Comments received on poems by gray0328
Love, Light, Way
sorenbarrett said:
We falter in our ignorance and look for guidance. A poem of direction. Very nice
March 31st, 2025 05:51
sorenbarrett said:
We falter in our ignorance and look for guidance. A poem of direction. Very nice
March 31st, 2025 05:51
The Mirror and the Window
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that has seduced me into a fave. It mysteriously has biblical images woven in (only in twos) yet speaks in metaphor with mirror and window. There is gentle internal near rhyme that together with the meter caries the reader onward as if rolling down hill to where it ends with the last two wonderful lines. Beautiful
March 30th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that has seduced me into a fave. It mysteriously has biblical images woven in (only in twos) yet speaks in metaphor with mirror and window. There is gentle internal near rhyme that together with the meter caries the reader onward as if rolling down hill to where it ends with the last two wonderful lines. Beautiful
March 30th, 2025 04:33
In Order to Change
arqios said:
Happy birthday Gray, keep fighting the good fight, keep running your race🙏🏻🕊
March 28th, 2025 17:40
arqios said:
Happy birthday Gray, keep fighting the good fight, keep running your race🙏🏻🕊
March 28th, 2025 17:40
In Order to Change
sorenbarrett said:
I love the line (room doused in yesterday\'s shadows) a poem of gathering strength and the leaving behind those shadows of yesterday. A wonderful write.
March 28th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
I love the line (room doused in yesterday\'s shadows) a poem of gathering strength and the leaving behind those shadows of yesterday. A wonderful write.
March 28th, 2025 04:37
We Played \"Sorry\"
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how much you can get to know about a person playing a game with them. This poem brought images and feelings of family unity and joy from times past when people actually spent time together. A lovely feel.
March 27th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how much you can get to know about a person playing a game with them. This poem brought images and feelings of family unity and joy from times past when people actually spent time together. A lovely feel.
March 27th, 2025 04:46
The Dust Bowl Lesson
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren always appreciate your feedback
March 26th, 2025 12:25
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren always appreciate your feedback
March 26th, 2025 12:25
The Dust Bowl Lesson
sorenbarrett said:
What a great description done so poetically. A very nice piece Gray
March 26th, 2025 11:40
sorenbarrett said:
What a great description done so poetically. A very nice piece Gray
March 26th, 2025 11:40
The Sacred Thread
sorenbarrett said:
Gray your poems ring with rhyme and such great meter your word choice is so well done. Very nice my friend
March 25th, 2025 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
Gray your poems ring with rhyme and such great meter your word choice is so well done. Very nice my friend
March 25th, 2025 13:13
There is an Orchard Within Us
Eugene S. said:
Simple, beautiful, and an understanding that can only come from experience. 👍
March 24th, 2025 18:00
Eugene S. said:
Simple, beautiful, and an understanding that can only come from experience. 👍
March 24th, 2025 18:00
There is an Orchard Within Us
sorenbarrett said:
(Affection swells a crimson sphere, while joy drips like golden dew) now there is a lovely line. Your word magic is amazing and to be envied. Like Eve you tempt me with your apple. A peaceful and serene poem of exquisite tranquility. I loved it and for that one line a fave.
March 24th, 2025 15:31
sorenbarrett said:
(Affection swells a crimson sphere, while joy drips like golden dew) now there is a lovely line. Your word magic is amazing and to be envied. Like Eve you tempt me with your apple. A peaceful and serene poem of exquisite tranquility. I loved it and for that one line a fave.
March 24th, 2025 15:31
Pseudo Intellectual
MR.apocalypse said:
i know what you mean...... yet I\'m guilty of this at times..... i center my life around knowledge and being right more than i center myself around community and relationships.
March 23rd, 2025 22:19
MR.apocalypse said:
i know what you mean...... yet I\'m guilty of this at times..... i center my life around knowledge and being right more than i center myself around community and relationships.
March 23rd, 2025 22:19
Pseudo Intellectual
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! Wonderful images and metaphors so appropriate to the title. Loved this one a definite fave
March 23rd, 2025 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! Wonderful images and metaphors so appropriate to the title. Loved this one a definite fave
March 23rd, 2025 11:23
Decaf
sorenbarrett said:
I get the sense of aging disillusion and crumbling youthful idealism in this poem. It speaks with the resignation of experience and its shadows fall heavy. Very nicely imaged and worded.
March 22nd, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
I get the sense of aging disillusion and crumbling youthful idealism in this poem. It speaks with the resignation of experience and its shadows fall heavy. Very nicely imaged and worded.
March 22nd, 2025 05:23
God is Love
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem Gray bright with an offering of hope to all. It speaks of love as a saving grace from fear and so it is. If one loves oneself and others as well as all nature there is no room or reason for fear. Most lovely.
March 21st, 2025 13:50
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem Gray bright with an offering of hope to all. It speaks of love as a saving grace from fear and so it is. If one loves oneself and others as well as all nature there is no room or reason for fear. Most lovely.
March 21st, 2025 13:50
give & take
sorenbarrett said:
A clever write with a message wonderfully delivered in question form nicely done and a fave
March 20th, 2025 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
A clever write with a message wonderfully delivered in question form nicely done and a fave
March 20th, 2025 12:59
the aching pedestal
sorenbarrett said:
The glorifying of war, destruction, hate, revenge, pain on TV a spot of glory, fame in ones suffering. A great poem
March 19th, 2025 11:06
sorenbarrett said:
The glorifying of war, destruction, hate, revenge, pain on TV a spot of glory, fame in ones suffering. A great poem
March 19th, 2025 11:06
The Artist\'s Ascent
Parisab said:
Life is the only masterpiece…thought provoking as always
March 17th, 2025 11:59
Parisab said:
Life is the only masterpiece…thought provoking as always
March 17th, 2025 11:59
The Artist\'s Ascent
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren I appreciate your generous feedback
March 17th, 2025 09:16
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren I appreciate your generous feedback
March 17th, 2025 09:16
The Artist\'s Ascent
sorenbarrett said:
A most artistic and poetic presentation of creation. Lovely images spring out as words sooth the readers mind. Truly well done a fave
March 17th, 2025 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
A most artistic and poetic presentation of creation. Lovely images spring out as words sooth the readers mind. Truly well done a fave
March 17th, 2025 07:08
Night Shift
sorenbarrett said:
A plumbing metaphor here in a dream like state of self floating. Very well imaged
March 16th, 2025 12:41
sorenbarrett said:
A plumbing metaphor here in a dream like state of self floating. Very well imaged
March 16th, 2025 12:41
Spring Cleaning
sorenbarrett said:
What a great metaphor the piece of what could be described as myth like. Lovely
March 15th, 2025 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
What a great metaphor the piece of what could be described as myth like. Lovely
March 15th, 2025 10:15
the weight of fire
sorenbarrett said:
This may be about your birthday but many feel it. I love the ingenious and poetic title. The weight of wax is also a great metaphor for age. This poem was very well crafted and is a fave Happy Birthday I still have a few on ya.
March 14th, 2025 11:26
sorenbarrett said:
This may be about your birthday but many feel it. I love the ingenious and poetic title. The weight of wax is also a great metaphor for age. This poem was very well crafted and is a fave Happy Birthday I still have a few on ya.
March 14th, 2025 11:26
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