Comments received on poems by Kman Pumpkin King28
Fear
sorenbarrett said:
The fear of loss is a primary fear we all have and why Buddhists believe that having no desire is the key to enlightenment. Here the fear of loosing love is paramount and such insecurity is expressed. Nicely done
April 3rd, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
The fear of loss is a primary fear we all have and why Buddhists believe that having no desire is the key to enlightenment. Here the fear of loosing love is paramount and such insecurity is expressed. Nicely done
April 3rd, 2026 03:50
Maybe
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a reflective poem of how much of a child\'s behavior is learned from a parent\'s example and how influential is the other role model and latter role models as friends, peers, media and then there is just nature itself and how many genes make the difference and who\'s. Complicated yet raw in this write
March 23rd, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a reflective poem of how much of a child\'s behavior is learned from a parent\'s example and how influential is the other role model and latter role models as friends, peers, media and then there is just nature itself and how many genes make the difference and who\'s. Complicated yet raw in this write
March 23rd, 2026 04:22
Stuck
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sends a clear message of being stuck in a quagmire of habit or routine. It feels sticky. Nicely written
February 20th, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sends a clear message of being stuck in a quagmire of habit or routine. It feels sticky. Nicely written
February 20th, 2026 03:58
God
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic prayer pleading for the help of God. Nicely done.
January 2nd, 2026 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic prayer pleading for the help of God. Nicely done.
January 2nd, 2026 06:05
WINDOWSILL
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desire and dreams that only exist on the other side of a widow. A lovely write
December 21st, 2025 15:25
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desire and dreams that only exist on the other side of a widow. A lovely write
December 21st, 2025 15:25
Learning To Set Me Free
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of shutting off the pain of emotions and the return of them with the promise of freedom. In the literal sense a poem of emancipation while in metaphor freedom may mean taking things beyond this life. If leaving life is seen as freedom a reconsideration may need to be considered. It is raw and bleeds with emotion. Nicely done
November 18th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of shutting off the pain of emotions and the return of them with the promise of freedom. In the literal sense a poem of emancipation while in metaphor freedom may mean taking things beyond this life. If leaving life is seen as freedom a reconsideration may need to be considered. It is raw and bleeds with emotion. Nicely done
November 18th, 2025 03:44
My Storm
Poetic Licence said:
Having the belief that the storm will pass into better days offering some hope, positive write
May 17th, 2025 02:16
Poetic Licence said:
Having the belief that the storm will pass into better days offering some hope, positive write
May 17th, 2025 02:16
My Storm
sorenbarrett said:
Faith and belief in a better day to come. Very nice with a great sense of hope.
May 16th, 2025 16:53
sorenbarrett said:
Faith and belief in a better day to come. Very nice with a great sense of hope.
May 16th, 2025 16:53
BIRD
sorenbarrett said:
How many of us have dreamed of being a bird. We all want to fly and not in a plane. A great write
April 21st, 2025 16:34
sorenbarrett said:
How many of us have dreamed of being a bird. We all want to fly and not in a plane. A great write
April 21st, 2025 16:34
No One Knows
sorenbarrett said:
Hidden pain that one chooses not to air. Held inside as a destructive force. Seen as strong and able but really feeling alone. Nicely written
August 19th, 2024 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
Hidden pain that one chooses not to air. Held inside as a destructive force. Seen as strong and able but really feeling alone. Nicely written
August 19th, 2024 05:48
