Comments received on poems by Lorenz
A ritual
Ellen Marsell said:
When the shadow of loneliness envelops, the aroma of coffee becomes closer than anyone else.
February 6th, 2024 11:51
Ellen Marsell said:
When the shadow of loneliness envelops, the aroma of coffee becomes closer than anyone else.
February 6th, 2024 11:51
Gospel of imposture
Bella Shepard said:
There is the subtle slyness in the smile, a hint of craftiness in the eyes. I think she dares, why not. Superb!
February 5th, 2024 15:02
Bella Shepard said:
There is the subtle slyness in the smile, a hint of craftiness in the eyes. I think she dares, why not. Superb!
February 5th, 2024 15:02
Gospel of imposture
Ellen Marsell said:
Une image d\'une histoire de genèse séduisante. Comme d\'habitude, l\'écriture est exquise, avec des accents philosophiques. Je l\'aime beaucoup !
February 5th, 2024 11:50
Ellen Marsell said:
Une image d\'une histoire de genèse séduisante. Comme d\'habitude, l\'écriture est exquise, avec des accents philosophiques. Je l\'aime beaucoup !
February 5th, 2024 11:50
I , the Angel
2781 said:
Will he make many supplications unto thee? will he speak soft words unto thee?
Will he make a covenant with thee? will thou take him for a servant forever?
February 4th, 2024 08:04
2781 said:
Will he make many supplications unto thee? will he speak soft words unto thee?
Will he make a covenant with thee? will thou take him for a servant forever?
February 4th, 2024 08:04
I am the wind
2781 said:
\"And after these things I saw four angels standing on the four corners of the earth, holding the four winds of the earth, that the wind should not blow on the earth, nor on the sea, nor on any tree.\"
February 3rd, 2024 22:48
2781 said:
\"And after these things I saw four angels standing on the four corners of the earth, holding the four winds of the earth, that the wind should not blow on the earth, nor on the sea, nor on any tree.\"
February 3rd, 2024 22:48
I am the wind
Bella Shepard said:
This homage to the wind is priceless. It\'s power is exhilerating, its softness soothing. I have often stood in awe, on my deck, as a storm approaches, and the wind furiously whips the tree tops. It is
the most incredible feeling in the world. Thank you for this gem!
February 2nd, 2024 15:47
Bella Shepard said:
This homage to the wind is priceless. It\'s power is exhilerating, its softness soothing. I have often stood in awe, on my deck, as a storm approaches, and the wind furiously whips the tree tops. It is
the most incredible feeling in the world. Thank you for this gem!
February 2nd, 2024 15:47
I am the wind
Ellen Marsell said:
The wind is an ancient messenger who reveals to us the wisdom of time and the many faces of the elements. It is an inspiring poetic symphony, my friend. Well done!
February 2nd, 2024 11:10
Ellen Marsell said:
The wind is an ancient messenger who reveals to us the wisdom of time and the many faces of the elements. It is an inspiring poetic symphony, my friend. Well done!
February 2nd, 2024 11:10
Rendez vous
Neville said:
this really is quite something .. a little bit special in my book ..
February 2nd, 2024 07:22
Neville said:
this really is quite something .. a little bit special in my book ..
February 2nd, 2024 07:22
Rendez vous
Ellen Marsell said:
Poets are people who can\'t stop talking to the past. Wonderful writing!
February 2nd, 2024 02:48
Ellen Marsell said:
Poets are people who can\'t stop talking to the past. Wonderful writing!
February 2nd, 2024 02:48
Rendez vous
Bella Shepard said:
Bittersweet in sentiment, beautiful in verse, add to that the imagery of the picture, and you have a trifecta of the perfect poem. Kudos dear poet!
February 1st, 2024 15:58
Bella Shepard said:
Bittersweet in sentiment, beautiful in verse, add to that the imagery of the picture, and you have a trifecta of the perfect poem. Kudos dear poet!
February 1st, 2024 15:58
The spirits of Trianon
Ellen Marsell said:
I would like to invite you for a walk into the depths of the immense park.
January 29th, 2024 04:33
Ellen Marsell said:
I would like to invite you for a walk into the depths of the immense park.
January 29th, 2024 04:33
The spirits of Trianon
Reynaldo Casison said:
cool cherry blossoms are sweet
January 29th, 2024 04:02
Reynaldo Casison said:
cool cherry blossoms are sweet
January 29th, 2024 04:02
Leave Out Love
Bella Shepard said:
I think this poem speaks to some of our deepest fears. Painful, but so extraordinarily written. As Tina Turner sang \"What\'s Love
Got To Do With It?\" Perhaps it\'s for us to find out. Excellent!
January 28th, 2024 16:00
Bella Shepard said:
I think this poem speaks to some of our deepest fears. Painful, but so extraordinarily written. As Tina Turner sang \"What\'s Love
Got To Do With It?\" Perhaps it\'s for us to find out. Excellent!
January 28th, 2024 16:00
Lost inspiration street
Bella Shepard said:
The poet experiences life with more than just the physical senses, his mind, his consciousness searches for that \"beyond\" that explains everything, and keeps him always reaching for it. Beautifully penned!
January 26th, 2024 14:15
Bella Shepard said:
The poet experiences life with more than just the physical senses, his mind, his consciousness searches for that \"beyond\" that explains everything, and keeps him always reaching for it. Beautifully penned!
January 26th, 2024 14:15
Lost inspiration street
Ellen Marsell said:
There is a melody of frustration in the poet\'s voice that merges with the music of his words...
Beautiful writing!
January 26th, 2024 11:40
Ellen Marsell said:
There is a melody of frustration in the poet\'s voice that merges with the music of his words...
Beautiful writing!
January 26th, 2024 11:40
Lost inspiration street
2781 said:
So shall the word be that goes out from My mouth; it shall not return to me void, But it shall accomplish what I please, And it shall prosper in the thing for which I sent it.
January 26th, 2024 10:02
2781 said:
So shall the word be that goes out from My mouth; it shall not return to me void, But it shall accomplish what I please, And it shall prosper in the thing for which I sent it.
January 26th, 2024 10:02
Awakening
Bella Shepard said:
Mind awakened, consciousness perceived in the ultimate state of being. Wow!
January 23rd, 2024 15:40
Bella Shepard said:
Mind awakened, consciousness perceived in the ultimate state of being. Wow!
January 23rd, 2024 15:40
Kensington 2050
Doggerel Dave said:
My mind architecture is, I believe very different from yours - I retire defeated!
January 22nd, 2024 05:19
Doggerel Dave said:
My mind architecture is, I believe very different from yours - I retire defeated!
January 22nd, 2024 05:19
Kensington 2050
Doggerel Dave said:
I had no idea what Kensington you were talking about - but following Bella\'s model I googled. Seems some gentrification is going on, so those inhabitants who make it such a lively area will have to move on........ Your piece can be easily adjusted and move with them....!!
January 22nd, 2024 01:11
Doggerel Dave said:
I had no idea what Kensington you were talking about - but following Bella\'s model I googled. Seems some gentrification is going on, so those inhabitants who make it such a lively area will have to move on........ Your piece can be easily adjusted and move with them....!!
January 22nd, 2024 01:11
Kensington 2050
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet, this is breathtakingly beautiful! Rich in imagery and playing upon the senses, it evokes peace and such happiness. Thank you!
January 21st, 2024 13:40
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet, this is breathtakingly beautiful! Rich in imagery and playing upon the senses, it evokes peace and such happiness. Thank you!
January 21st, 2024 13:40
We loved each other
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful imagery, very sensual. Thanks for sharing!
January 21st, 2024 03:14
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful imagery, very sensual. Thanks for sharing!
January 21st, 2024 03:14
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