Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Speeches Freedoms
Poetic Licence said:
Freedom of speech is a fading thing and thus progress in humanity will be halted, well crafted write with a positive message, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 05:00
Poetic Licence said:
Freedom of speech is a fading thing and thus progress in humanity will be halted, well crafted write with a positive message, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 05:00
Speeches Freedoms
sorenbarrett said:
Words of wisdom offered but not heard. Indeed nature itself is the greatest in speaking wisdom and still none listen. A well composed poem with good flow and rhyme. Lovely
March 20th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Words of wisdom offered but not heard. Indeed nature itself is the greatest in speaking wisdom and still none listen. A well composed poem with good flow and rhyme. Lovely
March 20th, 2025 04:29
Winters Kiss
Neville said:
I wanted to see exactly where you were coming from RSM & having trawled back thus far, I am delighted to say that I have not yet been disappointed .. Neville
March 20th, 2025 03:16
Neville said:
I wanted to see exactly where you were coming from RSM & having trawled back thus far, I am delighted to say that I have not yet been disappointed .. Neville
March 20th, 2025 03:16
Fake
Neville said:
I used to think I could spot a fake a mile off .. but today is more frightening than yesterday ever was .. and there are those who have turned falsehood & lies into both an art and a science .. and sadly the most adept at these things are those who hold high office .. and let\'s not even go near AI .. anyway, rant over, I get where you are coming from & enjoyed my all too brief visit here today .. Neville
March 20th, 2025 03:12
Neville said:
I used to think I could spot a fake a mile off .. but today is more frightening than yesterday ever was .. and there are those who have turned falsehood & lies into both an art and a science .. and sadly the most adept at these things are those who hold high office .. and let\'s not even go near AI .. anyway, rant over, I get where you are coming from & enjoyed my all too brief visit here today .. Neville
March 20th, 2025 03:12
Fake
Poetic Licence said:
How we have become to blind to distinguish fake or real anymore, not enough people question when they should, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 12:08
Poetic Licence said:
How we have become to blind to distinguish fake or real anymore, not enough people question when they should, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 12:08
Fake
sorenbarrett said:
A bite cryptic this poem speaks to falseness and our inability to see it. Nicely worded
March 19th, 2025 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
A bite cryptic this poem speaks to falseness and our inability to see it. Nicely worded
March 19th, 2025 11:04
A women or a flower
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of how both are similar and blossom into beauty, enjoyed the read
March 18th, 2025 12:58
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of how both are similar and blossom into beauty, enjoyed the read
March 18th, 2025 12:58
A women or a flower
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of similes and great comparisons of women and flowers. Nicely done
March 18th, 2025 12:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of similes and great comparisons of women and flowers. Nicely done
March 18th, 2025 12:08
700000 Mexicans in solitary cinfinement
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words this poem is powerfully stated. It speaks to injustice and to a problem that we have pushed down the road until it has created a traffic jam.
March 16th, 2025 07:13
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words this poem is powerfully stated. It speaks to injustice and to a problem that we have pushed down the road until it has created a traffic jam.
March 16th, 2025 07:13
700000 Mexicans in solitary cinfinement
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful and well expressed write,raising a increasingly serious ongoing issue, nice write
March 16th, 2025 05:25
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful and well expressed write,raising a increasingly serious ongoing issue, nice write
March 16th, 2025 05:25
Relationship
Poetic Licence said:
The good and the bad come together, for a relationship to work we have to except both, nicely expressed
March 15th, 2025 11:56
Poetic Licence said:
The good and the bad come together, for a relationship to work we have to except both, nicely expressed
March 15th, 2025 11:56
Relationship
sorenbarrett said:
The good and the bad together make up life. If one can not accept it that way then one ends up with a death of the relationship. Well written
March 15th, 2025 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
The good and the bad together make up life. If one can not accept it that way then one ends up with a death of the relationship. Well written
March 15th, 2025 07:43
Chained
Poetic Licence said:
That is a interesting and thoughtful provoking write, one to get the cogs turning, enjoyed the read
March 13th, 2025 13:35
Poetic Licence said:
That is a interesting and thoughtful provoking write, one to get the cogs turning, enjoyed the read
March 13th, 2025 13:35
Clock of time
sorenbarrett said:
Images pour though this poem as if it were a dream. The line (And horizons in a landscape of half slept dreams.) is marvelous One metaphor on the heels of another keep the reader on his toes. A lovely write.
March 12th, 2025 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
Images pour though this poem as if it were a dream. The line (And horizons in a landscape of half slept dreams.) is marvelous One metaphor on the heels of another keep the reader on his toes. A lovely write.
March 12th, 2025 12:21
Empty
Poetic Licence said:
That is touching with sadness, sense of pain and loss as you read, nicely expressed
March 11th, 2025 12:46
Poetic Licence said:
That is touching with sadness, sense of pain and loss as you read, nicely expressed
March 11th, 2025 12:46
Empty
sorenbarrett said:
Some powerful lines with vivid images in this poem that smacks of pain and hurt. Lovely
March 11th, 2025 09:50
sorenbarrett said:
Some powerful lines with vivid images in this poem that smacks of pain and hurt. Lovely
March 11th, 2025 09:50
Hell is a Rollorcoaster
Poetic Licence said:
A dark and interesting write, I think the way the world is going hell might be nearly full, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 07:49
Poetic Licence said:
A dark and interesting write, I think the way the world is going hell might be nearly full, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 07:49
Hell is a Rollorcoaster
sorenbarrett said:
A rather grim thought even for a dark poem. Well written but hopefully not a reality. Very nice.
March 10th, 2025 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
A rather grim thought even for a dark poem. Well written but hopefully not a reality. Very nice.
March 10th, 2025 06:53
Memories Sake
Poetic Licence said:
A creative write allowing you to imagine some wonderful images as you read through, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 03:18
Poetic Licence said:
A creative write allowing you to imagine some wonderful images as you read through, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 03:18
Memories Sake
sorenbarrett said:
A myriad of images and metaphor that winds its way through a maze of the universe to arrive at its end
March 9th, 2025 16:30
sorenbarrett said:
A myriad of images and metaphor that winds its way through a maze of the universe to arrive at its end
March 9th, 2025 16:30
The Bench
Cassie58 said:
Well penned. The mask dropped. How poignant this piece was. Lovely write.
March 9th, 2025 15:59
Cassie58 said:
Well penned. The mask dropped. How poignant this piece was. Lovely write.
March 9th, 2025 15:59
The Bench
sorenbarrett said:
The truth lies beneath the surface. We all put on faces only to drop the mask on occasion. A metaphor as deep as the soul. I loved this poem and am giving it a fave.
March 8th, 2025 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
The truth lies beneath the surface. We all put on faces only to drop the mask on occasion. A metaphor as deep as the soul. I loved this poem and am giving it a fave.
March 8th, 2025 13:31
Look the other way
Poetic Licence said:
All too often people close their eyes and ears, rather than acting on what they see and hear, enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 13:47
Poetic Licence said:
All too often people close their eyes and ears, rather than acting on what they see and hear, enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 13:47
Look the other way
sorenbarrett said:
Closing one\'s eyes can be so easy. A read with deeper meaning
March 7th, 2025 11:15
sorenbarrett said:
Closing one\'s eyes can be so easy. A read with deeper meaning
March 7th, 2025 11:15
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