Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes



No Freakin\' Way!
2781 said:

That gave me a chuckle,
Stay sane!

June 6th, 2024 01:27

It’s a Hard Life
Cassie58 said:

Be careful of your own hand. You could end up a cropper lol. Irritating aren’t they. Particularly when you are on holiday in the summer. Could be a metaphor as well.

June 5th, 2024 11:33

It’s a Hard Life
2781 said:

Their hard to love!

June 5th, 2024 01:55

Bird Relaxation
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent imagery.

June 3rd, 2024 23:09

Bird Relaxation
Cassie58 said:

I laughed. It started off so beautifully poetic and descended into reality:) Have a good day.

June 3rd, 2024 02:35

Bird Relaxation
2781 said:

Down here, the noisy minors lay spread eagle on the hot sand, dead like.
Then spring to life if you get to close. Fascinated me.

June 3rd, 2024 02:23

I\'m Very sorry
Mutley Ravishes said:

As long as you catch them in the early stages of nest-building then neither “side” suffers much damage!

June 2nd, 2024 07:16

I\'m Very sorry
2781 said:

It\'s a dilemma. I\'ve battled with them for a few years but we finally found some mutual respect.

June 2nd, 2024 05:25

I\'m Very sorry
Cassie58 said:

It’s a problem isn’t it? Unwanted guests. Going for dispersal without loss of life seems a good option. A great metaphor here.

June 2nd, 2024 03:07

Cosmic Raps
Mutley Ravishes said:

Thanks for the rappers’ names. I’ll check them out. I guess your dad likes the Fun Lovin Criminals?!

May 31st, 2024 23:33

Cosmic Raps
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

I\'m young but I love old stuff, love A tribe called quest mainly can I kick it and jazz, I like 2Pac just his message is powerful, I hate all these new rappers, my dad listens to Dax and Beatie Boys so I hear them a lot, Dax speaks a lot of truth to. I like Ghetto Boys, Scarface, and one song of Too $hort, which is Gettin\' It. ❤️

May 31st, 2024 10:48

Cosmic Raps
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

Wow, we got the next Tupac, lol. What you listen to?

May 30th, 2024 19:46

Cosmic Raps
Mutley Ravishes said:

Thanks! Been listening to a lot of rap recently. I guess it’s paying off.

May 30th, 2024 18:13

Cosmic Raps
2781 said:

Nice flow

May 30th, 2024 02:51

Angina
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

May 29th, 2024 22:44

What is Death, Professor?
2781 said:

O death, where is your sting?

May 26th, 2024 09:31

Diaphragm Exorcist
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

Nice write Mutley, It\'s a toung twister, lol. ❤️

May 24th, 2024 19:15

Sunrise in the Marianas
sorenbarrett said:

The paradoxical words fit the title but under the surface is more truth than one would think.

May 18th, 2024 18:55

Mydentity
evenwheniLie said:

Cryptic, yet still understood, excellent word play.

May 16th, 2024 18:38

Ultramagnetic
Thomas W Case said:

Nice work.

May 10th, 2024 10:17

Star Flaws
2781 said:

In returning and rest ye shall be saved: in quietness and in confidence shall be your strength:

May 9th, 2024 09:27

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