Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Lindbergh
Accidental Poet said:
A great tribute to the legendary Charles Lindbergh.
January 9th, 2024 06:11
Accidental Poet said:
A great tribute to the legendary Charles Lindbergh.
January 9th, 2024 06:11
Lindbergh
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woww an awesome deep poem in eloquent poetics. Kudos for this one, reads inspiring powerful. I admire eagles even in metaphor.
January 9th, 2024 03:07
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woww an awesome deep poem in eloquent poetics. Kudos for this one, reads inspiring powerful. I admire eagles even in metaphor.
January 9th, 2024 03:07
Tangled mind
Bella Shepard said:
A picture is worth a thousand words, however in this case the words magnify the picture. Your description of madness, yearning for the beautiful, but separated by torment is priceless. Excellent read dear poet!
January 8th, 2024 15:13
Bella Shepard said:
A picture is worth a thousand words, however in this case the words magnify the picture. Your description of madness, yearning for the beautiful, but separated by torment is priceless. Excellent read dear poet!
January 8th, 2024 15:13
The polish girl
Dev Parth said:
🌌💔 A haunting reflection on loss and the unfulfilled potential of a life. Vivid imagery, from emaciated lines to a red triangle, paints a poignant picture. The interplay of elements like the burning road to heaven and the devil\'s affairs adds depth. The gentle doctor symbolizes both care and the march of time. The inclusion of \"Czesława\" personalizes the narrative. A bittersweet contemplation of life\'s fleeting moments and enduring memories. 🌟📝💔
Dev
January 5th, 2024 10:17
Dev Parth said:
🌌💔 A haunting reflection on loss and the unfulfilled potential of a life. Vivid imagery, from emaciated lines to a red triangle, paints a poignant picture. The interplay of elements like the burning road to heaven and the devil\'s affairs adds depth. The gentle doctor symbolizes both care and the march of time. The inclusion of \"Czesława\" personalizes the narrative. A bittersweet contemplation of life\'s fleeting moments and enduring memories. 🌟📝💔
Dev
January 5th, 2024 10:17
The polish girl
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Lorenz. Thank you for your sharing for your poem the polish girl. Happy New Year!
January 5th, 2024 10:00
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Lorenz. Thank you for your sharing for your poem the polish girl. Happy New Year!
January 5th, 2024 10:00
Belgium
Tom C Dylan said:
You really paint a picture. Really enjoyed this poem.
January 4th, 2024 03:29
Tom C Dylan said:
You really paint a picture. Really enjoyed this poem.
January 4th, 2024 03:29
The polish girl
Ellen Marsell said:
Lives and dreams cut short by the inhuman machine of death
January 4th, 2024 03:13
Ellen Marsell said:
Lives and dreams cut short by the inhuman machine of death
January 4th, 2024 03:13
Belgium
Alan R said:
Inspires me to write about the previous city I lived in...
January 2nd, 2024 14:23
Alan R said:
Inspires me to write about the previous city I lived in...
January 2nd, 2024 14:23
The chatmer (chat gpt scammer)
Ellen Marsell said:
Fake poets imitate, real ones create.
January 1st, 2024 03:36
Ellen Marsell said:
Fake poets imitate, real ones create.
January 1st, 2024 03:36
Fortitude
Ellen Marsell said:
Enjoyable flow of your writing, smooth and contemplative, reflecting a meditative experience.
The nature of existence is dual...
Thanks for sharing.
December 22nd, 2023 10:53
Ellen Marsell said:
Enjoyable flow of your writing, smooth and contemplative, reflecting a meditative experience.
The nature of existence is dual...
Thanks for sharing.
December 22nd, 2023 10:53
Window on the void
Cassie58 said:
Fire and fall sounds like hell. Freedom is so liberating. Imagine having wings to fly. I felt the imprisonment of the spirit here. Beautifully penned and rich with metaphor. Thank you.
December 16th, 2023 02:07
Cassie58 said:
Fire and fall sounds like hell. Freedom is so liberating. Imagine having wings to fly. I felt the imprisonment of the spirit here. Beautifully penned and rich with metaphor. Thank you.
December 16th, 2023 02:07
Window on the void
Ellen Marsell said:
Ce n\'est pas un destin qu\'elle a choisi, mais dans ses derniers instants, elle semble avoir réussi à l\'accepter.
December 15th, 2023 13:39
Ellen Marsell said:
Ce n\'est pas un destin qu\'elle a choisi, mais dans ses derniers instants, elle semble avoir réussi à l\'accepter.
December 15th, 2023 13:39
santa mafia
AuburnScribbler said:
I read this out loud like a disstrack rap, and wow do your words deliver some punch Darkfragrance.
I wholeheartedly agree about you calling the upcoming festival a red and green monster, as the chosen stresses that come with it, are to a massively damaging scale.
I also very much like the accompanying picture, very apt indeed.
Thanks for sharing this, bravo, and I hope that all is well.
December 6th, 2023 10:01
AuburnScribbler said:
I read this out loud like a disstrack rap, and wow do your words deliver some punch Darkfragrance.
I wholeheartedly agree about you calling the upcoming festival a red and green monster, as the chosen stresses that come with it, are to a massively damaging scale.
I also very much like the accompanying picture, very apt indeed.
Thanks for sharing this, bravo, and I hope that all is well.
December 6th, 2023 10:01
The eternal return
John Lee said:
Also.. very well written and awesome write!
December 1st, 2023 22:29
John Lee said:
Also.. very well written and awesome write!
December 1st, 2023 22:29
The eternal return
John Lee said:
Until they searched to parade the dead dog\'s body just to find it unfound. The lies begin to cover the truth in it\'s grave but it won\'t stay dead. Only after the world has it\'s run into a dead end, it looks up. The cloud descending without rain but with the one who reigns.
December 1st, 2023 22:28
John Lee said:
Until they searched to parade the dead dog\'s body just to find it unfound. The lies begin to cover the truth in it\'s grave but it won\'t stay dead. Only after the world has it\'s run into a dead end, it looks up. The cloud descending without rain but with the one who reigns.
December 1st, 2023 22:28
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