Comments received on poems by Lorenz
The book
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries with it the feel of mystery, magic, the occult a type of astrology, alchemy, kabbalah nicely written
December 2nd, 2024 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries with it the feel of mystery, magic, the occult a type of astrology, alchemy, kabbalah nicely written
December 2nd, 2024 09:40
A soul\'s journey
sorenbarrett said:
A sureal poem with many classical mythical elements. This poem paints a picture of one\'s end and journey beyond. Nicely crafted/
December 1st, 2024 19:49
sorenbarrett said:
A sureal poem with many classical mythical elements. This poem paints a picture of one\'s end and journey beyond. Nicely crafted/
December 1st, 2024 19:49
A soul\'s journey
Ellen Marsell said:
At a certain point in our journey, we meet with disappointment. This poem is filled with longing and nostalgia. It is perceived as an inner monologue of a man summarizing his searches, losses and dreams.
December 1st, 2024 12:05
Ellen Marsell said:
At a certain point in our journey, we meet with disappointment. This poem is filled with longing and nostalgia. It is perceived as an inner monologue of a man summarizing his searches, losses and dreams.
December 1st, 2024 12:05
Home so sweet
sorenbarrett said:
We all have or would like to have such a place a place of safety, peace, security, and fulfillment. Nicely done.
November 30th, 2024 12:45
sorenbarrett said:
We all have or would like to have such a place a place of safety, peace, security, and fulfillment. Nicely done.
November 30th, 2024 12:45
Home so sweet
Ellen Marsell said:
Your home is a reflection of your soul. And this tour through a cozy and very personal world is really enjoyable.
November 30th, 2024 09:24
Ellen Marsell said:
Your home is a reflection of your soul. And this tour through a cozy and very personal world is really enjoyable.
November 30th, 2024 09:24
Red and dreams girl
sorenbarrett said:
Images that pass through the mind, dreams of what could be sensations of wishes a beautiful poem
November 29th, 2024 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
Images that pass through the mind, dreams of what could be sensations of wishes a beautiful poem
November 29th, 2024 12:07
Red and dreams girl
Ellen Marsell said:
An attempt to capture the elusive: the feelings, thoughts and stories that the girl in red carries within herself, not even realizing that someone can read them. She remains a mystery and her reality dissolves into the poet\'s fantasies. A very enjoyable read!
November 29th, 2024 11:42
Ellen Marsell said:
An attempt to capture the elusive: the feelings, thoughts and stories that the girl in red carries within herself, not even realizing that someone can read them. She remains a mystery and her reality dissolves into the poet\'s fantasies. A very enjoyable read!
November 29th, 2024 11:42
Ayahuasca spirit
Ellen Marsell said:
The fusion of Ravel and Ayahuasca: something of a cultural experiment. Music, psychedelics and poetry create a symphony of perception!
November 28th, 2024 12:39
Ellen Marsell said:
The fusion of Ravel and Ayahuasca: something of a cultural experiment. Music, psychedelics and poetry create a symphony of perception!
November 28th, 2024 12:39
Rinascimento
Ellen Marsell said:
A crazy excursion through time. The hero is an adventurer, an artist and a bit of a philosopher, jumping through eras and cities as if the laws of time themselves are subject to him.
November 27th, 2024 11:39
Ellen Marsell said:
A crazy excursion through time. The hero is an adventurer, an artist and a bit of a philosopher, jumping through eras and cities as if the laws of time themselves are subject to him.
November 27th, 2024 11:39
Rinascimento
sorenbarrett said:
A blend of the classical with modern the renaissance with the Z generation. The tones are dark, but cleaned up and polished. An adventure, and very nice to read.
November 27th, 2024 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
A blend of the classical with modern the renaissance with the Z generation. The tones are dark, but cleaned up and polished. An adventure, and very nice to read.
November 27th, 2024 10:45
Departure
Ellen Marsell said:
A touching, profound poem permeated with an atmosphere of readiness to travel beyond the boundaries of the familiar.
Fantastic images and details. Bravo!
November 26th, 2024 11:26
Ellen Marsell said:
A touching, profound poem permeated with an atmosphere of readiness to travel beyond the boundaries of the familiar.
Fantastic images and details. Bravo!
November 26th, 2024 11:26
Summer of dead leaves
rin said:
It was wonderful to see the beautiful curved surface with the juice.
November 25th, 2024 22:25
rin said:
It was wonderful to see the beautiful curved surface with the juice.
November 25th, 2024 22:25
Summer of dead leaves
sorenbarrett said:
An erotic and sensual poem that sounds almost surreal. Nicely worded Lorenz
November 25th, 2024 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
An erotic and sensual poem that sounds almost surreal. Nicely worded Lorenz
November 25th, 2024 15:55
Summer of dead leaves
Ellen Marsell said:
Your beautiful poem leaves a sense of captivating sadness, like a whispering wind carrying away the last memories of love. Great writing!
November 25th, 2024 11:20
Ellen Marsell said:
Your beautiful poem leaves a sense of captivating sadness, like a whispering wind carrying away the last memories of love. Great writing!
November 25th, 2024 11:20
Madhouse
Ellen Marsell said:
It sounds like an ode to the turbulent but beautiful collision of art, thought and being. It\'s a very beautiful poem.
November 24th, 2024 11:50
Ellen Marsell said:
It sounds like an ode to the turbulent but beautiful collision of art, thought and being. It\'s a very beautiful poem.
November 24th, 2024 11:50
Siamese smile
Ellen Marsell said:
With dramatic overtones, your poem is subtle and deeply sensual! A balance between tenderness and foreboding.
November 23rd, 2024 12:04
Ellen Marsell said:
With dramatic overtones, your poem is subtle and deeply sensual! A balance between tenderness and foreboding.
November 23rd, 2024 12:04
Siamese smile
sorenbarrett said:
This seductive, an erotic poem about a feeling an image, and an idea nicely written
November 23rd, 2024 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
This seductive, an erotic poem about a feeling an image, and an idea nicely written
November 23rd, 2024 08:09
Lightrope
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting poem filled with surrealism wonderful imagery
November 22nd, 2024 12:54
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting poem filled with surrealism wonderful imagery
November 22nd, 2024 12:54
Lightrope
Ellen Marsell said:
An acrobat thinker balancing between light and darkness, reason and madness.
How to live if the answers already exist, but they are not at all what you were looking for?
There is a lot of pain here, a little irony, and all this is mixed with a longing for true freedom - from other people\'s expectations, patterns and yourself.
November 22nd, 2024 12:08
Ellen Marsell said:
An acrobat thinker balancing between light and darkness, reason and madness.
How to live if the answers already exist, but they are not at all what you were looking for?
There is a lot of pain here, a little irony, and all this is mixed with a longing for true freedom - from other people\'s expectations, patterns and yourself.
November 22nd, 2024 12:08
Cartoonist
sorenbarrett said:
Reality is in the eye of the beholder and what we wish to be. A group consensus on reality determines what we call psychosis. Interesting that mental illness is by vote.
November 21st, 2024 22:58
sorenbarrett said:
Reality is in the eye of the beholder and what we wish to be. A group consensus on reality determines what we call psychosis. Interesting that mental illness is by vote.
November 21st, 2024 22:58
Cartoonist
Ellen Marsell said:
The hero, realizing his dependence on the creator, embodies the desire to go beyond the imposed role. An intriguing piece!
November 21st, 2024 11:31
Ellen Marsell said:
The hero, realizing his dependence on the creator, embodies the desire to go beyond the imposed role. An intriguing piece!
November 21st, 2024 11:31
Street princess
sorenbarrett said:
Santa passing by is better than what my father used to tell us. He said he would take us to the graveyard and show us where Santa was buried.
November 20th, 2024 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
Santa passing by is better than what my father used to tell us. He said he would take us to the graveyard and show us where Santa was buried.
November 20th, 2024 20:11
Street princess
Ellen Marsell said:
\"The good Santa passed by without seeing you...\"
A social and emotional poem that reveals the tragedy of forgotten and rejected people. Penetrating images.
Great writing!
November 20th, 2024 10:58
Ellen Marsell said:
\"The good Santa passed by without seeing you...\"
A social and emotional poem that reveals the tragedy of forgotten and rejected people. Penetrating images.
Great writing!
November 20th, 2024 10:58
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