Comments received on poems by Lorenz



Requiem for a lift
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant work.

November 11th, 2023 09:31

My lady of the key
Ellen Marsell said:

Such a charming piece! Bravo!

November 10th, 2023 12:14

Enlightenment
Ellen Marsell said:

An enchanting realm of serenity and inspiration...

November 9th, 2023 10:58

Enlightenment
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful imagery and use of the senses.

November 9th, 2023 09:50

After body smell
Bella Shepard said:

The lovely picture truly enhances the lingering fragrance, and afterglow of such pleasure, if only for one more night. Beautifully crafted, thoroughly enjoyed.

November 8th, 2023 15:29

After body smell
Ellen Marsell said:

L\'amour, comme une fleur fragile, se fane sous les vents d\'hiver, laissant derrière lui le goût persistant d\'un délicieux poison.
Beau poème!

November 8th, 2023 11:40

After body smell
2781 said:

I liked it but I have a habit of bad interpretation!
You keep my muddled mind in fine tune.

November 8th, 2023 07:23

Pagan wedding
Kinsley Lee said:

Hi! Thank you for sharing your poem. It looks to me mystic and fantastic, like to read mythology. Thanks a lot.

November 7th, 2023 20:44

Pagan wedding
Ma5on said:

Gothic erotic! Yet sensual and tranquil.

Your atmospheric scenery creates a vivid detail to the theme.

M



November 7th, 2023 13:58

Pagan wedding
Bella Shepard said:

I love the beautiful pic juxtaposed upon the carnal intensity of this poem, a Pagan Wedding extraordinaire! You piqued my curiousity, and doing a little research found that Pagan Weddings are happening today with various types of ceremonies. I\'ve learned something new, thank you.

November 6th, 2023 15:22

A single ticket to Mars
Ma5on said:

From my castle of sand I watched the crows tears drown the world.

Imagery as thick and heavy as dark velvet!

I was immersed in this heavy cloak of misery from beginning to end.

Great piece!

M

November 6th, 2023 15:02

Pagan wedding
Ellen Marsell said:

Excellent !

November 6th, 2023 09:22

Pagan wedding
2781 said:

When he speaks a lie he speaks his own: for he is a liar, and the father of it.
On the other hand, it speaks the truth.

November 6th, 2023 07:40

A single ticket to Mars
Ellen Marsell said:

Un récit visuellement riche. Un travail remarquable !

November 5th, 2023 15:36

A single ticket to Mars
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful imagery. Great use of senses.

November 5th, 2023 11:59

Sign of times
2781 said:

Manifesting.

November 4th, 2023 07:56

Sign of times
Ellen Marsell said:

C\'est vraiment puissant!

November 4th, 2023 07:19

Sign of times
Thomas W Case said:

Dark and powerful.

November 4th, 2023 07:08

Summer love
Ellen Marsell said:

A real journey back in time. Delightful!

November 3rd, 2023 10:25

Summer love
Lorenz said:

thanks. painting from the good old days ?

November 3rd, 2023 09:34

Summer love
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent. I like the painting you did with words.

November 3rd, 2023 09:02

Prometheus
Michaelpoet said:

It makes you think

November 2nd, 2023 10:54

La Seine
Thomas W Case said:

To use another baseball analogy, you knocked this out of the park. I could write 5-page essay on the brilliance of this work of yours, but then I would get nothing done today. Suffice it to say, sheer genius.

November 2nd, 2023 07:48

Prometheus
Kinsley Lee said:

Thank you for your sharing poem. The story of the Invincible heart of hero in mythology. The poem gives me encourage. Thank you very much.

November 1st, 2023 17:39

Prometheus
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful imagery.

November 1st, 2023 07:20

The white corridor
Lorenz said:

I have already had to deal with similar people .

October 31st, 2023 13:09

The white corridor
Thomas W Case said:

Right in time for the season. Chilling.

October 31st, 2023 02:52

Revelation
Thomas W Case said:

You really paint the picture.

October 30th, 2023 08:04

Revelation
Ellen Marsell said:

Disturbing writing.

October 30th, 2023 06:08

Pluto
rhmn_7 said:

Strong words!

October 29th, 2023 07:32

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