Comments received on poems by Kman Pumpkin King28
Learning To Set Me Free
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of shutting off the pain of emotions and the return of them with the promise of freedom. In the literal sense a poem of emancipation while in metaphor freedom may mean taking things beyond this life. If leaving life is seen as freedom a reconsideration may need to be considered. It is raw and bleeds with emotion. Nicely done
November 18th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of shutting off the pain of emotions and the return of them with the promise of freedom. In the literal sense a poem of emancipation while in metaphor freedom may mean taking things beyond this life. If leaving life is seen as freedom a reconsideration may need to be considered. It is raw and bleeds with emotion. Nicely done
November 18th, 2025 03:44
My Storm
Poetic Licence said:
Having the belief that the storm will pass into better days offering some hope, positive write
May 17th, 2025 02:16
Poetic Licence said:
Having the belief that the storm will pass into better days offering some hope, positive write
May 17th, 2025 02:16
My Storm
sorenbarrett said:
Faith and belief in a better day to come. Very nice with a great sense of hope.
May 16th, 2025 16:53
sorenbarrett said:
Faith and belief in a better day to come. Very nice with a great sense of hope.
May 16th, 2025 16:53
BIRD
sorenbarrett said:
How many of us have dreamed of being a bird. We all want to fly and not in a plane. A great write
April 21st, 2025 16:34
sorenbarrett said:
How many of us have dreamed of being a bird. We all want to fly and not in a plane. A great write
April 21st, 2025 16:34
No One Knows
sorenbarrett said:
Hidden pain that one chooses not to air. Held inside as a destructive force. Seen as strong and able but really feeling alone. Nicely written
August 19th, 2024 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
Hidden pain that one chooses not to air. Held inside as a destructive force. Seen as strong and able but really feeling alone. Nicely written
August 19th, 2024 05:48
