Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes



Flammable
RSM0812 said:

Short and sweet. I really like the descriptive words you chose. This is my favorite today.

February 26th, 2025 08:39

Red Waves
Poetic Licence said:

A very enjoyable read

February 26th, 2025 08:28

Red Waves
arqios said:

Majestic. Brought to mind some dervishes twirling as the sacking of Constantinople was in the offing. Random association, I know. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

February 26th, 2025 05:47

Red Waves
Cheeky Missy said:

Good grief! You riot, methinks you\'re having too much fun. All the better for good health, eh?

February 26th, 2025 05:04

Flammable
Poetic Licence said:

Passion taking your feelings to heaven then back to hell, enjoyed the read

February 25th, 2025 05:34

Flammable
sorenbarrett said:

I have heard both and this poem although short is a fun and thought provoking read

February 24th, 2025 21:59

Flammable
Tristan Robert Lange said:

They burn both ways, methinks! A hellavu job indeed. Well done, my friend.

February 24th, 2025 20:25

Flammable
Cheeky Missy said:

Who said you can, eh?!

February 24th, 2025 19:29

Flammable
NinjaGirl said:

Yes, it is, beautiful write

February 24th, 2025 19:16

Gypsy Tart
arqios said:

A sight to behold, and at other times not quite so πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

February 23rd, 2025 03:09

Gypsy Tart
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This gets a fave! I don\'t need to analyze this, it speaks for itself! πŸ’― I wish there was a 1000 emoji to put here.Brilliant and funny!

February 22nd, 2025 09:58

Gypsy Tart
2781 said:

Smoke from the pit.

February 22nd, 2025 06:54

Gypsy Tart
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of fantasy that may well be a metaphor and in its humor and redacted obscenity sends a message. A fun read and mind provoking

February 22nd, 2025 06:24

Gypsy Tart
Poetic Licence said:

That is quite genius, entertaining and makes a point, enjoyed the read

February 22nd, 2025 06:23

Smoked
arqios said:

It would is inevitable, it would seem. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

February 21st, 2025 14:04

Smoked
Tristan Robert Lange said:

The last line makes it sound like we might already know. A well-written metaphor that goes far deeper than the human renal system. And I love the fact that \"inhaling\" is used along with kidneys. Inhaling = lungs not kidneys...yet it makes perfect sense because the inhalation of smoke doesn\'t just kill the lungs, now does it? The body is all connected. Again, brilliant metaphor, my friend.

February 21st, 2025 11:55

Smoked
Poetic Licence said:

It\'s probably me, enjoyed the read

February 21st, 2025 09:51

Smoked
2781 said:

I am.

February 21st, 2025 08:43

Smoked
sorenbarrett said:

Ah the metaphor in this one goes deeper than the kidneys. Yes indeed who is inhaling the smoke?

February 21st, 2025 08:30

Quest-ions
Thomas W Case said:

Superb.

February 20th, 2025 14:37

Fundamedical
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

February 20th, 2025 14:30

Fundamedical
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This image-rich poem speaks of the immense life-creating power of the Creator, drawing up images of the dry bones being brought to life in Ezekiel, among other gems. Well done on this, my friend! β€οΈπŸ™

February 20th, 2025 08:05

Fundamedical
arqios said:

Who indeed! Many are at the β€œplate” but who will hit a home run!?

February 20th, 2025 01:40

Electric Shock
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 18th, 2025 11:58

Electric Shock
sorenbarrett said:

The cure for stagnation is entropy. A downhill slope with nothing at the bottom. A fun read

February 18th, 2025 05:31

Electric Shock
Poetic Licence said:

Signs of getting old!!!, enjoyed the read

February 18th, 2025 04:15

Electric Shock
arqios said:

Oh the terror of stagnation πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

February 18th, 2025 02:18

One for the Ladies
Tristan Robert Lange said:

A wonderful poem that speaks of aging and rejuvenation. A fascinating and though provoking write, my friend! 🌹

February 17th, 2025 08:15

One for the Ladies
sorenbarrett said:

A frightening thought for those who have undergone menses and now like Sarah of Old Testament surprisingly give birth in old age. What a thought. Metaphorically it is another thing productive births of ideas are generated out of the old. Nicely done Mutley

February 17th, 2025 05:29

One for the Ladies
arqios said:

Very interesting. I’m supposing parallels apply in other biologies. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

February 17th, 2025 05:27



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