Comments received on poems by RSM0812



Smile
Priya Tomar said:

Lovely !

July 19th, 2025 08:47

Smile
sorenbarrett said:

A smile will carry you farther than a frown. A lovely write

July 19th, 2025 08:28

Untitled
ElizabethMoroz said:

Beautiful poetic eulogy. Elizabeth

July 19th, 2025 04:47

Mercy of Mind
Priya Tomar said:

Very nice poem

July 18th, 2025 09:23

Gifting Universe
Priya Tomar said:

Lovely !

July 18th, 2025 07:28

Gifting Universe
sorenbarrett said:

This poem looks beyond our world and into our world and ponders meaning and looks for unity in love. A lovely thought.

July 18th, 2025 06:21

Springs Song
Keeter C said:

Even tho winter draws near. Nice

July 17th, 2025 17:33

Springs Song
Priya Tomar said:

You painted spring with your clever poetic pen.
Very well

July 17th, 2025 09:17

Springs Song
sorenbarrett said:

This is a beautiful portrayal of spring so nicely worded it paints the picture well and a fave

July 17th, 2025 07:50

Springs Song
arqios said:

If we listened more and looked more about us and breathe... our Spring ears will also atune.

July 17th, 2025 07:27

Oh Wind
Bella Shepard said:

A wonderful stormy tale. To watch as the wind blows, trees swaying and bending to its will, its sometimes destructive nature all speak to the wonder of mother nature. Great write!

July 16th, 2025 11:33

Oh Wind
sorenbarrett said:

This poem could well be a blessing said over food. I just await the amen. Nicely done

July 16th, 2025 07:07

Oh Wind
MatPie said:

Beautiful.

July 16th, 2025 06:43

The Tigress and the Eclipse
RSM0812 said:

Thank you. I was recomended to change the first line and i didnt. Lol. Thanks for your read and comment.

July 15th, 2025 10:59

The Tigress and the Eclipse
Damaso said:

Wow, it\'s a spectacle from start to finish. I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.

July 15th, 2025 09:33

The Tigress and the Eclipse
sorenbarrett said:

The first stanza although cryptic is my favorite it sets the ground for the rest. A wonderful splash of poetic color.

July 15th, 2025 07:34

Waiting in Love
sorenbarrett said:

A love poem without doubt. It speaks in poetic terms of a deep love. Nicely done

July 14th, 2025 08:07

The hustle
Bella Shepard said:

It\'s good to win, isn\'t it? Perhaps I\'m a little envious, but you\'ve left me smiling.

July 13th, 2025 14:10

The hustle
sorenbarrett said:

Great confidence in this poem that speaks with power. Nicely done

July 13th, 2025 09:31

Untitled
gray0328 said:

Sorry for your loss. My dad is 87 and I thank God every day.

July 13th, 2025 07:36

Untitled
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

July 12th, 2025 18:39

Untitled
Bella Shepard said:

I am so sorry for your loss. Your words speak of one who must have been your wonderful life model in every way. Wishing you and your father peace and comfort.

July 12th, 2025 08:59

Untitled
sorenbarrett said:

So sorry to hear that my condolences to you. A beautiful write it is.

July 12th, 2025 08:36

Lingering Love
sorenbarrett said:

Sonnet with rhyme and and message not necessarily of love.

July 11th, 2025 12:17

Springs Stir
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

July 10th, 2025 12:27

Springs Stir
Damaso said:

Wow, how intense the transition from one image to another. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.

July 10th, 2025 12:05

Springs Stir
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that rocks back and forth with its flow. Short but nicely done

July 10th, 2025 06:22


Mercy of Mind
sorenbarrett said:

Dark and without hope is the initial feel Control and betrayal lead to a lack of trust which all seem pretty typical in today\'s

July 9th, 2025 09:33

Mercy of Mind
Bella Shepard said:

We can hope for mercy in a world turned upside down, unlike anything we\'ve ever known. You capture the feeling of disillusionment that seems to be pervasive. Well thought out, and very well written!

July 9th, 2025 09:23

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