Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Epilogue
Ellen Marsell said:
A subtle, deep poem with a final chord permeated by a sense of instability, fatigue, and the realization of the fragility of one’s own reality.
February 28th, 2025 11:07
Ellen Marsell said:
A subtle, deep poem with a final chord permeated by a sense of instability, fatigue, and the realization of the fragility of one’s own reality.
February 28th, 2025 11:07
Epilogue
sorenbarrett said:
Such a blend of metaphor and real in this poem loved it
February 28th, 2025 08:32
sorenbarrett said:
Such a blend of metaphor and real in this poem loved it
February 28th, 2025 08:32
la tilma
Ellen Marsell said:
The image of the tilma is the heart of the poem, a symbol of the miracle that unites the old and the new in a fragile harmony, serving as a beacon of hope.
February 27th, 2025 15:32
Ellen Marsell said:
The image of the tilma is the heart of the poem, a symbol of the miracle that unites the old and the new in a fragile harmony, serving as a beacon of hope.
February 27th, 2025 15:32
la tilma
sorenbarrett said:
Historical roots to this poem of reckoning for past injustices and their consequences. Beautiful imagery and here is a deep metaphor for all to read it is the conquistador in all of us that is being spoken too. Very nice Lorenz
February 27th, 2025 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
Historical roots to this poem of reckoning for past injustices and their consequences. Beautiful imagery and here is a deep metaphor for all to read it is the conquistador in all of us that is being spoken too. Very nice Lorenz
February 27th, 2025 13:12
The debt
Distant View said:
Life is strange! When you are young you think you are invincible! When you grow old you realise you are not! But wisdom comes with age (if you are lucky) and you learn not to fear death. It awaits us all!
A dark poem, with some interesting imagery!
February 26th, 2025 16:44
Distant View said:
Life is strange! When you are young you think you are invincible! When you grow old you realise you are not! But wisdom comes with age (if you are lucky) and you learn not to fear death. It awaits us all!
A dark poem, with some interesting imagery!
February 26th, 2025 16:44
The debt
Sealgair said:
This poem demands courage from the reader – to gaze into the abyss and admit that it’s staring right back.
February 26th, 2025 13:49
Sealgair said:
This poem demands courage from the reader – to gaze into the abyss and admit that it’s staring right back.
February 26th, 2025 13:49
The debt
Ellen Marsell said:
Black existentialism, where death offers neither solace nor salvation. A grim vision reminiscent of Dante or Lovecraft.
February 26th, 2025 11:49
Ellen Marsell said:
Black existentialism, where death offers neither solace nor salvation. A grim vision reminiscent of Dante or Lovecraft.
February 26th, 2025 11:49
The debt
sorenbarrett said:
Rather dark this poem runs with elements of a soliloquy. Nicely done
February 26th, 2025 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
Rather dark this poem runs with elements of a soliloquy. Nicely done
February 26th, 2025 09:38
Acceptance
Lorenz said:
Thanks ! May this be a source of inspiration for you !
February 26th, 2025 02:02
Lorenz said:
Thanks ! May this be a source of inspiration for you !
February 26th, 2025 02:02
Acceptance
NinjaGirl said:
I love this idea: that acceptance sets us free. It\'s been a concept that\'s been really hard for me to grasp, this is so beautifully expressed.
February 25th, 2025 20:18
NinjaGirl said:
I love this idea: that acceptance sets us free. It\'s been a concept that\'s been really hard for me to grasp, this is so beautifully expressed.
February 25th, 2025 20:18
Acceptance
sorenbarrett said:
Heroic, epic are the terms that come to mind about this poem. Very well written
February 25th, 2025 13:48
sorenbarrett said:
Heroic, epic are the terms that come to mind about this poem. Very well written
February 25th, 2025 13:48
Acceptance
Ellen Marsell said:
Each acceptance is another step to elevation, another step in this journey to the “ kingdom of lights”.
An inspirational poem with great spiritual intensity.
February 25th, 2025 11:59
Ellen Marsell said:
Each acceptance is another step to elevation, another step in this journey to the “ kingdom of lights”.
An inspirational poem with great spiritual intensity.
February 25th, 2025 11:59
Symbiosis
Ma5on said:
Your poem is beautifully meditative, rich with philosophical depth & Zen-like reflections on impermanence, identity, & interconnectedness. The whole piece has a mystical, almost transcendental quality.
Enjoying the vibe,
Ma5on
February 16th, 2025 14:08
Ma5on said:
Your poem is beautifully meditative, rich with philosophical depth & Zen-like reflections on impermanence, identity, & interconnectedness. The whole piece has a mystical, almost transcendental quality.
Enjoying the vibe,
Ma5on
February 16th, 2025 14:08
Dawn
Ma5on said:
Lorenz,
I really like how you evoke this primal world, raw, ancient, & in a constant state of flux. The poem\'s gritty descriptions are strong, & the sense of mystery & survival is gripping. The atmosphere of struggle is harsh & your imagery is second to none!
Most enjoyed & escaped into your world for a while.
regards
Ma5on
February 15th, 2025 07:21
Ma5on said:
Lorenz,
I really like how you evoke this primal world, raw, ancient, & in a constant state of flux. The poem\'s gritty descriptions are strong, & the sense of mystery & survival is gripping. The atmosphere of struggle is harsh & your imagery is second to none!
Most enjoyed & escaped into your world for a while.
regards
Ma5on
February 15th, 2025 07:21
Symbiosis
Ellen Marsell said:
Wisdom is changeable, identity is illusory, and true being is not subject to logic, but is felt in a symbiotic fusion with the world. Excellent!
February 9th, 2025 13:53
Ellen Marsell said:
Wisdom is changeable, identity is illusory, and true being is not subject to logic, but is felt in a symbiotic fusion with the world. Excellent!
February 9th, 2025 13:53
Symbiosis
sorenbarrett said:
So well put together this poem speaks of relationships and the need for them and how we are nothing more than our part of a larger process. Lovely
February 9th, 2025 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
So well put together this poem speaks of relationships and the need for them and how we are nothing more than our part of a larger process. Lovely
February 9th, 2025 12:31
Symbiosis
Sealgair said:
Condensed formulas filled with deep meaning. I like it.
February 9th, 2025 12:07
Sealgair said:
Condensed formulas filled with deep meaning. I like it.
February 9th, 2025 12:07
Will I have time ?
Dan Williams said:
Not enough time, sure, but don\'t let that stop you from trying. We are part of the universe after all, eh? Good work here.
February 8th, 2025 00:38
Dan Williams said:
Not enough time, sure, but don\'t let that stop you from trying. We are part of the universe after all, eh? Good work here.
February 8th, 2025 00:38
Will I have time ?
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write.
Thank heavens this universe is too vast for folks in tourist mode to visit all of it!
February 6th, 2025 18:23
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write.
Thank heavens this universe is too vast for folks in tourist mode to visit all of it!
February 6th, 2025 18:23
Will I have time ?
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is like a journey beyond space and time, but it remains deeply human in its essence. The philosophical echoes are very strong.
February 6th, 2025 11:41
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is like a journey beyond space and time, but it remains deeply human in its essence. The philosophical echoes are very strong.
February 6th, 2025 11:41
Will I have time ?
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is filled with so many metaphors and solar images that intermingle in their meanings. A lovely write
February 6th, 2025 10:39
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is filled with so many metaphors and solar images that intermingle in their meanings. A lovely write
February 6th, 2025 10:39
Old rucksack
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah wow it is not just a fine tribute to your travel companion rucksack its a fantastic memories of travel poem. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
January 25th, 2025 14:13
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah wow it is not just a fine tribute to your travel companion rucksack its a fantastic memories of travel poem. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
January 25th, 2025 14:13
Old rucksack
Ellen Marsell said:
This heartfelt dialogue with the rucksack radiates a remarkable sense of humanity and warmth, akin to speaking with a long-lost friend. The old rucksack is a symbol of all those moments that can never be brought back, embodying the spirit of travel, energy, and freedom. It also evokes the struggles that accompanied those travels, making them an integral part of the experience. A truly moving and beautiful piece.
January 17th, 2025 14:26
Ellen Marsell said:
This heartfelt dialogue with the rucksack radiates a remarkable sense of humanity and warmth, akin to speaking with a long-lost friend. The old rucksack is a symbol of all those moments that can never be brought back, embodying the spirit of travel, energy, and freedom. It also evokes the struggles that accompanied those travels, making them an integral part of the experience. A truly moving and beautiful piece.
January 17th, 2025 14:26
Old rucksack
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me Lorenz this old sack a friend of life\'s journeys is so familiar in metaphor and it strikes at the heart of a weary traveler
January 17th, 2025 12:47
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me Lorenz this old sack a friend of life\'s journeys is so familiar in metaphor and it strikes at the heart of a weary traveler
January 17th, 2025 12:47
The evening angel
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a poetic meditation on the intersection of time, space and spirituality. It is imbued with a sense of transcendence, a desire to transcend the ordinary, to touch something eternal and immeasurably beautiful.
January 14th, 2025 09:33
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a poetic meditation on the intersection of time, space and spirituality. It is imbued with a sense of transcendence, a desire to transcend the ordinary, to touch something eternal and immeasurably beautiful.
January 14th, 2025 09:33
Dawn
NafisaSB said:
a message from the distant past , and a question - will dawn be reborn ?? what say you, yourself ?
January 14th, 2025 00:23
NafisaSB said:
a message from the distant past , and a question - will dawn be reborn ?? what say you, yourself ?
January 14th, 2025 00:23
The evening angel
sorenbarrett said:
Lhy Egyptian god of music Apollo for the greeks comes through in this piece. Music closely related to poetry strikes a chord, Very nice
January 13th, 2025 17:24
sorenbarrett said:
Lhy Egyptian god of music Apollo for the greeks comes through in this piece. Music closely related to poetry strikes a chord, Very nice
January 13th, 2025 17:24
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