Comments received on poems by Kevin Michael Bloor

love poem
L. B. Mek said:

\'I poured on the pages
the pain and the pining.
Then laid them aside in a drawer
for a lining.

I wove you, with weeping,
a sonnet, sincerely,
believing that sorrow, which scarred
me severely
would fade like an ink spot
in drawer’s sunless shadows,\'

May 2nd, 2022 06:30

a rhymester\'s life
Accidental Poet said:

Looks like you\'re on track to me Kevin. Don\'t think I\'ve ever seen you not on track. But I do know the feeling when writer\'s block hits hard. I try to look at it as my muse is taking a well deserved break. 👍

April 29th, 2022 19:45

a rhymester\'s life
Rozina said:

Yes, yes, yes! It\'s just like that which you have put together so well, in rhyme!

April 29th, 2022 17:42

ode to piss-poor poet
Christina8 said:

Although I only write in rhyme, they can be difficult but as you say the \"muse who forges in the fire\" must be present! Good one!

April 28th, 2022 09:37

ode to piss-poor poet
L. B. Mek said:

\'Though don’t dismiss desire,
and muse, who forges in the fire\'

\'a poet proud, with poise and pose,
who pisses on pathetic prose.\'
thank you, dear Poet

April 28th, 2022 04:07

ode to piss-poor poet
orchidee said:

I can\'t say that last line after a sherry or three! lol.

April 28th, 2022 02:39

ode to piss-poor poet
Distant View said:

Hmm, I know this is a bit of fun, but it seems to look down on prosaic poetry. I love rhyme AND free verse, if it is well written and poetically expressive. The free verse of Sylvia Plath or T. S. Eliot can be simply sublime! Long live poetry, in its many forms and guises, I say.

April 28th, 2022 02:32

ode to piss-poor poet
Saxon Crow said:

Anyone can rhyme
It only takes a bit of
Er? Er? Cake?
Made me chuckle. Thanks for that

April 28th, 2022 02:05

eyes of lost love
Christina8 said:

This is an excellent tribute to your lost love! Wonderful!!!

April 26th, 2022 09:36

eyes of lost love
L. B. Mek said:

and now she\'s back
\'western waves will rise,
‘neath savage sapphire skies,\'
and love, is recaptured
once again
and bursting with pride
in those adoring, eyes
locked on you, and you alone..
(just another beautifully sincere
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
that picture, took me to Shakespeare:
\'Abraham. Do you bite your thumb at us, sir?
Sampson. I do bite my thumb, sir.
Abraham. Do you bite your thumb at us, sir?
Sampson. [Aside to GREGORY] Is the law of our side, if I say60
Gregory. No.
Sampson. No, sir, I do not bite my thumb at you, sir, but I
bite my thumb, sir.\'
(kinda like
you\'re biting your thumb
at that Romeo and Juliet ending
others wished for your love)
triumphantly, awesome! lol

April 26th, 2022 05:39

Crowns4Christ said:

Very good work,well worded and love the way you told your story,
Definitely not a narcissist, I always try to look on the bright side of everything, so this person was saying that you are very handsome and nobody can compare,

When someone calls me certain things I turn it into positivity and erase the negativity, that way I can not lose my temper, which is really short

April 23rd, 2022 19:54

Rozina said:

Loved this. Great lines.

April 23rd, 2022 17:37

Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

I guess they were projecting or thinking something incorrect of you .

April 23rd, 2022 08:22

Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Great poem .. really like this . .. narcissists are difficult people .

I like how you expressed yourself in this . Sorry that you were called that .. that isn’t nice if your not that way , perhaps they were projecting their issues onto you ? I’m not sure . I once called someone narcissistic ., they turned it around and said I was that way ( I’m definitely not )

April 23rd, 2022 06:52

Rose of Romance
Christina8 said:

This poem is stellar and I LOVE your rhyme scheme! What a grand tribute to your love and I hope she adores it! Just wonderful!

April 22nd, 2022 11:27

Rose of Romance
L. B. Mek said:

I think Burns, himself
would cherish the worded devotion
in this poem
what a fantastic, song
to serenade your Lorraine with..
and I can\'t help, comparing your lines
favourably to his
in that triumphant, \'red red rose\':
\'So fair art thou, my bonnie lass,
So deep in luve am I;
And I will luve thee still, my dear,
Till a’ the seas gang dry.

Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear,
And the rocks melt wi’ the sun;
I will love thee still, my dear,
While the sands o’ life shall run.\'
(may your life\'s cups
be ever filled with each others, kindness
stay blessed, dear poet)

April 22nd, 2022 05:27

Rose of Romance
Saxon Crow said:

Beautiful wee poem Kev. You\'re a lucky man

April 22nd, 2022 03:07

Rose of Romance
Rozina said:

Lovely poem.

April 22nd, 2022 02:38

Rose of Romance
Laura🌻 said:

Dear Kevin,

I love your poem(s) dedicated to your
‘bonnie wee lass, Lorraine’.
It has been worthwhile and a blessing for you to wait and finally be with your first love.❤️

Perhaps love does conquer all.
Have a super day with your goddess.


April 22nd, 2022 02:33

Christina8 said:

I think this is a masterpiece with the content you put in here about WWI and your rhymes....I\'m gonna save it for a later read. Thanks!

April 21st, 2022 10:55

dying things
Luna Nera said:

very nice and & true concept

April 17th, 2022 21:01

My Cousin
Accidental Poet said:

Sorry for your loss Kevin. Keep writing, its helped me in grieving more than once.

April 15th, 2022 14:49

My Cousin
L. B. Mek said:

so sad, so much suffering
and waste of life\'s potential..
I\'m sorry for your loss, dear Poet
try and keep that bitterness
from poisoning your life..
stay strong and where possible
help others survive/prevail

April 15th, 2022 05:17

my giddy green-eyed girl
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow. I hope love will truly cure the pain though. A great poem.

April 14th, 2022 08:27

my giddy green-eyed girl
Kevin Michael Bloor said:

Thanks, LB. These were my feelings recollected, not in tranquility, but out of the remnants of a broken heart. Hopefully, healing will flow as I pour out these bitter rhymes. Jesus tells us to love our enemies, but the flesh is weak sometimes. Again, thank you for your honest, full and sincere feedback on this sinner\'s poor poem. 😊

April 14th, 2022 07:07

my giddy green-eyed girl
L. B. Mek said:

if you\'ve won, already
why waste your precious moments
contemplating these futile thoughts..
indeed, release
what pent-up fury or regret, you may have
but cherish more
these gifted breaths, within happiness
you\'ve been granted, dear Poet
even if they be in the palms of your hand
for now
that\'s no guarantee, they\'ll be there tomorrow
however steadfast or earnest your love..
(I think
vengeance or revenge
is a human weakness
hence why those humans that wrote
that so called, \'good book\'
mention it, so often
I think, the very fact that humanity
still exists
if or what, governs
our universe, has little regard for wrath
if not, that exemplar ideal
of Jesus
would be one of destruction and decimation
and not, one of forgiveness
and a willing martyr
in the name of humility and love)..
cherish your love, my friend
where possible, refute hate

April 14th, 2022 05:15

The Girl with the Faraway Eyes
tallisman said:

Great! Really enjoyed this.

April 11th, 2022 14:03

The Girl with the Faraway Eyes
L. B. Mek said:

you make it look so effortlessly easy
showcasing, such practised skill..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(I read and learn)

April 11th, 2022 06:12

Lethal Lines
L. B. Mek said:

insensitivity, imbued in words
always has, always will
sharing opinions, freely
is a gift of modernity, we all
should cherish
history tried
stoning people to death
for their
innate, diverse way
of thinking, living
it didn\'t work, too well - then
well, unless
maybe for the herd majority
that were doing the stoning
still, Personally
I try to apologise, for my words
at every opportunity
although, it may never be enough
to undo
what hurt, they may cause...

April 8th, 2022 05:50

Lethal Lines
Katrina D said:

A great poem, should speak to many on this site. Thanks for sharing

April 8th, 2022 04:48

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