Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Gypsy Tart
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This gets a fave! I don\'t need to analyze this, it speaks for itself! 💯 I wish there was a 1000 emoji to put here.Brilliant and funny!
February 22nd, 2025 09:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This gets a fave! I don\'t need to analyze this, it speaks for itself! 💯 I wish there was a 1000 emoji to put here.Brilliant and funny!
February 22nd, 2025 09:58
Gypsy Tart
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of fantasy that may well be a metaphor and in its humor and redacted obscenity sends a message. A fun read and mind provoking
February 22nd, 2025 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of fantasy that may well be a metaphor and in its humor and redacted obscenity sends a message. A fun read and mind provoking
February 22nd, 2025 06:24
Gypsy Tart
Poetic Licence said:
That is quite genius, entertaining and makes a point, enjoyed the read
February 22nd, 2025 06:23
Poetic Licence said:
That is quite genius, entertaining and makes a point, enjoyed the read
February 22nd, 2025 06:23
Smoked
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The last line makes it sound like we might already know. A well-written metaphor that goes far deeper than the human renal system. And I love the fact that \"inhaling\" is used along with kidneys. Inhaling = lungs not kidneys...yet it makes perfect sense because the inhalation of smoke doesn\'t just kill the lungs, now does it? The body is all connected. Again, brilliant metaphor, my friend.
February 21st, 2025 11:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The last line makes it sound like we might already know. A well-written metaphor that goes far deeper than the human renal system. And I love the fact that \"inhaling\" is used along with kidneys. Inhaling = lungs not kidneys...yet it makes perfect sense because the inhalation of smoke doesn\'t just kill the lungs, now does it? The body is all connected. Again, brilliant metaphor, my friend.
February 21st, 2025 11:55
Smoked
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the metaphor in this one goes deeper than the kidneys. Yes indeed who is inhaling the smoke?
February 21st, 2025 08:30
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the metaphor in this one goes deeper than the kidneys. Yes indeed who is inhaling the smoke?
February 21st, 2025 08:30
Fundamedical
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This image-rich poem speaks of the immense life-creating power of the Creator, drawing up images of the dry bones being brought to life in Ezekiel, among other gems. Well done on this, my friend! ❤️🙏
February 20th, 2025 08:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This image-rich poem speaks of the immense life-creating power of the Creator, drawing up images of the dry bones being brought to life in Ezekiel, among other gems. Well done on this, my friend! ❤️🙏
February 20th, 2025 08:05
Fundamedical
arqios said:
Who indeed! Many are at the “plate” but who will hit a home run!?
February 20th, 2025 01:40
arqios said:
Who indeed! Many are at the “plate” but who will hit a home run!?
February 20th, 2025 01:40
Electric Shock
sorenbarrett said:
The cure for stagnation is entropy. A downhill slope with nothing at the bottom. A fun read
February 18th, 2025 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
The cure for stagnation is entropy. A downhill slope with nothing at the bottom. A fun read
February 18th, 2025 05:31
Electric Shock
Poetic Licence said:
Signs of getting old!!!, enjoyed the read
February 18th, 2025 04:15
Poetic Licence said:
Signs of getting old!!!, enjoyed the read
February 18th, 2025 04:15
One for the Ladies
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful poem that speaks of aging and rejuvenation. A fascinating and though provoking write, my friend! 🌹
February 17th, 2025 08:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful poem that speaks of aging and rejuvenation. A fascinating and though provoking write, my friend! 🌹
February 17th, 2025 08:15
One for the Ladies
sorenbarrett said:
A frightening thought for those who have undergone menses and now like Sarah of Old Testament surprisingly give birth in old age. What a thought. Metaphorically it is another thing productive births of ideas are generated out of the old. Nicely done Mutley
February 17th, 2025 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
A frightening thought for those who have undergone menses and now like Sarah of Old Testament surprisingly give birth in old age. What a thought. Metaphorically it is another thing productive births of ideas are generated out of the old. Nicely done Mutley
February 17th, 2025 05:29
One for the Ladies
arqios said:
Very interesting. I’m supposing parallels apply in other biologies. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 17th, 2025 05:27
arqios said:
Very interesting. I’m supposing parallels apply in other biologies. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 17th, 2025 05:27
Dear Winstun
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, at least, you rascal, this pretty little number echoing as it were a post from Saturday, gave me some interesting and enlightening research to indulge in before I belatedly caught your drift. Cute. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a damning poignancy. Thank you for sharing, you rascal.
February 16th, 2025 09:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, at least, you rascal, this pretty little number echoing as it were a post from Saturday, gave me some interesting and enlightening research to indulge in before I belatedly caught your drift. Cute. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a damning poignancy. Thank you for sharing, you rascal.
February 16th, 2025 09:18
Dear Winstun
sorenbarrett said:
In my dullness this one seemed a bit cryptic but I loved the feel of the words and how they rolled out. A very pleasant feel to this read that has a bit of an aged feel.
February 16th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
In my dullness this one seemed a bit cryptic but I loved the feel of the words and how they rolled out. A very pleasant feel to this read that has a bit of an aged feel.
February 16th, 2025 04:42
Consumption
RSM0812 said:
Fun is a side effect of life sometimes I think. It\'s when time flys. Sometimes you have to put fun aside and just slow down.
February 15th, 2025 10:35
RSM0812 said:
Fun is a side effect of life sometimes I think. It\'s when time flys. Sometimes you have to put fun aside and just slow down.
February 15th, 2025 10:35
Diaphragm Vents
arqios said:
Wow, in old English they called them the bowels. I am guessing they kind of mean similar things. Speaking and singing are quite awesome activities with proper use of the diaphragm 🙏🏻🕊
February 15th, 2025 06:17
arqios said:
Wow, in old English they called them the bowels. I am guessing they kind of mean similar things. Speaking and singing are quite awesome activities with proper use of the diaphragm 🙏🏻🕊
February 15th, 2025 06:17
Diaphragm Vents
sorenbarrett said:
We often neglect and forget to be grateful for small things that really aren\'t that small. A most interesting write
February 15th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
We often neglect and forget to be grateful for small things that really aren\'t that small. A most interesting write
February 15th, 2025 04:26
Diaphragm Vents
Poetic Licence said:
Once poison soaks in, it is extremally hard to rid off, enjoyed the read
February 15th, 2025 03:17
Poetic Licence said:
Once poison soaks in, it is extremally hard to rid off, enjoyed the read
February 15th, 2025 03:17
Diaphragm Vents
Cheeky Missy said:
I have such a horror of upchucking that I attempt to avoid it at virtually all costs, and you must be so, so... what? And force my indulgence of your clever lines to a sharp halt, eh? Excellently rendered with superb imagery and an unappetizing poignancy haunting it. Thank you for sharing.
February 15th, 2025 00:34
Cheeky Missy said:
I have such a horror of upchucking that I attempt to avoid it at virtually all costs, and you must be so, so... what? And force my indulgence of your clever lines to a sharp halt, eh? Excellently rendered with superb imagery and an unappetizing poignancy haunting it. Thank you for sharing.
February 15th, 2025 00:34
Quest-ions
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I missed this veritable gem only because I fell asleep early, yet my, my what a pretty little number this verily is! Exquisitely rendered with a touch of imagery adorning it and a deliciously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 14th, 2025 11:41
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I missed this veritable gem only because I fell asleep early, yet my, my what a pretty little number this verily is! Exquisitely rendered with a touch of imagery adorning it and a deliciously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 14th, 2025 11:41
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