Comments received on poems by Lorenz
My farewell letter
Lorenz said:
Ochre and rust
settle on our words in blues
but don\'t believe what I say .
October 24th, 2025 03:42
Lorenz said:
Ochre and rust
settle on our words in blues
but don\'t believe what I say .
October 24th, 2025 03:42
My farewell letter
NafisaSB said:
a blue verse - i like the way the lament is done with dignity and style...enjoyed reading it
October 24th, 2025 01:18
NafisaSB said:
a blue verse - i like the way the lament is done with dignity and style...enjoyed reading it
October 24th, 2025 01:18
Central station
Paul Bell said:
At some point, they all passed through the station of despair.
Some may have asked, where does the death go, and the conductor laughed, even I don\'t know.
October 23rd, 2025 14:14
Paul Bell said:
At some point, they all passed through the station of despair.
Some may have asked, where does the death go, and the conductor laughed, even I don\'t know.
October 23rd, 2025 14:14
Central station
sorenbarrett said:
Have you ever mixed up two jigsaw puzzles then taken out half the pieces. A game of eight ball without the eight ball or pool and a billiards table. A wild read.
October 23rd, 2025 12:25
sorenbarrett said:
Have you ever mixed up two jigsaw puzzles then taken out half the pieces. A game of eight ball without the eight ball or pool and a billiards table. A wild read.
October 23rd, 2025 12:25
Central station
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
thoroughly enjoyed this, bravo
October 23rd, 2025 11:17
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
thoroughly enjoyed this, bravo
October 23rd, 2025 11:17
Central station
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem feels like a ghost train that doesn’t follow a schedule, but moves along the tracks of hopelessness.
It smells of wet asphalt, night coffee, cheap rum, and that special kind of sadness that lives somewhere between cynicism and compassion.
Once again, you write like a noir director and an underground philosopher, dear Lorenz.
October 23rd, 2025 11:13
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem feels like a ghost train that doesn’t follow a schedule, but moves along the tracks of hopelessness.
It smells of wet asphalt, night coffee, cheap rum, and that special kind of sadness that lives somewhere between cynicism and compassion.
Once again, you write like a noir director and an underground philosopher, dear Lorenz.
October 23rd, 2025 11:13
The curl of time
Priya Tomar said:
Wonderful !
It blends sin , sacrament and sensuality .
Clever use of irony .
October 23rd, 2025 00:29
Priya Tomar said:
Wonderful !
It blends sin , sacrament and sensuality .
Clever use of irony .
October 23rd, 2025 00:29
The curl of time
Sealgair said:
The world devours itself and vanishes into the curl of time...
Reading this felt like sipping madness too delicious to be sober.
October 22nd, 2025 14:21
Sealgair said:
The world devours itself and vanishes into the curl of time...
Reading this felt like sipping madness too delicious to be sober.
October 22nd, 2025 14:21
The curl of time
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the mix god to bad what a great line and play on word and spelling. Nicely done
October 22nd, 2025 12:17
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the mix god to bad what a great line and play on word and spelling. Nicely done
October 22nd, 2025 12:17
The curl of time
Ellen Marsell said:
Funny and dark, philosophical and mad. Poetry about meaninglessness — as a form of supreme liberation. I love it. Madly.
October 22nd, 2025 11:28
Ellen Marsell said:
Funny and dark, philosophical and mad. Poetry about meaninglessness — as a form of supreme liberation. I love it. Madly.
October 22nd, 2025 11:28
Im Café der Inspiration
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Great write Lorenz
October 22nd, 2025 06:22
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Great write Lorenz
October 22nd, 2025 06:22
Im Café der Inspiration
Ellen Marsell said:
Melancholic, atmospheric, and extraordinarily beautiful!
October 21st, 2025 11:58
Ellen Marsell said:
Melancholic, atmospheric, and extraordinarily beautiful!
October 21st, 2025 11:58
Im Café der Inspiration
sorenbarrett said:
Robert Service walks the north, Whitman has a pond, Poe pets his raven, Willis walks old streets and Homer went blind. A great read my friend
October 21st, 2025 11:18
sorenbarrett said:
Robert Service walks the north, Whitman has a pond, Poe pets his raven, Willis walks old streets and Homer went blind. A great read my friend
October 21st, 2025 11:18
Im Café der Inspiration
Priya Tomar said:
Love still burial of habbits !
A wonderful poem dedicated to confessional voice .
I used to read her poems when i was teenager .
October 21st, 2025 11:09
Priya Tomar said:
Love still burial of habbits !
A wonderful poem dedicated to confessional voice .
I used to read her poems when i was teenager .
October 21st, 2025 11:09
I can\'t imagine
Priya Tomar said:
\" Naivety is subversive \" .
Great surrealist poem .
I really enjoyed it .
October 20th, 2025 13:20
Priya Tomar said:
\" Naivety is subversive \" .
Great surrealist poem .
I really enjoyed it .
October 20th, 2025 13:20
I can\'t imagine
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal a cubist in a world of realism it an existential gestalt that tickled Freuds fancy and got a raise out of him. Loved it
October 20th, 2025 11:49
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal a cubist in a world of realism it an existential gestalt that tickled Freuds fancy and got a raise out of him. Loved it
October 20th, 2025 11:49
I can\'t imagine
Ellen Marsell said:
Powerful poetic energy: there’s humor, passion, and a clear delight in the “game of apocalypse.”
The text feels alive, intense, and ironic, with a genuine love for the imagery of the old school.
October 20th, 2025 11:45
Ellen Marsell said:
Powerful poetic energy: there’s humor, passion, and a clear delight in the “game of apocalypse.”
The text feels alive, intense, and ironic, with a genuine love for the imagery of the old school.
October 20th, 2025 11:45
Nanga Parbat
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and it feels almost spiritual, or at least natural in the form of nature, type poem. It reads as a myth. Loved it a fave
October 18th, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and it feels almost spiritual, or at least natural in the form of nature, type poem. It reads as a myth. Loved it a fave
October 18th, 2025 12:57
Nanga Parbat
Ellen Marsell said:
Those who climb to the highest places must be prepared to dwell among the ghosts.
October 18th, 2025 12:00
Ellen Marsell said:
Those who climb to the highest places must be prepared to dwell among the ghosts.
October 18th, 2025 12:00
Nanga Parbat
Priya Tomar said:
Well woven poem.
Tragic heroism !
\" Father\'s just conqueror of everyday life \" .
October 18th, 2025 11:34
Priya Tomar said:
Well woven poem.
Tragic heroism !
\" Father\'s just conqueror of everyday life \" .
October 18th, 2025 11:34
Nanga Parbat
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the mountain surveys its children, great write yet again
October 18th, 2025 10:53
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the mountain surveys its children, great write yet again
October 18th, 2025 10:53
My farewell letter
Sealgair said:
What a beautiful, tender poem, and yet one feels a certain play in it... Musical and piercing, with magnificent metaphors.
I adore the blues.
A splendid work, Lorenz.
October 17th, 2025 04:23
Sealgair said:
What a beautiful, tender poem, and yet one feels a certain play in it... Musical and piercing, with magnificent metaphors.
I adore the blues.
A splendid work, Lorenz.
October 17th, 2025 04:23
My farewell letter
Dan Williams said:
So nice, pretty yet sad. The words take on this beautiful shade
\"of ochre and rust that settles on the silence of our wounds ...just beautiful. nice work.
October 16th, 2025 23:12
Dan Williams said:
So nice, pretty yet sad. The words take on this beautiful shade
\"of ochre and rust that settles on the silence of our wounds ...just beautiful. nice work.
October 16th, 2025 23:12
My farewell letter
Priya Tomar said:
A well woven poem about abandonment !
Many like blue and i am one of them .
Here blue — melancholy , nostalgia .
October 16th, 2025 11:38
Priya Tomar said:
A well woven poem about abandonment !
Many like blue and i am one of them .
Here blue — melancholy , nostalgia .
October 16th, 2025 11:38
My farewell letter
Ellen Marsell said:
A beautiful poem, steeped in musical melancholy, written with gentle irony and a touch of philosophical coolness. The final lines are magnificent.
October 16th, 2025 11:29
Ellen Marsell said:
A beautiful poem, steeped in musical melancholy, written with gentle irony and a touch of philosophical coolness. The final lines are magnificent.
October 16th, 2025 11:29
My farewell letter
sorenbarrett said:
Blue my favorite color and I love the blues as well but there is loss and sadness with a sense of indifference in this poem. Nicely crafted it flows like the blue rivers to the sea.
October 16th, 2025 10:58
sorenbarrett said:
Blue my favorite color and I love the blues as well but there is loss and sadness with a sense of indifference in this poem. Nicely crafted it flows like the blue rivers to the sea.
October 16th, 2025 10:58
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