Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Sympathy of the Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Sympathy the initial spark to ignite charity is such a good topic in this poem. There is too little of it around now days. Nicely written
April 10th, 2026 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
Sympathy the initial spark to ignite charity is such a good topic in this poem. There is too little of it around now days. Nicely written
April 10th, 2026 05:22
Destiny
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric words of beauty in nature\'s images. Well written
April 8th, 2026 16:35
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric words of beauty in nature\'s images. Well written
April 8th, 2026 16:35
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This poem requires multiple readings being quite deep in meaning and imagery. Nicely done with most poetic wording, most lovely
April 6th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem requires multiple readings being quite deep in meaning and imagery. Nicely done with most poetic wording, most lovely
April 6th, 2026 04:33
Untitled
Kora said:
I can\'t say enough how much I love the language in this, the way it flows is just so pleasant to read.
\'.. ticks by flickers of the wrist\'
Loved it ♥️
April 6th, 2026 03:53
Kora said:
I can\'t say enough how much I love the language in this, the way it flows is just so pleasant to read.
\'.. ticks by flickers of the wrist\'
Loved it ♥️
April 6th, 2026 03:53
Lingering Love
Abdullah123 said:
Beautifully written....sensually evocative and appealing. Nicely done
April 5th, 2026 16:07
Abdullah123 said:
Beautifully written....sensually evocative and appealing. Nicely done
April 5th, 2026 16:07
Lingering Love
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful poetic terms decorate this poem with images surreal. Lovey
April 5th, 2026 07:16
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful poetic terms decorate this poem with images surreal. Lovey
April 5th, 2026 07:16
Meeting Love
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love put off until such time. Nicely written it carries the reader on
April 4th, 2026 14:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love put off until such time. Nicely written it carries the reader on
April 4th, 2026 14:23
First Kiss
sorenbarrett said:
This is such a great poem that speaks of attraction, passion, romance and so well portrays it through a kiss. Very nicely done and a fave
April 2nd, 2026 18:35
sorenbarrett said:
This is such a great poem that speaks of attraction, passion, romance and so well portrays it through a kiss. Very nicely done and a fave
April 2nd, 2026 18:35
First Kiss
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the emotional experience of love, framed through imagery of nature, sorrow, and the interplay of innocence and experience. It reflects on the complexities of love, touching on loss, desire, and the sanctity found in intimate moments.
April 2nd, 2026 18:27
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the emotional experience of love, framed through imagery of nature, sorrow, and the interplay of innocence and experience. It reflects on the complexities of love, touching on loss, desire, and the sanctity found in intimate moments.
April 2nd, 2026 18:27
The Windows and Doors
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely rhymed and with good flow this poem riddle unravels line by line settling uneasily on the finality of it all. Nicely done
April 1st, 2026 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely rhymed and with good flow this poem riddle unravels line by line settling uneasily on the finality of it all. Nicely done
April 1st, 2026 03:42
Just one kiss
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic images painted in this write. It reads tender and soft with a lingering taste of a kiss. A lovely write
March 29th, 2026 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic images painted in this write. It reads tender and soft with a lingering taste of a kiss. A lovely write
March 29th, 2026 05:36
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This to me is a metaphoric representation of life and its brevity. Well written my friend
March 27th, 2026 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
This to me is a metaphoric representation of life and its brevity. Well written my friend
March 27th, 2026 07:27
Peace
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write with a lovely thought I wish it were true. The rhyme is very nice and enhances the tone well done
March 26th, 2026 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write with a lovely thought I wish it were true. The rhyme is very nice and enhances the tone well done
March 26th, 2026 10:56
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of passion infatuation and being drawn to each other. Well written
March 26th, 2026 03:32
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of passion infatuation and being drawn to each other. Well written
March 26th, 2026 03:32
Death of a King
sorenbarrett said:
Total devastation in this poem of darkness. Even revolt does not bring back the past. Well written
March 24th, 2026 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
Total devastation in this poem of darkness. Even revolt does not bring back the past. Well written
March 24th, 2026 07:33
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting perspective held in the character here. Well written
March 22nd, 2026 11:09
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting perspective held in the character here. Well written
March 22nd, 2026 11:09
The Chains
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is cryptic and surreal it casts images and symbols that evoke emotions buried. Well done
March 21st, 2026 07:26
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is cryptic and surreal it casts images and symbols that evoke emotions buried. Well done
March 21st, 2026 07:26
Heart of Fire
sorenbarrett said:
What I get from this poem is a call to make the best out of everything to stoke up the fire and go with a blaze. Carpe diam is the battle cry. Nicely written
March 20th, 2026 06:46
sorenbarrett said:
What I get from this poem is a call to make the best out of everything to stoke up the fire and go with a blaze. Carpe diam is the battle cry. Nicely written
March 20th, 2026 06:46
The Bridge
sorenbarrett said:
Similarities and differences this reminds me of the river Styx that erases memories. Nicely written in rhyme and good flow it wends its way through a journey to a desired end of love. Well done
March 19th, 2026 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
Similarities and differences this reminds me of the river Styx that erases memories. Nicely written in rhyme and good flow it wends its way through a journey to a desired end of love. Well done
March 19th, 2026 07:00
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