Comments received on poems by RSM0812
I Chained My Love
Friendship said:
A good write, your poem revolves around the complex interplay between love, bondage, and emotional vulnerability.
May 5th, 2026 05:45
Friendship said:
A good write, your poem revolves around the complex interplay between love, bondage, and emotional vulnerability.
May 5th, 2026 05:45
I Chained My Love
sorenbarrett said:
We inflict ourselves with the heaviest punishments. A great write
May 4th, 2026 21:28
sorenbarrett said:
We inflict ourselves with the heaviest punishments. A great write
May 4th, 2026 21:28
Song bird
Friendship said:
Beautifully written. Your poem delves into the natural world, utilizing elements like streams, dew, and meadows to symbolize life and rebirth. It also reflects on deeper emotional states, such as sorrow (\"tears and blood\") and the yearning for connection and harmony, as represented by the \"angel\" who lacks a voice.
May 1st, 2026 05:52
Friendship said:
Beautifully written. Your poem delves into the natural world, utilizing elements like streams, dew, and meadows to symbolize life and rebirth. It also reflects on deeper emotional states, such as sorrow (\"tears and blood\") and the yearning for connection and harmony, as represented by the \"angel\" who lacks a voice.
May 1st, 2026 05:52
Song bird
sorenbarrett said:
Angelic or mythic it paints a picture of peace. Well written
May 1st, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Angelic or mythic it paints a picture of peace. Well written
May 1st, 2026 04:09
Lovers Dream
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely love poem written in good style with rhyme. Nicely done
April 29th, 2026 20:28
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely love poem written in good style with rhyme. Nicely done
April 29th, 2026 20:28
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and dreamlike it blends with nature and its images. Well written
April 27th, 2026 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and dreamlike it blends with nature and its images. Well written
April 27th, 2026 06:35
Calming Rest
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed by the sword and gun of man it ends well written
April 26th, 2026 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed by the sword and gun of man it ends well written
April 26th, 2026 06:57
My Flower
sorenbarrett said:
This personification of nature\'s beauty and wonders is very nicely done in rhyme and good meter and flow. It paints a beautiful picture and is a fave
April 25th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
This personification of nature\'s beauty and wonders is very nicely done in rhyme and good meter and flow. It paints a beautiful picture and is a fave
April 25th, 2026 04:29
The Hanging
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
well written and a definite like
April 24th, 2026 05:34
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
well written and a definite like
April 24th, 2026 05:34
The Hanging
sorenbarrett said:
Billie Holiday\'s song strange fruit came to mind with the opening line of this poem. It is powerful and strongly worded in vivid terms of violence. It packs a strong message and is a fave
April 24th, 2026 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
Billie Holiday\'s song strange fruit came to mind with the opening line of this poem. It is powerful and strongly worded in vivid terms of violence. It packs a strong message and is a fave
April 24th, 2026 04:49
The Hanging
RSM0812 said:
It was inspired by the lynch mob death of Mousalini in Italy in 1945, after WWII.
April 24th, 2026 04:29
RSM0812 said:
It was inspired by the lynch mob death of Mousalini in Italy in 1945, after WWII.
April 24th, 2026 04:29
The Hanging
Doggerel Dave said:
Very poetic. Any particular lynching in your mind when you pasted this here?
April 24th, 2026 04:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Very poetic. Any particular lynching in your mind when you pasted this here?
April 24th, 2026 04:27
A Lovers Kiss
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around love and intimacy, exploring themes of desire, connection, and the ephemeral nature of romantic relationships.
April 23rd, 2026 06:58
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around love and intimacy, exploring themes of desire, connection, and the ephemeral nature of romantic relationships.
April 23rd, 2026 06:58
A Lovers Kiss
sorenbarrett said:
A romantic write full of passion and attraction to another. Well written
April 23rd, 2026 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
A romantic write full of passion and attraction to another. Well written
April 23rd, 2026 05:18
A Moment of a Song
sorenbarrett said:
It is that beat that brings one back like a heart beat a musical beat copies it and sets us to moving. Well done
April 22nd, 2026 16:04
sorenbarrett said:
It is that beat that brings one back like a heart beat a musical beat copies it and sets us to moving. Well done
April 22nd, 2026 16:04
A Moment of a Song
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around emotions and sadness.nicely done.
April 22nd, 2026 08:21
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around emotions and sadness.nicely done.
April 22nd, 2026 08:21
Calming Rest
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded this poem falls lightly on the ear. Well done
April 21st, 2026 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded this poem falls lightly on the ear. Well done
April 21st, 2026 13:31
Rose Repose
Waiting for Silence said:
Idea of divine sovereignty versus human control, presenting faith as liberating rather than restrictive. thoughtful
April 21st, 2026 11:25
Waiting for Silence said:
Idea of divine sovereignty versus human control, presenting faith as liberating rather than restrictive. thoughtful
April 21st, 2026 11:25
My Only
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual, sexual, full of desire, lust, attraction and obsession. Well done
April 20th, 2026 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual, sexual, full of desire, lust, attraction and obsession. Well done
April 20th, 2026 04:59
My Daisy
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme following rhyme creates a surreal and fanciful poem. Nicely written
April 19th, 2026 07:26
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme following rhyme creates a surreal and fanciful poem. Nicely written
April 19th, 2026 07:26
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