Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
The fiercness of nature and the uncertainty of infant man trying to hold on to life imprisoned by walls of rock, desert and trees. We all wonder if tomorrow will come. A most epic type of write. Lovely
January 7th, 2025 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
The fiercness of nature and the uncertainty of infant man trying to hold on to life imprisoned by walls of rock, desert and trees. We all wonder if tomorrow will come. A most epic type of write. Lovely
January 7th, 2025 10:10
Dawn
rin said:
It seems like the beginning of online gaming. And those who can\'t sell.
January 7th, 2025 09:28
rin said:
It seems like the beginning of online gaming. And those who can\'t sell.
January 7th, 2025 09:28
The Herculanum night
Lorenz said:
Fascinating dive into the strata of time that transcends dimensions.
January 6th, 2025 15:13
Lorenz said:
Fascinating dive into the strata of time that transcends dimensions.
January 6th, 2025 15:13
The Herculanum night
Ellen Marsell said:
The dream becomes a space where the spirit can be released from the “prison” of the body to touch something greater - the immortal history hidden beneath the ashes of time.
January 6th, 2025 14:53
Ellen Marsell said:
The dream becomes a space where the spirit can be released from the “prison” of the body to touch something greater - the immortal history hidden beneath the ashes of time.
January 6th, 2025 14:53
The Herculanum night
sorenbarrett said:
And from dreams arise great passions that are often lost in the quenching daylight. A beautiful write
January 6th, 2025 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
And from dreams arise great passions that are often lost in the quenching daylight. A beautiful write
January 6th, 2025 08:33
Palermo
rin said:
The death of a person leaves behind memories for those involved. That\'s something important in life.
January 5th, 2025 17:44
rin said:
The death of a person leaves behind memories for those involved. That\'s something important in life.
January 5th, 2025 17:44
Palermo
LP2187 said:
Such a nice poem about time and sorrow, and the contrast between life and death. The tragedies and pain are clear. There\'s a big difference between those who cling to life and those who find comfort in death. I loved reading this.
January 5th, 2025 13:01
LP2187 said:
Such a nice poem about time and sorrow, and the contrast between life and death. The tragedies and pain are clear. There\'s a big difference between those who cling to life and those who find comfort in death. I loved reading this.
January 5th, 2025 13:01
Palermo
Ellen Marsell said:
An impression of descending into the realm of shadows. The past intertwines with the present, and death becomes as tangible as life itself. The poem is imbued with a dense atmosphere of darkness, yet there is a note of acceptance of fate within it.
As always, this is a work one wishes to return to, discovering new facets of its imagery and meaning each time.
January 5th, 2025 12:06
Ellen Marsell said:
An impression of descending into the realm of shadows. The past intertwines with the present, and death becomes as tangible as life itself. The poem is imbued with a dense atmosphere of darkness, yet there is a note of acceptance of fate within it.
As always, this is a work one wishes to return to, discovering new facets of its imagery and meaning each time.
January 5th, 2025 12:06
Palermo
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and somewhat gothic in nature this poem paints a picture of redemption. Powerful and moving it speaks to the soul of forgiveness
January 5th, 2025 10:36
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and somewhat gothic in nature this poem paints a picture of redemption. Powerful and moving it speaks to the soul of forgiveness
January 5th, 2025 10:36
The land of marble statues
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of nostalgia goes with this poem and a longing for a return of the past . Lovely
January 4th, 2025 15:40
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of nostalgia goes with this poem and a longing for a return of the past . Lovely
January 4th, 2025 15:40
The land of marble statues
Ellen Marsell said:
Charming Italy with its art, history and vitality is revealed in your poem as a source of inspiration and dreams.
I see references to Fellini\'s movies. Wonderful work!
January 4th, 2025 11:11
Ellen Marsell said:
Charming Italy with its art, history and vitality is revealed in your poem as a source of inspiration and dreams.
I see references to Fellini\'s movies. Wonderful work!
January 4th, 2025 11:11
The land of marble statues
rin said:
If Waterloo wasn\'t a battlefield, it was just a plain. However, plains are also an essential place to deploy an army.I would also like to try Italian sparkling wine.It\'s a fun poem with many interesting directions.
January 4th, 2025 07:32
rin said:
If Waterloo wasn\'t a battlefield, it was just a plain. However, plains are also an essential place to deploy an army.I would also like to try Italian sparkling wine.It\'s a fun poem with many interesting directions.
January 4th, 2025 07:32
What a wonderful world
Sealgair said:
If the world is a theater of contradictions, then this poem becomes its score.
January 4th, 2025 03:35
Sealgair said:
If the world is a theater of contradictions, then this poem becomes its score.
January 4th, 2025 03:35
What a wonderful world
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is a masterpiece of dark satire. A very strong cocktail of surrealism, irony and black humor.
January 3rd, 2025 11:02
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is a masterpiece of dark satire. A very strong cocktail of surrealism, irony and black humor.
January 3rd, 2025 11:02
What a wonderful world
sorenbarrett said:
Cynicism and sarcasm woven into this critique of the modern world. Sharp and powerful it stings the market of today.
January 3rd, 2025 07:47
sorenbarrett said:
Cynicism and sarcasm woven into this critique of the modern world. Sharp and powerful it stings the market of today.
January 3rd, 2025 07:47
Wiener philarmoniker
Ellen Marsell said:
Such a colorful piece! A literary and musical symphony. Words echo with notes, and images - with melodies🌟🎶
January 1st, 2025 12:03
Ellen Marsell said:
Such a colorful piece! A literary and musical symphony. Words echo with notes, and images - with melodies🌟🎶
January 1st, 2025 12:03
Wiener philarmoniker
Sealgair said:
In the world of the transient, only art is capable of giving the illusion of eternity.
January 1st, 2025 11:57
Sealgair said:
In the world of the transient, only art is capable of giving the illusion of eternity.
January 1st, 2025 11:57
Landscapes
sorenbarrett said:
There is more to this poem than meets the eye or even the free associating thoughts of a mountain walk. The first line sets the tone, getting lost whether in thoughts or a walk in nature. A field of blond ears evokes both the idea of corn and the heads of either young children or girls. Fruitful orchards could refer to the literal or children from the previous line or sowing one\'s own seeds. I feel as if I go any further I am taking this walk through my own thoughts in babbling on. Lovely
January 1st, 2025 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
There is more to this poem than meets the eye or even the free associating thoughts of a mountain walk. The first line sets the tone, getting lost whether in thoughts or a walk in nature. A field of blond ears evokes both the idea of corn and the heads of either young children or girls. Fruitful orchards could refer to the literal or children from the previous line or sowing one\'s own seeds. I feel as if I go any further I am taking this walk through my own thoughts in babbling on. Lovely
January 1st, 2025 05:17
Landscapes
Ellen Marsell said:
Perhaps it\'s a tribute to the tradition of making sense of the world through contemplation? In the poem one can feel a subtle connection between the wanderer, his thoughts and the world around him. Exquisitely written!
December 30th, 2024 14:48
Ellen Marsell said:
Perhaps it\'s a tribute to the tradition of making sense of the world through contemplation? In the poem one can feel a subtle connection between the wanderer, his thoughts and the world around him. Exquisitely written!
December 30th, 2024 14:48
Lost memory
Ellen Marsell said:
The motifs of happiness, oblivion and inevitability are woven into a harmony that is mesmerizing in its sincerity.
December 28th, 2024 12:04
Ellen Marsell said:
The motifs of happiness, oblivion and inevitability are woven into a harmony that is mesmerizing in its sincerity.
December 28th, 2024 12:04
Ananda
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! This read so well and felt the same. On another level my friend
December 27th, 2024 11:53
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! This read so well and felt the same. On another level my friend
December 27th, 2024 11:53
Woman\'s perfume
Cassie58 said:
Chanel 5, the first perfume I ever wore. Those feminine fragrances can certainly linger in the minds of some. Delivered with sensuality. Lovely.
December 26th, 2024 13:48
Cassie58 said:
Chanel 5, the first perfume I ever wore. Those feminine fragrances can certainly linger in the minds of some. Delivered with sensuality. Lovely.
December 26th, 2024 13:48
Bognor Regis
Ellen Marsell said:
This city seems to be frozen in time and boredom here becomes a form of contemplation, an opportunity to reflect.
It was a pleasure to read!
December 26th, 2024 11:53
Ellen Marsell said:
This city seems to be frozen in time and boredom here becomes a form of contemplation, an opportunity to reflect.
It was a pleasure to read!
December 26th, 2024 11:53
Bognor Regis
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve taken me to a place quaint and alluring, an escape from the bustle of city life. We need such places at times to restore perspective. Beautifully versed!
December 26th, 2024 09:51
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve taken me to a place quaint and alluring, an escape from the bustle of city life. We need such places at times to restore perspective. Beautifully versed!
December 26th, 2024 09:51
Woman\'s perfume
sorenbarrett said:
If not mistaken the shape takes the form of a perfume bottle. Nicely worded it brings a smell of mystery and intrigue.
December 25th, 2024 13:58
sorenbarrett said:
If not mistaken the shape takes the form of a perfume bottle. Nicely worded it brings a smell of mystery and intrigue.
December 25th, 2024 13:58
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