Comments received on poems by Lorenz
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sorenbarrett said:
Sanity lies in the wires and madness in the transistors, the voice is the inner child looking for an echo of peace. Forward the call then block the dark. Well done my friend
July 30th, 2026 13:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sanity lies in the wires and madness in the transistors, the voice is the inner child looking for an echo of peace. Forward the call then block the dark. Well done my friend
July 30th, 2026 13:29
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one hell of a dark and disorienting poem! The black humor makes the despair feel even more disturbing...as though madness is laughing because the alternative is unbearable. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 11:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one hell of a dark and disorienting poem! The black humor makes the despair feel even more disturbing...as though madness is laughing because the alternative is unbearable. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 11:41
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Ellen Marsell said:
An astonishing blend of black humor and genuine tenderness. Despite all its darkness, this poem is filled with love for human imperfection and our shared inability to understand what on earth we\'re doing here. Beautifully written!
July 30th, 2026 11:30
Ellen Marsell said:
An astonishing blend of black humor and genuine tenderness. Despite all its darkness, this poem is filled with love for human imperfection and our shared inability to understand what on earth we\'re doing here. Beautifully written!
July 30th, 2026 11:30
Tectonic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one hell of a poem. I am fascinated by how private estrangement, historical catastrophe, and spiritual reckoning become inseparable here. Everything humanity trusts for stability proves temporary...leaving us exposed before forces far greater than ourselves. Dark, disorienting, and extraordinary work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one hell of a poem. I am fascinated by how private estrangement, historical catastrophe, and spiritual reckoning become inseparable here. Everything humanity trusts for stability proves temporary...leaving us exposed before forces far greater than ourselves. Dark, disorienting, and extraordinary work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:51
Tectonic
Sealgair said:
Perhaps tectonic plates are nothing more than the Earth\'s subconscious trying to turn over in its sleep.
July 29th, 2026 12:36
Sealgair said:
Perhaps tectonic plates are nothing more than the Earth\'s subconscious trying to turn over in its sleep.
July 29th, 2026 12:36
Tectonic
Ellen Marsell said:
We are made of the same processes as the Earth itself. Tectonic plates move within us too. They shift slowly over the years until, one day, they transform our entire inner landscape. Great poem!
July 29th, 2026 12:22
Ellen Marsell said:
We are made of the same processes as the Earth itself. Tectonic plates move within us too. They shift slowly over the years until, one day, they transform our entire inner landscape. Great poem!
July 29th, 2026 12:22
Tectonic
sorenbarrett said:
Earthquakes tectonic shifts, this poem rocks in its slide. Well done Lorenz
July 29th, 2026 11:52
sorenbarrett said:
Earthquakes tectonic shifts, this poem rocks in its slide. Well done Lorenz
July 29th, 2026 11:52
Anatomy of death
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! Sometimes you write too well. La, the imagery, how fantastically rendered, I love your skill. Thank you for sharing.
July 29th, 2026 04:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! Sometimes you write too well. La, the imagery, how fantastically rendered, I love your skill. Thank you for sharing.
July 29th, 2026 04:32
Lethal smile
NafisaSB said:
Well I would have welcomed and enjoyed it and passed it on 😋
July 29th, 2026 04:00
NafisaSB said:
Well I would have welcomed and enjoyed it and passed it on 😋
July 29th, 2026 04:00
Anatomy of death
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this hit me hard. It feels like consciousness staggering through addiction, violence, spiritual abandonment, and the wreckage left behind…dark, disorienting, and utterly merciless. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 21:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this hit me hard. It feels like consciousness staggering through addiction, violence, spiritual abandonment, and the wreckage left behind…dark, disorienting, and utterly merciless. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 21:07
Anatomy of death
sorenbarrett said:
Lizard and cloud killers, nothing worse than bad booze. Sounds like a desolate place Lorenz. Well done.
July 28th, 2026 11:14
sorenbarrett said:
Lizard and cloud killers, nothing worse than bad booze. Sounds like a desolate place Lorenz. Well done.
July 28th, 2026 11:14
Paradox box
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a brilliantly strange and entertaining piece! This is philosophical absurdity at its finest...dark, mischievous, and wonderfully clever. Loved it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 07:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, what a brilliantly strange and entertaining piece! This is philosophical absurdity at its finest...dark, mischievous, and wonderfully clever. Loved it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 07:09
Paradox box
Ellen Marsell said:
Perhaps the observer\'s greatest illusion is believing that he stands outside the box.
July 25th, 2026 12:43
Ellen Marsell said:
Perhaps the observer\'s greatest illusion is believing that he stands outside the box.
July 25th, 2026 12:43
Paradox box
sorenbarrett said:
I would propose a new question. If two cats were in the box which one would kill the other and would it really be dead. Good one Lorenz
July 25th, 2026 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
I would propose a new question. If two cats were in the box which one would kill the other and would it really be dead. Good one Lorenz
July 25th, 2026 12:05
Home
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this hit me hard...dark, surreal, and brutally sad, yet threaded with the kind of humor that makes the horror feel even sharper. What a powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2026 09:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this hit me hard...dark, surreal, and brutally sad, yet threaded with the kind of humor that makes the horror feel even sharper. What a powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2026 09:09
Home
Cheeky Missy said:
You adroitly pull off rendering the ghastly reality whose macabre essence clings like foundling mud ever does, with a lofty touch, that conclusion a killer. My, I do love how well you penned this! Superb imagery with a damning poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
July 24th, 2026 18:46
Cheeky Missy said:
You adroitly pull off rendering the ghastly reality whose macabre essence clings like foundling mud ever does, with a lofty touch, that conclusion a killer. My, I do love how well you penned this! Superb imagery with a damning poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
July 24th, 2026 18:46
Home
sorenbarrett said:
Existential surrealism put in a pipe bender and worshiped as a god. Love it
July 24th, 2026 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
Existential surrealism put in a pipe bender and worshiped as a god. Love it
July 24th, 2026 14:17
Home
Ellen Marsell said:
He becomes the keeper of his own hell, its last ghost and only witness. Only a part of his soul is able, from time to time, to leave that place and tell us its story. A brilliant psychological poem.
July 24th, 2026 11:36
Ellen Marsell said:
He becomes the keeper of his own hell, its last ghost and only witness. Only a part of his soul is able, from time to time, to leave that place and tell us its story. A brilliant psychological poem.
July 24th, 2026 11:36
Between Armorica and Atlantis
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The atmosphere really caught me here, Lorenz. Every passage adds another layer of mystery until the entire piece feels almost enchanted…richly textured and wonderfully immersive. Beautifully written, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The atmosphere really caught me here, Lorenz. Every passage adds another layer of mystery until the entire piece feels almost enchanted…richly textured and wonderfully immersive. Beautifully written, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 08:41
Between Armorica and Atlantis
sorenbarrett said:
Land and water from shipwrecks to lullabies a mystical write of surreal lands. Well written my friend
July 23rd, 2026 11:58
sorenbarrett said:
Land and water from shipwrecks to lullabies a mystical write of surreal lands. Well written my friend
July 23rd, 2026 11:58
Between Armorica and Atlantis
Ellen Marsell said:
\"We do not come into this world; we come out of it, as leaves from a tree and waves from the ocean.\" — Alan Watts.
What a beautiful poem, Lorenz!
July 23rd, 2026 11:44
Ellen Marsell said:
\"We do not come into this world; we come out of it, as leaves from a tree and waves from the ocean.\" — Alan Watts.
What a beautiful poem, Lorenz!
July 23rd, 2026 11:44
Between Armorica and Atlantis
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
An enchanting piece
July 23rd, 2026 11:02
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
An enchanting piece
July 23rd, 2026 11:02
Lethal smile
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one heck of a poem! I love how a harmless human interaction becomes an existential emergency for someone perfectly content with his misery. Dark, witty, and wonderfully strange, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lorenz, this is one heck of a poem! I love how a harmless human interaction becomes an existential emergency for someone perfectly content with his misery. Dark, witty, and wonderfully strange, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:11
Lethal smile
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re so very capable with words and expression, am I allowed to smirk or laugh because it seems hilarious in a darker sense? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a curious, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 22nd, 2026 14:24
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re so very capable with words and expression, am I allowed to smirk or laugh because it seems hilarious in a darker sense? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a curious, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 22nd, 2026 14:24
Lethal smile
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
an enchanting piece my friend, much enjoyed
July 22nd, 2026 12:32
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
an enchanting piece my friend, much enjoyed
July 22nd, 2026 12:32
Lethal smile
Ellen Marsell said:
A little existential drama unfolding against the backdrop of an ordinary morning. I love it!
July 22nd, 2026 12:06
Ellen Marsell said:
A little existential drama unfolding against the backdrop of an ordinary morning. I love it!
July 22nd, 2026 12:06
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