Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Rinascimento
Ellen Marsell said:
A crazy excursion through time. The hero is an adventurer, an artist and a bit of a philosopher, jumping through eras and cities as if the laws of time themselves are subject to him.
November 27th, 2024 11:39
Ellen Marsell said:
A crazy excursion through time. The hero is an adventurer, an artist and a bit of a philosopher, jumping through eras and cities as if the laws of time themselves are subject to him.
November 27th, 2024 11:39
Rinascimento
sorenbarrett said:
A blend of the classical with modern the renaissance with the Z generation. The tones are dark, but cleaned up and polished. An adventure, and very nice to read.
November 27th, 2024 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
A blend of the classical with modern the renaissance with the Z generation. The tones are dark, but cleaned up and polished. An adventure, and very nice to read.
November 27th, 2024 10:45
Departure
Ellen Marsell said:
A touching, profound poem permeated with an atmosphere of readiness to travel beyond the boundaries of the familiar.
Fantastic images and details. Bravo!
November 26th, 2024 11:26
Ellen Marsell said:
A touching, profound poem permeated with an atmosphere of readiness to travel beyond the boundaries of the familiar.
Fantastic images and details. Bravo!
November 26th, 2024 11:26
Summer of dead leaves
rin said:
It was wonderful to see the beautiful curved surface with the juice.
November 25th, 2024 22:25
rin said:
It was wonderful to see the beautiful curved surface with the juice.
November 25th, 2024 22:25
Summer of dead leaves
sorenbarrett said:
An erotic and sensual poem that sounds almost surreal. Nicely worded Lorenz
November 25th, 2024 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
An erotic and sensual poem that sounds almost surreal. Nicely worded Lorenz
November 25th, 2024 15:55
Summer of dead leaves
Ellen Marsell said:
Your beautiful poem leaves a sense of captivating sadness, like a whispering wind carrying away the last memories of love. Great writing!
November 25th, 2024 11:20
Ellen Marsell said:
Your beautiful poem leaves a sense of captivating sadness, like a whispering wind carrying away the last memories of love. Great writing!
November 25th, 2024 11:20
Madhouse
Ellen Marsell said:
It sounds like an ode to the turbulent but beautiful collision of art, thought and being. It\'s a very beautiful poem.
November 24th, 2024 11:50
Ellen Marsell said:
It sounds like an ode to the turbulent but beautiful collision of art, thought and being. It\'s a very beautiful poem.
November 24th, 2024 11:50
Siamese smile
Ellen Marsell said:
With dramatic overtones, your poem is subtle and deeply sensual! A balance between tenderness and foreboding.
November 23rd, 2024 12:04
Ellen Marsell said:
With dramatic overtones, your poem is subtle and deeply sensual! A balance between tenderness and foreboding.
November 23rd, 2024 12:04
Siamese smile
sorenbarrett said:
This seductive, an erotic poem about a feeling an image, and an idea nicely written
November 23rd, 2024 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
This seductive, an erotic poem about a feeling an image, and an idea nicely written
November 23rd, 2024 08:09
Lightrope
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting poem filled with surrealism wonderful imagery
November 22nd, 2024 12:54
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting poem filled with surrealism wonderful imagery
November 22nd, 2024 12:54
Lightrope
Ellen Marsell said:
An acrobat thinker balancing between light and darkness, reason and madness.
How to live if the answers already exist, but they are not at all what you were looking for?
There is a lot of pain here, a little irony, and all this is mixed with a longing for true freedom - from other people\'s expectations, patterns and yourself.
November 22nd, 2024 12:08
Ellen Marsell said:
An acrobat thinker balancing between light and darkness, reason and madness.
How to live if the answers already exist, but they are not at all what you were looking for?
There is a lot of pain here, a little irony, and all this is mixed with a longing for true freedom - from other people\'s expectations, patterns and yourself.
November 22nd, 2024 12:08
Cartoonist
sorenbarrett said:
Reality is in the eye of the beholder and what we wish to be. A group consensus on reality determines what we call psychosis. Interesting that mental illness is by vote.
November 21st, 2024 22:58
sorenbarrett said:
Reality is in the eye of the beholder and what we wish to be. A group consensus on reality determines what we call psychosis. Interesting that mental illness is by vote.
November 21st, 2024 22:58
Cartoonist
Ellen Marsell said:
The hero, realizing his dependence on the creator, embodies the desire to go beyond the imposed role. An intriguing piece!
November 21st, 2024 11:31
Ellen Marsell said:
The hero, realizing his dependence on the creator, embodies the desire to go beyond the imposed role. An intriguing piece!
November 21st, 2024 11:31
Street princess
sorenbarrett said:
Santa passing by is better than what my father used to tell us. He said he would take us to the graveyard and show us where Santa was buried.
November 20th, 2024 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
Santa passing by is better than what my father used to tell us. He said he would take us to the graveyard and show us where Santa was buried.
November 20th, 2024 20:11
Street princess
Ellen Marsell said:
\"The good Santa passed by without seeing you...\"
A social and emotional poem that reveals the tragedy of forgotten and rejected people. Penetrating images.
Great writing!
November 20th, 2024 10:58
Ellen Marsell said:
\"The good Santa passed by without seeing you...\"
A social and emotional poem that reveals the tragedy of forgotten and rejected people. Penetrating images.
Great writing!
November 20th, 2024 10:58
Shadows
Ellen Marsell said:
A fascinating philosophical reflection on our unchanging companions that accompany us in every moment.
November 20th, 2024 03:38
Ellen Marsell said:
A fascinating philosophical reflection on our unchanging companions that accompany us in every moment.
November 20th, 2024 03:38
Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
I hear voiced the difficulty in understanding others. Very nicely worded in poetic form. The truth lies in do we really understand each other or not.
November 19th, 2024 14:15
sorenbarrett said:
I hear voiced the difficulty in understanding others. Very nicely worded in poetic form. The truth lies in do we really understand each other or not.
November 19th, 2024 14:15
The city
Dan Williams said:
You had me with \"a prison of liquorice\". This is serious pondering expressed very well. Nice.
November 19th, 2024 01:20
Dan Williams said:
You had me with \"a prison of liquorice\". This is serious pondering expressed very well. Nice.
November 19th, 2024 01:20
Praying
Ellen Marsell said:
Strong imagery ranging from religious symbols to revelations about loneliness. And a bit of irony in reflecting on the nature of faith.
November 18th, 2024 11:04
Ellen Marsell said:
Strong imagery ranging from religious symbols to revelations about loneliness. And a bit of irony in reflecting on the nature of faith.
November 18th, 2024 11:04
Praying
2781 said:
\"Therefore pray not thou for these people, neither lift up cry nor prayer for them, neither make intercession to me: for I will not hear thee.\"
November 18th, 2024 08:57
2781 said:
\"Therefore pray not thou for these people, neither lift up cry nor prayer for them, neither make intercession to me: for I will not hear thee.\"
November 18th, 2024 08:57
The city
Ellen Marsell said:
The urge to leave that place, yet realize that it has become a part of you. I love it!
November 17th, 2024 17:33
Ellen Marsell said:
The urge to leave that place, yet realize that it has become a part of you. I love it!
November 17th, 2024 17:33
The city
sorenbarrett said:
Great descriptors of a city marked in metaphor and painted in symbols. Beautiful!
November 17th, 2024 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
Great descriptors of a city marked in metaphor and painted in symbols. Beautiful!
November 17th, 2024 16:25
Aging
Ellen Marsell said:
I like these images and the subtle humor with which you play around the theme of aging. Great!
November 16th, 2024 12:40
Ellen Marsell said:
I like these images and the subtle humor with which you play around the theme of aging. Great!
November 16th, 2024 12:40
Aging
sorenbarrett said:
Love the anthropomorphic approach to this poem. A most fun read
November 16th, 2024 08:48
sorenbarrett said:
Love the anthropomorphic approach to this poem. A most fun read
November 16th, 2024 08:48
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