Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Old world
Ellen Marsell said:
The oblivion of true values and the inevitability of the decline of former power. A bitterly ironic work with a powerful ending. Impressive!
November 2nd, 2024 10:04
Ellen Marsell said:
The oblivion of true values and the inevitability of the decline of former power. A bitterly ironic work with a powerful ending. Impressive!
November 2nd, 2024 10:04
Mourn city
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, but this is as ghastly and macabre as everyone was begging for last month, the cruel reality of these facts beautifully rendered poetically to enchant the facts which all ere wanting do not truly care to face. Thank you very much for sharing.
November 1st, 2024 13:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, but this is as ghastly and macabre as everyone was begging for last month, the cruel reality of these facts beautifully rendered poetically to enchant the facts which all ere wanting do not truly care to face. Thank you very much for sharing.
November 1st, 2024 13:38
Mourn city
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem in muted tones. An atmosphere of despair, but there\'s something mesmerizing about these bleak images.
I especially like this line: “strained wrecks as deranged clocks...”.
November 1st, 2024 10:36
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem in muted tones. An atmosphere of despair, but there\'s something mesmerizing about these bleak images.
I especially like this line: “strained wrecks as deranged clocks...”.
November 1st, 2024 10:36
Flight
Ellen Marsell said:
The theme of inevitability. A disturbing vision of an existential journey, an inexorable flight to a grim end.
October 31st, 2024 10:19
Ellen Marsell said:
The theme of inevitability. A disturbing vision of an existential journey, an inexorable flight to a grim end.
October 31st, 2024 10:19
Flight
sorenbarrett said:
(Death has this sticky sweetnes) a great line that conveys its meaning viscerally. A poem of doom indeed.
October 31st, 2024 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
(Death has this sticky sweetnes) a great line that conveys its meaning viscerally. A poem of doom indeed.
October 31st, 2024 06:10
The south
Ellen Marsell said:
A land of ancient secrets, sharp contrasts, vivid contradictions, greatness and decadence. The spiritual and the sensual, the eternal and the transient, images of sacred deserts and great empires intertwine here, each reflecting the rich history of a world slowly fading into history.
A beautiful poem!
October 30th, 2024 10:00
Ellen Marsell said:
A land of ancient secrets, sharp contrasts, vivid contradictions, greatness and decadence. The spiritual and the sensual, the eternal and the transient, images of sacred deserts and great empires intertwine here, each reflecting the rich history of a world slowly fading into history.
A beautiful poem!
October 30th, 2024 10:00
The south
sorenbarrett said:
An exotic setting with vivid images covers a metaphor that supports the structure. Choices that disolve.
October 30th, 2024 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
An exotic setting with vivid images covers a metaphor that supports the structure. Choices that disolve.
October 30th, 2024 07:53
Sounds the knell
Ellen Marsell said:
A sinister theme with dark humor and creepy visions. The appeal to Baal and the ominous “end of time” give your play a dramatic touch, creating a sense of theatrical descent into the underworld. I like it!
October 29th, 2024 10:55
Ellen Marsell said:
A sinister theme with dark humor and creepy visions. The appeal to Baal and the ominous “end of time” give your play a dramatic touch, creating a sense of theatrical descent into the underworld. I like it!
October 29th, 2024 10:55
Sounds the knell
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words in a powerful poem. Some great lines as well (killer widow washing away the infant) is my favorite. Brilliant!
October 29th, 2024 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words in a powerful poem. Some great lines as well (killer widow washing away the infant) is my favorite. Brilliant!
October 29th, 2024 09:03
Marienburg
sorenbarrett said:
Historical and metaphorical the end of the vanquished and in some ways the end of an era and that type of faith. Great images of a most graphic nature. Lovely
October 28th, 2024 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
Historical and metaphorical the end of the vanquished and in some ways the end of an era and that type of faith. Great images of a most graphic nature. Lovely
October 28th, 2024 13:39
Marienburg
Ellen Marsell said:
A captured historical moment. Through the images of rain, blood and gloom you convey not only the collapse of the chivalric spirit, but also the realization of the fragility of human glory in the face of time and fate.
Great writing!
October 28th, 2024 12:00
Ellen Marsell said:
A captured historical moment. Through the images of rain, blood and gloom you convey not only the collapse of the chivalric spirit, but also the realization of the fragility of human glory in the face of time and fate.
Great writing!
October 28th, 2024 12:00
Vincent
sorenbarrett said:
You know Vincent well he would have liked this poem. It\'s words in swirls and vivid colors paint the life of a man misunderstood and poorly recieved. A man that found it hard to give away his art. This poem in its passion reflects his. Very nicely written with recognizable symbols thrown in along the way. it paints a compassion for him as he did for the people he painted. Brilliant!
October 27th, 2024 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
You know Vincent well he would have liked this poem. It\'s words in swirls and vivid colors paint the life of a man misunderstood and poorly recieved. A man that found it hard to give away his art. This poem in its passion reflects his. Very nicely written with recognizable symbols thrown in along the way. it paints a compassion for him as he did for the people he painted. Brilliant!
October 27th, 2024 06:05
Vincent
Ellen Marsell said:
Love your poem!
A tribute to a great master. Despite his demons, he gained a certain immortality in art.
October 27th, 2024 05:44
Ellen Marsell said:
Love your poem!
A tribute to a great master. Despite his demons, he gained a certain immortality in art.
October 27th, 2024 05:44
Dear mother
sorenbarrett said:
So full of metaphor and great lines (I was born in the desire of a false summer.) The latterrefference of storks comming in winter fits (Child of silence so conceived ) another great line. Ending on a desire to be a good daddy. Well writen
October 26th, 2024 09:12
sorenbarrett said:
So full of metaphor and great lines (I was born in the desire of a false summer.) The latterrefference of storks comming in winter fits (Child of silence so conceived ) another great line. Ending on a desire to be a good daddy. Well writen
October 26th, 2024 09:12
Who am I ?
sorenbarrett said:
All things to all people. I liked the feel of this one as it seemed to roll off the tongue with such ease.
October 25th, 2024 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
All things to all people. I liked the feel of this one as it seemed to roll off the tongue with such ease.
October 25th, 2024 05:00
Who am I ?
Ellen Marsell said:
Whoever you are, you are the sum of all these experiences—a being in search of both the stars and the shadows.
I love every line of this poem!
October 25th, 2024 04:05
Ellen Marsell said:
Whoever you are, you are the sum of all these experiences—a being in search of both the stars and the shadows.
I love every line of this poem!
October 25th, 2024 04:05
Apocalypse slow
sorenbarrett said:
A modern book of Revelations? Sounds like Time Square at rush hour to me. Nicely done
October 24th, 2024 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
A modern book of Revelations? Sounds like Time Square at rush hour to me. Nicely done
October 24th, 2024 05:55
My little polish café
Neville said:
Excellent ink .. made me feel more than nostalgic for a place I\'ve never been .. Neville
October 23rd, 2024 00:59
Neville said:
Excellent ink .. made me feel more than nostalgic for a place I\'ve never been .. Neville
October 23rd, 2024 00:59
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