Comments received on poems by Kevin Michael Bloor
The One
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
He knows if you believe...
Great...
Well shouldn\'t everyone be just a tiny little bit... I don\'t know... for example... FREE...
To believe whatever we want or choose to, or even, hold no belief whatsoever...
However... in my most...
HUMBLE...
Opinion... such a thing should always... be... our own choice...
And never something that is an obligation, forced upon others...
That I call... a false-faith.
Some do seem... to believe...
In... I don\'t know... Hitler...
For a tiny example.
Oh well... so very nice... indeed.
Always be... FREE... to believe...
Whatever you want...
Or... believe some things... don\'t believe in others...
Or... believe... in NOTHING...
Whatsoever...
So sorry... as always...
Must somehow be MY FAULT...
Well... I choose not to believe in such.
Quoting... someone...
\"Don\'t blame me, for the sorry state you\'re in\" Ever...
My HUMBLE... opinion.
March 23rd, 2023 19:39
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
He knows if you believe...
Great...
Well shouldn\'t everyone be just a tiny little bit... I don\'t know... for example... FREE...
To believe whatever we want or choose to, or even, hold no belief whatsoever...
However... in my most...
HUMBLE...
Opinion... such a thing should always... be... our own choice...
And never something that is an obligation, forced upon others...
That I call... a false-faith.
Some do seem... to believe...
In... I don\'t know... Hitler...
For a tiny example.
Oh well... so very nice... indeed.
Always be... FREE... to believe...
Whatever you want...
Or... believe some things... don\'t believe in others...
Or... believe... in NOTHING...
Whatsoever...
So sorry... as always...
Must somehow be MY FAULT...
Well... I choose not to believe in such.
Quoting... someone...
\"Don\'t blame me, for the sorry state you\'re in\" Ever...
My HUMBLE... opinion.
March 23rd, 2023 19:39
\'cross the western sea
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
especially enjoyed your unique 10/9 lines and couplets
\'For true love, like in idyllic Greece
has birthed us a golden age of peace,
and we’ll live long in that land of plenty;
we’ll feel no more than a youth of twenty!\'
this, be that infinity of life
inked in that elixir of Poetry...
July 21st, 2022 01:18
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
especially enjoyed your unique 10/9 lines and couplets
\'For true love, like in idyllic Greece
has birthed us a golden age of peace,
and we’ll live long in that land of plenty;
we’ll feel no more than a youth of twenty!\'
this, be that infinity of life
inked in that elixir of Poetry...
July 21st, 2022 01:18
death by dreaming
L. B. Mek said:
\'I’d rather depart as I’m dreaming deep,
slip slyly away\'
what a poetic feast! dear Poet
from Biblical
to Socrates
to Shakespeare
and even Romantic Poetry\'s
most romantic tale..
did you know, story goes
when they found Shelley
they had to burn his body
right there on the coastline
and its said, Mary
grabbed the ashes of his heart
with her bare hands
and kept it, between the pages
of his poem
where he speaks of life\'s unending connectivity
clinging-on to her one and only
\'cor cordium\'
heart of heart\'s...
July 15th, 2022 03:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'I’d rather depart as I’m dreaming deep,
slip slyly away\'
what a poetic feast! dear Poet
from Biblical
to Socrates
to Shakespeare
and even Romantic Poetry\'s
most romantic tale..
did you know, story goes
when they found Shelley
they had to burn his body
right there on the coastline
and its said, Mary
grabbed the ashes of his heart
with her bare hands
and kept it, between the pages
of his poem
where he speaks of life\'s unending connectivity
clinging-on to her one and only
\'cor cordium\'
heart of heart\'s...
July 15th, 2022 03:32
soldiers
MDStone said:
Very well written and delivered. Each line as packed and powerful as those guns of war.
July 7th, 2022 06:19
MDStone said:
Very well written and delivered. Each line as packed and powerful as those guns of war.
July 7th, 2022 06:19
as good as it gets
tallisman said:
I echo veronas comments, Greg poem, as Google as it gets!
July 1st, 2022 15:22
tallisman said:
I echo veronas comments, Greg poem, as Google as it gets!
July 1st, 2022 15:22
as good as it gets
verona said:
really liked the form of this. particularly liked the opening couplet and closing one too.
July 1st, 2022 14:04
verona said:
really liked the form of this. particularly liked the opening couplet and closing one too.
July 1st, 2022 14:04
golden years
L. B. Mek said:
Congrats!!!
and thank you for sharing
your gifted mountain peak\'s of life
with us
and trusting us to share in your delight;
you must be so Proud!
I remember you wrote your father
was an intelligent guy, knew
so many languages
and shared his wisdom with you
was it, Shelly\'s \'Adonais\'
you reworked in dedication..
(sorry my memory\'s not that great)..
but anyway, just trying to say
that he too, must
be so Proud as well
\'purposed\', Intellect
clearly runs in the family..
I\'ll, toast to you Great news
wish your son and all your loved ones
continued success, good health and Peace!
\'Cheers\' 🍾🥂
June 23rd, 2022 06:11
L. B. Mek said:
Congrats!!!
and thank you for sharing
your gifted mountain peak\'s of life
with us
and trusting us to share in your delight;
you must be so Proud!
I remember you wrote your father
was an intelligent guy, knew
so many languages
and shared his wisdom with you
was it, Shelly\'s \'Adonais\'
you reworked in dedication..
(sorry my memory\'s not that great)..
but anyway, just trying to say
that he too, must
be so Proud as well
\'purposed\', Intellect
clearly runs in the family..
I\'ll, toast to you Great news
wish your son and all your loved ones
continued success, good health and Peace!
\'Cheers\' 🍾🥂
June 23rd, 2022 06:11
under the lash
L. B. Mek said:
\'your own, personal
faith, is - as you
wield it, to be
or will-it, to free
your own, individuality...;
if it works for you
then treasure it
empower yourself with it
walk with eyes open
and heart\'s, invested
and you can utilise it, fully...!\'
let the rest, simply
be..
(more power to you, dear Poet
utilise your Poetry
wash yourself free of regret\'s reins
free yourself to traverse life, aiming
for future\'s awaiting, gifts)
June 21st, 2022 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'your own, personal
faith, is - as you
wield it, to be
or will-it, to free
your own, individuality...;
if it works for you
then treasure it
empower yourself with it
walk with eyes open
and heart\'s, invested
and you can utilise it, fully...!\'
let the rest, simply
be..
(more power to you, dear Poet
utilise your Poetry
wash yourself free of regret\'s reins
free yourself to traverse life, aiming
for future\'s awaiting, gifts)
June 21st, 2022 05:09
a father\'s day elegy
Accidental Poet said:
Kevin, I sense in Heaven, a very proud father of his son. A fine tribute to your dad. 😉
June 18th, 2022 07:30
Accidental Poet said:
Kevin, I sense in Heaven, a very proud father of his son. A fine tribute to your dad. 😉
June 18th, 2022 07:30
Beauty\'s Daughter
L. B. Mek said:
love the synchronicity of the picture with your poetry
that determined face and imagery of background
while striding, forth
yet back, to arms
once, forsaken in the name of duty or loyalty..
(a mirroring of story telling, artforms)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
June 16th, 2022 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
love the synchronicity of the picture with your poetry
that determined face and imagery of background
while striding, forth
yet back, to arms
once, forsaken in the name of duty or loyalty..
(a mirroring of story telling, artforms)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
June 16th, 2022 05:20
de profundis
crypticbard said:
Profound in fathomless depths. Catchy title as well, Wilde, was it again. It’s been long waiting for a 21st century voice. Thanks for sharing.
June 15th, 2022 09:47
crypticbard said:
Profound in fathomless depths. Catchy title as well, Wilde, was it again. It’s been long waiting for a 21st century voice. Thanks for sharing.
June 15th, 2022 09:47
passion flower
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderfully worded dedication
although, I\'m sure you have more
erm
graceful, pictures of your muse
lol
a lovely read, dear Poet
thanks for sharing
June 14th, 2022 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderfully worded dedication
although, I\'m sure you have more
erm
graceful, pictures of your muse
lol
a lovely read, dear Poet
thanks for sharing
June 14th, 2022 04:51
tragic teenage years
L. B. Mek said:
I still find your story so inspiring
what a wonderful couple
you both make in that picture..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(oh and yeah, I did
actually read and enjoy, your poetry
as well.. lol)
\'I ached to simply hold her,
that piece of my poor heart.
So, for her sake I\'ll save it:
this missive made of tears:\'
June 13th, 2022 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
I still find your story so inspiring
what a wonderful couple
you both make in that picture..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(oh and yeah, I did
actually read and enjoy, your poetry
as well.. lol)
\'I ached to simply hold her,
that piece of my poor heart.
So, for her sake I\'ll save it:
this missive made of tears:\'
June 13th, 2022 05:59
tragic teenage years
Accidental Poet said:
And through those tragic years you both found something to hold onto and cherish. A wonderful dedication to your true love Kevin. 😉
June 13th, 2022 05:09
Accidental Poet said:
And through those tragic years you both found something to hold onto and cherish. A wonderful dedication to your true love Kevin. 😉
June 13th, 2022 05:09
a ghost of grieving
Fay Slimm. said:
A compelling write Kevin with some well poemed phrasing - -- the intriguing title caught my eye and am so glad I caught the verse.
June 12th, 2022 16:03
Fay Slimm. said:
A compelling write Kevin with some well poemed phrasing - -- the intriguing title caught my eye and am so glad I caught the verse.
June 12th, 2022 16:03
a ghost of grieving
Accidental Poet said:
And so, words soothed his tired soul. Excellently penned Kevin (as always). 😉
June 12th, 2022 08:35
Accidental Poet said:
And so, words soothed his tired soul. Excellently penned Kevin (as always). 😉
June 12th, 2022 08:35
a ghost of grieving
JudyStella said:
So beautiful 🥺 writing always heals! And I am glad that you keep writing.
June 12th, 2022 08:01
JudyStella said:
So beautiful 🥺 writing always heals! And I am glad that you keep writing.
June 12th, 2022 08:01
the ways of a poet
RL Randall said:
The poet rides the metaphor to reality. A very nice write.
June 11th, 2022 05:17
RL Randall said:
The poet rides the metaphor to reality. A very nice write.
June 11th, 2022 05:17
Shelley\'s Steely Soul [ii]
L. B. Mek said:
\'indeed, he be a Pure poet
an idyllist and wilful, believer
in humanity\'s capacity
to surpass their boundaries
and live, Truly - free\'..
(what a wonderful dedication
and yes, I too agree
there are a lot of self-involved
and over opinionated, fcker\'s
like me
that can ruin poetry
for the sensitive, poet)
lol
thanks for sharing
dear Poet
June 9th, 2022 05:18
L. B. Mek said:
\'indeed, he be a Pure poet
an idyllist and wilful, believer
in humanity\'s capacity
to surpass their boundaries
and live, Truly - free\'..
(what a wonderful dedication
and yes, I too agree
there are a lot of self-involved
and over opinionated, fcker\'s
like me
that can ruin poetry
for the sensitive, poet)
lol
thanks for sharing
dear Poet
June 9th, 2022 05:18
returned
Goldfinch60 said:
Going back can bring both good memories and sad ones, I am a firm believer in never going back.
Andy
June 3rd, 2022 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Going back can bring both good memories and sad ones, I am a firm believer in never going back.
Andy
June 3rd, 2022 00:49
returned
a thousand wishes said:
Nice imagery and full of emotion. your words speak volumes
June 2nd, 2022 16:34
a thousand wishes said:
Nice imagery and full of emotion. your words speak volumes
June 2nd, 2022 16:34
a sort of poet
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Kevin, we are all sort of poets.
Andy
June 2nd, 2022 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Kevin, we are all sort of poets.
Andy
June 2nd, 2022 01:03
a sort of poet
JudyStella said:
I love how your poems have this rhythmic flow to them! A great poet indeed!
June 1st, 2022 02:43
JudyStella said:
I love how your poems have this rhythmic flow to them! A great poet indeed!
June 1st, 2022 02:43
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