Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Divine Soul
sorenbarrett said:
In reading this Krishna came to mind. A beautiful poem that feels peaceful in its culmination. It is full of nature and the cycle of life. Very nicely worded and crafted.
October 18th, 2025 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
In reading this Krishna came to mind. A beautiful poem that feels peaceful in its culmination. It is full of nature and the cycle of life. Very nicely worded and crafted.
October 18th, 2025 06:21
Breath
arqios said:
Beautifully heartfelt. I\'m liking how the imagery moves from breath to stars, tying love to both the intimate and the cosmic. It reads like a vow that stretches beyond life itself, which makes the closing lines especially powerful.
October 17th, 2025 05:12
arqios said:
Beautifully heartfelt. I\'m liking how the imagery moves from breath to stars, tying love to both the intimate and the cosmic. It reads like a vow that stretches beyond life itself, which makes the closing lines especially powerful.
October 17th, 2025 05:12
Breath
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge in a poem, words of love spoken. Nicely worded the message is clear and I hope that the lover hears
October 16th, 2025 14:18
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge in a poem, words of love spoken. Nicely worded the message is clear and I hope that the lover hears
October 16th, 2025 14:18
The Garden
Bella Shepard said:
Stunning imagery my friend, I\'m there in the forest. What a wonderful tribute to nature and all that she bestows upon us. Beautiful rhyming lines that flow so gently, this is truly a retreat of peace.
October 15th, 2025 12:19
Bella Shepard said:
Stunning imagery my friend, I\'m there in the forest. What a wonderful tribute to nature and all that she bestows upon us. Beautiful rhyming lines that flow so gently, this is truly a retreat of peace.
October 15th, 2025 12:19
The Garden
sorenbarrett said:
A favorite retreat in the mind ideal in every way, beautiful and peaceful is presented in this poem. Nicely imaged and penned.
October 15th, 2025 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
A favorite retreat in the mind ideal in every way, beautiful and peaceful is presented in this poem. Nicely imaged and penned.
October 15th, 2025 10:10
I Sat on a Rose
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
I love this beautiful piece a lot. She left memories that are hard to let go, but you can eventually get through it, I promise.
October 14th, 2025 07:51
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
I love this beautiful piece a lot. She left memories that are hard to let go, but you can eventually get through it, I promise.
October 14th, 2025 07:51
I Sat on a Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A magical metaphor that caught my heart. Couldn\'t help my thoughts racing ahead had planned a different ending to this poem. Hope you don\'t mind.
With a wink of an eye she then she turned with a sigh
Torn loose the sting, death it did bring, love to live and die
But then mine are always somewhat dark seeing love as a product of pain and beauty. A fave my friend
October 14th, 2025 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
A magical metaphor that caught my heart. Couldn\'t help my thoughts racing ahead had planned a different ending to this poem. Hope you don\'t mind.
With a wink of an eye she then she turned with a sigh
Torn loose the sting, death it did bring, love to live and die
But then mine are always somewhat dark seeing love as a product of pain and beauty. A fave my friend
October 14th, 2025 07:20
Flesh of Self
Friendship said:
Happy Thanksgiving,,,,,,,,The poem explores themes of love, connection, and the human experience, juxtaposing feelings of joy and loneliness. It reflects on the profound bond between individuals, the beauty of shared moments, and the intrinsic connection to nature and the cosmos.
October 13th, 2025 12:53
Friendship said:
Happy Thanksgiving,,,,,,,,The poem explores themes of love, connection, and the human experience, juxtaposing feelings of joy and loneliness. It reflects on the profound bond between individuals, the beauty of shared moments, and the intrinsic connection to nature and the cosmos.
October 13th, 2025 12:53
Flesh of Self
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful this poem speaks to a deeper level and thrills the heart
October 13th, 2025 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful this poem speaks to a deeper level and thrills the heart
October 13th, 2025 05:22
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and dream like images in this poem. Very nicely done
October 12th, 2025 10:47
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and dream like images in this poem. Very nicely done
October 12th, 2025 10:47
Blood and wine
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s been a while since I read one of your poems and I have enjoyed the read
October 10th, 2025 15:59
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s been a while since I read one of your poems and I have enjoyed the read
October 10th, 2025 15:59
Blood and wine
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the interconnectedness of life, death, and the beauty of existence, juxtaposing joy and sorrow, youth and aging, and the transient nature of time. It reflects on the human experience and the inevitability of mortality, while also celebrating the beauty and complexity of the universe.
October 10th, 2025 11:55
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the interconnectedness of life, death, and the beauty of existence, juxtaposing joy and sorrow, youth and aging, and the transient nature of time. It reflects on the human experience and the inevitability of mortality, while also celebrating the beauty and complexity of the universe.
October 10th, 2025 11:55
Blood and wine
sorenbarrett said:
Blood and wine indeed it is symbol as old as wine itself nicely worded in this poem it is a fave
October 10th, 2025 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
Blood and wine indeed it is symbol as old as wine itself nicely worded in this poem it is a fave
October 10th, 2025 09:09
Vows
Friendship said:
Nicely written, your poem revolves around love and devotion. It expresses deep affection for a beloved, highlighting the beauty found in both life and death. The speaker conveys a sense of commitment and unity, suggesting that love endures through both struggles and triumphs. The subject matter includes elements of romantic love, the passage of time, and the significance of shared life experiences.
October 9th, 2025 08:57
Friendship said:
Nicely written, your poem revolves around love and devotion. It expresses deep affection for a beloved, highlighting the beauty found in both life and death. The speaker conveys a sense of commitment and unity, suggesting that love endures through both struggles and triumphs. The subject matter includes elements of romantic love, the passage of time, and the significance of shared life experiences.
October 9th, 2025 08:57
Vows
sorenbarrett said:
Symbols of love are all we have be they our actions or a pink rose. From these we interpret another\'s feelings very nicely written
October 9th, 2025 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
Symbols of love are all we have be they our actions or a pink rose. From these we interpret another\'s feelings very nicely written
October 9th, 2025 06:54
To the Universe
NinjaGirl said:
This is beautiful, what an experience to be had. Thank you for sharing!
October 8th, 2025 20:23
NinjaGirl said:
This is beautiful, what an experience to be had. Thank you for sharing!
October 8th, 2025 20:23
To the Universe
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor and allegory in this poem does not go unnoticed and it fits so well. The interesting change in rhyme scheme in the second stanza awakens the reader to the potential for change. This poem is thought provoking and philosophical. Nicely done and a fave
October 8th, 2025 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor and allegory in this poem does not go unnoticed and it fits so well. The interesting change in rhyme scheme in the second stanza awakens the reader to the potential for change. This poem is thought provoking and philosophical. Nicely done and a fave
October 8th, 2025 05:41
My Wandering heart
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of love, nicely written in good rhyme
October 7th, 2025 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of love, nicely written in good rhyme
October 7th, 2025 09:45
Oh Star
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a spiritual nature it seems. Nicely written
October 6th, 2025 19:21
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a spiritual nature it seems. Nicely written
October 6th, 2025 19:21
The Lonely Star
sorenbarrett said:
Love like light not seen is like that tree that falls in a forest with no one around begs the question does it make a sound? Nicely penned
October 5th, 2025 19:41
sorenbarrett said:
Love like light not seen is like that tree that falls in a forest with no one around begs the question does it make a sound? Nicely penned
October 5th, 2025 19:41
My love Rose
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic in nature, image and words with rhyme no less. Well done
October 5th, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic in nature, image and words with rhyme no less. Well done
October 5th, 2025 03:43
Dreamy Brook
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the beauty and tranquility of nature, particularly through the imagery of a brook. It evokes feelings of nostalgia, peace, and the cyclical nature of life, encompassing themes of childhood innocence and the natural world’s serenity.
October 3rd, 2025 06:59
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the beauty and tranquility of nature, particularly through the imagery of a brook. It evokes feelings of nostalgia, peace, and the cyclical nature of life, encompassing themes of childhood innocence and the natural world’s serenity.
October 3rd, 2025 06:59
Dreamy Brook
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem written with great rhyme and good meter it flows nicely. Well done and a fave
October 2nd, 2025 20:58
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem written with great rhyme and good meter it flows nicely. Well done and a fave
October 2nd, 2025 20:58
Butterfly
sorenbarrett said:
The freedom of a butterfly in this poem. Well done
October 1st, 2025 15:23
sorenbarrett said:
The freedom of a butterfly in this poem. Well done
October 1st, 2025 15:23
Mountain Peak
sorenbarrett said:
I love the imagery and rhyme in this poem it is wonderfully done
September 30th, 2025 21:05
sorenbarrett said:
I love the imagery and rhyme in this poem it is wonderfully done
September 30th, 2025 21:05
My love, my love
sorenbarrett said:
There is a poetic rhythm to this poem that in rhyme and meter that carries the reader wafting them along on its feel. Charming
September 30th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
There is a poetic rhythm to this poem that in rhyme and meter that carries the reader wafting them along on its feel. Charming
September 30th, 2025 04:29
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