Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Another Day
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely worded this poem ties together line for line. Not sure but I think you meant (sought) but maybe not. A fave my friend
October 14th, 2026 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely worded this poem ties together line for line. Not sure but I think you meant (sought) but maybe not. A fave my friend
October 14th, 2026 08:09
Straight Line
sorenbarrett said:
An enigma in words cast in rhyme that flows and circles round until it has found a straight line. Well done
October 12th, 2026 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
An enigma in words cast in rhyme that flows and circles round until it has found a straight line. Well done
October 12th, 2026 10:55
Till Sorrow Wept
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful rhyme and meter build this poem from ground up. Nicely done
October 11th, 2026 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful rhyme and meter build this poem from ground up. Nicely done
October 11th, 2026 11:41
Moral Quietude
sorenbarrett said:
A message that needs thought. Nicely written
October 10th, 2026 19:09
sorenbarrett said:
A message that needs thought. Nicely written
October 10th, 2026 19:09
Heart in Hand
sorenbarrett said:
This poem involves the emotional with the existential and all put to good rhyme
October 8th, 2026 19:08
sorenbarrett said:
This poem involves the emotional with the existential and all put to good rhyme
October 8th, 2026 19:08
The Queit
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal this poem speaks of peace and solitude. Nicely done.
September 28th, 2026 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal this poem speaks of peace and solitude. Nicely done.
September 28th, 2026 12:10
Romance in a Spoon
sorenbarrett said:
I love this twist of the fanciful into meaning with great metaphor. At first is seems a nursery rhyme somewhat absurd but out of absurdity springs wisdom and it speaks to relationships asking the time old question of is one\'s choice only a dance where one trades partners from time to time or is it sweet and like sugar soon the taste wears off and one requires more. Wide is the chance indeed. A fave
September 25th, 2026 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
I love this twist of the fanciful into meaning with great metaphor. At first is seems a nursery rhyme somewhat absurd but out of absurdity springs wisdom and it speaks to relationships asking the time old question of is one\'s choice only a dance where one trades partners from time to time or is it sweet and like sugar soon the taste wears off and one requires more. Wide is the chance indeed. A fave
September 25th, 2026 09:07
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A dream like write nicely composed with some rhyme
September 23rd, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
A dream like write nicely composed with some rhyme
September 23rd, 2026 04:25
Oh Sunlight
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that in all its fantasy shows reality as well. Nice
September 22nd, 2026 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that in all its fantasy shows reality as well. Nice
September 22nd, 2026 09:11
Dusk
sorenbarrett said:
A challenge to take on danger when it brings beauty and purpose to life. Nicely said
September 21st, 2026 13:11
sorenbarrett said:
A challenge to take on danger when it brings beauty and purpose to life. Nicely said
September 21st, 2026 13:11
Morn of Pipers Dream
sorenbarrett said:
I love the meter of this poem it is so well set and speaks of another time. The wording is most original and clever and takes one to a fantasy land. Make the most of the moment. Lovely and a fave
September 20th, 2026 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
I love the meter of this poem it is so well set and speaks of another time. The wording is most original and clever and takes one to a fantasy land. Make the most of the moment. Lovely and a fave
September 20th, 2026 08:37
Dreadful Peace
sorenbarrett said:
Peace they say is found in death (Rest in peace) but can it be found in life too. I would argue yes, in one\'s mind and heart. Nicely done
September 18th, 2026 09:18
sorenbarrett said:
Peace they say is found in death (Rest in peace) but can it be found in life too. I would argue yes, in one\'s mind and heart. Nicely done
September 18th, 2026 09:18
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a distant echo vague but heard and distinct. Nicely done
September 16th, 2026 10:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a distant echo vague but heard and distinct. Nicely done
September 16th, 2026 10:33
I Love You
Jamiano said:
Beautiful sentiments of companionship and serenity. Thank you.
September 14th, 2026 14:00
Jamiano said:
Beautiful sentiments of companionship and serenity. Thank you.
September 14th, 2026 14:00
I Love You
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the simple three words I love you. Nicely done
September 14th, 2026 14:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the simple three words I love you. Nicely done
September 14th, 2026 14:00
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A great love poem and proclamation nicely written in rhyme and good meter. Well done my friend
September 8th, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
A great love poem and proclamation nicely written in rhyme and good meter. Well done my friend
September 8th, 2026 03:52
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyme and good meter make this poem flow nicely. Its message to me one of change and the passage of time. Well done
August 27th, 2026 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyme and good meter make this poem flow nicely. Its message to me one of change and the passage of time. Well done
August 27th, 2026 12:15
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