Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Megapolar blues
sorenbarrett said:
Colors from blue, black, white, grey, green, bloody (red) colors of decay. The very mention of rotten. Such word play as well Lorenz leaves this a fave
January 29th, 2026 14:03
sorenbarrett said:
Colors from blue, black, white, grey, green, bloody (red) colors of decay. The very mention of rotten. Such word play as well Lorenz leaves this a fave
January 29th, 2026 14:03
My daily madness
Ellen Marsell said:
An unusual poem that feels like an inner monologue under pressure, when the mind is working at its limit but still keeping control. There’s fatigue, there’s irony, and an intellectual distance. Well written!
January 28th, 2026 13:44
Ellen Marsell said:
An unusual poem that feels like an inner monologue under pressure, when the mind is working at its limit but still keeping control. There’s fatigue, there’s irony, and an intellectual distance. Well written!
January 28th, 2026 13:44
My daily madness
sorenbarrett said:
Mayhem no doubt a derivative of May hymn a sacred right of spring the rebirth of the Phoenix that suicided in flames. A most interesting write Lorenz where dr. Kevorkian should be cited if not receive a medal of honor. Well done
January 28th, 2026 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
Mayhem no doubt a derivative of May hymn a sacred right of spring the rebirth of the Phoenix that suicided in flames. A most interesting write Lorenz where dr. Kevorkian should be cited if not receive a medal of honor. Well done
January 28th, 2026 12:05
The gardens of Babylon
sorenbarrett said:
On clay tablets copper is sold a deal poorly made. In Gobekli Tepe people gathered to celebrate gods of sun. A wonderful write or maybe rite Lorenz
January 27th, 2026 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
On clay tablets copper is sold a deal poorly made. In Gobekli Tepe people gathered to celebrate gods of sun. A wonderful write or maybe rite Lorenz
January 27th, 2026 13:12
The gardens of Babylon
Ellen Marsell said:
A secret inner garden, where poetry is still alive, where desire and memory do not submit to history. A beautiful poem.
January 27th, 2026 12:37
Ellen Marsell said:
A secret inner garden, where poetry is still alive, where desire and memory do not submit to history. A beautiful poem.
January 27th, 2026 12:37
A flight to New York
sorenbarrett said:
New York becomes Minnesota in a craps shoot where two bullets give snake eyes and two sixes ride box cars. Surreal Lorenz and the mayor says you need to surrender your gun.
January 26th, 2026 13:52
sorenbarrett said:
New York becomes Minnesota in a craps shoot where two bullets give snake eyes and two sixes ride box cars. Surreal Lorenz and the mayor says you need to surrender your gun.
January 26th, 2026 13:52
A flight to New York
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem that does not promise New York but reveals what we are fleeing by going there.
January 26th, 2026 13:29
Ellen Marsell said:
A poem that does not promise New York but reveals what we are fleeing by going there.
January 26th, 2026 13:29
Interior night
sorenbarrett said:
Demonic possession for a schizophrenic child or dementia stricken old man. Let angels fly form such doors and trephine their skulls with stone chisels and wooden mallets.
January 24th, 2026 12:33
sorenbarrett said:
Demonic possession for a schizophrenic child or dementia stricken old man. Let angels fly form such doors and trephine their skulls with stone chisels and wooden mallets.
January 24th, 2026 12:33
A world beyond men
Sealgair said:
In this world, social roles, dreams, and fears no longer matter. What remains is a single human being facing the void and his decision.
A superb poem.
January 22nd, 2026 16:07
Sealgair said:
In this world, social roles, dreams, and fears no longer matter. What remains is a single human being facing the void and his decision.
A superb poem.
January 22nd, 2026 16:07
A world beyond men
Lorenz said:
Never such a personality have accepted to end his life as a cripple .His tortured feet carried him until the very last moment .
January 22nd, 2026 14:07
Lorenz said:
Never such a personality have accepted to end his life as a cripple .His tortured feet carried him until the very last moment .
January 22nd, 2026 14:07
A world beyond men
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a moral exploration of the form of human dignity under inhuman conditions. An impressive text.
January 22nd, 2026 13:55
Ellen Marsell said:
It is a moral exploration of the form of human dignity under inhuman conditions. An impressive text.
January 22nd, 2026 13:55
A world beyond men
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write Lorenz it reads as journal entries in a way and feels like a voice from the past. Well done.
January 22nd, 2026 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write Lorenz it reads as journal entries in a way and feels like a voice from the past. Well done.
January 22nd, 2026 13:07
Critical Threshold
Ellen Marsell said:
Do we know at all that the play is already over, or are we still seated in the hall, applauding the void? A striking piece, Lorenz.
January 21st, 2026 12:45
Ellen Marsell said:
Do we know at all that the play is already over, or are we still seated in the hall, applauding the void? A striking piece, Lorenz.
January 21st, 2026 12:45
Critical Threshold
sorenbarrett said:
Loved Bosch paintings had several prints of his framed and gave them to my son. Like a fever dream they tell the story in a dark surreal world and not only is everything visible in the hidden but much is hidden in the visible. Well done Lorenz
January 21st, 2026 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
Loved Bosch paintings had several prints of his framed and gave them to my son. Like a fever dream they tell the story in a dark surreal world and not only is everything visible in the hidden but much is hidden in the visible. Well done Lorenz
January 21st, 2026 12:13
Acta est fabula
Ellen Marsell said:
Dark, ironic satire of desacralized times. Impressive!
January 19th, 2026 13:15
Ellen Marsell said:
Dark, ironic satire of desacralized times. Impressive!
January 19th, 2026 13:15
Acta est fabula
sorenbarrett said:
It\'s all a fable of folly, mirthful magic, a laughing joke of the gods. Black humor they say. Never the less in the Eden of the ignorant there is plenty of fruit on the tree, no matter that it is forbidden. What are they going to do shoot you in the head for noncompliance? Jokes on them then they have to support you and put up with your horseshit in paradise of hell. Would be a shame to fuck those two places up.
January 19th, 2026 12:51
sorenbarrett said:
It\'s all a fable of folly, mirthful magic, a laughing joke of the gods. Black humor they say. Never the less in the Eden of the ignorant there is plenty of fruit on the tree, no matter that it is forbidden. What are they going to do shoot you in the head for noncompliance? Jokes on them then they have to support you and put up with your horseshit in paradise of hell. Would be a shame to fuck those two places up.
January 19th, 2026 12:51
Toba
Paul Bell said:
I think when Toba gets angry we all see the consequences.
Now, a super Toba, whose impact lasted years, that\'s a real impact.
Nature at work, we live in awe.
January 17th, 2026 06:19
Paul Bell said:
I think when Toba gets angry we all see the consequences.
Now, a super Toba, whose impact lasted years, that\'s a real impact.
Nature at work, we live in awe.
January 17th, 2026 06:19
Toba
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful metaphors and a rare sense of the ancient spirit!
January 16th, 2026 12:16
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful metaphors and a rare sense of the ancient spirit!
January 16th, 2026 12:16
Toba
sorenbarrett said:
This seems nature turned to myth and myth to reality. A lovely poem of metaphor with significant vibrant power. Viril I would call it
January 16th, 2026 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
This seems nature turned to myth and myth to reality. A lovely poem of metaphor with significant vibrant power. Viril I would call it
January 16th, 2026 12:16
Ä Summersmorge
Ellen Marsell said:
A rare poem, beautiful in its darkness and honesty.
January 13th, 2026 13:28
Ellen Marsell said:
A rare poem, beautiful in its darkness and honesty.
January 13th, 2026 13:28
Ä Summersmorge
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely dream reminiscent of Schiller, enemy now Friendship. Such lovely pastoral delight in the first part of this poem that reduces into surreal poetry at the end. Clues are dropped and from those seeds grow hopes and future dreams. Lovely
January 13th, 2026 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely dream reminiscent of Schiller, enemy now Friendship. Such lovely pastoral delight in the first part of this poem that reduces into surreal poetry at the end. Clues are dropped and from those seeds grow hopes and future dreams. Lovely
January 13th, 2026 11:55
We will meet again
NafisaSB said:
wishing you meet up soonest - all the best... a good write
January 13th, 2026 02:39
NafisaSB said:
wishing you meet up soonest - all the best... a good write
January 13th, 2026 02:39
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