Comments received on poems by Lorenz
My lady death
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words about something so feared. A lovely poem of what none should fear
April 26th, 2025 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words about something so feared. A lovely poem of what none should fear
April 26th, 2025 06:20
Bolerondo
sorenbarrett said:
What a dance set in poetry and such wonderful lines. Lovely
April 25th, 2025 14:31
sorenbarrett said:
What a dance set in poetry and such wonderful lines. Lovely
April 25th, 2025 14:31
Libra
Ellen Marsell said:
A lyrical portrait of a woman born under the sign of Libra. In this poetic light her image is revealed even deeper, more subtle. I love it!
April 13th, 2025 11:14
Ellen Marsell said:
A lyrical portrait of a woman born under the sign of Libra. In this poetic light her image is revealed even deeper, more subtle. I love it!
April 13th, 2025 11:14
Libra
sorenbarrett said:
Instant pleasure that doesn\'t last. A lovely write most poetically penned with tasty alliteration
April 13th, 2025 07:41
sorenbarrett said:
Instant pleasure that doesn\'t last. A lovely write most poetically penned with tasty alliteration
April 13th, 2025 07:41
Imaginary
Sealgair said:
This poem beautifully combines whimsy and reflection. I love how it invites the reader into a dream universe full of playful imagery and deeper undercurrents.
Well done.
April 12th, 2025 12:22
Sealgair said:
This poem beautifully combines whimsy and reflection. I love how it invites the reader into a dream universe full of playful imagery and deeper undercurrents.
Well done.
April 12th, 2025 12:22
Imaginary
Ellen Marsell said:
A wonderful poem, full of lightness, irony, sincerity, and depth — and also a generous invitation to journey through the inner worlds.
April 12th, 2025 10:59
Ellen Marsell said:
A wonderful poem, full of lightness, irony, sincerity, and depth — and also a generous invitation to journey through the inner worlds.
April 12th, 2025 10:59
Imaginary
Libellule said:
Nicely penned... excellent flow... has a timeless feel to it...
April 12th, 2025 09:28
Libellule said:
Nicely penned... excellent flow... has a timeless feel to it...
April 12th, 2025 09:28
Imaginary
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful shameless images that delight the mind run through this magnificent piece. Very nicely done
April 12th, 2025 08:47
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful shameless images that delight the mind run through this magnificent piece. Very nicely done
April 12th, 2025 08:47
Lost words
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem of a wandering spirit. The universe here is deeply symbolic, with strong, sometimes mysterious images that give the text a fantastic power.
April 11th, 2025 13:24
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem of a wandering spirit. The universe here is deeply symbolic, with strong, sometimes mysterious images that give the text a fantastic power.
April 11th, 2025 13:24
Lost words
sorenbarrett said:
So much symbolism lies in this poem full of metaphor. It is a light in its darkness and contains many good lines. The firs six lines captured my interest and sank deep. Next (whose genius is only his folly) is a very deep message. Thought provoking this poem is a fave
April 11th, 2025 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
So much symbolism lies in this poem full of metaphor. It is a light in its darkness and contains many good lines. The firs six lines captured my interest and sank deep. Next (whose genius is only his folly) is a very deep message. Thought provoking this poem is a fave
April 11th, 2025 06:14
Summertime
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is about how summer is not always about sunshine and lightness. It is also a season of memory, pain, freedom, and illusion. Rich metaphors, musical allusions, and subtle historical references are present here. A wonderful work!
April 10th, 2025 13:19
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is about how summer is not always about sunshine and lightness. It is also a season of memory, pain, freedom, and illusion. Rich metaphors, musical allusions, and subtle historical references are present here. A wonderful work!
April 10th, 2025 13:19
Summertime
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of seasons. Within this poem a metaphor as well. Nicely penned
April 10th, 2025 10:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of seasons. Within this poem a metaphor as well. Nicely penned
April 10th, 2025 10:08
Uroboros
Ellen Marsell said:
A powerful and profound poem about cosmic solitude and the eternal serpent ring into which fate is woven.
April 9th, 2025 11:04
Ellen Marsell said:
A powerful and profound poem about cosmic solitude and the eternal serpent ring into which fate is woven.
April 9th, 2025 11:04
Uroboros
Lorenz said:
Thank you Soren I like the term \'\'unending circle\'\' Which musically reminds me the Ravel\'s bolero .
April 9th, 2025 09:49
Lorenz said:
Thank you Soren I like the term \'\'unending circle\'\' Which musically reminds me the Ravel\'s bolero .
April 9th, 2025 09:49
Uroboros
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful reflection on the unending circle. Love and life from birth to death in transformation this poem is surrealistic in its presentation. Very nicely done my friend.
April 9th, 2025 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful reflection on the unending circle. Love and life from birth to death in transformation this poem is surrealistic in its presentation. Very nicely done my friend.
April 9th, 2025 08:41
Uroboros
Lorenz said:
It\'s a truly fascinating myth that carries with it the mystery of (its non) creation !
April 9th, 2025 06:24
Lorenz said:
It\'s a truly fascinating myth that carries with it the mystery of (its non) creation !
April 9th, 2025 06:24
Uroboros
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
You have depicted an original version of the ouroboros both as the symbol for hermetic alchemy and the archetype for individuation and the becoming of things matter and process. Perhaps birthing as creation from the womb of the universe or the cosmos. An intriguing poem and read! Greetings and blessings,
R
April 9th, 2025 06:17
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
You have depicted an original version of the ouroboros both as the symbol for hermetic alchemy and the archetype for individuation and the becoming of things matter and process. Perhaps birthing as creation from the womb of the universe or the cosmos. An intriguing poem and read! Greetings and blessings,
R
April 9th, 2025 06:17
Ottawa in love
Sealgair said:
The lingering scent of a summer that may never return, but continues to live on in the folds of lyricism.
April 8th, 2025 15:01
Sealgair said:
The lingering scent of a summer that may never return, but continues to live on in the folds of lyricism.
April 8th, 2025 15:01
Ottawa in love
Ellen Marsell said:
A love letter sealed in poetry — fragrant, tender, drifting in memory.
April 7th, 2025 13:46
Ellen Marsell said:
A love letter sealed in poetry — fragrant, tender, drifting in memory.
April 7th, 2025 13:46
Ottawa in love
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful mix of metaphor, fantasy, realities images of a place that exists but yet does not except in memories cast on the shores of love and desire where anything is possible and all things are fond shadows of the past. A hearty stew for a poet. Beautiful!
April 7th, 2025 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful mix of metaphor, fantasy, realities images of a place that exists but yet does not except in memories cast on the shores of love and desire where anything is possible and all things are fond shadows of the past. A hearty stew for a poet. Beautiful!
April 7th, 2025 06:54
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