Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Shadowed Eyes
sorenbarrett said:
This reworked version works well and reads smoother. Nicely done
March 17th, 2026 03:20
sorenbarrett said:
This reworked version works well and reads smoother. Nicely done
March 17th, 2026 03:20
Scentd Beauty
sorenbarrett said:
Lust, desire, seduction, sensuality, sexual and arousing this poem is one of a siren\'s call a dream of passion. Nicely worded it offers satisfaction. Well done
March 16th, 2026 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
Lust, desire, seduction, sensuality, sexual and arousing this poem is one of a siren\'s call a dream of passion. Nicely worded it offers satisfaction. Well done
March 16th, 2026 08:37
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Wow!! Such beauty in this verse it breaths with a most classical feel it oozes romance for nature and in metaphor for maybe another. A definite fave
March 15th, 2026 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
Wow!! Such beauty in this verse it breaths with a most classical feel it oozes romance for nature and in metaphor for maybe another. A definite fave
March 15th, 2026 05:20
Lover
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphors and images well woven into a great poem. Lovely
March 14th, 2026 13:51
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphors and images well woven into a great poem. Lovely
March 14th, 2026 13:51
Money isnt everything
sorenbarrett said:
Those things that man values are not what nature values. A poem of man\'s placing of value on money. Nicely done.
March 12th, 2026 15:28
sorenbarrett said:
Those things that man values are not what nature values. A poem of man\'s placing of value on money. Nicely done.
March 12th, 2026 15:28
The middle
sorenbarrett said:
Near rhyme and rhyme punctuate this poem of flight and fall of desire and vision. Nicely done
March 11th, 2026 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
Near rhyme and rhyme punctuate this poem of flight and fall of desire and vision. Nicely done
March 11th, 2026 08:26
My Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem with images of nature woven in. Nicely done
March 10th, 2026 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem with images of nature woven in. Nicely done
March 10th, 2026 05:54
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem that in the complexity of its lines speaks to the simplicity of wealth\'s lure. Lovely and a fave
March 9th, 2026 17:03
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem that in the complexity of its lines speaks to the simplicity of wealth\'s lure. Lovely and a fave
March 9th, 2026 17:03
Angelic Verse
Friendship said:
Nicely written . Your poem explores the transient nature of life, the beauty of celestial beings, and the hope that comes from spiritual connection and prayer.
March 8th, 2026 07:50
Friendship said:
Nicely written . Your poem explores the transient nature of life, the beauty of celestial beings, and the hope that comes from spiritual connection and prayer.
March 8th, 2026 07:50
Angelic Verse
RSM0812 said:
I like your interpretation, however its more about an angelic war of the christian doctrine. Thanks again for reading and commenting .
March 8th, 2026 04:28
RSM0812 said:
I like your interpretation, however its more about an angelic war of the christian doctrine. Thanks again for reading and commenting .
March 8th, 2026 04:28
Angelic Verse
sorenbarrett said:
In rhyme this poem speaks of the fleeting nature of life and temporal nature. Nicely written
March 8th, 2026 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
In rhyme this poem speaks of the fleeting nature of life and temporal nature. Nicely written
March 8th, 2026 03:53
Weeping Rose
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the interplay between love, nature, and the passage of time. It conveys a sense of longing and reflection on the beauty and transience of love, using the garden as a metaphor for growth and decay.
March 6th, 2026 07:50
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the interplay between love, nature, and the passage of time. It conveys a sense of longing and reflection on the beauty and transience of love, using the garden as a metaphor for growth and decay.
March 6th, 2026 07:50
Weeping Rose
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes me feel stupid yet tickles feelings unnamed, shakes the dust out of old rugs and opens doors on cobweb closets. It brings light that exposes little but feels so good to be aired out. It is one of those mysterious poems that come every blue moon that just leaves one feeling better for being too dumb to understand it. Nicely done and a fave
March 6th, 2026 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes me feel stupid yet tickles feelings unnamed, shakes the dust out of old rugs and opens doors on cobweb closets. It brings light that exposes little but feels so good to be aired out. It is one of those mysterious poems that come every blue moon that just leaves one feeling better for being too dumb to understand it. Nicely done and a fave
March 6th, 2026 03:46
Death of Roses
sorenbarrett said:
Here the image may well be a rose or a metaphor for love itself. Nicely framed in good meter and rhyme it is a fave
March 5th, 2026 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
Here the image may well be a rose or a metaphor for love itself. Nicely framed in good meter and rhyme it is a fave
March 5th, 2026 04:43
Duration of Fire
sorenbarrett said:
This speaks of the chaos of nature to me. Nicely done
March 4th, 2026 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
This speaks of the chaos of nature to me. Nicely done
March 4th, 2026 06:39
Untitled
RSM0812 said:
Hi Sorenbarrett. Do u know how to find a specific poet on this site? The search engine only brings up titled poetry.
March 3rd, 2026 21:47
RSM0812 said:
Hi Sorenbarrett. Do u know how to find a specific poet on this site? The search engine only brings up titled poetry.
March 3rd, 2026 21:47
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
There is a weaving of the words, their sounds, meaning all creating a strange fabric that\'s pattern I can not identify but that draws me in and for the haunting feeling a fave
March 3rd, 2026 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
There is a weaving of the words, their sounds, meaning all creating a strange fabric that\'s pattern I can not identify but that draws me in and for the haunting feeling a fave
March 3rd, 2026 04:56
The Garden Gate
sorenbarrett said:
The gate is the portal for entry and exit. A lovely poem about protection. Nicely done
March 1st, 2026 19:04
sorenbarrett said:
The gate is the portal for entry and exit. A lovely poem about protection. Nicely done
March 1st, 2026 19:04
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A moral lessen woven in this nicely worded poem with rhyme and great flow. Very nicely done
March 1st, 2026 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
A moral lessen woven in this nicely worded poem with rhyme and great flow. Very nicely done
March 1st, 2026 05:15
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries with it a feeling of impending threat as if karma was speaking. Nicely worded
February 27th, 2026 11:45
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries with it a feeling of impending threat as if karma was speaking. Nicely worded
February 27th, 2026 11:45
Generosity
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a reflection and the question is whether it is of internal or external issues. Well written
February 26th, 2026 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a reflection and the question is whether it is of internal or external issues. Well written
February 26th, 2026 10:01
Eternal Love
sorenbarrett said:
A true poetic love letter is in this poem. Nicely constructed it rings with rhyme. Nicely done
February 25th, 2026 15:00
sorenbarrett said:
A true poetic love letter is in this poem. Nicely constructed it rings with rhyme. Nicely done
February 25th, 2026 15:00
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