Comments received on poems by RSM0812



The Lonely Rose
Poetic Licence said:

This simply a wonderful piece of writing,loved it

March 5th, 2025 14:06

The Lonely Rose
sorenbarrett said:

Wow!! Brilliant! Every once in a while on this site I read something that is truly great. This poem worthy of any book is so classical in form but the message drives deep. A true masterpiece I congratulate you and am envious.

March 5th, 2025 11:41

My love, My Pulse
NinjaGirl said:

Beautifully written!

March 4th, 2025 12:57

My love, My Pulse
Tony36 said:

Love it

March 4th, 2025 10:35

My love, My Pulse
sorenbarrett said:

The unity of all is encompassed in this poem, interrelationships, symbiosis and how everything fits. Lovely

March 4th, 2025 09:25

Farewell Winter
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful painting of aged winter personified and spring as well a younger wife beautiful in her blooming. Very nice

March 2nd, 2025 15:05

Farewell Winter
Poetic Licence said:

At last the sun has ended its vacation, enjoyed the read

March 2nd, 2025 14:58

Farewell Winter
arqios said:

So reminds me of my wife and myself! Now I’m melting like Olaf ( ⛄️ from Frozen fame) πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

March 2nd, 2025 12:38

Scam
Poetic Licence said:

That\'s a make you think write, very enjoyable

March 1st, 2025 13:06

Behold a Rose
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice One RSM
Sweet Rhythms

March 1st, 2025 12:40

Scam
sorenbarrett said:

Open to many interpretations this one I took as each or our own meat sacks that are only on rent. Lovely

March 1st, 2025 11:33

She
Poetic Licence said:

Well expressed and layered write i enjoyed reading

February 26th, 2025 12:52

She
sorenbarrett said:

Dramatic this poem that could be taken as a metaphor as well. Very nicely done.

February 26th, 2025 09:40

Our Song
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

February 25th, 2025 08:16

Our Song
Poetic Licence said:

A beautifully written piece which feels smooth as you read through, yet has a dark undercurrent, enjoyed the read

February 25th, 2025 05:50

Our Song
sorenbarrett said:

Masterfully written this poem has a wonderful flow and rhyme to it and the meaning is deep and rather heavy. A absolutely wonderful piece that I wish I had written. A definite fave

February 25th, 2025 03:32

Oh Tender Tongue
NafisaSB said:

your ecstasy shines out - all the best for much more

February 24th, 2025 00:24

Oh Tender Tongue
arqios said:

A stirring expression and poetic rendition. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

February 23rd, 2025 14:35

Oh Tender Tongue
sorenbarrett said:

Well written with good rhyme and underlying meaning. Nicely done

February 23rd, 2025 11:42

Tick Tock
sorenbarrett said:

Apocalyptic in nature is the feel that I get from this poem. The passage of time is emphasized and it seems dark. Nicely expressed.

February 22nd, 2025 13:30

Tinkering with Control
Poetic Licence said:

Greed the creator of monsters, the tool of destruction, the illness in today\'s world, enjoyed the read

February 19th, 2025 12:52

Tinkering with Control
sorenbarrett said:

Greed one of the primary hard wired human traits that makes society and breaks society. Good write

February 19th, 2025 11:30

Toungue twister
arqios said:

Nice, an adventure to read out! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

February 18th, 2025 16:26

Toungue twister
sorenbarrett said:

Great internal rhyme in this piece that helps in the flow. Very nice.

February 18th, 2025 14:23

My dreams
arqios said:

Like how you positioned strength and gentleness in one seamless movement, that speaks heaps and heapsπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

February 17th, 2025 18:39

My dreams
sorenbarrett said:

Many live their dreams as their reality. A wonderful write

February 17th, 2025 11:14

Do or Dare
Poetic Licence said:

How far will we push the boundaries, enjoyed the read

February 16th, 2025 16:22

Do or Dare
sorenbarrett said:

A provocative write and the question remains how far do we go on a dare? Loved it

February 16th, 2025 14:22

Eternal emotions
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely write that strikes at the heart. A strong write

February 15th, 2025 13:28

Happy Valentine
sorenbarrett said:

A nicely painted love poem. Well done

February 14th, 2025 17:24

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