Comments received on poems by Lorenz
A letter from Anceladus
Ellen Marsell said:
Such an attractive world hidden beneath the surface...
April 24th, 2024 09:53
Ellen Marsell said:
Such an attractive world hidden beneath the surface...
April 24th, 2024 09:53
Phobos
aDarkerMind said:
In this jail of unbearable emptiness
one to remember for many a year;\'
April 22nd, 2024 09:57
aDarkerMind said:
In this jail of unbearable emptiness
one to remember for many a year;\'
April 22nd, 2024 09:57
Three japanese ladies
Ellen Marsell said:
An airy poem. I could easily imagine these three charming Japanese ladies. J\'ai beaucoup aimé!
April 18th, 2024 11:48
Ellen Marsell said:
An airy poem. I could easily imagine these three charming Japanese ladies. J\'ai beaucoup aimé!
April 18th, 2024 11:48
Quantum o\'clock
aDarkerMind said:
the birth of nothing
and death of everything...
one for my fave list my friend;
April 17th, 2024 10:33
aDarkerMind said:
the birth of nothing
and death of everything...
one for my fave list my friend;
April 17th, 2024 10:33
Lidice
Cassie58 said:
A terrible tragedy. I can remember reading about it and looking at the memorial to the children lost. It is haunting. A fine piece of poetry.
April 16th, 2024 16:15
Cassie58 said:
A terrible tragedy. I can remember reading about it and looking at the memorial to the children lost. It is haunting. A fine piece of poetry.
April 16th, 2024 16:15
Somewhere a star
Ellen Marsell said:
A strikingly beautiful poem. Lovely imagery!
April 15th, 2024 11:00
Ellen Marsell said:
A strikingly beautiful poem. Lovely imagery!
April 15th, 2024 11:00
Flatland
Ellen Marsell said:
A vivid portrait of a wandering soul, a dreamer drifting in the currents of imagination and reality.
April 14th, 2024 12:58
Ellen Marsell said:
A vivid portrait of a wandering soul, a dreamer drifting in the currents of imagination and reality.
April 14th, 2024 12:58
Outlaw
Ellen Marsell said:
\"Humanity is a story in which every page is written in blood and suffering\".
April 12th, 2024 11:10
Ellen Marsell said:
\"Humanity is a story in which every page is written in blood and suffering\".
April 12th, 2024 11:10
Winter is my land
Parisab said:
Stunning description of an urban winter in the city escape i haven’t been to. This is one of my faves from you …
April 11th, 2024 11:10
Parisab said:
Stunning description of an urban winter in the city escape i haven’t been to. This is one of my faves from you …
April 11th, 2024 11:10
Depths hotel
Bella Shepard said:
A tragic night immortalized, romanticised by many accounts, you capture the pathos and the inevitibility of that fateful journey. So many loves lost, so many dreams never fulfilled. \"Remember the Titanic\", we shall never forget. A stunning write my friend!
April 8th, 2024 15:26
Bella Shepard said:
A tragic night immortalized, romanticised by many accounts, you capture the pathos and the inevitibility of that fateful journey. So many loves lost, so many dreams never fulfilled. \"Remember the Titanic\", we shall never forget. A stunning write my friend!
April 8th, 2024 15:26
Depths hotel
Ellen Marsell said:
\"but sometime you also have to know how to die !\"
And remain gentlemen until the very end.
April 8th, 2024 09:16
Ellen Marsell said:
\"but sometime you also have to know how to die !\"
And remain gentlemen until the very end.
April 8th, 2024 09:16
Nothing but words
Bella Shepard said:
You capture the beauty and majesty of words in this amazing poem, as they dance through our heads, touching each sense that we possess. Brilliant!!
April 7th, 2024 09:41
Bella Shepard said:
You capture the beauty and majesty of words in this amazing poem, as they dance through our heads, touching each sense that we possess. Brilliant!!
April 7th, 2024 09:41
Thought police
Ellen Marsell said:
I\'m always amazed by your imagination, Lorenz
April 3rd, 2024 10:51
Ellen Marsell said:
I\'m always amazed by your imagination, Lorenz
April 3rd, 2024 10:51
The spectrum
Ellen Marsell said:
\"I do not fear a bullet, I do not fear a saber blow, I fear nothing on earth. But I am afraid of what I do not see.\"
April 1st, 2024 13:52
Ellen Marsell said:
\"I do not fear a bullet, I do not fear a saber blow, I fear nothing on earth. But I am afraid of what I do not see.\"
April 1st, 2024 13:52
Easter sunday
Ellen Marsell said:
Tant de métaphores, mon ami. La poésie est une arme entre tes mains.
March 31st, 2024 05:57
Ellen Marsell said:
Tant de métaphores, mon ami. La poésie est une arme entre tes mains.
March 31st, 2024 05:57
Terror
Ellen Marsell said:
You have created a wonderful rhythmic and sound harmony in the writing by using internal rhymes. I love it.
March 30th, 2024 15:06
Ellen Marsell said:
You have created a wonderful rhythmic and sound harmony in the writing by using internal rhymes. I love it.
March 30th, 2024 15:06
The castaway
Doggerel Dave said:
Rich in imagery I sometimes don\'t understand, but taken with the energy of it all. Thanks
March 30th, 2024 05:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Rich in imagery I sometimes don\'t understand, but taken with the energy of it all. Thanks
March 30th, 2024 05:42
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