good job. Thanks a lot.
November 20th, 2023 17:38
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Friend
Thank you for sharing your poem.
I can feel mythic, religious. Good job. Thanks a lot.
November 20th, 2023 17:38
I am everywhere
Bella Shepard said:
Are there not shadows in all of us, to greater or lesser extents? How we handle our demons, if in fact we can, is the trick. Incredible pic, incredible write!
November 19th, 2023 13:13
Bella Shepard said:
Are there not shadows in all of us, to greater or lesser extents? How we handle our demons, if in fact we can, is the trick. Incredible pic, incredible write!
November 19th, 2023 13:13
I am everywhere
Ellen Marsell said:
Une excellente exploration du \"côté obscur\" .....
November 19th, 2023 10:22
Ellen Marsell said:
Une excellente exploration du \"côté obscur\" .....
November 19th, 2023 10:22
Mr. Secretary of state.
2781 said:
Refined dining.
I prefer to eat with my fingers.
November 16th, 2023 14:41
2781 said:
Refined dining.
I prefer to eat with my fingers.
November 16th, 2023 14:41
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