Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Kensington 2050
Doggerel Dave said:
My mind architecture is, I believe very different from yours - I retire defeated!
January 22nd, 2024 05:19
Doggerel Dave said:
My mind architecture is, I believe very different from yours - I retire defeated!
January 22nd, 2024 05:19
Kensington 2050
Doggerel Dave said:
I had no idea what Kensington you were talking about - but following Bella\'s model I googled. Seems some gentrification is going on, so those inhabitants who make it such a lively area will have to move on........ Your piece can be easily adjusted and move with them....!!
January 22nd, 2024 01:11
Doggerel Dave said:
I had no idea what Kensington you were talking about - but following Bella\'s model I googled. Seems some gentrification is going on, so those inhabitants who make it such a lively area will have to move on........ Your piece can be easily adjusted and move with them....!!
January 22nd, 2024 01:11
Kensington 2050
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet, this is breathtakingly beautiful! Rich in imagery and playing upon the senses, it evokes peace and such happiness. Thank you!
January 21st, 2024 13:40
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet, this is breathtakingly beautiful! Rich in imagery and playing upon the senses, it evokes peace and such happiness. Thank you!
January 21st, 2024 13:40
We loved each other
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful imagery, very sensual. Thanks for sharing!
January 21st, 2024 03:14
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful imagery, very sensual. Thanks for sharing!
January 21st, 2024 03:14
The horizon line
Accidental Poet said:
Everyone\'s horizon will be different, as many search for what matters to them. The closer we get to finding what we\'re looking for, the more we get to know ourselves if need be, reinvent ourselves. A very inspirational poem lorenz. ππ
January 19th, 2024 11:30
Accidental Poet said:
Everyone\'s horizon will be different, as many search for what matters to them. The closer we get to finding what we\'re looking for, the more we get to know ourselves if need be, reinvent ourselves. A very inspirational poem lorenz. ππ
January 19th, 2024 11:30
Nursery dream
2781 said:
I saw heaven standing open and there before me was a white horse, whose rider is called Faithful and True. With justice he judges and wages war.
January 19th, 2024 04:31
2781 said:
I saw heaven standing open and there before me was a white horse, whose rider is called Faithful and True. With justice he judges and wages war.
January 19th, 2024 04:31
The horizon line
Destined Perspectives said:
I found this inspirational and very thought provoking! Now I will spend the day really contemplating your words and thinking about my horizon line. Maybe we do never reach it? As we change through the human experience so does the direction of the horizon line. Only in death do we ever reach the final leg of the race but even then some people never know what they truly desire or who they actually are. So how could you ever truly reach the horizon line? See told you lol now you have my mind really working already today! π
January 18th, 2024 09:32
Destined Perspectives said:
I found this inspirational and very thought provoking! Now I will spend the day really contemplating your words and thinking about my horizon line. Maybe we do never reach it? As we change through the human experience so does the direction of the horizon line. Only in death do we ever reach the final leg of the race but even then some people never know what they truly desire or who they actually are. So how could you ever truly reach the horizon line? See told you lol now you have my mind really working already today! π
January 18th, 2024 09:32
The horizon line
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s actually a very profound piece of work. There\'s something for everyone. I loved it!
January 18th, 2024 05:58
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s actually a very profound piece of work. There\'s something for everyone. I loved it!
January 18th, 2024 05:58
My sweet madness
Destined Perspectives said:
This is a absolutely stunning piece of writing! It has inspired a idea for my next poem. Thank you for sharing a piece of your inner world and it\'s deeply woven dimensions! β€οΈ
January 17th, 2024 13:01
Destined Perspectives said:
This is a absolutely stunning piece of writing! It has inspired a idea for my next poem. Thank you for sharing a piece of your inner world and it\'s deeply woven dimensions! β€οΈ
January 17th, 2024 13:01
The Rhine valley
Ellen Marsell said:
Your words painted a great picture, creating a vivid emotional image of the spirit of a legendary place...
January 17th, 2024 12:02
Ellen Marsell said:
Your words painted a great picture, creating a vivid emotional image of the spirit of a legendary place...
January 17th, 2024 12:02
My sweet madness
Bella Shepard said:
Your Sweet Madness permeates your soul, and opens dimensions that others rarely experience. This poem is so beautifully versed, and if this is madness, it is perfection. Loved this!
January 16th, 2024 14:11
Bella Shepard said:
Your Sweet Madness permeates your soul, and opens dimensions that others rarely experience. This poem is so beautifully versed, and if this is madness, it is perfection. Loved this!
January 16th, 2024 14:11
Ashirah
Bella Shepard said:
Such passion enveloped by love and desire in this beautiful poem, melded for all eternity. Loved it!
January 15th, 2024 10:40
Bella Shepard said:
Such passion enveloped by love and desire in this beautiful poem, melded for all eternity. Loved it!
January 15th, 2024 10:40
Ashirah
Ellen Marsell said:
A fate decided in a few minutes. Unexpected, so sensual, amazing! Thanks for sharing this story, dear Lorenz!
January 15th, 2024 05:39
Ellen Marsell said:
A fate decided in a few minutes. Unexpected, so sensual, amazing! Thanks for sharing this story, dear Lorenz!
January 15th, 2024 05:39
The ship of lost souls
Ellen Marsell said:
The story of Sodom and Gomorrah comes to mind more and more often lately...
January 11th, 2024 12:03
Ellen Marsell said:
The story of Sodom and Gomorrah comes to mind more and more often lately...
January 11th, 2024 12:03
Lindbergh
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Lorenz. I can draw the imagining when I read your poem. Thank you so much!
January 10th, 2024 21:55
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Lorenz. I can draw the imagining when I read your poem. Thank you so much!
January 10th, 2024 21:55
Lindbergh
Accidental Poet said:
A great tribute to the legendary Charles Lindbergh.
January 9th, 2024 06:11
Accidental Poet said:
A great tribute to the legendary Charles Lindbergh.
January 9th, 2024 06:11
Lindbergh
π€s.zaynab.kamoonpuriπ·π¦π½ said:
Woww an awesome deep poem in eloquent poetics. Kudos for this one, reads inspiring powerful. I admire eagles even in metaphor.
January 9th, 2024 03:07
π€s.zaynab.kamoonpuriπ·π¦π½ said:
Woww an awesome deep poem in eloquent poetics. Kudos for this one, reads inspiring powerful. I admire eagles even in metaphor.
January 9th, 2024 03:07
Tangled mind
Bella Shepard said:
A picture is worth a thousand words, however in this case the words magnify the picture. Your description of madness, yearning for the beautiful, but separated by torment is priceless. Excellent read dear poet!
January 8th, 2024 15:13
Bella Shepard said:
A picture is worth a thousand words, however in this case the words magnify the picture. Your description of madness, yearning for the beautiful, but separated by torment is priceless. Excellent read dear poet!
January 8th, 2024 15:13
The polish girl
Dev Parth said:
ππ A haunting reflection on loss and the unfulfilled potential of a life. Vivid imagery, from emaciated lines to a red triangle, paints a poignant picture. The interplay of elements like the burning road to heaven and the devil\'s affairs adds depth. The gentle doctor symbolizes both care and the march of time. The inclusion of \"CzesΕawa\" personalizes the narrative. A bittersweet contemplation of life\'s fleeting moments and enduring memories. πππ
Dev
January 5th, 2024 10:17
Dev Parth said:
ππ A haunting reflection on loss and the unfulfilled potential of a life. Vivid imagery, from emaciated lines to a red triangle, paints a poignant picture. The interplay of elements like the burning road to heaven and the devil\'s affairs adds depth. The gentle doctor symbolizes both care and the march of time. The inclusion of \"CzesΕawa\" personalizes the narrative. A bittersweet contemplation of life\'s fleeting moments and enduring memories. πππ
Dev
January 5th, 2024 10:17
The polish girl
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Lorenz. Thank you for your sharing for your poem the polish girl. Happy New Year!
January 5th, 2024 10:00
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Lorenz. Thank you for your sharing for your poem the polish girl. Happy New Year!
January 5th, 2024 10:00
Belgium
Tom Dylan said:
You really paint a picture. Really enjoyed this poem.
January 4th, 2024 03:29
Tom Dylan said:
You really paint a picture. Really enjoyed this poem.
January 4th, 2024 03:29
The polish girl
Ellen Marsell said:
Lives and dreams cut short by the inhuman machine of death
January 4th, 2024 03:13
Ellen Marsell said:
Lives and dreams cut short by the inhuman machine of death
January 4th, 2024 03:13
Belgium
Alan R said:
Inspires me to write about the previous city I lived in...
January 2nd, 2024 14:23
Alan R said:
Inspires me to write about the previous city I lived in...
January 2nd, 2024 14:23
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