Comments received on poems by Lorenz
I write your name
Ellen Marsell said:
A world without God: a universe without response.
May 6th, 2025 10:50
Ellen Marsell said:
A world without God: a universe without response.
May 6th, 2025 10:50
I write your name
sorenbarrett said:
Close to gothic in nature this poem is dark and highly metaphorical in nature with numerous references to religious views very nice Lorenz
May 6th, 2025 07:56
sorenbarrett said:
Close to gothic in nature this poem is dark and highly metaphorical in nature with numerous references to religious views very nice Lorenz
May 6th, 2025 07:56
Orion
sorenbarrett said:
A cosmic trip through the universe of the emotional realm. Very nice Lorenz
May 5th, 2025 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
A cosmic trip through the universe of the emotional realm. Very nice Lorenz
May 5th, 2025 10:16
Orion
Ellen Marsell said:
A magnificent cosmic odyssey, balancing between the grandeur of the universe and a personal dream. The imagery is boundless, infinite, yet rooted in a profound inner yearning — a wanderer destined for the journey, captivated by forces beyond understanding.
May 5th, 2025 10:16
Ellen Marsell said:
A magnificent cosmic odyssey, balancing between the grandeur of the universe and a personal dream. The imagery is boundless, infinite, yet rooted in a profound inner yearning — a wanderer destined for the journey, captivated by forces beyond understanding.
May 5th, 2025 10:16
Apocalyptic delirium
Ellen Marsell said:
A catarsis poem: civilization in the mirror of its decline.
May 3rd, 2025 13:41
Ellen Marsell said:
A catarsis poem: civilization in the mirror of its decline.
May 3rd, 2025 13:41
Apocalyptic delirium
sorenbarrett said:
The meaninglessness of life reflected in intelligence that must be disconnected from our dreams. Whether night dreams or daydreams or even those that develop into goals they must be disconnected. A deep poem for reflection
May 3rd, 2025 09:14
sorenbarrett said:
The meaninglessness of life reflected in intelligence that must be disconnected from our dreams. Whether night dreams or daydreams or even those that develop into goals they must be disconnected. A deep poem for reflection
May 3rd, 2025 09:14
Rhapsody
Sealgair said:
Music as the memory of the soul — capable of surviving even death.
A very philosophical poem. I love it.
May 2nd, 2025 16:06
Sealgair said:
Music as the memory of the soul — capable of surviving even death.
A very philosophical poem. I love it.
May 2nd, 2025 16:06
Rhapsody
Ellen Marsell said:
As Plato wrote, music leads the soul to remember the divine. In “Rhapsody” it becomes that which survives the destruction of the body, the breaking of a line, tears and death. Music is the very coin with which the hero can pay the crossing. In it is forgiveness, light and immortality in one.
May 2nd, 2025 13:25
Ellen Marsell said:
As Plato wrote, music leads the soul to remember the divine. In “Rhapsody” it becomes that which survives the destruction of the body, the breaking of a line, tears and death. Music is the very coin with which the hero can pay the crossing. In it is forgiveness, light and immortality in one.
May 2nd, 2025 13:25
Rhapsody
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem of a most gothic nature using most all symbols of death. Well written and more poetic than any horror story. Well done
May 2nd, 2025 12:28
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem of a most gothic nature using most all symbols of death. Well written and more poetic than any horror story. Well done
May 2nd, 2025 12:28
Cape Reinga
Sealgair said:
No one would stop you from enjoying the scenery sitting on the hillside as there are not many tourists. However, the best time to get to Reinga is at sunset in good weather. It is quite windy on the Cape.
I really enjoyed reading this poem. Beautiful work!
May 1st, 2025 16:24
Sealgair said:
No one would stop you from enjoying the scenery sitting on the hillside as there are not many tourists. However, the best time to get to Reinga is at sunset in good weather. It is quite windy on the Cape.
I really enjoyed reading this poem. Beautiful work!
May 1st, 2025 16:24
Cape Reinga
Ellen Marsell said:
Cape Reinga is a symbolic place. On the one hand, it\'s the tip of the land in front of the vast ocean. But for the Maori, it is a sacred place from which souls depart to the next world. Emotionally and spiritually, it is the boundary where maps, routes and landmarks end. It\'s a place where one is left to one\'s own devices. It is not a place where answers are sought, but a place where silence is sought ... Great poem!
May 1st, 2025 13:49
Ellen Marsell said:
Cape Reinga is a symbolic place. On the one hand, it\'s the tip of the land in front of the vast ocean. But for the Maori, it is a sacred place from which souls depart to the next world. Emotionally and spiritually, it is the boundary where maps, routes and landmarks end. It\'s a place where one is left to one\'s own devices. It is not a place where answers are sought, but a place where silence is sought ... Great poem!
May 1st, 2025 13:49
Cape Reinga
Lorenz said:
A sacred place for the Maoris
Te Rerenga Wairua \'\' Where spirits take flight \'\'
May 1st, 2025 05:35
Lorenz said:
A sacred place for the Maoris
Te Rerenga Wairua \'\' Where spirits take flight \'\'
May 1st, 2025 05:35
Cape Reinga
sorenbarrett said:
Traveler indeed in body, mind and spirit through other times and dimensions. Lovely symbols used in this poem.
May 1st, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
Traveler indeed in body, mind and spirit through other times and dimensions. Lovely symbols used in this poem.
May 1st, 2025 05:10
Sublime uncreature
Ellen Marsell said:
An inner dialogue with the one who grants inspiration — but demands complete self-surrender in return.
April 29th, 2025 10:09
Ellen Marsell said:
An inner dialogue with the one who grants inspiration — but demands complete self-surrender in return.
April 29th, 2025 10:09
Sublime uncreature
sorenbarrett said:
It is in contradiction that wisdom is found, the birth of nature on a cross of death. A lovely poem of a quest for the unattainable and so are all true quests. Ephemeral and everchanging truth is born and dies to be resurrected from phoenix ashes. A very deep poem in the quest for true poetry.
April 29th, 2025 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
It is in contradiction that wisdom is found, the birth of nature on a cross of death. A lovely poem of a quest for the unattainable and so are all true quests. Ephemeral and everchanging truth is born and dies to be resurrected from phoenix ashes. A very deep poem in the quest for true poetry.
April 29th, 2025 06:16
Let\'s share
Ellen Marsell said:
A farewell to an era - both personal and cultural. A wonderful poem!
April 28th, 2025 11:16
Ellen Marsell said:
A farewell to an era - both personal and cultural. A wonderful poem!
April 28th, 2025 11:16
Let\'s share
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for so many great lines and metaphors in this poem. It keeps its course and takes one to the past and its most pleasant moments sweetening the bitterness of the present. It is the sugar in the black coffee. Lovely as always
April 28th, 2025 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for so many great lines and metaphors in this poem. It keeps its course and takes one to the past and its most pleasant moments sweetening the bitterness of the present. It is the sugar in the black coffee. Lovely as always
April 28th, 2025 09:37
The mummy story
Ellen Marsell said:
This final question is like a moral judgment on the era. The abduction of paradise, the destruction of memory, the transformation of the past into a stage set - all this has a price.
April 27th, 2025 11:00
Ellen Marsell said:
This final question is like a moral judgment on the era. The abduction of paradise, the destruction of memory, the transformation of the past into a stage set - all this has a price.
April 27th, 2025 11:00
The mummy story
sorenbarrett said:
Do I detect a metaphor here? The last lines and question make me wonder. A lovely write of history now present.
April 27th, 2025 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
Do I detect a metaphor here? The last lines and question make me wonder. A lovely write of history now present.
April 27th, 2025 06:20
My lady death
Ellen Marsell said:
A poetic requiem, written with love, grace, and dignity. It is not about fear, but about acceptance. A magnificent work!
April 26th, 2025 11:07
Ellen Marsell said:
A poetic requiem, written with love, grace, and dignity. It is not about fear, but about acceptance. A magnificent work!
April 26th, 2025 11:07
Bolerondo
Ellen Marsell said:
The eternal return, the circle of life, death and memory.
I love the pulsating musicality of your poem. Already from the first lines it creates a hypnotic mood.
April 26th, 2025 10:59
Ellen Marsell said:
The eternal return, the circle of life, death and memory.
I love the pulsating musicality of your poem. Already from the first lines it creates a hypnotic mood.
April 26th, 2025 10:59
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