Comments received on poems by Lorenz
The poet\'s soul
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poetry blends pain and irony. And this poem — a black pearl — strikes with its subtlety and depth.
July 27th, 2025 13:17
Ellen Marsell said:
Your poetry blends pain and irony. And this poem — a black pearl — strikes with its subtlety and depth.
July 27th, 2025 13:17
The poet\'s soul
sorenbarrett said:
It is dark even black at places this poem speaks in symbols and metaphor and speaks of death and maybe in that sense change. Well written Lorenz
July 27th, 2025 11:02
sorenbarrett said:
It is dark even black at places this poem speaks in symbols and metaphor and speaks of death and maybe in that sense change. Well written Lorenz
July 27th, 2025 11:02
The poet\'s soul
Justina said:
Moved by the dramatic tension in the dialogue section
July 27th, 2025 10:41
Justina said:
Moved by the dramatic tension in the dialogue section
July 27th, 2025 10:41
History
Ellen Marsell said:
History as a being - tired, tragic, searching for a place to rest from its own burden. An impressive piece.
July 26th, 2025 11:06
Ellen Marsell said:
History as a being - tired, tragic, searching for a place to rest from its own burden. An impressive piece.
July 26th, 2025 11:06
History
sorenbarrett said:
I have always loved history and as I grew older became disenchanted finding that it is a changing picture that was first written by the conqueror from their point of view and distorted through the years by each dynasty that had their own needs, often the original no longer available. Or it was assembled from pieces of pottery and chard bones by the surmises of archeologists as a jigsaw puzzle missing pieces and with some that don\'t fit. No longer the romantic thing it once was I see it as swimming in murky waters poorly defined some say it is a behemoth, others a mermaid. Maybe it is just an old submerged log. The poem is beautiful and so well worded it is a fave
July 26th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
I have always loved history and as I grew older became disenchanted finding that it is a changing picture that was first written by the conqueror from their point of view and distorted through the years by each dynasty that had their own needs, often the original no longer available. Or it was assembled from pieces of pottery and chard bones by the surmises of archeologists as a jigsaw puzzle missing pieces and with some that don\'t fit. No longer the romantic thing it once was I see it as swimming in murky waters poorly defined some say it is a behemoth, others a mermaid. Maybe it is just an old submerged log. The poem is beautiful and so well worded it is a fave
July 26th, 2025 04:42
Licence to kill
sorenbarrett said:
Those who dream die faster .
Don\'t think I\'m afraid .
Fear is for those who doubt .
Great lines that sink deep into the mind. This poem is full of them and the last line
You\'re only a ink maker ,
And I don\'t like amateur killer...
is most powerful. A fave
July 25th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Those who dream die faster .
Don\'t think I\'m afraid .
Fear is for those who doubt .
Great lines that sink deep into the mind. This poem is full of them and the last line
You\'re only a ink maker ,
And I don\'t like amateur killer...
is most powerful. A fave
July 25th, 2025 04:44
Licence to kill
Ellen Marsell said:
This is poetry of alienation, written by a sniper at the dusk of modernity.
No love, no hatred — only an algorithm.
July 25th, 2025 04:02
Ellen Marsell said:
This is poetry of alienation, written by a sniper at the dusk of modernity.
No love, no hatred — only an algorithm.
July 25th, 2025 04:02
Licence to kill
Priya Tomar said:
Well written poem
The poem has haunting tone that explores death, worrier , war and loss of innocence.
Cold teddy.. nice imagery
July 25th, 2025 03:26
Priya Tomar said:
Well written poem
The poem has haunting tone that explores death, worrier , war and loss of innocence.
Cold teddy.. nice imagery
July 25th, 2025 03:26
The last poet
Damaso said:
Wow, splendid. Exquisite writing in an incredible text. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 22nd, 2025 09:00
Damaso said:
Wow, splendid. Exquisite writing in an incredible text. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 22nd, 2025 09:00
The century
Ellen Marsell said:
The century gazes into the mirror of its own memory.
A confession of time that reflected upon itself - and shuddered.
A powerful poem: profound, haunting, rich in broken, iconic, and painterly metaphors.
July 21st, 2025 10:11
Ellen Marsell said:
The century gazes into the mirror of its own memory.
A confession of time that reflected upon itself - and shuddered.
A powerful poem: profound, haunting, rich in broken, iconic, and painterly metaphors.
July 21st, 2025 10:11
The century
sorenbarrett said:
There are cultures where one hundred means a lot or many. Nicely written Lorenz with significant cryptic symbolism my friend
July 21st, 2025 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
There are cultures where one hundred means a lot or many. Nicely written Lorenz with significant cryptic symbolism my friend
July 21st, 2025 07:04
Motionless voyager
Ellen Marsell said:
This is a poem about an inner sea. Its solitude is not a tragedy, but a way of being. The solitude of an artist who builds a whole world out of fragile symbols and elusive allusions - a world that perhaps no one will ever fully understand…
It’s a confession from someone who has always been adrift - sailing through the waters of memory, imagination, and the subconscious.
A beautiful, exquisite piece!
July 20th, 2025 13:31
Ellen Marsell said:
This is a poem about an inner sea. Its solitude is not a tragedy, but a way of being. The solitude of an artist who builds a whole world out of fragile symbols and elusive allusions - a world that perhaps no one will ever fully understand…
It’s a confession from someone who has always been adrift - sailing through the waters of memory, imagination, and the subconscious.
A beautiful, exquisite piece!
July 20th, 2025 13:31
Motionless voyager
Tony Grannell said:
Hello lorenz,
Every line in this most excellent poem is so carefully and beautifully composed. Aesthetically crafted with poetic elegance, to leave the reader breathless. I just love anything to do with the ocean, mariners and sailing, o, yes, pirates too and they are all in this verse. Please have yourself another cup of coffee, me hearty.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 20th, 2025 13:15
Tony Grannell said:
Hello lorenz,
Every line in this most excellent poem is so carefully and beautifully composed. Aesthetically crafted with poetic elegance, to leave the reader breathless. I just love anything to do with the ocean, mariners and sailing, o, yes, pirates too and they are all in this verse. Please have yourself another cup of coffee, me hearty.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 20th, 2025 13:15
Motionless voyager
Priya Tomar said:
Marriage of sun and silence ...... catchy line
Lovely metaphors .....
July 20th, 2025 05:13
Priya Tomar said:
Marriage of sun and silence ...... catchy line
Lovely metaphors .....
July 20th, 2025 05:13
Motionless voyager
sorenbarrett said:
(On the pier a white shadow
will wait ...
Marriage of sun and silence ,
the bride of the ocean don\'t cry.)
Such great lines here. They paint a picture and metaphor in one fell swoop. Very nicely done Lorez
July 20th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
(On the pier a white shadow
will wait ...
Marriage of sun and silence ,
the bride of the ocean don\'t cry.)
Such great lines here. They paint a picture and metaphor in one fell swoop. Very nicely done Lorez
July 20th, 2025 04:11
Lolita
Sealgair said:
Beautifully written.
As if the mask of rationality has been lifted, and you allow yourself to speak from that part of the mind usually pushed into the shadows - where imagined love and the eternal \'what if\' reside.
July 18th, 2025 14:37
Sealgair said:
Beautifully written.
As if the mask of rationality has been lifted, and you allow yourself to speak from that part of the mind usually pushed into the shadows - where imagined love and the eternal \'what if\' reside.
July 18th, 2025 14:37
Lolita
Ellen Marsell said:
A charming and enigmatic poem, infused with delicate sensuality.
July 18th, 2025 14:23
Ellen Marsell said:
A charming and enigmatic poem, infused with delicate sensuality.
July 18th, 2025 14:23
Lolita
Tony Grannell said:
An alluring nymphet on rout 66 in a sensuous and deliciously composed passage of superlative poetry. I really loved this one. Well done indeed, lorenz.
Kind regards,
Tony
July 18th, 2025 12:19
Tony Grannell said:
An alluring nymphet on rout 66 in a sensuous and deliciously composed passage of superlative poetry. I really loved this one. Well done indeed, lorenz.
Kind regards,
Tony
July 18th, 2025 12:19
Lolita
Priya Tomar said:
nice poetry.
Mystry .....
Your poetic power is praiseworthy .
You wrote some beautiful metaphors.
Lovely !
July 18th, 2025 11:00
Priya Tomar said:
nice poetry.
Mystry .....
Your poetic power is praiseworthy .
You wrote some beautiful metaphors.
Lovely !
July 18th, 2025 11:00
Lolita
sorenbarrett said:
I felt like I had just gotten on the magic mystery tour, rode the bus to Jefferson Airplane. A mystical and wistful read Lorenz.
July 18th, 2025 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
I felt like I had just gotten on the magic mystery tour, rode the bus to Jefferson Airplane. A mystical and wistful read Lorenz.
July 18th, 2025 09:51
Red kiss
sorenbarrett said:
Absinth liquor of hallucination seems present in this poem. Nicely written Gray
July 12th, 2025 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
Absinth liquor of hallucination seems present in this poem. Nicely written Gray
July 12th, 2025 06:32
I\'m the intelligence
Ellen Marsell said:
Intelligence gives birth to an intellectual mirror in which man recognizes himself, but now differently — with the perspective of the future, in the radiance of his new shadow.
July 5th, 2025 14:55
Ellen Marsell said:
Intelligence gives birth to an intellectual mirror in which man recognizes himself, but now differently — with the perspective of the future, in the radiance of his new shadow.
July 5th, 2025 14:55
I\'m the intelligence
sorenbarrett said:
It was the end of this poem that gave this poem meaning or maybe I\'m just slow to catch on. Never the less it dives deep into duality and Androgyny Jung\'s Anima and Animus This depth gets a fave
July 5th, 2025 10:38
sorenbarrett said:
It was the end of this poem that gave this poem meaning or maybe I\'m just slow to catch on. Never the less it dives deep into duality and Androgyny Jung\'s Anima and Animus This depth gets a fave
July 5th, 2025 10:38
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