Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Dear mother
sorenbarrett said:
So full of metaphor and great lines (I was born in the desire of a false summer.) The latterrefference of storks comming in winter fits (Child of silence so conceived ) another great line. Ending on a desire to be a good daddy. Well writen
October 26th, 2024 09:12
sorenbarrett said:
So full of metaphor and great lines (I was born in the desire of a false summer.) The latterrefference of storks comming in winter fits (Child of silence so conceived ) another great line. Ending on a desire to be a good daddy. Well writen
October 26th, 2024 09:12
Who am I ?
sorenbarrett said:
All things to all people. I liked the feel of this one as it seemed to roll off the tongue with such ease.
October 25th, 2024 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
All things to all people. I liked the feel of this one as it seemed to roll off the tongue with such ease.
October 25th, 2024 05:00
Who am I ?
Ellen Marsell said:
Whoever you are, you are the sum of all these experiences—a being in search of both the stars and the shadows.
I love every line of this poem!
October 25th, 2024 04:05
Ellen Marsell said:
Whoever you are, you are the sum of all these experiences—a being in search of both the stars and the shadows.
I love every line of this poem!
October 25th, 2024 04:05
Apocalypse slow
sorenbarrett said:
A modern book of Revelations? Sounds like Time Square at rush hour to me. Nicely done
October 24th, 2024 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
A modern book of Revelations? Sounds like Time Square at rush hour to me. Nicely done
October 24th, 2024 05:55
My little polish café
Neville said:
Excellent ink .. made me feel more than nostalgic for a place I\'ve never been .. Neville
October 23rd, 2024 00:59
Neville said:
Excellent ink .. made me feel more than nostalgic for a place I\'ve never been .. Neville
October 23rd, 2024 00:59
My little polish café
Ellen Marsell said:
An atmosphere of quiet melancholy and tenderness. Very beautiful!
October 22nd, 2024 08:54
Ellen Marsell said:
An atmosphere of quiet melancholy and tenderness. Very beautiful!
October 22nd, 2024 08:54
My little polish café
sorenbarrett said:
Memories and associations paired in how a place, foods, smells evoke the past and the feelings that accompany them
October 22nd, 2024 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
Memories and associations paired in how a place, foods, smells evoke the past and the feelings that accompany them
October 22nd, 2024 05:57
Deus ex machina
sorenbarrett said:
Many great questions raised but my favorite line is the last (Or am I just the hero of a fairy tale for Asperger\'s children) perfect!
October 21st, 2024 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Many great questions raised but my favorite line is the last (Or am I just the hero of a fairy tale for Asperger\'s children) perfect!
October 21st, 2024 04:58
Ecce homo
Ellen Marsell said:
A character trapped in a historical and religious machine. Excellent writing!
October 20th, 2024 10:48
Ellen Marsell said:
A character trapped in a historical and religious machine. Excellent writing!
October 20th, 2024 10:48
The day to come
sorenbarrett said:
Repleat with great lines (I\'m just a rebel talking to angels, suck the bitter milk of destiny, life is just a subway platform where we\'re waiting for the day to come) Great write
October 19th, 2024 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
Repleat with great lines (I\'m just a rebel talking to angels, suck the bitter milk of destiny, life is just a subway platform where we\'re waiting for the day to come) Great write
October 19th, 2024 10:56
The day to come
Ellen Marsell said:
Everything happens for you to learn: everything happens to end.
An impressive poem, my friend!
October 19th, 2024 05:08
Ellen Marsell said:
Everything happens for you to learn: everything happens to end.
An impressive poem, my friend!
October 19th, 2024 05:08
Fortress
sorenbarrett said:
Bold fantasy pervades a poem set in historic and exotic images where if seen as a metaphor love and patience face the world
October 18th, 2024 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
Bold fantasy pervades a poem set in historic and exotic images where if seen as a metaphor love and patience face the world
October 18th, 2024 05:21
Fortress
Ellen Marsell said:
I love it! It\'s like I\'ve been to this fortress myself and watched the flight of the eagle, pondering, waiting. What inspired you to write this poem?
October 18th, 2024 05:13
Ellen Marsell said:
I love it! It\'s like I\'ve been to this fortress myself and watched the flight of the eagle, pondering, waiting. What inspired you to write this poem?
October 18th, 2024 05:13
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