Comments received on poems by RSM0812
From Kong to Peasant
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording nicely put together. Well done
August 14th, 2026 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording nicely put together. Well done
August 14th, 2026 15:55
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a mixture of Poe and Lewis Carroll a poem of love in a sky of stone. Nicely done
August 12th, 2026 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a mixture of Poe and Lewis Carroll a poem of love in a sky of stone. Nicely done
August 12th, 2026 08:15
Untitled
arqios said:
An argument that love begins in beauty and promise but which inevitably collapses into deception, pain and disillusionment. Quite a journey from idealised love toward total romantic nihilism. 🕊️🙏
August 11th, 2026 05:15
arqios said:
An argument that love begins in beauty and promise but which inevitably collapses into deception, pain and disillusionment. Quite a journey from idealised love toward total romantic nihilism. 🕊️🙏
August 11th, 2026 05:15
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
\"For beutiful beauty beholds a gaze. Is nothing but a peice of gold. That cant be spent nor either sold. \" a great line. Loved the rhyme in this piece that carries the reader on like the current in a river. Well done
August 11th, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
\"For beutiful beauty beholds a gaze. Is nothing but a peice of gold. That cant be spent nor either sold. \" a great line. Loved the rhyme in this piece that carries the reader on like the current in a river. Well done
August 11th, 2026 03:56
One Night Stand
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful set of rhymes that paint a beautiful sexual encounter, psychoactive in proportion to a painted dream of passion. A fave
August 3rd, 2026 12:54
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful set of rhymes that paint a beautiful sexual encounter, psychoactive in proportion to a painted dream of passion. A fave
August 3rd, 2026 12:54
Sorry
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of a love that is no longer present except in the words and mind of the author
July 31st, 2026 17:32
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of a love that is no longer present except in the words and mind of the author
July 31st, 2026 17:32
My Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Great meter and rhyme sets this poem apart. Nicely done
July 29th, 2026 15:40
sorenbarrett said:
Great meter and rhyme sets this poem apart. Nicely done
July 29th, 2026 15:40
Universal Earth
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images \"silver winds\" and great flow. Well done
July 28th, 2026 08:39
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images \"silver winds\" and great flow. Well done
July 28th, 2026 08:39
Directions lost
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I echo the previous comments, good write
July 25th, 2026 04:58
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I echo the previous comments, good write
July 25th, 2026 04:58
Directions lost
sorenbarrett said:
Words that cause one to ponder where the sorrowful is judged pleasant. A thought provoking write
July 25th, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Words that cause one to ponder where the sorrowful is judged pleasant. A thought provoking write
July 25th, 2026 04:32
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Not only the music but its pauses and silence make the mood. A lovely write
July 24th, 2026 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
Not only the music but its pauses and silence make the mood. A lovely write
July 24th, 2026 05:35
My Blooming Rose
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful sonnet my friend set in colorful images of nature the metaphor unfolds as a blossom and reveals its beauty. Simply lovely and a fave
July 23rd, 2026 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful sonnet my friend set in colorful images of nature the metaphor unfolds as a blossom and reveals its beauty. Simply lovely and a fave
July 23rd, 2026 05:45
Falling Angels
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of few virtues in this battle. Well done
July 22nd, 2026 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of few virtues in this battle. Well done
July 22nd, 2026 07:29
My Love
8Blackwidow8 said:
(A kiss, one so golden, your lips red and soft.
Playing like children, in winters first frost)
Beautiful lines here. I like a poem that can speak of passion without crudness.
July 21st, 2026 10:18
8Blackwidow8 said:
(A kiss, one so golden, your lips red and soft.
Playing like children, in winters first frost)
Beautiful lines here. I like a poem that can speak of passion without crudness.
July 21st, 2026 10:18
Cardinal and Rose
8Blackwidow8 said:
I would love to see a red cardinal in real life. It\'s got to be a sight to see. Beautiful poem that took me somewhere else for its length.
July 21st, 2026 10:16
8Blackwidow8 said:
I would love to see a red cardinal in real life. It\'s got to be a sight to see. Beautiful poem that took me somewhere else for its length.
July 21st, 2026 10:16
Farmers Morning
8Blackwidow8 said:
Remain to simple fields of hey.
A song to strangley die
Love these lines.
July 21st, 2026 10:15
8Blackwidow8 said:
Remain to simple fields of hey.
A song to strangley die
Love these lines.
July 21st, 2026 10:15
Simple Sleep
sorenbarrett said:
Pretty words accompany good rhyme and meter in this poem that leaves much to the imagination and open for interpretation. Well done.
July 21st, 2026 08:22
sorenbarrett said:
Pretty words accompany good rhyme and meter in this poem that leaves much to the imagination and open for interpretation. Well done.
July 21st, 2026 08:22
Cardinal and Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely write set in nature and colors. It sends its message well.
July 20th, 2026 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely write set in nature and colors. It sends its message well.
July 20th, 2026 06:52
Farmers Morning
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice rhyme scheme accompanied by good meter lends itself that a wonderful flow in this piece. Well done
July 19th, 2026 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice rhyme scheme accompanied by good meter lends itself that a wonderful flow in this piece. Well done
July 19th, 2026 06:22
My Word is my Bond
sorenbarrett said:
A play on a rather famous line that rolls off the tongue with the addition of a rhyming word. Well played out in this write.
July 17th, 2026 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
A play on a rather famous line that rolls off the tongue with the addition of a rhyming word. Well played out in this write.
July 17th, 2026 06:03
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal in its wording and setting it speaks of love, angels and the good. It leaves a warm feel. Nice
July 16th, 2026 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal in its wording and setting it speaks of love, angels and the good. It leaves a warm feel. Nice
July 16th, 2026 08:19
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