Comments received on poems by RSM0812
The Addictive Mind
sorenbarrett said:
Morals change for good and bad with time. A lovley write
August 26th, 2025 08:06
sorenbarrett said:
Morals change for good and bad with time. A lovley write
August 26th, 2025 08:06
Borrowed from eternity
sorenbarrett said:
Full of wordplay and metaphor it breaths. Nicely done
August 25th, 2025 15:12
sorenbarrett said:
Full of wordplay and metaphor it breaths. Nicely done
August 25th, 2025 15:12
The Flower in the Stone
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting metaphor here. Well done
August 24th, 2025 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting metaphor here. Well done
August 24th, 2025 06:35
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and meaningful with great images. Lovely a fave
August 23rd, 2025 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and meaningful with great images. Lovely a fave
August 23rd, 2025 09:26
The wolf an the snake
sorenbarrett said:
I love the roll of the rhyme in what seems to be a poem with almost Native American flavor. A most lovely write and a fave
August 22nd, 2025 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
I love the roll of the rhyme in what seems to be a poem with almost Native American flavor. A most lovely write and a fave
August 22nd, 2025 05:11
Laddy Boy
sorenbarrett said:
I hardly dare venture to speak on this beautiful poem. Wonderful wording and rhyme in a poem that is a bit obscure as to meaning where angels fear to tread
August 21st, 2025 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
I hardly dare venture to speak on this beautiful poem. Wonderful wording and rhyme in a poem that is a bit obscure as to meaning where angels fear to tread
August 21st, 2025 05:29
Lovers Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice sonnet in most classical form. Lovely words
August 20th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice sonnet in most classical form. Lovely words
August 20th, 2025 04:17
Little Flower
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor in this poem where love needs to be nurtured and cared for through the adversities of life. Nicely done
August 19th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor in this poem where love needs to be nurtured and cared for through the adversities of life. Nicely done
August 19th, 2025 05:05
People change
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and belief merged with life\'s struggles. Nicely written
August 18th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and belief merged with life\'s struggles. Nicely written
August 18th, 2025 04:16
Dreamless Sleep
Poetic Licence said:
A really nice write with some wonderful imagery as you read, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 04:53
Poetic Licence said:
A really nice write with some wonderful imagery as you read, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 04:53
Dreamless Sleep
sorenbarrett said:
The cadence of this poem brought to mind a chant over a caldron and witches brew. It is filled with wonderful and magical images of the night. A lovely write
August 17th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
The cadence of this poem brought to mind a chant over a caldron and witches brew. It is filled with wonderful and magical images of the night. A lovely write
August 17th, 2025 04:38
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Woven within this poem is a dark thread of man that leaves a stain in the fabric. The poem holds feelings of the surreal and prophetic words that shake the soul
August 16th, 2025 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
Woven within this poem is a dark thread of man that leaves a stain in the fabric. The poem holds feelings of the surreal and prophetic words that shake the soul
August 16th, 2025 08:33
The lonely
sorenbarrett said:
Questions asked reminiscing in this poem that speaks of a relationship nicely done
August 15th, 2025 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
Questions asked reminiscing in this poem that speaks of a relationship nicely done
August 15th, 2025 05:34
The Garden
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks from darkness and its alur. It is seductive in its shadows and feels peaceful. Nicely written
August 14th, 2025 07:36
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks from darkness and its alur. It is seductive in its shadows and feels peaceful. Nicely written
August 14th, 2025 07:36
The Human Soul
RSM0812 said:
It means your soul will live after your death. Lol
August 13th, 2025 19:13
RSM0812 said:
It means your soul will live after your death. Lol
August 13th, 2025 19:13
The Human Soul
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely but most unusual pairing of the soul and death that boggles the mind and leaves one to wonder. Nicely done
August 13th, 2025 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely but most unusual pairing of the soul and death that boggles the mind and leaves one to wonder. Nicely done
August 13th, 2025 13:12
My Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphoric poem of love using a common symbol. A lovely write
August 12th, 2025 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphoric poem of love using a common symbol. A lovely write
August 12th, 2025 09:09
Black and White
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the flow and feel as well as internal rhyme in this poem a fave
August 11th, 2025 11:01
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the flow and feel as well as internal rhyme in this poem a fave
August 11th, 2025 11:01
Dove
sorenbarrett said:
A peaceful feel to this poem that speaks in symbols of deeper things it calls out. Nicely done
August 10th, 2025 21:05
sorenbarrett said:
A peaceful feel to this poem that speaks in symbols of deeper things it calls out. Nicely done
August 10th, 2025 21:05
Inner Struggle
sorenbarrett said:
Oh if we only knew. A good read with great images. Nicely said
August 9th, 2025 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
Oh if we only knew. A good read with great images. Nicely said
August 9th, 2025 12:02
Love Poem
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic in its pledges this poem speaks to commitment in love and its lasting nature. Nicely done
August 7th, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic in its pledges this poem speaks to commitment in love and its lasting nature. Nicely done
August 7th, 2025 05:14
Life is a Gift
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for this lovely poem, a reminder of what we too often fail to see in the busyness of life. You capture the beauty of being in each precious moment. Love it!!
August 6th, 2025 10:44
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for this lovely poem, a reminder of what we too often fail to see in the busyness of life. You capture the beauty of being in each precious moment. Love it!!
August 6th, 2025 10:44
Life is a Gift
sorenbarrett said:
Carpe diem they say. Enjoy the day. In metaphor the same cycles of life roll on. Nicely penned
August 6th, 2025 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
Carpe diem they say. Enjoy the day. In metaphor the same cycles of life roll on. Nicely penned
August 6th, 2025 06:48
My Love
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love veiled in metaphor of the thickest weave, no lace here. Very nicely done
August 5th, 2025 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love veiled in metaphor of the thickest weave, no lace here. Very nicely done
August 5th, 2025 08:16
Natures Mirror
sorenbarrett said:
Magical words woven into rhyme paint a dramatic picture in black a fave
August 4th, 2025 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
Magical words woven into rhyme paint a dramatic picture in black a fave
August 4th, 2025 08:16
Quiet Repose
Bella Shepard said:
You describe a love so beautiful that to lose yourself in it, is to find perfection. Soft and lovely the flow of words.
August 3rd, 2025 12:28
Bella Shepard said:
You describe a love so beautiful that to lose yourself in it, is to find perfection. Soft and lovely the flow of words.
August 3rd, 2025 12:28
Quiet Repose
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the theme of deep love and longing, conveying the poet\'s emotional attachment and dependence on their beloved. The speaker expresses a profound sense of loss and despair in the absence of their loved one, highlighting the joy and beauty that this love brings to their life.
August 3rd, 2025 07:28
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the theme of deep love and longing, conveying the poet\'s emotional attachment and dependence on their beloved. The speaker expresses a profound sense of loss and despair in the absence of their loved one, highlighting the joy and beauty that this love brings to their life.
August 3rd, 2025 07:28
« Return to the profile of RSM0812
