Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Unfinished requiem
Priya Tomar said:
A nice poem full of mystical imagery .
I like your dialogue form poetry.
Outstanding !
September 12th, 2025 11:00
Priya Tomar said:
A nice poem full of mystical imagery .
I like your dialogue form poetry.
Outstanding !
September 12th, 2025 11:00
Unfinished requiem
sorenbarrett said:
Requiem in d minor one of my favorite pieces and I always wonder how different it might be if he had finished it for as I understand he wrote only a small part of it. A great poem
September 12th, 2025 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
Requiem in d minor one of my favorite pieces and I always wonder how different it might be if he had finished it for as I understand he wrote only a small part of it. A great poem
September 12th, 2025 10:25
My today\'s land
Ellen Marsell said:
A curious blend of northern melancholy and southern ecstasy - a yearning for a summer that slips away, and a search for the scent of that one summer, the one that once was, but will never return. Beautifully written!
September 11th, 2025 13:12
Ellen Marsell said:
A curious blend of northern melancholy and southern ecstasy - a yearning for a summer that slips away, and a search for the scent of that one summer, the one that once was, but will never return. Beautifully written!
September 11th, 2025 13:12
My today\'s land
sorenbarrett said:
Memories of a place once familiar. Nicely worded with some great lines and metaphor. Most lovely
September 11th, 2025 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
Memories of a place once familiar. Nicely worded with some great lines and metaphor. Most lovely
September 11th, 2025 13:00
My today\'s land
Priya Tomar said:
Wonderful !
opening imagery ...outstanding..
Impermanence, transformation and longing , ...all in one !
September 11th, 2025 11:38
Priya Tomar said:
Wonderful !
opening imagery ...outstanding..
Impermanence, transformation and longing , ...all in one !
September 11th, 2025 11:38
Sublime urban tragedy
Lorenz said:
Is it this dual threat that surrounds us and lies within us ?
September 10th, 2025 14:35
Lorenz said:
Is it this dual threat that surrounds us and lies within us ?
September 10th, 2025 14:35
Sublime urban tragedy
Ellen Marsell said:
The image of Apophis is dual: the mythic serpent is chaos within, the asteroid is chaos without. Together they become a symbol of total menace. Impressive!
September 10th, 2025 14:06
Ellen Marsell said:
The image of Apophis is dual: the mythic serpent is chaos within, the asteroid is chaos without. Together they become a symbol of total menace. Impressive!
September 10th, 2025 14:06
Sublime urban tragedy
Priya Tomar said:
A poem on the absurdity of urban life .
Many dark imagery ...
Very nice .
September 10th, 2025 09:32
Priya Tomar said:
A poem on the absurdity of urban life .
Many dark imagery ...
Very nice .
September 10th, 2025 09:32
Sublime urban tragedy
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded Lorenz this has the feel of fusion of modern and gothic in a surreal birth. Nicely done
September 10th, 2025 09:14
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded Lorenz this has the feel of fusion of modern and gothic in a surreal birth. Nicely done
September 10th, 2025 09:14
In memory
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
There’s a dreamlike quality here that pulls the reader into its quiet sadness. “my pen is only a fragile bird feather tossed about by the winds” compares writing to a powerless feather, symbolizing vulnerability and lack of control. Interesting metahor. “my pen has nothing more to say” the pen is given human qualities of speaking or falling silent. Love the use of personification. Nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 16:01
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
There’s a dreamlike quality here that pulls the reader into its quiet sadness. “my pen is only a fragile bird feather tossed about by the winds” compares writing to a powerless feather, symbolizing vulnerability and lack of control. Interesting metahor. “my pen has nothing more to say” the pen is given human qualities of speaking or falling silent. Love the use of personification. Nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 16:01
In memory
sorenbarrett said:
A good write with more symbols than a drum set. Nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
A good write with more symbols than a drum set. Nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 14:04
In memory
Ellen Marsell said:
A deeply melancholic piece, in tune with the mood of autumn.
September 8th, 2025 13:50
Ellen Marsell said:
A deeply melancholic piece, in tune with the mood of autumn.
September 8th, 2025 13:50
Ballade cosmique
Priya Tomar said:
The poem blends physical universe with the inner landscape of memory and emotions...
Its romantic tone reminds me the poets - Rilke and Bauldelaire...
Wonderful write about the vast universe and tiny soul..
Magnum opus !.
September 6th, 2025 14:38
Priya Tomar said:
The poem blends physical universe with the inner landscape of memory and emotions...
Its romantic tone reminds me the poets - Rilke and Bauldelaire...
Wonderful write about the vast universe and tiny soul..
Magnum opus !.
September 6th, 2025 14:38
Ballade cosmique
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write in a melding of the cosmos, movies, religion with a sense of mysticism nicely done
September 6th, 2025 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write in a melding of the cosmos, movies, religion with a sense of mysticism nicely done
September 6th, 2025 11:33
Ballade cosmique
Ellen Marsell said:
A cosmic symphony of solitude, poetic calling, and spiritual exile.
September 6th, 2025 11:01
Ellen Marsell said:
A cosmic symphony of solitude, poetic calling, and spiritual exile.
September 6th, 2025 11:01
My abysses
Ellen Marsell said:
From a philosophical aphorism you have created an entire tragic mystery. This gaze into the abyss becomes a dialogue with the shadow, with the inner \"other\", with the double who calls and seduces.
September 5th, 2025 11:06
Ellen Marsell said:
From a philosophical aphorism you have created an entire tragic mystery. This gaze into the abyss becomes a dialogue with the shadow, with the inner \"other\", with the double who calls and seduces.
September 5th, 2025 11:06
My abysses
sorenbarrett said:
Erupting emotions characterize this poem they shout out and all those passing. Very emotional. Nicely done
September 5th, 2025 10:57
sorenbarrett said:
Erupting emotions characterize this poem they shout out and all those passing. Very emotional. Nicely done
September 5th, 2025 10:57
Dead seasons
Lorenz said:
Dramaturgy of an unstable identity that unleashes chimeras !
September 3rd, 2025 13:27
Lorenz said:
Dramaturgy of an unstable identity that unleashes chimeras !
September 3rd, 2025 13:27
Dead seasons
Ellen Marsell said:
An exquisite text, full of subtle shimmering and philosophical turns. It is an allegory of the creative path: fragile, sacrificial, yet capable of transforming personal wounds into an eternal trace.
September 3rd, 2025 13:20
Ellen Marsell said:
An exquisite text, full of subtle shimmering and philosophical turns. It is an allegory of the creative path: fragile, sacrificial, yet capable of transforming personal wounds into an eternal trace.
September 3rd, 2025 13:20
Dead seasons
sorenbarrett said:
The musician in sound, poet in words, sculptor in touch, painter in vision and the chef in taste. Love comes in all senses. A lovely write
September 3rd, 2025 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
The musician in sound, poet in words, sculptor in touch, painter in vision and the chef in taste. Love comes in all senses. A lovely write
September 3rd, 2025 12:02
Sandcastles
Priya Tomar said:
How do you write free verses so rhythmic, so melodious
September 2nd, 2025 14:24
Priya Tomar said:
How do you write free verses so rhythmic, so melodious
September 2nd, 2025 14:24
Sandcastles
Priya Tomar said:
Wow ! Well written...
Lovely metaphor for fragility...
September 2nd, 2025 14:22
Priya Tomar said:
Wow ! Well written...
Lovely metaphor for fragility...
September 2nd, 2025 14:22
Sandcastles
Ellen Marsell said:
It’s an allegory of the futility of war and of human missions that seem important, but in the end turn out to be nothing more than sand carried away by the tide.
September 2nd, 2025 13:20
Ellen Marsell said:
It’s an allegory of the futility of war and of human missions that seem important, but in the end turn out to be nothing more than sand carried away by the tide.
September 2nd, 2025 13:20
Sandcastles
sorenbarrett said:
Sandcastles fall easily with the incoming waves and tide leaving little to show. They say build upon a rock but there are few rocks on this beach. Maybe a lighthouse. Good write my friend
September 2nd, 2025 12:28
sorenbarrett said:
Sandcastles fall easily with the incoming waves and tide leaving little to show. They say build upon a rock but there are few rocks on this beach. Maybe a lighthouse. Good write my friend
September 2nd, 2025 12:28
Lethal poetry
NafisaSB said:
stay succumbed so that she helps inspire and generate some beautiful lines
September 2nd, 2025 01:48
NafisaSB said:
stay succumbed so that she helps inspire and generate some beautiful lines
September 2nd, 2025 01:48
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