Comments received on poems by Lorenz
In memory
sorenbarrett said:
A good write with more symbols than a drum set. Nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
A good write with more symbols than a drum set. Nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 14:04
In memory
Ellen Marsell said:
A deeply melancholic piece, in tune with the mood of autumn.
September 8th, 2025 13:50
Ellen Marsell said:
A deeply melancholic piece, in tune with the mood of autumn.
September 8th, 2025 13:50
Ballade cosmique
Priya Tomar said:
The poem blends physical universe with the inner landscape of memory and emotions...
Its romantic tone reminds me the poets - Rilke and Bauldelaire...
Wonderful write about the vast universe and tiny soul..
Magnum opus !.
September 6th, 2025 14:38
Priya Tomar said:
The poem blends physical universe with the inner landscape of memory and emotions...
Its romantic tone reminds me the poets - Rilke and Bauldelaire...
Wonderful write about the vast universe and tiny soul..
Magnum opus !.
September 6th, 2025 14:38
Ballade cosmique
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write in a melding of the cosmos, movies, religion with a sense of mysticism nicely done
September 6th, 2025 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write in a melding of the cosmos, movies, religion with a sense of mysticism nicely done
September 6th, 2025 11:33
Ballade cosmique
Ellen Marsell said:
A cosmic symphony of solitude, poetic calling, and spiritual exile.
September 6th, 2025 11:01
Ellen Marsell said:
A cosmic symphony of solitude, poetic calling, and spiritual exile.
September 6th, 2025 11:01
My abysses
Ellen Marsell said:
From a philosophical aphorism you have created an entire tragic mystery. This gaze into the abyss becomes a dialogue with the shadow, with the inner \"other\", with the double who calls and seduces.
September 5th, 2025 11:06
Ellen Marsell said:
From a philosophical aphorism you have created an entire tragic mystery. This gaze into the abyss becomes a dialogue with the shadow, with the inner \"other\", with the double who calls and seduces.
September 5th, 2025 11:06
My abysses
sorenbarrett said:
Erupting emotions characterize this poem they shout out and all those passing. Very emotional. Nicely done
September 5th, 2025 10:57
sorenbarrett said:
Erupting emotions characterize this poem they shout out and all those passing. Very emotional. Nicely done
September 5th, 2025 10:57
Dead seasons
Lorenz said:
Dramaturgy of an unstable identity that unleashes chimeras !
September 3rd, 2025 13:27
Lorenz said:
Dramaturgy of an unstable identity that unleashes chimeras !
September 3rd, 2025 13:27
Dead seasons
Ellen Marsell said:
An exquisite text, full of subtle shimmering and philosophical turns. It is an allegory of the creative path: fragile, sacrificial, yet capable of transforming personal wounds into an eternal trace.
September 3rd, 2025 13:20
Ellen Marsell said:
An exquisite text, full of subtle shimmering and philosophical turns. It is an allegory of the creative path: fragile, sacrificial, yet capable of transforming personal wounds into an eternal trace.
September 3rd, 2025 13:20
Dead seasons
sorenbarrett said:
The musician in sound, poet in words, sculptor in touch, painter in vision and the chef in taste. Love comes in all senses. A lovely write
September 3rd, 2025 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
The musician in sound, poet in words, sculptor in touch, painter in vision and the chef in taste. Love comes in all senses. A lovely write
September 3rd, 2025 12:02
Sandcastles
Priya Tomar said:
How do you write free verses so rhythmic, so melodious
September 2nd, 2025 14:24
Priya Tomar said:
How do you write free verses so rhythmic, so melodious
September 2nd, 2025 14:24
Sandcastles
Priya Tomar said:
Wow ! Well written...
Lovely metaphor for fragility...
September 2nd, 2025 14:22
Priya Tomar said:
Wow ! Well written...
Lovely metaphor for fragility...
September 2nd, 2025 14:22
Sandcastles
Ellen Marsell said:
It’s an allegory of the futility of war and of human missions that seem important, but in the end turn out to be nothing more than sand carried away by the tide.
September 2nd, 2025 13:20
Ellen Marsell said:
It’s an allegory of the futility of war and of human missions that seem important, but in the end turn out to be nothing more than sand carried away by the tide.
September 2nd, 2025 13:20
Sandcastles
sorenbarrett said:
Sandcastles fall easily with the incoming waves and tide leaving little to show. They say build upon a rock but there are few rocks on this beach. Maybe a lighthouse. Good write my friend
September 2nd, 2025 12:28
sorenbarrett said:
Sandcastles fall easily with the incoming waves and tide leaving little to show. They say build upon a rock but there are few rocks on this beach. Maybe a lighthouse. Good write my friend
September 2nd, 2025 12:28
Lethal poetry
NafisaSB said:
stay succumbed so that she helps inspire and generate some beautiful lines
September 2nd, 2025 01:48
NafisaSB said:
stay succumbed so that she helps inspire and generate some beautiful lines
September 2nd, 2025 01:48
The lover wave
Ellen Marsell said:
In this poem, the sea conveys a sense of boundlessness, weight, and depth. It becomes the symbol of all memory and all love - infinite and all-consuming. It is at once a scar, a solace, and a sentence. The sea both devours and preserves, turning love into a fateful current where there is no escape, except to surrender to the final wave. A beautiful work!
August 31st, 2025 13:23
Ellen Marsell said:
In this poem, the sea conveys a sense of boundlessness, weight, and depth. It becomes the symbol of all memory and all love - infinite and all-consuming. It is at once a scar, a solace, and a sentence. The sea both devours and preserves, turning love into a fateful current where there is no escape, except to surrender to the final wave. A beautiful work!
August 31st, 2025 13:23
The lover wave
sorenbarrett said:
So many metaphors of the inner self in this poem Lovez. A lovely write with deep mysteries within it. A lot of symbolism here. Very nice
August 31st, 2025 11:02
sorenbarrett said:
So many metaphors of the inner self in this poem Lovez. A lovely write with deep mysteries within it. A lot of symbolism here. Very nice
August 31st, 2025 11:02
Lethal poetry
sorenbarrett said:
Alluring, evil, dark but the only light. Very nicely said
August 29th, 2025 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
Alluring, evil, dark but the only light. Very nicely said
August 29th, 2025 15:59
Lethal poetry
Alex Arnot said:
A muse, a demon, an affliction, she is all those things. We use her to spread our own wrath and desire and she eagerly obliges! Excellent write!
August 29th, 2025 15:04
Alex Arnot said:
A muse, a demon, an affliction, she is all those things. We use her to spread our own wrath and desire and she eagerly obliges! Excellent write!
August 29th, 2025 15:04
Lethal poetry
Priya Tomar said:
Brilliant metaphor for a fatal woman.
Nicely done !
August 29th, 2025 11:06
Priya Tomar said:
Brilliant metaphor for a fatal woman.
Nicely done !
August 29th, 2025 11:06
Lethal poetry
Ellen Marsell said:
A very powerful allusion to poetry as a fatal woman. She is not an abstract muse like in the works of the ancient poets - she is a fateful lover. In her image intertwine seduction, danger, and the inevitability of destiny. Brilliantly written!
August 29th, 2025 10:55
Ellen Marsell said:
A very powerful allusion to poetry as a fatal woman. She is not an abstract muse like in the works of the ancient poets - she is a fateful lover. In her image intertwine seduction, danger, and the inevitability of destiny. Brilliantly written!
August 29th, 2025 10:55
The rose of time
Ellen Marsell said:
Against the backdrop of changing generations and senseless conflicts, the roses go on blooming - a symbol of peace and wisdom. The contrast between destruction and beauty makes your poem profound and deeply moving.
August 28th, 2025 13:56
Ellen Marsell said:
Against the backdrop of changing generations and senseless conflicts, the roses go on blooming - a symbol of peace and wisdom. The contrast between destruction and beauty makes your poem profound and deeply moving.
August 28th, 2025 13:56
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