Comments received on poems by Lorenz
What a wonderful world
Sealgair said:
If the world is a theater of contradictions, then this poem becomes its score.
January 4th, 2025 03:35
Sealgair said:
If the world is a theater of contradictions, then this poem becomes its score.
January 4th, 2025 03:35
What a wonderful world
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is a masterpiece of dark satire. A very strong cocktail of surrealism, irony and black humor.
January 3rd, 2025 11:02
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is a masterpiece of dark satire. A very strong cocktail of surrealism, irony and black humor.
January 3rd, 2025 11:02
What a wonderful world
sorenbarrett said:
Cynicism and sarcasm woven into this critique of the modern world. Sharp and powerful it stings the market of today.
January 3rd, 2025 07:47
sorenbarrett said:
Cynicism and sarcasm woven into this critique of the modern world. Sharp and powerful it stings the market of today.
January 3rd, 2025 07:47
Wiener philarmoniker
Ellen Marsell said:
Such a colorful piece! A literary and musical symphony. Words echo with notes, and images - with melodies🌟🎶
January 1st, 2025 12:03
Ellen Marsell said:
Such a colorful piece! A literary and musical symphony. Words echo with notes, and images - with melodies🌟🎶
January 1st, 2025 12:03
Wiener philarmoniker
Sealgair said:
In the world of the transient, only art is capable of giving the illusion of eternity.
January 1st, 2025 11:57
Sealgair said:
In the world of the transient, only art is capable of giving the illusion of eternity.
January 1st, 2025 11:57
Landscapes
sorenbarrett said:
There is more to this poem than meets the eye or even the free associating thoughts of a mountain walk. The first line sets the tone, getting lost whether in thoughts or a walk in nature. A field of blond ears evokes both the idea of corn and the heads of either young children or girls. Fruitful orchards could refer to the literal or children from the previous line or sowing one\'s own seeds. I feel as if I go any further I am taking this walk through my own thoughts in babbling on. Lovely
January 1st, 2025 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
There is more to this poem than meets the eye or even the free associating thoughts of a mountain walk. The first line sets the tone, getting lost whether in thoughts or a walk in nature. A field of blond ears evokes both the idea of corn and the heads of either young children or girls. Fruitful orchards could refer to the literal or children from the previous line or sowing one\'s own seeds. I feel as if I go any further I am taking this walk through my own thoughts in babbling on. Lovely
January 1st, 2025 05:17
Landscapes
Ellen Marsell said:
Perhaps it\'s a tribute to the tradition of making sense of the world through contemplation? In the poem one can feel a subtle connection between the wanderer, his thoughts and the world around him. Exquisitely written!
December 30th, 2024 14:48
Ellen Marsell said:
Perhaps it\'s a tribute to the tradition of making sense of the world through contemplation? In the poem one can feel a subtle connection between the wanderer, his thoughts and the world around him. Exquisitely written!
December 30th, 2024 14:48
Lost memory
Ellen Marsell said:
The motifs of happiness, oblivion and inevitability are woven into a harmony that is mesmerizing in its sincerity.
December 28th, 2024 12:04
Ellen Marsell said:
The motifs of happiness, oblivion and inevitability are woven into a harmony that is mesmerizing in its sincerity.
December 28th, 2024 12:04
Ananda
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! This read so well and felt the same. On another level my friend
December 27th, 2024 11:53
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! This read so well and felt the same. On another level my friend
December 27th, 2024 11:53
Woman\'s perfume
Cassie58 said:
Chanel 5, the first perfume I ever wore. Those feminine fragrances can certainly linger in the minds of some. Delivered with sensuality. Lovely.
December 26th, 2024 13:48
Cassie58 said:
Chanel 5, the first perfume I ever wore. Those feminine fragrances can certainly linger in the minds of some. Delivered with sensuality. Lovely.
December 26th, 2024 13:48
Bognor Regis
Ellen Marsell said:
This city seems to be frozen in time and boredom here becomes a form of contemplation, an opportunity to reflect.
It was a pleasure to read!
December 26th, 2024 11:53
Ellen Marsell said:
This city seems to be frozen in time and boredom here becomes a form of contemplation, an opportunity to reflect.
It was a pleasure to read!
December 26th, 2024 11:53
Bognor Regis
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve taken me to a place quaint and alluring, an escape from the bustle of city life. We need such places at times to restore perspective. Beautifully versed!
December 26th, 2024 09:51
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve taken me to a place quaint and alluring, an escape from the bustle of city life. We need such places at times to restore perspective. Beautifully versed!
December 26th, 2024 09:51
Woman\'s perfume
sorenbarrett said:
If not mistaken the shape takes the form of a perfume bottle. Nicely worded it brings a smell of mystery and intrigue.
December 25th, 2024 13:58
sorenbarrett said:
If not mistaken the shape takes the form of a perfume bottle. Nicely worded it brings a smell of mystery and intrigue.
December 25th, 2024 13:58
Woman\'s perfume
Ellen Marsell said:
A sensual look at the mysterious and contradictory facets of feminine fragrance, at seduction and memory...
December 25th, 2024 12:04
Ellen Marsell said:
A sensual look at the mysterious and contradictory facets of feminine fragrance, at seduction and memory...
December 25th, 2024 12:04
Broken circle
sorenbarrett said:
Full of pagan images it evokes a feel of the winter solstice and times gone by. Lovely
December 23rd, 2024 11:26
sorenbarrett said:
Full of pagan images it evokes a feel of the winter solstice and times gone by. Lovely
December 23rd, 2024 11:26
Broken circle
Ellen Marsell said:
I love these strong images and feelings in your poem. It\'s about uniqueness and confrontation, and it\'s much deeper than it seems.
December 23rd, 2024 11:06
Ellen Marsell said:
I love these strong images and feelings in your poem. It\'s about uniqueness and confrontation, and it\'s much deeper than it seems.
December 23rd, 2024 11:06
Planetarium in love
Ellen Marsell said:
A magnificent fantasy. Artful realization of love experiences through astronomical imagery. This was an enjoyable read.
December 21st, 2024 10:44
Ellen Marsell said:
A magnificent fantasy. Artful realization of love experiences through astronomical imagery. This was an enjoyable read.
December 21st, 2024 10:44
Planetarium in love
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so sexual in its begining that I thought it was going to be +18 but so well aligned with the stars and astrology that it brought me back to earth. A lovely write of skill.
December 21st, 2024 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so sexual in its begining that I thought it was going to be +18 but so well aligned with the stars and astrology that it brought me back to earth. A lovely write of skill.
December 21st, 2024 08:58
Droplets
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! some great lines here (White hairs have no compassion for dead leaves ) and the great use of a homophone in liars. Nicely worded
December 19th, 2024 10:06
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! some great lines here (White hairs have no compassion for dead leaves ) and the great use of a homophone in liars. Nicely worded
December 19th, 2024 10:06
Droplets
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is deeply touching, like a quiet conversation with the soul. Strong, impressive images.
December 19th, 2024 09:36
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poem is deeply touching, like a quiet conversation with the soul. Strong, impressive images.
December 19th, 2024 09:36
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