Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Love and Life
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one it rocks with rhythm and rhyme and the lines:
\"Live the moment, last the hour,
As withered time loses power.\"
These are my favorite. Lovely and a fave
December 2nd, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one it rocks with rhythm and rhyme and the lines:
\"Live the moment, last the hour,
As withered time loses power.\"
These are my favorite. Lovely and a fave
December 2nd, 2025 04:45
Midnight Morning
sorenbarrett said:
Highly symbolic this poem speaks through images and rhyme. Well done
December 1st, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
Highly symbolic this poem speaks through images and rhyme. Well done
December 1st, 2025 04:42
The Butterfly
sorenbarrett said:
Butterfly real or metaphorical a symbol of romance it floats and shows its colors in spring and summer of a relationship. Nicely written
November 30th, 2025 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Butterfly real or metaphorical a symbol of romance it floats and shows its colors in spring and summer of a relationship. Nicely written
November 30th, 2025 04:59
Will of the Sires
Friendship said:
The poem “Will of the Sires” explores themes of desire, longing, and the complexity of human emotions. It delves into the connection between the speaker and the “sires of the lake,” suggesting a deep, possibly mystical relationship with women who embody both nurturing and consuming qualities.
November 29th, 2025 09:56
Friendship said:
The poem “Will of the Sires” explores themes of desire, longing, and the complexity of human emotions. It delves into the connection between the speaker and the “sires of the lake,” suggesting a deep, possibly mystical relationship with women who embody both nurturing and consuming qualities.
November 29th, 2025 09:56
Will of the Sires
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has some classical traits but is melded with more contemporary style. It travels from the romantic, to the mythical to the modern world. A vast trip
November 29th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has some classical traits but is melded with more contemporary style. It travels from the romantic, to the mythical to the modern world. A vast trip
November 29th, 2025 04:25
Gentle Spirit
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful sonnet of love. Very nicely written with great images, meter and rhyme. Well crafted
November 26th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful sonnet of love. Very nicely written with great images, meter and rhyme. Well crafted
November 26th, 2025 04:42
A Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture painted in this poem with great metaphor as well. Funny how people think alike in that my poem today was a rose as well
November 17th, 2025 20:47
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture painted in this poem with great metaphor as well. Funny how people think alike in that my poem today was a rose as well
November 17th, 2025 20:47
Shadows Toll
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem punctuated with natural images and some of personal nature that pledge oneself to another. Well rhymed and with good meter. Nicely done
November 16th, 2025 20:02
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem punctuated with natural images and some of personal nature that pledge oneself to another. Well rhymed and with good meter. Nicely done
November 16th, 2025 20:02
Moon in a box
sorenbarrett said:
The magnificence of the universe in this poem. Nicely done
November 13th, 2025 20:30
sorenbarrett said:
The magnificence of the universe in this poem. Nicely done
November 13th, 2025 20:30
The Race
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read that seems a bit cryptic with its metaphors. Nicely done
November 12th, 2025 13:08
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read that seems a bit cryptic with its metaphors. Nicely done
November 12th, 2025 13:08
Reap
Bella Shepard said:
The illusion of time, we each experience it in different ways, but can never capture. Good write!
November 11th, 2025 16:03
Bella Shepard said:
The illusion of time, we each experience it in different ways, but can never capture. Good write!
November 11th, 2025 16:03
Reap
sorenbarrett said:
Time indeed does beckon from above they are the only ones that know where the finish line is. a wonderful write
November 11th, 2025 15:05
sorenbarrett said:
Time indeed does beckon from above they are the only ones that know where the finish line is. a wonderful write
November 11th, 2025 15:05
Seasoned summer
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful work with wonderful rhyme and meaning. Very nicely done
November 10th, 2025 14:55
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful work with wonderful rhyme and meaning. Very nicely done
November 10th, 2025 14:55
Sunday sun rise
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful words that leave a sense of melancholy and even a wistfulness. A fave
November 9th, 2025 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful words that leave a sense of melancholy and even a wistfulness. A fave
November 9th, 2025 11:44
Tempered Life
sorenbarrett said:
I get it. Time tempers all things. Unfortunately we do not always value what tempering does. Well done
November 8th, 2025 14:59
sorenbarrett said:
I get it. Time tempers all things. Unfortunately we do not always value what tempering does. Well done
November 8th, 2025 14:59
Universal Rose
sorenbarrett said:
Such good meter and flow in this poem is wonderful. Loved the lines:
How me, how I love the rose.
Bent and broke her twisted thorns,
Very nicely done.
November 7th, 2025 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
Such good meter and flow in this poem is wonderful. Loved the lines:
How me, how I love the rose.
Bent and broke her twisted thorns,
Very nicely done.
November 7th, 2025 13:13
Rose wall
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of beauty in the metaphor of the flower and the season. So nicely framed it sends its message and in the sweetness of its fragrance a memory preserved. A fave
November 6th, 2025 07:07
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of beauty in the metaphor of the flower and the season. So nicely framed it sends its message and in the sweetness of its fragrance a memory preserved. A fave
November 6th, 2025 07:07
In Love
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one is smooth and sweet, slick and a bit tender. Nicely done a wonderful love poem
November 5th, 2025 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one is smooth and sweet, slick and a bit tender. Nicely done a wonderful love poem
November 5th, 2025 08:15
Horrizons in Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
Mea culpa seems the theme of this poem. The frailty of man and need for higher power to guard and protect is accompanied with the excuse of being just human. Mea culpa, mea maxima culpa. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
Mea culpa seems the theme of this poem. The frailty of man and need for higher power to guard and protect is accompanied with the excuse of being just human. Mea culpa, mea maxima culpa. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 08:05
Dying Star
Bella Shepard said:
As everything is born, so it must die. You relate the story of our dying sun, an event we find impossible to conceive of, yet will ultimately happen. You capture the essence of the inevitable end in beautiful imagery, and the emotion of humanity\'s fate. Well done!
November 3rd, 2025 14:47
Bella Shepard said:
As everything is born, so it must die. You relate the story of our dying sun, an event we find impossible to conceive of, yet will ultimately happen. You capture the essence of the inevitable end in beautiful imagery, and the emotion of humanity\'s fate. Well done!
November 3rd, 2025 14:47
Dying Star
sorenbarrett said:
Here there seems to be a theme of soaring but yet of dying and falling from sight. Nicely written with periodic rhyme it flows well.
November 3rd, 2025 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
Here there seems to be a theme of soaring but yet of dying and falling from sight. Nicely written with periodic rhyme it flows well.
November 3rd, 2025 09:32
The Midnight Ocean Cove
NinjaGirl said:
I especially love the first line--how water can be thirsty because it\'s salty. Beautifully written
November 2nd, 2025 21:35
NinjaGirl said:
I especially love the first line--how water can be thirsty because it\'s salty. Beautifully written
November 2nd, 2025 21:35
The Midnight Ocean Cove
Bella Shepard said:
Outstanding imagery, beautiful rhyme and flow, this is the stuff dreams are made of!
November 2nd, 2025 10:04
Bella Shepard said:
Outstanding imagery, beautiful rhyme and flow, this is the stuff dreams are made of!
November 2nd, 2025 10:04
The Midnight Ocean Cove
sorenbarrett said:
Great wording creating images in this poem that seems to rock one to sleep in another sphere and dimension. Nicely done
November 2nd, 2025 08:36
sorenbarrett said:
Great wording creating images in this poem that seems to rock one to sleep in another sphere and dimension. Nicely done
November 2nd, 2025 08:36
The Hoops
sorenbarrett said:
This one had me going from shadow boxing to basketball. Nicely written a fun read
November 1st, 2025 19:43
sorenbarrett said:
This one had me going from shadow boxing to basketball. Nicely written a fun read
November 1st, 2025 19:43
A Moment
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the way you wrap this poem up! Tbh I’m biased because I’m a sucker for a verb ending any poem - it’s just so impactful. But this one was really nice 🤍
November 1st, 2025 01:37
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the way you wrap this poem up! Tbh I’m biased because I’m a sucker for a verb ending any poem - it’s just so impactful. But this one was really nice 🤍
November 1st, 2025 01:37
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