Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Betterfly
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem sparkling with vivid images and a metaphor of love as well. Nicely done
April 2nd, 2025 08:29
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem sparkling with vivid images and a metaphor of love as well. Nicely done
April 2nd, 2025 08:29
Decay
Poetic Licence said:
To me a sense of a damaged and confused my mind, nicely expressed and written
April 1st, 2025 11:24
Poetic Licence said:
To me a sense of a damaged and confused my mind, nicely expressed and written
April 1st, 2025 11:24
Decay
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic words that weave a picture in the mind. Nicely done
April 1st, 2025 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic words that weave a picture in the mind. Nicely done
April 1st, 2025 09:37
Stay
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely written piece of poetry, and there lays hope, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 08:24
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely written piece of poetry, and there lays hope, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 08:24
Tailand
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write on devastation that has happened in this country but also the ongoing fight it continues itself to find peace, lovely write
March 30th, 2025 11:25
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write on devastation that has happened in this country but also the ongoing fight it continues itself to find peace, lovely write
March 30th, 2025 11:25
Tailand
sorenbarrett said:
Strong in metaphor this poem speaks of a country deciding its destiny at the peril of destruction and many lost. Very nicely written
March 30th, 2025 10:42
sorenbarrett said:
Strong in metaphor this poem speaks of a country deciding its destiny at the peril of destruction and many lost. Very nicely written
March 30th, 2025 10:42
Rest
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and intriguing, the inherent calm of the rest invoked pervading as I mull the suggestion playing itself out. Sweetly rendered in tasteful brevity with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy whose serenity seems to call, thank you for sharing.
March 29th, 2025 14:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and intriguing, the inherent calm of the rest invoked pervading as I mull the suggestion playing itself out. Sweetly rendered in tasteful brevity with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy whose serenity seems to call, thank you for sharing.
March 29th, 2025 14:46
Rest
Poetic Licence said:
A clever interesting write asking how we obtain peace and a request for peace themselves, enjoyed the read
March 29th, 2025 10:46
Poetic Licence said:
A clever interesting write asking how we obtain peace and a request for peace themselves, enjoyed the read
March 29th, 2025 10:46
Rest
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for peace and raises questions of how peace is obtained. Cleanly written and with good meter and thought provoking
March 29th, 2025 08:25
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for peace and raises questions of how peace is obtained. Cleanly written and with good meter and thought provoking
March 29th, 2025 08:25
Oh Robin
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful image but I feel that there is a metaphor here as well. So nicely stated
March 28th, 2025 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful image but I feel that there is a metaphor here as well. So nicely stated
March 28th, 2025 09:02
Greed
Poetic Licence said:
Well written write that flows really nicely as you read through, enjoyed the read
March 27th, 2025 07:47
Poetic Licence said:
Well written write that flows really nicely as you read through, enjoyed the read
March 27th, 2025 07:47
Greed
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme and internal rhyme that carry this poem and give it more power. Very nicely done
March 27th, 2025 07:36
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme and internal rhyme that carry this poem and give it more power. Very nicely done
March 27th, 2025 07:36
Prayer
sorenbarrett said:
This is truly poetic in its form and symbolism with good meter and organization and well deserves a fave
March 26th, 2025 08:50
sorenbarrett said:
This is truly poetic in its form and symbolism with good meter and organization and well deserves a fave
March 26th, 2025 08:50
Fiery Hall
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write although the images are haunting and sad they convey the story nicely, enjoyed the read
March 25th, 2025 05:44
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write although the images are haunting and sad they convey the story nicely, enjoyed the read
March 25th, 2025 05:44
Fiery Hall
sorenbarrett said:
This has happened before and whether this poem is a tribute or a ,metaphor it matters not. It is ghostly and haunts the reader. Nicely worded with great images and vivid powerful words.
March 25th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
This has happened before and whether this poem is a tribute or a ,metaphor it matters not. It is ghostly and haunts the reader. Nicely worded with great images and vivid powerful words.
March 25th, 2025 04:17
Tapestyr
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem full of wonderful images and as a metaphor it works so well. Absolutely lovely
March 24th, 2025 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem full of wonderful images and as a metaphor it works so well. Absolutely lovely
March 24th, 2025 06:19
Storm
sorenbarrett said:
Been there in that storm both literally in hurricanes and emotionally. Well written
March 23rd, 2025 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
Been there in that storm both literally in hurricanes and emotionally. Well written
March 23rd, 2025 11:55
The Will
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful intricate piece of writing, which will, will win, enjoyed the read
March 23rd, 2025 08:56
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful intricate piece of writing, which will, will win, enjoyed the read
March 23rd, 2025 08:56
A Moment
RSM0812 said:
Thanks. I\'m delighted that you liked it. Thanks for the fav too!!
March 23rd, 2025 07:06
RSM0812 said:
Thanks. I\'m delighted that you liked it. Thanks for the fav too!!
March 23rd, 2025 07:06
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