Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Manhattan solo
Sealgair said:
A little masterpiece in the spirit of the “late decadence of the metropolis.
October 14th, 2025 12:44
Sealgair said:
A little masterpiece in the spirit of the “late decadence of the metropolis.
October 14th, 2025 12:44
Manhattan solo
Priya Tomar said:
My coffee is a black ink .....
Wonderful write !
October 14th, 2025 12:23
Priya Tomar said:
My coffee is a black ink .....
Wonderful write !
October 14th, 2025 12:23
Manhattan solo
sorenbarrett said:
A conversation with oneself and the forth wall where the plaster is coming off. Pealed wall paper in a paisley shows a lot of wear. Don\'t take any of Dostoevsky\'s advice on women he almost got shot once. A wonderful write
October 14th, 2025 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
A conversation with oneself and the forth wall where the plaster is coming off. Pealed wall paper in a paisley shows a lot of wear. Don\'t take any of Dostoevsky\'s advice on women he almost got shot once. A wonderful write
October 14th, 2025 12:07
Manhattan solo
Ellen Marsell said:
One of your most beautiful poems, Lorenz.
It smells of coffee and solitude — a delicate blend of melancholy, irony, and quiet philosophy.
Incredible metaphors.
October 14th, 2025 11:44
Ellen Marsell said:
One of your most beautiful poems, Lorenz.
It smells of coffee and solitude — a delicate blend of melancholy, irony, and quiet philosophy.
Incredible metaphors.
October 14th, 2025 11:44
The point of no return
Ellen Marsell said:
A Gothic catastrophe turned into a poetic carnival.
October 13th, 2025 13:50
Ellen Marsell said:
A Gothic catastrophe turned into a poetic carnival.
October 13th, 2025 13:50
The point of no return
Priya Tomar said:
Good evening prince of poetic kingdom !
Dark imagery of this poem makes my eyes shine .
October 13th, 2025 13:03
Priya Tomar said:
Good evening prince of poetic kingdom !
Dark imagery of this poem makes my eyes shine .
October 13th, 2025 13:03
The point of no return
sorenbarrett said:
Free will tied up could not attend, Hope and Patience were late to arrive overturning the hourglass in their haste. A surrealistic poem that contains more than meets the eye on first visit. There are skeletons in those closets and there are missing guests at the table.
October 13th, 2025 11:49
sorenbarrett said:
Free will tied up could not attend, Hope and Patience were late to arrive overturning the hourglass in their haste. A surrealistic poem that contains more than meets the eye on first visit. There are skeletons in those closets and there are missing guests at the table.
October 13th, 2025 11:49
Purgatory bar
Priya Tomar said:
Paradise is not for mads !
Wonderful creation .
October 12th, 2025 11:01
Priya Tomar said:
Paradise is not for mads !
Wonderful creation .
October 12th, 2025 11:01
Purgatory bar
Ellen Marsell said:
Time has stopped.
A slight madness and thick smoke in an old bar, where we all sooner or later order our last drink.
A powerful piece.
Black humor and existential sorrow dance a slow waltz here.
October 12th, 2025 10:59
Ellen Marsell said:
Time has stopped.
A slight madness and thick smoke in an old bar, where we all sooner or later order our last drink.
A powerful piece.
Black humor and existential sorrow dance a slow waltz here.
October 12th, 2025 10:59
Purgatory bar
sorenbarrett said:
Far worse in between where one knows not what to expect but more of the same. A fun write reminded me of the star wars bar.
October 12th, 2025 10:50
sorenbarrett said:
Far worse in between where one knows not what to expect but more of the same. A fun write reminded me of the star wars bar.
October 12th, 2025 10:50
The voice of the rubble
Ellen Marsell said:
This is an ironic and philosophical text of rare power.
October 11th, 2025 11:14
Ellen Marsell said:
This is an ironic and philosophical text of rare power.
October 11th, 2025 11:14
The voice of the rubble
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a word painting of abstract art that in vivid colors plashes and slashes its feeling in broad strokes and slashed brush marks on a white canvas. Well done Lorenz
October 11th, 2025 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a word painting of abstract art that in vivid colors plashes and slashes its feeling in broad strokes and slashed brush marks on a white canvas. Well done Lorenz
October 11th, 2025 11:13
The voice of the rubble
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I love the powerful imagery
October 11th, 2025 11:09
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I love the powerful imagery
October 11th, 2025 11:09
Prophecy of the times
Ellen Marsell said:
A dark prophecy, where sacred images are woven into a sense of impending downfall. A powerful and profound work, full of symbolism.
October 10th, 2025 13:35
Ellen Marsell said:
A dark prophecy, where sacred images are woven into a sense of impending downfall. A powerful and profound work, full of symbolism.
October 10th, 2025 13:35
Prophecy of the times
Priya Tomar said:
Well woven !
A spiritual indictment .....
Wonderful biblical imagery .....
Your grand style like John Milton ....
October 10th, 2025 12:41
Priya Tomar said:
Well woven !
A spiritual indictment .....
Wonderful biblical imagery .....
Your grand style like John Milton ....
October 10th, 2025 12:41
Prophecy of the times
sorenbarrett said:
David wrestles the lion of Judah charmed by a lire and a liar discerned by Solomon is cut in two to be divided. Pull Moses\'s beard to see the red sea part then comb it back together. A scriptural puzzle to assemble in this poem of the sacred and the obscene. Lovely Lorenz a fave
October 10th, 2025 11:09
sorenbarrett said:
David wrestles the lion of Judah charmed by a lire and a liar discerned by Solomon is cut in two to be divided. Pull Moses\'s beard to see the red sea part then comb it back together. A scriptural puzzle to assemble in this poem of the sacred and the obscene. Lovely Lorenz a fave
October 10th, 2025 11:09
My old Germany
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is full of cultural, historical, and philosophical references. It is multifaceted and complex, like a living archive of the German soul, from which ghosts of the past peer out.
October 8th, 2025 13:39
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is full of cultural, historical, and philosophical references. It is multifaceted and complex, like a living archive of the German soul, from which ghosts of the past peer out.
October 8th, 2025 13:39
My old Germany
sorenbarrett said:
A satire to be proud of Lorenz. Most wonderfully articulated and I am used to being an annoying big brother. I recognize my irritating qualities and renounce my leader the orange haired fellow. Good write and fave my friend
October 8th, 2025 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
A satire to be proud of Lorenz. Most wonderfully articulated and I am used to being an annoying big brother. I recognize my irritating qualities and renounce my leader the orange haired fellow. Good write and fave my friend
October 8th, 2025 10:55
ciao amore
Ellen Marsell said:
A bittersweet poem — the magnificence of melancholy and irony.
October 7th, 2025 13:30
Ellen Marsell said:
A bittersweet poem — the magnificence of melancholy and irony.
October 7th, 2025 13:30
ciao amore
sorenbarrett said:
This sings and rings it has charm and an old world feel. By old world I mean the atmosphere and the home like feel of the familiar. But at the same time it says good bye to all this in a recognition that the world has changed and the need for acceptance. Lovely
October 7th, 2025 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
This sings and rings it has charm and an old world feel. By old world I mean the atmosphere and the home like feel of the familiar. But at the same time it says good bye to all this in a recognition that the world has changed and the need for acceptance. Lovely
October 7th, 2025 12:15
Rule Britannia
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds more like Hail to the Chief with orange hair. Good one Lorenz
October 6th, 2025 14:37
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds more like Hail to the Chief with orange hair. Good one Lorenz
October 6th, 2025 14:37
Rule Britannia
Paul Bell said:
To be the bastard of George Best, improve my ball work no end.
Why are Belgium\'s so nice. The days when Rule Britannia were relevant, and the King\'s Head sold beer.
What the hell happened.
October 6th, 2025 13:59
Paul Bell said:
To be the bastard of George Best, improve my ball work no end.
Why are Belgium\'s so nice. The days when Rule Britannia were relevant, and the King\'s Head sold beer.
What the hell happened.
October 6th, 2025 13:59
The dream killer
Ellen Marsell said:
A text that hides, behind its visions, a reflection on the quiet violence of illusions and their fate in a world without refuge.
October 5th, 2025 14:03
Ellen Marsell said:
A text that hides, behind its visions, a reflection on the quiet violence of illusions and their fate in a world without refuge.
October 5th, 2025 14:03
The dream killer
sorenbarrett said:
Illusions die hard in the mind of the blind and even harder in the deaf. Lost treasure belongs to no one and although it is taxed when found may be confiscated by those that govern. Holy is the word of the possessor. Nicely done
October 5th, 2025 10:42
sorenbarrett said:
Illusions die hard in the mind of the blind and even harder in the deaf. Lost treasure belongs to no one and although it is taxed when found may be confiscated by those that govern. Holy is the word of the possessor. Nicely done
October 5th, 2025 10:42
The spirits of atlantis
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about the fall of light, about the exhaustion of myth and inspiration, written in the language of poetic melancholy. This is a powerful and mature work.
October 4th, 2025 14:11
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem about the fall of light, about the exhaustion of myth and inspiration, written in the language of poetic melancholy. This is a powerful and mature work.
October 4th, 2025 14:11
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