Comments received on poems by Lorenz
The curl of time
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the mix god to bad what a great line and play on word and spelling. Nicely done
October 22nd, 2025 12:17
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the mix god to bad what a great line and play on word and spelling. Nicely done
October 22nd, 2025 12:17
The curl of time
Ellen Marsell said:
Funny and dark, philosophical and mad. Poetry about meaninglessness — as a form of supreme liberation. I love it. Madly.
October 22nd, 2025 11:28
Ellen Marsell said:
Funny and dark, philosophical and mad. Poetry about meaninglessness — as a form of supreme liberation. I love it. Madly.
October 22nd, 2025 11:28
Im Café der Inspiration
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Great write Lorenz
October 22nd, 2025 06:22
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Great write Lorenz
October 22nd, 2025 06:22
Im Café der Inspiration
Ellen Marsell said:
Melancholic, atmospheric, and extraordinarily beautiful!
October 21st, 2025 11:58
Ellen Marsell said:
Melancholic, atmospheric, and extraordinarily beautiful!
October 21st, 2025 11:58
Im Café der Inspiration
sorenbarrett said:
Robert Service walks the north, Whitman has a pond, Poe pets his raven, Willis walks old streets and Homer went blind. A great read my friend
October 21st, 2025 11:18
sorenbarrett said:
Robert Service walks the north, Whitman has a pond, Poe pets his raven, Willis walks old streets and Homer went blind. A great read my friend
October 21st, 2025 11:18
Im Café der Inspiration
Priya Tomar said:
Love still burial of habbits !
A wonderful poem dedicated to confessional voice .
I used to read her poems when i was teenager .
October 21st, 2025 11:09
Priya Tomar said:
Love still burial of habbits !
A wonderful poem dedicated to confessional voice .
I used to read her poems when i was teenager .
October 21st, 2025 11:09
I can\'t imagine
Priya Tomar said:
\" Naivety is subversive \" .
Great surrealist poem .
I really enjoyed it .
October 20th, 2025 13:20
Priya Tomar said:
\" Naivety is subversive \" .
Great surrealist poem .
I really enjoyed it .
October 20th, 2025 13:20
I can\'t imagine
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal a cubist in a world of realism it an existential gestalt that tickled Freuds fancy and got a raise out of him. Loved it
October 20th, 2025 11:49
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal a cubist in a world of realism it an existential gestalt that tickled Freuds fancy and got a raise out of him. Loved it
October 20th, 2025 11:49
I can\'t imagine
Ellen Marsell said:
Powerful poetic energy: there’s humor, passion, and a clear delight in the “game of apocalypse.”
The text feels alive, intense, and ironic, with a genuine love for the imagery of the old school.
October 20th, 2025 11:45
Ellen Marsell said:
Powerful poetic energy: there’s humor, passion, and a clear delight in the “game of apocalypse.”
The text feels alive, intense, and ironic, with a genuine love for the imagery of the old school.
October 20th, 2025 11:45
Nanga Parbat
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and it feels almost spiritual, or at least natural in the form of nature, type poem. It reads as a myth. Loved it a fave
October 18th, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and it feels almost spiritual, or at least natural in the form of nature, type poem. It reads as a myth. Loved it a fave
October 18th, 2025 12:57
Nanga Parbat
Ellen Marsell said:
Those who climb to the highest places must be prepared to dwell among the ghosts.
October 18th, 2025 12:00
Ellen Marsell said:
Those who climb to the highest places must be prepared to dwell among the ghosts.
October 18th, 2025 12:00
Nanga Parbat
Priya Tomar said:
Well woven poem.
Tragic heroism !
\" Father\'s just conqueror of everyday life \" .
October 18th, 2025 11:34
Priya Tomar said:
Well woven poem.
Tragic heroism !
\" Father\'s just conqueror of everyday life \" .
October 18th, 2025 11:34
Nanga Parbat
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the mountain surveys its children, great write yet again
October 18th, 2025 10:53
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the mountain surveys its children, great write yet again
October 18th, 2025 10:53
My farewell letter
Sealgair said:
What a beautiful, tender poem, and yet one feels a certain play in it... Musical and piercing, with magnificent metaphors.
I adore the blues.
A splendid work, Lorenz.
October 17th, 2025 04:23
Sealgair said:
What a beautiful, tender poem, and yet one feels a certain play in it... Musical and piercing, with magnificent metaphors.
I adore the blues.
A splendid work, Lorenz.
October 17th, 2025 04:23
My farewell letter
Dan Williams said:
So nice, pretty yet sad. The words take on this beautiful shade
\"of ochre and rust that settles on the silence of our wounds ...just beautiful. nice work.
October 16th, 2025 23:12
Dan Williams said:
So nice, pretty yet sad. The words take on this beautiful shade
\"of ochre and rust that settles on the silence of our wounds ...just beautiful. nice work.
October 16th, 2025 23:12
My farewell letter
Priya Tomar said:
A well woven poem about abandonment !
Many like blue and i am one of them .
Here blue — melancholy , nostalgia .
October 16th, 2025 11:38
Priya Tomar said:
A well woven poem about abandonment !
Many like blue and i am one of them .
Here blue — melancholy , nostalgia .
October 16th, 2025 11:38
My farewell letter
Ellen Marsell said:
A beautiful poem, steeped in musical melancholy, written with gentle irony and a touch of philosophical coolness. The final lines are magnificent.
October 16th, 2025 11:29
Ellen Marsell said:
A beautiful poem, steeped in musical melancholy, written with gentle irony and a touch of philosophical coolness. The final lines are magnificent.
October 16th, 2025 11:29
My farewell letter
sorenbarrett said:
Blue my favorite color and I love the blues as well but there is loss and sadness with a sense of indifference in this poem. Nicely crafted it flows like the blue rivers to the sea.
October 16th, 2025 10:58
sorenbarrett said:
Blue my favorite color and I love the blues as well but there is loss and sadness with a sense of indifference in this poem. Nicely crafted it flows like the blue rivers to the sea.
October 16th, 2025 10:58
Manhattan solo
Sealgair said:
A little masterpiece in the spirit of the “late decadence of the metropolis.
October 14th, 2025 12:44
Sealgair said:
A little masterpiece in the spirit of the “late decadence of the metropolis.
October 14th, 2025 12:44
Manhattan solo
Priya Tomar said:
My coffee is a black ink .....
Wonderful write !
October 14th, 2025 12:23
Priya Tomar said:
My coffee is a black ink .....
Wonderful write !
October 14th, 2025 12:23
Manhattan solo
sorenbarrett said:
A conversation with oneself and the forth wall where the plaster is coming off. Pealed wall paper in a paisley shows a lot of wear. Don\'t take any of Dostoevsky\'s advice on women he almost got shot once. A wonderful write
October 14th, 2025 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
A conversation with oneself and the forth wall where the plaster is coming off. Pealed wall paper in a paisley shows a lot of wear. Don\'t take any of Dostoevsky\'s advice on women he almost got shot once. A wonderful write
October 14th, 2025 12:07
Manhattan solo
Ellen Marsell said:
One of your most beautiful poems, Lorenz.
It smells of coffee and solitude — a delicate blend of melancholy, irony, and quiet philosophy.
Incredible metaphors.
October 14th, 2025 11:44
Ellen Marsell said:
One of your most beautiful poems, Lorenz.
It smells of coffee and solitude — a delicate blend of melancholy, irony, and quiet philosophy.
Incredible metaphors.
October 14th, 2025 11:44
The point of no return
Ellen Marsell said:
A Gothic catastrophe turned into a poetic carnival.
October 13th, 2025 13:50
Ellen Marsell said:
A Gothic catastrophe turned into a poetic carnival.
October 13th, 2025 13:50
The point of no return
Priya Tomar said:
Good evening prince of poetic kingdom !
Dark imagery of this poem makes my eyes shine .
October 13th, 2025 13:03
Priya Tomar said:
Good evening prince of poetic kingdom !
Dark imagery of this poem makes my eyes shine .
October 13th, 2025 13:03
The point of no return
sorenbarrett said:
Free will tied up could not attend, Hope and Patience were late to arrive overturning the hourglass in their haste. A surrealistic poem that contains more than meets the eye on first visit. There are skeletons in those closets and there are missing guests at the table.
October 13th, 2025 11:49
sorenbarrett said:
Free will tied up could not attend, Hope and Patience were late to arrive overturning the hourglass in their haste. A surrealistic poem that contains more than meets the eye on first visit. There are skeletons in those closets and there are missing guests at the table.
October 13th, 2025 11:49
Purgatory bar
Priya Tomar said:
Paradise is not for mads !
Wonderful creation .
October 12th, 2025 11:01
Priya Tomar said:
Paradise is not for mads !
Wonderful creation .
October 12th, 2025 11:01
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