Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Dry guillotine
NinjaGirl said:
Very truthful poem, I find the morality of most to be so corrupted
November 13th, 2025 14:22
NinjaGirl said:
Very truthful poem, I find the morality of most to be so corrupted
November 13th, 2025 14:22
Dry guillotine
sorenbarrett said:
Rebellion rules everywhere but where it should. Anger is a precursor to tears of shame, Lepers do have beautiful people if you look on the inside. A good read
November 13th, 2025 13:54
sorenbarrett said:
Rebellion rules everywhere but where it should. Anger is a precursor to tears of shame, Lepers do have beautiful people if you look on the inside. A good read
November 13th, 2025 13:54
Dry guillotine
Ellen Marsell said:
The human within us can survive only through the ability to feel pain and to see the truth within it.
A deeply moving poem, Lorenz.
November 13th, 2025 13:23
Ellen Marsell said:
The human within us can survive only through the ability to feel pain and to see the truth within it.
A deeply moving poem, Lorenz.
November 13th, 2025 13:23
Bipolar metaverse
Ellen Marsell said:
Genius and madness are the two wings of the same being.
November 12th, 2025 13:40
Ellen Marsell said:
Genius and madness are the two wings of the same being.
November 12th, 2025 13:40
Bipolar metaverse
sorenbarrett said:
To be a true artist one must be mad for no normal person can see the depths of beauty. One must suffer to express the exquisite. A lovely write Lorenz
November 12th, 2025 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
To be a true artist one must be mad for no normal person can see the depths of beauty. One must suffer to express the exquisite. A lovely write Lorenz
November 12th, 2025 12:07
@.Organ
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the organ, penis or pianist I take it a god at any rate and leader of the party. Part of political machinery in which one is a cog. Another surrealistic write and well done Lorenz.
November 11th, 2025 14:55
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the organ, penis or pianist I take it a god at any rate and leader of the party. Part of political machinery in which one is a cog. Another surrealistic write and well done Lorenz.
November 11th, 2025 14:55
@.Organ
Ellen Marsell said:
There is a prophet’s irony running through the text, foretelling an age to come.
A strikingly precise and coldly beautiful vision of a civilization that elevates its own submission to the rank of religion.
November 11th, 2025 13:37
Ellen Marsell said:
There is a prophet’s irony running through the text, foretelling an age to come.
A strikingly precise and coldly beautiful vision of a civilization that elevates its own submission to the rank of religion.
November 11th, 2025 13:37
Sweet urban depression
NafisaSB said:
is it still depression, or do i see a ray of hope at the end?
November 10th, 2025 23:39
NafisaSB said:
is it still depression, or do i see a ray of hope at the end?
November 10th, 2025 23:39
The black sun of melancholy
Ellen Marsell said:
A twilight dressed in verse.
A magnetic atmosphere where melancholy turns into matter, cosmology, and the very space of poetic experience.
Profoundly philosophical and beautifully written.
November 10th, 2025 13:07
Ellen Marsell said:
A twilight dressed in verse.
A magnetic atmosphere where melancholy turns into matter, cosmology, and the very space of poetic experience.
Profoundly philosophical and beautifully written.
November 10th, 2025 13:07
The black sun of melancholy
sorenbarrett said:
It is amazing how this poem begins with a sense of metaphorical reality that dissolves into the mists of surreal and cryptic images barely intelligible. There is a stream of logic to the illogical a drift from reality (whatever that may be) to free floating associations with no key, locked in the mind of the creator. It is very nicely crafted. A fave
November 10th, 2025 11:56
sorenbarrett said:
It is amazing how this poem begins with a sense of metaphorical reality that dissolves into the mists of surreal and cryptic images barely intelligible. There is a stream of logic to the illogical a drift from reality (whatever that may be) to free floating associations with no key, locked in the mind of the creator. It is very nicely crafted. A fave
November 10th, 2025 11:56
The black sun of melancholy
NafisaSB said:
A haunting and lyrical poem. Loved it
November 10th, 2025 11:43
NafisaSB said:
A haunting and lyrical poem. Loved it
November 10th, 2025 11:43
Despair island
sorenbarrett said:
A siren\'s trade in this poem. Very satisfying since I always loved sirens whether in myth or life. Nicely done Lorenz
November 8th, 2025 12:52
sorenbarrett said:
A siren\'s trade in this poem. Very satisfying since I always loved sirens whether in myth or life. Nicely done Lorenz
November 8th, 2025 12:52
Despair island
Ellen Marsell said:
Without light, without salvation yet with the dignity of a madman who stares into the abyss and does not look away.
A gothic poem. Epic in tone. Absolutely love it.
November 8th, 2025 12:37
Ellen Marsell said:
Without light, without salvation yet with the dignity of a madman who stares into the abyss and does not look away.
A gothic poem. Epic in tone. Absolutely love it.
November 8th, 2025 12:37
Matrix
sorenbarrett said:
Here the cow jumped over the moon but never said where she landed. The dog star barked to see such a sport and Saturn looks like a dish with a meat ball, hell knows what happened to the spoon. A cosmic poem of epic proportions Lorenz.
November 6th, 2025 13:57
sorenbarrett said:
Here the cow jumped over the moon but never said where she landed. The dog star barked to see such a sport and Saturn looks like a dish with a meat ball, hell knows what happened to the spoon. A cosmic poem of epic proportions Lorenz.
November 6th, 2025 13:57
Matrix
Ellen Marsell said:
A cosmic confession of a mind that has survived disintegration and found in it the source of poetry.
November 6th, 2025 13:22
Ellen Marsell said:
A cosmic confession of a mind that has survived disintegration and found in it the source of poetry.
November 6th, 2025 13:22
Sweet urban depression
Priya Tomar said:
Romanticization of sorrow !
Nicely done .
November 4th, 2025 22:52
Priya Tomar said:
Romanticization of sorrow !
Nicely done .
November 4th, 2025 22:52
Sweet urban depression
NinjaGirl said:
This is such a powerful poem, and I love the Peter Pan allusion. On a side note the contrast between your profile picture and the image used on the poem made me smile--two very different time periods!
November 4th, 2025 16:48
NinjaGirl said:
This is such a powerful poem, and I love the Peter Pan allusion. On a side note the contrast between your profile picture and the image used on the poem made me smile--two very different time periods!
November 4th, 2025 16:48
Sweet urban depression
Ellen Marsell said:
\"In the depth of winter, I finally learned that within me there lay an invincible summer.\" — Albert Camus
November 4th, 2025 13:55
Ellen Marsell said:
\"In the depth of winter, I finally learned that within me there lay an invincible summer.\" — Albert Camus
November 4th, 2025 13:55
Sweet urban depression
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz this sounds like the beginning of a noir novel maybe Sin City. The echoes of machinery in the background of a dark foggy night. Well done
November 4th, 2025 11:58
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz this sounds like the beginning of a noir novel maybe Sin City. The echoes of machinery in the background of a dark foggy night. Well done
November 4th, 2025 11:58
Madame la Mort
NafisaSB said:
oh yes - she reaches out and grabs everyone either by making a thumping entry..or lurking up unawares
November 4th, 2025 03:15
NafisaSB said:
oh yes - she reaches out and grabs everyone either by making a thumping entry..or lurking up unawares
November 4th, 2025 03:15
Shipwreck
Ellen Marsell said:
A masterpiece of inner storm and lyrical power.
November 2nd, 2025 13:13
Ellen Marsell said:
A masterpiece of inner storm and lyrical power.
November 2nd, 2025 13:13
Shipwreck
sorenbarrett said:
The key word for me was unsane where most would use insane I agree with you a better word is unsane. So much mention of madness and the crazy in this poem the mermaid a siren convincing one that they are the master of tides. Megalomania runs ramped in these waters. A good read my friend.
November 2nd, 2025 12:52
sorenbarrett said:
The key word for me was unsane where most would use insane I agree with you a better word is unsane. So much mention of madness and the crazy in this poem the mermaid a siren convincing one that they are the master of tides. Megalomania runs ramped in these waters. A good read my friend.
November 2nd, 2025 12:52
Sirius
Ellen Marsell said:
An inspiring journey into the depths of consciousness and the universe!
October 31st, 2025 14:24
Ellen Marsell said:
An inspiring journey into the depths of consciousness and the universe!
October 31st, 2025 14:24
Sirius
sorenbarrett said:
Cerberus or Sirius both dogs and one must take a trip to reach either. A good read
October 31st, 2025 12:28
sorenbarrett said:
Cerberus or Sirius both dogs and one must take a trip to reach either. A good read
October 31st, 2025 12:28
My cosmic inspiration
Priya Tomar said:
\" I am the one leaving you .
I want to shout – stay .\" My fav lines .
Very nice .
October 30th, 2025 18:58
Priya Tomar said:
\" I am the one leaving you .
I want to shout – stay .\" My fav lines .
Very nice .
October 30th, 2025 18:58
My cosmic inspiration
Priya Tomar said:
\" I am the one leaving you .
I want to shout – stay .\" My fav lines .
Very nice .
October 30th, 2025 18:58
Priya Tomar said:
\" I am the one leaving you .
I want to shout – stay .\" My fav lines .
Very nice .
October 30th, 2025 18:58
My cosmic inspiration
sorenbarrett said:
We come and go though space and love and with the latter there is stronger gravity and sometimes black holes. Nicely said
October 30th, 2025 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
We come and go though space and love and with the latter there is stronger gravity and sometimes black holes. Nicely said
October 30th, 2025 12:34
My cosmic inspiration
Ellen Marsell said:
Love and inspiration do not belong to us — they only visit for a while.
October 30th, 2025 11:54
Ellen Marsell said:
Love and inspiration do not belong to us — they only visit for a while.
October 30th, 2025 11:54
Absence
Ellen Marsell said:
A poetic experience of existence in a world beyond emotion, infused with a slow, noble acceptance of the inevitable.
An exquisitely melancholic poem of rare depth!
October 29th, 2025 13:29
Ellen Marsell said:
A poetic experience of existence in a world beyond emotion, infused with a slow, noble acceptance of the inevitable.
An exquisitely melancholic poem of rare depth!
October 29th, 2025 13:29
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