Comments received on poems by Lorenz
The spectrum
Ellen Marsell said:
\"I do not fear a bullet, I do not fear a saber blow, I fear nothing on earth. But I am afraid of what I do not see.\"
April 1st, 2024 13:52
Ellen Marsell said:
\"I do not fear a bullet, I do not fear a saber blow, I fear nothing on earth. But I am afraid of what I do not see.\"
April 1st, 2024 13:52
Easter sunday
Ellen Marsell said:
Tant de métaphores, mon ami. La poésie est une arme entre tes mains.
March 31st, 2024 05:57
Ellen Marsell said:
Tant de métaphores, mon ami. La poésie est une arme entre tes mains.
March 31st, 2024 05:57
Terror
Ellen Marsell said:
You have created a wonderful rhythmic and sound harmony in the writing by using internal rhymes. I love it.
March 30th, 2024 15:06
Ellen Marsell said:
You have created a wonderful rhythmic and sound harmony in the writing by using internal rhymes. I love it.
March 30th, 2024 15:06
The castaway
Doggerel Dave said:
Rich in imagery I sometimes don\'t understand, but taken with the energy of it all. Thanks
March 30th, 2024 05:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Rich in imagery I sometimes don\'t understand, but taken with the energy of it all. Thanks
March 30th, 2024 05:42
The castaway
Alan R said:
between Amsterdam and a bottle of rum
Lived it, loved it.
March 29th, 2024 12:11
Alan R said:
between Amsterdam and a bottle of rum
Lived it, loved it.
March 29th, 2024 12:11
The castaway
aDarkerMind said:
there can be no denying here...you have a gift lorenz.
enjoyed every word.
March 29th, 2024 10:58
aDarkerMind said:
there can be no denying here...you have a gift lorenz.
enjoyed every word.
March 29th, 2024 10:58
Marble of time
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful imagery. You paint the scene well.
March 26th, 2024 09:41
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful imagery. You paint the scene well.
March 26th, 2024 09:41
A poet\'s testament
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful imagery, captivating melancholy in the eternal struggle with time and memory.
March 25th, 2024 11:49
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful imagery, captivating melancholy in the eternal struggle with time and memory.
March 25th, 2024 11:49
The messenger
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s great writing and, oddly enough, relevant.
March 24th, 2024 11:51
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s great writing and, oddly enough, relevant.
March 24th, 2024 11:51
Elements
Bella Shepard said:
The elements of life must somehow achieve equilibrium. Do we help or do we hinder, are we even capable of solving the riddle?
March 23rd, 2024 15:48
Bella Shepard said:
The elements of life must somehow achieve equilibrium. Do we help or do we hinder, are we even capable of solving the riddle?
March 23rd, 2024 15:48
Elements
Ellen Marsell said:
They must be cooperating with each other to create harmony and balance.
March 23rd, 2024 11:34
Ellen Marsell said:
They must be cooperating with each other to create harmony and balance.
March 23rd, 2024 11:34
Shadow theater
Bella Shepard said:
Life does seem surreal, and we but shadows. You capture the tortured existence that we constantly question, yet find no answers to. A compelling and yet chilling read my friend. Who are we, really?
March 22nd, 2024 15:53
Bella Shepard said:
Life does seem surreal, and we but shadows. You capture the tortured existence that we constantly question, yet find no answers to. A compelling and yet chilling read my friend. Who are we, really?
March 22nd, 2024 15:53
Inspired island
Bella Shepard said:
This poem truly touches the senses in the most incredible way. It is eloquently descriptive, and one is easily lost in the ambiance of your \"Inspired Island\".
March 21st, 2024 14:27
Bella Shepard said:
This poem truly touches the senses in the most incredible way. It is eloquently descriptive, and one is easily lost in the ambiance of your \"Inspired Island\".
March 21st, 2024 14:27
Timeless colors
Ellen Marsell said:
\"our lives like galaxies,
that drift apart but retain their memories,
only the light of silence remains ...\"
Loved your poem.
March 20th, 2024 11:41
Ellen Marsell said:
\"our lives like galaxies,
that drift apart but retain their memories,
only the light of silence remains ...\"
Loved your poem.
March 20th, 2024 11:41
The passage
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s just a new chapter in a never-ending story...
March 14th, 2024 12:02
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s just a new chapter in a never-ending story...
March 14th, 2024 12:02
Muddy rainbow
2781 said:
Beware of the leaven of the Pharisees, which is hypocrisy.
Just believe...
March 9th, 2024 06:58
2781 said:
Beware of the leaven of the Pharisees, which is hypocrisy.
Just believe...
March 9th, 2024 06:58
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