Comments received on poems by Lorenz
The scripture
Ellen Marsell said:
A hymn to the Word as eternal matter, which preserves the past and opens the door to eternity.
September 22nd, 2025 13:12
Ellen Marsell said:
A hymn to the Word as eternal matter, which preserves the past and opens the door to eternity.
September 22nd, 2025 13:12
The scripture
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks as holy writ a proclamation and warning. It is a call for conversion and belief. Nicely worded.
September 22nd, 2025 10:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks as holy writ a proclamation and warning. It is a call for conversion and belief. Nicely worded.
September 22nd, 2025 10:34
The quantum voyager
Friendship said:
The poem serves as a meditation on identity, existence, and the search for meaning beyond the physical realm. It invites readers to contemplate their own journeys and the nature of consciousness itself.
September 20th, 2025 14:51
Friendship said:
The poem serves as a meditation on identity, existence, and the search for meaning beyond the physical realm. It invites readers to contemplate their own journeys and the nature of consciousness itself.
September 20th, 2025 14:51
The quantum voyager
Ellen Marsell said:
For me, this poem is dual in nature, which makes it especially profound in meaning. Dazzling imagery!
September 20th, 2025 11:42
Ellen Marsell said:
For me, this poem is dual in nature, which makes it especially profound in meaning. Dazzling imagery!
September 20th, 2025 11:42
The quantum voyager
sorenbarrett said:
Although surrealistic in nature I am reversing the metaphor and see this as nature\'s mutation in DNA giving us a way to become something more. A lovely write
September 20th, 2025 11:10
sorenbarrett said:
Although surrealistic in nature I am reversing the metaphor and see this as nature\'s mutation in DNA giving us a way to become something more. A lovely write
September 20th, 2025 11:10
The quantum voyager
Priya Tomar said:
A meditation on existence !
Philosophical and scientific metaphors praiseworthy.
Empty circle đź‘Śđź‘Ś.
September 20th, 2025 10:56
Priya Tomar said:
A meditation on existence !
Philosophical and scientific metaphors praiseworthy.
Empty circle đź‘Śđź‘Ś.
September 20th, 2025 10:56
Indian summer
Friendship said:
The poem explores the complexities of love, memory, and longing, highlighting the interplay between past experiences and present emotions. It delves into the bittersweet nature of relationships that are marked by both affection and regret, evoking a sense of nostalgia and the inevitability of change.
September 17th, 2025 08:52
Friendship said:
The poem explores the complexities of love, memory, and longing, highlighting the interplay between past experiences and present emotions. It delves into the bittersweet nature of relationships that are marked by both affection and regret, evoking a sense of nostalgia and the inevitability of change.
September 17th, 2025 08:52
Indian summer
Ellen Marsell said:
A sincere text that carries autumn melancholy, wrapped in the scents and flavors of memory.
Lyrical and profoundly touching.
September 15th, 2025 14:10
Ellen Marsell said:
A sincere text that carries autumn melancholy, wrapped in the scents and flavors of memory.
Lyrical and profoundly touching.
September 15th, 2025 14:10
Indian summer
Priya Tomar said:
In this world , often strangers meet and they get lost in unknown paths , but they always return in our memories.
A great nostalgic poem.
Heart touching !
September 15th, 2025 11:15
Priya Tomar said:
In this world , often strangers meet and they get lost in unknown paths , but they always return in our memories.
A great nostalgic poem.
Heart touching !
September 15th, 2025 11:15
Indian summer
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that to me is nostalgic and melancholic it speaks of times past and love that has drifted. Very nicely written Lovenz
September 15th, 2025 10:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that to me is nostalgic and melancholic it speaks of times past and love that has drifted. Very nicely written Lovenz
September 15th, 2025 10:42
Inferno manifesto
Dan Williams said:
Nice to know I\'m not alone in disappointment. No, I am not Tarzan. thought provoking, nicely done.
September 15th, 2025 02:07
Dan Williams said:
Nice to know I\'m not alone in disappointment. No, I am not Tarzan. thought provoking, nicely done.
September 15th, 2025 02:07
Inferno manifesto
Ellen Marsell said:
Such a biting, theatrical poem, and yet astonishingly generous in its meanings. The boldness of composite images, a clear philosophical stance, emotional honesty. Remarkably vivid!
September 13th, 2025 13:59
Ellen Marsell said:
Such a biting, theatrical poem, and yet astonishingly generous in its meanings. The boldness of composite images, a clear philosophical stance, emotional honesty. Remarkably vivid!
September 13th, 2025 13:59
Inferno manifesto
Lorenz said:
Sacred is for sale !
Seriousness mocks !
Devil is social !
September 13th, 2025 12:33
Lorenz said:
Sacred is for sale !
Seriousness mocks !
Devil is social !
September 13th, 2025 12:33
Inferno manifesto
Priya Tomar said:
The poem is like a window into a chaotic mind .
Deep philosophical !
Well woven ...
September 13th, 2025 11:12
Priya Tomar said:
The poem is like a window into a chaotic mind .
Deep philosophical !
Well woven ...
September 13th, 2025 11:12
Inferno manifesto
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written Lorenz this surrealistic vision is portrayed in various symbols take the reader on a wild ride. Nice work
September 13th, 2025 10:37
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written Lorenz this surrealistic vision is portrayed in various symbols take the reader on a wild ride. Nice work
September 13th, 2025 10:37
Unfinished requiem
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem moves with its sorrowful tenderness. It is at once mournful and consoling: mournful, for the voice falters upon a memory; consoling, for the music, though unfinished, still lingers in the limbo, echoing in the hearts of those who listen. An incredibly profound creation!
September 12th, 2025 13:25
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem moves with its sorrowful tenderness. It is at once mournful and consoling: mournful, for the voice falters upon a memory; consoling, for the music, though unfinished, still lingers in the limbo, echoing in the hearts of those who listen. An incredibly profound creation!
September 12th, 2025 13:25
Unfinished requiem
Priya Tomar said:
A nice poem full of mystical imagery .
I like your dialogue form poetry.
Outstanding !
September 12th, 2025 11:00
Priya Tomar said:
A nice poem full of mystical imagery .
I like your dialogue form poetry.
Outstanding !
September 12th, 2025 11:00
Unfinished requiem
sorenbarrett said:
Requiem in d minor one of my favorite pieces and I always wonder how different it might be if he had finished it for as I understand he wrote only a small part of it. A great poem
September 12th, 2025 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
Requiem in d minor one of my favorite pieces and I always wonder how different it might be if he had finished it for as I understand he wrote only a small part of it. A great poem
September 12th, 2025 10:25
My today\'s land
Ellen Marsell said:
A curious blend of northern melancholy and southern ecstasy - a yearning for a summer that slips away, and a search for the scent of that one summer, the one that once was, but will never return. Beautifully written!
September 11th, 2025 13:12
Ellen Marsell said:
A curious blend of northern melancholy and southern ecstasy - a yearning for a summer that slips away, and a search for the scent of that one summer, the one that once was, but will never return. Beautifully written!
September 11th, 2025 13:12
My today\'s land
sorenbarrett said:
Memories of a place once familiar. Nicely worded with some great lines and metaphor. Most lovely
September 11th, 2025 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
Memories of a place once familiar. Nicely worded with some great lines and metaphor. Most lovely
September 11th, 2025 13:00
My today\'s land
Priya Tomar said:
Wonderful !
opening imagery ...outstanding..
Impermanence, transformation and longing , ...all in one !
September 11th, 2025 11:38
Priya Tomar said:
Wonderful !
opening imagery ...outstanding..
Impermanence, transformation and longing , ...all in one !
September 11th, 2025 11:38
Sublime urban tragedy
Lorenz said:
Is it this dual threat that surrounds us and lies within us ?
September 10th, 2025 14:35
Lorenz said:
Is it this dual threat that surrounds us and lies within us ?
September 10th, 2025 14:35
Sublime urban tragedy
Ellen Marsell said:
The image of Apophis is dual: the mythic serpent is chaos within, the asteroid is chaos without. Together they become a symbol of total menace. Impressive!
September 10th, 2025 14:06
Ellen Marsell said:
The image of Apophis is dual: the mythic serpent is chaos within, the asteroid is chaos without. Together they become a symbol of total menace. Impressive!
September 10th, 2025 14:06
Sublime urban tragedy
Priya Tomar said:
A poem on the absurdity of urban life .
Many dark imagery ...
Very nice .
September 10th, 2025 09:32
Priya Tomar said:
A poem on the absurdity of urban life .
Many dark imagery ...
Very nice .
September 10th, 2025 09:32
Sublime urban tragedy
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded Lorenz this has the feel of fusion of modern and gothic in a surreal birth. Nicely done
September 10th, 2025 09:14
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded Lorenz this has the feel of fusion of modern and gothic in a surreal birth. Nicely done
September 10th, 2025 09:14
In memory
FĂna Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
There’s a dreamlike quality here that pulls the reader into its quiet sadness. “my pen is only a fragile bird feather tossed about by the winds” compares writing to a powerless feather, symbolizing vulnerability and lack of control. Interesting metahor. “my pen has nothing more to say” the pen is given human qualities of speaking or falling silent. Love the use of personification. Nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 16:01
FĂna Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
There’s a dreamlike quality here that pulls the reader into its quiet sadness. “my pen is only a fragile bird feather tossed about by the winds” compares writing to a powerless feather, symbolizing vulnerability and lack of control. Interesting metahor. “my pen has nothing more to say” the pen is given human qualities of speaking or falling silent. Love the use of personification. Nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 16:01
In memory
sorenbarrett said:
A good write with more symbols than a drum set. Nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
A good write with more symbols than a drum set. Nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 14:04
In memory
Ellen Marsell said:
A deeply melancholic piece, in tune with the mood of autumn.
September 8th, 2025 13:50
Ellen Marsell said:
A deeply melancholic piece, in tune with the mood of autumn.
September 8th, 2025 13:50
Ballade cosmique
Priya Tomar said:
The poem blends physical universe with the inner landscape of memory and emotions...
Its romantic tone reminds me the poets - Rilke and Bauldelaire...
Wonderful write about the vast universe and tiny soul..
Magnum opus !.
September 6th, 2025 14:38
Priya Tomar said:
The poem blends physical universe with the inner landscape of memory and emotions...
Its romantic tone reminds me the poets - Rilke and Bauldelaire...
Wonderful write about the vast universe and tiny soul..
Magnum opus !.
September 6th, 2025 14:38
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