Comments received on poems by Kevin Michael Bloor
a poet true
L. B. Mek said:
\'I’d sparkle with the Muse’s magic,
rewrite those rhymes of truth so tragic.
Have Hector and Achilles yield,
bid both lay down their sword and shield.
If I composed like kindly Keats,
wrote rhymes where earth and heaven meets,
my poems would be less pedantic;
they’d bloom like rustic rose, romantic.
Then I would be a poet true
and I would touch the heart of you!\'..
well, you\'ve definitely touched my poetic heart
such a beautiful write
from first letter to last syllable, a complete triumph!
so happy for you, dear poet
thank you for sharing
July 15th, 2021 03:26
L. B. Mek said:
\'I’d sparkle with the Muse’s magic,
rewrite those rhymes of truth so tragic.
Have Hector and Achilles yield,
bid both lay down their sword and shield.
If I composed like kindly Keats,
wrote rhymes where earth and heaven meets,
my poems would be less pedantic;
they’d bloom like rustic rose, romantic.
Then I would be a poet true
and I would touch the heart of you!\'..
well, you\'ve definitely touched my poetic heart
such a beautiful write
from first letter to last syllable, a complete triumph!
so happy for you, dear poet
thank you for sharing
July 15th, 2021 03:26
a poet true
Accidental Poet said:
If only you could read through our eyes Kevin. You\'d be amazed at how professional your poetry really is. ; )
July 14th, 2021 17:43
Accidental Poet said:
If only you could read through our eyes Kevin. You\'d be amazed at how professional your poetry really is. ; )
July 14th, 2021 17:43
a poet true
Fay Slimm. said:
A compelling and inventive rhyme Kevin which caught my attention from the very first line - - a true poet you are my friend.
July 14th, 2021 13:41
Fay Slimm. said:
A compelling and inventive rhyme Kevin which caught my attention from the very first line - - a true poet you are my friend.
July 14th, 2021 13:41
a poet true
Saxon Crow said:
Kev this is brilliant and totally faved. Really, a genius bit of poetry
July 14th, 2021 13:14
Saxon Crow said:
Kev this is brilliant and totally faved. Really, a genius bit of poetry
July 14th, 2021 13:14
my island home
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
Yup, no heritage is squeaky clean
all we can do, is realise our gifts in life
take pride in the goodness
history bequeathed us;
do our best to not repeat, and where possible
try to make amends, for the mistakes and failings
in our involuntary, inheritance...
we are, what we are
all, we can really control
is that: better
we must strive, to become!
July 13th, 2021 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
Yup, no heritage is squeaky clean
all we can do, is realise our gifts in life
take pride in the goodness
history bequeathed us;
do our best to not repeat, and where possible
try to make amends, for the mistakes and failings
in our involuntary, inheritance...
we are, what we are
all, we can really control
is that: better
we must strive, to become!
July 13th, 2021 04:51
A Summer Morning
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Kevin and I thoroughly agree with that last line.
Andy
July 10th, 2021 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Kevin and I thoroughly agree with that last line.
Andy
July 10th, 2021 00:21
A Summer Morning
Accidental Poet said:
I too love the golden hour. The birth of the day is so inspiring. Great write Kevin. ; )
July 9th, 2021 21:08
Accidental Poet said:
I too love the golden hour. The birth of the day is so inspiring. Great write Kevin. ; )
July 9th, 2021 21:08
A Summer Morning
flyingfish said:
This is delightful. I enjoyed reading it. Best Wishes. PS It reminds me of Under Milk Wood (Dylan Thomas)----\"You can hear the dew falling, and the hushed town breathing.\"
July 9th, 2021 12:49
flyingfish said:
This is delightful. I enjoyed reading it. Best Wishes. PS It reminds me of Under Milk Wood (Dylan Thomas)----\"You can hear the dew falling, and the hushed town breathing.\"
July 9th, 2021 12:49
A Summer Morning
Fay Slimm. said:
A n inspiring rhyme Kevin -- those summer days draw poets to their praise and this is no exception my friend - a lovely read and applause for the beautiful picture too.
July 9th, 2021 06:13
Fay Slimm. said:
A n inspiring rhyme Kevin -- those summer days draw poets to their praise and this is no exception my friend - a lovely read and applause for the beautiful picture too.
July 9th, 2021 06:13
eyes of lost love
Accidental Poet said:
The love you both shared is one for the record books. Great write Kevin. ; )
July 6th, 2021 05:22
Accidental Poet said:
The love you both shared is one for the record books. Great write Kevin. ; )
July 6th, 2021 05:22
eyes of lost love
L. B. Mek said:
what a triumphant last verse
wonderfully worded
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 6th, 2021 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
what a triumphant last verse
wonderfully worded
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 6th, 2021 04:03
Shelley’s Steely Soul
L. B. Mek said:
\'Some lows, some highs, some times of trouble
(some bastard’s bound to burst your bubble!)\'..
ain\'t that a fundamental truth for all of life, dear Poet
still
we have our scribbles, imbued
with potent: liberating traits of serenity
while they have their pathetic zeal
for destruction and malicious malignancy;
I know which side, I\'d rather be
if given a choice, and so - I remain
ever grateful, it was chosen - for me...
July 5th, 2021 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'Some lows, some highs, some times of trouble
(some bastard’s bound to burst your bubble!)\'..
ain\'t that a fundamental truth for all of life, dear Poet
still
we have our scribbles, imbued
with potent: liberating traits of serenity
while they have their pathetic zeal
for destruction and malicious malignancy;
I know which side, I\'d rather be
if given a choice, and so - I remain
ever grateful, it was chosen - for me...
July 5th, 2021 05:43
Shelley’s Steely Soul
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Kevin and so very true.
Andy
July 5th, 2021 04:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Kevin and so very true.
Andy
July 5th, 2021 04:14
Shelley’s Steely Soul
Accidental Poet said:
Kevin, you\'re a poet\'s poet. Great writing here. ; )
July 4th, 2021 13:59
Accidental Poet said:
Kevin, you\'re a poet\'s poet. Great writing here. ; )
July 4th, 2021 13:59
Shelley’s Steely Soul
Fay Slimm. said:
And loud applause from this female poet who agrees with every perceptive line. Thanks a load for sending us Shelley\'s steely soul for we really do need it when our up become down. Great read Kevin.
July 4th, 2021 13:16
Fay Slimm. said:
And loud applause from this female poet who agrees with every perceptive line. Thanks a load for sending us Shelley\'s steely soul for we really do need it when our up become down. Great read Kevin.
July 4th, 2021 13:16
Vita Nova
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful account of you meeting your future wife and how happy the lady looks in the picture with her beautiful smile. May you both find that true love which never grows old but sings its spring-song forever. A great read.
July 2nd, 2021 12:41
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful account of you meeting your future wife and how happy the lady looks in the picture with her beautiful smile. May you both find that true love which never grows old but sings its spring-song forever. A great read.
July 2nd, 2021 12:41
Vita Nova
Accidental Poet said:
Almost mirrored lives we lived Kevin. Beautifully penned for your wife. How proud she is. ; )
July 2nd, 2021 09:41
Accidental Poet said:
Almost mirrored lives we lived Kevin. Beautifully penned for your wife. How proud she is. ; )
July 2nd, 2021 09:41
Poems Pure and Proud
Accidental Poet said:
Well Kevin, proud you should be of this and all your work here on MPS. Top shelf poetry here my friend. ; )
July 1st, 2021 08:21
Accidental Poet said:
Well Kevin, proud you should be of this and all your work here on MPS. Top shelf poetry here my friend. ; )
July 1st, 2021 08:21
Sunset Saved Our Sanity
Goldfinch60 said:
That day sounded so glorious Kevin, may there be many more of them.
Andy
June 29th, 2021 15:11
Goldfinch60 said:
That day sounded so glorious Kevin, may there be many more of them.
Andy
June 29th, 2021 15:11
Sunset Saved Our Sanity
Saxon Crow said:
A beautiful Poem Kev. Cornwall is Gods resting place
June 29th, 2021 04:13
Saxon Crow said:
A beautiful Poem Kev. Cornwall is Gods resting place
June 29th, 2021 04:13
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Goldfinch60 said:
So many truths in your words Kevin, but on the last one, not for a long time.
Andy
June 28th, 2021 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
So many truths in your words Kevin, but on the last one, not for a long time.
Andy
June 28th, 2021 00:22
I
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - I could tick a goodly number of those as being applicable to me in varying degrees, Kevin.
June 27th, 2021 07:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - I could tick a goodly number of those as being applicable to me in varying degrees, Kevin.
June 27th, 2021 07:38
Llandudno, the land of Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
I think you like Llandudno Kevin. Wonderful words describing this place that is within your heart.
Andy
June 26th, 2021 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
I think you like Llandudno Kevin. Wonderful words describing this place that is within your heart.
Andy
June 26th, 2021 00:29
Llandudno, the land of Dreams
L. B. Mek said:
they should be paying you, handsomely
for the dozens of extra visitors
they\'ll be getting this year..
\'It\'s by a sacred, surging sea
of sacramental symmetry,
with sandless beach of shingled stones,
as burnt and bleached as dead men’s bones.\'
what a wonderful verse
June 25th, 2021 06:22
L. B. Mek said:
they should be paying you, handsomely
for the dozens of extra visitors
they\'ll be getting this year..
\'It\'s by a sacred, surging sea
of sacramental symmetry,
with sandless beach of shingled stones,
as burnt and bleached as dead men’s bones.\'
what a wonderful verse
June 25th, 2021 06:22
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