Comments received on poems by Lorenz



Rhapsody in blue
Ellen Marsell said:

Love every line.

May 9th, 2024 11:31

Requiem
2781 said:

They that sow in tears shall reap in joy.

May 7th, 2024 23:13

Requiem
aDarkerMind said:

impressive and beyond Lorenz

May 7th, 2024 11:43

Requiem
Ellen Marsell said:

Very impressive!
He once said he was writing \"Requiem\" for himself.

May 7th, 2024 11:02

A little poem
Ellen Marsell said:

\"There would be many moments of happiness in life, if only we could slow down the passage of time and dwell on them longer\".
That is a marvelous poem, my friend.

May 5th, 2024 09:25

A little poem
aDarkerMind said:

as impressed as always Lorenz

May 5th, 2024 06:54

A little poem
Alan R said:

Very beautiful composition!

May 5th, 2024 05:43

Spirit of fire
Ellen Marsell said:

Reading you is like living every story.
That\'s great!

May 3rd, 2024 10:59

Spirit of fire
aDarkerMind said:

how to pick a favourite line from this, or just marvel it all;
when I read it for the umpteenth time, I\'ll let you know.


May 3rd, 2024 10:25

Tannhäuser
Ellen Marsell said:

The musicality in your lines. A beautiful piece!

May 1st, 2024 10:53

I am the shape
Alan R said:

Brilliant

April 26th, 2024 17:02

A letter from Anceladus
aDarkerMind said:

one for my \'\'fave list\'\' me thinks.

April 24th, 2024 14:26

A letter from Anceladus
Ellen Marsell said:

Such an attractive world hidden beneath the surface...


April 24th, 2024 09:53

Phobos
Ellen Marsell said:

The doomed brothers.

April 23rd, 2024 02:31

Phobos
aDarkerMind said:

In this jail of unbearable emptiness


one to remember for many a year;\'

April 22nd, 2024 09:57

The old ones
Doggerel Dave said:

Ignored by many Seniors, it seems.

April 22nd, 2024 09:08

The old ones
Ellen Marsell said:

The symphony is beautiful and sorrowful.

April 20th, 2024 13:23

Three japanese ladies
Ellen Marsell said:

An airy poem. I could easily imagine these three charming Japanese ladies. J\'ai beaucoup aimé!

April 18th, 2024 11:48

Quantum o\'clock
aDarkerMind said:

the birth of nothing
and death of everything...

one for my fave list my friend;

April 17th, 2024 10:33

Lidice
Cassie58 said:

A terrible tragedy. I can remember reading about it and looking at the memorial to the children lost. It is haunting. A fine piece of poetry.

April 16th, 2024 16:15

Lidice
Alan R said:

Very eloquent...

April 16th, 2024 14:23

Lidice
Ellen Marsell said:

A tragic page in history.

April 16th, 2024 10:14

Somewhere a star
Ellen Marsell said:

A strikingly beautiful poem. Lovely imagery!

April 15th, 2024 11:00

Flatland
Ellen Marsell said:

A vivid portrait of a wandering soul, a dreamer drifting in the currents of imagination and reality.

April 14th, 2024 12:58

Outlaw
Ellen Marsell said:

\"Humanity is a story in which every page is written in blood and suffering\".

April 12th, 2024 11:10

Winter is my land
Parisab said:

Stunning description of an urban winter in the city escape i haven’t been to. This is one of my faves from you …

April 11th, 2024 11:10

Depths hotel
Bella Shepard said:

A tragic night immortalized, romanticised by many accounts, you capture the pathos and the inevitibility of that fateful journey. So many loves lost, so many dreams never fulfilled. \"Remember the Titanic\", we shall never forget. A stunning write my friend!

April 8th, 2024 15:26

Depths hotel
Ellen Marsell said:

\"but sometime you also have to know how to die !\"
And remain gentlemen until the very end.

April 8th, 2024 09:16

Nothing but words
Bella Shepard said:

You capture the beauty and majesty of words in this amazing poem, as they dance through our heads, touching each sense that we possess. Brilliant!!

April 7th, 2024 09:41

Nothing but words
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful 🌹

April 7th, 2024 06:44



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