Comments received on poems by RSM0812
A Moment of a Song
sorenbarrett said:
It is that beat that brings one back like a heart beat a musical beat copies it and sets us to moving. Well done
April 22nd, 2026 16:04
sorenbarrett said:
It is that beat that brings one back like a heart beat a musical beat copies it and sets us to moving. Well done
April 22nd, 2026 16:04
A Moment of a Song
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around emotions and sadness.nicely done.
April 22nd, 2026 08:21
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around emotions and sadness.nicely done.
April 22nd, 2026 08:21
Calming Rest
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded this poem falls lightly on the ear. Well done
April 21st, 2026 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded this poem falls lightly on the ear. Well done
April 21st, 2026 13:31
Rose Repose
Waiting for Silence said:
Idea of divine sovereignty versus human control, presenting faith as liberating rather than restrictive. thoughtful
April 21st, 2026 11:25
Waiting for Silence said:
Idea of divine sovereignty versus human control, presenting faith as liberating rather than restrictive. thoughtful
April 21st, 2026 11:25
My Only
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual, sexual, full of desire, lust, attraction and obsession. Well done
April 20th, 2026 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual, sexual, full of desire, lust, attraction and obsession. Well done
April 20th, 2026 04:59
My Daisy
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme following rhyme creates a surreal and fanciful poem. Nicely written
April 19th, 2026 07:26
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme following rhyme creates a surreal and fanciful poem. Nicely written
April 19th, 2026 07:26
My Daisy
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem evokes a sense of timelessness, as it references both night and day, suggesting that beauty exists across different times.
April 19th, 2026 06:34
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem evokes a sense of timelessness, as it references both night and day, suggesting that beauty exists across different times.
April 19th, 2026 06:34
Death My Love
marissa said:
Somethings telling me the story behind this write is a deep one.The emotions you flowed through were so real,great read!
April 18th, 2026 14:59
marissa said:
Somethings telling me the story behind this write is a deep one.The emotions you flowed through were so real,great read!
April 18th, 2026 14:59
Death My Love
sorenbarrett said:
This poem walks in the surreal exploring the scenery of the existential. Nicely done
April 18th, 2026 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
This poem walks in the surreal exploring the scenery of the existential. Nicely done
April 18th, 2026 05:43
The Forest Sky
sorenbarrett said:
Pictured and imaged nicely this poem presents a lovely portrayal of nature.
April 17th, 2026 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
Pictured and imaged nicely this poem presents a lovely portrayal of nature.
April 17th, 2026 06:50
Eyes of Mars
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem revolves around the complex interplay of love, remorse, longing, and the natural world.
April 16th, 2026 08:55
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem revolves around the complex interplay of love, remorse, longing, and the natural world.
April 16th, 2026 08:55
Eyes of Mars
sorenbarrett said:
Fanciful and surreal in its beauty this poem speaks of flowing wonders collected. Nicely done
April 16th, 2026 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
Fanciful and surreal in its beauty this poem speaks of flowing wonders collected. Nicely done
April 16th, 2026 06:34
Rose Repose
arqios said:
The ‘angels dancing upon thorns,’ that’s what did it for me! 🙏🏻🕊️
April 15th, 2026 16:23
arqios said:
The ‘angels dancing upon thorns,’ that’s what did it for me! 🙏🏻🕊️
April 15th, 2026 16:23
Rose Repose
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem focuses on a withered flower in a garden, representing fragility, sorrow, and the natural cycle of life and death. You painted an imagery of angels, weeping petals, and nesting birds, which suggests a connection to spirituality, nature, and the hope of regeneration.
April 15th, 2026 10:47
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem focuses on a withered flower in a garden, representing fragility, sorrow, and the natural cycle of life and death. You painted an imagery of angels, weeping petals, and nesting birds, which suggests a connection to spirituality, nature, and the hope of regeneration.
April 15th, 2026 10:47
Rose Repose
sorenbarrett said:
This poem blends the beauty of the real world with the fantasy and imagined angelic. Nicely done
April 15th, 2026 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
This poem blends the beauty of the real world with the fantasy and imagined angelic. Nicely done
April 15th, 2026 06:31
Blooming flower
Friendship said:
Nicely written, your poem centers around flowers as symbols of growth and emotional connection, particularly focusing on the nurturing aspect of love and the risks that come with it.
April 14th, 2026 17:40
Friendship said:
Nicely written, your poem centers around flowers as symbols of growth and emotional connection, particularly focusing on the nurturing aspect of love and the risks that come with it.
April 14th, 2026 17:40
Blooming flower
sorenbarrett said:
Very visual and rhythmic in its rhyme. Nicely done
April 14th, 2026 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
Very visual and rhythmic in its rhyme. Nicely done
April 14th, 2026 05:46
Iran
Doggerel Dave said:
The current situation is beyond words, but I thank you for having a go.
April 13th, 2026 18:02
Doggerel Dave said:
The current situation is beyond words, but I thank you for having a go.
April 13th, 2026 18:02
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