Comments received on poems by RSM0812



Frozen Time
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

September 4th, 2025 10:42

Frozen Time
sorenbarrett said:

The view of the working man a communal desire to share equally but such is not nature whose fairness is measured in survival. Nicely written

September 4th, 2025 09:13

For Only You
sorenbarrett said:

Very touching a poem nicely built from the beginning and completed tying the ending to the start. The element of carrying one\'s loneliness in a box a nice touch. Very nicely done

September 3rd, 2025 04:50

My Pen
RSM0812 said:

Thanks again for your interpretation

September 2nd, 2025 11:15

My Pen
sorenbarrett said:

A poem full of thoughts and feelings where drives and desires are addressed and in humor and strive where one chooses to roll the dice. Lovely

September 2nd, 2025 07:33

Time standing Still
NafisaSB said:

time ticks for everyone, and for no one..good one here...

September 2nd, 2025 02:04

A Kiss
sorenbarrett said:

Romantic and nicely rhymed this poem calls out for another. Nicely done

September 1st, 2025 08:54

An empty Mug
Bella Shepard said:

The opposites of life coexist; my cup runeth over or the well is dry. When peace finally finds its seat at the table, then perhaps balance is at hand. This is what I feel here when reading your poem. A very thoughtful piece.

August 31st, 2025 13:45

An empty Mug
sorenbarrett said:

This seems a cynical view on love and life seen as an empty mug. I too feel this mood from time to time. Well written

August 31st, 2025 04:37

Time standing Still
NinjaGirl said:

It\'s comforting to have a constant in a world full of change. A lot of people make time to be the enemy, I love the way you described it in this work.

August 30th, 2025 19:46

Time standing Still
Bella Shepard said:

The mystery of time, in beautiful rhyme. Love it!

August 30th, 2025 13:20

Time standing Still
sorenbarrett said:

This one I love and is a fave. It combines two well known proverbs into one. So nicely said in poetic style

August 30th, 2025 11:41

Guild the Lilly
sorenbarrett said:

Very nicely penned. This poem explores the metaphor of lover and rose. Well done

August 29th, 2025 13:55

Guild the Lilly
Bella Shepard said:

What a beautiful metaphor for true love. The rose, perfection in and of itself, just by vitrue of its being. This was a joy to read!

August 29th, 2025 08:52

Untitled
sorenbarrett said:

This one rocks with religious feeling and the dichotomy of God and Satan and the soul. Nicely written

August 28th, 2025 08:38

A Ride From God
sorenbarrett said:

I enjoyed the light humor in this poem. If there was a God I think he would very much enjoy this depiction. Nicely said

August 27th, 2025 07:02

The Addictive Mind
sorenbarrett said:

Morals change for good and bad with time. A lovley write

August 26th, 2025 08:06

Borrowed from eternity
sorenbarrett said:

Full of wordplay and metaphor it breaths. Nicely done

August 25th, 2025 15:12

The Flower in the Stone
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting metaphor here. Well done

August 24th, 2025 06:35

Untitled
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful and meaningful with great images. Lovely a fave

August 23rd, 2025 09:26

The wolf an the snake
sorenbarrett said:

I love the roll of the rhyme in what seems to be a poem with almost Native American flavor. A most lovely write and a fave

August 22nd, 2025 05:11

Laddy Boy
sorenbarrett said:

I hardly dare venture to speak on this beautiful poem. Wonderful wording and rhyme in a poem that is a bit obscure as to meaning where angels fear to tread

August 21st, 2025 05:29

Lovers Rose
Bella Shepard said:

I read it aloud, and loved every line!

August 20th, 2025 10:50

Lovers Rose
sorenbarrett said:

A very nice sonnet in most classical form. Lovely words

August 20th, 2025 04:17

Little Flower
sorenbarrett said:

A great metaphor in this poem where love needs to be nurtured and cared for through the adversities of life. Nicely done

August 19th, 2025 05:05

People change
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of faith and belief merged with life\'s struggles. Nicely written

August 18th, 2025 04:16

Dreamless Sleep
Poetic Licence said:

A really nice write with some wonderful imagery as you read, enjoyed the read

August 17th, 2025 04:53

Dreamless Sleep
sorenbarrett said:

The cadence of this poem brought to mind a chant over a caldron and witches brew. It is filled with wonderful and magical images of the night. A lovely write

August 17th, 2025 04:38

Untitled
sorenbarrett said:

Woven within this poem is a dark thread of man that leaves a stain in the fabric. The poem holds feelings of the surreal and prophetic words that shake the soul

August 16th, 2025 08:33

The lonely
sorenbarrett said:

Questions asked reminiscing in this poem that speaks of a relationship nicely done

August 15th, 2025 05:34

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