Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Till Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
An intoxicating poem of fantasy as surreal and dove\'s milk. Images flow in and out of this romantic dream. Lovely
June 30th, 2026 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
An intoxicating poem of fantasy as surreal and dove\'s milk. Images flow in and out of this romantic dream. Lovely
June 30th, 2026 14:22
The Dragonfly
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images well worded and rhymed with a very easy and nice flow. A fave
June 26th, 2026 18:55
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images well worded and rhymed with a very easy and nice flow. A fave
June 26th, 2026 18:55
Tremble the Heart
sorenbarrett said:
This poem emphasizes the contrast between those who have love and those that are lonely against a romantic backdrop for those with a love and the sharp reminder for those that have none. Very nicely done
June 24th, 2026 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
This poem emphasizes the contrast between those who have love and those that are lonely against a romantic backdrop for those with a love and the sharp reminder for those that have none. Very nicely done
June 24th, 2026 06:32
Through an Angel
sorenbarrett said:
An angelic poem of love set in a classic rhyme scheme well written.
June 23rd, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
An angelic poem of love set in a classic rhyme scheme well written.
June 23rd, 2026 04:33
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This surreal poem flows like a dream. Nicely written
June 22nd, 2026 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
This surreal poem flows like a dream. Nicely written
June 22nd, 2026 06:07
Feather Song
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric spiritual and religious mix here. Well done
June 20th, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric spiritual and religious mix here. Well done
June 20th, 2026 04:02
Poverty of War
sorenbarrett said:
My impression upon reading this is a metaphor of man\'s qualities of violence and war with the piece ending with the introduction of a hope for peace and change for the better. Well written
June 19th, 2026 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
My impression upon reading this is a metaphor of man\'s qualities of violence and war with the piece ending with the introduction of a hope for peace and change for the better. Well written
June 19th, 2026 06:22
The Devil\'s Prometheus
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic warning of destruction. Biblically metaphoric it sends its message. Well done
June 18th, 2026 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic warning of destruction. Biblically metaphoric it sends its message. Well done
June 18th, 2026 04:52
Cardinal and Rose
sorenbarrett said:
Charming this poem feels like something out of my childhood it feels maternal some way and from my childhood its rhyme carries me away to dream. Nicely done and a fave
June 17th, 2026 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Charming this poem feels like something out of my childhood it feels maternal some way and from my childhood its rhyme carries me away to dream. Nicely done and a fave
June 17th, 2026 04:31
Until the Day of Scrutiny
sorenbarrett said:
I take this a an atypical love poem with rhyme and good flow that tells of natures love and beauty not just human in nature. Well written
June 16th, 2026 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
I take this a an atypical love poem with rhyme and good flow that tells of natures love and beauty not just human in nature. Well written
June 16th, 2026 09:48
Devil Will
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem delves into concepts of eternal punishment, moral sacrifice, and the seductive nature of evil. It paints a vivid picture of a hellish existence where one\'s desires lead to destruction and despair.
June 15th, 2026 07:57
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem delves into concepts of eternal punishment, moral sacrifice, and the seductive nature of evil. It paints a vivid picture of a hellish existence where one\'s desires lead to destruction and despair.
June 15th, 2026 07:57
Devil Will
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a witch\'s sabot, a demon\'s dream, the devils work well written
June 15th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a witch\'s sabot, a demon\'s dream, the devils work well written
June 15th, 2026 04:14
Beckoning Violence
sorenbarrett said:
I feel discontent with this poem as a theme. Yet there seems hope in the end. Well done
June 14th, 2026 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
I feel discontent with this poem as a theme. Yet there seems hope in the end. Well done
June 14th, 2026 14:42
Weeping Rain
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal poetic images in each line this poem sets sail on strange seas. Well written
June 13th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal poetic images in each line this poem sets sail on strange seas. Well written
June 13th, 2026 04:05
Morning Song
Shah Asst said:
The worlds word, never changed… similar poetry on Motivation Shayari .
June 12th, 2026 07:13
Shah Asst said:
The worlds word, never changed… similar poetry on Motivation Shayari .
June 12th, 2026 07:13
Morning Song
sorenbarrett said:
Here states static and change interplay and one is left in a frozen form sheltered in sleep. Well done
June 12th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Here states static and change interplay and one is left in a frozen form sheltered in sleep. Well done
June 12th, 2026 04:14
The emporer and his games
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a dark feel that is at the same time carefree. It has a roll to the rhyme that helps keep the feel of it. Nicely done
June 11th, 2026 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a dark feel that is at the same time carefree. It has a roll to the rhyme that helps keep the feel of it. Nicely done
June 11th, 2026 07:43
Monotone Choir
sorenbarrett said:
There is something almost Shakespearian in this poem its wording, its meter, and even its flow. Nicely done
June 10th, 2026 06:47
sorenbarrett said:
There is something almost Shakespearian in this poem its wording, its meter, and even its flow. Nicely done
June 10th, 2026 06:47
Soul Traveler
sorenbarrett said:
Whether physical, spiritual, mental we all travel in this life and often end far from where we begin. Well written
June 9th, 2026 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
Whether physical, spiritual, mental we all travel in this life and often end far from where we begin. Well written
June 9th, 2026 03:34
A Kiss
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem in wording that feels classic of an emotion that has filtered through time. A lovely write and a fave
June 8th, 2026 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem in wording that feels classic of an emotion that has filtered through time. A lovely write and a fave
June 8th, 2026 06:32
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