Comments received on poems by Lorenz
the death of the star
rin said:
Although it doesn\'t exist in Japan, I\'ve heard that there is an Easter festival.
I would like to see poems of various colors.
December 11th, 2024 08:21
rin said:
Although it doesn\'t exist in Japan, I\'ve heard that there is an Easter festival.
I would like to see poems of various colors.
December 11th, 2024 08:21
Young wolves
Ellen Marsell said:
The unbridled energy of youth, simultaneously creative and destructive. Great poem!
December 10th, 2024 14:16
Ellen Marsell said:
The unbridled energy of youth, simultaneously creative and destructive. Great poem!
December 10th, 2024 14:16
The rat\'s diagonal
rin said:
The Divine World of Donald Mouse and Mickey Duck.
It\'s a bittersweet, deep coffee called reality.
December 9th, 2024 15:46
rin said:
The Divine World of Donald Mouse and Mickey Duck.
It\'s a bittersweet, deep coffee called reality.
December 9th, 2024 15:46
The rat\'s diagonal
sorenbarrett said:
You have found so many poetic lines to tell the tale and make your point. It is mind provoking and deep in meaning going far beyond the litteral scope. In a way it seems Nihilistic. Loved it
December 9th, 2024 15:17
sorenbarrett said:
You have found so many poetic lines to tell the tale and make your point. It is mind provoking and deep in meaning going far beyond the litteral scope. In a way it seems Nihilistic. Loved it
December 9th, 2024 15:17
The rat\'s diagonal
Ellen Marsell said:
Despite its bleakness, your piece is powerful and appealing. It exposes the inner struggle between the desire to find support and the realization that it doesn\'t exist. The despair mixed with irony sounds particularly honest.
December 9th, 2024 12:07
Ellen Marsell said:
Despite its bleakness, your piece is powerful and appealing. It exposes the inner struggle between the desire to find support and the realization that it doesn\'t exist. The despair mixed with irony sounds particularly honest.
December 9th, 2024 12:07
The catcher of light
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic in every way a tribute to a poetic and musical genious.
December 9th, 2024 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic in every way a tribute to a poetic and musical genious.
December 9th, 2024 06:03
A letter
rin said:
People tend to only look at beautiful things, but your eye for what is not and making it into a poem is wonderful.
December 9th, 2024 01:59
rin said:
People tend to only look at beautiful things, but your eye for what is not and making it into a poem is wonderful.
December 9th, 2024 01:59
Bobby Fischer
teardrop said:
I read this last nifgr and never commeted. So, I read it again tonight. I clicked on this poem basically for the title. Bobby Fischer always did intrigue me. Can you imagine your mind playing itself over and over, all the time? Yes, Bobby Fischer was a legend yet, a sad soul.
December 7th, 2024 23:26
teardrop said:
I read this last nifgr and never commeted. So, I read it again tonight. I clicked on this poem basically for the title. Bobby Fischer always did intrigue me. Can you imagine your mind playing itself over and over, all the time? Yes, Bobby Fischer was a legend yet, a sad soul.
December 7th, 2024 23:26
The magic box
Ellen Marsell said:
The imaginary magic of the box allows the hero to keep his faith in a miracle. A touching story of loneliness, alienation and illusions in a cruel reality.
December 7th, 2024 16:07
Ellen Marsell said:
The imaginary magic of the box allows the hero to keep his faith in a miracle. A touching story of loneliness, alienation and illusions in a cruel reality.
December 7th, 2024 16:07
The magic box
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that I took as a Christmas story of the disadvantage and poor the homeless and discarded. They too have dreams and not far different than any of our own. In this season of giving, I would hope that we reach out to hand to the disadvantage.
December 7th, 2024 14:01
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that I took as a Christmas story of the disadvantage and poor the homeless and discarded. They too have dreams and not far different than any of our own. In this season of giving, I would hope that we reach out to hand to the disadvantage.
December 7th, 2024 14:01
Shadows
teardrop said:
My shadow sometimes talks ro much. Love the write and the thought provoking words. Thank you!
December 7th, 2024 05:43
teardrop said:
My shadow sometimes talks ro much. Love the write and the thought provoking words. Thank you!
December 7th, 2024 05:43
The catcher of light
rin said:
Yes. I am John Lemon.
By the time I got to know John Lennon, he was already dead.
I was listening to their music without knowing it was his or the Beatles\'.
December 7th, 2024 02:49
rin said:
Yes. I am John Lemon.
By the time I got to know John Lennon, he was already dead.
I was listening to their music without knowing it was his or the Beatles\'.
December 7th, 2024 02:49
The catcher of light
Ellen Marsell said:
A powerful reflection on the ambiguity of light and shadow in human heritage.
December 6th, 2024 15:09
Ellen Marsell said:
A powerful reflection on the ambiguity of light and shadow in human heritage.
December 6th, 2024 15:09
Time machine
sorenbarrett said:
This evoked many old memories and resurrected some old emotions. That is good enough for a poem. Thank you for writing.
December 5th, 2024 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
This evoked many old memories and resurrected some old emotions. That is good enough for a poem. Thank you for writing.
December 5th, 2024 08:41
Bobby Fischer
sorenbarrett said:
Bobby had his troubles and became a bit paranoid in the end. I feel rooked all the time and like a pawn much of the time but worst of all I hate when I\'m check mated. Oh yes then I know the king is dead.
December 4th, 2024 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
Bobby had his troubles and became a bit paranoid in the end. I feel rooked all the time and like a pawn much of the time but worst of all I hate when I\'m check mated. Oh yes then I know the king is dead.
December 4th, 2024 13:05
Bobby Fischer
Ellen Marsell said:
\"Tremble sinners who think they are players !\". The paradoxical nature of Bobby Fischer.
Powerful imagery in your poem!
December 4th, 2024 12:30
Ellen Marsell said:
\"Tremble sinners who think they are players !\". The paradoxical nature of Bobby Fischer.
Powerful imagery in your poem!
December 4th, 2024 12:30
The book
Dan Williams said:
I have almost no formal education but was taught to read very young, it has carried me and propelled me through life. Thanks for this.
December 4th, 2024 01:32
Dan Williams said:
I have almost no formal education but was taught to read very young, it has carried me and propelled me through life. Thanks for this.
December 4th, 2024 01:32
It\'s wonderful
Lorenz said:
These wonderful ghosts that emerge from the corridors of time !
December 3rd, 2024 10:38
Lorenz said:
These wonderful ghosts that emerge from the corridors of time !
December 3rd, 2024 10:38
It\'s wonderful
Ellen Marsell said:
Such a pleasant, dreamy, aesthetic journey! ❤️
December 3rd, 2024 09:59
Ellen Marsell said:
Such a pleasant, dreamy, aesthetic journey! ❤️
December 3rd, 2024 09:59
The book
Ellen Marsell said:
The feeling that this poem is not just a literary work, but evidence of a deep spiritual practice. It is filled with light mysticism, inspiring reflection on the spiritual path, the value of inner peace...
December 2nd, 2024 11:11
Ellen Marsell said:
The feeling that this poem is not just a literary work, but evidence of a deep spiritual practice. It is filled with light mysticism, inspiring reflection on the spiritual path, the value of inner peace...
December 2nd, 2024 11:11
The book
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries with it the feel of mystery, magic, the occult a type of astrology, alchemy, kabbalah nicely written
December 2nd, 2024 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries with it the feel of mystery, magic, the occult a type of astrology, alchemy, kabbalah nicely written
December 2nd, 2024 09:40
A soul\'s journey
sorenbarrett said:
A sureal poem with many classical mythical elements. This poem paints a picture of one\'s end and journey beyond. Nicely crafted/
December 1st, 2024 19:49
sorenbarrett said:
A sureal poem with many classical mythical elements. This poem paints a picture of one\'s end and journey beyond. Nicely crafted/
December 1st, 2024 19:49
A soul\'s journey
Ellen Marsell said:
At a certain point in our journey, we meet with disappointment. This poem is filled with longing and nostalgia. It is perceived as an inner monologue of a man summarizing his searches, losses and dreams.
December 1st, 2024 12:05
Ellen Marsell said:
At a certain point in our journey, we meet with disappointment. This poem is filled with longing and nostalgia. It is perceived as an inner monologue of a man summarizing his searches, losses and dreams.
December 1st, 2024 12:05
Home so sweet
sorenbarrett said:
We all have or would like to have such a place a place of safety, peace, security, and fulfillment. Nicely done.
November 30th, 2024 12:45
sorenbarrett said:
We all have or would like to have such a place a place of safety, peace, security, and fulfillment. Nicely done.
November 30th, 2024 12:45
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