Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Green fragrance
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...cold and icy--\" eh? That initial assessment plaguing me to the very passionate conclusion, whose subtle flame melted the other until it vapourized, still haunts me. Mint will swear on it, yet I must disagree. Envy burns stronger than most else yet does not stand against jealousy, and green perpetually warming the soul even in bitter climes cannot truly be icy, rather the strength of its fire seems thus. Fascinating and intriguing, thank you for sharing.
September 25th, 2024 14:08
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...cold and icy--\" eh? That initial assessment plaguing me to the very passionate conclusion, whose subtle flame melted the other until it vapourized, still haunts me. Mint will swear on it, yet I must disagree. Envy burns stronger than most else yet does not stand against jealousy, and green perpetually warming the soul even in bitter climes cannot truly be icy, rather the strength of its fire seems thus. Fascinating and intriguing, thank you for sharing.
September 25th, 2024 14:08
Green fragrance
Ellen Marsell said:
Nothing can be as peaceful as a green field, but at the same time nothing can be as wild as forests flaming with green fire...
September 25th, 2024 13:22
Ellen Marsell said:
Nothing can be as peaceful as a green field, but at the same time nothing can be as wild as forests flaming with green fire...
September 25th, 2024 13:22
Postcard
NafisaSB said:
sad memories and moving description of a bygone era
well written.
September 17th, 2024 01:28
NafisaSB said:
sad memories and moving description of a bygone era
well written.
September 17th, 2024 01:28
As the years go by...
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is filled with subtle sadness and wonderful imagery. Very touching!
September 14th, 2024 11:09
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is filled with subtle sadness and wonderful imagery. Very touching!
September 14th, 2024 11:09
Camille
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautiful and haunting, drawing the soul into that other, ethereal world with unseen tentacles.
September 8th, 2024 17:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautiful and haunting, drawing the soul into that other, ethereal world with unseen tentacles.
September 8th, 2024 17:23
Camille
Ellen Marsell said:
It was as if fate itself was jealous of her talent. A beautiful poem!
September 8th, 2024 12:00
Ellen Marsell said:
It was as if fate itself was jealous of her talent. A beautiful poem!
September 8th, 2024 12:00
On the road to Novgorod
Dan Williams said:
OK now I have to find Novgorod and at least pretend to visit it. Nice work.
September 7th, 2024 01:32
Dan Williams said:
OK now I have to find Novgorod and at least pretend to visit it. Nice work.
September 7th, 2024 01:32
On the road to Novgorod
Ellen Marsell said:
One of the greatest movies ever. Thank you!
September 6th, 2024 09:21
Ellen Marsell said:
One of the greatest movies ever. Thank you!
September 6th, 2024 09:21
On the road to Novgorod
Ellen Marsell said:
The melancholic tone, rich imagery, all combine a deep personal journey with a broader history and the spirit of the land. Excellent!
September 6th, 2024 08:25
Ellen Marsell said:
The melancholic tone, rich imagery, all combine a deep personal journey with a broader history and the spirit of the land. Excellent!
September 6th, 2024 08:25
Swing minor mode
Dan Williams said:
A poem in minor key; interesting. Thoughts filtered through music. Nice.
September 2nd, 2024 00:37
Dan Williams said:
A poem in minor key; interesting. Thoughts filtered through music. Nice.
September 2nd, 2024 00:37
Swing minor mode
Thad Wilk said:
\"clapping\" 👏
A deep, melancholy and
captivating write! ✍️
Great use of metaphor
and to read a delight!! 👍
Best regards ✌️. Thad
September 1st, 2024 12:25
Thad Wilk said:
\"clapping\" 👏
A deep, melancholy and
captivating write! ✍️
Great use of metaphor
and to read a delight!! 👍
Best regards ✌️. Thad
September 1st, 2024 12:25
Swing minor mode
Ellen Marsell said:
Through imagery and metaphors you managed to convey the unique combination of melancholy and energy inherent in Django\'s compositions. This is great writing!
August 31st, 2024 18:24
Ellen Marsell said:
Through imagery and metaphors you managed to convey the unique combination of melancholy and energy inherent in Django\'s compositions. This is great writing!
August 31st, 2024 18:24
The summit
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful natural images in a metaphor about life. Lovely
August 22nd, 2024 15:49
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful natural images in a metaphor about life. Lovely
August 22nd, 2024 15:49
The summit
Ellen Marsell said:
“Nowhere is there such sparkle, such spiritual intensity, as among these precious snows”.
August 22nd, 2024 13:45
Ellen Marsell said:
“Nowhere is there such sparkle, such spiritual intensity, as among these precious snows”.
August 22nd, 2024 13:45
The universal
Dan Williams said:
In \"the evening of life\" I do feel that clock ticking. I suppose we all contemplate our evening; you do it so well.
August 19th, 2024 23:59
Dan Williams said:
In \"the evening of life\" I do feel that clock ticking. I suppose we all contemplate our evening; you do it so well.
August 19th, 2024 23:59
The universal
Doggerel Dave said:
In my old armchair an even older occupant who has greater truth, more perspective than when involved in the events and relationships now recalled.
Rich in detail, your portrait feels like empathy to me.
August 18th, 2024 16:58
Doggerel Dave said:
In my old armchair an even older occupant who has greater truth, more perspective than when involved in the events and relationships now recalled.
Rich in detail, your portrait feels like empathy to me.
August 18th, 2024 16:58
The universal
sorenbarrett said:
A write that gives pause and requires more than one reading and even then it goes deep.
August 18th, 2024 12:40
sorenbarrett said:
A write that gives pause and requires more than one reading and even then it goes deep.
August 18th, 2024 12:40
Totem
Ellen Marsell said:
How tragically little chance the “ gentle sheep” have of breaking out of the vicious cycle of fear and submission.
August 17th, 2024 10:58
Ellen Marsell said:
How tragically little chance the “ gentle sheep” have of breaking out of the vicious cycle of fear and submission.
August 17th, 2024 10:58
Totem
sorenbarrett said:
A deep symbolic feel to this poem. Totems archetypes in a Jungian style. Nicely done.
August 17th, 2024 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
A deep symbolic feel to this poem. Totems archetypes in a Jungian style. Nicely done.
August 17th, 2024 09:06
Cocktails
Doggerel Dave said:
Not into cocktails, but the richness of your menu drew me in...I must now wait until the sun sets over the yardarm....
PS How\'s the hangover?
June 30th, 2024 18:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Not into cocktails, but the richness of your menu drew me in...I must now wait until the sun sets over the yardarm....
PS How\'s the hangover?
June 30th, 2024 18:10
Cocktails
Ellen Marsell said:
This could have been a very exciting exploration of exotic tastes and aromas.
June 30th, 2024 10:45
Ellen Marsell said:
This could have been a very exciting exploration of exotic tastes and aromas.
June 30th, 2024 10:45
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