Comments received on poems by Kevin Michael Bloor
Sweet Dreams
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely write on how we fade away over time, some lovely lines in this write, enjoyed the read
May 24th, 2025 09:47
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely write on how we fade away over time, some lovely lines in this write, enjoyed the read
May 24th, 2025 09:47
Sweet Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful rhyme about fading away with age. Wonderful wording
May 24th, 2025 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful rhyme about fading away with age. Wonderful wording
May 24th, 2025 08:12
Lost Lines
Cheeky Missy said:
You are not so antiquated as you feel. You\'ve only strayed far from that elixir which would ransom you. Or are you teetering on the brink of actual death and this is your last goodbye? Whatever the case, this pretty number is gorgeously rendered with superb imagery and a charming, painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 13th, 2025 06:14
Cheeky Missy said:
You are not so antiquated as you feel. You\'ve only strayed far from that elixir which would ransom you. Or are you teetering on the brink of actual death and this is your last goodbye? Whatever the case, this pretty number is gorgeously rendered with superb imagery and a charming, painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 13th, 2025 06:14
Lost Lines
sorenbarrett said:
Very identifiable set in such nice wording for this a fave.
May 13th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Very identifiable set in such nice wording for this a fave.
May 13th, 2025 04:30
Lost Lines
Poetic Licence said:
Though referring to a sad occurance with health, this is beautifully written .
May 13th, 2025 03:25
Poetic Licence said:
Though referring to a sad occurance with health, this is beautifully written .
May 13th, 2025 03:25
Lost Lines
arqios said:
Once the words came like rivers,
flooding the mind with restless light.
Now, silence hums between my thoughts,
a weight, a waiting, where nothing sparks,
only reverberating after sounds remain.
May 13th, 2025 02:55
arqios said:
Once the words came like rivers,
flooding the mind with restless light.
Now, silence hums between my thoughts,
a weight, a waiting, where nothing sparks,
only reverberating after sounds remain.
May 13th, 2025 02:55
Dread Day
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Kevin, I do sincerely hope that all is better now.
Andy
April 10th, 2025 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Kevin, I do sincerely hope that all is better now.
Andy
April 10th, 2025 01:49
Dread Day
Poetic Licence said:
I\'m sorry to hear and hope you are on the mend, but as your poem says, we never know when our ticket will be called, so enjoy and make the most of everyday, all the best, enjoyed the read (poetically)
April 9th, 2025 12:02
Poetic Licence said:
I\'m sorry to hear and hope you are on the mend, but as your poem says, we never know when our ticket will be called, so enjoy and make the most of everyday, all the best, enjoyed the read (poetically)
April 9th, 2025 12:02
Dread Day
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem that shows good rhyme and flow. We at times feel it near and such times and reflections of them paint a picture not to be forgotten. Well done.
April 9th, 2025 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem that shows good rhyme and flow. We at times feel it near and such times and reflections of them paint a picture not to be forgotten. Well done.
April 9th, 2025 09:35
Dread Day
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This was a touching write hence the note below, we never know when or if , there is melancholy within the lines but also kind wisdom. All the best to you!
April 9th, 2025 08:49
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This was a touching write hence the note below, we never know when or if , there is melancholy within the lines but also kind wisdom. All the best to you!
April 9th, 2025 08:49
Dread Day
arqios said:
Scary time. Hope you are better. Glad you are able to write. My fear is to just drop and fail to leave word; and it still hasn’t come to me what to say. Liked and Faved 🙏🏻🕊️🤩
April 9th, 2025 08:31
arqios said:
Scary time. Hope you are better. Glad you are able to write. My fear is to just drop and fail to leave word; and it still hasn’t come to me what to say. Liked and Faved 🙏🏻🕊️🤩
April 9th, 2025 08:31
Life to Come
Goldfinch60 said:
I know my father is waiting for me with a pint of bitter and a symphony by Haydn playing for us.
Andy
March 15th, 2025 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
I know my father is waiting for me with a pint of bitter and a symphony by Haydn playing for us.
Andy
March 15th, 2025 02:14
Life to Come
arqios said:
Now that’s a grieving poem if I ever did see one🙏🏻🕊Liked and Faved 🤩
March 14th, 2025 20:47
arqios said:
Now that’s a grieving poem if I ever did see one🙏🏻🕊Liked and Faved 🤩
March 14th, 2025 20:47
Life to Come
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that calls out for a father now gone. We all lose our fathers eventually but to lose one early is a trauma. Well written with good verse and rhyme this poem speaks to me.
March 14th, 2025 12:41
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that calls out for a father now gone. We all lose our fathers eventually but to lose one early is a trauma. Well written with good verse and rhyme this poem speaks to me.
March 14th, 2025 12:41
Life to Come
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching and emotional write over the devastating loss of a parent, which still hurts, very nicely composed and expressed
March 14th, 2025 11:44
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching and emotional write over the devastating loss of a parent, which still hurts, very nicely composed and expressed
March 14th, 2025 11:44
Life Saver
sorenbarrett said:
Great words that should be taken to heart. To each their own and taste can not be contested but don\'t impose your views on others. That is where trouble starts. A great meaning to this poem
March 11th, 2025 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
Great words that should be taken to heart. To each their own and taste can not be contested but don\'t impose your views on others. That is where trouble starts. A great meaning to this poem
March 11th, 2025 07:03
Life Saver
Poetic Licence said:
A nice write that poetry can cover all bases, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 05:34
Poetic Licence said:
A nice write that poetry can cover all bases, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 05:34
Life Saver
arqios said:
You are so wonderfully blessed to have such support in poetry 🙏🏻🕊
March 11th, 2025 04:27
arqios said:
You are so wonderfully blessed to have such support in poetry 🙏🏻🕊
March 11th, 2025 04:27
Sworn Statement
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautifully worded this powerful poem makes its point how hypocrisy and unkept promises rank higher than intentions and in its irony the point is made. Thou shalt not kill but in war it\'s okay, though shalt not work on the sabbath but if one\'s ox is in the mire okay, the context makes a difference to many. There seems to be no black and white even to the rigid or orthodox.
March 8th, 2025 12:35
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautifully worded this powerful poem makes its point how hypocrisy and unkept promises rank higher than intentions and in its irony the point is made. Thou shalt not kill but in war it\'s okay, though shalt not work on the sabbath but if one\'s ox is in the mire okay, the context makes a difference to many. There seems to be no black and white even to the rigid or orthodox.
March 8th, 2025 12:35
Life
teardrop said:
Your words say it all
I read this twice and I really like it. weather you meant it or not, I feel deep emotions you penned. Thanks for the read.
March 1st, 2025 09:08
teardrop said:
Your words say it all
I read this twice and I really like it. weather you meant it or not, I feel deep emotions you penned. Thanks for the read.
March 1st, 2025 09:08
Life
sorenbarrett said:
Ah but that\'s the key trying to make words that don\'t rhyme fit and feelings that can\'t be explained put into words keeps the mind busy and beer helps make the mind more creative, at least until the buzz wears off and you see the crap that you\'ve written. A poem of cynicism that I have also had many times before. A fun write with more truth in it than I would like to admit.
March 1st, 2025 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
Ah but that\'s the key trying to make words that don\'t rhyme fit and feelings that can\'t be explained put into words keeps the mind busy and beer helps make the mind more creative, at least until the buzz wears off and you see the crap that you\'ve written. A poem of cynicism that I have also had many times before. A fun write with more truth in it than I would like to admit.
March 1st, 2025 07:00
Losers
arqios said:
And if it is thus so, a loser by choice shall every poet ever be. 🙏🏻🕊
March 1st, 2025 05:50
arqios said:
And if it is thus so, a loser by choice shall every poet ever be. 🙏🏻🕊
March 1st, 2025 05:50
Losers
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this very funny read that does deliver a message, nice one
February 16th, 2025 14:45
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this very funny read that does deliver a message, nice one
February 16th, 2025 14:45
Losers
sorenbarrett said:
Great word usage in this poem a bit of humor that unfortunately is believed by many. But this is a bit of a back stab at the author isn\'t it? Personally I loved it.
February 16th, 2025 14:11
sorenbarrett said:
Great word usage in this poem a bit of humor that unfortunately is believed by many. But this is a bit of a back stab at the author isn\'t it? Personally I loved it.
February 16th, 2025 14:11
Losers
Cassie58 said:
You can invest your dreams in poetry and watch them grow. A fun write. There’s alot of dangers out there, poetry isn’t one of them :)
February 16th, 2025 13:16
Cassie58 said:
You can invest your dreams in poetry and watch them grow. A fun write. There’s alot of dangers out there, poetry isn’t one of them :)
February 16th, 2025 13:16
« Return to the profile of Kevin Michael Bloor
