Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Redemption
Ellen Marsell said:
It’s a bold, vivid, and philosophically rich monologue. Powerful!
May 13th, 2025 13:53
Ellen Marsell said:
It’s a bold, vivid, and philosophically rich monologue. Powerful!
May 13th, 2025 13:53
Redemption
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful wording and sense of emotion comes from this poem. It does not just speak but yells. Very nice
May 13th, 2025 12:11
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful wording and sense of emotion comes from this poem. It does not just speak but yells. Very nice
May 13th, 2025 12:11
Manifesto of ordinary madness
Ellen Marsell said:
A toxic cocktail of allusions and irony. A brilliant piece in the aesthetic of absurd noir.
May 12th, 2025 10:58
Ellen Marsell said:
A toxic cocktail of allusions and irony. A brilliant piece in the aesthetic of absurd noir.
May 12th, 2025 10:58
Manifesto of ordinary madness
Lorenz said:
Thanks for fave ! A slightly malicious manifesto !
May 12th, 2025 08:59
Lorenz said:
Thanks for fave ! A slightly malicious manifesto !
May 12th, 2025 08:59
Manifesto of ordinary madness
sorenbarrett said:
Not only good lines but deep thought in this poem. A wonderful write and a fave
May 12th, 2025 08:52
sorenbarrett said:
Not only good lines but deep thought in this poem. A wonderful write and a fave
May 12th, 2025 08:52
Solitude
Ellen Marsell said:
The text deeply moves me. It pays tribute to the quiet tragedy that artists sometimes endure.
May 11th, 2025 15:43
Ellen Marsell said:
The text deeply moves me. It pays tribute to the quiet tragedy that artists sometimes endure.
May 11th, 2025 15:43
Solitude
Cheeky Missy said:
Tales of Hoffman rears its head, only wearing nary smile on his face, the ghastly, macabre face of reality fewer know so well as the artist delineated to rather exquisite perfection on one angle, that emptiness which haunts our driven pursuit unmasques itself herein and we recognize each other in a glance. If only Sigmund hadn\'t been so rebellious he might give a satisfactory reply. Oh, I love how capably you\'ve woven so much into this swatch, making it a keeper. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 10:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Tales of Hoffman rears its head, only wearing nary smile on his face, the ghastly, macabre face of reality fewer know so well as the artist delineated to rather exquisite perfection on one angle, that emptiness which haunts our driven pursuit unmasques itself herein and we recognize each other in a glance. If only Sigmund hadn\'t been so rebellious he might give a satisfactory reply. Oh, I love how capably you\'ve woven so much into this swatch, making it a keeper. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 10:55
Solitude
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz a powerful poem with many great lines and images. It speaks dissolution, manipulation, delusion and a world where they all exist. A fave
May 11th, 2025 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz a powerful poem with many great lines and images. It speaks dissolution, manipulation, delusion and a world where they all exist. A fave
May 11th, 2025 09:39
A few musical notes
Sealgair said:
Doesn’t matter how many years go by — music just opens up the past, like lifting the lid on an old memory box.
May 10th, 2025 12:59
Sealgair said:
Doesn’t matter how many years go by — music just opens up the past, like lifting the lid on an old memory box.
May 10th, 2025 12:59
A few musical notes
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem is literally woven from cultural and musical references... Like an improvisation on the theme of passing time. Beautifully written.
May 10th, 2025 11:12
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem is literally woven from cultural and musical references... Like an improvisation on the theme of passing time. Beautifully written.
May 10th, 2025 11:12
A few musical notes
sorenbarrett said:
Loved all the musical hints woven into this piece and each seemed to evoke nostalgia and memories of the past. Lovely
May 10th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Loved all the musical hints woven into this piece and each seemed to evoke nostalgia and memories of the past. Lovely
May 10th, 2025 04:17
I\'m looking for
Ellen Marsell said:
Confession noire d’une âme en quête de vérité.
May 9th, 2025 13:39
Ellen Marsell said:
Confession noire d’une âme en quête de vérité.
May 9th, 2025 13:39
I\'m looking for
sorenbarrett said:
A read that has many elements with which I can identify. I have found the words to offend ten poems banned from another site for offensiveness. I love dissonance in music resolved by a joining chord. A very good write indeed.
May 9th, 2025 08:47
sorenbarrett said:
A read that has many elements with which I can identify. I have found the words to offend ten poems banned from another site for offensiveness. I love dissonance in music resolved by a joining chord. A very good write indeed.
May 9th, 2025 08:47
The old poet\'s heritage
Ellen Marsell said:
A very warm and touching poem. It depicts a subtle and melancholic transition between eras, between the poet who is passing into eternity and the one who silently steps into their place.
May 7th, 2025 14:29
Ellen Marsell said:
A very warm and touching poem. It depicts a subtle and melancholic transition between eras, between the poet who is passing into eternity and the one who silently steps into their place.
May 7th, 2025 14:29
The old poet\'s heritage
sorenbarrett said:
Set in a blend between classical and Lewis Carrol it reads as a metaphor and leaves a feeling whimsical hope. Lovely
May 7th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Set in a blend between classical and Lewis Carrol it reads as a metaphor and leaves a feeling whimsical hope. Lovely
May 7th, 2025 03:54
The old poet\'s heritage
nephilim56 said:
absolutely great read, thanks for sharing
May 7th, 2025 02:27
nephilim56 said:
absolutely great read, thanks for sharing
May 7th, 2025 02:27
I write your name
Ellen Marsell said:
A world without God: a universe without response.
May 6th, 2025 10:50
Ellen Marsell said:
A world without God: a universe without response.
May 6th, 2025 10:50
I write your name
sorenbarrett said:
Close to gothic in nature this poem is dark and highly metaphorical in nature with numerous references to religious views very nice Lorenz
May 6th, 2025 07:56
sorenbarrett said:
Close to gothic in nature this poem is dark and highly metaphorical in nature with numerous references to religious views very nice Lorenz
May 6th, 2025 07:56
Orion
sorenbarrett said:
A cosmic trip through the universe of the emotional realm. Very nice Lorenz
May 5th, 2025 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
A cosmic trip through the universe of the emotional realm. Very nice Lorenz
May 5th, 2025 10:16
Orion
Ellen Marsell said:
A magnificent cosmic odyssey, balancing between the grandeur of the universe and a personal dream. The imagery is boundless, infinite, yet rooted in a profound inner yearning — a wanderer destined for the journey, captivated by forces beyond understanding.
May 5th, 2025 10:16
Ellen Marsell said:
A magnificent cosmic odyssey, balancing between the grandeur of the universe and a personal dream. The imagery is boundless, infinite, yet rooted in a profound inner yearning — a wanderer destined for the journey, captivated by forces beyond understanding.
May 5th, 2025 10:16
Apocalyptic delirium
Ellen Marsell said:
A catarsis poem: civilization in the mirror of its decline.
May 3rd, 2025 13:41
Ellen Marsell said:
A catarsis poem: civilization in the mirror of its decline.
May 3rd, 2025 13:41
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