Comments received on poems by RSM0812
The Peaceful Spring
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of a season for new life and growth. Well imaged it flowers in its verse
May 20th, 2026 10:37
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of a season for new life and growth. Well imaged it flowers in its verse
May 20th, 2026 10:37
The Angel
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyming was most interesting with its variance and change in the middle of the poem. Well done
May 19th, 2026 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyming was most interesting with its variance and change in the middle of the poem. Well done
May 19th, 2026 06:38
A Rose
Friendship said:
Nicely said , your poem symbolizes a beloved, representing both the allure and complexities of romantic affection.
May 17th, 2026 08:50
Friendship said:
Nicely said , your poem symbolizes a beloved, representing both the allure and complexities of romantic affection.
May 17th, 2026 08:50
A Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture poetically painted but is seems more in metaphor and for that the fave
May 17th, 2026 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture poetically painted but is seems more in metaphor and for that the fave
May 17th, 2026 06:31
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a reference to the cosmic wheel. Well written
May 16th, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a reference to the cosmic wheel. Well written
May 16th, 2026 04:34
Whispey leaf
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor well crafted loved it a fave
May 15th, 2026 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor well crafted loved it a fave
May 15th, 2026 06:31
Dying Rose
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely poem that presents the other side of the rose not commonly written about. With lovely wording you weave your message concisely and most poetically a fave
May 14th, 2026 07:37
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely poem that presents the other side of the rose not commonly written about. With lovely wording you weave your message concisely and most poetically a fave
May 14th, 2026 07:37
Morning Song
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a haunting and surreal feel to it very nicely written
May 13th, 2026 17:07
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a haunting and surreal feel to it very nicely written
May 13th, 2026 17:07
Darker Paint
sorenbarrett said:
This biblical reference to dark and light apples from the tree is nicely framed in rhyme of poetry. Well done
May 11th, 2026 07:47
sorenbarrett said:
This biblical reference to dark and light apples from the tree is nicely framed in rhyme of poetry. Well done
May 11th, 2026 07:47
Darker Paint
arqios said:
Nice turn of phrase there, more than the nice, with the apples and the darkness 🕊️🙏
May 11th, 2026 06:11
arqios said:
Nice turn of phrase there, more than the nice, with the apples and the darkness 🕊️🙏
May 11th, 2026 06:11
My Garden Hue
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery together with good wording and rhyme make for a fave
May 10th, 2026 07:39
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery together with good wording and rhyme make for a fave
May 10th, 2026 07:39
Golden Fence
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in admiration of the universe. Well written
May 9th, 2026 22:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in admiration of the universe. Well written
May 9th, 2026 22:13
Lost
sorenbarrett said:
This existential poem of pleasure and death defining life is well done
May 7th, 2026 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
This existential poem of pleasure and death defining life is well done
May 7th, 2026 13:24
Lost
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around themes of life and death, the quest for happiness and peace, the dual nature of human experience, and the inevitability of trust and betrayal.
May 7th, 2026 08:28
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around themes of life and death, the quest for happiness and peace, the dual nature of human experience, and the inevitability of trust and betrayal.
May 7th, 2026 08:28
Within
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the deterrence of growth, deprivation, in the midst of plenty. To hold what of value and not let it burn you. Well done
May 5th, 2026 19:51
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the deterrence of growth, deprivation, in the midst of plenty. To hold what of value and not let it burn you. Well done
May 5th, 2026 19:51
Within
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem reflects on the shifting seasons, particularly spring and summer, and their effects on both nature and the human condition.
May 5th, 2026 12:56
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem reflects on the shifting seasons, particularly spring and summer, and their effects on both nature and the human condition.
May 5th, 2026 12:56
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