Comments received on poems by G.Cabús
Not Invisible.
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
The use of Imagery is engaging “shadows drifting past the corners of other people’s eyes” beautifully captures invisibility in social spaces. “fear begins to unclench its fists” strong personification of fear as something that grips and finally releases. Nicely written poem.
September 8th, 2025 16:11
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
The use of Imagery is engaging “shadows drifting past the corners of other people’s eyes” beautifully captures invisibility in social spaces. “fear begins to unclench its fists” strong personification of fear as something that grips and finally releases. Nicely written poem.
September 8th, 2025 16:11
Not Invisible.
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write about us as social animals. We may not crave attention and acclaim but recognition that we exist and in that search the existential truth is that we must first recognize ourselves and you are so right it is from the inside that this is born and grows. Wonderful!
September 8th, 2025 12:49
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write about us as social animals. We may not crave attention and acclaim but recognition that we exist and in that search the existential truth is that we must first recognize ourselves and you are so right it is from the inside that this is born and grows. Wonderful!
September 8th, 2025 12:49
When the noise fades away.
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem about that place that I honor most a quiet place that I seek to stay in. Very nice
September 4th, 2025 20:40
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem about that place that I honor most a quiet place that I seek to stay in. Very nice
September 4th, 2025 20:40
Carriers of Light
sorenbarrett said:
Knowing oneself well enough to recognize one\'s limits and abilities one\'s qualities which are the good and which need work and to feel good about who one is and what one does is a key element in becoming better. A lovely write
September 3rd, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Knowing oneself well enough to recognize one\'s limits and abilities one\'s qualities which are the good and which need work and to feel good about who one is and what one does is a key element in becoming better. A lovely write
September 3rd, 2025 04:26
Born Within
sorenbarrett said:
Centering oneself either physically by ones breathing or emotionally by self focus on one\'s own desires helps in finding peace. A lovely write
August 31st, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Centering oneself either physically by ones breathing or emotionally by self focus on one\'s own desires helps in finding peace. A lovely write
August 31st, 2025 04:45
The Cost of Belonging
Poetic Licence said:
We have to be who we are and be proud of that in order to face and communicate in today\'s society, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 00:20
Poetic Licence said:
We have to be who we are and be proud of that in order to face and communicate in today\'s society, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 00:20
The Cost of Belonging
sorenbarrett said:
Being oneself and proud of it is an important aspect of today\'s society. Nicely written
August 16th, 2025 20:37
sorenbarrett said:
Being oneself and proud of it is an important aspect of today\'s society. Nicely written
August 16th, 2025 20:37
The Cost of Belonging
Demar Desu said:
Unfortunately tribalism doesn’t work this way
August 16th, 2025 20:07
Demar Desu said:
Unfortunately tribalism doesn’t work this way
August 16th, 2025 20:07
To Tremble Is Also a Way
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely expressed write of all though hurting feeling the pain, as long as they feel it they know they are alive, nicely done
July 18th, 2025 05:37
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely expressed write of all though hurting feeling the pain, as long as they feel it they know they are alive, nicely done
July 18th, 2025 05:37
To Tremble Is Also a Way
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of significant psychological depth. This poem reaches deep into what it is to be, how do we know it and of what value is it. Nicely written and a fave.
July 18th, 2025 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of significant psychological depth. This poem reaches deep into what it is to be, how do we know it and of what value is it. Nicely written and a fave.
July 18th, 2025 03:47
The Quiet Shape of Freedom
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely of having those moments in silence and the freedom to reflect and be oneself , enjoyed the read
July 11th, 2025 00:11
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely of having those moments in silence and the freedom to reflect and be oneself , enjoyed the read
July 11th, 2025 00:11
The Quiet Shape of Freedom
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives good advice about being oneself. Nicely written
July 10th, 2025 20:43
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives good advice about being oneself. Nicely written
July 10th, 2025 20:43
We Are One
sorenbarrett said:
This is a prominent theory on the aspect of consciousness that we are merely receivers for a greater universal consciousness that gives us the illusion of individual identity. We are all one and because of this all the more reason for compassion toward others and all life forms because they are all us. Lovely write.
June 29th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
This is a prominent theory on the aspect of consciousness that we are merely receivers for a greater universal consciousness that gives us the illusion of individual identity. We are all one and because of this all the more reason for compassion toward others and all life forms because they are all us. Lovely write.
June 29th, 2025 04:14
Root of My Name
Poetic Licence said:
What a wonderful and beautiful dedication to ones mother, lovely write
May 10th, 2025 02:31
Poetic Licence said:
What a wonderful and beautiful dedication to ones mother, lovely write
May 10th, 2025 02:31
Root of My Name
G.Cabús said:
Thank you deeply for your kind words. It’s special to know the poem reached you. From one soul who writes to another—your presence and sensitivity are felt.
May 9th, 2025 23:27
G.Cabús said:
Thank you deeply for your kind words. It’s special to know the poem reached you. From one soul who writes to another—your presence and sensitivity are felt.
May 9th, 2025 23:27
Root of My Name
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful Mother\'s day wish and declaration. Words well chosen and nicely composed.
May 9th, 2025 20:51
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful Mother\'s day wish and declaration. Words well chosen and nicely composed.
May 9th, 2025 20:51
Reflection on Human Madness and Sanity
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful topic too little explored in poetry except tangentially. In forty years of working with mental issues I have reached the same conclusion that categories do little justice and our own biases and lack of information lead to wrong conclusions. Understanding is key and situations and history make us what we are. A most lovely and poignant write
March 9th, 2025 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful topic too little explored in poetry except tangentially. In forty years of working with mental issues I have reached the same conclusion that categories do little justice and our own biases and lack of information lead to wrong conclusions. Understanding is key and situations and history make us what we are. A most lovely and poignant write
March 9th, 2025 09:46
The Strength in Our Imperfection
Poetic Licence said:
Without those imperfections we would all be the same and not an individual, and that would be a sad world, nicely expressed write with serious message, enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 03:15
Poetic Licence said:
Without those imperfections we would all be the same and not an individual, and that would be a sad world, nicely expressed write with serious message, enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 03:15
The Strength in Our Imperfection
sorenbarrett said:
Differences make for unity. A melting pot of diversity that leads to different views and inspiration. A lovely meaning to this work
March 8th, 2025 15:12
sorenbarrett said:
Differences make for unity. A melting pot of diversity that leads to different views and inspiration. A lovely meaning to this work
March 8th, 2025 15:12
I Love You My Love, I Love You…
Happy said:
I Love You Too…..papi Jerry miss you!! we all miss you
December 23rd, 2023 16:38
Happy said:
I Love You Too…..papi Jerry miss you!! we all miss you
December 23rd, 2023 16:38
I Love You My Love, I Love You…
G.Cabús said:
Thank you poet!! Have a wonderful day!
November 23rd, 2023 12:41
G.Cabús said:
Thank you poet!! Have a wonderful day!
November 23rd, 2023 12:41
I Love You My Love, I Love You…
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. Full of love!!!
November 23rd, 2023 01:06
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. Full of love!!!
November 23rd, 2023 01:06
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