Comments received on poems by Kevin Michael Bloor
Heartbreak Day
Pop64 said:
You can feel the torment of the heart breaking in this write. Time offers some solace, but it can get better. Very well crafted a write.
October 16th, 2023 07:19
Pop64 said:
You can feel the torment of the heart breaking in this write. Time offers some solace, but it can get better. Very well crafted a write.
October 16th, 2023 07:19
Heartbreak Day
L. B. Mek said:
(great flow, as eevr
is this dating back
to time before
you n your partner got back together..?)
btw
thanks for checking-in
hoping you and your are doing well..
thanks for sharing dear Poet
(although
Palestine\'s not having a great time either
outside of our affiliations and chosen sides
life is life
and 2\'600 dead/injured
is a lot of wasted life..)
October 16th, 2023 06:30
L. B. Mek said:
(great flow, as eevr
is this dating back
to time before
you n your partner got back together..?)
btw
thanks for checking-in
hoping you and your are doing well..
thanks for sharing dear Poet
(although
Palestine\'s not having a great time either
outside of our affiliations and chosen sides
life is life
and 2\'600 dead/injured
is a lot of wasted life..)
October 16th, 2023 06:30
The Girl From Yesterday
Christina8 said:
This is sad but its actually a great love poem too....Kinda like a \"what might\'ve been\" situation? Loved this
September 26th, 2023 10:50
Christina8 said:
This is sad but its actually a great love poem too....Kinda like a \"what might\'ve been\" situation? Loved this
September 26th, 2023 10:50
Separating Sea
Pop64 said:
I really enjoyed this read, the rhyme, flow, imagery and the subject, while sad. Despite the distance a prevailing love can be found. Beautiful writing.
September 21st, 2023 08:21
Pop64 said:
I really enjoyed this read, the rhyme, flow, imagery and the subject, while sad. Despite the distance a prevailing love can be found. Beautiful writing.
September 21st, 2023 08:21
Retired
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been retired for 11 years now and loved every minute of it Kevin.
All I can advise is that you look out and find something to do that will interest you.
There is an organisation called u3a (University of the Third Age) which has many different type of groups for people of our age to join.
Andy
September 20th, 2023 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been retired for 11 years now and loved every minute of it Kevin.
All I can advise is that you look out and find something to do that will interest you.
There is an organisation called u3a (University of the Third Age) which has many different type of groups for people of our age to join.
Andy
September 20th, 2023 01:12
Deluded
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Kevin, I do hope it is not the end of your poetic road.
Andy
September 18th, 2023 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Kevin, I do hope it is not the end of your poetic road.
Andy
September 18th, 2023 02:00
Deluded
Doggerel Dave said:
You have been around this place (MPS) a long time - your work here always appreciated. Don\'t give up now.. please.
September 18th, 2023 00:54
Doggerel Dave said:
You have been around this place (MPS) a long time - your work here always appreciated. Don\'t give up now.. please.
September 18th, 2023 00:54
The One
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
He knows if you believe...
Great...
Well shouldn\'t everyone be just a tiny little bit... I don\'t know... for example... FREE...
To believe whatever we want or choose to, or even, hold no belief whatsoever...
However... in my most...
HUMBLE...
Opinion... such a thing should always... be... our own choice...
And never something that is an obligation, forced upon others...
That I call... a false-faith.
Some do seem... to believe...
In... I don\'t know... Hitler...
For a tiny example.
Oh well... so very nice... indeed.
Always be... FREE... to believe...
Whatever you want...
Or... believe some things... don\'t believe in others...
Or... believe... in NOTHING...
Whatsoever...
So sorry... as always...
Must somehow be MY FAULT...
Well... I choose not to believe in such.
Quoting... someone...
\"Don\'t blame me, for the sorry state you\'re in\" Ever...
My HUMBLE... opinion.
March 23rd, 2023 19:39
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
He knows if you believe...
Great...
Well shouldn\'t everyone be just a tiny little bit... I don\'t know... for example... FREE...
To believe whatever we want or choose to, or even, hold no belief whatsoever...
However... in my most...
HUMBLE...
Opinion... such a thing should always... be... our own choice...
And never something that is an obligation, forced upon others...
That I call... a false-faith.
Some do seem... to believe...
In... I don\'t know... Hitler...
For a tiny example.
Oh well... so very nice... indeed.
Always be... FREE... to believe...
Whatever you want...
Or... believe some things... don\'t believe in others...
Or... believe... in NOTHING...
Whatsoever...
So sorry... as always...
Must somehow be MY FAULT...
Well... I choose not to believe in such.
Quoting... someone...
\"Don\'t blame me, for the sorry state you\'re in\" Ever...
My HUMBLE... opinion.
March 23rd, 2023 19:39
\'cross the western sea
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
especially enjoyed your unique 10/9 lines and couplets
\'For true love, like in idyllic Greece
has birthed us a golden age of peace,
and we’ll live long in that land of plenty;
we’ll feel no more than a youth of twenty!\'
this, be that infinity of life
inked in that elixir of Poetry...
July 21st, 2022 01:18
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
especially enjoyed your unique 10/9 lines and couplets
\'For true love, like in idyllic Greece
has birthed us a golden age of peace,
and we’ll live long in that land of plenty;
we’ll feel no more than a youth of twenty!\'
this, be that infinity of life
inked in that elixir of Poetry...
July 21st, 2022 01:18
death by dreaming
L. B. Mek said:
\'I’d rather depart as I’m dreaming deep,
slip slyly away\'
what a poetic feast! dear Poet
from Biblical
to Socrates
to Shakespeare
and even Romantic Poetry\'s
most romantic tale..
did you know, story goes
when they found Shelley
they had to burn his body
right there on the coastline
and its said, Mary
grabbed the ashes of his heart
with her bare hands
and kept it, between the pages
of his poem
where he speaks of life\'s unending connectivity
clinging-on to her one and only
\'cor cordium\'
heart of heart\'s...
July 15th, 2022 03:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'I’d rather depart as I’m dreaming deep,
slip slyly away\'
what a poetic feast! dear Poet
from Biblical
to Socrates
to Shakespeare
and even Romantic Poetry\'s
most romantic tale..
did you know, story goes
when they found Shelley
they had to burn his body
right there on the coastline
and its said, Mary
grabbed the ashes of his heart
with her bare hands
and kept it, between the pages
of his poem
where he speaks of life\'s unending connectivity
clinging-on to her one and only
\'cor cordium\'
heart of heart\'s...
July 15th, 2022 03:32
soldiers
MDStone said:
Very well written and delivered. Each line as packed and powerful as those guns of war.
July 7th, 2022 06:19
MDStone said:
Very well written and delivered. Each line as packed and powerful as those guns of war.
July 7th, 2022 06:19
as good as it gets
tallisman said:
I echo veronas comments, Greg poem, as Google as it gets!
July 1st, 2022 15:22
tallisman said:
I echo veronas comments, Greg poem, as Google as it gets!
July 1st, 2022 15:22
as good as it gets
verona said:
really liked the form of this. particularly liked the opening couplet and closing one too.
July 1st, 2022 14:04
verona said:
really liked the form of this. particularly liked the opening couplet and closing one too.
July 1st, 2022 14:04
golden years
L. B. Mek said:
Congrats!!!
and thank you for sharing
your gifted mountain peak\'s of life
with us
and trusting us to share in your delight;
you must be so Proud!
I remember you wrote your father
was an intelligent guy, knew
so many languages
and shared his wisdom with you
was it, Shelly\'s \'Adonais\'
you reworked in dedication..
(sorry my memory\'s not that great)..
but anyway, just trying to say
that he too, must
be so Proud as well
\'purposed\', Intellect
clearly runs in the family..
I\'ll, toast to you Great news
wish your son and all your loved ones
continued success, good health and Peace!
\'Cheers\' 🍾🥂
June 23rd, 2022 06:11
L. B. Mek said:
Congrats!!!
and thank you for sharing
your gifted mountain peak\'s of life
with us
and trusting us to share in your delight;
you must be so Proud!
I remember you wrote your father
was an intelligent guy, knew
so many languages
and shared his wisdom with you
was it, Shelly\'s \'Adonais\'
you reworked in dedication..
(sorry my memory\'s not that great)..
but anyway, just trying to say
that he too, must
be so Proud as well
\'purposed\', Intellect
clearly runs in the family..
I\'ll, toast to you Great news
wish your son and all your loved ones
continued success, good health and Peace!
\'Cheers\' 🍾🥂
June 23rd, 2022 06:11
under the lash
L. B. Mek said:
\'your own, personal
faith, is - as you
wield it, to be
or will-it, to free
your own, individuality...;
if it works for you
then treasure it
empower yourself with it
walk with eyes open
and heart\'s, invested
and you can utilise it, fully...!\'
let the rest, simply
be..
(more power to you, dear Poet
utilise your Poetry
wash yourself free of regret\'s reins
free yourself to traverse life, aiming
for future\'s awaiting, gifts)
June 21st, 2022 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'your own, personal
faith, is - as you
wield it, to be
or will-it, to free
your own, individuality...;
if it works for you
then treasure it
empower yourself with it
walk with eyes open
and heart\'s, invested
and you can utilise it, fully...!\'
let the rest, simply
be..
(more power to you, dear Poet
utilise your Poetry
wash yourself free of regret\'s reins
free yourself to traverse life, aiming
for future\'s awaiting, gifts)
June 21st, 2022 05:09
a father\'s day elegy
Accidental Poet said:
Kevin, I sense in Heaven, a very proud father of his son. A fine tribute to your dad. 😉
June 18th, 2022 07:30
Accidental Poet said:
Kevin, I sense in Heaven, a very proud father of his son. A fine tribute to your dad. 😉
June 18th, 2022 07:30
Beauty\'s Daughter
L. B. Mek said:
love the synchronicity of the picture with your poetry
that determined face and imagery of background
while striding, forth
yet back, to arms
once, forsaken in the name of duty or loyalty..
(a mirroring of story telling, artforms)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
June 16th, 2022 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
love the synchronicity of the picture with your poetry
that determined face and imagery of background
while striding, forth
yet back, to arms
once, forsaken in the name of duty or loyalty..
(a mirroring of story telling, artforms)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
June 16th, 2022 05:20
de profundis
arqios said:
Profound in fathomless depths. Catchy title as well, Wilde, was it again. It’s been long waiting for a 21st century voice. Thanks for sharing.
June 15th, 2022 09:47
arqios said:
Profound in fathomless depths. Catchy title as well, Wilde, was it again. It’s been long waiting for a 21st century voice. Thanks for sharing.
June 15th, 2022 09:47
passion flower
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderfully worded dedication
although, I\'m sure you have more
erm
graceful, pictures of your muse
lol
a lovely read, dear Poet
thanks for sharing
June 14th, 2022 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderfully worded dedication
although, I\'m sure you have more
erm
graceful, pictures of your muse
lol
a lovely read, dear Poet
thanks for sharing
June 14th, 2022 04:51
tragic teenage years
L. B. Mek said:
I still find your story so inspiring
what a wonderful couple
you both make in that picture..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(oh and yeah, I did
actually read and enjoy, your poetry
as well.. lol)
\'I ached to simply hold her,
that piece of my poor heart.
So, for her sake I\'ll save it:
this missive made of tears:\'
June 13th, 2022 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
I still find your story so inspiring
what a wonderful couple
you both make in that picture..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(oh and yeah, I did
actually read and enjoy, your poetry
as well.. lol)
\'I ached to simply hold her,
that piece of my poor heart.
So, for her sake I\'ll save it:
this missive made of tears:\'
June 13th, 2022 05:59
tragic teenage years
Accidental Poet said:
And through those tragic years you both found something to hold onto and cherish. A wonderful dedication to your true love Kevin. 😉
June 13th, 2022 05:09
Accidental Poet said:
And through those tragic years you both found something to hold onto and cherish. A wonderful dedication to your true love Kevin. 😉
June 13th, 2022 05:09
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