Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Deus ex machina
sorenbarrett said:
Many great questions raised but my favorite line is the last (Or am I just the hero of a fairy tale for Asperger\'s children) perfect!
October 21st, 2024 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Many great questions raised but my favorite line is the last (Or am I just the hero of a fairy tale for Asperger\'s children) perfect!
October 21st, 2024 04:58
Ecce homo
Ellen Marsell said:
A character trapped in a historical and religious machine. Excellent writing!
October 20th, 2024 10:48
Ellen Marsell said:
A character trapped in a historical and religious machine. Excellent writing!
October 20th, 2024 10:48
The day to come
sorenbarrett said:
Repleat with great lines (I\'m just a rebel talking to angels, suck the bitter milk of destiny, life is just a subway platform where we\'re waiting for the day to come) Great write
October 19th, 2024 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
Repleat with great lines (I\'m just a rebel talking to angels, suck the bitter milk of destiny, life is just a subway platform where we\'re waiting for the day to come) Great write
October 19th, 2024 10:56
The day to come
Ellen Marsell said:
Everything happens for you to learn: everything happens to end.
An impressive poem, my friend!
October 19th, 2024 05:08
Ellen Marsell said:
Everything happens for you to learn: everything happens to end.
An impressive poem, my friend!
October 19th, 2024 05:08
Fortress
sorenbarrett said:
Bold fantasy pervades a poem set in historic and exotic images where if seen as a metaphor love and patience face the world
October 18th, 2024 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
Bold fantasy pervades a poem set in historic and exotic images where if seen as a metaphor love and patience face the world
October 18th, 2024 05:21
Fortress
Ellen Marsell said:
I love it! It\'s like I\'ve been to this fortress myself and watched the flight of the eagle, pondering, waiting. What inspired you to write this poem?
October 18th, 2024 05:13
Ellen Marsell said:
I love it! It\'s like I\'ve been to this fortress myself and watched the flight of the eagle, pondering, waiting. What inspired you to write this poem?
October 18th, 2024 05:13
Flowers
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s a beautifully written ode to the unbridled side of nature and human emotion. An inspiring piece...
October 17th, 2024 07:17
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s a beautifully written ode to the unbridled side of nature and human emotion. An inspiring piece...
October 17th, 2024 07:17
Vixit
Ellen Marsell said:
Longing for the past, hope for the future, humility and wisdom in simplicity. One can feel the soul and motifs of old Russia. Bravo!
October 16th, 2024 14:17
Ellen Marsell said:
Longing for the past, hope for the future, humility and wisdom in simplicity. One can feel the soul and motifs of old Russia. Bravo!
October 16th, 2024 14:17
Vixit
sorenbarrett said:
Thought I recognized the form and style. Too bright for Dostoevsky, too heavy for Turgenev.
October 16th, 2024 10:47
sorenbarrett said:
Thought I recognized the form and style. Too bright for Dostoevsky, too heavy for Turgenev.
October 16th, 2024 10:47
Black hole
peet said:
Well, there is madness there and a touch of darkness. A rare mix of words but well thought out. The fact is the line \"I\'m gonna die old and alone ,
coming out of a black hole\" says it all. No one can stop that.
October 15th, 2024 13:04
peet said:
Well, there is madness there and a touch of darkness. A rare mix of words but well thought out. The fact is the line \"I\'m gonna die old and alone ,
coming out of a black hole\" says it all. No one can stop that.
October 15th, 2024 13:04
Black hole
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s a rather tense and dark piece with some impressive imagery!
October 15th, 2024 07:15
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s a rather tense and dark piece with some impressive imagery!
October 15th, 2024 07:15
The voice of blood
Ellen Marsell said:
The cycle of violence and justice is inextricably linked to the silent but omnipresent voice of blood.
October 12th, 2024 10:42
Ellen Marsell said:
The cycle of violence and justice is inextricably linked to the silent but omnipresent voice of blood.
October 12th, 2024 10:42
Ordo ab chao
Ellen Marsell said:
It seems like a poetic commentary on the absurdity of life. I like your play with imagery. Great!
October 10th, 2024 10:22
Ellen Marsell said:
It seems like a poetic commentary on the absurdity of life. I like your play with imagery. Great!
October 10th, 2024 10:22
Ordo ab chao
MaxSmith said:
Hey Lorenz
Nice to see your still writing.
I am a lonely atom in an answer without a question
I get that, it holds so much power.
Great read Lorenz
October 10th, 2024 09:38
MaxSmith said:
Hey Lorenz
Nice to see your still writing.
I am a lonely atom in an answer without a question
I get that, it holds so much power.
Great read Lorenz
October 10th, 2024 09:38
Gardens
Dan Williams said:
Gardens of every mind\'s eye seem collectively satisfying. Yours seems well thought out, or experienced. Nice.
October 7th, 2024 00:12
Dan Williams said:
Gardens of every mind\'s eye seem collectively satisfying. Yours seems well thought out, or experienced. Nice.
October 7th, 2024 00:12
Gardens
jarcher54 said:
Nice combination of the magic of painting and poetry. Both tell stories, one through mute images, one through sightless words... but somehow they both end up stirring the imagination and transporting the audience!
October 6th, 2024 12:23
jarcher54 said:
Nice combination of the magic of painting and poetry. Both tell stories, one through mute images, one through sightless words... but somehow they both end up stirring the imagination and transporting the audience!
October 6th, 2024 12:23
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