Comments received on poems by Lorenz



Pluto
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

October 29th, 2023 06:19

Pluto
2781 said:

Cheerful little message!

October 29th, 2023 06:12

Pluto
aDarkerMind said:

excellent

October 29th, 2023 05:59

The park bench
Muse Gong said:

touching

October 28th, 2023 06:54

Sun light dance
Muse Gong said:

Very nice, simple and shining.

October 28th, 2023 06:36

Serenade for Elena
Thomas W Case said:

Very atmospheric. You paint the scene.

October 27th, 2023 10:31

Serenade for Elena
Ellen Marsell said:

Your piece creates a captivating atmosphere. So many sensual intonations!
\"Desire of a sensuous island,
exquisite cascading droplets,
summer drunk on volcan sap,...\"
Thanks for this bright poetic picture!

October 27th, 2023 06:00

The zen garden
Ellen Marsell said:

A beautifully crafted exploration of the spiritual journey!


October 26th, 2023 09:08

The zen garden
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

October 26th, 2023 05:25

Game of chance
Thomas W Case said:

Great use of language and mood. Very well crafted.

October 25th, 2023 12:54

Bus 60 riverbanks
Misunderstood said:

Deep and intense. I like it.

October 25th, 2023 12:09

Bus 60 riverbanks
Thomas W Case said:

Very well crafted. I could see it in my mind\'s eye.

October 25th, 2023 10:18

Bus 60 riverbanks
Muse Gong said:

Deep and rich thinking

October 25th, 2023 06:14

Timeshifting
Thomas W Case said:

Great pacing. You make this work very well. Well-crafted and Inteligent.

October 24th, 2023 15:42

Timeshifting
Ellen Marsell said:

A delightful journey! A sense of spontaneity and adventure, as if you are going wherever your thoughts and desires take you. A carefree spirit.
Thanks for sharing!

October 24th, 2023 07:37

The wheel of time
rhmn_7 said:

Eloquently said, nice poem!

October 22nd, 2023 08:48

Prelude to Elsa
Ellen Marsell said:

Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem, dear friend!

October 22nd, 2023 06:01

Prelude to Elsa
Lorenz said:

A very carnal and earthy love prose !
I made some small changes in a second version to enrich this terrestrial feeling .

October 22nd, 2023 04:52

Prelude to Elsa
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant imagery and use of language. Truly sublime.

October 22nd, 2023 02:56

The wheel of time
Ellen Marsell said:

Thanks for your philosophical creation!
Je l\'aime beaucoup !

October 21st, 2023 12:01

The wheel of time
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic. Asks a great question.

October 21st, 2023 11:18

Brussels
Thomas W Case said:

Great microcosm. fantastic study.

October 21st, 2023 00:33

Brussels
Ellen Marsell said:

A grim picture of urban life filled with contradictions and hidden histories...


October 20th, 2023 08:10

Brussels
2781 said:

And I thought is was the heart of the Euro.

October 20th, 2023 05:40

Exhilaration
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent and sensual and green. Loved it.

October 19th, 2023 11:03

Exhilaration
Ellen Marsell said:

A beautifully written piece that engages the imagination and emotions. Fascinating imagery.
Thank you for sharing!

October 19th, 2023 10:51

Exhilaration
novaa said:

Sensually beautiful, engaging and evocative!

October 19th, 2023 10:19

The virgo
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful. Very well crafted.

October 18th, 2023 09:49

Dolce vita
Pop64 said:

A creation of beauty. To read it is as if to dance with a gentleness upon each word, through the imagery. Beautiful!

October 16th, 2023 07:02

Dolce vita
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
so creative, your prowess
includes
deft, subtle notes as well..
a joy to read, dear Poet
thank you!

October 16th, 2023 05:37

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