Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Earth Shaking
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, then we\'ll...collapse?! You rascal, you\'re still a riot.
July 3rd, 2025 02:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, then we\'ll...collapse?! You rascal, you\'re still a riot.
July 3rd, 2025 02:15
July
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s a little bit risky stepping outside any where at the moment!, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 22:58
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s a little bit risky stepping outside any where at the moment!, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 22:58
The Shining
NafisaSB said:
looking - and the dazzling light is surely blinding
enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 01:33
NafisaSB said:
looking - and the dazzling light is surely blinding
enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 01:33
The 9 o\'clock News
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, this is one way to put it! Excellent use of absurdism to make your point. Point well made. A fave for me, friend! πΉπ
June 23rd, 2025 09:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, this is one way to put it! Excellent use of absurdism to make your point. Point well made. A fave for me, friend! πΉπ
June 23rd, 2025 09:29
The 9 o\'clock News
Poetic Licence said:
A clever way of illustrating today\'s current issues, nicely done
June 23rd, 2025 06:19
Poetic Licence said:
A clever way of illustrating today\'s current issues, nicely done
June 23rd, 2025 06:19
The 9 o\'clock News
sorenbarrett said:
Using an absurd threat and numbers to emphasize a more serious issue sucks the reader into what otherwise might be a neglected issue. Well presented and nicely done with dry humor. Lovely
June 23rd, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
Using an absurd threat and numbers to emphasize a more serious issue sucks the reader into what otherwise might be a neglected issue. Well presented and nicely done with dry humor. Lovely
June 23rd, 2025 05:07
The 9 o\'clock News
arqios said:
This poem\'s got a deadpan charmβabsurdity delivered with the calm detachment of a news anchor, which makes the potential chaos oddly believable. ποΈππ»
June 23rd, 2025 03:00
arqios said:
This poem\'s got a deadpan charmβabsurdity delivered with the calm detachment of a news anchor, which makes the potential chaos oddly believable. ποΈππ»
June 23rd, 2025 03:00
Hawaii Five-Flow
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the word play in the title. This brief poem packs a powerful punch and says more than what appears on the screen. Excellent question to close it too! Me thinks so! Well done, friend. ππΉ
June 21st, 2025 06:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the word play in the title. This brief poem packs a powerful punch and says more than what appears on the screen. Excellent question to close it too! Me thinks so! Well done, friend. ππΉ
June 21st, 2025 06:54
Hawaii Five-Flow
Poetic Licence said:
I feel it is about to erupt, enjoyed the read
June 21st, 2025 04:16
Poetic Licence said:
I feel it is about to erupt, enjoyed the read
June 21st, 2025 04:16
Hawaii Five-Flow
sorenbarrett said:
Now this can be taken more than one way and I love the clever title. I remember that series. Is it volcanic eruption or something more? Nicely written.
June 21st, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Now this can be taken more than one way and I love the clever title. I remember that series. Is it volcanic eruption or something more? Nicely written.
June 21st, 2025 04:06
The Shining
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Helios approves of this message! ππ€£ Well done, my friend! ππΉ
June 17th, 2025 08:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Helios approves of this message! ππ€£ Well done, my friend! ππΉ
June 17th, 2025 08:01
The Shining
Poetic Licence said:
I am a sun worshiper and today is great, loved the read
June 17th, 2025 05:09
Poetic Licence said:
I am a sun worshiper and today is great, loved the read
June 17th, 2025 05:09
The Shining
sorenbarrett said:
So say all sun worshipers of which I am one. A fun read that has more meaning that at first seen. Nicely done
June 17th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
So say all sun worshipers of which I am one. A fun read that has more meaning that at first seen. Nicely done
June 17th, 2025 04:27
The Shining
arqios said:
Yes, may ApΓ³llΕn watch over our day, shining bright!
June 17th, 2025 02:08
arqios said:
Yes, may ApΓ³llΕn watch over our day, shining bright!
June 17th, 2025 02:08
Addicere
sorenbarrett said:
And a mind bender indeed it is in this poem that takes ones thoughts around and around. Nicely done
June 5th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
And a mind bender indeed it is in this poem that takes ones thoughts around and around. Nicely done
June 5th, 2025 05:09
Addicere
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes the most difficult thing in the world to admit defeat, enjoyed the read
June 5th, 2025 04:34
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes the most difficult thing in the world to admit defeat, enjoyed the read
June 5th, 2025 04:34
Con-strict
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh how I love this, Mr. Con-strict-or! LOL! Wonderfully layered in its brevity! Perfection, imho! πΉπ
June 2nd, 2025 07:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh how I love this, Mr. Con-strict-or! LOL! Wonderfully layered in its brevity! Perfection, imho! πΉπ
June 2nd, 2025 07:21
Con-strict
sorenbarrett said:
Assumptions lead to actions now taken on false presumptions and false steps leaves a person easy prey to any predator. That is my first take but there somehow seems an alternate meaning here that deserves further contemplation. Lovely write
June 2nd, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Assumptions lead to actions now taken on false presumptions and false steps leaves a person easy prey to any predator. That is my first take but there somehow seems an alternate meaning here that deserves further contemplation. Lovely write
June 2nd, 2025 04:57
Con-strict
Poetic Licence said:
That sums up very nicely how alot of people feel, like pray, enjoyed the read
June 2nd, 2025 02:33
Poetic Licence said:
That sums up very nicely how alot of people feel, like pray, enjoyed the read
June 2nd, 2025 02:33
Con-strict
Soman Ragavan said:
The boa is a constrictor. The python, too, by the look of it. The assumptions were not uttered but were still intercepted. This python can smell from very far off...
June 2nd, 2025 02:16
Soman Ragavan said:
The boa is a constrictor. The python, too, by the look of it. The assumptions were not uttered but were still intercepted. This python can smell from very far off...
June 2nd, 2025 02:16
In My Defense
Poetic Licence said:
That is some defence, probably one that that type of person would believe is valid!!, enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 02:42
Poetic Licence said:
That is some defence, probably one that that type of person would believe is valid!!, enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 02:42
A Dam in the Evening
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Signs. Damn it. Actually, no. God bless it! LOL! The signs are everywhere. Your poem is one such sign! I know exactly what this poem means, spiritually (and personally) speaking, and I give it a RESOUNDING AMEN! Well done. my friend. πΉπ
May 28th, 2025 19:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Signs. Damn it. Actually, no. God bless it! LOL! The signs are everywhere. Your poem is one such sign! I know exactly what this poem means, spiritually (and personally) speaking, and I give it a RESOUNDING AMEN! Well done. my friend. πΉπ
May 28th, 2025 19:28
A Dam in the Evening
arqios said:
Quite a prophetic and observant message.πππ»
May 28th, 2025 06:52
arqios said:
Quite a prophetic and observant message.πππ»
May 28th, 2025 06:52
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