Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Symbiosis
Sealgair said:
Condensed formulas filled with deep meaning. I like it.
February 9th, 2025 12:07
Sealgair said:
Condensed formulas filled with deep meaning. I like it.
February 9th, 2025 12:07
Will I have time ?
Dan Williams said:
Not enough time, sure, but don\'t let that stop you from trying. We are part of the universe after all, eh? Good work here.
February 8th, 2025 00:38
Dan Williams said:
Not enough time, sure, but don\'t let that stop you from trying. We are part of the universe after all, eh? Good work here.
February 8th, 2025 00:38
Will I have time ?
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write.
Thank heavens this universe is too vast for folks in tourist mode to visit all of it!
February 6th, 2025 18:23
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write.
Thank heavens this universe is too vast for folks in tourist mode to visit all of it!
February 6th, 2025 18:23
Will I have time ?
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is like a journey beyond space and time, but it remains deeply human in its essence. The philosophical echoes are very strong.
February 6th, 2025 11:41
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is like a journey beyond space and time, but it remains deeply human in its essence. The philosophical echoes are very strong.
February 6th, 2025 11:41
Will I have time ?
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is filled with so many metaphors and solar images that intermingle in their meanings. A lovely write
February 6th, 2025 10:39
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is filled with so many metaphors and solar images that intermingle in their meanings. A lovely write
February 6th, 2025 10:39
Old rucksack
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah wow it is not just a fine tribute to your travel companion rucksack its a fantastic memories of travel poem. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
January 25th, 2025 14:13
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah wow it is not just a fine tribute to your travel companion rucksack its a fantastic memories of travel poem. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
January 25th, 2025 14:13
Old rucksack
Ellen Marsell said:
This heartfelt dialogue with the rucksack radiates a remarkable sense of humanity and warmth, akin to speaking with a long-lost friend. The old rucksack is a symbol of all those moments that can never be brought back, embodying the spirit of travel, energy, and freedom. It also evokes the struggles that accompanied those travels, making them an integral part of the experience. A truly moving and beautiful piece.
January 17th, 2025 14:26
Ellen Marsell said:
This heartfelt dialogue with the rucksack radiates a remarkable sense of humanity and warmth, akin to speaking with a long-lost friend. The old rucksack is a symbol of all those moments that can never be brought back, embodying the spirit of travel, energy, and freedom. It also evokes the struggles that accompanied those travels, making them an integral part of the experience. A truly moving and beautiful piece.
January 17th, 2025 14:26
Old rucksack
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me Lorenz this old sack a friend of life\'s journeys is so familiar in metaphor and it strikes at the heart of a weary traveler
January 17th, 2025 12:47
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me Lorenz this old sack a friend of life\'s journeys is so familiar in metaphor and it strikes at the heart of a weary traveler
January 17th, 2025 12:47
The evening angel
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a poetic meditation on the intersection of time, space and spirituality. It is imbued with a sense of transcendence, a desire to transcend the ordinary, to touch something eternal and immeasurably beautiful.
January 14th, 2025 09:33
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a poetic meditation on the intersection of time, space and spirituality. It is imbued with a sense of transcendence, a desire to transcend the ordinary, to touch something eternal and immeasurably beautiful.
January 14th, 2025 09:33
Dawn
NafisaSB said:
a message from the distant past , and a question - will dawn be reborn ?? what say you, yourself ?
January 14th, 2025 00:23
NafisaSB said:
a message from the distant past , and a question - will dawn be reborn ?? what say you, yourself ?
January 14th, 2025 00:23
The evening angel
sorenbarrett said:
Lhy Egyptian god of music Apollo for the greeks comes through in this piece. Music closely related to poetry strikes a chord, Very nice
January 13th, 2025 17:24
sorenbarrett said:
Lhy Egyptian god of music Apollo for the greeks comes through in this piece. Music closely related to poetry strikes a chord, Very nice
January 13th, 2025 17:24
Mother waters
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem is imbued with a gentle melancholy. It is about the threads that connect us with the past, the future and something more than just life. And the image of water becomes a key symbol here: it is the beginning, the cleansing, and the return home. Great work!
January 12th, 2025 04:45
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem is imbued with a gentle melancholy. It is about the threads that connect us with the past, the future and something more than just life. And the image of water becomes a key symbol here: it is the beginning, the cleansing, and the return home. Great work!
January 12th, 2025 04:45
Mother waters
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of longing and desire that is well painted in images of a sureal nature. Most lovely with such nicely worded poetry
January 11th, 2025 18:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of longing and desire that is well painted in images of a sureal nature. Most lovely with such nicely worded poetry
January 11th, 2025 18:39
Klaus Kinsky .
Ellen Marsell said:
A somber portrait of an artist who burns himself for the sake of art.
January 9th, 2025 13:01
Ellen Marsell said:
A somber portrait of an artist who burns himself for the sake of art.
January 9th, 2025 13:01
Klaus Kinsky .
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and gothic in nature this poem gives a shiver.
January 9th, 2025 11:53
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and gothic in nature this poem gives a shiver.
January 9th, 2025 11:53
Dawn
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem perfectly conveys the primordial and harshness of the world in which a person is just beginning his journey. Great writing!
January 7th, 2025 10:35
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem perfectly conveys the primordial and harshness of the world in which a person is just beginning his journey. Great writing!
January 7th, 2025 10:35
Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
The fiercness of nature and the uncertainty of infant man trying to hold on to life imprisoned by walls of rock, desert and trees. We all wonder if tomorrow will come. A most epic type of write. Lovely
January 7th, 2025 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
The fiercness of nature and the uncertainty of infant man trying to hold on to life imprisoned by walls of rock, desert and trees. We all wonder if tomorrow will come. A most epic type of write. Lovely
January 7th, 2025 10:10
Dawn
rin said:
It seems like the beginning of online gaming. And those who can\'t sell.
January 7th, 2025 09:28
rin said:
It seems like the beginning of online gaming. And those who can\'t sell.
January 7th, 2025 09:28
The Herculanum night
Lorenz said:
Fascinating dive into the strata of time that transcends dimensions.
January 6th, 2025 15:13
Lorenz said:
Fascinating dive into the strata of time that transcends dimensions.
January 6th, 2025 15:13
The Herculanum night
Ellen Marsell said:
The dream becomes a space where the spirit can be released from the “prison” of the body to touch something greater - the immortal history hidden beneath the ashes of time.
January 6th, 2025 14:53
Ellen Marsell said:
The dream becomes a space where the spirit can be released from the “prison” of the body to touch something greater - the immortal history hidden beneath the ashes of time.
January 6th, 2025 14:53
The Herculanum night
sorenbarrett said:
And from dreams arise great passions that are often lost in the quenching daylight. A beautiful write
January 6th, 2025 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
And from dreams arise great passions that are often lost in the quenching daylight. A beautiful write
January 6th, 2025 08:33
Palermo
rin said:
The death of a person leaves behind memories for those involved. That\'s something important in life.
January 5th, 2025 17:44
rin said:
The death of a person leaves behind memories for those involved. That\'s something important in life.
January 5th, 2025 17:44
Palermo
Ellen Marsell said:
An impression of descending into the realm of shadows. The past intertwines with the present, and death becomes as tangible as life itself. The poem is imbued with a dense atmosphere of darkness, yet there is a note of acceptance of fate within it.
As always, this is a work one wishes to return to, discovering new facets of its imagery and meaning each time.
January 5th, 2025 12:06
Ellen Marsell said:
An impression of descending into the realm of shadows. The past intertwines with the present, and death becomes as tangible as life itself. The poem is imbued with a dense atmosphere of darkness, yet there is a note of acceptance of fate within it.
As always, this is a work one wishes to return to, discovering new facets of its imagery and meaning each time.
January 5th, 2025 12:06
Palermo
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and somewhat gothic in nature this poem paints a picture of redemption. Powerful and moving it speaks to the soul of forgiveness
January 5th, 2025 10:36
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and somewhat gothic in nature this poem paints a picture of redemption. Powerful and moving it speaks to the soul of forgiveness
January 5th, 2025 10:36
The land of marble statues
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of nostalgia goes with this poem and a longing for a return of the past . Lovely
January 4th, 2025 15:40
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of nostalgia goes with this poem and a longing for a return of the past . Lovely
January 4th, 2025 15:40
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