Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Assault and Battery 2
sorenbarrett said:
Never been desperate enough to brew pine needle tea. Hope I never get that desperate. Good write
January 24th, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Never been desperate enough to brew pine needle tea. Hope I never get that desperate. Good write
January 24th, 2026 04:21
Demockracy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is wonderfully ridiculous. The rhythm sets expectation, the slip breaks it, and the correction only makes it funnier. Short, sharp, and perfectly timed chaos. Loved it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 23rd, 2026 09:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is wonderfully ridiculous. The rhythm sets expectation, the slip breaks it, and the correction only makes it funnier. Short, sharp, and perfectly timed chaos. Loved it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 23rd, 2026 09:37
Assault and Battery
sorenbarrett said:
Clever shaping and wording here. Well done
January 23rd, 2026 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
Clever shaping and wording here. Well done
January 23rd, 2026 05:10
Biological ID
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels stark and clarifying, Mutley. It lands like a moment of waking up…quiet, but irreversible once it’s seen. The restraint sharpens the insight. Well done, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 21st, 2026 19:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels stark and clarifying, Mutley. It lands like a moment of waking up…quiet, but irreversible once it’s seen. The restraint sharpens the insight. Well done, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 21st, 2026 19:59
Biological ID
sorenbarrett said:
This took a couple of reads for my slow mind to get around it. A lovely write with a piece of wisdom included
January 21st, 2026 19:24
sorenbarrett said:
This took a couple of reads for my slow mind to get around it. A lovely write with a piece of wisdom included
January 21st, 2026 19:24
Trust in me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This made me smile first…then sit with it, Mutley. There’s a sly wisdom here that unfolds softly, letting the humor carry something much sharper underneath. It’s deceptively light, and that’s part of its power. Really love this one! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 21st, 2026 19:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This made me smile first…then sit with it, Mutley. There’s a sly wisdom here that unfolds softly, letting the humor carry something much sharper underneath. It’s deceptively light, and that’s part of its power. Really love this one! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 21st, 2026 19:21
Trust in me
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the contrasting perspectives on change and self-improvement, as embodied by the Boa, the monkey, and Manjushri. While the monkey\'s futile attempt to \"change the world\" highlights an absurdity in his efforts, Manjushri\'s approach of changing his own world suggests a more introspective and personal journey toward transformation.
January 20th, 2026 20:50
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the contrasting perspectives on change and self-improvement, as embodied by the Boa, the monkey, and Manjushri. While the monkey\'s futile attempt to \"change the world\" highlights an absurdity in his efforts, Manjushri\'s approach of changing his own world suggests a more introspective and personal journey toward transformation.
January 20th, 2026 20:50
Trust in me
sorenbarrett said:
And the fooler becomes the fooled nicely done
January 20th, 2026 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
And the fooler becomes the fooled nicely done
January 20th, 2026 20:05
Drive
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit close for me. I’ve often wondered whether struggle is what gives meaning to movement, or if belief alone could ever be enough. You distilled that tension beautifully. A fave, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 19th, 2026 10:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit close for me. I’ve often wondered whether struggle is what gives meaning to movement, or if belief alone could ever be enough. You distilled that tension beautifully. A fave, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 19th, 2026 10:24
Drive
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording wonderful rhyme and deep thought are three threads woven together to form this poetic fabric a fave
January 19th, 2026 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording wonderful rhyme and deep thought are three threads woven together to form this poetic fabric a fave
January 19th, 2026 04:41
Exitement
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is compact and charged. Refinement, sanctity, breakdown, and exile all converge until nourishment becomes impossible. Love it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 16th, 2026 23:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is compact and charged. Refinement, sanctity, breakdown, and exile all converge until nourishment becomes impossible. Love it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 16th, 2026 23:17
Exitement
arqios said:
Oh my, Mutley. How much have you been holding back!? A sure Fave here 🤩🕊️🙏
January 16th, 2026 21:26
arqios said:
Oh my, Mutley. How much have you been holding back!? A sure Fave here 🤩🕊️🙏
January 16th, 2026 21:26
Exitement
sorenbarrett said:
Now this presents all kinds of possibilities from the holy to the perverse in metaphor. A puzzling read that has me scratching my head which choice is the intended one.
January 16th, 2026 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
Now this presents all kinds of possibilities from the holy to the perverse in metaphor. A puzzling read that has me scratching my head which choice is the intended one.
January 16th, 2026 06:19
Top Cat
Paul Bell said:
And we know what you can do with five fishes and two loaves, not forgetting the washing it down with water turned to wine.
January 15th, 2026 15:52
Paul Bell said:
And we know what you can do with five fishes and two loaves, not forgetting the washing it down with water turned to wine.
January 15th, 2026 15:52
Top Cat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is playful and quietly pointed. Practical wisdom, imaginative faith, and a wink toward abundance all fold together without preaching. The poem trusts the reader…and that trust pays off. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 15th, 2026 10:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is playful and quietly pointed. Practical wisdom, imaginative faith, and a wink toward abundance all fold together without preaching. The poem trusts the reader…and that trust pays off. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 15th, 2026 10:13
Top Cat
arqios said:
That can prove to be an interesting state of affairs.🕊️🙏🏻
January 15th, 2026 07:49
arqios said:
That can prove to be an interesting state of affairs.🕊️🙏🏻
January 15th, 2026 07:49
Top Cat
sorenbarrett said:
A puzzle and conundrum in poetic form of metaphor. Reality pays better. Nicely done
January 15th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
A puzzle and conundrum in poetic form of metaphor. Reality pays better. Nicely done
January 15th, 2026 04:22
Cedar Tree Odyssey
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this lands with a quiet philosophical punch. The question hums long after the last line…simple on the surface, but deeply unsettling in the best way. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 13th, 2026 19:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this lands with a quiet philosophical punch. The question hums long after the last line…simple on the surface, but deeply unsettling in the best way. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 13th, 2026 19:30
Cedar Tree Odyssey
Thomas W Case said:
Sharp and curious—your lines tease the mind as much as they probe the self.
I like how each word feels weighted, yet open to infinite interpretation.
January 13th, 2026 08:00
Thomas W Case said:
Sharp and curious—your lines tease the mind as much as they probe the self.
I like how each word feels weighted, yet open to infinite interpretation.
January 13th, 2026 08:00
Cedar Tree Odyssey
sorenbarrett said:
The only (Hu) man I know of is a song. Well written
January 12th, 2026 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
The only (Hu) man I know of is a song. Well written
January 12th, 2026 20:11
Cicada Asks a Favor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this reads like a fable for makers. Imagination over will, brevity over excess, and song becoming ritual instead of performance. Witty, economical, and instructive in the best way. Love it, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 11th, 2026 17:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this reads like a fable for makers. Imagination over will, brevity over excess, and song becoming ritual instead of performance. Witty, economical, and instructive in the best way. Love it, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 11th, 2026 17:45
Cicada Asks a Favor
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely the cicada\'s mantra is not that long although their life is. Loved the way you put nature in personified form into a clever verse of song and incorporated time this one is a fave
January 11th, 2026 11:20
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely the cicada\'s mantra is not that long although their life is. Loved the way you put nature in personified form into a clever verse of song and incorporated time this one is a fave
January 11th, 2026 11:20
Something Wants the Fire in the Water
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this reads like a voice questioning its own embodiment. Power, doubt, and presence collide as you ask what’s being separated and why. Abstract, uneasy, and compelling, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 10th, 2026 10:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this reads like a voice questioning its own embodiment. Power, doubt, and presence collide as you ask what’s being separated and why. Abstract, uneasy, and compelling, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 10th, 2026 10:49
Something Wants the Fire in the Water
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of a spiritual nature. How does one separate the earthly aspects from the Avatar? Nicely written
January 10th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of a spiritual nature. How does one separate the earthly aspects from the Avatar? Nicely written
January 10th, 2026 04:22
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