Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Totem
Ellen Marsell said:
How tragically little chance the “ gentle sheep” have of breaking out of the vicious cycle of fear and submission.
August 17th, 2024 10:58
Ellen Marsell said:
How tragically little chance the “ gentle sheep” have of breaking out of the vicious cycle of fear and submission.
August 17th, 2024 10:58
Totem
sorenbarrett said:
A deep symbolic feel to this poem. Totems archetypes in a Jungian style. Nicely done.
August 17th, 2024 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
A deep symbolic feel to this poem. Totems archetypes in a Jungian style. Nicely done.
August 17th, 2024 09:06
Cocktails
Doggerel Dave said:
Not into cocktails, but the richness of your menu drew me in...I must now wait until the sun sets over the yardarm....
PS How\'s the hangover?
June 30th, 2024 18:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Not into cocktails, but the richness of your menu drew me in...I must now wait until the sun sets over the yardarm....
PS How\'s the hangover?
June 30th, 2024 18:10
Cocktails
Ellen Marsell said:
This could have been a very exciting exploration of exotic tastes and aromas.
June 30th, 2024 10:45
Ellen Marsell said:
This could have been a very exciting exploration of exotic tastes and aromas.
June 30th, 2024 10:45
In the mood
Ellen Marsell said:
I love that gentle melancholy tone in your poem.
May 27th, 2024 10:58
Ellen Marsell said:
I love that gentle melancholy tone in your poem.
May 27th, 2024 10:58
The ledger
2781 said:
Thy dead men shall live, together with my dead body shall they arise. Awake and sing, ye that dwell in the dust: for thy dew is as the dew of herbs, and the earth shall cast out the dead.
May 24th, 2024 02:26
2781 said:
Thy dead men shall live, together with my dead body shall they arise. Awake and sing, ye that dwell in the dust: for thy dew is as the dew of herbs, and the earth shall cast out the dead.
May 24th, 2024 02:26
The streetcar girl
Ellen Marsell said:
A girl lost in her own world and a stirring moment of fleeting contemplation... A gentle message.
May 14th, 2024 11:14
Ellen Marsell said:
A girl lost in her own world and a stirring moment of fleeting contemplation... A gentle message.
May 14th, 2024 11:14
Punishment
2781 said:
And I saw, and behold a white horse: and he that sat on him had a bow, and a crown was given unto him: and he went forth conquering, and to conquer.
May 13th, 2024 15:01
2781 said:
And I saw, and behold a white horse: and he that sat on him had a bow, and a crown was given unto him: and he went forth conquering, and to conquer.
May 13th, 2024 15:01
Prelude
Ellen Marsell said:
The music in your words and the feeling of nature\'s embrace. So vivid and sensual.
May 11th, 2024 09:44
Ellen Marsell said:
The music in your words and the feeling of nature\'s embrace. So vivid and sensual.
May 11th, 2024 09:44
Requiem
Ellen Marsell said:
Very impressive!
He once said he was writing \"Requiem\" for himself.
May 7th, 2024 11:02
Ellen Marsell said:
Very impressive!
He once said he was writing \"Requiem\" for himself.
May 7th, 2024 11:02
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