Comments received on poems by RSM0812
My Blooming Rose
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful sonnet my friend set in colorful images of nature the metaphor unfolds as a blossom and reveals its beauty. Simply lovely and a fave
July 23rd, 2026 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful sonnet my friend set in colorful images of nature the metaphor unfolds as a blossom and reveals its beauty. Simply lovely and a fave
July 23rd, 2026 05:45
Falling Angels
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of few virtues in this battle. Well done
July 22nd, 2026 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of few virtues in this battle. Well done
July 22nd, 2026 07:29
My Love
8Blackwidow8 said:
(A kiss, one so golden, your lips red and soft.
Playing like children, in winters first frost)
Beautiful lines here. I like a poem that can speak of passion without crudness.
July 21st, 2026 10:18
8Blackwidow8 said:
(A kiss, one so golden, your lips red and soft.
Playing like children, in winters first frost)
Beautiful lines here. I like a poem that can speak of passion without crudness.
July 21st, 2026 10:18
Cardinal and Rose
8Blackwidow8 said:
I would love to see a red cardinal in real life. It\'s got to be a sight to see. Beautiful poem that took me somewhere else for its length.
July 21st, 2026 10:16
8Blackwidow8 said:
I would love to see a red cardinal in real life. It\'s got to be a sight to see. Beautiful poem that took me somewhere else for its length.
July 21st, 2026 10:16
Farmers Morning
8Blackwidow8 said:
Remain to simple fields of hey.
A song to strangley die
Love these lines.
July 21st, 2026 10:15
8Blackwidow8 said:
Remain to simple fields of hey.
A song to strangley die
Love these lines.
July 21st, 2026 10:15
Simple Sleep
sorenbarrett said:
Pretty words accompany good rhyme and meter in this poem that leaves much to the imagination and open for interpretation. Well done.
July 21st, 2026 08:22
sorenbarrett said:
Pretty words accompany good rhyme and meter in this poem that leaves much to the imagination and open for interpretation. Well done.
July 21st, 2026 08:22
Cardinal and Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely write set in nature and colors. It sends its message well.
July 20th, 2026 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely write set in nature and colors. It sends its message well.
July 20th, 2026 06:52
Farmers Morning
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice rhyme scheme accompanied by good meter lends itself that a wonderful flow in this piece. Well done
July 19th, 2026 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice rhyme scheme accompanied by good meter lends itself that a wonderful flow in this piece. Well done
July 19th, 2026 06:22
My Word is my Bond
sorenbarrett said:
A play on a rather famous line that rolls off the tongue with the addition of a rhyming word. Well played out in this write.
July 17th, 2026 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
A play on a rather famous line that rolls off the tongue with the addition of a rhyming word. Well played out in this write.
July 17th, 2026 06:03
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal in its wording and setting it speaks of love, angels and the good. It leaves a warm feel. Nice
July 16th, 2026 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal in its wording and setting it speaks of love, angels and the good. It leaves a warm feel. Nice
July 16th, 2026 08:19
Untitled
isa kemmy said:
its a great artistic display of sunset, i also liked sunset photographing with those closed to me, great write
July 14th, 2026 06:48
isa kemmy said:
its a great artistic display of sunset, i also liked sunset photographing with those closed to me, great write
July 14th, 2026 06:48
My Love
sorenbarrett said:
Passion is a poem where physicality is expressed in touch. Nicely worded
July 13th, 2026 07:14
sorenbarrett said:
Passion is a poem where physicality is expressed in touch. Nicely worded
July 13th, 2026 07:14
Blinded Rath
Teddy.15 said:
Fabulous rhyme and imagery love your last lines they are powerful. 🌹
July 13th, 2026 01:45
Teddy.15 said:
Fabulous rhyme and imagery love your last lines they are powerful. 🌹
July 13th, 2026 01:45
Blinded Rath
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads as an incantation. It holds magic and flows well off the tongue, well done.
July 12th, 2026 11:32
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads as an incantation. It holds magic and flows well off the tongue, well done.
July 12th, 2026 11:32
Enter Time
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal in its feel this poem is powerful in its wording. Well done
July 11th, 2026 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal in its feel this poem is powerful in its wording. Well done
July 11th, 2026 07:57
The sleepy Tree
sorenbarrett said:
A most romantic poem in the sense of images and natural beauty. Well done
July 9th, 2026 19:02
sorenbarrett said:
A most romantic poem in the sense of images and natural beauty. Well done
July 9th, 2026 19:02
Linger More
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads almost prayerlike and unfolds its story in good rhyme. Nicely done
July 7th, 2026 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads almost prayerlike and unfolds its story in good rhyme. Nicely done
July 7th, 2026 03:53
Restless Beauty
Friendship said:
A lovely poem. Your poem explores themes of unrequited love, longing, and the transcendence of beauty. You express the deep emotional connection between two souls who seem destined to meet but remain apart, emphasizing the bittersweet nature of their relationship.
July 6th, 2026 16:58
Friendship said:
A lovely poem. Your poem explores themes of unrequited love, longing, and the transcendence of beauty. You express the deep emotional connection between two souls who seem destined to meet but remain apart, emphasizing the bittersweet nature of their relationship.
July 6th, 2026 16:58
Calm Before the Storm
sorenbarrett said:
Stormy images in this write. It seems metaphoric regarding a relationship turned cold and stormy. Well done
July 5th, 2026 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
Stormy images in this write. It seems metaphoric regarding a relationship turned cold and stormy. Well done
July 5th, 2026 07:02
Twisted Moon
sorenbarrett said:
Twisted indeed this poem convolutes the mind well done
July 4th, 2026 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
Twisted indeed this poem convolutes the mind well done
July 4th, 2026 15:57
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