Comments received on poems by Lorenz
The city
Ellen Marsell said:
The urge to leave that place, yet realize that it has become a part of you. I love it!
November 17th, 2024 17:33
Ellen Marsell said:
The urge to leave that place, yet realize that it has become a part of you. I love it!
November 17th, 2024 17:33
The city
sorenbarrett said:
Great descriptors of a city marked in metaphor and painted in symbols. Beautiful!
November 17th, 2024 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
Great descriptors of a city marked in metaphor and painted in symbols. Beautiful!
November 17th, 2024 16:25
Aging
Ellen Marsell said:
I like these images and the subtle humor with which you play around the theme of aging. Great!
November 16th, 2024 12:40
Ellen Marsell said:
I like these images and the subtle humor with which you play around the theme of aging. Great!
November 16th, 2024 12:40
Aging
sorenbarrett said:
Love the anthropomorphic approach to this poem. A most fun read
November 16th, 2024 08:48
sorenbarrett said:
Love the anthropomorphic approach to this poem. A most fun read
November 16th, 2024 08:48
Silence
Ellen Marsell said:
Something like a cry of the soul, striving for silence, peace and harmony in contrast to the chaos and noise of modernity. A strong and imaginative poem with a pronounced poetic sensibility.
November 15th, 2024 10:03
Ellen Marsell said:
Something like a cry of the soul, striving for silence, peace and harmony in contrast to the chaos and noise of modernity. A strong and imaginative poem with a pronounced poetic sensibility.
November 15th, 2024 10:03
Silence
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful statement, this poem speaks of strong feelings. Very strongly written.
November 15th, 2024 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful statement, this poem speaks of strong feelings. Very strongly written.
November 15th, 2024 09:13
Somewhere along my way
sorenbarrett said:
In reading this, I feel like I have just come out of a purple haze of the 60s even though it speaks of a blue haze may be more modern. I like the last line and it provokes thought about avatars all together
November 14th, 2024 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
In reading this, I feel like I have just come out of a purple haze of the 60s even though it speaks of a blue haze may be more modern. I like the last line and it provokes thought about avatars all together
November 14th, 2024 14:34
Somewhere along my way
Lorenz said:
The shipwreck of a generation\'s illusions !
November 14th, 2024 10:32
Lorenz said:
The shipwreck of a generation\'s illusions !
November 14th, 2024 10:32
Somewhere along my way
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem has a rich, reflective character, conveying the spirit of a way that is both physical and existential in nature. A way full of illusions, impermanence and fleeting moments where you encounter different facets of yourself and the world around you, leaving behind a trail of encounters and losses.
November 14th, 2024 10:26
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem has a rich, reflective character, conveying the spirit of a way that is both physical and existential in nature. A way full of illusions, impermanence and fleeting moments where you encounter different facets of yourself and the world around you, leaving behind a trail of encounters and losses.
November 14th, 2024 10:26
Mystical fluids
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem creates an image of the inextricable link between life and death. It is a lyrical monologue about the coming and going nature of life. Powerful metaphors conjure up the ephemerality of body and soul, weaving an intimate conversation between Eros (love, striving for life) and Thanatos (death, dissolution). The union of these opposing forces creates a mystical atmosphere.
November 13th, 2024 12:00
Ellen Marsell said:
The poem creates an image of the inextricable link between life and death. It is a lyrical monologue about the coming and going nature of life. Powerful metaphors conjure up the ephemerality of body and soul, weaving an intimate conversation between Eros (love, striving for life) and Thanatos (death, dissolution). The union of these opposing forces creates a mystical atmosphere.
November 13th, 2024 12:00
Mystical fluids
sorenbarrett said:
This one folks strong images of the body dissolving into liquid. At first, not a pleasant thought, but with some reflection, it gives new meaning to the old passage, ashes to ashes and dust dust returning to the Earth, maybe returning to the sea a beautiful poem.
November 13th, 2024 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
This one folks strong images of the body dissolving into liquid. At first, not a pleasant thought, but with some reflection, it gives new meaning to the old passage, ashes to ashes and dust dust returning to the Earth, maybe returning to the sea a beautiful poem.
November 13th, 2024 05:19
There\'s the one who stays
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Lorenz this has a bit of a haunting feel to it and a sense of longing. Lovely
November 12th, 2024 10:35
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Lorenz this has a bit of a haunting feel to it and a sense of longing. Lovely
November 12th, 2024 10:35
There\'s the one who stays
Ellen Marsell said:
Memory is the only paradise from which we cannot be banished.
November 12th, 2024 07:21
Ellen Marsell said:
Memory is the only paradise from which we cannot be banished.
November 12th, 2024 07:21
A letter
Lorenz said:
I\'am not part of this world which I observe like a cat behind the curtain !
November 11th, 2024 12:55
Lorenz said:
I\'am not part of this world which I observe like a cat behind the curtain !
November 11th, 2024 12:55
A letter
Ellen Marsell said:
In these lines one can sense a deep weariness and even alienation from a world consumed by oblivion and decay.
November 11th, 2024 12:49
Ellen Marsell said:
In these lines one can sense a deep weariness and even alienation from a world consumed by oblivion and decay.
November 11th, 2024 12:49
Facing the dragon
Ellen Marsell said:
The beauty of this poem is in its contradictions: the horror and mesmerizing power of the dragon, despair and a glimmer of hope in the distant flicker of light, which may be just the breath of this mythical creature.
You invite to a meeting with the abyss - not only external, but also internal.
Captivating piece and magnificent images!
November 10th, 2024 14:57
Ellen Marsell said:
The beauty of this poem is in its contradictions: the horror and mesmerizing power of the dragon, despair and a glimmer of hope in the distant flicker of light, which may be just the breath of this mythical creature.
You invite to a meeting with the abyss - not only external, but also internal.
Captivating piece and magnificent images!
November 10th, 2024 14:57
Facing the dragon
sorenbarrett said:
A whimsical scent of distance well from the shores of any known place. Nicely stated.
November 10th, 2024 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
A whimsical scent of distance well from the shores of any known place. Nicely stated.
November 10th, 2024 12:07
Love cruise
Dan Williams said:
I believe people who say they understand love are either liars or fools. You take a really good stab at it though. Nice work.
November 10th, 2024 01:20
Dan Williams said:
I believe people who say they understand love are either liars or fools. You take a really good stab at it though. Nice work.
November 10th, 2024 01:20
Love cruise
Ellen Marsell said:
The combination of humor and cynicism gives your poem a darkish charm. Great!
November 9th, 2024 07:39
Ellen Marsell said:
The combination of humor and cynicism gives your poem a darkish charm. Great!
November 9th, 2024 07:39
Love cruise
Cassie58 said:
Such a fun write Lorenz. Loved the clever ending:)
November 9th, 2024 07:17
Cassie58 said:
Such a fun write Lorenz. Loved the clever ending:)
November 9th, 2024 07:17
Dead in Venice
Ellen Marsell said:
Venice has long symbolized vice, temptation, and hidden danger, making it a source of inspiration for some writers and poets.
This poem is like a creepy ballad. Roberto Succo, infamous for his cruelty, is felt as a ghost wandering through Venice. His image gives the poem an ominous tone, combining the beauty of Venice with tragedy and decay.
November 8th, 2024 09:37
Ellen Marsell said:
Venice has long symbolized vice, temptation, and hidden danger, making it a source of inspiration for some writers and poets.
This poem is like a creepy ballad. Roberto Succo, infamous for his cruelty, is felt as a ghost wandering through Venice. His image gives the poem an ominous tone, combining the beauty of Venice with tragedy and decay.
November 8th, 2024 09:37
Dead in Venice
sorenbarrett said:
A dark and angry tone to this well written piece. It speaks of foul deeds and has a fotting smell that takes the reader to the shadows. Very nicely done
November 8th, 2024 06:36
sorenbarrett said:
A dark and angry tone to this well written piece. It speaks of foul deeds and has a fotting smell that takes the reader to the shadows. Very nicely done
November 8th, 2024 06:36
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