Comments received on poems by RSM0812
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sorenbarrett said:
This poem in the shape of a cross speaks loudly with strong words buried in a shadow. A fave my friend
September 20th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in the shape of a cross speaks loudly with strong words buried in a shadow. A fave my friend
September 20th, 2025 05:45
Beauty Rare
Bella Shepard said:
your poem evokes a state of bliss, like no other. It truly is a \"Rare Beauty\". Loved every line.
September 19th, 2025 09:17
Bella Shepard said:
your poem evokes a state of bliss, like no other. It truly is a \"Rare Beauty\". Loved every line.
September 19th, 2025 09:17
Beauty Rare
sorenbarrett said:
The meter and rhyme give this poem a feel of the beyond. Nicely done
September 19th, 2025 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
The meter and rhyme give this poem a feel of the beyond. Nicely done
September 19th, 2025 05:58
The World
Bella Shepard said:
Your words ring true, we are capable of so much better. This food for thought is definitely good for us, thank you!
September 18th, 2025 08:38
Bella Shepard said:
Your words ring true, we are capable of so much better. This food for thought is definitely good for us, thank you!
September 18th, 2025 08:38
Untitled
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is tender, lyrical, and suffused with a sense of quiet longing and devotion. It blends classical phrasing “canst sway” with intimate, personal imagery, creating a romantic and almost ethereal atmosphere. Nicely written. ✨
September 17th, 2025 14:57
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is tender, lyrical, and suffused with a sense of quiet longing and devotion. It blends classical phrasing “canst sway” with intimate, personal imagery, creating a romantic and almost ethereal atmosphere. Nicely written. ✨
September 17th, 2025 14:57
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Truly poetic and most deserving of a fave this poem it truly beautiful in every way. Cadence, rhyme, flow and thought it has them all
September 17th, 2025 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
Truly poetic and most deserving of a fave this poem it truly beautiful in every way. Cadence, rhyme, flow and thought it has them all
September 17th, 2025 06:19
Truist Love
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love cast in classical verse. Nicely rhymed it flows as a stream through a garden
September 16th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love cast in classical verse. Nicely rhymed it flows as a stream through a garden
September 16th, 2025 04:49
Time is Love
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to use dualities to express its meaning. Nicely done
September 15th, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to use dualities to express its meaning. Nicely done
September 15th, 2025 05:14
Frozen Lake
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow powerful but sad and beautifully written.
September 14th, 2025 22:25
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow powerful but sad and beautifully written.
September 14th, 2025 22:25
Frozen Lake
Bella Shepard said:
I love the metaphor. Time past is irretrievable, and holds fast all that has been for better or worse. Beautiful!
September 14th, 2025 10:33
Bella Shepard said:
I love the metaphor. Time past is irretrievable, and holds fast all that has been for better or worse. Beautiful!
September 14th, 2025 10:33
Frozen Lake
sorenbarrett said:
Sad yet beautiful it is a great metaphor with deep meaning couched in poetic images. A fave
September 14th, 2025 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
Sad yet beautiful it is a great metaphor with deep meaning couched in poetic images. A fave
September 14th, 2025 07:33
Floatin Clouds
sorenbarrett said:
Clouds hold dreams and every once in a while they rain on us. A most lovely write
September 13th, 2025 08:55
sorenbarrett said:
Clouds hold dreams and every once in a while they rain on us. A most lovely write
September 13th, 2025 08:55
Hall of the Dead
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Love the end rhyme\'s. Interesting poem.
September 12th, 2025 10:20
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Love the end rhyme\'s. Interesting poem.
September 12th, 2025 10:20
Hall of the Dead
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a certain lightness as it speaks of a relationship dear with a dearly departed. Nicely done
September 12th, 2025 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a certain lightness as it speaks of a relationship dear with a dearly departed. Nicely done
September 12th, 2025 04:53
Passions of the dead.
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word usage in this poem leaves a powerful message in rhyme. A fave
September 11th, 2025 10:07
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word usage in this poem leaves a powerful message in rhyme. A fave
September 11th, 2025 10:07
Eyes Closed
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s often true: most people close their eyes to the injustices of others if they live a fine enough life.
September 10th, 2025 17:56
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s often true: most people close their eyes to the injustices of others if they live a fine enough life.
September 10th, 2025 17:56
Eyes Closed
Bella Shepard said:
Sad but true, this poetic commentary of the life we appear to accept. A very good write!
September 10th, 2025 08:52
Bella Shepard said:
Sad but true, this poetic commentary of the life we appear to accept. A very good write!
September 10th, 2025 08:52
Eyes Closed
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write where the rich get rich because they know the rules of the game and the poor do not. Justice closes its eyes to the rich not the poor for rules must be enforced whether known or not. A good read
September 10th, 2025 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write where the rich get rich because they know the rules of the game and the poor do not. Justice closes its eyes to the rich not the poor for rules must be enforced whether known or not. A good read
September 10th, 2025 07:04
Floating Strem
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is eerie and somewhat dark yet feels peaceful and serene. A lovely write
September 9th, 2025 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is eerie and somewhat dark yet feels peaceful and serene. A lovely write
September 9th, 2025 06:26
The Universe and the Mountain
NinjaGirl said:
This is so so lovely, one of my favorites for sure!
September 8th, 2025 18:37
NinjaGirl said:
This is so so lovely, one of my favorites for sure!
September 8th, 2025 18:37
The Universe and the Mountain
sorenbarrett said:
I love the line (where midnight takes a shallow nap) This piece it floats on poetic wings. A lovely write
September 8th, 2025 11:48
sorenbarrett said:
I love the line (where midnight takes a shallow nap) This piece it floats on poetic wings. A lovely write
September 8th, 2025 11:48
Lost Paradise
NinjaGirl said:
I like this depiction of humanity and Eve from the garden. Nicely said!
September 7th, 2025 16:39
NinjaGirl said:
I like this depiction of humanity and Eve from the garden. Nicely said!
September 7th, 2025 16:39
Lost Paradise
sorenbarrett said:
I love the veiled biblical metaphors incorporated in this poem. Well written in rhyme a fave
September 7th, 2025 15:40
sorenbarrett said:
I love the veiled biblical metaphors incorporated in this poem. Well written in rhyme a fave
September 7th, 2025 15:40
Love Poem
sorenbarrett said:
In love one and the same is a thought that many say but few enact. Nicely written
September 6th, 2025 14:11
sorenbarrett said:
In love one and the same is a thought that many say but few enact. Nicely written
September 6th, 2025 14:11
Forever Old
NinjaGirl said:
In time, in time, we will know the secrets of life! Beautiful poem!
September 5th, 2025 14:23
NinjaGirl said:
In time, in time, we will know the secrets of life! Beautiful poem!
September 5th, 2025 14:23
Life is a Gift
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully written, my friend. The rhythm of seasons here becomes a rhythm of life...hardships, gifts, and lessons all moving through. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2025 10:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully written, my friend. The rhythm of seasons here becomes a rhythm of life...hardships, gifts, and lessons all moving through. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2025 10:23
Forever Old
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems meditative or substance induced it is peaceful and mind expanding. Nicely done
September 5th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems meditative or substance induced it is peaceful and mind expanding. Nicely done
September 5th, 2025 04:09
Frozen Time
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s always time that\'s our savior and our captor. This is a beautiful poem describing both of those. Keep up the good writing!
September 4th, 2025 11:09
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s always time that\'s our savior and our captor. This is a beautiful poem describing both of those. Keep up the good writing!
September 4th, 2025 11:09
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