Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Atonemental
sorenbarrett said:
Enigmatic lines that lead one to reread and puzzle over this poem. Nicely rhymed and with good flow. I felt it without understanding.
August 12th, 2024 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
Enigmatic lines that lead one to reread and puzzle over this poem. Nicely rhymed and with good flow. I felt it without understanding.
August 12th, 2024 05:40
Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire
2781 said:
We might be pawns now, but hopefully we\'ll be transformed when we reach the other side.
August 9th, 2024 06:52
2781 said:
We might be pawns now, but hopefully we\'ll be transformed when we reach the other side.
August 9th, 2024 06:52
Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire
sorenbarrett said:
The imagination of children is limitless and here is expressed some of it. Fun and nicely worded.
August 9th, 2024 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
The imagination of children is limitless and here is expressed some of it. Fun and nicely worded.
August 9th, 2024 05:19
Garden of Edone
sorenbarrett said:
Knowledge only creates a greater hunger. A fun read
August 8th, 2024 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
Knowledge only creates a greater hunger. A fun read
August 8th, 2024 06:48
Magic Potion
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the use of drugs as an entry to \"implanted beliefs\" Here the two so closely related blur one into the other
August 7th, 2024 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the use of drugs as an entry to \"implanted beliefs\" Here the two so closely related blur one into the other
August 7th, 2024 04:12
In the Furnace
sorenbarrett said:
Existence is the key
when you face eternity
Short and to the point with catchy rhyme.
July 31st, 2024 06:01
sorenbarrett said:
Existence is the key
when you face eternity
Short and to the point with catchy rhyme.
July 31st, 2024 06:01
Futile Rearrangement of the Surface
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing more terrifying that the imagined. Nicely stated
July 29th, 2024 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing more terrifying that the imagined. Nicely stated
July 29th, 2024 10:05
Evidense
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful we have only 5 some say 6 senses and this is limiting. Reach out and be more.
July 28th, 2024 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful we have only 5 some say 6 senses and this is limiting. Reach out and be more.
July 28th, 2024 05:44
Earth\'s Most Wanted
sorenbarrett said:
I liked the way that the idea of false beliefs was personified and spoke in the first person to the reader. A great message.
July 27th, 2024 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
I liked the way that the idea of false beliefs was personified and spoke in the first person to the reader. A great message.
July 27th, 2024 05:33
Transmigration Blues
Tom Dylan said:
Made me smile, Mutley. I read this several times. :-)
July 24th, 2024 10:17
Tom Dylan said:
Made me smile, Mutley. I read this several times. :-)
July 24th, 2024 10:17
Limitation
sorenbarrett said:
This was a fun read with a surprise ending. Nicely done
July 19th, 2024 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
This was a fun read with a surprise ending. Nicely done
July 19th, 2024 05:23
Midnight Rambler
Thad Wilk said:
A very captivating,
deep and evocative
poem, short and
succinct, great
rhyme scheme
and awesome
presentation!! ๐
Best regards โ๏ธ. Thad
July 18th, 2024 20:39
Thad Wilk said:
A very captivating,
deep and evocative
poem, short and
succinct, great
rhyme scheme
and awesome
presentation!! ๐
Best regards โ๏ธ. Thad
July 18th, 2024 20:39
Spiral Woodpecker
orchidee said:
Good write M.
I was The Birdman. I too headbutted a tree, but had no beak, so had a terrible headache after it! lol. It\'s true ya know. heehee.
July 9th, 2024 04:55
orchidee said:
Good write M.
I was The Birdman. I too headbutted a tree, but had no beak, so had a terrible headache after it! lol. It\'s true ya know. heehee.
July 9th, 2024 04:55
Spiral Woodpecker
Tom Dylan said:
A cracking poem. I read this in almost a Bob Dylan kind of tone.
July 9th, 2024 02:43
Tom Dylan said:
A cracking poem. I read this in almost a Bob Dylan kind of tone.
July 9th, 2024 02:43
2043
๐ฉMase๐ช said:
Mental indeed......I heard Genetically modified rabbit doesn\'t taste as good. Lol good write Mutley, it has a nice flow.
July 7th, 2024 23:01
๐ฉMase๐ช said:
Mental indeed......I heard Genetically modified rabbit doesn\'t taste as good. Lol good write Mutley, it has a nice flow.
July 7th, 2024 23:01
2043
Thad Wilk said:
Ya gotta
Watch out for
that genetically-
modified rabbit๐ฐ
called Janet! ๐ฑ
She\'s pregnant
I heard.. ๐๐๐๐
Best regards โ๏ธ. Thad
July 6th, 2024 21:43
Thad Wilk said:
Ya gotta
Watch out for
that genetically-
modified rabbit๐ฐ
called Janet! ๐ฑ
She\'s pregnant
I heard.. ๐๐๐๐
Best regards โ๏ธ. Thad
July 6th, 2024 21:43
Viking Gaze
Thad Wilk said:
Great read my friend!
Enjoyed each line
beginning to end!!!
Thanks for sharing,
Great rhyme, flow and blend!! โ๏ธ
Best regards Thad
July 5th, 2024 17:39
Thad Wilk said:
Great read my friend!
Enjoyed each line
beginning to end!!!
Thanks for sharing,
Great rhyme, flow and blend!! โ๏ธ
Best regards Thad
July 5th, 2024 17:39
Viking Gaze
rengoku said:
my ancestors were actually vikings no joke
like the poem sounds realistic
July 5th, 2024 00:52
rengoku said:
my ancestors were actually vikings no joke
like the poem sounds realistic
July 5th, 2024 00:52
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