Comments received on poems by RSM0812
The Will
sorenbarrett said:
Here a great message is sent in most intriguing rhyme scheme a puzzle to be unwound in poetic words found. Brilliant!
March 23rd, 2025 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
Here a great message is sent in most intriguing rhyme scheme a puzzle to be unwound in poetic words found. Brilliant!
March 23rd, 2025 05:49
A Moment
MR.apocalypse said:
this might be the best poem ive seen today.
the way i could easily understand your rhythm and rhyme.
the unique words give it a new an refreshing taste.
this is a phenomenal poem in my opinion
March 23rd, 2025 01:55
MR.apocalypse said:
this might be the best poem ive seen today.
the way i could easily understand your rhythm and rhyme.
the unique words give it a new an refreshing taste.
this is a phenomenal poem in my opinion
March 23rd, 2025 01:55
A Moment
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of puzzle that like the inner psyche develops and breeds thoughts. Well written with internal and end rhyme it echoes in the mind. Very nicely done
March 22nd, 2025 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of puzzle that like the inner psyche develops and breeds thoughts. Well written with internal and end rhyme it echoes in the mind. Very nicely done
March 22nd, 2025 06:44
My Rose
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of one enamored and of passion that lies in new love. A great painting and metaphor and well said
March 21st, 2025 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of one enamored and of passion that lies in new love. A great painting and metaphor and well said
March 21st, 2025 06:44
Speeches Freedoms
Poetic Licence said:
Freedom of speech is a fading thing and thus progress in humanity will be halted, well crafted write with a positive message, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 05:00
Poetic Licence said:
Freedom of speech is a fading thing and thus progress in humanity will be halted, well crafted write with a positive message, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 05:00
Speeches Freedoms
sorenbarrett said:
Words of wisdom offered but not heard. Indeed nature itself is the greatest in speaking wisdom and still none listen. A well composed poem with good flow and rhyme. Lovely
March 20th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Words of wisdom offered but not heard. Indeed nature itself is the greatest in speaking wisdom and still none listen. A well composed poem with good flow and rhyme. Lovely
March 20th, 2025 04:29
Winters Kiss
Neville said:
I wanted to see exactly where you were coming from RSM & having trawled back thus far, I am delighted to say that I have not yet been disappointed .. Neville
March 20th, 2025 03:16
Neville said:
I wanted to see exactly where you were coming from RSM & having trawled back thus far, I am delighted to say that I have not yet been disappointed .. Neville
March 20th, 2025 03:16
Fake
Neville said:
I used to think I could spot a fake a mile off .. but today is more frightening than yesterday ever was .. and there are those who have turned falsehood & lies into both an art and a science .. and sadly the most adept at these things are those who hold high office .. and let\'s not even go near AI .. anyway, rant over, I get where you are coming from & enjoyed my all too brief visit here today .. Neville
March 20th, 2025 03:12
Neville said:
I used to think I could spot a fake a mile off .. but today is more frightening than yesterday ever was .. and there are those who have turned falsehood & lies into both an art and a science .. and sadly the most adept at these things are those who hold high office .. and let\'s not even go near AI .. anyway, rant over, I get where you are coming from & enjoyed my all too brief visit here today .. Neville
March 20th, 2025 03:12
Fake
Poetic Licence said:
How we have become to blind to distinguish fake or real anymore, not enough people question when they should, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 12:08
Poetic Licence said:
How we have become to blind to distinguish fake or real anymore, not enough people question when they should, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 12:08
Fake
sorenbarrett said:
A bite cryptic this poem speaks to falseness and our inability to see it. Nicely worded
March 19th, 2025 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
A bite cryptic this poem speaks to falseness and our inability to see it. Nicely worded
March 19th, 2025 11:04
A women or a flower
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of how both are similar and blossom into beauty, enjoyed the read
March 18th, 2025 12:58
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of how both are similar and blossom into beauty, enjoyed the read
March 18th, 2025 12:58
A women or a flower
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of similes and great comparisons of women and flowers. Nicely done
March 18th, 2025 12:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of similes and great comparisons of women and flowers. Nicely done
March 18th, 2025 12:08
700000 Mexicans in solitary cinfinement
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words this poem is powerfully stated. It speaks to injustice and to a problem that we have pushed down the road until it has created a traffic jam.
March 16th, 2025 07:13
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words this poem is powerfully stated. It speaks to injustice and to a problem that we have pushed down the road until it has created a traffic jam.
March 16th, 2025 07:13
700000 Mexicans in solitary cinfinement
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful and well expressed write,raising a increasingly serious ongoing issue, nice write
March 16th, 2025 05:25
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful and well expressed write,raising a increasingly serious ongoing issue, nice write
March 16th, 2025 05:25
Relationship
Poetic Licence said:
The good and the bad come together, for a relationship to work we have to except both, nicely expressed
March 15th, 2025 11:56
Poetic Licence said:
The good and the bad come together, for a relationship to work we have to except both, nicely expressed
March 15th, 2025 11:56
Relationship
sorenbarrett said:
The good and the bad together make up life. If one can not accept it that way then one ends up with a death of the relationship. Well written
March 15th, 2025 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
The good and the bad together make up life. If one can not accept it that way then one ends up with a death of the relationship. Well written
March 15th, 2025 07:43
Chained
Poetic Licence said:
That is a interesting and thoughtful provoking write, one to get the cogs turning, enjoyed the read
March 13th, 2025 13:35
Poetic Licence said:
That is a interesting and thoughtful provoking write, one to get the cogs turning, enjoyed the read
March 13th, 2025 13:35
Clock of time
sorenbarrett said:
Images pour though this poem as if it were a dream. The line (And horizons in a landscape of half slept dreams.) is marvelous One metaphor on the heels of another keep the reader on his toes. A lovely write.
March 12th, 2025 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
Images pour though this poem as if it were a dream. The line (And horizons in a landscape of half slept dreams.) is marvelous One metaphor on the heels of another keep the reader on his toes. A lovely write.
March 12th, 2025 12:21
Empty
Poetic Licence said:
That is touching with sadness, sense of pain and loss as you read, nicely expressed
March 11th, 2025 12:46
Poetic Licence said:
That is touching with sadness, sense of pain and loss as you read, nicely expressed
March 11th, 2025 12:46
Empty
sorenbarrett said:
Some powerful lines with vivid images in this poem that smacks of pain and hurt. Lovely
March 11th, 2025 09:50
sorenbarrett said:
Some powerful lines with vivid images in this poem that smacks of pain and hurt. Lovely
March 11th, 2025 09:50
Hell is a Rollorcoaster
Poetic Licence said:
A dark and interesting write, I think the way the world is going hell might be nearly full, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 07:49
Poetic Licence said:
A dark and interesting write, I think the way the world is going hell might be nearly full, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 07:49
Hell is a Rollorcoaster
sorenbarrett said:
A rather grim thought even for a dark poem. Well written but hopefully not a reality. Very nice.
March 10th, 2025 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
A rather grim thought even for a dark poem. Well written but hopefully not a reality. Very nice.
March 10th, 2025 06:53
Memories Sake
Poetic Licence said:
A creative write allowing you to imagine some wonderful images as you read through, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 03:18
Poetic Licence said:
A creative write allowing you to imagine some wonderful images as you read through, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 03:18
Memories Sake
sorenbarrett said:
A myriad of images and metaphor that winds its way through a maze of the universe to arrive at its end
March 9th, 2025 16:30
sorenbarrett said:
A myriad of images and metaphor that winds its way through a maze of the universe to arrive at its end
March 9th, 2025 16:30
The Bench
Cassie58 said:
Well penned. The mask dropped. How poignant this piece was. Lovely write.
March 9th, 2025 15:59
Cassie58 said:
Well penned. The mask dropped. How poignant this piece was. Lovely write.
March 9th, 2025 15:59
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