Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Crime boulevard
Ellen Marsell said:
La poésie est le pont que le poète construit sur l\'abîme de sa frustration.
March 4th, 2024 15:11
Ellen Marsell said:
La poésie est le pont que le poète construit sur l\'abîme de sa frustration.
March 4th, 2024 15:11
Spleen
Ellen Marsell said:
There is a harmony in sadness, as in music, where minor notes create a special beauty...
February 27th, 2024 11:58
Ellen Marsell said:
There is a harmony in sadness, as in music, where minor notes create a special beauty...
February 27th, 2024 11:58
The little old lady
Aida said:
‘ It\'s important to close old people\'s eyes !
we sometime forget to do it ...’ very funny at the same time quite sad, like the whole poem. Nice job on pulling that out !!
February 27th, 2024 03:59
Aida said:
‘ It\'s important to close old people\'s eyes !
we sometime forget to do it ...’ very funny at the same time quite sad, like the whole poem. Nice job on pulling that out !!
February 27th, 2024 03:59
Universal communion
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a poetic expression of gaining wisdom and discovering what is beyond ordinary perception. A pure heart, a pure soul, faith and openness to mysterious messages, finding joy and grace in the simple moments of life.
February 26th, 2024 11:57
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a poetic expression of gaining wisdom and discovering what is beyond ordinary perception. A pure heart, a pure soul, faith and openness to mysterious messages, finding joy and grace in the simple moments of life.
February 26th, 2024 11:57
Universal communion
Bella Shepard said:
The sublimity of simply \"being\" is incredible in this poem. You have captured something so fundamental, and yet so enigmatical. If we can just let it be, everything falls into place, and we find harmony. You are a seer of pure truth my friend.
February 26th, 2024 10:16
Bella Shepard said:
The sublimity of simply \"being\" is incredible in this poem. You have captured something so fundamental, and yet so enigmatical. If we can just let it be, everything falls into place, and we find harmony. You are a seer of pure truth my friend.
February 26th, 2024 10:16
The little old lady
Ellen Marsell said:
La vie montre que les gens décents ont une vie plus dure et partent plus vite.
February 23rd, 2024 08:32
Ellen Marsell said:
La vie montre que les gens décents ont une vie plus dure et partent plus vite.
February 23rd, 2024 08:32
Santa Muerte
Doggerel Dave said:
Too many allusions I can\'t quite get to grips with, but get the general tenor.
Enjoyed muchly your comment:
\" Poetry isn\'t about admiring our little pink buttocks in the mirror of our sobs !\"
Not my pink buttocks either.
February 20th, 2024 18:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Too many allusions I can\'t quite get to grips with, but get the general tenor.
Enjoyed muchly your comment:
\" Poetry isn\'t about admiring our little pink buttocks in the mirror of our sobs !\"
Not my pink buttocks either.
February 20th, 2024 18:34
Santa Muerte
Bella Shepard said:
The saddest day in our long history of existence, is the day we decided we owned everything, and we could judge everyone. The shame is on us. Great write my friend, it digs deep into our illusion of ownership.
February 20th, 2024 14:12
Bella Shepard said:
The saddest day in our long history of existence, is the day we decided we owned everything, and we could judge everyone. The shame is on us. Great write my friend, it digs deep into our illusion of ownership.
February 20th, 2024 14:12
Guitar in the clouds
Alan R said:
lost in a never caressed face ... beautiful expression
February 17th, 2024 08:19
Alan R said:
lost in a never caressed face ... beautiful expression
February 17th, 2024 08:19
Guitar in the clouds
2781 said:
For the birds of the air
Come to the feast.
February 17th, 2024 07:05
2781 said:
For the birds of the air
Come to the feast.
February 17th, 2024 07:05
Mother
Ellen Marsell said:
We take more from the earth than we can give back to it, and that debt resounds in the sobs of the wind and the sounds of smoldering forests...
February 16th, 2024 10:58
Ellen Marsell said:
We take more from the earth than we can give back to it, and that debt resounds in the sobs of the wind and the sounds of smoldering forests...
February 16th, 2024 10:58
Mystical colors
2781 said:
\"And the serpent said unto the woman, Ye shall not surely die:.
February 16th, 2024 00:58
2781 said:
\"And the serpent said unto the woman, Ye shall not surely die:.
February 16th, 2024 00:58
Mystical colors
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful work... An exotic journey through amazing symbolic imagery. Very inspiring!
February 14th, 2024 12:01
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful work... An exotic journey through amazing symbolic imagery. Very inspiring!
February 14th, 2024 12:01
Cabaret
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve done a remarkable job of contrasting life in Berlin, before and after the Nazi\'s gained power. I would say a difficult task, and one you\'ve done it admirably!
February 11th, 2024 14:47
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve done a remarkable job of contrasting life in Berlin, before and after the Nazi\'s gained power. I would say a difficult task, and one you\'ve done it admirably!
February 11th, 2024 14:47
Cabaret
Ellen Marsell said:
The atmosphere of the city with its cultural contradictions and historical legacy. The multifaceted nature of the past and present, eloquently and profoundly reflecting both glitter and shadows.
February 11th, 2024 11:51
Ellen Marsell said:
The atmosphere of the city with its cultural contradictions and historical legacy. The multifaceted nature of the past and present, eloquently and profoundly reflecting both glitter and shadows.
February 11th, 2024 11:51
He\'s back !
Thoughtless said:
The end is always a beginning rather than an end.
February 10th, 2024 11:14
Thoughtless said:
The end is always a beginning rather than an end.
February 10th, 2024 11:14
Is she ?
Bella Shepard said:
The face, seared into the mind of the lover, haunting memory that lingers on the edge of reallity. Incredible verse!
February 9th, 2024 15:10
Bella Shepard said:
The face, seared into the mind of the lover, haunting memory that lingers on the edge of reallity. Incredible verse!
February 9th, 2024 15:10
Hours
Ellen Marsell said:
Un poème inspirant. Des images colorées qui personnifient le temps (les heures de la vie) comme une essence divine présente dans divers aspects de la vie humaine.
Comprenons-nous vraiment la signification du temps et les messages qu\'il véhicule?
February 8th, 2024 11:54
Ellen Marsell said:
Un poème inspirant. Des images colorées qui personnifient le temps (les heures de la vie) comme une essence divine présente dans divers aspects de la vie humaine.
Comprenons-nous vraiment la signification du temps et les messages qu\'il véhicule?
February 8th, 2024 11:54
A ritual
Bella Shepard said:
There is the anticipation, the preparation, the waiting as it brews and fills the air with its tantalizing aroma, and finally the drinking which is pure heaven. It caresses the brain and induces euphoria. What\'s not to love? Incredible presentation of this beloved, seductive stimulant. Would love another cup!
February 6th, 2024 16:40
Bella Shepard said:
There is the anticipation, the preparation, the waiting as it brews and fills the air with its tantalizing aroma, and finally the drinking which is pure heaven. It caresses the brain and induces euphoria. What\'s not to love? Incredible presentation of this beloved, seductive stimulant. Would love another cup!
February 6th, 2024 16:40
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