Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Elements
Bella Shepard said:
The elements of life must somehow achieve equilibrium. Do we help or do we hinder, are we even capable of solving the riddle?
March 23rd, 2024 15:48
Bella Shepard said:
The elements of life must somehow achieve equilibrium. Do we help or do we hinder, are we even capable of solving the riddle?
March 23rd, 2024 15:48
Elements
Ellen Marsell said:
They must be cooperating with each other to create harmony and balance.
March 23rd, 2024 11:34
Ellen Marsell said:
They must be cooperating with each other to create harmony and balance.
March 23rd, 2024 11:34
The shadow
Bella Shepard said:
Life does seem surreal, and we but shadows. You capture the tortured existence that we constantly question, yet find no answers to. A compelling and yet chilling read my friend. Who are we, really?
March 22nd, 2024 15:53
Bella Shepard said:
Life does seem surreal, and we but shadows. You capture the tortured existence that we constantly question, yet find no answers to. A compelling and yet chilling read my friend. Who are we, really?
March 22nd, 2024 15:53
Inspired island
Bella Shepard said:
This poem truly touches the senses in the most incredible way. It is eloquently descriptive, and one is easily lost in the ambiance of your \"Inspired Island\".
March 21st, 2024 14:27
Bella Shepard said:
This poem truly touches the senses in the most incredible way. It is eloquently descriptive, and one is easily lost in the ambiance of your \"Inspired Island\".
March 21st, 2024 14:27
Timeless colors
Ellen Marsell said:
\"our lives like galaxies,
that drift apart but retain their memories,
only the light of silence remains ...\"
Loved your poem.
March 20th, 2024 11:41
Ellen Marsell said:
\"our lives like galaxies,
that drift apart but retain their memories,
only the light of silence remains ...\"
Loved your poem.
March 20th, 2024 11:41
The passage
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s just a new chapter in a never-ending story...
March 14th, 2024 12:02
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s just a new chapter in a never-ending story...
March 14th, 2024 12:02
Muddy rainbow
2781 said:
Beware of the leaven of the Pharisees, which is hypocrisy.
Just believe...
March 9th, 2024 06:58
2781 said:
Beware of the leaven of the Pharisees, which is hypocrisy.
Just believe...
March 9th, 2024 06:58
My friend Idris
JulesBurnsit said:
Nice. I fear the old ladies with their tea Greatly.
March 7th, 2024 14:25
JulesBurnsit said:
Nice. I fear the old ladies with their tea Greatly.
March 7th, 2024 14:25
Crime boulevard
Ellen Marsell said:
La poésie est le pont que le poète construit sur l\'abîme de sa frustration.
March 4th, 2024 15:11
Ellen Marsell said:
La poésie est le pont que le poète construit sur l\'abîme de sa frustration.
March 4th, 2024 15:11
Spleen
Ellen Marsell said:
There is a harmony in sadness, as in music, where minor notes create a special beauty...
February 27th, 2024 11:58
Ellen Marsell said:
There is a harmony in sadness, as in music, where minor notes create a special beauty...
February 27th, 2024 11:58
The little old lady
Aida said:
‘ It\'s important to close old people\'s eyes !
we sometime forget to do it ...’ very funny at the same time quite sad, like the whole poem. Nice job on pulling that out !!
February 27th, 2024 03:59
Aida said:
‘ It\'s important to close old people\'s eyes !
we sometime forget to do it ...’ very funny at the same time quite sad, like the whole poem. Nice job on pulling that out !!
February 27th, 2024 03:59
Universal communion
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a poetic expression of gaining wisdom and discovering what is beyond ordinary perception. A pure heart, a pure soul, faith and openness to mysterious messages, finding joy and grace in the simple moments of life.
February 26th, 2024 11:57
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a poetic expression of gaining wisdom and discovering what is beyond ordinary perception. A pure heart, a pure soul, faith and openness to mysterious messages, finding joy and grace in the simple moments of life.
February 26th, 2024 11:57
Universal communion
Bella Shepard said:
The sublimity of simply \"being\" is incredible in this poem. You have captured something so fundamental, and yet so enigmatical. If we can just let it be, everything falls into place, and we find harmony. You are a seer of pure truth my friend.
February 26th, 2024 10:16
Bella Shepard said:
The sublimity of simply \"being\" is incredible in this poem. You have captured something so fundamental, and yet so enigmatical. If we can just let it be, everything falls into place, and we find harmony. You are a seer of pure truth my friend.
February 26th, 2024 10:16
The little old lady
Ellen Marsell said:
La vie montre que les gens décents ont une vie plus dure et partent plus vite.
February 23rd, 2024 08:32
Ellen Marsell said:
La vie montre que les gens décents ont une vie plus dure et partent plus vite.
February 23rd, 2024 08:32
Santa Muerte
Doggerel Dave said:
Too many allusions I can\'t quite get to grips with, but get the general tenor.
Enjoyed muchly your comment:
\" Poetry isn\'t about admiring our little pink buttocks in the mirror of our sobs !\"
Not my pink buttocks either.
February 20th, 2024 18:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Too many allusions I can\'t quite get to grips with, but get the general tenor.
Enjoyed muchly your comment:
\" Poetry isn\'t about admiring our little pink buttocks in the mirror of our sobs !\"
Not my pink buttocks either.
February 20th, 2024 18:34
Santa Muerte
Bella Shepard said:
The saddest day in our long history of existence, is the day we decided we owned everything, and we could judge everyone. The shame is on us. Great write my friend, it digs deep into our illusion of ownership.
February 20th, 2024 14:12
Bella Shepard said:
The saddest day in our long history of existence, is the day we decided we owned everything, and we could judge everyone. The shame is on us. Great write my friend, it digs deep into our illusion of ownership.
February 20th, 2024 14:12
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