Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Songbird
sorenbarrett said:
Songs that lift the spirit so to speak. A lofty poem that has good flow and feels like a call to all. A pleasure to read and deserves more readers
October 19th, 2024 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
Songs that lift the spirit so to speak. A lofty poem that has good flow and feels like a call to all. A pleasure to read and deserves more readers
October 19th, 2024 09:27
My Love
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words in a setting of solid rhyme make a gem that any woman would long to wear. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 06:33
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words in a setting of solid rhyme make a gem that any woman would long to wear. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 06:33
Forest Fire
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written and on a subject dear to heart. Love your work
October 15th, 2024 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written and on a subject dear to heart. Love your work
October 15th, 2024 05:23
A walk
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded and with such good flow it holds a romantic feel and somehow holds the feel of a master work
October 15th, 2024 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded and with such good flow it holds a romantic feel and somehow holds the feel of a master work
October 15th, 2024 05:21
Angel Tears
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem with its classical feel and absolutely marvelous rhyme scheme and meter. It flows so well off the tongue and captures a past century feel. A fav
October 15th, 2024 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem with its classical feel and absolutely marvelous rhyme scheme and meter. It flows so well off the tongue and captures a past century feel. A fav
October 15th, 2024 05:17
Rumors
Neilton said:
Excellent work here! My favorite line
\"Tell few the wants of the heart\"
I loved it
September 10th, 2024 00:33
Neilton said:
Excellent work here! My favorite line
\"Tell few the wants of the heart\"
I loved it
September 10th, 2024 00:33
The quiet
RSM0812 said:
Thank you. I wrote it last night as I had someone close pass away suddenly yesterday of a heart attack. My mind was on the kiss of death I guess.
August 8th, 2024 07:27
RSM0812 said:
Thank you. I wrote it last night as I had someone close pass away suddenly yesterday of a heart attack. My mind was on the kiss of death I guess.
August 8th, 2024 07:27
The quiet
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautifully worded poem that paints a picture in metaphor\'s colors. From nothingness through birth to death. The internal rhyme worked so well to keep the emotion and pacing needed in this poem. Lovely certainly one of my favorites.
August 8th, 2024 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautifully worded poem that paints a picture in metaphor\'s colors. From nothingness through birth to death. The internal rhyme worked so well to keep the emotion and pacing needed in this poem. Lovely certainly one of my favorites.
August 8th, 2024 06:38
Bones
MLHnow said:
Wow and more wow
A poem for the ages of mankind
Reminds me of much poem wealth we humans have written for centuries!
June 20th, 2024 16:12
MLHnow said:
Wow and more wow
A poem for the ages of mankind
Reminds me of much poem wealth we humans have written for centuries!
June 20th, 2024 16:12
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