Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Darker Paint
arqios said:
Nice turn of phrase there, more than the nice, with the apples and the darkness 🕊️🙏
May 11th, 2026 06:11
arqios said:
Nice turn of phrase there, more than the nice, with the apples and the darkness 🕊️🙏
May 11th, 2026 06:11
My Garden Hue
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery together with good wording and rhyme make for a fave
May 10th, 2026 07:39
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery together with good wording and rhyme make for a fave
May 10th, 2026 07:39
Golden Fence
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in admiration of the universe. Well written
May 9th, 2026 22:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in admiration of the universe. Well written
May 9th, 2026 22:13
Lost
sorenbarrett said:
This existential poem of pleasure and death defining life is well done
May 7th, 2026 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
This existential poem of pleasure and death defining life is well done
May 7th, 2026 13:24
Lost
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around themes of life and death, the quest for happiness and peace, the dual nature of human experience, and the inevitability of trust and betrayal.
May 7th, 2026 08:28
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around themes of life and death, the quest for happiness and peace, the dual nature of human experience, and the inevitability of trust and betrayal.
May 7th, 2026 08:28
Within
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the deterrence of growth, deprivation, in the midst of plenty. To hold what of value and not let it burn you. Well done
May 5th, 2026 19:51
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the deterrence of growth, deprivation, in the midst of plenty. To hold what of value and not let it burn you. Well done
May 5th, 2026 19:51
Within
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem reflects on the shifting seasons, particularly spring and summer, and their effects on both nature and the human condition.
May 5th, 2026 12:56
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem reflects on the shifting seasons, particularly spring and summer, and their effects on both nature and the human condition.
May 5th, 2026 12:56
I Chained My Love
Friendship said:
A good write, your poem revolves around the complex interplay between love, bondage, and emotional vulnerability.
May 5th, 2026 05:45
Friendship said:
A good write, your poem revolves around the complex interplay between love, bondage, and emotional vulnerability.
May 5th, 2026 05:45
I Chained My Love
sorenbarrett said:
We inflict ourselves with the heaviest punishments. A great write
May 4th, 2026 21:28
sorenbarrett said:
We inflict ourselves with the heaviest punishments. A great write
May 4th, 2026 21:28
Song bird
Friendship said:
Beautifully written. Your poem delves into the natural world, utilizing elements like streams, dew, and meadows to symbolize life and rebirth. It also reflects on deeper emotional states, such as sorrow (\"tears and blood\") and the yearning for connection and harmony, as represented by the \"angel\" who lacks a voice.
May 1st, 2026 05:52
Friendship said:
Beautifully written. Your poem delves into the natural world, utilizing elements like streams, dew, and meadows to symbolize life and rebirth. It also reflects on deeper emotional states, such as sorrow (\"tears and blood\") and the yearning for connection and harmony, as represented by the \"angel\" who lacks a voice.
May 1st, 2026 05:52
Song bird
sorenbarrett said:
Angelic or mythic it paints a picture of peace. Well written
May 1st, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Angelic or mythic it paints a picture of peace. Well written
May 1st, 2026 04:09
Lovers Dream
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely love poem written in good style with rhyme. Nicely done
April 29th, 2026 20:28
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely love poem written in good style with rhyme. Nicely done
April 29th, 2026 20:28
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and dreamlike it blends with nature and its images. Well written
April 27th, 2026 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and dreamlike it blends with nature and its images. Well written
April 27th, 2026 06:35
Calming Rest
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed by the sword and gun of man it ends well written
April 26th, 2026 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed by the sword and gun of man it ends well written
April 26th, 2026 06:57
My Flower
sorenbarrett said:
This personification of nature\'s beauty and wonders is very nicely done in rhyme and good meter and flow. It paints a beautiful picture and is a fave
April 25th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
This personification of nature\'s beauty and wonders is very nicely done in rhyme and good meter and flow. It paints a beautiful picture and is a fave
April 25th, 2026 04:29
The Hanging
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
well written and a definite like
April 24th, 2026 05:34
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
well written and a definite like
April 24th, 2026 05:34
The Hanging
sorenbarrett said:
Billie Holiday\'s song strange fruit came to mind with the opening line of this poem. It is powerful and strongly worded in vivid terms of violence. It packs a strong message and is a fave
April 24th, 2026 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
Billie Holiday\'s song strange fruit came to mind with the opening line of this poem. It is powerful and strongly worded in vivid terms of violence. It packs a strong message and is a fave
April 24th, 2026 04:49
The Hanging
RSM0812 said:
It was inspired by the lynch mob death of Mousalini in Italy in 1945, after WWII.
April 24th, 2026 04:29
RSM0812 said:
It was inspired by the lynch mob death of Mousalini in Italy in 1945, after WWII.
April 24th, 2026 04:29
The Hanging
Doggerel Dave said:
Very poetic. Any particular lynching in your mind when you pasted this here?
April 24th, 2026 04:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Very poetic. Any particular lynching in your mind when you pasted this here?
April 24th, 2026 04:27
A Lovers Kiss
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around love and intimacy, exploring themes of desire, connection, and the ephemeral nature of romantic relationships.
April 23rd, 2026 06:58
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around love and intimacy, exploring themes of desire, connection, and the ephemeral nature of romantic relationships.
April 23rd, 2026 06:58
A Lovers Kiss
sorenbarrett said:
A romantic write full of passion and attraction to another. Well written
April 23rd, 2026 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
A romantic write full of passion and attraction to another. Well written
April 23rd, 2026 05:18
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