Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Devils Soul
Poetic Licence said:
Dark but very poignant in today\'s world, when you look around its easy to think the devil is winning, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 06:07
Poetic Licence said:
Dark but very poignant in today\'s world, when you look around its easy to think the devil is winning, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 06:07
Devils Soul
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of darkness and horror. It calls to peoples fears. Nicely written
July 30th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of darkness and horror. It calls to peoples fears. Nicely written
July 30th, 2025 04:32
Love and Pain
sorenbarrett said:
The first two lines, to me reflect aging and the passage of time. So well worded and imaged. The second stanza forgiveness and hope, while the third reveals how love blinds one to passion of the past. The last two lines are ambiguous depending on how the reader takes the earlier stanzas. It may be that continued loss is the pain that lingers with patience in the form of love awaits to change or more positively a persistent and undying love awaits the inevitable reunion with what is still a stranger and is willing to suffer the ongoing pain of separation until such a time. A fave
July 29th, 2025 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
The first two lines, to me reflect aging and the passage of time. So well worded and imaged. The second stanza forgiveness and hope, while the third reveals how love blinds one to passion of the past. The last two lines are ambiguous depending on how the reader takes the earlier stanzas. It may be that continued loss is the pain that lingers with patience in the form of love awaits to change or more positively a persistent and undying love awaits the inevitable reunion with what is still a stranger and is willing to suffer the ongoing pain of separation until such a time. A fave
July 29th, 2025 06:51
Empty Words
sorenbarrett said:
Listening for a loved ones words sets the tone in this poem and the longing can be hear throughout. Nicely done
July 28th, 2025 15:07
sorenbarrett said:
Listening for a loved ones words sets the tone in this poem and the longing can be hear throughout. Nicely done
July 28th, 2025 15:07
Crucifix
sorenbarrett said:
A mantra of faith and belief in this poem. very nicely written
July 27th, 2025 08:24
sorenbarrett said:
A mantra of faith and belief in this poem. very nicely written
July 27th, 2025 08:24
Wolf echo
Bella Shepard said:
I think the book upon the shelf tells the story of a lost love, and the longing to hear once more the voice that spoke the words softly and lovingly. I could be wrong, but I love the story. Such a lovely read!
July 26th, 2025 14:21
Bella Shepard said:
I think the book upon the shelf tells the story of a lost love, and the longing to hear once more the voice that spoke the words softly and lovingly. I could be wrong, but I love the story. Such a lovely read!
July 26th, 2025 14:21
Wolf echo
sorenbarrett said:
This poem may be taken different ways. It speaks to me of communication primitive, written, verbal that have meaning even a touch is a communication. Well set in poetic words
July 26th, 2025 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
This poem may be taken different ways. It speaks to me of communication primitive, written, verbal that have meaning even a touch is a communication. Well set in poetic words
July 26th, 2025 05:55
Swirling Love
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful poem of love and commitment, I\'m swept away.
July 25th, 2025 08:33
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful poem of love and commitment, I\'m swept away.
July 25th, 2025 08:33
Swirling Love
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of love and passion, uniting to never be alone again, enjoyed the read
July 25th, 2025 07:38
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of love and passion, uniting to never be alone again, enjoyed the read
July 25th, 2025 07:38
Swirling Love
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of passion and love set in metaphor. Nicely written
July 25th, 2025 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of passion and love set in metaphor. Nicely written
July 25th, 2025 06:50
Loss
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of if faithful and honour your faith, you can move from this life to the next, an interesting write, enjoyed the read
July 24th, 2025 11:10
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of if faithful and honour your faith, you can move from this life to the next, an interesting write, enjoyed the read
July 24th, 2025 11:10
Sly Fox
sorenbarrett said:
Tricky metaphor in this poem that takes one through different animals in its journey. Nicely done
July 24th, 2025 07:51
sorenbarrett said:
Tricky metaphor in this poem that takes one through different animals in its journey. Nicely done
July 24th, 2025 07:51
Loss
sorenbarrett said:
Nice rhyme in this poem that talks of the transition from one life to another. Well written
July 23rd, 2025 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Nice rhyme in this poem that talks of the transition from one life to another. Well written
July 23rd, 2025 06:21
The Mocking Bird Joke
sorenbarrett said:
A ferocious bird that defends its nest and territory against squirls and other birds enlisting help of others from the flock. Indeed it may mock and eat you right out of your smock.
July 22nd, 2025 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
A ferocious bird that defends its nest and territory against squirls and other birds enlisting help of others from the flock. Indeed it may mock and eat you right out of your smock.
July 22nd, 2025 06:30
Untitled
Damaso said:
Wow, incredible! I enjoyed it so much! I\'m going to have to read it several times. Thank you so much for sharing. Cheers!
July 21st, 2025 15:38
Damaso said:
Wow, incredible! I enjoyed it so much! I\'m going to have to read it several times. Thank you so much for sharing. Cheers!
July 21st, 2025 15:38
Untitled
Bella Shepard said:
What a wonderful contemplation! Soul, heart, mind as one, we do all belong. Beautiful!
July 21st, 2025 14:46
Bella Shepard said:
What a wonderful contemplation! Soul, heart, mind as one, we do all belong. Beautiful!
July 21st, 2025 14:46
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful rhyming in this short piece it speaks to the reader of the relationship of the body to the soul and God. Nicely done
July 21st, 2025 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful rhyming in this short piece it speaks to the reader of the relationship of the body to the soul and God. Nicely done
July 21st, 2025 09:06
Natures Crime
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic, a puzzle well written with a most interesting rhyme scheme it talks to me in metaphor. A fave
July 20th, 2025 12:35
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic, a puzzle well written with a most interesting rhyme scheme it talks to me in metaphor. A fave
July 20th, 2025 12:35
Natures Crime
Bella Shepard said:
A most contemplative poem this Sunday morn, food for thought that is most satisfying! Thoroughly enjoyed!
July 20th, 2025 08:27
Bella Shepard said:
A most contemplative poem this Sunday morn, food for thought that is most satisfying! Thoroughly enjoyed!
July 20th, 2025 08:27
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