Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Complaint Experiment
sorenbarrett said:
A great message in a poem. I am a firm believer in the idea of instead of a complaint a suggestion works as well. Nicely done
February 1st, 2025 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
A great message in a poem. I am a firm believer in the idea of instead of a complaint a suggestion works as well. Nicely done
February 1st, 2025 14:22
Delay is the Deadliest form of Denial
sorenbarrett said:
The mood is well set in this write and continues throughout leaving the message of procrastination, inaction, in a stale spot where time has taken a rest all tomorrows never come. Very nicely written
January 31st, 2025 14:03
sorenbarrett said:
The mood is well set in this write and continues throughout leaving the message of procrastination, inaction, in a stale spot where time has taken a rest all tomorrows never come. Very nicely written
January 31st, 2025 14:03
Becoming Less
sorenbarrett said:
A prayer in a poem or maybe a poem in a prayer. Well written
January 30th, 2025 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
A prayer in a poem or maybe a poem in a prayer. Well written
January 30th, 2025 13:23
Becoming Less
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Reminds me of Oswald Chambers, and a host of other teachers whose writing and lectures are so familiar. Exquisitely eloquent with excellent imagery and rendered so very beautifully. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 08:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Reminds me of Oswald Chambers, and a host of other teachers whose writing and lectures are so familiar. Exquisitely eloquent with excellent imagery and rendered so very beautifully. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 08:18
Service in Motion
Cassie58 said:
Really great message in this poem. A beautiful composition. Loved it.
January 29th, 2025 17:45
Cassie58 said:
Really great message in this poem. A beautiful composition. Loved it.
January 29th, 2025 17:45
Service in Motion
sorenbarrett said:
What a great message to send I loved it
January 29th, 2025 13:08
sorenbarrett said:
What a great message to send I loved it
January 29th, 2025 13:08
When the Dead Return
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting and a bit dark this poem speaks of other worldly forces and may be taken as a metaphor for forces we do not understand or are able to see directly.
January 26th, 2025 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting and a bit dark this poem speaks of other worldly forces and may be taken as a metaphor for forces we do not understand or are able to see directly.
January 26th, 2025 06:19
A Preppy Dance of Fabrics
sorenbarrett said:
It is a colorful world that we live in blessed with the ability to see different light spectrums. Nicely written
January 25th, 2025 15:31
sorenbarrett said:
It is a colorful world that we live in blessed with the ability to see different light spectrums. Nicely written
January 25th, 2025 15:31
Childhood\'s Corridor
sorenbarrett said:
The past a foundation set, yet the construction may be varied. A poem full of metaphor. Nicely done
January 23rd, 2025 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
The past a foundation set, yet the construction may be varied. A poem full of metaphor. Nicely done
January 23rd, 2025 07:24
B A T H
Olive Anderson said:
You captured the essence of a human so well.... I\'m curious about the title.. This will stick with me for a long time.
January 23rd, 2025 02:10
Olive Anderson said:
You captured the essence of a human so well.... I\'m curious about the title.. This will stick with me for a long time.
January 23rd, 2025 02:10
B A T H
sorenbarrett said:
Rich with images it speaks in metaphor giving good advice. Very nice
January 22nd, 2025 20:51
sorenbarrett said:
Rich with images it speaks in metaphor giving good advice. Very nice
January 22nd, 2025 20:51
The Age of the Blissfully Ignorant
Mutley Ravishes said:
Ignorance, the parent
Of aversion and craving
A whole lot of time wasting!
Great write.
January 21st, 2025 18:38
Mutley Ravishes said:
Ignorance, the parent
Of aversion and craving
A whole lot of time wasting!
Great write.
January 21st, 2025 18:38
The Age of the Blissfully Ignorant
sorenbarrett said:
Many great lines in this poem and unfortunatly all too true.
January 21st, 2025 18:07
sorenbarrett said:
Many great lines in this poem and unfortunatly all too true.
January 21st, 2025 18:07
A Bartender\'s Gift
sorenbarrett said:
Many great lines and metaphors in this poem of spilt drunken swill a deeper metaphor of communication of a meaningless existence.
January 20th, 2025 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
Many great lines and metaphors in this poem of spilt drunken swill a deeper metaphor of communication of a meaningless existence.
January 20th, 2025 05:57
Santa Ana
Cassie58 said:
Very atmospheric. The wind can be so menacing and destructive. I enjoyed the imagery you created here. You also brought sound to my ears. The silence was shattered. Baton down the hatches. A lively piece.
January 19th, 2025 08:42
Cassie58 said:
Very atmospheric. The wind can be so menacing and destructive. I enjoyed the imagery you created here. You also brought sound to my ears. The silence was shattered. Baton down the hatches. A lively piece.
January 19th, 2025 08:42
You Can\'t Make an Omelette Without Breaking Some Eggs
arqios said:
And sometimes we spill some as well. Such a pleasant process poem, if you could call it that. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 19th, 2025 02:56
arqios said:
And sometimes we spill some as well. Such a pleasant process poem, if you could call it that. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 19th, 2025 02:56
You Can\'t Make an Omelette Without Breaking Some Eggs
isa kemmy said:
uuh i love it just how its brought out i like the poet style
January 18th, 2025 13:01
isa kemmy said:
uuh i love it just how its brought out i like the poet style
January 18th, 2025 13:01
You Can\'t Make an Omelette Without Breaking Some Eggs
Cheeky Missy said:
To think I crazily craft these daily, excepting Sundays. No salt whatsoever since my late father said to not salt scrambled eggs and I carried it over to omelets. Basil and of late mozzerella with diced onion, always diced onion. And what I dearly love is your perspective. Gorgeously rendered with marvelous imagery and a gripping, haunting poignancy. I love it! Thank you for sharing.
January 18th, 2025 12:41
Cheeky Missy said:
To think I crazily craft these daily, excepting Sundays. No salt whatsoever since my late father said to not salt scrambled eggs and I carried it over to omelets. Basil and of late mozzerella with diced onion, always diced onion. And what I dearly love is your perspective. Gorgeously rendered with marvelous imagery and a gripping, haunting poignancy. I love it! Thank you for sharing.
January 18th, 2025 12:41
When All Else Fails
sorenbarrett said:
It used to be that we could fix things that broke or install things but technology has arrived at the point that it either comes assembled and ready to use or if it breaks throw it away and buy a new one. And so it is in relationships as well
January 17th, 2025 13:04
sorenbarrett said:
It used to be that we could fix things that broke or install things but technology has arrived at the point that it either comes assembled and ready to use or if it breaks throw it away and buy a new one. And so it is in relationships as well
January 17th, 2025 13:04
Do You Believe in Magic?
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of good lines in thes poem. \" the stale smell of last night\'s choices.\" Very nicely written.
January 15th, 2025 13:54
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of good lines in thes poem. \" the stale smell of last night\'s choices.\" Very nicely written.
January 15th, 2025 13:54
The Clowns of the Evening News
sorenbarrett said:
Scam and spam, take the ignorants money while you can. Fake news social media screws they all give me the blues. Great write what can you believe?
January 14th, 2025 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
Scam and spam, take the ignorants money while you can. Fake news social media screws they all give me the blues. Great write what can you believe?
January 14th, 2025 13:34
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